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    In the modern era, time travel was the dream of many a person, children and adults alike. The concept of going back in time, whether to correct one's failures and mistakes, or to watch history unfold before your very eyes, was a thought that has crossed the mind of every person at least once or twice. Yes, the notion of being able to perform such a feat to such an extent that there is a whole field of study dedicated to understanding time itself and how the world interacts with such a concept.

    And yet, that innocent dream carries with it dire consequences in and of itself. After all, even a middle-schooler has heard of the butterfly effect and how it works. Should actions be performed differently, or variables be shifted around to create discrepancies, just what would occur to the 'future' that was the 'present'? Or perhaps, the future itself wished to happen, and what variables you changed would inevitably lead to the future you were from? Thus, tme travel remained a dream of humanity, one where mankind dare not step any further out of fear of the unknown.

    And yet, people asked, what if 'we did not travel'? What if 'we only watched'? With minds set ablaze with inspiration and the indomitable human spirit, they got to work crafting a device to do just that. For surely, just watching the past would be safe, right? Like that of a surveillance system of today, just 'reviewing footage' from bygone histories would be a harmless and fun activity, would it not?

    ....There were things mankind wans't meant to see. Knowledge they weren't meant to know. Whether it's existence was a blessing or not is an answer lost to time itself, but one thing had become clear: Mankind as a whole isn't ready. Sometimes the past stays buried for a reason.






    "Servant, Stranger. My True Name is Pellegrino Ernetti, inventor of the Chronovisor. Now, I hear that you use this time travel process called....Rayshifting?"

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    Class: Stranger

    Other Eligible Classes: Ruler

    True Name: Pellegrino Maria Ernetti

    Aliases: He Who Saw The Face Of God, He Who Lied Of The Past, Inventor of the Chronovisor, Fraud of Modernity

    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Attribute: Man

    Origin: Italian History

    Region: Venice, Italy

    Height: 5'11/181 cm

    Weight: 159 lbs/72. kg

    Traits: Male, Humanoid, Hominidae, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish

    Catalyst: A component of the original Chronovisor

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    Talents: Storytelling, exorcisms, combat, inventing, craftsmanship, getting into situations way above his paygrade

    Natural Enemies: François Brune, Heinrich Schliemann

    Likes: His faith, telling stories, inventing stuff, studying physics, catching up on modern era news, Byzantine honey fritters, Limoncello liqueur

    Dislikes: The Church, 'icons of sin', being forced to lie, avocados, beer

    Personality: Genial, pious and wonderful with children, Stranger feels like the friendly priest you'll see helping out at the soup kitchen when he isn't holding sermons or cleaning the church....well, without any of the unfortunate stereotypes attached to him that one is sure to learn later in life. Not God-fearing but acting in genuine awe and gratitude in the Creator's stead, he fits the picture of a pillar of the community. A shining leader figure, of sorts.

    As a result, it's very hard to imagine that same pillar of the community sprinting at breakneck velocity and pulping Dead Apostle bodies with his bare hands.

    Beneath the kind old man, or perhaps right next to it, is a seasoned veteran and combatant who Stranger can switch to like the press of a button. Yes, Pellegrino Ernetti was truthfully an Executor of the Church, and though his services are no longer required and his body seemingly no longer in it's prime, he can switch back to the same human weapon under the Church's leash that he acted as all those years ago. Thankfully, he reins this side of himself in closely for now in understanding of how bad of a situation the world is currently in. Though, every now and then you can still see him looking suspiciously at the vampires in Chaldea, and he still holds minor debates on the topic of faith every now and then.

    Though, perhaps the biggest surprise for him is that he's an avid fan of telling stories, and sometimes likes to spin fanciful tales to the kids when they're listening. It's times like these that, after shoving both the face of the community leader and the face of the ruthless Executor aside, you can really see his grandfatherly vibes shine through. Underneath all the rumors and gossip about him in life lies a good man who wants to help both in and for humanity's sake.

    Wish for the Grail: "Personally? I want to have not given in to the pressure from my higher-ups. I want to have stuck to my own convictions. I made the Chronovisor, and it worked. I saw, within it, the face of Jesus as He was crucified. The world can laugh and deride me for this, but I know the truth. And despite it all, I guess part of me still wanted humanity to see the past we'd lost as well."

    ParametersParameters:
    Strength: D
    Endurance: C+
    Agility: D
    Mana: B
    Luck: D-
    NP: EX


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    Bond DefaultOne of the more infamous religious figures of the modern era and perhaps one of the most well-known in the dark crevices of the Internet, Pellegrino Maria Ernetti was renowned not for zealotry nor controversy. If anything, he was a well-known local hero and father figure to many, and his death was widely mourned by those both close to him and not.

    Rather, he's most famous for the claimed creation of one of the world's first time machines. The self-proclaimed inventor of the Chronovisor and head researcher of a visual path to the Akashaic Records, Ernetti is considered to be both one the Church's best priests and public figures.....and a fraud that almost ended up dragging the entire Vatican down into the depths of ignominy with his words.

    ....Though, perhaps that isn't all there is to his words, is there?



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    Bond 1Born in 1925 to a fisherman father and a housewife mother, Ernetti lived near a local Catholic church where he and a few of the other local children would play about under their parents' watchful eyes and learn more about the Christian faith. Clearly, the lessons had had a profound impact on Ernetti as a child, given that the moment he turned 16 he immediately joined the Benedictine Order and became a postulate at San Giorgio Maggiore near Venice.

    Studying for eight long years in that abbey, Ernetti was noted to have an exceptionally sharp mind and a knack for music as he took classes in both matters of the world and matters of his faith. When he'd been officially ordained as an Benedictine monk, he was also hired by the church to teach music theory and advanced physics to other people, and was qualified research archaic music and chants as a full-blown scholar.

    However, what many don't know was that Ernetti worked for the Church in an incredibly insidious manner as well. He was an Executor of the Church, tasked not only with demon exorcisms but with demon killing as well. Renowned for his studies in physics, history, music theory, theology. Powerful enough to participate in demon hunts and expeditions to destroy heretical beings and cults. Lauded as one of mankind's weapons and skilled enough to live a fairly long life throughout it all. With all these achievements under his belt....

    ....Was it really any surprise that he, even the humble priest fascinated with the past, wished to brag just a little bit?



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    Bond 2Class Skills:

    This Servant does not possess any Class Skills.



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    Bond 3Personal Skills:

    Clairvoyance (False) C

    A Skill of Stranger, denoting possession of superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this Skill have acquired abilities such as precognition ("future vision") and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight (X-ray vision and so forth).

    Stranger....doesn't actually have true Clairvoyance, as it is a Skill contained and manifested within the body. However, he can 'view the infinite past' on a widespread area to watch 'past instances of enemies' in an period where 'the past' can be called one and the same with 'the present'. One picosecond in the past still qualifies as the past according to this Skill.

    Aesthetics of the Arts C+

    A Skill of Stranger, denoting infatuation with works of art, whether they be visual masterpieces or auditory symphonies. At high Ranks, this can manifest as obsession or even romantic feelings for said works of art. Cough cough Pygmalion.

    In life, Stranger was described to possess 'an ear as sharp as his mind', excelling in studies and holding a great interest in archaic and classical music scores. During his time as a member of the Church, he would teach music theory and even go so far as to learn at least three different languages from scratch simply to study the Gregorian Chants and their background.

    Should Stranger see a Noble Phantasm that possesses artistic anecdotes attached to it, there is a chance that he can immediately figure out it's True Name. The possibility increases if said Noble Phantasm is also connected to any of the Abrahamic faiths.

    Unending Exorcism B

    A subvariant of the Baptism Rite Skill, itself a Skill denoting possession of a type of magecraft that changed style into a church form. It is a simple ritual that instantly redirects a spiritual body and sends it back to where it belongs, and is considered to be the one spell that all members of the Holy Church are allowed to learn. While it doesn't have the power to damage physical objects like other Magecraft, It is incredibly effective against beings such as Spirits or Vampires.

    Ernetti wasn't just a regular priest with a fondness for music. He was also a licensed exorcist and demonologist, as well as one of the Church's most prodigal Executors at the time. Officially being responsible for thousands of exorcisms over the course of his life as well as unofficially being responsible for the deaths and subjugations of high-level Spirits and Dead Apostles, this feat has crystallized in Stranger being capable of continuously maintaining a Baptism Rite on spiritual enemies so long as he has enough Magical Energy and an accurate visualization of the target. Works incredibly well with Clairvoyance (False) and Appreciation of the Arts.



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    Bond 4As the years passed and Ernetti's own reputation in the Church grew, he began to spin tales of his escapades to those willing to listen. Of course, he always spun out some fibs and exaggerations both to mask the true events of what had occurred and to make the stories themselves entertaining to those listening. Occasionally he might have told stories of his own experiences, but he mostly told stories he knew would sound fictional to the children who frequented the abbey he worked in.

    And yet, that wasn't the end of the myriad accomplishments to be added under his belt. In 1953, the year Ernetti returned to his hometown of Venice to continue preaching, he was discreetly approached by a pair of Church officials. There, he was offered what some would consider an impossible mission and others might call a monumental step towards the Age of Will.

    Specifically, with his talent and knowledge in physics and his skill with the few spells he'd honed as an Executor of the Church, Ernetti was to join a group of 12 other researchers....and build a mechanical apparatus that would allow the Church to look backwards in time. A machine that could match the likes of the Gazing Star, inversely looking beyond the capabilities of a mere spy satellite and look directly into history itself, watching historical events not through textbook pages but as they occurred.

    Ernetti and twelve other scientists, with the funding, backing and supervision of the Church and whatever Magecraft the Sacrements included, would take on the impossible challenge of building the Chronovisor.



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    Bond 5Noble Phantasm:

    Great Demon Who Fools The World
    Belial Sussurrare

    Rank: B
    Classification: Anti-World, Anti-Mind
    Range: 1-100
    Maximum Targets: 1 City

    "Speak, O Demon. Thy whispers grip my ears and mind. Thy words taint my tongue black. Behold, the spiraling lie that engulfed the World with hollow hope.
    Great Demon Who Fools The World
    Belial Sussurrare
    .

    "Forgive me, Father, for I have sinned...."

    The crystallization of the lie Stranger told, perhaps his most well-known if 'minor' contribution to history. It is said that, in life, Ernetti struggled with a demo possessing him throughout his adult years, and it was that demon that pushed him to lie of the Chronovisor itself. Because of this anecdote, this Noble Phantasm has manifested fairly oddly.

