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    One week remains???
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    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    if whoever's writing the jinako one doesn't have christemo as a commenter we riot
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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Do not forget the master.

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    I disappointed Raff last time, here's hoping I don't make the same mistake with whoevers prompt I took this time around.
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    ...Are you the protagonist of a YA novel? Perhaps an otome game?




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    By popular demand, we're extending the deadline for this. Does one extra week, to 3/20 11:59 PM sound fair?
    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    Yeah, sounds fair.
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    It's official. Hermes is the old man hipster of CaS.
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    ...Are you the protagonist of a YA novel? Perhaps an otome game?




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    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    Characters squarely on point. Lurid descriptions of their emotional turmoil. Appropriately visceral imagery blurring pain and pleasure together. The ouroboros imagery. Even the original setting for Roa's incarnation and how neatly the fic is placed within his cycle of rebirth. The prompt was fulfilled to a tee and I couldn't be happier. Bless you, author.

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    The Jinako one was pretty cute and even rather hot. It could have certainly gone on longer, yes, but for now I got what I wanted out of my pool.
    McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
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    It's official. Hermes is the old man hipster of CaS.
    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    ...Are you the protagonist of a YA novel? Perhaps an otome game?




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    Oh, who could have written "Cold and Lonesome", I wonder?

    Some excellent fics this time, though less for the eroticism and more for the quality of the prose.
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    I love you for Tragic Mismanagement of Time, you epic memelord.

    Cold and Lonesome is the true MVP tho
    Last edited by ItsaRandomUsername; March 21st, 2018 at 09:03 PM.
    McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
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    Age After Age Novelty: A little short, but it satisfies nonetheless. It's a pity we don't get to see more incarnations with other imaginative ways of tearing Roa to pieces and using him as a Tenga Egg, but ehh, he'll live.

    Gamer Girl//Cam Girl: Periods and commas are your friends, writer. Please, shorter sentences. The flow of your sentences is exhausting. Also no punny usernames and typo and meme-ridden embarrassing commands and comments, 0/10

    Death Eaters: >Assassin Ryougi
    >sword

    uhhhhhh

    The fic feels unbalanced for an ostensible lemon, and is also short. I can see what you're going for, but it needs more text to really bring it to life.

    Cold and Lonesome: It is rare for a fic to implement gameplay so well into the story. I felt deeply enlightened upon seeing the interplay between Meltryllis's Crime Ballet and Jeanne Alter's tactful use of Ephemeral Dream to counterattack when Meltryllis's dodges expired. Furthermore, one might wonder why Matthew never used Obscurant Wall of Chalk; however, observant readers will note the use of Jeanne Alter's Noble Phantasm, La Grondement Du Haine, and recall that it inflicts a one-time buff denial which obviously prevented Matthew from pulling an Avalon, so to speak. Finally, the climax of the fic itself is a stunning deconstruction of the Male Power Fantasy known as the menage-a-trois, or more colloquially as the threesome, examining how both men and women use each other destructively during such an act, spurning the warm reality of the people they engage for the shallow, cold, and ultimately destructive fantasies they invest in instead. Truly, this is a seminal tour de force of literary achievement. 5 stars, with a recommendation; pairs well with Brie and Panettone.

    A Tragic Mismanagement of Time: I love you. This is a sequel I desperately needed, and yet never knew I did. These memes and references please me in the portion of my brain controlled by the lizard people that rule us all. Also you even did two prompts for the price of one, you're automatically based.

    >Matthieu

    Shine on, you beautiful motherfucker.

    Untitled: You submitted, and are thus automatically better than far too many people. Better luck next time with your time management, though.

    Finally:

    RAYLEN YOU FUCKBOY WHERE'S THE JEANNE/SIEG/ASTOLFO LEWDS
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    canon finish apo vol 3

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    owned, lol
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    Voting ends in 12 hours.
    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    aw shit
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    Yo, after the contest is over can we write the unused prompts if there are any leftover?

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    All prompts are publicly available to be used and written as writers please, yes. This applied to all the previous exchange contests, too.
    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    there aren't enough gun emojis in the thousandfold trichiliocosm for this shit


    Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
    Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
    The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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