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    Red Glass Moon

    0 | Gnosis


    ***


    When I was a child, I was approached by God.

    God asked of my wish.

    I smiled, for I knew the answer.

    ”To become better.”
    A simple wish.


    ”To become perfect.”
    An innocent wish.


    ”To become like you.”
    A pure wish.


    It was laudable, for He smiled.


    Know the cruelty to deepen ignorance. People’s malignance is here.

    It was pitiful, for He cried.

    Know the penance to absolve ignorance. People’s kindness is here.

    However, my wish was not granted.

    He merely departed, never to be seen again.

    I wonder, was my answer wrong?

    No day has passed where I do not fear that prospect.
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    ***


    1901, off the coast of the Bay of Riga- Early Morning


    My own abilities may be inadequate for what’s to come. The thought is certainly concerning.

    Although, that won’t matter if I don’t find the damned place. Come now, Rengard, you can’t be so incompetent that you don’t even manage to find his workshop.

    “Maybe around here?”

    Ah, how embarrassing. I’ve been doing this for so long that I’m even speaking to myself now. I can only hope I’m not the last one to arrive; I can already imagine the sort of reception I’d receive, if all of the others made it there before me.

    Perhaps this is a sort of test he put together? “If you cannot find it, you do not deserve to attend”- something in that vein?

    ...no, no, I know full well that a thought like that didn’t even cross his mind. Making the directions as vague as he did is no doubt just the result of him not considering that someone could ever become lost en route. It is to be expected, I suppose. An already-perfected genius such as him would never consider the plight of other minds.

    “Why did I not think to pack for the trip properly-”

    And there comes that talking-to-oneself again. I need to stop this, or it’ll become a nasty habit. You hear about those old stuffy aristocrats who monologue to themselves aloud about all sorts of nonsense. I refuse to become like that- my monologues must remain either silent or directed towards others.

    Stil, it’s a valid point. I really should have thought to prepare for the trip better. Hunger is already gnawing at me, even if it’s not at the point of genuine need yet. In the worst case scenario, I’ll have to pop back to the nearest town for that, but then I’ll be all-but-guaranteed to be the last one present. Where is the nearest town, anyway?

    ...ah well. I may be a bit frustrated by my own incompetence, but I can’t deny that I’m having some level of fun with this. If I compare this to working on my own projects some days ago, wandering this coastline searching for an invisible castle is honestly a lovely break from the monotony. And that’s without even considering what this little gathering is for. If my guess is correct, then-

    My thoughts grind to a screeching halt, feet rooting in place and parasol stopping mid-twirl as I feel the paper invitation in my pocket come to life. A grin plays at the edges of my lips, drawing it out with my free hand and holding it aloft.

    The air changes. Space bends. An invisible hole in the world opens in front of me. The execution is every bit as crisp as I would expect; creating a true concealment boundary is meant to be impossible, a self-defeating premise, but of course one who has attained perfection could manage that as easily as breathing.

    “Ha, about time.”

    It’s childish, I admit, but I feel oddly satisfied at solving that most basic puzzle of finding the place. How embarrassing. I surely can’t show such a demeanor in front of the others. A lie about being too wrapped up in my research to even notice the invitation for a few days should do the job for my lateness.

    I step forwards through that invisible door, and into the "world" of the workshop. I’ve never seen the genuine article myself, but my master’s past relationships with that ever-moving tomb is certainly at the root of many design decisions he has pursued here. I suppose even someone of his caliber has some shreds of sentimentality- or maybe it was simply the strongest warding he could muster. Either or, really.

    Shoving the letter of invitation back into my pocket, I examine the sight before me. It doesn’t seem to have changed much since my last visit. While it is officially called a castle, the workshop is more of a ‘manor’, hardly anything as grandiose as what its owner’s name ought to command. A simple little two-story thing, one that would certainly draw attention in a middle-class neighborhood, but little else. Those who do not know him may think this is due to his own modesty. Those who are familiar with him know that this is merely due to concerns of efficiency.

    “Sir Rengard Schvieglot, I presume?”

    When I approach the front door, I find it opening before I’ve even rapped my knuckles on it, a suited gentleman standing to meet me, whom even I have to crane my head up to look at. He drops into a brief bow, before stepping back to allow me access inside.

    I take the gesture in stride, offering a slight nod, even as I wrack my brain for if I’ve seen this man before. Surely not, I’d have remembered if someone his height was employed here. “Yes. I don’t believe we’ve met, Mr.…?”

    “Alan Giacosa. And we have not, I only entered the lord’s employ at the turn of the century.”

    Ah, that would explain it. He’s barely even been working for my master for a year, then, but he certainly seems competent. His movements are fluid, his tone is level, and his appearance is meticulously groomed. The very ideal of a butler, plucked straight from the Pleroma. Or, at least, that’s my first impression.

    When I examine him a bit further, though, I’m more than a little surprised- it’s clear that, while this man is a practitioner of magecraft, that is all. He lacks the weight, the presence that I’ve seen in my master’s previous butlers. Such an unremarkable status is itself remarkable- why was he selected, I wonder?

    “I see. Is my master present?”

    “Of course, sir. He is in the salon. Madam vor Enkicen, Sir Pyrisius, and Madam Belvarien have also arrived, at the current time.”

    I just barely manage to avoid letting out the sigh of relief that bubbles up in my throat. Oi, oi, wait- is the butler smirking?

    ...regardless. Three out of the other four are here, then. Well, that's about as expected, honestly- I took a while to make it. At least I'm not the last one. If I'd been beaten here by him, I'd be embarrassed to even show my face.

    Well, it wouldn’t be fitting if I didn’t greet my master first. I give Alan a simple nod of acknowledgement as he takes my parasol, stepping past him and the staircase on my left to enter the foyer proper, then continuing on a bit further until it opens out into the grand salon. As with the outside, the inside doesn’t seem to have changed much, but I know that’s surely only on first glance. My master’s obsession runs deeper and stronger than mine, to the point where I’d be shocked if this place hadn’t been redesigned from the ground-up on the magical level.

    “Ah, Ren. Lovely that you could make it. The others had placed wagers on whether or not you would make it before Jack, you know.”

    The figure I’d been awaiting enters my field of view as I step into the salon, standing from his seat and moving to greet me. A blue-steel shaven visage paints an aura of cleanliness that is utterly shattered by the ill-kept shock of silver hair atop his head. His eyes glint with a light equal parts manic and friendly. It’s not difficult to picture that face driving a knife into you without shifting a hair.

    I feel my pulse quicken for a split second from sheer impulse, before smoothing over that brief lapse in composure with a halfway-exasperated sigh. He was still calling me by that nickname- I consider mentioning that I asked him to stop doing that, but he’d probably just laugh it off. “And which of us did you put your wager on?”

    “Come now, Ren. It’s as I always say: never bet against the house.” Saying such a ridiculous thing, he breaks out into coy laughter.

    To me, this man is my master, the Heaven’s Tuner, Cerridwen Valdyrius. A monstrous genius who is responsible for uplifting me into the being I am today.

    Of course, that is merely what he is to me. To the world, he carries a different name.

    Dead Apostle Ancestor number twelve, the budding calamity who has pledged to create an eternal red moon.


    ***


    I look opposite the man who sired me some thousand years ago. Actually standing here, now, I feel that anticipation welling in my gut come to a boil. Before I even realize it, I’ve begun speaking.

    “It’s finally happened, hasn’t it? The Rose Prophe-”

    “-All in due time, Ren.”

    With a knowing smile, Cerridwen cuts off my inquiry, leaving me to falter back. I silently reprimand myself for that childish display, hand balling into a lightly-clenched fist at my side.

    Rose Prophecy, what I had theorized as the reason behind this gathering. Any Dead Apostle of sufficient rank ought to know that name. It refers to a particular figure among the Dead Apostle Ancestors, a priestess with the gift of foresight. Seeing the approaching death of a Dead Apostle Ancestor, it is said that she will appear before them, announcing the end of their life so that they may prepare a successor to take their position.

    “There’s no need to be so focused on business, Ren. We can discuss why I’ve called you all here tonight at dinner. For now, come, sit. It’s been too long since we’ve had a face-to-face chat; I’d love to hear about your progress in the past century.” He returns to his seat as he speaks, gesturing to the nearest chair with all of the lackadaisical calmness I’ve come to expect of him.

    ...That line of conversation seems to have been harshly snuffed out. Given the grin on his face, I can only imagine I’ve hit the nail on the head, but that might just be wishful thinking. I hesitate for a moment at his offer, a flicker of unease crossing my face, but regardless, I take a seat opposite him.

    “Is that really wise? Roose, Hela, and Elana are all present- I would rather not show off my magecraft where they could observe.”

    I feel this is a valid concern. Even sharing my research with Cerridwen would be a questionable choice, if he wasn’t appropriately trustworthy. As the man who has helped me hone my craft over a millennium, I have little issue with doing so for him, but with my fellow apprentices present, I can only feel unease, even with those who I am on good terms with.

    ...especially since, if the Rose Prophecy has been made, those others are not my allies, but my competitors.

    Of course, as if he’d been waiting for me to say that, my master waves a hand dismissively. “Don’t be so paranoid, Ren. Each room is very well-separated. Magical energy, sound, nothing will be leaking out from here to anywhere outside of the salon.”

    And just like that, my excuse is snuffed out. That must be one of the updates he’s made since I was here last. If it was another topic, perhaps I’d have room for negotiation, but in questioning the efficacy of such a basic class of Bounded Field in the workshop of their foremost expert? I’d have better luck inviting a Burial Agent out for tea.

    I look to his expectant gaze and let out a resigned sigh. There’s no helping it, then. My eyes lid shut, the unspoken sound of a resonant hymn filling up my mind. My Magic Circuits awaken- there is pain, but it is a pain that I grew used to within my first decades, a glorious pain filled with life.

    My lips part, and the first note tolls. Peaceful and serene, sweeping aside all in its construction.

    I drink of the workshop’s magical energy, and the second note tolls. Harsh and keening, crashing against all in its derision.

    The third. The fourth. The fifth. Spaces shakes under the weight as more voices coalesce in the air and join my own, as though tens of others stand at my side, singing in unison. My face tightens in concentration as ten voices becomes twenty, as twenty becomes one hundred.

    Something 'other' comes into being- a shape that cannot be seen by human eyes, lurking beyond the thin glass of the world. A nightmarish weight presses down upon the surroundings with its arrival. An eyeless gaze is cast upon the man before me.

    There is disgust in its gaze. There is enmity in its gaze. There is love in its gaze.

    This is my art. This is my Heavenly Choir of Fools.

    A noise like shattering glass. The weight lifts, the voices are snuffed out, the unseeable shape departs. It takes a moment before I realize what had happened, that the workshop’s magical energy had been cut off from me without warning, and so my miracle was undone. My own lips close, as do my Magic Circuits.

    Ordinarily, I might feel some pride at the fact that the choir had managed to affect my master. Not significantly, but it is not something that even he can brush off so casually. However, in this moment I feel nothing of the sort, because, after all-

    “...it’s the same. Nothing’s changed from last time.”

    -My master is now aware of my acute failure.

    He looks at me not with anger, but with confusion. I look at him not with outrage, but with shame. That he cannot understand why my research has not progressed in the past century is perhaps the most painful thing, for it makes me all too aware of the difference between us.

    I have always believed that, so long as you have the obsession to continue, it is impossible to hit a dead end in the research of magecraft. Indeed, my own life is something of a testament to that. I do not consider myself especially naturally gifted, but I have nonetheless become quite the capable magus over the years, matching the raw talent of my fellow apprentices. We all pursue “perfection”, and in that pursuit, we amass power and edge closer to that goal.

    However, obsession is not an endless wellspring; if drawn from too deeply over too long a window, it will begin to run dry. This has been my own personal stumbling block. My own research has slowed to a crawl, not because my ability has hit a wall, but because I simply find it difficult to motivate myself nowadays.

    Only in the past century have I understood the
    blessing
    curse
    named immortality. Even if the body endures, the mind will surely grow stale.

    “I’ve hit a roadblock in actually sealing the concepts from the Pleroma. Creating a dynamic vessel like that has proven harder than I anticipated.”

    I manage to form some semblance of an excuse, studded with the specks of truth. The one before me is a perfected genius, one with an obsession that runs deeper and stronger than my own, so it is only natural that he is confused. For someone such as him, to be unable to move forwards is unthinkable. I can only wonder what he thinks of me, now that he knows.

    That is precisely why I feel equal parts anticipation and nervousness towards this gathering. Anticipation because, if it is for what I think it may be for, it is a momentous occasion that should very well shatter my monotony. Nervousness because, if it is for what I think it may be for, my own capabilities may simply not be up to snuff.

    Even my current monotony is preferable to failure.

    “I see. Well...keep at it. I’m sure you’ll surmount that issue, given enough time.” That lukewarm response of his nearly makes me flinch back in response. His previous eagerness and pride has been tossed to the side- I daresay that he’s still wondering how a failure as significant as this is even possible.

    How ridiculous is this? I understand the problem, I understand the steps needed to address it, and I have the aptitude to do so. With the proper time and attention, this theory of mine could reach perfection, I am sure of it.

    So then, why can I not take those steps forward? Why am I content to waste my time in a barely-living stupor? Why is my own research, the passion I have devoted centuries to, no longer interesting?

    ...the mood has died. Neither Cerridwen nor I desire to speak any further- that is only natural.

    “...where can I find my room?”

    “The second floor, first door on the right.”


    ***


    With conversation having been snuffed out, there’s little I can do beyond take my leave. As I mull over my own failure, my thoughts drift back to the one thing I’ve seen that might break the monotony of my life.

    For apprentices of the Ancestors, the Rose Prophecy’s edict is an event that is eagerly awaited. Even encased in a body of dead flesh, my stilled blood boils at the thought. Yes, the thought that my master may not be long for this world is sorrowing at some level, but the excitement certainly outweighs the concern. The opportunity to join that group of twenty-seven, the chance to become one of the greats standing atop the world, could perhaps be called a ‘dream’ for many of us.

    At the same time, fitting for a title with that weight behind it, to become an Ancestor is not a simple matter. I may be a candidate for the title of my master’s successor, but there are four others with that same claim.

    As if to validate that theory of mine, Mystic Locks are sealed to the doors of each room- a security measure to keep us from making attempts on one another while alone, I presume, which will likely be locked in the hours after our dinner. I would not think to kill any of the others, but I must admit the temptation is there, if the time of the Rose Prophecy has come.

    Though, is that really the solution? Is becoming one of the twenty-seven a cure? Certainly, it would be for a time, but the underlying problem-

    ...I’m getting ahead of myself, regardless. For, stepping through the open door as though he owns the place, is a man I am all-too familiar with.

    “Rengard.”

    Extending a hand towards me is Roose Pyrisius, my fellow apprentice. I permit myself a smile, shaking the offered hand.

    “Roose. I was wondering where you were.”

    I’m unsure if he’s noticed, but I am markedly tenser around him than usual. The reason is simple: he is my greatest competition. If the other apprentices were asked who the most likely to succeed our master was, their answers would all surely be Roose.

    ...as the decision for successor may be made soon, it is difficult for me to be as lax around him as I ordinarily am.

    “I could say the same for you. You know we had a wager on if you’d be the last one here or not? I’ll have to collect my winnings.” A well-controlled laugh slips out of him as his hand pulls back, and I try to mimic it in kind. That seems to be what makes him notice that I’m a touch on-edge. Ah, stupid, stupid-

    “Well, you should split those winnings with me. I certainly could have been lazier in making it here.” I blurt out the comment before he has a chance to question my current state.

    Seeming to catch the hint, his raised eyebrow falls back down, another laugh slipping out of him. “Is that what you’ve decided to call it? Please, that might fool Elana and Hela, maybe even the master-” His face tightens for a moment. “-but, you and I both know you got yourself lost.”