    When this Noble Phantasm's True Name is uttered, Stranger's tongue turns tar black in pigment and smoke seems to leak from his mouth. Should Stranger speak thereafter, his words will act like a mental attack and gradually wear enemies' minds down, slowly but surely convincing them of his words even if there is no evidence or belief prior to speech. This can also reach far beyond simply enemy mindsets to convince the very Planet of his words. Should he claim that the sky were green, then the sky would slowly turn green to match his claim. In other words, this can only be called 'the equivalent of Mystic Words of Falsehoods'.

    However, this is not a perfect power. Belial Sussurrare is localized to a city block or two at most, and requires at least a major boost in Magical Energy to even bein to work properly. In addition to this, the effects are temporary and require constant maintenance before enemies reassert their own mentalities. Lastly, arguing against his claims with sufficient proof is enough to reverse the effects, meaning that if you were to refute his claims early on then his Noble Phantasm would immediately crumble and fail.

    Yes, Stranger lied of the Chronovisor. And yet, you get the feeling that what he lied about isn't what you would expect....




    Staring Beyond The Face of The Son
    Chronovisor

    Rank: EX
    Classification: Anti-History, Anti-Unit (Self)
    Range: The space-time continuum
    Maximum Targets: Pellegrino Ernetti

    Ernetti lied. Not when he met Brune. Not when he put forth the transcription of the lost play Thyestes for all to see. No, Ernetti lied on his deathbed. Pressured by his higher-ups in the Church and somewhat haunted by what he saw on the Chronovisor, he lied to the last remaining witness to his passing. He told that witness that the Chronovisor had failed, and it was all a spiraling hoax gone terribly wrong.

    In truth, the Chronovisor had succeeded perfectly. Ernetti and his team of inventors had created the world's first semi-mundane time travelling machine and viewport, and used it to learn of lost histories that time itself had forgotten. And yet, he told that white fib out of worry and terror For to say that lie would have been infinitely better than the speak the truth.

    The culmination of Ernetti's work and his true magnum opus, this Noble Phantasm is quite literally confirmation of the Chronovisor's existence. Manifesting as a miniaturized headset version of the past-viewing machine Ernetti had built in life, this Noble Phantasm is what allows Stranger to 'watch the infinite past' and grants him his Clairvoyance (False) skill. With it, Ernetti can adjust the device's output to limit or broaden just what he can see with the Chronovisor, granting him near-unparalleled potential as a surveillance unit.

    However, there are two major weaknesses to this Noble Phantasm. Firstly, the Chronovisor can only show imagery and visual data. It has no way to gleam what is hidden or attempt to show thoughts like some Mystic Codes can, and Ernetti himself may miss key details watching through the Chronovisor the first time over. It's little more than a 'time-viewing surveillance system', really. Secondly, the Chronovisor can be used by other people, but the data shown through the Chronovisor can overwhelm them mentally if they try to process too much. There's no real limit to just how far back the device can see, and Ernetti insists that one shouldn't turn the output to maximum, for very good reason.

    There really are some things that humans were not meant to see.



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    Bond Extra.....Miraculously, they'd succeeded. In what could only be called either a divine miracle or a culmination of all thirteen involved scientists' fortune for the rest of their lives being used up, the team of researchers had managed to craft a machine that could tune into the very past itself using reagents to 'open a one-way window to view events', and could reliably dial what they saw back and forth to view historical events with ease, sometimes going from watching an entire year on double speed to focusing on a specific second in a time period.

    Ernetti was ecstatic. Here was a literal window to the past. A machine that could not only show history as it happened, but also allowed them to potentially rediscover lost histories and records that had inevitably disappeared over time. And he had not only had a hand in it's creation over seven years, but he would also be allowed to run the first test run to find the Chronovisor's potential 'end point' to see how far it could see back. With a heart filled with hope, he turned on the Chronovisor and began to turn the dial back.

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    .....The Chronovisor was scrapped soon after. The project members mostly refused to speak of just what they had seen, and even the higher-ups would later censor the entire project to avoid repeats in the future. Despite it all, Ernetti would insist on it's existence until 1994, unwilling to let what he considered to be the church's magmnum opus to fade into obscurity. However, with the Chronovisor scrapped and what little evidence he had to be easily replicated and rendered useless, he was unable to fully prove it's existence even when he died.

    Though, it was odd. He could reliably name what went into building the machine, when and where it was built and stored, and even the true names of his fellow researchers (though, admittedly, he may or may not have fibbed here and there to make the story most intriguing).....but when he was asked just what else he saw on the Chronovisor itself, all he would ever tell them were six simple words.

    'I saw beyond the Son's face.'



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    RelationshipsJeanne d'Arc: "To meet the famed Maiden of Orleans who fought in the name of God to save France....it truly is an honor to meet you. Unfortunately, the machine wasn't really accurate when we tested it's functions in terms of spatial location, but I did catch glimpses of some of your battles here and there. You....truly didn't deserve what happened to you."

    Gilles de Rais (Caster): "In the face of grief, you shattered. In the loss of your purpose, you turned from the Lord. Unfortunately, such an occurrence is common in modern times, but never has someone reveled in the loss of their faith as fervently as you. Do not darken the steps of this holy place again, Caster of Blasphemy. I will not tolerate your heresy a second time."

    Martha: "Lady Martha! Please, do come in. I admit, I saw the tail end of your time with the Holy Son, but a part of me does want to hear what it was like from your perspective. There is a great difference between 'seeing' and 'experiencing', in a sense of speaking. I will not push if you do not wish to speak of it, however."

    Amakusa Shirou Tokisada: "To lead a rebellion at such a young age is a burden no sane human should ever bear, but that wish...to live through the inherent 'goodness' of the human heart is a path you must not tread. All humans hold different definitions of what is 'good' from others. Were you to enforce all humans to live by inherent goodness.....truly, nothing will change at all."

    Leonardo da Vinci: "Uomo Universale....I am truly ecstatic to meet one of the greatest artists to ever live. I enjoyed taking trips to study some of your lesser-known paintings whenever I got the chance. Provided ample materials for my classes if the students wanted something a little different from music theory every now and then."

    Abigail Williams: Occasionally you'll see Abby in prayer while Stranger reads verses from a Bible to her. Afterwards, he tends to get her pancakes while he gives her lessons on some of the more modern values that have sprung up from Christianity's progression over the centuries.

    Honestly, you're just happy Abby is learning more.

    Christopher Columbus: Stranger absolutely refuses to interact with Columbus, stating that 'greed is a deadly sin for a good reason. The deadly part comes from how I'll punch his nose into the back of his brain if he tries anything suspicious here.' You've....elected to drop the topic for now, at least.

    Biscione: ".....Well, as long as she's not causing any trouble. Even I have heard of the Viper of Milan, so I can't help but be a bit weary around him. That said, she seems very dedicated to her office lady cosplay. Is she into roleplaying or something....?"

    Danteh Alighieri: "Dantehhhhhh. Do your daily prayers, Dantehhhhhh. Bring your copy to the next Bible study, Dantehhhhhh."

    Cimbus Lompany-

    Ryougi Shiki (Saber): There are no words between the two. There are no words needed between them, truthfully. One smply nods to the other in recognition, and they are on their way afterwards.

    Aleister Crowley: "I have no desire to speak with you. Begone, heretic. You may play the part of the innocent monster, but every Church member knows of the cruel methods you did to try to create your vaunted 'paradise'. The ends will never justify the means."

    Saint Pelagia: "I greet the Dancing Saint, who danced for the Lord and exorcised the Devil who came to protest your baptism. I....unfortunately can't dance very well, but I can at least try. These old bones don't handle exertion very well..."

    Jerk d'Arc: ".....I like the cut of her gib, but there's such a thing as too much sometimes. And this is coming from a literal Executor."

    Elisabeth Hevelius: "I've never really liked stargazing, but I suppose I can understand why other people enjoy it so. What my fascination laid with in 'time', theirs laid in 'space'. Though....I suppose I can enjoy a night looking at the night skies every once in a while."

    Cosimo de Medici: "He bought the-that son of a bitch, I'm gonna kill him! S-Somehow, I'm going to murder himself somehow!"

    Olga of Kiev: "Was it worth it? Your campaign of revenge, burning those lives away to avenge your husband? Genuine, genuine question here, I'm thinking of utilizing such tactics in the future for hunting down Dead Apostles."

    Saint Clement I: "That's it, I'm getting my Black Keys. Don't pay attention to any sounds of unholy screeching, Master, I just need to deal with a pest infestation for a second."

    Šćepan Mali: "Go now with grace, tsar of Montenegro. May your faith be rewarded, and your ambitions realized. You, who brought low Russia itself and wriggled into the heart of Catherine the Great are perhaps the greatest conqueror of all time."

    Francis I: "A dragon-kind? You turned yourself into a dragon-kind just to bully your rival even more? As passionate as you are about this fact, I don't know whether to encourage you to pursue your passions more or scold you for such a petty act..."

    Pope John XII: "Perhaps it's a sign of paranoia and stress. Perhaps it was him indulging in his hedonistic tendencies. But the Church records we had spoke of him as a raging party animal who would lure in enemies who thought nothing of him, and slaughtered them all wholesale. Personally, I always thought he was a shrewd tactician who used his reputation to his advantage, so I'm a bit glad that he's slowing down to unwind lately."

    Herman the Recluse: "....I know of the true contents of your work. I will not speak further. You were absolved of your sin, but there were things humanity still is not ready to see. At the very least, though, I can say....I thank you, for granting for this divine knowledge unto the likes of this humble priest."

    Leah, Zilpah and Rachel: "Master....please help. I was an Executor. I was hired to root out and crush heresies most profane and destroy Dead Apostles who dared to poke their heads out to attack humans. I was not hired to handle marriage counseling. That was one of the rare mercies that came with being a member of the clergy. Oh dear Lord, how do I even begin to untangle this veritable mess.....?"

    Charles VII: "I'd rather avoid the man than risk setting off his already rampant paranoia. He's already been glaring daggers at me whenever I so much as say hello."

    Augustin Calmet: "Perhaps I would have been happier with any other Catholic figure. But instead, I got the man who ended up not just giving the Night in Wallachia it's start but also ended up causing the TATARI phenomenon to spread globally. As I may guess I'm incredibly conflicted on the matter."

    Samiel: "Fallen Angel Samiel. Severity of the Lord who turned from His Light. If you have come into this sacred place to cause trouble, I suggest you leave. I do not wish for violence in here....what? An invitation out? Hm. This is a fairly odd first for me, but if I could perhaps turn you back to God, this could be a worthwhile endeavor.

    "....Incidentally, do you have any recommendations for snacks to go alongside any liquors?"


    Hali: "And people wonder why the Church considers Magecraft to be nothing but heresy....We have no problem with the spells themselves, but the lengths to which a magus will go to pursue their visualized 'endpoint' is too far to even begin to consider viable.

    "Wh-No, I'm not letting you put on the Chronovisor! Don't you dare try to steal it either!"


