3 points: Captain Ahab
2 points: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
1 point: Judas Iscariot
Honorable Mentions: Scylla, Lamia, Hera
3 points: Captain Ahab
2 points: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
1 point: Judas Iscariot
Honorable Mentions: Scylla, Lamia, Hera
3 points: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
2 points: Hera
1 point: Scylla
3pts: Captain Ahab
2pts: Hera
1pt: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
Honorable Mentions: Lamia, Scylla
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
Now Revamped!
3 points: Judas Iscariot
2 points: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
1 point: Hera
3 Points: Hera
2 Points: Sir Breuse Sans Pity
1 Point: Judas Iscariot
Honorable Mentions: Phix, Sethos I, Ahab, Mahendradatta
Well, things seemed to have ended pretty quietly, but congrats to PitViper for winning with your very first post
Congratulations for PitViper, well deserved indeed.Yeah, this thread's been noticeably quieter and less enthusiastic.
Though I didn't get the chance to either participate nor vote myself
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just to put it out there, i woud've voted
Rangda
Hera
Sir Breuse
in no particular order
might I suggest A idea after all starting January it will be type moon 20th birthday perhaps have it be a year sequal contests aka using any of the previous contest ideas and start them anew so people who missed out on the previsous contest can make one or if they want to anew they can
Source
Class: Archer
Other Classes: Rider, Caster, Berserker, Saver
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: North America
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: B
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: D
Height: 241 cm
Weight: 130 kg
Likes: Collecting items that catch her eye, physical activity
Dislikes: The sound of thunder, ice
Talent: Lacrosse, making faces
Natural Enemy: Red Horn
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Divine, Female, Humanoid
Armament: Bow
Catalyst: A fossilized red horn
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Relationships
Creator Notes
"Ja wohl mein Master. Servant Archer, Wernher Von Braun at your service. As long as you can help me fulfill my research, I'd gladly follow you into the very depths of Hell."
Servant Archer:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Wernher Von Braun "Father of Rocketry"
Alignment: True Neutral
Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster
Strength- D
Agility- B
Endurance- C
Mana- C
Luck- A+
NP- A++
Personality
Class Skills:
Independent Action- B
The ability to sustain oneself in the World without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank, Archer can linger in the World for up to two days in the absense of an active contract. Thespirit that let Archer freely defect to the United States after the fall of Nazi Germany to resume his work has given him a high rank in this Skill.indifferentindependent
Magic Resistance- E-
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, it doesn't cancel spells at all but merely reduces the damage a little.
Archer lived in the modern day and had no anecdotes of encountering Magecraft, so he only has a bare minimum rank in this Skill.
Personal Skills:
Self-Preservation- A
A Skill to preserve one's health so the user can escape. As long as he preserves his Master's safety to the lowest possible degree, Archer is able to escape from nearly all harm.
In life, Archer was someone who didn't care who he was working for as long as he could advance his research. Building missiles for Nazi Germany's horrific bombing campaigns, and later defecting to America to work on the Space Race. It wasn't that he had a change of heart, Archer simply didn't care as long as he had the opportunity to fulfill his dream.
"I make the rockets go up, where they come down is someone else's responsibility." So said Wernher Von Braun.
Pioneer Of The Stars- EX
A unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized". As the man whose research brought humanity to the stars, Archer possesses EX-rank in this Skill. Even if he didn't personally undertake the journey, it never would've occurred without him.
Whether he's revered as a patriotic hero or reviled as a self-serving demon, Archer's contributions to the field of space travel can't by any means be overstated.
Aptitude For Slaughter (Tools)- B
A curse-like Personal Skill held by those who invented tools used for mass killing, even if they didn't wish for it. Implements used gain a + modifier in their damage dealt against humans. In Archer's case this Skill expresses his bloodstained history in creating rockets of war for the German regime. Even if he doesn't intend it, any rocket Archer creates will inevitably possess applications for warfare・destruction.
Noble Phantasms
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So here's my entry for the contest. Dude's been hanging around my WIP file for a while now, but since he fit the theme I decided to polish him up (mostly personality-wise) and submit. Hope y'all enjoy!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 22nd, 2023 at 05:40 PM.
Ah, so this is the Star Arrow servant you were asking for help a few days back?Originally Posted by Shiki-pon
Pretty solid overall despite your fears of being too verbose.
Archer of Mysore
"As you are my retainer, allow me to establish some rules between us, since I cannot risk you throwing a wrench on my plans. Your duty is simply to provide me with mana, use command spells, and speak only when you are permitted. Abide by these rules, and I promise to bring victory upon the two of us. Transgressions will be met with a warning, and a second one will grant you punishment. Do I make myself clear?"
Source
Class: Archer
Other Classes: Saber, Lancer, Rider
True Name:
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Origin: India
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: E
LCK: A
NP: B+
Likes: Being in power, order, weaponry
Dislikes: Things outside his control, incompetence, disorder
Talent: Military strategies, suppressing enemies
Natural Enemy: Lakshmibai, Spartacus
Armament: A Mysorean rocket, also usable as a spear, dagger
Catalyst: His sword and ring, taken from him by British forces as war trophies
Class SkillsPersonal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Description
Lore
Relationships
Creator's Notes
Last edited by BnEl15; December 2nd, 2019 at 12:10 PM.
AUTHOR NOTES
Archer of the Moon
Class: Archer.
Other Classes: Berserker, Rider.
Alignment: Lawful Good.
Place of Origin: China.
Height: 178cm.
Weight: 70kg.
Attribute: Sky.
Traits: Brynhildr’s beloved, Servant, Humanoid, Male, Divine, Weak to Enuma Elish.
Armament: Bow.