    I raise my hands up in mock surrender, finally becoming a bit more lax. “I didn’t know you’d progressed that far already. What concept have you placed into your eyes, to get that level of insigh-”

    “As if I need magecraft to tell when you’re trying to play coy.” A punch to my arm cuts me off. I have to put in some effort to not genuinely flinch from the blow- he’s much stronger than last time. His research must be coming along well, then. I wonder what stage he’s reached? “Anyone who’s spent more than an hour with you can see right through you. You’re lucky the master’s as socially braindead as you are, or he’d have seen right through it too.”

    Me? Socially braindead? How absurd. I...hm.

    Actually, Roose may have a point. I won’t be admitting that, of course, but it’s something to keep in mind. Besides, before I even have a chance to comment on such, he’s started speaking up again. “But enough talk about business. What have you been up to? The past few decades treated you well?”

    I let out a silent sigh of relief. Yes, that’s perfect. Talking about business is the last thing I want- Roose also finding out about my lack of progress would hardly be ideal.

    ...though, wait a minute.

    What have I been up to?

    Surely ‘sleeping’ isn’t a suitable answer, but really, that’s largely been all. Damn it all. Come now, Rengard, think of something.

    “I’ve been...involving myself with women more heavily.”

    “...”

    “...”

    What sort of answer is that, you buffoon?! He’ll see through that in an instant! Have you even spoken to someone in an amorous context since the Renaissance era?!

    Thankfully, before he has to answer that, salvation comes in the form of an interruption.

    Unfortunately, the nature of that interruption is...

    “Oh! Congratulations, Renny! What’s she like? Where’d you meet her? Is she still alive?”

    ...ah, I feel a migraine coming on.

    While Roose and I have been distracted with our conversation, a third-party has snuck into the fray, and announced his presence while throwing his arms around my shoulders from behind. I turn my head to face him as his own head props down on my shoulder, leveling the most deadpan glare I can muster.

    “Jack, hello.”

    This would be Jack.

    That is all, just “Jack”. If he has another name, neither I nor the others are aware of it.

    I step away from him, putting some distance between the two of us, but as if oblivious to the very concept of personal space, he follows close behind. A lazy smile is splayed across his face, which only serves to further the oncoming migraine that his presence has brought.

    “Oh, Roose is here too! How’ve you been, how’ve you been?” I can only let out a silent sigh of relief as Jack detaches himself from me and moves to the other target, who shoots me a look as if to ask for help, as expected. For me, the issue is merely that I find Jack tiresome to deal with. For Roose, he and Jack are the exact opposite kind of genius, the methodical planner and the instinct-driven savant. It’s only natural he carries some level of disdain.

    Of course, typical to Jack’s fashion, he doesn’t seem to have noticed this even once in any of the times they’ve spoken.

    “Wooow, you’re a lot sturdier than last time, huh, Roose? Someone’s been keeping their genes refreshed! What did you replace your muscles with, something to borrow the concept of a gravitational constant? You’ve gotta be careful with that! I hear there’s some science-types hard at work on the physics side, new breakthroughs every day! Right, Renny?”

    He tries to hide it, but I notice the surprise that flashes across Roose’s face from that remark, clear as day. Jack wasn’t too far off the mark, in that case.

    Ah, I’m tempted to turn and make an escape, but it’s too late for that, at this point. An exasperated sigh heaves out of me as I rock back on my heels. “Jack, I am sure that Roose is closely monitoring any degradation of mystery occurring around his area of study. You are coming across as patronizing.”

    The fact that he seems so genuinely surprised by me saying that is perhaps the worst part of his response. I only say ‘perhaps’ because his attention is now squarely on me.

    “You mean it?! Oh, wow, sorry Roose! My bad, my bad, no talking about muscles.” This buffoon hasn’t even grasped what I was saying, was he? “Well, what about you then, Renny? How’re these women? How’s your research? You still working on that Church Choir-”

    “-Heavenly Choir of Fools.”

    “-Yeah, that! Gonna take that as a yes!” His increasingly-grating voice chimes without a care in the world as he moves back towards me, throwing an arm around my shoulder. If it was not for the fact that we were in my master’s workshop, I would be scheming on how to attack him without killing myself in the process. “But that’s great! It’s a really cool idea, you know! Oh, actually, so I think I’ve finally cracked the code on growing the vessel and what’s inside of it! You know how I was having a hard time with that, right?”

    I manage to bite back the response that bubbles up in my throat, deriding him for how easily he’s offered information on his magecraft up, and attempt to smile. I feel my lips twitch. It is not going well. “I do recall something along those lines, yes. A difficulty in matching the vessel’s growth to the stored substance, correct?”

    The smile he gives in response is nothing short of blinding. “Right, exactly! Sometimes the bean would grow too quickly and you get something empty, but sometimes the stuff inside’d grow too quickly and the bean would explode, so then I started thinking-”

    And so begins the ordeal known as ‘conversation with Jack’. Roose and I, eternal allies against his inanity, silently agree to rotate out who is speaking to the lunatic, until eventually he leaves us.

    Unfortunately, Jack seems to have far more energy that we’d anticipated. How long are we talking to him for, trapped in this damnable custom? An hour? Five? The majority of it is spent with Jack eagerly describing in vague platitudes his recent research endeavors. How is he able to keep up this level of enthusiasm? I’ve never known him to be disinterested in anything in the several centuries I’ve known the idiot. It’s absolutely, insurmountable grating.

    It’s not until a new voice cuts into our conversation that I practically collapse with relief.

    “Sirs, tonight’s dinner has been prepared. The master awaits you downstairs.”

    The butler- Alan, if I recall correctly- has barely even gotten the words out before Roose and I have made our departure. To anyone but Jack, this would clearly appear as fleeing, but to Jack himself…

    “Oh, a race? Let’s do it!”

    -Really, how does my master put up with this one?!


    ***


    By the time the three of us have arrived in the dining hall, my master and the other two of my fellow apprentices have already made it there. I suppose that’s to be expected- they didn’t have to be weighed down by Jack. Whatever it was that they were discussing comes to an end with our arrival, though.

    “Rengard, Jack, lovely to see the two of you again.” Ah, Elana, always a delight.

    “Took the two of you long enough, we’ve been waiting.” Ah Hela, always...Hela.

    Of course, the reception we face isn’t surprising in the slightest, nor is my response. A cordial smile to Elana, a frustrated glare at Hela. Jack, meanwhile, practically bounds forwards them, sweeping them up into enthusiastic hugs. Roose and I take the opening to move to sit down at the table, as does Cerridwen himself.

    As tempting as it is to wish that those two were subjected to the same torment as Roose and I, I’m frankly starved. My master must have the same idea, as within the minute, whatever banal thing Jack was yammering on about is cut off, the other three moving to take their seats as well. Elena’s expression doesn’t seem to have changed even slightly- as expected of her. Hela, meanwhile, is jeering at Roose and I with a look that could kill.

    ...she hasn’t modified her Mystic Eyes to be able to do that, has she?

    “Well, thank you all for attending today. I realize this was somewhat last-second, but I do appreciate you taking time out of your schedules.” Cutting off my thoughts, my master speaks up, glancing around the table as he does. I feel my pulse quicken, is he about to- “We will discuss the reason for this meeting later on, for now, please enjoy the food.”

    Tch.

    As if on cue, Alan emerges from the kitchen, trays balanced on one another with just the sort of practiced ease I’d expect from one of my master’s butlers. Actually- wait a moment- just how did he make it to the kitchen without me noticing? Did I simply miss him?

    Acknowledging that this matter will nag on me for the next week if I do not receive an answer, I turn my attention to the tray set down before me. Some sort of salad with...is that duck? I confess that I’m not the most capable in the culinary arts. I hardly think that’s out of the ordinary for Dead Apostles.

    Though, I quirk an eyebrow up. The food looks well-prepared, certainly, but there doesn’t seem to be a trace of blood in it. Has Cerridwen forgotten such a basic thing? If I don’t find something to eat within the next few hours, there will be...problems.

    “Ah, yes, I must give credit where credit is due. Jack, thank you for your assistance in making tonight’s food.”

    ...eh?

    Did I hear that correctly? Jack assisted in the cooking? No, no, setting aside how idiotic letting him near a stovetop is, when did he do that? He could only have been here for just a few minutes at most before he brought Roose and I into that hellscape of a conversation. It seems I’m not the only one with these thoughts- each of the other apprentices has now turned to face Jack, who is smiling without a care in the world. Fishing around in his pockets, he draws out something- a small bean.

    “No problem, chief! Glad you asked me to bring them, since they mean we can actually eat!”



    ...he’s not going to elaborate on that, really? Of all the things to not elaborate on, this is the one that he decides isn’t worth it?

    I turn to Cerridwen, as do Roose and Elana- Hela is still glaring at Jack- in search of some sort of answer. Thankfully, he obliges. “Jack has managed to design some beans containing human genetic information. We used them to imbue the food with the necessary aspects- it fulfills all the same needs as typical blood.”

    I manage to keep the surprise from showing on my face. That’s...admittedly impressive. I was aware that Jack was adept at placing magical energy inside of his
    beans
    vessels
    , like some of his fellow Conversion magi do with far more useful jewels, but I didn’t realize he was able to do the same with things such as genetic data already. That ought to be several orders of magnitude harder with his chosen vessel than with jewels, after all.

    “Eh? Since when’ve you been able to manage that?” Ah, Hela, thank you for saying what we were all thinking. Sometimes that tactless approach of yours is to be treasured. Sure enough, Jack promptly launches into an explanation, tossing the bean in his hand towards me, as if expecting me to pass it around like some schoolboy.

    “Well, so, y’know how beans don’t stop flow, yeah? They grow and change and stuff, so if you want to seal something in, you need a way to match the growth of the bean to the evolution of the stuff that’s going into it! So, like-”

    “That’s enough of that for now, Jack. You don’t need to explain yourself in that level of detail, I’m sure they all get the idea.” Cerridwen’s interruption causes us to sigh, leaning back in our seats. It’s to be expected, I suppose, but still.

    ...frustratingly, I can’t shake off the feeling of annoyance that’s just washed over me. More than my usual irritation with Jack, this is something deeper. What about his explanation just now is nagging at me? This will be even more of a weight than wondering how the butler got to the kitchen.

    “I’ve gotten the chance to speak with each of you briefly, but why don’t we discuss how each of you have been faring lately? It’s been quite some time since all of you have been gathered in one place like this.” I’m not given much time to mull on it, though, as dinner conversation every bit as torrid as I’d expected starts up, courtesy of my master.

    I’m not exactly eager to be the one to speak up first- my conversations with both Cerridwen and Roose are enough of a testament to how much nothing I’ve accomplished in recent years. Thankfully, while we are glancing around at one another, wondering who the first to answer will be, Roose chooses to speak up.

    “I’ve been gathering resources for my next advancement. If all goes well, it should reach completion by the end of the decade.”

    My eyes widen slightly. A cursory glance reveals that Elana and Hela are showing similar expressions, only Jack being off in his own world as he plays with his food. Another advancement? He’s clearly undergone one in the time since we last met, and he’s planning on another only a few decades after?

    What’s with that speed? Roose, I know you’re brilliant, but shouldn’t you take it slower when it’s your own body you’re altering? I bite back the question that rises up in my throat, of how far he’s progressed, of how much of the universe his body has become a microcosm of. His expression is level, secure- he sees nothing wrong with what he’s said. There’s not a hint of unease or trepidation.

    ...there’s that feeling of annoyance again.

    A laugh like tinkling chimes brings me out of my thoughts, my head turning to face Elana- evidently she’s recovered from the same understanding that the rest of us had. “Well done, Roose. You truly are a prodigy. Myself, I’ve scarcely done anything, though I’ve finally gotten ahold of some spiritual land in the Americas that should be of use.”

    Even Elena’s made progress, though that’s to be expected. I’ve always considered myself a bit ahead of her, on equal footing with Hela, and behind the two geniuses. She may have closed the gap, though.

    However, spiritual land in the Americas? That’s...interesting. Did she get her hands on a burial site used by the natives, some sort of grave with powerful mysticism around it? What sort of bones would she even manage to get out of that? Cerridwen seems to be a bit interested as well, but before we have a chance to ask anything else-

    “Found a thought experiment. Fixed th’ problem of getting multiple spirits synchronized.” Hela mutters out through a mouthful of duck. As expected of her, I suppose.

    To his credit, my master manages to act as though he hadn’t just been cut off without the other party’s notice, letting out a small laugh. “A thought experiment…? Hoho, you really have grown up.” I admit, I mirror his thoughts- it seems that little gestalt consciousness of hers is coming along, if she’s actually capable of using her brain. I wonder to what extent my Choir is still her bane.

    That feeling I felt when I heard Jack rant about his magecraft comes back. This time, I’m able to work out what that annoyance is. It’s jealousy, isn’t it? I’m not annoyed with Jack, not any more than the usual- what I’m annoyed with is his exuberance, his interest. Namely, the fact that I can’t muster up that same energy. What is wrong with me, to think something like that?

    Speaking of, seeming to realize that we’ve been going around the table, Jack leaves his musings and practically leaps up out of his seat. I prepare to tune him out- I’m sure I’ve heard whatever he’s going to say already, and I’m already in the midst of a helpful bit of introspection, so there’s no sense in-

    “Renny’s been getting involved with women lately!”





    ...could I murder him before Cerridwen’s workshop defenses stopped me, I wonder?

    “Oh? Is that so, Rengard? Please, do tell.”

    Elana’s smirk stabs at my soul, the corner of her lips twitching as she visibly holds back laughter. And of course-

    “Aaaaahahaha! You’re kidding, Ren? What, did you start up a relationship with one of your Dead-”

    ...Yes, thank you for your input, Hela.

    I block the remainder of dinner from my mind, in an effort to forget that this ever happened. The only thing that I don’t make a conscious effort to repress is my master’s parting remark, that he has an announcement to make tomorrow night, after we’ve rested.

    It takes some effort to keep myself calm, when I hear that. While it’s a touch frustrating he did not make the announcement now, I can wait for the span of a day’s sleep. There is little to say from then on- we say our farewells, and each of us returns to our rooms. I feel a flicker of magical energy from outside my closed door as my master engages the Mystic Lock on it, and just as the clock strikes noon, I allow myself to sleep.


    ***


    “Sirs and madams, please report to the master bedroom immediately. I repeat: please report to the master bedroom immediately.”

    A voice rouses me from stasis, one that it takes me a moment to recognize as the butler’s- Alan’s. There is a frantic tinge to his tone that is utterly at odds with everything I’d associated with him in the brief time that I’ve known him. That alone causes a cold pit to settle in my stomach.

    Something is wrong. I can feel it, a spark of gnosis burned into my soul: something is terribly wrong.

    A resonant hymn fills my mind as I exit my room. My threads of consciousness stretch out, and I can feel that the Bounded Fields of the workshop are different somehow, that something is there which was not before. I barely even note that the Mystic Locks, not only the one on my door but the ones on every door one of us was sleeping in, are unlocked, before I’ve moved downstairs.

    Roose and Elana are already present in the master bedroom, along with Alan. Jack and Hela arrive shortly after I do.

    Of course, there was one who was present before we six were.

    Cerridwen Valdyrius, the Heaven’s Tuner. The lord of this ‘world’, the master of spaces, the twelfth Dead Apostle Ancestor.

    And that is precisely why it is impossible. That is precisely why the sight before me is something I can’t help but deny. That is precisely why each and every one of us stands here in slackjawed incredulity.

    It makes no sense. He must have a spare body, this must be a trick, an illusion, a dream. Otherwise, it means that one who had reached perfection had been killed in his own home. Otherwise, it means that a man I equated to God had been struck down without a fight.