    Isukiri the funny fella: "To think.....that not only was the Holy Son a party animal, but he advocated for the same in his followers! I must, pfft, I must teach this most profound lesson to, pfhehehehe, I-I must, BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    "I'm, I'm sorry, I just.....I couldn't even finish it with a straight face. I was just messing with you."


    Count Saint-Germaine: "......You fail to understand just much I wish to pummel his face in, Master. Forget his supposed identities as famous figures and the revelation that he is but a simple human. Of the cults that sprouted out in pursuit of Saint-Germaine's alchemical traces, more than a handful of them were willing to scour entire cities and use magicks most blasphemous in their efforts. I've personally had to put down a few of them myself, so seeing the person responsible for their inception, even indirectly.....I may or may not want some reparations myself."

    Heinrich Schliemann: "You rat bastard! You couldn't have had even a mote of patience in excavating Troy?! I swear, the moment I get my hands I'll rearrange your face the same way you rearranged that lost city's nine layers!"

    Jure Grando Allovic: "......I am severely conflicted about this. On one hand, he's a genuinely kind person who never takes more than he must, goes out of his way to help others and is beloved by more than a handful of Servants. On the other hand, Dead Apostle.

    "...I will defer to your judgment and leave him be for now. But I will keep a close eye on him."


    Jesus-Chan: "I am doubly unsure of this now, Master."

    Stranger is, of course, referring to the scene of Jure recommending some cute outfits to Saver, who is both confused at the action and happy to make a new friend. More specifically, he is referring to the fact that despite being a Dead Apostle standing before the literal fucking origin of Christian iconography, Jure isn't so much as sweating in discomfort.

    He's very conflicted about this.




    Related DialogueJeanne d'Arc: "I find joy and relief at the sight of him, truthfully. It is proof that, even in the modern era, even when Mystery itself is passing on, there are still those who hold steadfast to their faith and pray to God even now. Yes.....it shows that humanity's decisions were correct."

    Martha: "Guuuuuh....I really do want to talk to him about what Jesus was like in life, but I don't want to paint Him in a bad image......Ah! Did you hear anything just now, Master? You didn't, did you?"

    Amakusa Shirou Tokisada: "It's good to see more people of the cloth joining Chaldea, if anything. Makes it livelier and offers more varied opinions during Bible study. Though, I'm surprised he'd managed to actually build such a fascinating device only to have it shut down so bluntly. I wonder just what he saw to make such a decision..."

    Leonardo da Vinci: "To use the technology of the future to gaze deep into the past....it's an incredible achievement and one I didn't think possible with modern reagents, but the fact that he had managed to accomplish such a thing, even with help from other people, speaks of his skill and intelligence. I'd love to get his opinions on some prototypes I'm working on later."

    Abigail Williams: "Mr. Priest is really nice, Master! He always has a lot of stories to tell, and helps me understand some of the harder verses when I ask him! He's a bit like Ms. Oei, though, because sometimes he can get really into the stories himself. Hehehe."

    Biscione: "That old guy, Ernetti.....He looks just like a human, but I can smell something 'more' from him. Like he saw something that left a permanent mark on his own soul. What did he even do to have that mark so deeply ingrained into himself?!"

    Danteh: "First Da Vinci and now him....His claims might be dubious, but his skills are the real deal! Man, I'm kinda pumped now. Maybe after sermons he would be up for a collab too? Something like a life-sized sculpture of the Gates.....they don't actually lead to Hell, of course."



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    Bond FinalAntenato Eredità



    "So, did you ever get the truth out into the open?"

    "Come on, even if you couldn't see what my life was like, do you really think the public would believe in the claims that somehow, a priest had invented a time travel device?"

    "...."

    ".....Actually, don't answer that. Sounds possible the more I think about it. Still, for the afterlife this is strangely homely. I thought there would be more....brimstone."

    "Well, for starters, this ain't the real afterlife for you. It's more like a pit stop for the weary. Except, you know, the weary have managed to see incredibly far into the past one way or another, and saw what you saw."

    "Ah. That makes more sense. Nice place, though. I didn't think one of the three Magician's Boxes would be a place as quaint as this."

    "You do me much credit, dear customer. The Wizard Marshal might have been the one to 'build' the building, but all of the decorations and the menu? That was all me."

    "And a marvelous job you've done. Speaking of, I assume that before I inevitably have to leave, I can at least grab something to eat?"

    "Of course! This is a cafe, after all. Table for one?"

    "That'll be splendid. Now, what would you recommend from the menu, George, my friend?"





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    Art SourcesErnetti's fc is a drawing of some old man on Weibo here. I think he's referring to some game character or an OC the artist made up. Can't tell, it's been god-knows how long since I read Chinese tbh.

    The Bond CE is fanart of Cafe Ahnenerbe from here. Fun fact, I just used the shitty Italian Google Translation of 'Ancestor's Heritage' for the CE name and called it a day.



    NotesEver since I read about him in an obscure manga, I've had Ernetti on my backlog for the longest time. Glad to finally get him out into the open, even if he might appear to be exceedingly mid.

    For5 clarification, I hc that the Chronovisor itself worked perfectly, but had no upper limit on how far back it could look through time. So when Ernetti dialed it's temporal output further and further and further, he went beyond even Jesus' death. He went beyond Jesus' birth. He went beyond the formation of Judaism, the formation of civilization, the formation of the Planet itself. In the farthest reaches of time, watched by twelve other researchers and three supervisors, Ernetti turned the dial all the way....and saw the Beginning. Or maybe he saw a representative of the Beginning. After all, if「Shiki Ryougi」, who has connected to the Root and become one with it, can be called a representative of the Root itself....what's stopping there from other people having gone through the same thing in the past?

    Another birth who's Origin was「 」, attached to the Root and subsequently feeding off of it's information to the point of absolute omniscience. In the face of such an existence, what else could you call him.....but「God」? Aka I am making the bold and probably somewhat blasphemous claim that God in the Nasuverse was originally a person who was turned into a Divine Spirit the same way Mephistopheles became a Demon. Is this probably what happened? Hahahaha probably not, but it's not like we've even gotten anything about angels, much less God. The only thing we actually know are the blessings he granted to other people and the fact that a living universe/thesis meant to prove His existence just turned into a normal ass human being. So, God is human real?!

    I will not be taking questions, potential loremasters.



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    really great Stranger, really liked the story you laid out about this time-seeing man Scotch!
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    Oh this was a delight, Scotcheroos.

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    From a cottage, he raised me,

    Onto the throne to sit beside him.

    His purple turned into irons,

    In the dungeon, I hold him in my arms.

    If only the grave could have we shared.

    From a cottage, he raised me,

    Onto the throne to sit beside him.

    His purple turned into irons,

    In the dungeon, I hold him in my arms.

    If only the grave could have we shared.

    ~♫~



    Lover of Liuksiala

    In a world where the Yggdrasil won the 3rd Holy Grail World:

    "Greetings, kind Master. I am a Servant of Lover Class. My love shall keep you safe and on the right path!"

    ♥FIRST ASCENSION♥


    Source

    "I am sure I can just talk to them, then everything will be ok!"


    ♥BASIC INFORMATION♥ ♥BASIC INFORMATION♥


    True Name Kaarina Maununtytär
    Other Names Karin Månsdotter, Queen Katarina, Catherine
    Source Proper Human History
    Region Sweden & Finland
    Alignment Lawful Good
    Nature Man
    Armaments Pastry, Disarming Smiles,
    Sky Blue Eyes
    Talents De-Escalation, Therapy,
    Estate Management,
    Cooking
    Natural Enemy Anyone who tries
    To break families
    Holy Grail War Talvipuu Subcategory HGW
    (Grand Order)
    Master Simopekka Poskiparta
    (Ritsuka Fujimaru)
    Catalyst Water from river Roine.
    Her tooth.
    Classes Lover, Caster
    Rarity Five Stars



    ♥PARAMETERS♥ ♥PARAMETERS♥


    STR: E+ END: E+ AGI: E+
    MAN: D+ LUC: C+ NP: B+


    Parameters are boosted by Devotion skill.


    ♥CLASS SKILLS♥ ♥CLASS SKILLS♥


    "Oh, you have not heard of this class before? Let me explain."



    Devotion B

    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill that corresponds to the strength of the Servant's feelings towards those they love. With the skill increasing in rank, the more people they loved and the more impressive their "acts of love" towards those people were. As a Servant, this means that the greater the Servant's "love" for their Master is, the higher the boost in all parameters they will receive. Her master and their allies also gain a boost to their own buffs and resistance to others' charms.

    Lover genuinely loved her husband, but it didn't cloud her morality. She would do everything she could to stop him from harming others, even his enemies, with varied success. In her case, "Acts of Love" was taking a stand against her beloved mad King and stopping him from ruining himself. Unfortunately, her love was not enough to save him – or their son.

    [Boost Art cards, increase ally's buff success rates, and increase ally's mental debuff resistances]

    "Look, Servant, the best way to get to Edelfelt is by capturing her boy toy!"

    Servant looks straight into her rather unscrupulous master's eyes.

    Master Simopekka Poskiparta glared back.

    Then her eyes started to water.

    "...that is not going to work," Poskiparta stated firmly.

    Lover's bottom lip quivered.

    "...I-I am not going to change my mind! " Poskiparta warned her, even while he grew just a touch nervous.

    Lover's pout became more prominent, her eyes practically shining with the tears that were brimming in them.

    Poskiparta leaned back, his expression becoming anxious and uncertain. He was still staring into her eyes, but he could only do so for so long. He opened his mouth to retort, then forced his gaze to avert, before he finally let out a frustrated yell and turned away completely.

    "Perkele! That is 100% not fair!" he complained. "How am I supposed to say no to those eyes?! They are a noble phantasm on their own!"





    Object of Desire B++

    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill connected to the feelings of love and obsession that this Servant inspires in someone else. It functions as a passive charm skill on the level of a mental attack. So much as being in the same place as a Lover Servant can incite feelings of affection, obsession, protectiveness, and lust.
    It took just one look for the King to fall in love, and he was so madly in love that it overcame his own madness – at times. But the ones who loved her even more than the Mad King were people who she spent the evening of her life with, who adored her, and who kept her memory alive to this day. To them, not only is this skill's rank A, but it also gains the same effect as Charisma B.

    [Reduce enemies" mental debuff resistance, a minor change to Charm an enemy when enemies turn begins. If an enemy has a Finnish tag, the M.D.R penalty and charm change are doubled. If Ally has a Finnish tag, they also get a bonus to attack.]

    The Mayor of Talvipuu gives the Lover the keys of the city while reporters from around the country take pictures of her. A huge mob of citizens is around the platform, cheering her.

    "I only helped an old lady over a street!" Says the blushing Servant.





