Fate/Grand Order -Epic of Remnant- Showdown with the Seven Swordmaster Heroic Spirits

[mewarmo990]

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Chapter 5: Dark Dreams (2)
They hear a sound. The pot of hell opens up.

Ritsuka: Musashi-chan?

Ritsuka: Could that be Inshun?
Musashi: No...

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Musashi: He's up against four skilled opponents with those abnormal demonic auras... Even Inshun-dono
Musashi: wouldn't find it easy to escape.

Musashi: He's probably...

Tasuke: Ooh. Hic. Ooh.

Ritsuka: Okay. Right now we just need to get away from here.
Musashi: Yeah.

Ritsuka: We should get O'Nui-chan and her brother home as soon as possible-

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Ritsuka: Inshun...?
Nui: Oh! Master monk!

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Inshun?: OOOOOH!

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Ritsuka: Hyah!

Ritsuka: H-How!? Why? Musashi-chan!
Ritsuka: Inshun is-

Musashi: You have to be kidding me...
Musashi: The monk would have no problem blocking my sword! So why...

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Inshun?: HAHAHAHAHA

Ritsuka: Huh?

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Musashi: Wha-

Inshun?: Do you think you've won just because I lost my head?
Inshun?: No. NO. NO!!!

Inshun?: My Pure Name...

Inshun?: ...is Lancer Purgatorio!
Purgatorio: An invincible soldier of the Swordmaster Heroic Spirits, sunk low to wield a blade of complete extermination!

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Ritsuka: No...

Ritsuka: (The Swordmaster Heroic Spirits did something to him!)

Ritsuka: (Because he tried to protect us!)

Musashi: So, you weren't trying out your blade, but your immortality...

Musashi: You've underestimated me, spear-swinging thug!

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Inshun: Oh? Nice trick.

Musashi: Ritsuka!

Ritsuka: Musashi-chan!

Ritsuka: Let's move!

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Ritsuka: He looks the same, but...
Ritsuka: But... that isn't Inshun!

Purgatorio: Heh heh heh... Hahahaha!

Purgatorio: I know your scent now! Don't think you can escape, little girls!

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Musashi: There's a village out here, too...

Ritsuka: It's quiet. Maybe everyone's sleeping.
Nui: Grandpa's house is past the village.

Nui: B-But, we have to tell them that something scary is coming.
Ritsuka: Yeah, we should.

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Ritsuka: Wh-What's wrong!?
Musashi: We can't! It's too late!

Musashi: So this is a Servant... He isn't just fast.
Musashi: Even his senses are inhumanly sharp!

Musashi: It's all or nothing.
Musashi: We have to hide and hope he passes us by!

Ritsuka: N-No! We have to at least let the villagers-

Ritsuka: *gasp*

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Nui: O-Onee-cha...

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Purgatorio: If you can hear me, then sear these words into your mind.

Purgatorio: Thanks to you, my spear is nicely whetted.
Purgatorio: I could ask for no greater refreshment.

Purgatorio: You have my gratitude.

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Musashi: I'm sorry I had to put you through that, Ritsuka.

Musashi: (I know you wanted to run out there and help them.)

Musashi: (But... That's not something we can afford to do.)

Musashi: As I am now,
Musashi: I can't kill Inshun-dono.

Lower left: The Niten Ichiryu fails to cut down a demon!

Lower right: To Be Continued

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Nui: Oh, I can see it!

Text: The party escapes from hell and arrives at a hermitage. Who is waiting for them there?
Nui: It's Grandpa's house!
Chapter 6: The First Showdown (1)

Ritsuka: Thank goodness that we manageed to get here in one piece.
Nui: Just a moment!
Nui: I'll go fetch some water!

Original work by TYPE-MOON
Comic by Wataru Rei

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Ritsuka: Is that...
Ritsuka: a ward?

Ritsuka: I can feel magical energy.
Musashi: Weird... My body felt a little lighter as soon as I stepped through it.

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Ritsuka: There must be something incredible about this place.

Musashi: Pretty sketchy house, if you ask me.

Ritsuka: I wonder what the old man is like.

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Nui: Here's some water, Onee-chan.
Ritsuka: Thanks.
Nui: I'll take Tasuke now.