    The charred remnants of his corpse, however, beg to differ.


    ***


    How long did we stand there? A minute? An hour? I do not know, nor do I care to know. The impossibility of what laid before me was something I could not process.

    Regardless, I am finally broken from that spell as I hear one of the others clear their throat. My head turns, looking to the form of Alan Giacosa. His movements are composed and fluid, just as I have known them. Without an ounce of flourish, he retrieves a scroll of paper from his jacket.

    “In line with his orders, I will now dictate the last will and testament of lord Cerridwen Valdyrius.”

    …’in line with his orders’? That preface seems to snap all of us from our musings. Those who were not facing Alan now are. If he’s saying something like that, then wouldn’t that mean-

    “If this is being read to you, then I have departed from this world. It is now that I shall make my promised announcement. As all of you have guessed, the Rose Prophecy has dictated the time of my death. Namely, she has stated that my death will come at the hands of one of you.”

    My eyes widen sharply, head immediately turning to look at the others present. Each of them wears a similar expression of shock. No, not only had he known he would die, but it was one of us who had done this? How was that even possible? He was Cerridwen Valdyrius- even if we had all cooperated, that would have been unthinkable. But, disregarding us, the butler continues on.

    “It falls to me to decide on my successor, as a result. Given the nature of my death, I have decided to handle this in a somewhat unorthodox manner. My castle has been sealed at this time- I prepared its protections to be triggered at the time of my death. Entry and exit have been absolutely prohibited. Each of you should be well aware of the futility of attempting to break past my barriers.”

    The world around me thrums, shaking and shuddering even as Alan’s words drone on. It’s strange. Something is different. Something is not as I have known it.

    “My decision for successor operates thusly- you have twenty-four hours to investigate and unveil which among you is my killer. To the one who succeeds in this task goes the title of Dead Apostle Ancestor. Should the true killer not be unveiled within twenty-four hours, they will be crowned the victor instead. Should the rightful victor be dead, the successor will be decided by random chance among the remaining candidates.”

    ...a game to decide succession?

    That means, that means it isn’t over yet. I still have a chance.

    “The guarantor of the game is a close friend of mine who shall remain anonymous for the time being. Rest assured that he will ensure the integrity of the game. I have also taken measures to make the game as interesting as possible, such as by soundproofing the different areas of my castle. Please enjoy yourselves for these next twenty-four hours.”

    Pound. Pound. Pound. A great ceremonial drum buried in the confines of my skull, growing louder every time a word is spoken, every time I take a breath.

    “Since I will not have the chance to say this in person: to the next Dead Apostle Ancestor number twelve, I give you my congratulations.”

    This feeling...what is it?

    I don't recognize it. It's unfamiliar. This tightness in my chest, it's something that drowns out sorrow with an overwhelming heat.

    Ah…

    ...excitement, that’s it. This is pure zeal. This is a reprieve from my monotony. It’s been so long that I’ve forgotten this feeling.

    I want to win.

    That sentence repeats in my mind, bouncing around the inside of my skull as it grows louder and louder. The words of my fellow
    competitors
    apprentices
    as they begin to speak is drowned out by that all-consuming thought. My blood feels hot, my eyes feel sharp, my soul feels alight.

    Is this your final gift to me, Cerridwen? Very well, then- I won’t waste it.

    Let’s begin the game.
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    Oh yeah, intelligible feedback, right. I particularly enjoy how you painted magecraft in passing yet tantalising strokes that show off their uniqueness just enough without launching into those awful explications about how this and that works which a certain Fate spinoff loves so much. Considering you've also set up more interesting circumstances for it with the Rose Prophecy, while imparting enough personal traits and interrelations to the aspirant DAA to establish an initial impression at least for the male trio beyond their basic nature, I'd say this is as good an opening for an apparent murder mystery as any.

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    I was lukewarm about an OC centric fic but this is really entertaining. A DA dealing with malaise as a MC is a great idea and the conflict is really interesting.

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    Thanks for the comments, all. This'll be a pretty short piece, overall, consisting of four total chapters that are expected to be of similar length (their actual length might vary depending on how the writing itself goes). Release schedule might be a little odd; ordinarily I'd say a chapter a week and have this done within a month, but because I had the bright idea of starting this the week before I get ready for a move without thinking to get other chapters prepped ahead of time, there might be some snags there.

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    Read out as 「Ushi ni ase shi, munagi ni mitsu.」
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    ***


    My own abilities may be inadequate for what’s to come. The thought sends a shudder through me.

    As I exit that split-second fugue, I allow my expression to smooth over. My breathing reins itself back in, the manic light in my eyes dims. Thankfully, it seems that the others were too busy reacting to the sight before them to notice- the last thing I need is getting myself mistaken as a suspicious figure.

    I feel a smile tug at the corners of my lips, one that I have to consciously repress. The feeling is impossible to fully describe, a sort of childlike elation that I have to push down. Keep a level head, Rengard. This is not a trivial game. You are against a group composed out of your equals, and among them, one is responsible for the death of a man who was undoubtedly your superior. Getting caught up in the thrill of the fight will lead to failure, if not worse.

    ...yes, even monotony is preferable to failure.

    “Where the hell’s the mystery? Just use Residual Thought Playable on him!”

    The first to speak up after the will had been dictated is, of course, Hela. She strides forwards, gesturing towards the corpse with all the elegance of your average feral boar. I bite back a groan, but as I open my mouth to speak, Roose beats me to the punch.

    “Are you playing dumb, or did you really forget? He set up protections for that sort of thing. Weren’t you the one who helped him design those in the first place?” He snaps dryly, rolling his eyes a bit as he speaks. Hela’s expression, in response, shifts from irritated, to confused, to embarrassed.

    ...she genuinely forgot? Even by Hela’s standards, that’s just abysmal. That consciousness of hers can’t have stabilized by much, if her memories are that spotty.

    Still, that absolves one of my worries. For a moment there, I’d been concerned that she might have built some sort of backdoor into the spiritual protections she assisted Cerridwen with- if she had, and she was actually capable of accessing his memories with some variant of Residual Thought Playable, the whole affair might very well be over already.

    “It looks like we will have to do this the old-fashioned way. If the full protections are enabled, even a genuine Ancestor would not be able to break out of here within twenty-four hours.” I interject, trying to disguise the feelings welling up in my chest as I do while I glance to the others for confirmation.

    Against expectations, the next one to speak up is Alan, who had stepped off to the side after reading the will aloud. “Ah, yes, I should additionally mention this, to place everyone at the same playing field.” There’s a tinge of mischief to his tone- is he having fun with this? That’s...genuinely impressive, if so. You don’t usually see a human so comfortable in scenarios like this. More and more, I see how he managed to be hired. “The Mystic Locks on each of your rooms, set to only respond to my or lord Cerridwen’s magical energy, were unlocked without my knowledge at some point between the lord locking them last night and the announcement minutes ago. The Mystic Lock on lord Cerridwen’s quarters, however, was not.”

    ...what?

    I lock up for a moment before my eyes flit around- sure enough, everyone seems to have grasped the same notion, with the exception of Jack who looks off in his own world. “...what is the term for this sort of thing? A ‘locked room mystery’, I believe?” Elana chimes in. I confess unfamiliarity with the term, but I can easily grasp the meaning. Someone killed Cerridwen in a room they don’t seem to have gotten inside of. Who among us would be able to accomplish something like that?

    Tch, we’ve already began at a rocky start, but I suppose that’s natural. Something like this was never going to have a clear paper trail leading to the culprit. If that’s the case, the first order of business is to-

    “We ought to examine the body, no? And Alan, I assume the victor will inherit everything within this manor, including the late master’s corpse. Is that correct?”

    Cut off again before I could speak up, this time by Elana. Was that second question really necessary, though?! You could at least wait a bit before you start scheming on how to desecrate his body!

    “That is not productive. All of us crowding around one body, we will not get anything done, and doing it one at a time leaves potential for destroying or modifying the evidence. There is no rule against interfering with one another’s investigations, after all.” I cut in, my tone a bit harsher than I intended. It absolutely is not because I am frustrated at others stealing my lines, certainly not.

    ...regardless, I believe it is a valid point. This is the issue with a ‘competitive investigation’, so to speak, as I see it. We have the same sites to investigate, but if we do so in isolation, we risk sabotage. If we do so in coordination, then we suffer reduced productivity, not to mention that others will be able to see the results of our investigations firsthand. Troublesome, how troublesome.

    My initial euphoria is still present, but as the seconds pass, the cold hand of realism begins to temper it. I am no detective, something like this is certainly out of my depth. I can only take solace in the fact that this is true for all of us. We are all incompetent in this matter, and so, we are all on an equal playing field.

    “In that case, why don’t we break into two groups for examining the body? A group of three and a group of two- since it’s less convenient to them, the group of three can go first.” Roose interjects with a proposal, the others and I going silent in contemplation before agreeing, offering simple nods. It seems the atmosphere of this contest is starting to get to each of us- this is the quietest that I believe I’ve ever seen Jack be.

    Regardless, it’s difficult for me to hold myself back. I am quick to volunteer myself as a member of the first group, however…

    “So, the first group will be Rengard, Jack, and Hela, while the second group will be Elana and myself. Well, good luck to you all.”

    The one who I most considered a friend among this motley group flashes me a chiding grin as he takes his leave, and I look to the two who remain in the master bedroom.

    I can’t help but feel that this is the ‘idiot’s group’. Perhaps I should have been less eager.


    ***


    After a few seconds looking at one another in silence, the one to break that air is, surprisingly, not Jack but Hela. A flicker of concentration crosses her face as I feel the magical energy of the surroundings start to move, impulsively opening my Circuits in response.

    Her hair, stretching down to the middle of her back, comes to life. It rises from her head, reaching out and lengthening like monstrous tendrils as it starts to run over every surface of the room that it can reach. I admit, the sight surprises me for a moment- the fluidity of those movements is far beyond what I am used to by Hela. That thought experiment she mentioned certainly seems to have done the job, if her spirits are capable of working in coordination to that extent now. I wonder if she had to weaken the spirits to pull something like that off.

    -Wait, what am I thinking? I can’t just stand here and let her run over all of the evidence. I step forwards, ducking under a few strands of hair to make it to my late master’s
    coffin
    bed
    , peering down at it even as some strands of Hela’s hair run over it.

    “...Hela, have you found anything?”

    Why did I even bother asking? If it was Jack, I’m sure he’d have answered- though, maybe not, given how silent and still he’s been these past few minutes- but Hela? The idea itself is-

    “No signs of a struggle, looks like he got killed in his sleep.”

    “Sorry, poor question, I shou-...huh?”

    My mouth flaps open for a moment as I process that I just received an actual response from her before I recompose myself, rounding about to face her. She flashes a brusque grin my way, cocking an eyebrow up as she notes my surprise. “What, didn’t expect an answer?” No, no I did not, but she goes on regardless. “Look, Ren, we’re competing here, but the way I see it? Roose was the shoe-in until today. And you saw how sure of himself the guy was- he’s probably going to be the one to figure this out…unless the underdogs help each other out to even the odds, get it? Little quid pro quo.”

    If before I was surprised, now I’m nothing short of awestruck. Hela Belvarien is an antisocial brute whose talent I begrudgingly acknowledge, but now she’s actually using her head? Is this how she is when she takes something seriously? As if to cut that thought off, she bursts out into a round of throaty laughter a mere moment later. “Or I’m just giving you false info to put you on the wrong track, who knows?”

    I roll my eyes slightly, before giving a quick glance to the surroundings. At a casual glance, I would agree with Hela’s assessment- it does seem like there was no struggle here. That or it’s been incredibly well-hidden. “Fine, we can cooperate while we are in this room.”

    Another laugh leaves her as she claps her hands together. I’m tempted to cancel the deal from that alone, but manage to refrain as she looks to our third party. “Great! How about you, Jack?”

    Being directly addressed seems to snap him out of whatever daze he’d been in. He straightens up as I turn my head slightly towards him, watching him blink a couple of times before he returns to reality. He strides forwards like nothing was wrong, throwing an arm around my shoulder without so much as a moment’s pause. “Sorry, was thinking about stuff! Sure, that sounds good, let’s do it!”

    Attempting to ignore the man now pressed up next to me, I lid my eyes shut and focus on the facts. Cerridwen was apparently killed in his own room without being aware of it, if that was the case, then… “So, the murderer would have needed to bypass the Mystic Lock, as well as whatever personal alarm systems and defenses Cerridwen had here. The Mystic Lock is the real trouble there, since it was still locked in the morning.” I muse aloud.

    “What if it was Ally?” As usual, Jack makes me pause- Ally? That must be the nonsense nickname he’s given the butler. That’s a good point on paper, I suppose. The Mystic Locks responded to both his and Cerridwen’s magical energy, so he would have been capable of both unlocking and locking them. However, that’s…

    Hela’s groan breaks my concentration. “What kinda sense does that make? Did you see the guy? He’s a human, barely even a magus. He couldn’t kill a damn newborn Dead Apostle.” I follow up her comment with a nod of agreement- the thought that one of us has the ability to kill Cerridwen is shocking in its own right. That butler, a normal human who’s been under Cerridwen’s watch for two years, managing something? Unthinkable.

    An airy “Hmmm” slips out of Jack as I feel him rock back and forth, nearly dragging me along for the ride. “Well, what if he wasn’t the killer? What if he just got forced into messing with the locks by the real killer?” An incredibly basic idea, but one that I confess hadn’t occurred to me- I really am amateurish at this.

    Hela and I both go silent, no doubt considering similar lines of thought. It’s certainly a possibility, but how would one of us have done that without Cerridwen noticing? Not only that, but the butler was the one to inform us of the Mystic Locks on our rooms being undone and the one on the master bedroom being locked- wouldn’t it be in his interests to not say that for fear of implicating himself? And, beyond that, why were the locks to our bedrooms all unlocked overnight? I shouldn’t rule it out entirely, but that sort of explanation leaves too many unanswered questions.

    For now, I turn my attention to the most relevant subject in the room, the corpse of Cerridwen Valdyrius.

    At some level, I still can’t help but deny it. I can’t help but deny the idea that he is not dead, that there is some trick, that the ruined body before me is merely sleeping. And so, I test it.

    ילדאבהות
    ”The dim ruler bears three names.”

    My Choir fills the air without warning. Jack and Hela are frozen as the song takes effect- I can’t help but feel some pride there. However, they are not my focus. My focus is on the corpse before me, attempting to find something there. Like a bat using echolocation, my Choir’s song of ignorance bounces off those
    souls
    divine sparks
    it seeks to blanket. If there is any trace of life, I will find it.

    ...there is not. The only ensouled beings within this room are the two at my side. Granted, the corporeal spirits lurking in Hela’s being are no doubt present as well, but my art does not focus on such base existences. The obvious conclusion confirmed, I allow the song to end.

    No sooner than I have done that, though, than do I find a strand of hair lined up between my eyes, leveled like the barrel of a gun.

    Ah, Hela broke free far quicker than I had expected. Did she actually manage to beat Jack to that? That’s astoundingly impressive.

    “Give me some warning the next time you’re about to do something like that. You know I hate how it feels.”

    Ah, come now Hela, such an overreaction. With that narrow of a window, I doubt I could have killed you. I consider mentioning that she’s just shattered her previous record in breaking free of my Choir’s ignorance, but it’s probably best to hold that comment back for now. I have no doubt that I’m safe- she wouldn’t dare to kill me, especially with a witness like Jack present- but antagonizing a would-be ally here is hardly a clever move.

    “My apologies, I acted without thinking.” I put a bit of a waver into my tone as I speak. Hela’s always responded well to others seeming afraid of her. Sure enough, the strand of hair moves away, and I let myself go lax once again. “I’ve verified it, either way. His soul isn’t here. This is a genuine corpse.”