    ♥SECOND ASCENSION♥ ♥SECOND ASCENSION♥




    Source

    "It has been so long since I wore anything as beautiful as this!"




    ♥PERSONAL SKILLS♥ ♥PERSONAL SKILLS♥




    Witchcraft (False) C

    Noble ladies would gossip that the peasant girl used love potions and witchcraft to charm the King. This was, in fact, false, but as Servant, this gossip has given her the power to make devilishly delicious roasted nuts, pastries, and mead that will make even a skeleton salivate. Because of this skill, she could also be summoned as Caster.

    [Charm single target with 60% chance, Seal their NP with 40% change]

    “Would you like some?” Lover offers a tray filled with cookies to a very baffled Greek Berserker.




    Soothe Madness EX

    A skill unique to Lover. She could calm down her lunatic husband and prevent him from executing his prisoners or attacking staff. With this skill, she can negate the effect of Mad Enchantment, Mental Pollution, Insanity, and similar skills to return targets' mental clarity temporarily. This allows them to communicate with others clearly, see reality as it is, and control their impulses.

    [Reduce enemies' attack, mental debuff success rate, and mental debuff resistance (This stack with Object of Desire).]

    “So, you are not angry at yourself for losing control and not at your king?” Lover strokes the smoke-covered hair of Arthurian Berserker.




    Princess of Grace A-

    Skill similar to Princess of Loveliness and Princess of Purity skills. Lover gave mercy for those meant to be killed (or tried), used what power she had with clemency, and for her virtues, she was given grace by her husband’s enemies.

    When this skill is used, Lover is encapsulated inside an impenetrable purple cube that protects and heals her. She is invulnerable inside but cannot move without lowering the barrier. She can try to expand the effect to others, but success requires a Luck check.

    [Grants herself Invincibility buffs for 3 attacks and recovers her HP every turn for 5 turns. Demerit: Cannot gain Evasion buff while Invulnerability is active. 60% Chance to give other party members Invulnerability, Regeneration and the Demerit.]

    “Grrraaaauuuugggghhhh!”

    BLAM!

    “AAARGH!”

    “IIIIIIIK!”

    “YOU FOOLS! THE MAD ENHANCEMENT WAS THE ONLY THING KEEPING HIM LOYAL!”

    BLAM!

    The well-meaning Lover is hugging tightly not only her master but also the Master of a turncoat Chinese’s Berserker, all three inside purple cube as the previously mentioned Berserker is striking them with his God Force.





    ♥THIRD ASCENSION♥ ♥THIRD ASCENSION♥



    Source

    “The weather will get cold soon, Master. You should also dress warmly”



    ♠HER STORY♠ ♠HER STORY♠


    ~♫~

    To tell the story of Kaarina Maununtytär, I must start with the story of King Gustav Vasa’s sons.

    King Erik (Eric) XIV was first seen as a great king with a keen intellect, but as he grew older, that brilliant mind was stained with paranoia, rage, and depression. A mentally unstable king would imprison those he thought conspired against him, then reversed and begged for friendship from them, only to then order prisoners to be executed and then run to the wilderness to weep. Of King Erik’s enemies, most persistent were his many brothers, and the biggest thorn in his side was his Half-Brother, powerful and rich Duke Johan (John) of Finland. Erik and Johan had opposing political views and ambitions; Erik wanted to ally with Russia and England, while Johan wanted to ally with Poland and the Catholic Church. When Johan married Polish princess Katarina Jagellonica (Catherine Jagiellon), Erik and the court declared Johan a traitor and besieged the couple’s home, Turku Castle. Johan and Catherine surrendered and were spared the executioner's axe but were sent to castle arrest in Sweden.

    Here, Kaarina enters the story. Kaarina’s father, Maunu (Måns), was a peasant of a Finnish bloodline while her mother Ingrid had died when she was little. One day, when she was selling roasted almonds near the castle, King Erik ran into her. He was at once enthralled by her beauty. The King ordered Kaarina to become his sister’s lady-in-court.

    “Sorry to interrupt, but that isn't what really happened,” says Lover. “Dad had become a soldier, and he rose to the rank to become one of Erik’s bodyguards. I followed him to court and became Princess Elizabeth’s maid. Then I met Erik. …the meeting did include almonds though.”

    In Swedish court, Kaarina grew up to become a breathtakingly beautiful, learned, and kind woman. The Mad King had many lovers and mistresses, but soon he left them and only spent time with Kaarina. Only she could bring peace to the troubled king. In her presence, the cruel king returned into the renaissance king he used to be.

    “Hihihii.” The Lover looks rather bashful, curling her hair around her finger. “With me, he always had a warm smile. He was so handsome…”

    As unlikely it was, Erik and Kaarina truly fell in love. King Eric's unstable heart became attached to Kaarina with a true love, and she showed the King love in return, both in good times and bad. Close family members were happy as Kaarina’s warm heart stabilized Erik's stormy heart, and she had many close friends among the staff. Nobles did not respect the peasant girl, but they didn’t hate her. She was valuable to them as a way to reign in the mad king. Kaarina did her best to keep Erik from hurting others and giving him the strength to resist his inner demons. Not only that, but she also tried to get Erik and Johan to bury the hatchet. She and Erik had two children while she was just his lover: daughter Sigrid and son Gustaf (Gustav) Eriksson. But the king's lunacy continued to slowly worsen.

    “The Sture incident. I feel so bad about it. The Countess asked me to save her husband, and I promised no one would die. But Erik didn’t take me with him to prison, and … we found him in the vicarage constantly praying for forgiveness.”

    As the King became too disturbed to rule and a regent was called to rule, rumours started to spread that Kaarina had used witchcraft and love potions to charm the king.

    “I made sure anyone who spread rumours would NOT get in trouble. Even if they were lies, I didn’t want Erik to hurt them.” Lover looks sad. “Even if they used to be my friends…”

    Then came Kaarina’s fateful but also the happiest day: using a permission to marry whomever he wanted from court years ago, King Erik officially married her and made her Queen Katarina (Catharine) Magnusdotter. This caused an uproar in the nobility; a king marrying a PEASANT!? She must have used witchcraft to turn the king insane! This led to arrests, but Queen Katarina ordered the badmouthing nobles to be released. In addition, before the wedding, Kaarina had revealed to the late king’s wife, Katarina (Catharine) Stenbock, that Erik planned to murder his brothers and enemies who had been invited to the wedding. The Dowager queen spread the word, and many wedding guests informed that they had to salt their herring and could not come, sorry.

    Queen Katarina reigned 87 days before Erik’s brothers and nobles rose in rebellion.

    Lover just looks tired.

    Duke Johan became the new King Johan the Third, and Erik’s family was sent to castle arrest. The royal family was first held together but deposing finally broke Erik’s mind. Unfortunately for him, Erik's madness didn’t give him berserker’s strength, and he was subdued and thrown into the castle's dungeon. Sigrid and Gustav were sent to the dowager queen, and Kaarina could only see her husband occasionally.

    “They beat him”, Lover tells, her gaze locked to a candle on the table. “He could not use his left arm after that. …I had to do something.”

    Lover sniffs. “I am sorry, dear Elin and Thomas…you did your best.”


    A conspiracy to break out Erik was revealed, led by Kaarina’s head lady-in-waiting and personal secretary. They were executed, and Johan ordered the royal family to be imprisoned in his old castle. Turku Castle.


    Source


    “At first, it was nice in that castle. We were all together again – and then I had Henrik, our second son. Our old friend Bengt was imprisoned there as well. We had our own hall there, cooks, and maids. It was a nice prison …until -”

    Until correspondence between Erik and Tsar Ivan the Terrible was revealed, asking assistance for freedom. It should be noted that Sweden and Russia were at war. First Erik was separated from his family, and later all were brought to Stockholm – except little Henrik.

    “He was sick – he could not travel. I should have stayed with him – I wanted to stay – but they –“. Lover covers her face. “If they planned to send me back anyway, THEN WHY DID I HAVE TO GO!?” She screams.

    Little Henrik died while the rest of the family was in Sweden. The next year, Kaarina gave birth to her third son, Arnold, who sadly died soon after.

    Lover holds her head and cries.

    To stop Erik and Kaarina from producing more children, King Johan orders Erik to be permanently separated from his family. He was kept in Sweden at arm’s length, while Kaarina and the children were sent back to Turku Castle.

    A vision manifest.

    A red-bearded man with mad eyes is getting dragged away by soldiers while other soldiers keep Lover and two children from interfering. The Lover is screaming, and the children are crying.



    A candlelit room with tapestries. Lover, dressed in a fur coat, hugs her children – a young girl and a small boy – wrapping them in her coat and singing to them as they sleep.


    After four years, news arrives that Erik had
    murdered with arsenic
    died of natural causes
    .

    And a king Johan's command that Erik's surviving son Gustav, age seven, was to be expelled from the kingdom.

    Same room.

    But candles are unlit.

    In darkness, mother and sister are crying for the lost child.


    Yet, King Johan would not torment his sister-in-law without reason. Kaarina and Sigrid were now free, and the King gave Kaarina a royal estate, Liuksiala Manor and surrounding lands, and a significant grant of coins. Both could return to court if they wished.

    “I didn’t care about the court.” Says Lover, wiping the tears away. “But Sigrid needed it. She became Princess Anna’s lady-in-waiting. Heh. Apple doesn’t fall far from the trees. She took to the court like fish to water. Yet, she would come to visit me often in Finland.

    I only visited Stockholm two times, first to get my belongings. And then, well, to meet the two other Catharinas. Silly really, three Queen Catharinas in the same place. The meeting was about making sure Sigrid would inherit the Manor from me.”


    Under Kaarina’s management, Liuksiala Manor prospered. It became one of the most lucrative states in all Finland.

    Lover looks bashful. “I didn’t know how that happened. I just asked for help from my farmers and locals and listened to their advice.”

    Yes, speaking of locals, Kaarina became beloved and respected by local peasants, priests, and the poor. The proof of this was when the Cudgel War broke out, the rebelling farmers would not touch her lands.

    “All I did was being kind and respecting them…”

    As for her son…

    Sigrid breathed in the chilly winter air. She had travelled with Anna to see her cousin’s Sigismund coronation as King of Poland. She had come out of the party to clear her head. The wine was good.

    “Could a faithful servant have a coin to celebrate the good king's crowning?”

    Sigrid jolted. A beggar down the steps, with a broad hat that didn’t hide his red hair. ‘Äh. Hell with it.

    Sigrid took a coin from her purse and threw it to the beggar. The Beggar looked up and grabbed the coin in the air.

    Sigrid froze. After all those years, she still recognised those eyes. The Beggar also freezes.

    “Little brother?” “Big sis?”