Grandpa: Don't put your grubby hands
Grandpa: on someone else's work.

Grandpa: Good grief.
Grandpa: The villagers don't come up here often,

Grandpa: so I was wondering what all the fuss was. I see a woman samurai and a woman in strange clothes.

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Grandpa: This is a smithy, nothing more.
Grandpa: What do you think you're doing here!?

Nui: Oh, Grandpa!
Nui: We're home!

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Ritsuka/Musashi: Grand-!?!?
Grandpa: Yeah, that's me. What's with the weird looks?

Nui: Don't scare them, Grandpa! They're my guests.
Grandpa: What? You should have said so sooner.

Musashi: He looks pretty young to be a grandfather.
Musashi: And he doesn't feel like an ordinary man to me...
Ritsuka: Yeah...

Ritsuka:: But... why...

Ritsuka: Do I feel like I've seen him somewhere before?
Grandpa: In that case,
Grandpa: let me thank you.

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Grandpa: Just as I thought the kids were late getting back, the noon day suddenly turned to night.
Grandpa: Thank you for bringing them home.

Ritsuka: Not at all!
Ritsuka: We were just-

Grandpa: But first, identify yourselves.

Grandpa: Tell me who you are and where you're from, and don't bother leaving out the details.
Grandpa: That's my first condition if you're to be our guests.

Grandpa: I won't let you in this house until I know you're not a demon or a monster, even if we do owe you a debt.

Musashi: You're right...

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Musashi: Then...
Musashi: let me start by apologizing.

Musashi: I thought we shook him off back there,
Musashi: but it appears I was too naive.

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Musashi: Ugh!
Musashi: Gah!

Ritsuka: In-

Ritsuka: Inshun!

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Purgatorio: Hahahahaha! You reek...
Purgatorio: You reek of life!

Purgatorio: I was wondering where you scurried off to.
Purgatorio: But to think...

Purgatorio: You had more friends.

Purgatorio: No matter who you are, this jūmonji spear will end you!

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Nui: Run, Grandp-

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Grandpa: You're one mouthy monk.

Musashi: With... one hand...

Musashi: That much power from a single sword swing!?
Musashi: That's impossible, even if the sword is a masterwork! Just who is he!?

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Ritsuka: Oh, no!
Grandpa: Tch.

Grandpa: Another failure. Though,
Grandpa: I suppose I'm not dreaming after all.

Purgatorio: Hahaha. You can't cut this corpse
Purgatorio: with so dull a blow.

Purgatorio: I am like a machine, without flesh or blood.
Purgatorio: You will never reach my spiritual core, no matter what means you try!

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Grandpa: So, an undying monster.
Grandpa: Way to bring something horrible to my doorstep!
Ritsuka: (Inshun...)

Purgatorio: Now I will kill you! I will butcher all that live! A village or two are not nearly enough.
Purgatorio: I will turn the entire world into a grave!

Ritsuka: (You really are gone...)

Purgatorio: If you want to stop me, then slay me!
Purgatorio: Destroy me, and leave not a single speck! For even a scrap of my flesh will bring death to all!

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Ritsuka: (We're never going to see you again, are we?)

Musashi: Then let us fight, "Purgatorio."

Musashi: Prepare yourself.
Musashi: If you want us to stand up to you, with our lives on the line,

Musashi: in a fight to the death, then I'll cut you down right here!

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Musashi: Ritsuka!

Ritsuka: Can we win?
Musashi: Yeah.
Musashi: It won't go like it did last time!

Musashi: I know it's not much of a plan... but lend me your strength!

Ritsuka: Of course.

Musashi: Hey,
Musashi: Grandpa!

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Musashi: I'm going to borrow this masterpiece for a swing or two.

Grandpa: Wha-
Grandpa: You can't!

Grandpa: Anything but that sword!

Nui: G-Grandpa!?
Grandpa: (That's no ordinary sword.)

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Grandpa: (No living creature should touch it.)
Grandpa: (It's in a truly demonic realm!)

Purgatorio: I like your spirit.
Purgatorio: Prepare to die, Miyamoto Musashi.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Weeeeeww MEEWWW

[Infigar]

Not for commercial reuse.