    It was something of an obvious fact, and even then it isn’t decisive- what if he made arrangements for his soul to be stored in another location, or prepared a spare body?- but it’s a necessary thing to pay some lip service to before we begin. Hela doesn’t seem all that placated by my explanation, but so be it.

    Turning my attention to the corpse before me, I finally begin my own examination. The body is...not in a good state. Every surface of it seems to be charred, thin cracks of ash flaking off of it into the coffin- if it was any worse off, even identifying it as Cerridwen would have been difficult. The odd thing, though, is his clothing. While scuffed by ash, his clothing is otherwise immaculate, not a tear or burn on the articles themselves.

    “Whatever burned him like that had to’ve done more damage than his healing could dish out.” Hela cuts in, her hair retracting back into place as she speaks and turns her eyes towards the body. “I never saw the old man’s curse in action, but it had to have been pretty up there. Would need some serious damage to beat that, ‘specially in his workshop.”

    Jack straightens up in response, crossing his arms behind his head as he looks towards the ceiling. “I gueeeess, but then why are his clothes fine? You guys can tell that isn’t Formal Wear, right? His clothing should be toast.”

    I scowl- it’s a valid point, but at the same time, it’s a significant hint to the method of death. Unless the murderer did something like re-dress the body after killing Cerridwen- I’d prefer to dismiss such strange situations unless I have no other option- the form of attack was one that only damaged Cerridwen himself, but not his clothing. Of those means, the one that first comes to mind, especially given his Curse of Restoration, is…

    “Some sort of a curse? A spiritual attack, perhaps? That would be able to affect the lifeform without anything else, and it’s vague enough that it does not specifically implicate any of us- no doubt that would be a concern of the killer.” It’s a reasonable assumption, I think. Out of us, the one most versed in cursing would be Hela, but all of us are at least capable of something.

    The culprit logically would have used a method that ones other than they could have used. A curse is vague enough that it could be the root cause, but the issue there is still how. Ignoring the obstacles of the Mystic Locks and the alarm systems, this isn’t the murder of some simple human. Cerridwen Valdyrius was no less than a god inside of his workshop- the idea that one of us has a curse that could kill him without a fight, even if it was while he slept, is a block I cannot get past. Perhaps if they invested copious amounts of time and resources into it, but still…

    My thoughts are cut off, though, as I see Jack step towards the body, retrieving a small bean from one of his countless pockets and bringing it down into the coffin. My eyes dart down to follow it, just in time to see a thin vine crack out of it, tearing a small chunk of ash from the body before retracting back into the bean.

    I jolt around to face Jack, incredulity smearing across my face. Hela soon realizes what had happened and does the same, but unlike me, decides to actually speak up about it. “What do you think you’re doing? We’re not supposed to mess with anything.” She hisses out. It’s always so refreshing to have that attitude of hers cooperating with one’s thoughts instead of fighting them.

    Jack pauses in reply, looking at the two of us as though we had just asked him why he had a face. “Oh, I’m just taking some samples! Don’t worry!” He eventually offers something that resembles a reply, and Hela and I begrudgingly relent.

    ...Damn it. In my haste, I’d forgotten he was capable of that. His beans aren’t ideal storage vessels like jewels are, but unlike a jewel, a bean is a ‘seed that will germinate’. He’s essentially using it as an incubation chamber for that piece of Cerridwen’s body, to see if he can derive any information from it. It’s a method of information gathering that only Jack is capable of.

    The fact that I feel I’ve just been outsmarted by him is perhaps what stings the most, and lights the fire in my chest once again. I refuse to be outdone, and so I turn my attention back to the corpse.


    ***


    We don’t manage to find much more in the way of notable results. It’s not that there are secrets layered on secrets, so much as that there’s just...nothing. The body is so damaged that things such as alchemical analysis will come up blank, and other than the body itself, we can’t find a scrap of something that resembles evidence. My Choir and Hela’s hair haven’t found a damn thing. Of course, Hela may have found something and is just lying to me, but I choose to not give that thought more weight than I have to.

    The one thing of note that I myself worked out was around the Bounded Fields set up in the master bedroom, but they only verified what I had expected. The alarms and protections surrounding the room were flawless, and the density and quality of magical energy circulating within it were similarly excellent, drawing in ‘power’ from the rest of the floor like a funnel. I couldn’t for the life of me theorize about how the murder had occurred.

    Regardless, it’s not productive to stay in the master bedroom for any longer, and so the three of us depart. Roose and Elana enter shortly after; I can only hope they don’t manage to uncover anything that we had missed. As Jack and I start off in separate directions, however-

    “Hey, Ren. How about we keep working together for a bit longer?”

    I pause at Hela’s offer, as does Jack despite him not having been extended an invitation. I suppose something along those lines will benefit me more than it will hurt. Even if Hela seems to actually be using her head for once, I’m not some fool who can be outwitted by her. “I suppose we can extend our cooperation to some extent.” I eventually reply, rounding about to face her.

    “Oh! Yeah, let’s keep the team together!” Seizing on that opening, Jack rushes back into the fray, throwing one arm around my shoulders and the other around Hela’s. Another murder might happen sooner than we thought given the glare Hela’s leveling at the buffoon.

    ...regardless, we can’t exactly keep Jack from following us, and so we begin our investigation as a begrudging trio.

    Exiting the master bedroom, there’s simply the bathroom opposite it in addition to the hall that leads towards the foyer. The bathroom hardly merits mention- a quick entry, a run over the details, Hela’s hairs comb every surface, Jack takes a ‘sample’ from the wall, we agree that there’s nothing of note here, and we exit. Annoyingly, that becomes something of a pattern. From the foyer to the salon, from the salon to the kitchen and dining hall, we’re doing little more than looking around for ‘anything that seems odd’. Our inexperience is undoubtedly showing itself, and I feel myself grow more frustrated as time passes. I have nothing, but Hela might be picking up scraps of information she’s withholding, and Jack’s ‘samples’ may provide valuable insights.

    I refuse to be beaten so easily, and so, as we step into the art gallery, I start to wrack my mind. There are secrets hidden in this workshop. I do not know which ones will be related to the murder, but knowing something is better than nothing.

    Focus, Rengard. To understand the murder, you must understand the location. What is the design of this place? The castle of a Dead Apostle Ancestor, yes, but there has to be something else. This is the castle of the Heaven’s Tuner, the greatest mind of comporting heavenly concepts into spaces, the tutor of the Planetary Magic Circle’s creator. What would his workshop take the form of?

    “Stop touching me, already!”

    Hela’s outburst to Jack knocks me out of my thoughts, my head whipping around to look at the pair just as Jack is shoved back. Hela is visibly seething, hair writhing like so many snakes, winding up to strike. The cause for her anger, meanwhile, seems completely uncaring, a lazy smile splitting his face. “What’s the problem? We’re friends, right?”

    I take a small step back the moment I hear that. The entrances to the theater and library are both right behind me- I could fall back into either, if things take a turn for the worse.

    “No, we aren’t! You’re a grown Dead Apostle! You’ve lived for a thousand goddamn years! You shouldn’t be running around like a little kid looking for attention, you should be fucking focusing.”

    The situation is becoming increasingly unstable, not that Jack seems to even notice, much less mind. The idiot just cocks his head to the side a bit, seemingly oblivious to what might happen. Yes, he does have the edge if a fight breaks out between the two of them, but it’s still not anything trivial.

    “I am focusing! I’m just also spending time with my friends! Even if this is a game, it’s boring when you’re just stuck playing alone, y’know?”

    I bite back the groan that rises up in my throat when I hear those words. ‘All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy’, is it?

    ...I despise that I just said that, even to myself.

    More importantly, Hela may be about to-

    “...enough.” Hela hisses that word out as her tone drops from fire to ice. I just barely manage to disguise my sigh of relief as I feel the magical energy around her become still. While I’m happy things haven’t come to blows, this is still...less than ideal. This feels like it runs deeper than just a basic argument over Jack being overly touchy, though. The abruptness of that outburst, the strangeness of that talk. Have these two had some sort of conflict recently? I’ve never known them to have an argument like...this.

    “Ren, good working with you, but I’m gonna check the rest of the place on my own.” She mutters out while I muse on that, shoving her way past Jack and back towards the way we came. The inciting factor for this incident, meanwhile, looks to me with an embarrassed smile.

    “Ha, guess I accidentally broke the team up, huh? Sorry Renny! I’ll go do my own stuff now!” He chirps out eagerly, looking almost...proud of himself before taking his leave as well, slipping past me to dart into the library.

    What exactly just happened?


    ***


    After that...incident, it’s probably best that I take a break from this level for the time being. However, when I ascend the stairs to the second floor, my next place of investigation, I’m met with the sound of a clicking tongue.

    The culprit soon reveals himself. Standing by the billiard table in the center of the floor, evidently playing a game with himself, is a mister Alan Giacosa. The table is set up differently than in English Billiards- one of the American derivatives, perhaps? He seems a touch dissatisfied with his playing. How lovely. I’m not the kind to mire myself in schadenfreude, but he hasn’t shown so much as a chink in his armor thus far.

    Just as I think that, he seems to notice my presence, his expression immediately smoothing over with the practiced grace that I’ve come to associate with him. “Sir Schvieglot. How does your investigation fare?” He asks, dropping into a momentary bow as he leaves his game.

    I, of course, give a dismissive wave in response. I hardly mind what he’s doing, so long as it does not interfere with me. “It is progressing.” I reply simply, not wanting to disclose any more information than that. I don’t believe anyone else is on this floor currently, but that doesn’t mean others cannot eavesdrop. Besides...if this butler truly is related to the murder, the less I give away to him, the better.

    With that, I leave Alan to his game as I begin examination of each of the guest bedrooms. They are expectedly barren. What personal affects the others had brought are likely being carried on their persons, and sure enough…

    “Eye of flame, envelop the world.”

    ...what analysis I’m capable of doesn’t turn up anything of note within those rooms either.

    Ah, frustrating, how frustrating. I’m hardly any closer to solving this issue than I was when I first learned of the murder. The thought that the others are almost certainly ahead of me, that I could very well fail here, is enough to make me come alight once again.

    My eyes clear up. I cannot afford to mull over my own circumstances here- if I falter for a moment, I could lose. The threads of my consciousness fan our, covering the second floor as a whole.

    ”Athoth, Eloaios, Astaphaios, Yao, Sabaoth, Adonin, Sabbataios.”

    I feel a flicker of pain lance through my form as I strain my consciousness. There has to be something here. This is not a theory I do not understand- this is simply examining Bounded Fields. I do not require some profound revelation to do this, I simply need to act. Act, you fool, or that prize will be snatched away.

    Gradually, as my mind dives into the myriad wards and barriers layering the workshop that I cannot grasp, a shape becomes clear.

    Yes, this floor as a whole seems to have a different set of magical foundations bound to it as a workshop. If the first floor is one world, this is another. A harsher world, a crueler world. Did Cerridwen use different celestial bodies as the basis for the two floors? He certainly must have.

    I can’t imagine that knowledge will be of much use, but it has accomplished something, in that it has helped me clear my head. The pain washes the fog away, and with it, I can shove that self-pity and frustration to the side for a time.

    Obviously, the butler should be questioned. I was so focused on avoiding him and searching for ‘clues’ that I forgot such a basic thing. Resolving myself, I exit the farthest guest bedroom and approach him.

    “Alan, I would like to speak to you briefly.”

    He jolts up in place a bit at my voice striking him from behind, his cue veering to the side slightly and missing its mark before he patches himself up, recomposes himself, and turns around to face me with a fluid flourish. “Of course, sir. How can I be of assistance?”

    Now, Alan most certainly had the ability to unlock the doors and permit the murder to occur. He would have needed to be approached for this before our rooms were sealed last night, for a plan to be made. But, why would he do that? Coercion makes no sense- while Cerridwen drew breath, Alan had perfect protection, so then if he’s responsible, he must have had something to gain from the murder.

    “You’re a magus, correct?” Something simple to start things off, but to my surprise, the question seems to make Alan uncomfortable.

    “I would...not say that exactly, sir. I’m familiar with magecraft, but I scarcely make use of it myself. It never interested me, truthfully.” He explains, tone perfectly level even as his composure cracks just slightly.

    An interesting answer, but not one I have a need to probe on. “And your contract with my master, what was its length?” I’m hardly being subtle about it, but the two possible motives I’ve thought up for him are either being after my master’s wealth and power, or being to break out of his contract early.

    “Eight years remain, though we were in talks to extend it by another decade, if he was satisfied with my performance. As I’m sure you know, the late lord was...quite a generous employer.” He says without so much as a hitch. I can’t help but curse internally. Is he being truthful, or is he just telling me the answers that paint him as having no motive? Ah, dammit- why did I never learn those methods of forcing one to say the truth? My Choir would just make him a drooling idiot, that’s certainly not a solution here.

    With a groan of exasperation, I lean back against a wall, ignoring Alan’s look of confusion as I do. I wrack my brain for something, something without an obvious ‘correct’ answer, something that can give me some insight into how the man named Alan Giacosa thinks. He’s the closest thing to a lead I have currently- I will not let myself falter or delay here.

    “This may be a bit too personal,” My mouth has started moving before I’ve fully processed the words I’m speaking, impulse taking me over. “but, why are you not participating in the investigation? I assume you noticed, the will merely said that whoever finds the killer is the victor, not that it had to be one of us. You are just as much a competitor for the title of Dead Apostle Ancestor as the rest of us, why are you not competing?”

    The air freezes. Alan’s eyes widen, as do my own once I realize the words I’ve just spoken. What sort of-

    “...permission to speak freely, sir Schvieglot?”

    It’s all I can do to nod dumbly in response, at which point the human sighs. His cue stick rests against the table, his posture slackens slightly, and he speaks up with a tone that betrays the crisp official nature he’d retained before now. “Why would I? I don’t have the power to defend that title. If I did somehow win, I’d be assassinated within a week. But, besides that…” He pauses for a moment, a flicker of unease dancing across his face, as if he’s afraid of what he is about to say. “...being a Dead Apostle just doesn’t interest me.”

    The first part of the answer, I had expected. No, ‘expected’ is too generous a word, given how impromptu that question of mine was, but if I was in his position, that would have been my response as well. To understand that a power is outside of your station is admirable. The second part, though, causes me to freeze for a moment. Confusion gradually shifts to incredulity- is he mad?

    “And why is that? The consumption of blood, the issue of sunlight, the Church, they all sound far worse than they are to deal with. And the benefit you gain is...rather significant.” That’s an understatement. Even setting aside power, a Dead Apostle is an elevated existence- the Elder Titles have lived since the days when gods roamed the Earth. Why would you ever-

    “Well, I like being mortal.”

    My mind screeches to a halt. What does my face look like at this point, slackjawed incredulity at the words that were just uttered? “I do not understand. You’re aware that you can still die if you desire it, yes? This is not some monkey’s paw where you cannot die even if you wish to.”

    In response, Alan Giacosa merely shakes his head. His expression is tight, eyes flitting off to the side as he fumbles over his own words, a far cry from the composure of his usual persona. “That’s not it. It’s...yes, a Dead Apostle is still capable of dying, but...how do I put this- when was the last time you feared death?”

    Each passing second only confuses me further. What sort of lunatic am I speaking to? “At no point in recent memory. Do you not consider that a good thing? A human lives in constant fear of death from all sorts of causes within and outside of their control- why would you not reject that?”

    He seems to struggle with his explanation every bit as much as I struggle to comprehend it, trying and failing to start a new sentence several times before he slumps in place slightly. “...never mind, it’s...not the sort of thing I can put into words. Apologies for wasting your time, sir Schvieglot.” And with that, he’s straightened back up, tone leveling out towards the end of his words.