    Gustav Eriksson had not lived a good life. He had made his living as a mercenary. It wasn’t a stable job, so hunger was a constant companion. He had roamed Europa aimlessly until he heard that Johan’s son was getting the Polish crown. So, he travelled to Krakow. Sigrid gave him her savings so he didn’t have to kill for a living, and he could go to a university.

    After hearing from her daughter where Gustav was, Kaarina begged King Johan to allow Gustav to return home. Johan refused, and so did the next king of Sweden, Karl (Charles) IX, but Kaarina managed to arrange a meeting in Tallinn.

    “21 years. It had been 21 years since I had seen my little boy. He had grown so much – I had to check his birthmark just to be sure. He had mostly forgotten how to speak Swedish.”

    They would spend a few months in Tallinn, but eventually, they had to move on. Kaarina gave Gustav his father’s diaries so he would remember him. Then, Kaarina left for Liuksiala, and Gustav went back to Europe.

    This was the last time they met.

    “He died in a Russian prison. The Tsar wanted to use him to gain the Swedish crown, but he refused. I tried to collect money to pay for his freedom but –“ Lover closed her eyes, grimacing.

    Kaarina Maununtytär, Regina Katarina, died in 1612. She was buried next to his son Henrik, and later Sigrid and her grandson Åke Tott would lay next to her.

    Yet that isn’t her story's end.

    Time had long since erased the traces of her short-lived glory and her long-lasting sorrow, but her goodness lived on in the memory of the people. She would be remembered by them as the Queen of Finland.


    Source

    In 1867, the people of Finland built for her a chapel in the Cathedral of Turku, with stained-glass windows and a black marble sarcophagus.

    “To think my memory would live on. That they would remember me as a good and kind Queen and not a bewitching witch that hurt Erik. I – I want to live up that image. To be the Queen, they believed I was, a one they saw me as, and –

    -isn't weird that I am talking here while my remains are in that sarcophagus? Stand here talking while my bones are there inside! This – this is too much. I am going to outside and lay in grass.”





    ♥NOBLE PHANTASM♥ ♥NOBLE PHANTASM♥





    Source

    By the Love of King

    And by the Love of my People

    I wear this Crown

    Now and evermore!


    Regina Katarina Finlandiae B++
    Anti-Unit (Self)

    [Lover’s appearance transforms. Her hair crows to golden rivers, her simple dress becomes flowing pure white, and she is adorned with golden jewels. Behind her head forms a radiant halo, a garland of heavenly grace. Gone is a lovely peasant girl, now there stands- no floats- a golden elven queen. Her eyes are like a forest spring, her voice sounds like golden bells, and her beauty is beyond mortal limits. Her allies, Berserkers of Camelot and Thebes, are wreathed in gold wisps. Her enemies, Saber, Lancer, and Archer, fall to their knees, weeping.]

    The crystallisation of the Lover legend is simple: She was a Finn-blooded peasant girl who became the Queen of Sweden – and Finland. Even if it was only for a few months, she still wielded power as a true monarch, giving land and privileges to others.

    With this Noble Phantasm, she regains the royal authority given to her and then some. She transforms into the powerful and wise Queen she always wanted to be. One that would not lose those she loved…

    While Noble Phantasm is active, her class skills rise to A rank, because “A great monarch loves her people as they love the monarch.” The sudden surge in power causes enemies around her to be instantly awestruck by her regal aura, while her allies gain perfect mental clarity, and her own parameters increase two ranks. Her desire to protect those she loves also applies to them the same protection as Princess of Grace skill but now without immobility.

    She also gains Imperial Privilege B, which she uses to gain any skill she thinks a Queen should have, like Tactics, Instinct, Mana Burst, and so on. Because proof of her authority was her giving land and privileges to others, she can also buff allies with extra mana and with skills from Imperial Privilege. However, these buffs only last as long as her Noble Phantasm.

    Like the Object of Desire, the people and Servants of her homeland treat this NP a rank higher – making them more susceptible to it but also gaining greater boons from her. They might even call her Maiden of Finland in their rapture. Hmm, she does look like the traditional national personification of Finland.

    [Charm all enemies (500%) for 3 turns.
    Make allies immune to mental debuffs. All party’s skills have a 500% chance to work.
    Grant self and allies Invulnerability buff and 100% heal at the beginning of every turn for 3 turns.
    Boost party’s Attacks, Defences, and Crit Star gain for 3 turns.
    Overcharge Allies NP by 1 stage for 1 time.
    Increase NP charge regeneration and NP damage for 3 turns.
    If Ally has a Finnish trait, buffs from NP are +20% higher.]


    "I AM DONE CRYING FOR LIVES LOST!
    FOR FAMILIES TORN ASUNDER!
    AND CRUEL MEN TELLING ME-
    WHAT I CAN'T DO!
    LISTEN EVERYONE!
    YOUR QUEEN COMMANDS YOU!
    TONIGHT!
    EVERYONE!
    WILL!
    GET!
    HOME!
    ALIVE!"




    ♥PERSONALITY♥ ♥PERSONALITY♥


    Kaarina is as close to a classic fairytale princess as you can get. She is kind, understanding, and humble, but also brave when needed. Kaarina loves everyone unconditionally, not just her master. She treats everyone warmly, offers help to all, and is a great hostess. Lover accepts everyone as they are and won’t judge them based on hearsay.

    However, Kaarina will not compromise her own morals. If her Master tries something underhanded, she will interfere – sometimes warning the victims and sometimes using her puppy eyes. Do not laugh – those pleading eyes are dangerous weapons! There should be sanctions on that face!

    Yet, unlike a fairytale princess, she didn’t get a happy ending. For all her bright smiles, she has a feeling of melancholy. She sees herself as a failure for not keeping her husband’s madness in check, and because she could not save her son. For that reason, she feels compelled to help those with mental problems and those whose families have been torn apart.

    Her thoughts on Queendom are mixed. On one hand, she never wanted to become a queen, and it brought so much pain to her. But it was his gift to her, to show the world that she was more beautiful and noble than any princess. And she feels that she owes it to the people of Finland who kept her memory alive and be the Queen they see her as.




    ♥FIGHTING STYLE♥♥FIGHTING STYLE♥


    Lover is clearly not a fighter, even with a boost to stats from Devotion. Her first instinct in conflict is to try to get everyone to stop fighting and talk things out. Given her skills, that is, in fact, possible. Those who summon her should try political games to win the Holy Grail War. As long as they don’t try something that might upset Lover.

    Her Class skills make her a great Lover (not like that), boosting her allies significantly and enthralling people around at a steady rate. But naturally, she is best when dealing with Finnish servants. The charm effect is almost guaranteed, and they are then empowered by pseudo-charisma. Her Personal skills Witchcraft (False) and Soothe Madness combos well with the Object of Desire skill, while the Princess of Grace gets more predictable with Devotion.

    Together, these skills make her a very effective anti-berserker Servant. First using Soothing skill to lower their madness so they will not attack her and then charm them with her sweets. And if that doesn’t work, her Grace will protect her. Though there is a chance that Berserkers, Mentally Polluted, or just insane people might seek her out so she could use her skills on them to just feel at peace even for a moment. The Power to give serenity is one hell of a bargaining chip.

    Her Noble Phantasm is a strong power multiplier. The more allies she has, the more effective it becomes, and with her charms, she can gather a large group of followers. For a moment, she and companions become nearly unstoppable – be they humans or Servants.

    [You might have noticed that she has no NP charge-up skills. This is deliberate. To activate her own NP, she needs allies that can help her. After all, her crown was given to her.]



    ♥FINAL ASCENSION♥ ♥FINAL ASCENSION♥



    Source

    “Hihihihi! There is nothing like running around in fallen leaves! It reminds me of my childhood! Ha-ha!”




    ♥CRAFT ESSENCE♥ ♥CRAFT ESSENCE♥


    ~♫~

    Beauty and the Beast



    Source



    The Stormy heart dreams
    in the calm embrace darling!
    The forest now silently tells a story,
    The trees are humming a praise to God.
    In embrace beloved,
    You will surely get your rest,
    God alone is the day, but the world is just night.

    Lay your head like your mother's skirt,
    Forget the weight of your crown!
    Gold and power chills,
    Love alone warms.
    Let your crown fall off:
    Grace does not perish,
    God alone is pure, but we are just sinners.

    Your kingdom is now in my arms,
    My grace guards your sleep!
    Anger leads astray, but faith is steadfast.
    Sleep, you restless one,
    Save from worries,
    Trusting the Creator!
    God alone is exalted, but we are just dust.

    • Based on Zacharias Topelius's poem






    ♥DIALOGUE WITH THOSE IN THE THRONE♥ ♥DIALOGUE WITH THOSE IN THE THRONE♥


    Bond 1:

    ”How are you doing, Master? Are you tired? Please let me help.”

    “Just rest your head here. – There is nothing embarrassing about it.

    Just lay your head on my lap.”



    Bond 2:

    “Are you hungry, Ritsuka? I have made some snacks!”

    Lover points at a table full of food.

    “Here are some rose budding, honey turnips, slices of salmon pie, stuffed pork, a surprise pie, and roasted almonds…”

    Lover’s sunny smile becomes melancholic.

    “He really liked them…”



    Bond 3:

    “Erik… I loved him, truly. Everyone remembers him as the mad king, but he wasn’t like that -all the time - in the beginning.

    WELL, he was like a prince charming with me!

    He loved arts and music and was a very smart man! And he … he …

    He was not a good man, Ritsuka, but I loved him.”



    Bond 4:

    ”Duke Juhan, I won’t forgive him. I tried to get him and Erik to make amends, but see what that got me.

    My husband spent his last years in a small and cold cell, abused by guards until Johan ordered him to be murdered!

    My little boy was dragged from me, crying! I barely recognised him when I saw him in Tallinn! I tried to get him home, but bastards forbade him from coming! FITTOR FOR THEIR GAME OF THRONES! I JUST WANT MY SON BACK!”

    Lover is hugging herself as she cries. But a small smile forms.

    “Little Sigrid, she flourished in the court. She and her huspand Henrik would visit with little Åke…”

    Even though she hasn’t changed, Lover feels decades older.

    “Ritsuka, I wish you will never find what it feels like losing a child.”



    Bond 5:

    “The Manor, it was a beautiful place. I had no experience in farming, but Duke Johan gave me money and had sent his men to help get started. It seems I had a knack for it because the estate prospered. The people were kind to me, always treating me well. They were hardworking, honest folks, always willing to help.

    I wonder why did people remember me? I really didn’t do anything special. All I did was to offer the King some roasted almonds…”



    Relationship with Master:

    “Hehe… I know my class is Lover, but I see you more as a good friend.”


    Likes:

    “Well, I really like romantic music, helping others, and sweets! This era has so many kinds of sweets!”


