Fate: shadowed future.

[venomking]

During the twenty first sentry an unknown event caused the rapid destruction of the earth, humanity having no way to leave to a hospitable planet with the current science available at the time. In there despair they turned to the possibility of Mage craft, and with the creation of the philosophers code, a magecraft which allowed non mages to use low level magecraft.Humanity was able to advance in a way never before possible. And was able to leave beyond the stars ushering in a new age and era. In this new age of course there needed to be leadership. Thus the three families took over when the Mage society ultimate failed. The Emiya clan took up the code of justice, the tousaka with there mana plants took up as the sole count rollers of mana reserves on every planet under human countrol, and the einsberns took over all forms of emergency services, with the exception of planetary policing. This is the new age, but like all ages it must come to an end.

Chapter 1: robbery in Jasòn.
Jasòn was a not very popular planet, most of the planet was inhospitable, even with heavy attempts to terraform the planet, and even the places that were hospitable barely had enough mana to survive on. making it essentially a slums with broken down buildings, out of countrol spirits, and murder on the high rise it was no wonder no one came to visit the planet unless they had something truly neccary to accomplish. however the planet had once been a booming with prosperity as could be evidenced by the skeletons of large skyscrapers, if one were to look at them they would appear to be bending in sorrow. The dingy ancient buildings of this slum didn't appear to fair much better, with rusted pipes sticking out, only showing a glimmer of a jewel, the only proof that they had once been mana pipes. And buildings rotting and whole sections missing with light that is barely visible Comeing throu the Windows, showing that in fact that there were "residents" living in the broken down housing.
As the sun began to set three men, clocked in disrecognition magecraft, moved to what appeared to be broken down building, the building might once have been a restaurant judeging by the the tables, and menus that were barely visible from the cracked and useless Windows that gave a minor insight into the rest of the buildings in nerds. a single man stood guard outside the building, the man appeared to be 6"1 and made of muscle, and if one looked closely enough they would have noticed the gun, just sticking out the man's coat, after all it was a cold day, as it was always Cold on jasòn. And a sizzling sourounded the man proveing he was under the protection of a man field, and thus normal guns wouldn't kill the man. As the men aproched the man they each simultasnly cast enhancement magecraft on there guns, as well as silencing magecraft. There guns taking on the veiny green glow and blue arua barely visible to the eye that such a combination of magecraft often implied. Before the man could react all there shot him at once, the guns making absulitly no sounds. And in but 1 second the man slumped dead.
The three unknown men walked into the building, and the interior of the building suddenly changed. what had on the outside appeared to be a broken down, fossil that might once have been a restaurant, was now a highly advanced data center, with large mana pipes fully intact with not but a speck of rust. the jewels inside the pipes brimming and glowering a fierce emerald green, proving the building was well supplied with mana. Large screens powered by mana displayed information about the competitors for the "holy Olympic Grail war" a popular sport watched on the all the known planets. And a multitude of peaple ran around typing information into the screens, checking the mana pipes, insuring the illusion system stayed online, and other such tasks. All were to busy to notice the three men, that was until body's started dropping as the uninvited guests shot down one individual after the other, without discrimination. By the time they made it to the room were the accesse codes for the player information existed which was to be sent to the main branch of the Emiya and tousaka families, almost everyone was dead, and when they left only one survivor remained to send a distress call on the telepathic rely station.
by the end of the next day, the men had already left the planets with the codes. And as everyone was looking and trying to figure out how much had been stolen, no one noticed that ten names of contestants had been changed to ten other idviduals. And when they did relised it would be to late. As day zero of the holy Olympic Grail war had already begun. The opening ceremony was to begin.

[venomking]

I hope it's a little easier to read now.

[venomking]

chapter 1.5
a little in between chapter to explain things, before i wright chapter two. ill do one of these after each chapter.
so explanation time!

the three families
i gave a brief explanation as to their purpose in this world. so this is just a more detailed explantion of they operate
so without furthure a do
lets start with the emiya family.

the emiyas operate with the head who is trained form a young age to be that of sword, and then is implanted with avalon once they are considered capable of using UBW, the head utiyses UBW and leads the entire family. members of the family are mages and individuals chosen purely for their enforcement abilities. the lowest ranking members of the family are known as enforcers and are trained in multiple forms of combat and use time alter, a technique that was able to be learned and taught by the second head of the emiya family. the second division are known as high enforcers and through a secret method also developed by the second head of the family, are able to pull weapons out from UBW but only with authorization from the current user of UBW, they can also only pull the weapon they are chosen to be able to use. there are twelve high enforcer for every planet under the control of the three families, and are in charge of the enforcers of said planets. then are the chief enforcers who can use both time alter, and are authorized to use weapons from UBW, they also have full control of the high enforcers and enforcers of the planet under their jurisdiction and only take orders from the head quarters of the emiya family, and their is only one per planet under the three families control. those chief enforcers who are considered the best of the best, and become one of twelve guardians whose sole job is to protect the current head of the emiya family, they also give commands to the others planets,and are the only people other then the head of the family who can authorize the arrest of a member of the three families, they only take orders from the head and the only person with more power then them is the head of the family. and of course last but not least is the head of the family, the head of the of the family and can use fully UBW, and are the only individuals other then a select few who are given training and authorization to fight a servant level threat, thus one of their duties is to monitor the holy olympic grail(more on that in chapter two)
they are also also able to use double accel along with the skills and abilities passed on from the the original head of the family emiya shirou(the debate was head in the family once weather or not shirou is actually the first head of the family but very people even know of the existence of kiritsugu emiya. so the debates end with the conclusion that shirou is the first head of the family) making them near impossible for a normal human to beat. they are also the only member of the three family, able to authorize the execution of other members, as well as veto laws created by the three families, as well as change established laws.

the second family is the tousakas. responsible for distribution of mana through the process developed by the tousakas called Jewel resounouce, which allows mana to be tranported acrooss planents, as well the "Mana pumps" which use jewels to absorb mana from the planet, as mana is necessary for a planet to even be survivable ins some cases they can turn a planet into a slums, or just shut mana off completely, making it almost impossible for large scale rebelions, those that are able to continually exist are dealt with by teh emiya family of course. of course in this world this means that uneven distribution of mana across the planets has occurred. leading to great disdain for this particular family exist a vast majority of the planets under the three families control.

the third family is the einseberns, teh sole keepers of alchemic knowledge and healing magecraft, thus are essentially of medicine as most viruses and illnesses have become magic based, and all mundane viruses can only be healed with eirnsbern magecraft, with there alchemic knoledge they are also responsible for fire control, terrformation, medicine. all hospitals are eisnbern based, and as the sole family who has the knowledge necessary for a holy grail war, the holy olympic grail war is part of their responsibility.

so yea ill start working on the next chapter.