    I feel that I’ve just learned something important about the man named Alan Giacosa, haphazardly tossed into my face, but for the life of me I can’t make heads or tails out of it. It’s all I can do to murmur out a simple word of thanks and depart back to the guest bedrooms. I need a moment to clear my head, and so I enter my own bedroom and shut the door behind me, resting my back against it as I let out a sharp breath.

    ‘I like being mortal’, it’s a sentiment I can’t grasp. At the same time, I can’t let myself hang on that for too long. If I stand here tearing my hair out over those words, the others will solve this case before I’ve even left this room.

    That thought alone lights a fire in my chest, forcing me forwards.

    Now, think, Rengard. That talk cannot have been entirely pointless. What have you learned from Alan Giacosa?

    If the words he spoke were true, then he likely does not have a reason to betray Cerridwen Valdyrius. He could have been lying, but start with that premise and work forwards. Consolidate the information you’ve gained thus far.

    Let us start here, in these very guest rooms. The suspects were each also inside of rooms that only Cerridwen Valdyrius and his butler could unlock, but that were all unlocked through some means.

    Cerridwen Valdyrius has no possible reason to unlock the rooms- he was the one who locked them in the first place. If Alan Giacosa was not responsible for undoing the locks, then it means that one of the suspects did.

    A suspect exited their room during the night, and killed Cerridwen Valdyrius.

    ...but, that’s off. If that’s the case, why were all the guest bedroom locks undone? If it was me, if I could undo the Mystic Locks, then I would simply exit my room, carry out the murder, and then return to my room and lock-

    -...Ah, that’s it.

    I would not be able to lock the Mystic Lock from inside of the room. Even if I had the suitable magical energy and could output it in a ‘wave’ to unlock the door from within, the same will not let me lock the door from inside. I would need to be outside of the room to lock the door.

    So, I cannot lock my door once I have unlocked it. When morning comes, my door will be unlocked. What do I do, if that is the case, to cover up that I left my room? My eyes widen as the realization finally clicks.

    I undo all of the Mystic Locks. It’s such a childlike conclusion that I’m embarrassed it took me this long to reach it. If I unlock every lock, it is clear that somebody was able to leave their room, but not who it was.

    In other words, the question is: who among us is able to undo the Mystic Locks without being Cerridwen Valdyrius or Alan Giacosa? None of us are such geniuses with Mystic Code creation to the point where we could ‘crack’ locks designed by our master, especially within his own workshop. If any of us were capable of that, I might as well give up now, as I wouldn’t be able to catch such a figure.

    In other words, the only way one could open the locks is by having the magical energy of Cerridwen Valdyrius or Alan Giacosa. If one had access to that energy somehow, it would be possible to open the locks. And, out of the apprentices, the only one with the aptitude to make use of the magical energy of others is-

    -...that’s it. A lead. It’s not sufficient evidence, it’s nothing beyond a theory, but it’s something. Heat burns through my body, a glorious rush of life as I come to that realization. I’m a step closer. I’m accomplishing something.

    I can win.


    ***


    I’m not at the point where I can level a formal accusation yet; I still haven’t resolved the method of the murder itself, I still don’t have genuine proof. Still, my mind is clear. I’ve made progress, no doubt that the others have as well, so I simply need to keep up the pace.

    If the murderer is who I suspect, then there must be something I can learn to prove that as the case. With that in mind, I make my return downstairs. I hear footsteps behind me as I descend, Alan Giacosa seeming to come down as well. He must have finished his billiards game.

    Of the places on the ground floor I’ve still not explored, there are the theater, the library, and the veranda. Not to mention, with my new perspective, it’s likely worth reevaluating everything I’ve already seen. Yes, that makes enough sense. I decide to start with the theater and library- they’re close to one another, and it’ll be a simple matter to cross them both off.

    ...naturally, it doesn’t work quite that simply. There’s nothing of note that I can find in the library, but when I enter the theater, someone is already present. Or rather, multiple “somebodies”.

    “Check underneath the chairs as well-...oh, Rengard. Hello, how have you been doing?”

    Turning to face me, while her motley crew of a few skeletons attend to grunt work, is Elana vor Enkicen. I should have expected others would be combing the first floor over, I suppose; if I was the only one investigating the second floor just now, naturally everyone else would be here. “Quite well, Elana. Yourself?”

    An airy laugh leaves her in response as she flashes a smile that is either meant to be reassuring or threatening. “Well enough, I suppose. They are not the most suited for this sort of work, but they are doing their best. Are they not just incredible? They are not just carrying out orders, either- that is genuine, long-term sapience.” She pridefully gestures over at the skeletons as she speaks, and I let my eyes drift back over towards them.

    At first glance, I’d assume they were normal skeletons, simple necromantic familiars, but this is Elana we’re speaking about. Beyond simply being made of first-rate materials, the spiritual makeup of these things must be stellar if she’s letting them out here. The self-proclaimed ‘graveyard queen’ wouldn’t settle for something subpar. At the same time, it’s something of a message, a silent warning to anyone who tries to get her alone. One of them even seems to be carrying her suitcase, how quaint.

    I glance around the room in turn- I’m tempted to make use of my Choir here, but that would hardly be well-received with Elana present. There doesn’t seem to be anything of note here, not that I’d expected anything. I’m not sure what I’m trying to find- that’s the fundamental issue. If Jack has some sort of conceptual weapon he used for the murder, then he wouldn’t have made it so easy to find. And if the murder was carried out through something he had stored in a bean, there wouldn’t even be a murder weapon to find.

    ...hm, I’ll need to refine my thinking here.

    “I was going to examine the veranda. Would you care to join, Elana?” I feel more secure investigating with others now that I have something of a lead. It’s also as Hela said- if the ‘underdogs’ cooperate, that is our best chance of defeating the favorite to win. I am sorry, Roose, but for now, we are very much opponents.

    Elana, true to form, simply offers a cordial smile in response. “I was just about to look there myself.” I can’t be sure if that’s the truth or not, but I won’t be expressing that outwardly. “Of course, Rengard. Let’s.”

    The veranda is a rather quaint thing, almost ‘rustic’ in its design, I suppose. I am the first to step out onto it, with Elana following closely behind, as do her familiars. I let out a breath I’d been holding in as we step outside, peering over out at the empty space that exists outside of the borders of this manor, sealed off by Cerridwen’s Bounded Fields. Even the sky above is empty- after all, this place is ‘another world’, a place where the Sun is not permitted to shine, while its maker pursued the creation of an eternal red moon.

    Nothing is here, and yet we find ourselves speaking.

    “It feels odd, doesn’t it? Our master dead, each of competing so much more directly than usual. Everyone seems to be taking this quite seriously.” Elana chimes out, stepping forwards to rest her back against the rail. I can’t help but agree with her sentiment- this is very much a departure from the norm.

    “You should have seen Jack earlier; he was the quietest I’ve ever seen him.” A laugh works its way out of me as I recall the wholly uncharacteristic sight. “Even Hela’s taking this seriously from the look of it. She was the one who broached the topic of cooperation, actually- the rest of us working together to keep Roose from winning on face.”

    At that, Elana quirks an eyebrow up. “You as well? She approached me for the same thing, after Roose and I had finished examining the body.” I see a flicker of something in her eyes as that last word leaves her, but she conceals it with practiced ease a moment later. “Roose has mostly been his usual self. With master gone, he seems to be focusing on examining the workshop itself. I haven’t seen much of Jack, however.” As she speaks, she leans over for a moment, brushing some dust off of one of her familiars.

    My expression tightens a bit at that remark. It seems that Roose may be ahead of me in working out the nature of the celestial concepts here- the thought nearly makes me burst back inside to return to work. I try to keep that feeling from showing. “Well, that’s only natural. Out of all of us, Roose is the most genuine successor to the master. If any of us are able to decipher the workshop’s true nature, it will be him.” Not that I’m going to let him have that without a fight. “I wonder what he thinks that will do, though. He should be focusing on looking for evidence left by the murderer, not the foundations of the workshop.”

    Elana merely shrugs in response. “It’s hard to say. All of us are grasping at straws, no? For a murder committed with magecraft, such a thing as the ‘method’ is nearly impossible to pin down. Common detective logic ceases to function. We know one another’s abilities roughly, and within this workshop, we are all rather limited, but even then it’s not a simple task. Understand the playing field to understand the game, maybe that’s his thought process.” Another laugh. “Or maybe following in master Cerridwen’s steps is just all he knows how to do.”

    She’s struck at the heart of my difficulties, enough that I nearly stagger back in place. The smirk at the edge of her lips is all I need to verify that she noticed my reaction, damn it. “Well, that might be the case, but what do we have to work off of, then?”

    The trace of a smirk on her face becomes a full-blown one. Ah, she’s enjoying herself with this now. “The motive, for one. You had to have at least considered that, Rengard. What reason would one of us have for killing the master? From your perspective from the night before, for instance, killing him is a risky act that might lead to your death, and if you succeed, then what? A successor is decided postmortem, which- no offense, Rengard- is not likely to be you. You have everything to lose and nothing to gain. Trying to loot the workshop in the ensuing chaos? Equally ridiculous; we all know how capable this place’s protections are, even in his death. The only reason I could think of for you doing this, is if you somehow knew of the game before it was announced.”

    I pause, silently cursing as I do. I’d filed away the motive as a consideration in the back of my mind, yes, but I haven’t given it nearly as much thought as Elana seems to have. “...if that’s the case, I would say you’re one of the more suspicious ones. You never cared much about being the successor, did you?”

    A dangerous light enters her eyes, teeth slightly bared as she grins at me in response. “Oh, Rengard, please. I don’t have a motive either, unless you count getting my hands on the late master’s body as one. If that was the case, though, why would I pretend? I’d approach one of you, offer to confess being the murderer in exchange for being given the body, and call it a day. Besides, if it was me…” Her grin momentarily shifts to a scowl. “...the body wouldn’t have ever been left in such a deplorable state. What a damned waste.”

    This time, I am the one to laugh. Elana is an ‘artist’ through and through, an eccentric creator. It’s true, I can’t imagine her damaging her own ‘materials’. In the meantime, though, there is something that I’d like to say, while it’s just Elana and myself present.

    “...I suppose. But speaking of, do you not think you were being...garish earlier? You didn’t show our late master much respect, talking about ownership of his corpse in such a manner. Not to mention now.”

    Elana’s glass-like expression cracks with a light embarrassment, another laugh slipping out of her in response. “Oh, Rengard, you must understand, the things I could do if I managed to get ahold of his body in the long-term. I can’t simply be patient about that when it’s right in front of me, already dead.” She begins to explain, a crazed light gradually entering her eyes. I have to bite back a sigh as she goes on. “Granted, this place doesn’t count as a
    world after death
    grave
    , so the spiritual remnants in the body, if any, must be nil, but still, imagine it! The corpse of an
    League of the Age of Gods
    Elder Title
    , even that damaged, has a level of value on par with this entire castle combined, if you know what you’re doing.”

    I look at her with incredulity, even if I must admit that I’m impressed by that sort of philosophy. Of course, leave it to Elana to see an opportunity like that. “You would truly use the body of our master as materials for a familiar? How shameless is that?”

    Another laugh leaves her, but this time it bears a manic air to it, a weight that refuses to be cowed. “That’s exactly it! Have you ever heard of a Dead Apostle Ancestor being made into a familiar? The closest thing is the fate poor Refraction’s under, and that’s one of the Church’s strongest weapons! This is something that’s never been done before, Rengard- disposing of his corpse would be such a waste!” As she speaks, her skeletons move to her side, ants to their queen.

    ...she’s actually showing this side of her. I’m surprised by just how abruptly she abandoned that pretense of hers; it seems that I’m not the only one who’s gotten excited by the circumstances. I can’t deny that the enthusiasm of her little outburst just now was somewhat infectious, though- I suppose that’s just a sign of my own state.

    This is...fun, I’ll admit. It’s surely not an issue if I spend a few minutes longer here.

    “How would you even make heads or tails out of that, Elana? The body’s practically destroyed. You’d need to reform it into a new familiar, and when you do, it would lose all of its accumulated years.”

    “Are you expecting me to sell my secrets that easily? Think about the matter on your own a bit- that would only be an issue if you combine the broken pieces together into a new whole!”

    And so we go on, the empty sky watching us from above.


    ***


    “Sirs and madams, please report to the bottom of the main staircase immediately. I repeat: please report to the bottom of the main staircase immediately. Do not attempt to move to the second floor.”

    A panicked announcement breaks us out of our conversation some time later, both Elana and I seeming taken aback at just how long we’d gone on for, before realization sets in. An announcement made through the manor, with every bit the same urgency as the one of Cerridwen’s death. We’ve barely so much as exchanged a confirmatory glance before we’ve exited the veranda.

    By the time we arrive at the base of the staircase, Alan is already present, as are Roose and Hela. Elana’s skeletons scramble into formation behind her, the four of us looking at each other with confusion.

    “Thank you all for being present.”

    ...but before any of us say anything, Alan speaks up. We’re still missing one, but he’s talking as if we aren’t.

    Jack isn’t here. That can’t mean- has he been caught? Has the case already closed? Was I not quick enough? A cold pit forms in my stomach, only to twist into a knot as the butler goes on.

    “A situation has arisen on the second floor. Please, everyone follow me, but do not move ahead. I am unsure as to the nature of what has occurred, but it is dangerous.”

    There is a waver to his voice that was not present, even when announcing Cerridwen’s death. The coy sureness I saw in his eyes earlier is nowhere to be seen. Looking around, each of the others are wearing similar expressions of confusion and concern, and so, we scale the stairs behind the butler.

    “Please brace yourselves, all.”

    Alan stops us before we’ve reached the top step- I see a flicker of genuine fear in his face as he does, before closing his eyes. As I turn my attention to the second floor, what we can see of it from over those last few steps of the staircase, I understand why.

    “What- What is this?”

    I do not know who spoke those words. The faculties of my mind that allow me to process such things as voices have shut down.

    Crystals, a thick film of blue-green crystals cover the second story. The walls, the floor, the ceiling, the doors to the guest bedrooms. It’s as if the entire story itself has become the inside of a geode, with countless larger chunks and spires jutting out from those surfaces.

    -But there is something else. Those crystals, grown in strange masses, twisted unnatural formations, send a shudder through my body. They thrum with an unnatural light, pulsing as if alive.

    Nine points pierce the void.
    What is this. What is this. What is this.


    Declaration.
    It is beautiful.
    Sentence.
    It is disturbing.
    Prayer.
    It is horrifying.


    Simply looking at the sight makes my head begin to pound. My existence itself rejects the sight before me, an instinct primal to everything I am screaming out in warning. I clutch the rail so that I don’t collapse. In the back of my mind, I register that Alan Giacosa has fled back down the stairwell, but my conscious mind lacks the ability for such complex thoughts.

    What is "wrong"?

    If you ask a group this question, you will receive a variety of answers. Wrong is incorrect, wrong is impossible, wrong is disgusting or disturbing or foolish.

    And this sight, these crystals, these things are wrong.

    The fear of a stronger being, of something within comprehension but merely outside your reach. The fear of a natural disaster beyond your control. The fear of a monster you cannot understand. The fear of a god you are nothing before. This is none of those.

    Plot. Scheme. Make your preparations. Cast your spells. Perform your calculations. Create. Destroy. Ask why. Slit your throat. None of it will do you any good.

    Not the fear of man or process or god or devil. It is all useless because this is the most primal fear.

    This is the fear of wrong.

    None of us could move. None of us could breathe. That feeling pressed down on us like a weight.

    How long was it before we regained our senses, before we were able to turn our heads away or clench our eyes shut?

    How long was it before we looked back at that impossible nightmare which terrified us for reasons we could not process?

    How long was it before we finally noticed that there was a body trapped within one of those great spires of crystal, its life snuffed out, its expression frozen in genuine rage from those moments before it died?