    Dislikes:

    “…getting locked in … seeing people suffer…politics…”


    Wish:

    “Wish for a grail… Can I wish to change history? …There is much I wish for…”


    Child Servants

    “Would you like more rose pudding?”


    Raikou, Tiamat

    “…I never knew my mother. She died while was too young to remember. Would it be ok if they indulge their fantasy for a bit?”


    Hercules

    “Mr Hercules is quite charming when he can talk and so good with kids!”


    Caligula

    “There is no need to thank me, Your Excellence. Seeing you spend time with your niece is all the reward I need.”


    Darius

    “Oh, he is a great speaker and generous host without Madness – and as long as you don’t say the I-word.”


    Spartacus

    "FREE THE POLITICAL PRISONER! DOWN WITH BORDERS! AFFORDABLE MENTAL HEALTCARE IS A RIGHT!


    Erik Bloodaxe

    "Squeeck chirp, squeek sveek chirp 'tap' squeck?"

    Translation: "Please explain to Mrs Gunnhild that I have no desire to do anything to her Erik and ask if she could turn back into human?"


    Saint Erik

    “I know you thought well, but I married Erik 14th, and he is the 9th.”


    Nightingale

    ”No worries, Miss Nightingale; it is just a scratch. Yes. Thank you. Be well!

    -Master, what is with that shocked face? ”



    Morgan (Lostbelt)

    “…She just kept crying and wailing…I just hugged her until she fell asleep…What happened to her Master?”


    Gilles

    “So, my skill just turns him back to Saber. Well, at least this way he won’t suffer more eye damage!”


    Phantom of Opera

    “Even though I am not Christina, I would love to hear you sing.”


    Mori Nagayoshi

    “I am surprised that a man with such bloodlust would be so good at managing his estate and county.”


    Väinämöinen

    ”I am sorry, mister Väinämöinen, but you are not my type.”


    Lemminkäinen

    ”No! I am not interested in you!”

    The frivolous Casanova gets left in cold once again.


    Runeberg

    ”I am flattered that you wrote enough poems about me to fill a whole book, but I am not interested.”

    The great poet, womanizer and cheater is also left in cold.


    Topelius

    “I heard you wrote a song about me and Erik. Can I see it?

    …sniff.

    …yes, it's okey young man, it is a beautiful song.”



    Lönnrut

    “I am not sure what is in him. I mean he is hardly handsome, but way he listens your ever word … he makes you laugh… and how he sings...”

    With every word Lover is blushing harder and harder…


    Minna Canth

    “At first, I thought she was scary, but actually she is such a fun hostess! We played cards, ate a cake named after her (very tasty), tried to summon a ghost and talked about inhered problems of patriarchy."


    Gustav Vasa

    ”So, you would have been my father-in-law. Should I call you Father? EH? Are you ok, sir?”


    Jaakko Iitala

    “There is no need to bow to me, Ms -eh Mr Jaakko! Please rise!

    Please Jaakko, just call me Kaarina.

    We both victims of cruel men playing with thrones.”



    Louhi

    “Well, I do get mixed messages from Matriarch Louhi. One hand as 'Queen of Finns' she seems see me as enemy's leader. But on other also remind her of daughters so she treats me with candies."


    Artoria

    “…Oh sorry, Master. I was just thinking about something Sir Artoria said to me."


    Marie

    "AHHH! HER HIGHNESS CALLED ME FOR TEA! WHAT DO I DO! WHAT DO I WEAR! DO I BRING ROASTED ALMONDS WITH ME?"


    Sita/Rama

    “To be separated , even after death … it is wrong – wrong - WRONG! – I won’t stand it! Isn’t there anything we can do, Ritsuka!”


    Nero

    Lover ignores Emperor's boasts and just hugs her silently.

    After a second, Nero hugs back.


    Boudica

    This time, it's Iceni matriarch that is getting tightly hugged.


    Mata Hari

    “Margaretha… To have strength to smile and dance with that weight sorrow. I wish I can as strong.

    …Let us be just who we are, without masks of Seducer and Queen.”


    Two women enjoy cakes and coffee without baggage of history.


    Lion of North

    "You are Karl's son…"


    Rider of Andlau

    “What a strong woman! I wish I had been as strong as her back then.

    I wish with all my heart she will reunite with Charles and save him.”



    Binder of the Distant Longing

    “BHAAAAAAAA! You buul gill! How could dhey!”

    “MMMMMHHH!!!”

    The Empathetic Lover is tightly hugging the smaller Binder while crying enough to cause flooding. Binder is getting suffocated by Lover's bosom.


    Solon

    "Oh thank you, fine … man. I appreciate your hard work. Despite all accidents, we made enough cakes for everyone!
    …These are incredibly good. Your grandhen's recipe, you say?"





    ♥DIALOGUE FOR THE COMPETITION♥ ♥DIALOGUE FOR THE COMPETITION♥


    ~♫~

    BARBARA G. WALKER

    “Mrs, I assure you, I am no goddess or fertility symbol!”


    Stanley Kubrick

    “The little girl asked me to star in her play, isn’t that sweet? …Huh, why should I ask for payment?”


    Darwin’s Demon

    “Please don’t be so forward!”


    Isukiri

    "If Son of God says it's party time, then it is party time! HIHIHII!!!

    Kaarina is dancing on a table with Mata Hari.


    Madame de Montespan

    “Have you no shame?!”

    Kaarina is covering her Master's eyes.


    Zeus-Conius , Zeus Keraunos

    "I am flattered that a great pagan spirit finds me attractive, but no"

    Surprisingly Thunder dicks do leave her alone. But that was most likely because every Finnish servant had materialised behind Kaarina, looking mighty pissed.


    Šćepan Mali

    "He is quite unusual, but I can tell he was a great king."


    Queen Amina

    "Queen Amida if as ever look at my subjects –

    I WILL END YOU LIKE A RABID DOG YOU ARE."


    The sheer fury otherwise kind Kaarina is terrifying.


    Tarot

    "Empress, Lovers, Tower, Death, and … Happy Squirrel?"


    The Proverbial Chicken

    "Because she saw something nasty on other side?"


    The Lovers, Arcana XI

    "T-there is no need to d-doubt, William, Aimee. (Sob)

    I ca-can see it clearly: your love is tr-true. (Sob)"


    'Sees clearly'. As Kaarina says this, she is crying yet she has the warmest smile.

    Do they remind Karina of herself and Erik?

    Or what she wished it could have been?


    Pellegrino Maria Ernetti

    "A machine that can see in past.

    Could I burrow it? I just –

    Want to see them again."



    Mina

    "Mr Harker is such a smart person! She helped me to find out who has been stealing my pastries."





    ♥AUTHOR NOTES♥ ♥AUTHOR NOTES♥


    When I about year go decided to start making Finnish servants, Kaarina was one the first historical persons I choose to investigate. I had heard of her before but her whole story was much deeper and sadder then imagined. I knew I had to write about her. I originally imagined her as Caster but then I saw Wyvern's Lover class and she fitted it perfectly. I hope the pink theme and hearts paired with a real historical tragic story gave everyone a whiplash.

    Also, those effects under Devotion and Object of Desire? I asked Wyvern how they imaged skills working FGO and those effects are based on their answer.

    Face of servant is Marie Campbell from My Next Life as a Villainess: All Routes Lead to Doom! aka Bakarina. Yes, the fact the anime's MC is named Katarina did play part why I did pick Maria. Shame I didn't check if anyone had used Katarina Claes as a faceclaim. That would have made fun dialogue.

    Historical source I used was Kaarina's Wikipedia page (both English and Finnish version), and Zachris Topelius's Maamme kirja (Book of Our Land) (chapter 143).

    The verse in the beginning is a fragment of Frans Mikael Franzén's "Kaarina Maununtytär" poem

    The Music I used was:

    1) Instrumental Orchestral Version of "A Dream Is a Wish Your Heart Makes" from animated "Cinderella" by Magic Philharmonic Orchestra

    2) "Romance" by Yuhki Kuramoto from Bittersweet Life movie.


    3) "Kaarina Maununtyttären kehtolaulu" by Dominante Choir and Seppo Murto.

    4) Instrumental version of ponyphonic's song "Lullaby For A Princess" by @StarOfNightfall


    5) Courage and Kindness by Patrick Doyle from Disney's live action Cinderella.


    Thank you for reading!






    - - - Updated - - -

    I hope you like her!

    I am not sure if I have time to make second sheet for competition as Easter is coming and I have to finnish an actual research article before conference.

    Just is case I made for her the prittiest sheet I knew how.

    Good night! Its nearly 2 am here.
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    You stood before the summoning circle, the steady ticking of clock behind you served as a balm and a burden to your soul. You were not much of a magus in capability, as your lacking circuits, lineage, and crest could attest to such. However, you made up for it in ambition.

    Just once, you wished to see her smile.

    Even if such may see your face be bitten off and blood drained.

    But alas, it was not to be as the summoning had concluded and coughing could be heard from a silhouette within the smoke.

    “Ah, why do these rituals involve so much smoke?!”

    Lucy? Your call had the form still and started approaching, the smoke settled to reveal dark hair and muted red eyes. Your heart sank but the lady hummed in curiosity.

    “If you refer to Lucy Westenra then I must disappoint you. I am the one who was feasted on after her and the one who assisted in seeing her avenged. I am the Servant of Chains, Binder.”



    “I am Wilhelmina Harker. But you may refer to me as Mina, my student.”

    True Name: Wilhelmina “Mina” Harker
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Region: England
    Source: Dracula
    Armament: Book, Revolver

    Parameters:
    Strength: E+
    Endurance: E+
    Agility: D+
    Mana: D
    Luck: C


    Class Skills

    Binding and Fettering B
    The glue that steadfastly held the team together in their quest against Dracula. Even with an ailing mind and body, it could be said that she was the focal point of their success, in not renewing their morale with heartfelt praise but also connecting a pattern of inquiry and notes that allowed The Count to be tracked and ended once and for all. For Mina, who has voiced extreme vehemence against the count who sullied her and rallied foes against him, through voice, she robs an opponent's Luck, Endurance, and Magic Resistance, distributing it to her allies to make for an effective party of companions.

    “They were all great men, each one of them. A simple push was all that was needed.”

    Independent Action B
    The ability to act independently without the support of a master. While a demure person normally, Binder hides a surprising amount of willfulness when confronting seemingly hopeless odds. Nearly suborned to the will of Dracula, Mina, nonetheless, fought against the urges to be with the one who embraced her against her will.

    “I am not one who subscribes to being a New Woman; it is simply my taste. However, some of the ideals of acting independently had served well, I must admit.”