Catalyst: A piece of an arrow dusted with offering incense.
Parameters:
STR: B
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: B
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Relationships
Extras
Last edited by WhiteFrenzy; December 3rd, 2019 at 03:29 PM.
"I'm not the strongest, but i have my way."
Class: Archer
Alignment: Neutral/good
Region: France
Height: 180cm
Weight: 64kg
Likes: target practicing, honor, merciful men
Dislikes: vengeful people, unnecessary violence, giving up
Talent: marksmanship, cooking
Armaments: crossbow
Natural Enemy: Mercadier
stats
Str: E
End: D
Agi: B
Mna: D
Lck: E
NP: E~A+++
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Servant Archer:
Appearance:
Slender, but athletic build. Dresses in a light green chiton dress cut short for ease of movement, her winged sandals, and white wrappings around her lower legs akin to the kind martial artists wear. She also sports anachronistic fingerless gloves and aviator glasses to add to her "daredevil image".
True Name: Hermes
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster, Assassin
Strength- C
Agility- A++
Endurance- D
Mana- B
Luck- A
NP- B+
PersonalityClass Skills:
Independent Action- A
The ability to sustain oneself in the World without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank, Archer can linger in the World for up to a week in the absense of an active contract. As a wanderer god who goes wherever she pleases, with no one home or lord to call her own, Archer naturally sports a high rank in this Skill.
Magic Resistance- C
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, spells with a chant below two verses are cancelled. Cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals.
Personal Skills:
Mana Burst (Speed)- A
As the god presiding over travel, Archer can reach speeds impossible for any mortal. Her variation of Mana Burst reflects this, along with her self-declared status as swiftest of the Olympian Gods. By pouring Mana into her legs, Archer can momentarily skyrocket her Agility. Even without her first Noble Phantasm Archer can achieve brief bursts of extreme speed akin to teleportation, making her movements hard to track even by fellow Servants.
Archer can also weaponize this Skill by carrying her overwhelming speed into a kick, for predictably devastating results. "Rider... Kiiiiiick!"
Goddess Divine Core- C/EX
Expresses one's nature as a perfected god(dess) from birth. A composite Skill that includes the effects of Divinity, repels mental interference and preserves the body from growth and change no matter how many calories are ingested. As a full Olympian god Archer would ordinarily have an EX-rank in this Skill, being impossible to summon under the Heaven's Feel system.
However, thanks to her nature as a god of transgressing boundaries Archer managed to straddle the border between a Divine and Heroic Spirit. By emphasizing her characteristic as "one who wanders in the realm of men", Archer has successfully diluted her divine nature to the point where she can be summoned as a Heroic Spirit. As a consequence, this Skill's rank has been lowered to C.
At no doubt a cheat-like effect worthy of one extolled as a god of cleverness...
However, this self-seal is highly unstable, and Archer can willingly release it to reveal her true power as a Divine Spirit. Doing so, though, will overload and irrepairably scar Archer's saint graph, killing her instantly in the aftermath. Archer would only be willing to use this trump card to defend someone she values more than her own life.
This is a digression but, a similar explanation for her sealed divinity is probably true of why Archer manifests in the form of a young girl despite being recorded as a male deity in life. Male and female is just another boundary, so it's only natural Archer could "cross" it as well. Then as for why she chose a female body, the person herself says:
"Isn't it obvious? Girls totally have more fun!"
Ah, in other words, it's just another one of her capricious whims.
Silver Tongue- B-
The talent to speak persuasively and charm others with honeyed words. As a god Archer was known for her craftiness and deceit. Her words carry a potent charm effect that make others instinctively believe even the most outrageous claims are trustworthy coming from Archer.
...At least, that's what she convinces herself. In reality Archer just babbles on quickly enough to confuse whoever she's plying her trade on and distract them while she runs away. Since Archer is convinced she's a master swindler, she manages to bluff herself into possessing this Skill at B-rank, with only a - modifier to reflect her lack of actual competence.
In the Assassin Class, that more properly portrays Hermes' role as a deceiver, this Skill would be elevated to rank A.
Psychopomp- D
One of Archer's roles was shepherding the souls of the dead to their final rest. As a Skill this allows Archer to absorb the souls of the recently dead into herself to grow stronger and/or use as a substitute source of Mana. It differs from the normal soul-eating that all Servants are capable of both in garnering a significantly greater boost, and the fact that Archer isn't limited to absorbing the souls of those she's personally killed as opposed to people who merely died in the vicinity.
The souls of Heroic Spirits normally flow directly into the Holy Grail when killed, so Archer won't be able to absorb them unless she personally ends their life. The massive amount of Mana contained in a Heroic Spirit's soul grants Archer a rank-up to all her stats if she manages to claim it. If Archer herself is killed, all absorbed souls return to their proper places.
Despite this Skill's great potential, because it conflicts with her current mentality Archer has chosen to mostly seal it. In her words "Looking after a bunch of crusty old dead people sounds so dull and gloomy! I'd much rather go out travelling and have some fun!" Truly a girl who lives as she pleases.
If summoned as Caster, the Class that emphasizes Hermes' aspect as "the sage presiding over boundaries of life and death" instead of "the carefree traveller" she would possess this Skill at B+ rank.
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So here's my second entry for the contest. I was struck by inspiration after somebody mentioned the idea of a Hermes Servant in the main thread and ended up writing this one up in a day.
I'm pretty satisfied with it all around, especially the goofy characterization I gave her. Also as usual with multiple entries, if you like both around equally bunch and are torn between them, be sure to vote for the one with the most votes currently. That way I have a greater chance of winning anything. Anyways, thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 22nd, 2023 at 05:42 PM.