    ...Ah, so that’s where you were, Jack.
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    No points for guessing which planet that floor was based on, eh? Interesting webs are being weaved nonetheless.

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    Like a bat using echolocation, my Choir’s song of ignorance bounces off those [ruby=souls]divine sparks[/url] it seeks to blanket.
    Whiffed your tags.

    I wonder how this plays into Rengard's theory.
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    I wonder how this plays into Rengard's theory.
    The suspect apparently dying does hurt things, but who's to say?

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    No points for guessing which planet that floor was based on, eh?
    Best I can do are brownie points.

    Just as a general update, I managed to find the time during my move to wrap up the remainder of the story earlier this week, so chapter three will be out this Friday, and chapter four along with the epilogue will be out a week after.
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    ***


    My own abilities may be inadequate for what’s to come. The thought brings a sensation I cannot place.

    By the time we return down the stairs where Alan Giacosa waits, the initial effect of that sight has worn off- nonetheless, looking around, the others are every bit as shaken as I am. No, not merely shaken, but suspicious. Our shared expressions say enough.

    It makes no sense that this was a suicide, whether purposeful or accidental, given Jack’s expression. I’ve never seen him wear that sort of face; he had to have been in some sort of confrontation, most likely with the murderer. Even that is not certain, though. It could have been the work of someone else who simply believes Jack was the murderer, or even someone who wanted to eliminate him from the competition for one reason or another. I find those unlikely, however.

    “This is...an issue.” Roose is the next one to speak up- a bit of an understatement there. “Whoever did...that, it has to be one of us, but that material isn’t like anything I’ve seen.”

    I click my tongue. “That’s an oversimplification. We all reacted the same way. That, whatever it is, isn’t normal. One of us is carrying something like that around.”

    “So what are we supposed to do? Pat each other down? You really think the guy who killed Jack would be dumb enough to leave themselves open for that?” Hela growls out. I see her hands ball into fists at her side; she seems more frustrated by the situation than anything.

    “Well, should we not start with alibis? Where were each of you before the announcement? Rengard and I were out on the veranda for quite some time.” Elana takes the opportunity to interject. I can’t help but feel uneasy about the topic of alibis, though- not because I lack one, but because of how nebulous that prospect is. I can be reasonably certain it was not Elana, since I saw her not long after leaving the second story and had been with her up until the time of Alan’s announcement. Other than that, though? We don’t know exactly when this incident occurred, only that Alan discovered it some minutes ago. An alibi can’t be ironclad when we don’t know the time of the murder.

    Hela, meanwhile, seems to be increasingly incensed. She shoots Elana a harsh glare, almost accusatory. “I was lookin’ around in the library, alone. Not like that means anything. How do we know you and Ren didn’t work together on this, kill Jack with the promise of helping each other out after time’s up?”

    Elana, true to form, meets that accusation with a cold laugh. “Really? I was simply asking for an alibi, Hela, not making any accusations. I know the concept of decorum escapes you, but you could at least try to show some common courtesy.”

    “And what’s that supposed to mean?! When you start talking about alibis when we don’t know anything, it’s obvious that you’re trying to point the finger!” Hela’s hair starts to move, my eyes widening slightly. I shoot Roose a glance, and he nods in response, the two of us about to step in to defuse the situation, when-

    “Lahabrea.”

    A veritable torrent of magical energy erupts. Everyone present takes a step back from Elana, whose expression has frozen over. The suitcase behind her undoes itself, and empties its contents, a tower of bones that piles higher and higher. Some sort of imitation spatial quarantine? No, it’s not that the suitcase is emptying itself, but that it is reforming itself- it’s not a container, but something in a sealed form.

    The considerations of the suitcase, however, are tossed aside when its true form reveals itself. Standing at Elana’s side is a goliath that nearly reaches the ceiling, a monster of bone. I am no zoologist, but I can recognize some aspects. The most recognizable structure among them, though, is the mammoth’s skull at its crown, studded with flecks of tar. Seeing the tar, I realize something.

    ...ah, so that’s the sort of spiritual land she got her hands on. A ‘natural
    purgatory
    graveyard
    ’, is it? The waves of magical energy that ripple off of it by virtue of existing are what I could expect from ritual-class magecraft. Some points of our conversation from not long ago are placed into distinct context.

    She really did manage to overtake me. The realization only makes that fire return.

    “I see that this conversation will not be productive in the slightest. Now then, Hela, if you have nothing else to say, I will be returning to my own investigation.”

    None of us speak up in reply, simply attempting to process the sight before us as Elana and her familiars make their departure. I can’t help but feel that showing her hand like that to ‘win’ an argument was childish, but I suppose it would do the job in deterring others. She was commonly seen as the ‘weakest’ among us up until this point; could she have been feeling the pressure from that, and decided to show her ability to prevent the killer from targeting her next?

    Troublesome, how troublesome. I can’t make heads or tails of it.

    After we’ve been silent for a good few seconds, the butler sees it fit to voice his views. That’s right- even we struggled with the sight on the second story, I can only imagine what state he was in when he found that initially. “I believe that all of you should avoid the upstairs as a whole for the time being. Those crystals seem to be volatile, and if what occurred to sir Jack is any indication, are a threat even to you.”

    I doubt any of us were planning on going up there a second time, so that is rather pointless to say. This was almost certainly part of the killer’s plan- was there something hidden on the second story that could have pointed to them as the culprit? Yes, even if an alternative explanation is possible, I can’t help but think this is the work of Cerridwen’s murderer. While the thought of what those crystals are or of finding that evidence is enticing, I hardly relish the prospect of going up there for a second time.

    “No, I’ll be examining it. Those…things resonated with some aspect of my body. There is a heavenly concept involved there.”

    Our eyes all turn back to Roose as he speaks back up. Even if he’s doing that, why is he advertising it? Has he worked out something that I have not? Either way, investigating those crystals puts Roose at risk, both from the crystals themselves and from sending out the signal to Jack’s murderer that leaving Roose alive is a risk to their cover. Or, if Roose himself is the murderer, it could be his attempt to ensure that all the evidence is covered up, under the pretense of investigation.

    -Of course, all of those concerns only apply if he’s alone. Elana has surpassed me as a magus. Roose is putting his life on the line to win. Hela has grown incredibly as a person. Seeing each of their resolves, I force myself to move forwards.

    “...I’ll join you, in that case.”

    You’re not leaving me behind, Roose.


    ***


    “We’ve already seen it before, and we’re prepared this time, so the effect ought to not be as significant.”

    I click my tongue in response, shooting Roose a halfway-incredulous look. “We should still be cautious. The sight of those things alone was enough to have that potent of an effect on us. Not to mention that it managed to kill Jack.”

    Roose goes silent at that while we ascend the stairs. As we crest over the top, remaining on the stairway but now with the sight of the second story spread out before us, we both go still. My breath catches in my throat, my vision starts to spin, but this time, I’m able to rein those impulses in. My eyes go to Jack, who remains trapped in that spire of crystal like a fly in amber.

    “How did one of us get access to this sort of material? Jack was not weak.” I heave out a sharp exhale, resting a hand against the railing for that bit of extra stability as I examine his face through the tint of the crystal.

    Roose shakes his head, his eyes fixed on the same point as my own. “That’s an understatement. We had our...differences, but that doesn’t make this any less concerning. If it came to a genuine fight and he was adequately prepared, I’m not sure that I would be able to win against him.”

    I can’t think of a point of dissent. In terms of personal combat power, Roose is undoubtedly the most powerful among us, the consequence of modifying his body to the extent that he has. Conversely, Jack himself was not strong, but ‘what was around’ Jack was. With preparation, he had the most versatile set of abilities out of any of us. For someone like that to be brought down, that’s every bit as concerning as the strangeness of these crystals themselves.

    A strange light thrums through each of those formations of crystals, pulsing and writhing within them. Coupled with the disorientation that I feel from laying eyes on them, I’m nearly convinced they’re moving, but they are thankfully still. Nonetheless, they do not ‘feel’ like mere crystals. It is not the result of sight, but some sense beyond the physical- they feel alive, they feel like something that ‘should not exist in this world’.

    “I thought so. With these crystals interfering, it’s impossible to work out what the meaning of this floor was.” Roose’s words draw me from my thought process; when I turn my head, I can see the concentration on his face, I can feel the magical energy flowing around him.

    Call it childish competitiveness, but I cannot help but do the same.

    ”Athoth, Eloaios, Astaphaios, Yao, Sabaoth, Adonin, Sabbataios.”

    Once more, the threads of my consciousness cover the space of the second floor, but this time-

    “Tch.”

    -My mind recoils before it can even complete that process, a pounding headache forming and my vision flickering for a split-second before I reassert it. That wasn’t just something more complex than I could analyze, it was something that defied my analysis from the first principle. My magecraft could scarcely even penetrate into that space before it died off, unable to exist beyond a scant few inches into that threshold.

    Those crystals defied magecraft? No, more than that, it was as if foundational access had been cut off once I entered their domain. The second floor has become another world entirely? Is something like that even possible?

    “Looks like trying to examine the floor itself is no longer an option.” I reluctantly agree, rubbing at my forehead with my free hand as I share Roose’s look of frustration. Just what are these things? Even a high-grade conceptual armament wouldn’t give me this sort of impression.

    “I can try to break off a piece, but you can tell as well, can’t you? If I attempt that, it might...respond, and I do not exactly relish the thought of turning out like Jack.” Roose is poring over the crystals now, not merely the one sealing Jack. I can’t help but agree. The impression that I have from this space is that of a slumbering beast- if you step directly into its maw, you will be swallowed up.

    I nod slightly, mulling over how to progress. “Magecraft doesn’t reach far into it, but it affects the border of it. Maybe that’s because of the Bounded Fields separating the second story from the rest of the building.” I’m thinking aloud, by now, but we’re past worrying by things such as that. “...I could try and affect that border with my Choir. If it can be made ignorant, then you should be able to retrieve a piece from there without the rest…’waking up’.”

    At that, Roose lets out a sharp laugh in response. “And if it does wake up, or if the chunk we extract starts expanding, every man for himself? Fine, I don’t know what we can do otherwise.”

    Nodding, I oblige. Once more, the Heavenly Choir of Fools graces the world, their song spilling from my lips. In this moment, I am the Demiurge, robbing the world of its wisdom and supplanting it with ignorance. I watch with rapt attention as I maintain the song, and see the light in those closest crystals dim just a hair. I feel my head pound- for all the absurdity of what we are doing, I cannot deny that it makes my blood boil.

    Among the apprentices, Roose has always shown the most resistance to my Choir; unsurprisingly, it takes little time before he breaks out of its ignorance. I maintain the song as he makes the same observation that I had made moments prior, looking to me with a nod before dashing forwards.

    It’s somewhat awe-inspiring to watch. It’s as though he is flying, jumping through the air towards that border, muscles tensing and his own fall slowing through some means I cannot quite gauge based off of sight alone. Without touching the ground, a hand darts out like a precision instrument and breaks off a chunk of crystal no larger than a fingernail.

    Though his trajectory should surely mean he will fall onto the carpet of crystal, his movement reverses, thrusting back through the air at an illogical angle to rejoin me on the stairway. Only when he has set that portion of crystal down on the stairway and we have both placed some distance between ourselves and it do I let my song die down. We stand there with bated breath, waiting for any sign of it expanding, before letting out a sigh of relief and moving to retrieve it.

    Roose holds it between his finger and thumb as he examines it; looking at it myself, this piece of crystal seems somehow inert, inactive now that it has been separated from the mass as a whole. Is it simply that it is too small to function appropriately, or is there a condition needed for it to ‘awaken’ as such? I can only hope it is the former- the last thing we need is to accidentally trigger such a thing.

    “Why did you help me?”

    Yet again, Roose’s words jar me from my thoughts, confusion flitting across my face as he goes on.

    “I know what the general sentiment’s been- I’m considered the favorite to win, so the rest of you have been cooperating. Isn’t it against your interests to help me?”

    I pause, looking at him in silence for a good few seconds. Why did I help him? Because I feared missing a discovery? Potentially. For concern that he would cover up evidence if left unsupervised? Perhaps. The thought that I’ve just given him a tool to kill the rest of us does not escape me, and yet…

    “I cannot say myself. It simply seemed like the best course of action.”

    We face one another in silence for several seconds. I’m not sure which of us is the first to break it, the barest trace of a laugh, but before long we are both laughing in kind. “Well, I appreciate it, Rengard.” Roose’s free hand balls into a light fist and strikes at my arm- once again, I have to hold back showing the extent to which that genuinely hurts. “Contrary to what the rest of you have decided, I genuinely need the help.”

    Seeing the confusion flit across my face, he pulls his arm back, letting it fall to his side as his eyes return to the shard of crystal. “If we were competing on the basis of who best succeeds his legacy? I mean no offense to any of you, but I am sure we would be in agreement that the title would fall to me. This, though, is...different. And besides that, Rengard, he was killed. Not just death, but being killed, in his home, in his stronghold of power. If that happened to him, then…”

    “...then what have we been trying to accomplish?” I finish the sentence for him. Laughter has died off; the tone has grown somber. The man who I saw as a god is dead. For me, that was enough of a surprise, but now in Roose, I see something that I have never once seen him show. He is uncertain.

    “It feels as if I am still simply tracing his footsteps. My research is the most advanced out of ours, but it takes the most from his. I had not seen anything wrong with it before, but now? If he was flawed enough to die like that, what have I actually achieved?”

    My mouth opens and closes silently in response. Try as I can, I cannot find the words to respond. There is something wrong in those words of his, something I do not agree with. Cerridwen Valdyrius did not die because he was flawed. No matter how I view the situation, I cannot see this as occurring because he was not perfect. At the same time, I see the frustration carved into Roose’s face- he does not believe his own words.

    “...that is a lie, isn’t it?” I have started speaking before I’ve made the conscious thought to even open my mouth. “Your actual worry is not that you have created something flawed, it is that you can lose even though you do not have those flaws.”

    A perfect image is not invincible. Seeing our master fall, he and I have realized that even ‘god’ can die. He turns away- I cannot blame him, the air hanging over us is far heavier than it has any right being, thanks to my words.

    “...you’re supposed to be inept at these things, Rengard.” Ah, but Roose, I am. I only know because I am feeling the very same thing. “I’ll be doing some analysis on this to see if I can decipher what its celestial meaning is. After I find out, I will let you know what it is, you have my word. Of course, I’ll be making use of that information for myself before I tell you, otherwise I don’t have any gain from spending my time doing that.” His words have an air of finality to them. That is only reasonable- after saying such a thing, we cannot move immediately back to idle chatter.

    Frankly, I can’t do much to protest his offer, either. Roose is more capable in such analysis than I am.

    And so we go on our way.


    ***


    Only after leaving Roose do I realize the depths of my frustration. My sole suspect, the one who I had pinned everything on, has had his life snuffed out- even if my Choir was unable to verify it, the odds of him somehow surviving in that state is virtually nonexistent.

    Once again, then, I’m faced with the problem of finding a suspect to begin with. I can’t imagine any of us sans Jack being capable of undoing the Mystic Locks, and I can’t fathom Jack himself being the killer given the circumstances. Could it have been a cooperative endeavor? Jack attended to the locks, while an unknown other killed Cerridwen? Then, the murderer acted on their own, killing Jack to tie that loose end up, for fear that they would be betrayed. Certainly, it’s possible, but coming back to the motive- why would Jack do such a thing?

    Even to the end, I don’t believe that I ever fully understood Jack, but I also do not believe any of the others did. What motivated him is something that I cannot grasp, and largely due to that, I cannot envision an offer of this kind that he would accept.