    Personal Skills

    Bite of Dracula B
    Termed as the Vampire’s Baptism of Blood. An act that would see to it that one would become a vampire beholden to Dracula’s will. Differing from the affliction suffered by Lucy Westenra in terms of effects, Binder is provided with a nearly vampiric constitution that she is able to tap into, triggered through biting herself, for an enhancement to her physical parameters during the night. However, her strength will diminish in the daytime, with her becoming more and more lethargic.

    Overuse of the skill would, unfortunately, call up an echo of The Count and, in a similar vein to Monstrous Strength, increases her disposition as a monster.

    “I…still remember that night. The lanky, dark figure with eyes of burning red clutching and gripping with an inhuman strength, teeth into my flesh. I…remember.”

    Helsing Group Mystic Codes C-
    An eclectic collection of items brought together in the quest to take down Count Dracula. An assortment of both holy and mundane items for the purpose of taking care of supernatural and manmade threats. However, in the case of Mina, once her vampirification is started, her use of the holy items are restricted due to suffering increasing damage from their presence.

    “Ah, these are presents and well wishes from the crew! Some stakes, wafers, and this gun I got from my loving husband.”

    Wail of A Tainted Soul D
    A mournful cry that emanates from Binder if she suffers from overuse of Bite of Dracula. A distantly related skill to Wail of the Falsely Living, Wail of A Tainted Soul is born from the outpour of despair from the unholy taint being drip-fed into her essence. While she was one who endeavors to keep a cheerful persona in the face of her affliction, it was one night where her soul cried out in woe. In contrast to its origins, it is meant to draw others into action, hardening their commitment by etching itself into their minds.

    “A-ah, I am sorry if that happens. One can only endure so much before they have to…vent.”


    Noble Phantasm

    “Come now, my student! I have collected the pieces of the puzzle and fit them together for this modern tapestry. For the sake of bringing down our foes. Now let us begin! Mina Harker's Memorandum!”

    Mina Harker’s Memorandum: Horror's Death Row
    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Horror

    How does one kill a monster? Or more specifically, how does a man kill a monster? The heroes of old would overpower and overwhelm, or even face monsters on even ground. But Dracula was not a monster of old but a horror of the modern times that generated terror that drapes over the world. A horror whose death was almost single handedly put into motion through the efforts of Mina Harker. Collecting the disparate notes, recounting, and news following the appearances and actions of the Count into a coherent timeline of events, a movement pattern was unveiled and combined with an inquiry stemming from an assumed goal, the death of Dracula was able to be meditated as a guaranteed event.

    It is a noble phantasm that with the proper information on an opponent and confirmed assumption on their intent, the memorandum will put together a prediction on their movements. Through this, Mina is able to put together ambushes and elaborate traps, able to catch her enemies in disadvantageous positions, allowing for a quick and easy elimination. However, this noble phantasm is significantly less effective regarding human enemies due to an inherent “unpredictability” within human logos.

    On a side note, with the activation of the noble phantasm, Binder’s coordination ability is raised by a good amount, making her efficient as guiding the route of a team and, provided that they are equipped with the Helsing Group Mystic Codes, allowing the team itself to become a minor force to reckoned with in a grail war.

    Personality

    Mina Harker is a young lady with a studious personality, helpful to a fault to not only those with positive relations to her but also strangers on the road of life. As a soft person to her very core, she is often troubled immensely by the misfortune encountered by others as if the blow were dealt to and by herself. It would not be difficult to describe her as weak-hearted, even as she would keep up a cheerful facade or a strong front to placate the hearts of others.

    Yet it is that weak, human heart that held a gun steady to end the lives of others.

    That bore a mind that brought the pieces together.

    The same heart that held tight the group that would see to the end of a monster.

    Even if it, at times, shall be hidden under an eerie but vibrant silence at dusk and an unfettered slumber at dawn, it is present.

    A weak but always beating human heart.



    “Well, I can’t leave you alone like this and I’m sure that Lucy would be saddened at your state as well. There were some things you wanted to do with her, no? I’ll accompany you in her place in the meantime! Come along, my student!”


    Creator's Note
    It took a lot of deliberation on what servant I wanted to make and my mind kept turning to Lucy Westenra as a Monster but I didn't know how to frame it and eventually, my mind turned to Mina and how she was portrayed in the book. Some internet and TVtropes searching later, I found her to be a good fit as a Binder. As I didn't want to fuck this up, I actually went and read Dracula to make this sheet. Not gonna lie, slow burn aside, the book's pretty good and Mina is an interesting character, both as the MVP and absolute fiend later on.
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    That was a good Servant,Vance.

    But you forgot to write what stats ”binding and fettering” drains and boosts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragoran21 View Post
    That was a good Servant,Vance.

    But you forgot to write what stats ”binding and fettering” drains and boosts.
    Thanks for the heads up, I had her taking END, Luck, and Magic Resistance with her voice as a medium for it.

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    hi i finally read all the current sheets and now im speedrunning these sheet comments or else im gonna get too lazy to do them and i wanted to do at least SOMETHING instead of nothing...
    Also Lovers' relationship lines are updated to most recent sheet as of this posting!

    Barbara G. Walker: This is good shit. I love it. 10/10 no notes.
    Ok I lied I have notes. Thank you for making the most absurd qualities of Walker that make me question her sanity into this marvelous sheet that exploits that bullshit into becoming something that is close to how, I presume, most people view her. Great. Just great.
    And yes the LobCorp FC helps, even if I don't know as much about this character just yet.

    Stanley Kubrick (broke): silly little shit
    indeed you don't pull half measures.
    too bad for npc jail for other form but hey what can you do
    I can imagine this Kubrick just causing an event in FGO in an attempt to make a film.

    Darwin's Demon: honestly i feel like using launcher for panday pira because i didn't want to make him caster but he gets stuck with archer instead but that's besides the point
    Anyways always enjoy seeing the "metaphorical devils" become servants. This one was no exception. I'm just a sucker for thought experiments and the like becoming servants because of what you can do.

    Takenouchi Documents: am i reading a ancient aliens lore or one piece backstory? because seriously the description of the documents sounded like op backstory. XD (no i am not caught up; i stopped in somewhere around 1115...)
    Basically Life of Brian the servant, except it's not really the servant's fault. Love how April Fool's is encouraging peeps to make silly sheets even when the prompt is not about sillies.

    Madame de Montespan: props for the boob jokes. NP is hilarious to me. ...yeah not much else for me to say.

    Zeus-Conius: oh boy we got lover boy version of the playboy of greek pantheon. I do like how you manage to make it as a Servant. Really neat. Would definitely not want him as my servant though.

    Šćepan Mali: geez it makes me wonder how easily this guy could've been lost to history. or worse, been completely covered up. Idk he just has me thinking a lot about how lucky he got and rumors and shit and idk where i'm going with this...
    neat sheet either way. liked learning about the guy.

    Queen Amina: emma frost but without diamond form and maybe a bit more evil? look i just mainly know her from rivals ok? i can't help the comparisons.
    I'll admit the real highlight was seeing you make a new class for her instead of the servant herself. I really like the idea. ...yes partially because i might just use it for a bakunawa servant instead of mooncancer but we'll see if i ever make it...

    Tarot: i am very inclined to like this because of my biases
    and indeed i like this cause of my biases

    Ζευς Κεραυνιος: neat. i'll admit my favorite part of this sheet was how you explain the gatekeeper class and how this zeus qualifies for it. i thought the reasoning behind independant action being a class skill was really cool and made me go "damn it why didn't i think of that". though at the samme time i'm like "yeah okay final boss gatekeeper is cool and all but i'm still glad we got the defender of certain areas-types and journey-types of gatekeeper too".

    The Chicken Who Crossed the Road: wow salt I hate this idea
    On a more serious note, nice to see another Questioner (though ive still yet to read your first one...) if only because it seems like such a fascinating class to me. And the usual Salt Pillar madness.
    I applaud your insanity. Idk I just really really never get tired of the idea you come up with, even when i don't get them, thanks to how you write your sheets. As I said before, they are incredibly atmospheric and inspire me so.
    Yes even this stupid idea. That's just how much I like your prose.

    Pellegrino Maria Ernetti: well
    i mean
    Void Shiki is essentially the closest thing we got to "God" within the Nasuverse.
    Makes sense to me.
    And with a really nice sheet too. I like it. ...i will admit though, since i don't know much of this figure, or maybe i understand the class even less than i thought i did, i don't quite understand why he's stranger class but again, that might just be me. Remember, I like the sheet, what you've done with the figure, and the stuff with the "time viewing".
    Also lol Schliemann cameo. Yeah Pellegrino! Get his ass!

    Kaarina Maununtytär: she is precious. i wanna give her hug. ...yes also like her cause it's reminding me so much of my petrus and catherine (aka the "real beauty and the beast") sheet. i can imagine them getting along.

    Wilhelmina “Mina” Harker: yet another remminder i still need to finish dracula. eithet way, interesting to see mina in binder class. with my limited knowledge, that's the last thing i expected, but you make it make sense.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoScribe View Post
    Darwin's Demon: honestly i feel like using launcher for panday pira because i didn't want to make him caster but he gets stuck with archer instead but that's besides the point
    Anyways always enjoy seeing the "metaphorical devils" become servants. This one was no exception. I'm just a sucker for thought experiments and the like becoming servants because of what you can do.

    Šćepan Mali: geez it makes me wonder how easily this guy could've been lost to history. or worse, been completely covered up. Idk he just has me thinking a lot about how lucky he got and rumors and shit and idk where i'm going with this...
    neat sheet either way. liked learning about the guy.
    If so, have fun with the Class Skills. It's why I made them. Also, MR isn't one, just for reference. That was just DD removing an evolutionary flaw. Or it can be. Just because I make it one way doesn't mean everyone agrees.

    The mystery of Šćepan Mali may never be solved. Glad you liked learning about him as much as I did. Fascinating little man.
    Morg's delightful Servant comp.
    IN COLOR

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    If you enjoyed Chicken you'll love Questioner Cain.. it's got the whimsy of a rock hurdler and the aura of primordial murder..

    Thanks Draco a bunch. Your words inspired me to write a sequel to Chicken that's called Questioner Egg. Or...would that be a prequel?... erm
    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    For a moment I had a flash of inspiration about a NP that mixes and matches the attributes of its targets... Unfortunately, Barbara Walker is alive...

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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoScribe View Post

    Kaarina Maununtytär: she is precious. i wanna give her hug. ...yes also like her cause it's reminding me so much of my petrus and catherine (aka the "real beauty and the beast") sheet. i can imagine them getting along.

    Thank you! And yes, they would.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoScribe View Post
    Queen Amina: emma frost but without diamond form and maybe a bit more evil? look i just mainly know her from rivals ok? i can't help the comparisons.
    I'll admit the real highlight was seeing you make a new class for her instead of the servant herself. I really like the idea. ...yes partially because i might just use it for a bakunawa servant instead of mooncancer but we'll see if i ever make it...
    HMU with any details you want for workshopping!