Read it here: https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/ep...08156642978280

Chapter 1.

It's honestly magical what you can do with judicious application of clone and spot healing.
Next chapter in probably a week, providing I don't get too sidetracked.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Chapter 1.

It's honestly magical what you can do with judicious application of clone and spot healing.
Next chapter in probably a week, providing I don't get too sidetracked.

But uh Infigar, better you do the 5th chapter first since chapter 1-4 has been done in reddit

[Infigar]

Chapter 5: Dark Dreams (2)

Ask and ye shall receive.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Yyeeeessss!! Thaanks!!

- - - Updated - - -

Infigar, sorry but there's a missing part where Musashi slash Purgatorio's eyes

[mewarmo990]

Nice work!!! I'll proofread it later.

[mewarmo990]

Chapter 1.

It's honestly magical what you can do with judicious application of clone and spot healing.
Next chapter in probably a week, providing I don't get too sidetracked.

Chapter 1 looks very well done! omg did you handwrite that one part!? Please be my partner.

Although, I'd prefer it if you edited the title page on page 14 to use my translation of the title. I'm not too big a fan of what Aniplex went with, especially the main title line because there's a part of the story it doesn't fit with.

p14
Variant Singularity III -- A Stage of Corpse Hills and Bloody Rivers -- Shimousanokuni
Showdown with the Seven Swordmaster Heroic Spirits

Sorry about the length of that top subtitle.

On page 3, please have Old Musashi say "cough cough" in the bottom right panel.

On page 49, please change "bad feeling" to "ill feeling"

On page 59, please change "aim for" to "seek"

The last page should have "To Be Continued" at the bottom right in place of 続

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And for chapter 5, pages 9 through 12 are missing.

So far I've declined to translate sound effects at times but if I know someone is going to do a good job, I might put more detail into it going forward (and retroactively)

[Infigar]

Yyeeeessss!! Thaanks!!

- - - Updated - - -

Infigar, sorry but there's a missing part where Musashi slash Purgatorio's eyes

Sorry, should be fixed now.

Chapter 1 looks very well done! omg did you handwrite that one part!? Please be my partner.

Although, I'd prefer it if you edited the title page on page 14 to use my translation of the title. I'm not too big a fan of what Aniplex went with, especially the main title line because there's a part of the story it doesn't fit with.

p14
Variant Singularity III -- A Stage of Corpse Hills and Bloody Rivers -- Shimousanokuni
Showdown with the Seven Swordmaster Heroic Spirits

Sorry about the length of that top subtitle.

On page 3, please have Old Musashi say "cough cough" in the bottom right panel.

On page 49, please change "bad feeling" to "ill feeling"

On page 59, please change "aim for" to "seek"

The last page should have "To Be Continued" at the bottom right in place of 続

---

And for chapter 5, pages 9 through 12 are missing.

So far I've declined to translate sound effects at times but if I know someone is going to do a good job, I might put more detail into it going forward (and retroactively)

Yeah, most if not all of the sound effects are handwritten.

As for the subtitle, I did a bit of digging around on jisho and the wiki and eventually just used what the FGO wiki had, but I didn't really like it. Thanks for the translation.
It should all be fixed now.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Yoow nice!

[Infigar]

Not for commercial reuse. Read it here: https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/ep...08156642978316

As promised, chapter 2.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

You rock!

[mewarmo990]

ch1 and ch5 fixes look good. I feel comfortable sharing them on reddit now.

[mewarmo990]

Just a note that I'm going to be traveling when the next chapter releases, so I probably won't be able to update until early May.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Aaawwww... Mewwww

[Infigar]

Chapter 3: Devils and Demons (2)

Chapter 3.

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Nice, more version, better. By the way, I see chapter 3 is not free anymore in the website, what happen?

[Lobo]

Nice, more version, better. By the way, I see chapter 3 is not free anymore in the website, what happen?

Nothing really, is standart commercial practice, at least on jp online mangas, after a while the free chapters are put on a prize again to read, only the first couple chapters are left for free to lure new readers. Granted, the incentive to do it now may also be related with the announcement of the incoming release of the first volume

[Wandering Swordwoman]

Hey Mew, chapter 7 is out for free