    My frustrations lead me back to the master bedroom. With everyone having investigated Cerridwen’s corpse by now, concerns of sabotage are less relevant. Somewhat to my surprise, though, I have company when I arrive. Elana vor Enkicen and her familiars, that titan of bone she called ‘Lahabrea’ chief among them, stand inside of the bedroom. The familiars stand guard, examining me with a menacing tinge to their hollow sockets as I enter. It’s not until a few seconds pass that my fellow competitor seems to actually register my presence, straightening up from her examination and rounding about to face me.

    “Rengard. How did the discussion fare, after I departed?”

    I see an initial guardedness in her eyes grow lax when she sees who is present. That’s right- if nothing else, we can be relatively secure in the notion that neither of us are responsible for Jack’s death. That’s at least a favorable outcome, comparatively speaking.

    I am merely able to offer a shrug in response- even if I trust her, I would rather not disclose the details of my collaboration with Roose when I do not have to. “Relatively little occurred. Everyone has resumed their own investigations.”

    “I see. The pressure of Jack’s death and our remaining time is hanging over this place.” I quirk an eyebrow up at her reaction. Is that how she feels? Looking at her now, she does seem...stressed, almost. I cannot say I enjoy the paranoia looming over us now, but for me, even in spite of the situation, even in spite of my frustration, something about this chaos is entertaining. Whether Elana feels the same way, though, I dare not ask. However...

    “...how much time do we have remaining?”

    My question draws an incredulous look from her. Truth be told, the matter of timekeeping had slipped my mind. I hardly have a clue for how many hours I have spent poring over rooms pointlessly. As I would expect from Elana, though, she doesn’t even seem to need to check the answer, before she’s responded. “Roughly nine hours.”

    “What-” My mind skids to a halt. No, I had known that time had passed. Hours spent combing the details of rooms in search of something, hours spent chittering away on the veranda, hours spent pacing and thinking, I had known that a significant length of time had passed, but fifteen hours? It does not feel like it has been fifteen hours, not even remotely. It still feels like night to me. I do not even feel tired- if anything, compared to when I first awoke this evening, I feel better rested.

    …’It still feels like night to me’?

    “Elana, how do you feel? Physically, I mean. Do you not want to rest?” I try to not give away my thoughts too easily, but given how frantic my tone is, I am sure she noticed- I can only hope she does not come to the same realization as myself.

    She sighs slightly in response, shooting me another look of blunt incredulity, but behind that gaze, I can feel the wheels of her mind turning. “Do not be ridiculous. We are made of sturdier stuff than humans, Rengard.”

    -In other words, no. Which means…

    ”Athoth, Eloaios, Astaphaios, Yao, Sabaoth, Adonin, Sabbataios.”

    For what I hope is the final time, I strain my mind to expand it across the floor. The Bounded Fields littering it are more complex than I can analyze- minutes are absurdly insufficient, I would need months if I were to understand the minutiae here. However, that is not what I am after.

    My mind flashes back to the empty sky glimpsed from under the veranda. My mind flashes back to what I observed about the organization of this story’s barriers- magical energy concentrates at the site of the master bedroom, like running down a funnel. What if it is not merely magical energy, but this floor’s celestial meaning?

    In the outside world, the Sun hangs in the sky. However, in this world, I am just as rested as I would be during the night. Not merely that, but I am more rested on this floor than I was on the one where I took my rest.

    Is it really so simple? How basic of a problem is this?

    I do not have time to address Elana’s confusion. I simply depart- the shape of the workshop is becoming clearer. I will not allow myself to lose this thread.


    ***


    It’s always in the last place you look, isn’t it?

    After a search that’s run lengthier than I care to admit, I discover the one I was searching for in the library. How fortunate, I had been worried that he had been made into the next victim, given how long I needed to locate him.

    Alan Giacosa looks...troubled, to say the least. It seems he might have even been pacing prior to my arrival, from the sounds I heard as I entered the library. With my appearance, though, he freezes up, eyes darting over to face me before he seems to relax, his expression smoothing over with a practiced ease. “Sir Schvieglot, a pleasure.”

    How commendable. If I hadn’t seen his expression moments earlier, I’d scarcely know that anything was wrong. He’s far more skilled in that regard than any of us...or, that would be my impression, at least, but with the notion that one of us has murdered our master as well as Jack, that may not be the case.

    Regardless, I’ve sought Alan out. I require answers, and he’s the only one capable of providing them. Even then, though, if he is internally panicking all the while, what information I manage to work out of him may not be as usable as I would like.

    “You have permission to speak freely, Alan. If I had a reason to be hostile towards you, I’d have done so prior to now.”

    As I speak, the butler heaves out a sharp exhale, his expression falling flat as composure slides off of it just as cleanly as it was plastered on. “You’ll have to forgive me, sir Schvieglot. With the late lord’s death, I was rather well-braced; he had informed me in advance, we had made preparations, all of that. With the death of sir Jack, however…”

    “...if he could die, so could you. You’ve realized that you lack control over the situation.” I finish for him, nodding slightly as I do. A quiet laugh slips past my lips, prompting a look of confusion from him as I go on. “Were you not the one who said you enjoyed the fear of death? This should be ideal, no?”

    Alan freezes up, looking to me in silence for some scant moments, before a laugh of his own takes form. “It is different when all of the variables are outside of your control, sir Schvieglot. Besides, fear in the moment is crippling regardless- it is overcoming that fear which makes it worthwhile.” His voice cuts off abruptly, as though he was about to say something else, but refrained. ‘Not that you would understand’, something along those lines, perhaps?

    “Well, regardless, I’ve come seeking your help.” I cut in. As tempting as it is to hear more in this line of conversation, every second wasted here could prove crucial. My eyes flit around on impulse, as if to verify that nobody is lurking within this space, even if I already know none do. “This workshop is based on different celestial bodies. The second floor can no longer be analyzed, but the first floor is the Moon. I assume that was the core of my master’s ritual to create an eternal red moon.” The reasoning I made takes form, each word I speak making me more sure of my conclusion. “But, nothing we’ve observed so far has the genuine nature of a workshop, and unlike previous visits, we have pored over everything. There are no sites where experimentation would occur, there is no foundational cornerstone for his ritual, none of that. The ‘true’ workshop is somewhere else. I would like to know where.”

    I am impressed by how well Alan keeps his composure. Save for his eyebrows lifting, he keeps his expression remarkably still. “...that is correct, sir Schvieglot. However, I am bound by contract. I am capable of granting a single individual access to the ‘true’ workshop, as you put it, but I am only able to do so for the next Dead Apostle Ancestor number twelve.”

    My hopes are lifted, and then immediately dashed. I cannot say the thought never occurred to me- the others have likely reached similar conclusions, after all. However, before I can say my farewells to Alan, he continues on.

    “...however, I was granted discretion to reveal something similar. I cannot be sure if this will be of use to the investigation, but perhaps it will. I will consider this ‘insurance’, in the hope that you locate the killer before they turn their eyes on another.”

    My expression contorts, looking to the butler with a tinge of suspicion. “...and how do you know that I am not the killer?”

    His own face smooths back over, leveling a calm smile towards me. “I do not. I have to place my bet in one corner eventually though, no? As I said, sir Schvieglot, it is about overcoming the fear of death.” As he speaks, he takes a few paces towards one of the bookshelves, laying a hand on it. I catch the slightest flicker of his own magical energy before I see that section of the shelf retract into the wall. A path downwards is made visible, a hidden entrance like the sort you’d see in a two-bit horror fiction.

    A secret entrance in a bookshelf? Really, Cerridwen? I’m sure it’s perfectly refined in its construction, I’m sure that the entrance would only respond to yours or Alan’s magical energy, and I’m sure that attempts to ‘break in’ would be as futile as any other attempt to muck with your workshop, but still, that feels so childish.

    “...as expected of my master, I suppose.”

    Saying those words, I follow Alan into the place below.


    ***


    After I’ve entered the hidden stairwell, the entrance shuts behind me. How comfortingly claustrophobic. I attempt to examine the wards from this side, but with Alan leading the way down and my own time limited, I’m unable to make much progress.

    Down into darkness we progress, until the steps level out into a sizable room, easily the size of the personal library above. My eyes widen before flitting around the confines of the space. The walls and floor are simple packed dirt, no doubt stabilized with layer upon layer of magecraft. The room itself is rather barren- scrolls adorn each of the walls, their contents written in some form of code that I cannot decipher. The script written on each of them ripples and changes each time I blink, as if it is constantly updating. A set of five magic circles are imprinted into the floor. A desk is piled high with countless notes.

    However, all of that is secondary to the centerpiece. In the center of the room, floating in place, wreathed in protections that would no doubt destroy whatever body part I dared to reach out towards it with, is a spherical crystal the size of my fist. Motes of light trickle out through those protections and flow seamlessly into those scrolls on the walls.

    “You are aware of what that is, I trust? The late lord explained the theory to me, but I could not properly grasp it.”

    I barely even process Alan’s words as I stare forwards at the crystal, nodding dumbly in response. It likely takes a full minute before I’ve gathered my wits enough to look away from it. “...yes, I have only heard of them in legends, but I believe I know what that is.”

    A peerless information storage device. A pinnacle of craft from material transmutation. A photonic crystal. He had one of these here?

    I’m not so foolish to think that I could reach that crystal. Breaking down Cerridwen’s protections would require far more time than I have, so instead, I move to the scrolls. Their information is fluid, constantly adjusting in a script I cannot read. Some sort of code, whether for security or for convenience as a way of compressing information. Standing in the way of those motes of light does nothing, neither affecting myself nor the rate at which the scrolls ‘update’.

    The scrolls seem to be receiving information from the photonic crystal, and are a way of outputting that information. But, what information does the crystal itself contain? Is it drawing information from the floors above, or from some other source? I cannot say without a lengthy examination- if I had to guess, I would assume the former, but then that poses the question of why.

    I spare a glance at Alan, but he merely shrugs in reply. I suppose that is to be expected. If he cannot grasp the nature of a photonic crystal, he will be of little help here. How frustrating- any of his former butlers would have been able to answer me. Though, they may not have shown me this room to begin with, so I must make do with what I have been given.

    This is not Cerridwen’s true workshop, but it must carry a meaning, it must have a purpose to exist. It being underground cannot be a coincidence. It is a foundation for the other two floors, a grounding mechanism. It receives and consolidates information.

    Does this space have its own heavenly concept? Surely not. Attempting to connect an underground space to something in the heavens is fighting an uphill battle- if Cerridwen’s goal was that, he would have simply installed this anywhere other than underground. Though...the Earth, perhaps? The Earth as a foundation, a grounding place. Yes, it is possible.

    The castle of Cerridwen Valdyrius is his magnum opus, the ritual he will use to craft his thesis of an eternal red moon. It only makes sense that it would be rooted in the Earth, as the Earth is what he ultimately seeks to cast the red moon over. And that, in turn, explains why the first floor is the Moon, hanging over the-

    ...wait.

    Above the Earth is the Moon, so what is above the Moon? What is the second floor? What is that harsher world?

    He sought an eternal red moon. A place where the Moon forever hangs in the sky. However, even if the Moon is there forever, it will be outshone when the Sun rises. So then, the solution...

    “Earth, then Moon, then Sun.”

    A solar eclipse. The castle is the embodiment of a solar eclipse. The second floor’s meaning is that of the Sun, hidden and restrained just as much as that of the Moon. It is such a basic answer, but one a Dead Apostle would never consider. After all, what sort of vampire would build a workshop that held a Sun? But if that is the case, if our assumptions were wrong and this castle is a place where the Sun can exist-

    “Alan, I must be on my way. If you choose to remain here for your own safety, I wish you luck.”

    “I appreciate the concern, sir Schvieglot, but I will decline. If I am hidden away here, it is that much easier for the murderer to do away with me in secret.” The butler’s reply carries a glint in his eye as he speaks up. “...besides, it seems that you may have just realized something beyond me. I pray that this conflict soon reaches a conclusion.”

    Sparing him one last glance, I depart. Back to consolidate my theory. Back to peer at the empty sky.


    ***


    Once again, I find myself resting against the railing of the veranda, looking towards the blank sky of this world. I reach up to touch at my own face, and find that an unbidden grin has split it. Yes, I’ve just learned something valuable beyond words; my soul knows this, even if my mind has yet to catch up.

    A matter of organizing the information, then. The castle of Cerridwen Valdyrius is a solar eclipse, and the great ritual at the core of the castle is to use it as a foundation to cast that concept over the world, the concept of a Moon that drowns out the Sun. With that, he sought to create an eternal red moon.

    The second floor’s concept must be that of the Sun. I can only laugh at the realization- how very like my master to place the guest bedrooms in such a place. Still, at least I can be sure he did not intend to place us in danger by it. The ‘meanings’ of the floors were no doubt inactive, as otherwise we would have been reduced to ash upon stepping up there.

    A cold breath leaves me as I focus my thoughts. This is the critical juncture for my understanding. I had never even considered that this workshop was a place where sunlight existed- the empty sky is a claim against such, but if it did, the mystery of the state of Cerridwen’s body is solved. If the murderer found a way to interfere with the workshop, to shine ‘sunlight’ into the master bedroom, Cerridwen would be struck down by his own brilliance. The focusing arrays of the first floor, meant to concentrate moonlight, would become the tool of his own death.

    Not only that, but this explains the method used to kill Jack. However they got ahold of that material, if I assume that Jack’s killer and Cerridwen’s are one and the same, the choice of method is clear- to make the second floor unrecognizable as the Sun. If one of us had realized this, then it reveals the method of Cerridwen’s death- the facts line up.

    ...however, this does not solve the core problem.

    Even if my theory is correct, it is nonsensical. None of us have the ability to interfere with our master’s workshop to such a degree. Besides that, even if one of us did, there is no motive. Elana, Hela, Roose, myself- none of us have a motive for the murder unless we were aware of the game beforehand. Alan similarly lacks both ability and motive, though in different regards. The only rational answer is one where there is another person here, but someone who has not only managed to infiltrate Cerridwen’s castle of all places, murder its owner, and then remain hidden for hours? Not only would such a figure be a monster beyond my perception, but they would be gone from this castle by now, if they had such talents.

    There has to be something I am missing. Cerridwen Valdyrius was killed for an unknown reason by someone who manipulated his workshop through an unknown means to accomplish that, but knowing that does not put me any closer. What is the missing thread?


    ***


    I return from the veranda. It is all I can do to return to the salon, where I find Alan Giacosa. True to his word, he does not seem content to wait out the remaining hours in the place below. I cannot say if I agree with his decision.

    Somewhat to my surprise, Roose is here as well. He and I share a glance as I take a seat. At first glance, he seems to be doing nothing, but I have no doubt that his clenched fist contains the crystal we retrieved. The steady flow of magical energy indicates that something is being done. He has either found his answer and is poring over his own thoughts, or he is coming close. When he informs me, I will know what the Sun was overwritten with, but even then I can’t help but feel at a loss.

    ...no, that is a lie. Fundamentally, I do not feel at a loss. Something about this has been exhilarating beyond anything from my past century of life, but lying parallel to that excitement is frustration. I must do better, I must continue moving. That childish refusal of mine tugs me forwards.

    “My, a small gathering here, I see?”

    I turn to face the voice that cuts through the silent air, as does Alan. Roose seems to be too wrapped up in his thoughts to acknowledge the new arrival, but does so moments later. Monsters at her side, Elana vor Enkicen greets us with an airy laugh. “Staying grouped up together so that you cannot be picked off individually? Quite despondent, but I certainly understand the rationale.”

    Is that what it looks like? Well, I can’t question the thought process. In a circumstance like this, where one is like Roose who requires time and thought, where one is like Alan who is virtually helpless, and where one is like me who simply needs to pore over his own thoughts, it makes sense to group up. One among us has shown a willingness to kill their competitors, after all. “Well, I suppose I can join all of you. I suppose that you have all hit dead ends in some regard. Truth be told, I am a touch frustrated as well.” Drawing her own conclusions on our motivation, Elana moves to take a seat of her own, a fair distance from either Roose or myself, while her familiar stands ‘guard’.