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    Why not? I was gonna save it all for later, but I’m writing 3 other things, so I’m just apparently in a writey mood.



    Barbara G. Walker: Doesn’t even have any words for her son smh.
    Don't have too much to say on this one because it's inherently a joke. The joke is funny, but it's not like there's a hidden depth here. I do like █████ which I only really know the joke of because of creator talk. Also the somewhat deeper cut of acknowledging my Takeuchi with a "Yes!" Just some goofy fun.

    Stanley Kubrick (Variable): Can we acknowledge that Bn is slowly turning into a wholesome creator? Give him a round of applause, folks.
    Same with Barb, but there's a little more depth going on her. More the reputation of Kubrick given life, some fun jokes through the sheet you don't necessarily need knowledge of all his works going in, and an absurd "what if" of a final boss that would be a weird parody event that wouldn't end with him becoming summonable. A fun ride.

    Darwin’s Demon: [insert mommy copypasta here]
    Just fun. If there's a Launcher boom with people using these Skills, it'll be funny. If not, I'm still happy I made them.Let her know how much you love her.

    Isukiri: He is the Messiah!
    Another joke that doesn't really have a lot of commentary to give. It's an extended Life of Brian joke, it's just there to be fun.

    Madame de Montespan:

    I've waited a year for this, and Saron's waited even longer. Monte is kinda a walking sex joke anyway, but the puns didn't hurt anything. Catherine's best friend that seems like she should be embarrassed to be around just by their visuals and attitudes has come. Particularly this point in her life, it makes sense that La Voisin plays such a big part, which will make it sad when she eventually is removed in the next parts whenever they arrive. Still, fun Skills, appropriate NP, love the reflection of Voisin's Black Mass in her Blessings Skill, and am excited for more.

    Zeus-Conius: The same joke as Montespan, but for men.
    Hyper focusing on Zeus's sexual exploits as a Servant is just a funny idea, because of every story about him doing it without consent, there's 1/2 of one about it being a mutual deal. Yes, that was a roundabout way of saying the without consent is 2:1, thanks for noticing. Still, it comes out well, and I like that his NP isn't just Keraunos since that's not the important part of this version. Another Lover in this contest, and another on the growing pile.

    Šćepan Mali: To quote White: He's just was Gay!
    Goofy little guy. Maybe actually be Peter III changing his Saint Graph, maybe not. Lots of questions in life, just as many in Servanthood. Also, some people though it was a Scotch sheet just because of the FC, and that's funny to me.

    Amina: Finally! Evil! Just what this contest was missing!
    Strong foot forward on introducing a Class. Not one I'll probably ever use, but that's just me. She's good. Deplorable too. #letevilbeevil. Dogs of War is a fun visual, and both NP and Kankara ooze personality in what they say about her. Good stuff.

    Tarot: This isn't your card.
    Player rears it's head once more. The Skills enforcing different tarot games and decks while the NP is basically "gambling for buffs" shows that this one is laser focused on its identity and gimmick, and she does it pretty well. A good Servant, but without much to say on it.

    Ζευς Κεραυνιος: Well, DD: do you have enough children in stock?
    A very specific interpretation of Gatekeeper based on knowing Gil was originally gonna be one. Big final boss energy and all that. Xenia mention is also fun, given how big a part of Greek culture that was and Zeus overseeing it. Also positioning Zeus of all people as someone vying for the end of the Age of Gods is an interesting take on him. Not too bad.

    Chimken:
    https://64.media.tumblr.com/20f55be5c0e1eedca9f075f848cea40f/4fc29e2f24142b90-82/s500x750/5840b82bb7f2f5464728a7e3bf04a287cf5bb0f5.pnj
    Probably the closest I've gotten to understanding Questioner, but I'm still not really convinced on it as a Class. Still, it's a fun sheet. Turning into avian monsters from myth whenever she's diverted from her destination is not what I expected. Needed a couple things explained like why she ran from DD, but I came out the other side informed.
    Chrysaor mention though... That alone removes any point potential.

    The Lovers: Classic couple goals.
    Personifying the trial of love as a Gatekeeper is pretty neat when paired with a Lover Class. My initial comment was gonna be about making the text bigger, but that already got self-corrected it seems. Centering the sheet around the back and forth of a relationship that requires an acceptance of flaws as much as an acknowledgement of their strengths is good. Also, I'm thinking I've got it write from the nicknames that the man is lover and woman is gatekeeper, but it could also be that they just refer to the other as the opposite, which would be kinda cute in a character way. I will say I will never be behind "Gatekeeper as Watcher again" but I think it fits here well. They come from a similar place of why I wrote Moros & Elpis. Like, very much that, considering they both have Gatekeeper guarding another.


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    Saver of Alaya:

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    True Name: Vasily Arkhipov

    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Strength- E
    Agility- E
    Endurance- D
    Mana- D
    Luck- C
    NP- E

    Personality
    A quiet, humble, even awkward man. He does not believe his own actions were so exceptional, saying many would've done the same with fate of humanity on the line. Yet when the world is at stake he shows another side. Shyness exchanged to steadiness, ignoring fear and pain, a steely glint in face of hardship. Summoned in modern age, he enjoys reading and learning about other Servants, although quizzical about how many's appearance differ from their records. He's a little superstitious and frets over bad luck.

    Likes: reading, peace & quiet
    Dislikes: bad omens, short-sighted bureaucrats
    Talents: shaping up under pressure, saving humanity
    Natural Enemy: Rufina, Koyanskaya



    Class Skills:

    Counter-Hero- C
    Ability to reduce statistics of [Heroes] the Servant faces in combat. One who opposed humanity's self-destruction drive, Saver can weaken those embodying it, such as warlords and conquerors. Declining their parameters by a full rank.

    Charisma- E
    A Skill encompassing one's natural charm as well as commanding armies in battle. Not a charismatic man, he only has a pittance from his Class Container.


    Personal Skills:

    Faceless Savior- EX
    In modern times it's easy to save or destroy the world. A CEO ordering logging in the Amazon could bring nature closer to destruction, while an activist fighting those efforts could save it. A
    democratization
    degradation
    of heroism making it harder to become a [Heroic Spirit] above mundane humanity in the present age. However, Saver resists that concept. An embodiment of all those nameless and forgotten saviors, subsumed under the mantle of one synonymous for [unsung heroism].

    Saver is able to assume the shape and abilities of all those uncredited souls who helped save humanity. Doctors, lawyers, soldiers, statesmen, laborers, even Mages, all in some way essential to [humanity's salvation]. Naturally, such nameless spirits wouldn't boast Noble Phantasms to their name, but their skills and experience become his own to wield.

    Alaya's Agent- B+
    Denotes one is a vessel for Alaya, the collection of humanity's survival-instinct. Saver was only an ordinary man in life. Yet having stood against mankind's drive for self-destruction and said "no", he was chosen as a Servant embodying their will to endure and thrive.

    Grants Battle Continuation and Independent Action at rank A+. So long as humans still wish to live, as long as the survival-instinct burns somewhere in a single heart, Mana continually flows in Saver's body sustaining and restoring him. Saver can also expel that energy in blasts dealing greater damage against beings opposed to humanity. He favors shaping those blasts into ethereal geese, reflecting how they were mistaken for nuclear strikes.

    Bravery of an Ordinary Man- A
    Saver is no legendary hero. He overcame no impossible odds and slew no gigantic beast. Yet, he defied orders to save humanity from annihilation, risking retaliation from superiors, and his country's safety. Saver cannot negate mental interference. He can still be pressured, confused and fascinated as any other man. However, he will continue to step forward in spite of those effects, focused on saving humanity.


    Noble Phantasm
    Nevospetyy Spasitel'
    The Man Who Saved The World


    Rank: E

    Type: Support

    The sole feat elevating Saver to a Heroic Spirit. In the heat of the Cold War, isolated in a submarine beneath the sea and facing depth charges from American ships to bring them to surface, Saver's fellow officers believed war had already erupted. Yet Saver refused to unleash the submarine's nuclear torpedo, instead convincing them to surface and negotiate. An act that singlehandedly averted nuclear holocaust and saved humanity from annihilation.

    Many would've feared punishment from their superiors had the attacks turned out to be true. Many would've shriveled to shame their country by not retaliating. Saver felt those emotions as much as anyone. But, he simply looked at the bigger picture and prioritized humanity as a whole. No buddha or messiah. Sporting no grand titles. Yet if the criteria of this Class is [saving humans], he undoubtedly qualifies in excess.

    The sole trump-card of Vasily Arkhipov as a Servant. A Noble Phantasm recreating not the consequences of his act but Saver's own state during it. Upon invocation, pain and fear vanish. He impartially executes the perfect action to save the most humans in his vicinity. A word, a thrown rock, or a single step are all optimized to save as many humans as possible. Gaining a pseudo-Revelation for that purpose. Momentarily, becoming a machine for humanity's salvation.

    He will unhesitantly perform even atrocious actions for their survival. If five could be saved by pushing one in front of a trolley, he would do so without doubt, only to be likely wracked by guilt when this Noble Phantasm ends and his normal mindset resurfaces. In a Grail War scenario, Saver would even sacrifice his own Master to rescue strangers if it came to that. Thus, this Noble Phantasm is a double-edged sword one may balk to invoke if their definition of [salvation] differs from
    Alaya's
    his
    .





    I know Saver is a canon Class, but it's basically just for Buddha so far, and Vasily is a very atypical member, so I think he qualifies if BnEl's Kubrick does. As usual comments and critiques welcome. Thanks for reading!

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    Royd, I'm... I'm not sure this qualifies. Saver wasn't listed in the post the same way Gatekeeper, Faker, Funny Vamp, and Gunner got specific call outs despite being "canon". Sutaa could always come in and correct me, but I'm not sure this one belongs in the contest.

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    If you ever make Questioner Morg, you'll have my attention. Royd is really the only one with sheets made about him. New thing to put on the fridge.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Royd, I'm... I'm not sure this qualifies. Saver wasn't listed in the post the same way Gatekeeper, Faker, Funny Vamp, and Gunner got specific call outs despite being "canon". Sutaa could always come in and correct me, but I'm not sure this one belongs in the contest.

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    I acknowledge no laws but whatever ones benefit me.
    Again, I'm going by BnEl's Foreigner Kubrick, another Class not listed in that post which he even admitted might not fit, but hasn't been called out. And to me Saver is another Class that's known, but more a way for a specific Servant (Buddha) to appear, not what the general criteria are (other than "saving people", but that's vague). So there's room for a fanon interpretation. Avenger was that way before, when some argued it an Angra-specific Class, before GO debuted more Servants to qualify focused on revenge. I'll shift to the main thread if sutaa rules though.

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