    “You all too, huh? Way this is looking, time’s gonna run out and we’ll be shit outta luck.”

    The last member of our group rears her head, drawing my gaze as she rests frustratedly against the farthest wall. It seems that we’re all here, joining hands as the clock ticks down.

    “It’s quite annoying. I simply can’t fathom why any of us would do this. A murder must have a motive, no?” I see a flicker of annoyance cross Elana’s face as she sits back. It’s somewhat gratifying to see that the others are struggling as well, but at the same time...simply doing as well as them is not my goal.

    “I can’t work heads or tails out of that, myself. One of us had to have done it, but it just seems impossible.” I do not mention that I have worked out the likely method of murder- even if it is not useful to me now, handing that away for free will not be in my interests.

    Roose sighs as he sits up in his seat, opening his clenched fist to reveal the shard of crystal we had retrieved. I cannot help but smirk as I see the other three present stiffen up at the sight of it, before realizing that it seems to be inert. “Not only that, but this thing only raises more questions. And that’s without even bothering with the question of why one of us would see fit to kill Jack.”

    Yes, nothing about this makes sense. Not just Cerridwen’s death, but Jack’s. While I have my guess for why that specific method of murder was chosen, the choice to murder Jack is another question entirely. None of us would do that on an impromptu whim- Jack was not so incompetent as to be defeated by that. But, at the same time, Jack had no reason to be specifically picked out by the killer.

    He was not a skilled investigator. He was an apt magus, but not more threatening than the rest of us to such a significant degree. It is impossible that he found something that the rest of us did not. All his investigation even consisted of was walking around and taking his moronic samples-

    “...ah.”

    My exhale draws the attention of the others, but I am no longer paying them any attention. My mind whirs to life, recreating the image of the master bedroom, of the first sample I witnessed Jack take from my late master’s body.

    The murderer did not want others to learn of their method of killing Cerridwen, as without that knowledge, everything else is merely circumstantial evidence or vague conjecture. If you do not know how the victim died, everything else is pointless. However, the one who could reveal that answer was Jack.

    The sample he had taken from Cerridwen’s body would grow, germinate, and reveal its nature. Jack would learn from it how Cerridwen had died. As a result, he had to be silenced. The murderer knew that Jack would learn of the method, and so, the murderer killed him.

    “Roose Pyrisius, Elana vor Enkicen, Hela Belvarien, Jack, Alan Giacosa, and Rengard Schvieglot all lack the motive and the ability to murder Cerridwen Valdyrius.”

    Events flash through my mind, tying together as I come to a realization. Acting differently than I had known them. Forgetting information they should have recalled. Breaking free of a spell that is meant to be their bane. Being the only one aware of Jack’s first sample.

    My body feels like it is burning. My vision is swimming, yet it feels more clear than I have ever once known it. This feeling, all of the excitement and frustration I have felt wells up in my throat as I turn my head towards the murderer of Cerridwen Valdyrius.

    And so- I attain catharsis.

    “You are not Hela Belvarien, are you?”
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    Never thought I'd see the La Brea tar pits mentioned in context with Fate. And I guess one of the consciousnesses Hela was messing with overwrote her somehow? Given how she manipulates hair, I'm reminded of Coronzon from Index. I wonder how overwriting the Sun with Mercury affects the magecraft of the castle.

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    The next few days will be busier for me than I'd like, so I'll be releasing this early.

    Thanks to those who have read and those who have commented. Hope that you enjoy.

    ***

    4 | Demiurge


    4 | Demiurge


    ***


    My own abilities may be inadequate for what’s to come. The thought makes my blood boil.

    Hela merely laughs in response to my accusation before that laugh fades away into annoyance. The look she levels my way bears equal parts indignation and incredulity, convincing to the point where I almost let myself believe that it is genuine. “What’re you talking about, Ren?” I do not need to look around to know that the others here are mirroring her words in spirit. The nature of what I had just said is something absurd, after all.

    My Magic Circuits open as I take a step back, putting at least some level of distance between myself and Hela. In my periphery, I see the others tense up, no doubt worried I am about to lash out in violence.

    A deep breath steadies me, and I still my own excitement. Focus, Rengard- here is your critical juncture.

    “Our master was killed by sunlight. There is a basement here- I will show you if you do not believe me- which bears the concept of the Earth. This floor bears the concept of the Moon, and the one above us is the Sun.” As I speak those words, I catch a bare glimpse of Roose stiffening up from the corner of my eye, but for now my vision is fixed squarely on Hela. “The murderer manipulated the workshop to focus ‘sunlight’ into his bedroom, killing him.”

    A low growl leaves Hela as she takes a step forwards in my direction. I see her hair start to move. “Even if we buy that, how the hell-” Ah, I should think that this is troublesome, but this childlike glee refuses to release me.

    “-Let me finish.” I cut in with a firmness that surprises even myself, and only then do I realize that I am smiling. “Jack was killed because he was in a position to learn that. The sample he took from Cerridwen’s body during our investigation would reveal that to him, and the only ones who could know he took that sample are you and I.”

    “Rengard, perhaps you should not go this far.”

    Whoever said those words, I do not pay them any mind. All that I can see now is the target of my accusation, my enemy, the threat to my future.

    “-But, that isn’t all. None of us have the ability to kill the master in such a way, nor do we have a reason to. That rationale goes away if we consider the possibility of an impostor. You are not Hela Belvarien. Hela Belvarien would not forget the protections she herself helped the master install. She would not propose an alliance between others. And…” My lips part, baring my teeth. “She would never escape my Choir’s effect as quickly as you did. None of it makes sense. You are the ‘extra person’, impersonating one of us.”

    ‘Hela’ gnashes her teeth, hair standing out like spikes as she looks to the others. “He’s lost it! Don’t tell me any of you guys are believing this?”

    I catch the barest glimpse of Roose stiffening up again, but it isn’t until he starts to speak that my attention is drawn. “...these crystals.” He lifts his hand, again revealing that inert shard the two of us acquired. The air is getting to all of us- it has to be, for my own competitor to stand at my side. “Their celestial concept is Mercury, but it’s past that. It isn’t simply something with Mercury’s concept, it’s like a black hole from a magical perspective. It’s something from outside this world’s laws. Rengard is correct in that much, none of us should have the ability to acquire and weaponize something like this.”

    “Ah, I can confirm that sir Schvieglot’s hypothesis is ‘possible’. If one were to enter the true workshop, it would be possible to shine sunlight into the master bedroom, though one would damage the controls in the process. However, that would require entering the true workshop, which is borderline impossible.” Alan wears the same composed look and amused glint that I had seen of him before. Heat swells in my body, my soul sharpening down as Hela’s expression grows more and more manic.

    “This is crazy! Are all of you seriously-”

    “Hela, I have a proposal.” Ah, Elana does not share my excitement from the sound of it. Well, I suppose that’s fair- if I am correct, this means my victory. It is surprising enough that Roose leapt to my aid. “Allow us to examine the spirits in your hair. Even an impostor wouldn’t be able to perfectly replicate your magecraft under scrutiny.”

    I feel the grin splitting my face grow that much wider, and take a single step forwards in the direction of my opponent. This time, she is the one to step back. “Yes, Hela. An impostor could simply move your hair with rudimentary magecraft, but someone cannot replicate your spirits. If I am wrong, then I will forfeit my position in the game. Simply submit yourself to examination.” Why am I saying this? I could be incorrect, or even if I am correct, the impostor could have mimicked her magecraft beyond my expectations, but I cannot stop myself anymore. The grin splitting my face refuses to let me take a single step backwards.

    ‘Hela’ freezes, her eyes flitting back and forth to and from each figure standing opposite her. Finally, she slumps forwards with a dull sigh. “...first Jack standing guard last night, now you with a small mountain of circumstantial evidence? How frustrating. I commend you, Rengard Schvieglot.”

    My eyes widen. I feel the air practically charged with unspent energy, and finally let myself look to the others, all of us wearing similar expressions of shock. That, that was a confession, yes? If that’s the case, then…

    A quiet cough leaves Alan Giacosa as he faces me. “I suppose that is as clear cut as it can be. Congratulations, sir Schvieglot.”

    ...I won?

    Just like that, I won?

    My lips part to let out a laugh, but-

    “I had hoped to take this castle legitimately, so the others would not be breathing down my neck and interrupting my work, but very well. Now there’s nothing for it. Eliminate the observers, begin work, then I will have to deal with the forces of the guarantor when he comes to assault this place for my ‘illegitimate actions’. How problematic.”

    My excitement does not dim by even a hair, but nonetheless, the air freezes over.

    That presence the culprit had begins to change. No, physically she remains the same, but in a sense beyond either the physical or magical, in nothing other than that ephemeral concept of "presence", something changes. Her eyes harden, that prior brash nature lost in a mad undercurrent as a primal glint forms in them. Her posture straightens up ever so slightly, but that simple gesture causes her to appear a new person. Nothing has changed. Nothing has changed at all in any relevant way besides her demeanor, so why, why does she seem so different than she had been seconds earlier?

    My instincts scream out.

    Run away.

    You’ll die. You’ll die. You’ll die.

    There is to be no opposing this existence.

    You will be utterly destroyed and returned unto the dust from whence you came.


    It is only then that I realize that the air had not frozen over. The air is not cold. It is merely that every scrap of magical energy in this room is flowing in her direction.

    “Lahabrea!”

    At Elana’s impulsive order, the titan of bone lunges for the impostor. The ground, the air, the world shakes with the sheer physical might of the beast. Even Roose would struggle to cope with that monster. Hela Belvarien will be utterly eradicated.

    -However, this is not Hela Belvarien.

    ”Release.”

    Her body changes. Her hair, still extended out in all directions, thrums with a strange force. From the neck-length down, it falls away as if cleanly sliced off. Pearls of light coalesce along each strand of severed hair, each pearl connected to one another by countless strings. Behind her hangs a tangled net of those pearls and strings. And, just as the Lahabrea descends upon her-

    -She vanishes from sight, reappearing a mere split-second later at the side of Elana.

    Even Alan, who is not knowledgeable of magecraft, displays shock. It goes without saying how the rest of us react. Teleportation in this workshop should be impossible, even beyond the norm of the outside world. Is it a consequence of that thing she ‘released’, that net of-

    ...no.

    “I-Indra’s Web?”

    No, no, no. That is impossible. That magecraft does not exist in this world anymore.

    “Mercury. That thing is Mercury?”

    Is this the first time I have heard Roose truly terrified?

    “...you have caught quite the target, Rengard.”

    It is impressive that Elana can keep her composure, when an impossible figure stands within arms reach of her. The three of us all seem to have realized it, realized who, no, what had killed our master.

    Ah, that answers my question. A motive does not exist unless one knows of the succession game beforehand, but of course Indra’s Web would be able to learn of such a thing in advance.

    I laugh. It is terrifying. It is impossible. It is exhilarating.

    “I always expected that Hela’s instability would be the death of her. A foreign contaminant with sufficient mental energy to slip into her matrix, and then overwhelm her self-possession. Is that it?”

    Why am I speaking? Why am I smiling?

    “Well done, you are not far off. But, I do not have time to speak.” My manic joy is met with dismissive indifference from the impostor wearing a stolen face. “This body is unsuitable for dealing with you three at once, so I will allow you the same dignity as your master.”

    A legendary figure. A monster among monsters. An unkillable god who was struck down by an impossible existence.

    That individual vanishes from sight.

    “Ah…”

    I touch my face. I am still smiling.

    Very well, then.

    Once more, let us begin the game.


    ***


    With her absence, those who remain nearly collapse on the spot. My eyes flit around to the others- Roose and Hela wear similar expressions of disbelief, while Alan displays an overwhelming confusion that overlays any sense of fear.

    Elana breaks the silence, turning towards Lahabrea and running a hand against the bone with a sigh. “Ah, what a shame. If I had known we were competing with her, I would have forfeited from the beginning.”

    Roose offers a nod in reply, which only seems to amplify Alan’s confusion on the matter. I suppose that I ought to resolve that, a sigh heaving its way from me as I explain. “An unknown lifeform was discovered in South America some millennia in the past, before any of our time. A few centuries ago, however, the rank five Dead Apostle Ancestor attempted to capture that lifeform, and was unceremoniously killed in the process.” I shrug helplessly mid-explanation, even as I feel a laugh slip past my lips. “That being now possesses the name of rank five Dead Apostle Ancestor, despite that we know virtually nothing about it. There are theories that it is a visitor from another world.”

    “That theory has more or less just been validated. I’d assume these crystals come from its domain in South America- if so, it appears to originate from Mercury.” Roose interjects, holding up the shard of crystal. Now that we have context for what it is, I can’t help but find it far more interesting. Still, we have other priorities at the moment.

    “That former Ancestor, Indra, appears to have survived somehow, and chose to remain hidden and allow the world to think of her as dead. Evidently, she managed to take possession of Hela’s body through one means or another and enter the castle using Hela’s invitation.” Elana steps away from her familiar, tapping at her chin in musing. “Judging by what she had said, it seems her motive is control of the castle.”

    Alan nods, still in something of a daze. I suppose that is only understandable, but we lack the time to wait for him to catch up. Indra has fled, likely to the true workshop- of course, if it’s through Indra’s Web, it only makes sense she would be able to trespass there. In that case- “Alan, you mentioned that forcibly causing sunlight to appear in the master bedroom would damage the workshop. Indra seems to believe the lowest-risk option of dealing with us is to shine sunlight onto the first floor, and likely to deal with you alone afterwards. How long will she need before she’s able to do that in spite of the damage she caused by killing the master?”

    “...I cannot be sure. Making sunlight appear here is...akin to making a device function by pushing a lever in the wrong direction. It depends on her ability and the extent of the damage she has caused. The lord would be able to provide an approximation, but I cannot.”

    Roose, Elana, and I all share a glance at that reply. In other words, we are still locked in by our master’s Bounded Fields for another several hours, and if Indra manages to deal with that damage before time is up, we will die.

    ...we cannot hope that she is overestimating herself, either. In her heyday, she was said to be nearly omniscient thanks to the power of Indra’s Web. The air around the others starts to become despondent as that reality sets in. However-

    “Alan. You told me you are able to grant permissions to enter the true workshop to our master’s successor alone.”

    Ah, this is foolish. Insurmountably foolish, and yet I cannot hold myself back. The others are jarred from their thoughts. My head swivels to face Alan with a grin splitting my face, as I see that same glint in his eye that I witnessed upon first meeting him a mere day ago.

    “The barrier might still be up, but strictly speaking, the succession game has ended. As Dead Apostle Ancestor number twelve, I demand access.”


    ***


    After speaking, I look to Roose and Elana, who stare at me in disbelief. With the unknown guarantor our master picked at my back, I have fulfilled the conditions to inherit his position. Of course, that will only matter if we survive this affair. And so, as expected-

    “Don’t be an idiot, Rengard. Out of us, you have the worst odds in challenging her.”

    “Quite correct. If you do such a foolish thing and perish, we will die as well. Accede the title to one of us, so that we can be the one to enter instead.”

    The two of them are right. Objectively speaking, I am the weakest among us in combat, especially against a foe like this. However, I cannot bring myself to even consider going along with Elana’s proposal. It is not because of some vapid desire to cling to the name of Dead Apostle Ancestor- no, but rather…

    “Why would I give up an opportunity like this?”

    It’s foolish, it’s selfish, it’s absolutely absurd. But, this is the most emotion I’ve felt in as long as I can remember. I will not weaken my grip on it for even a second.

    “Now, enough of that. We need to make a plan.” Ignoring the looks I’m being shot by the two of them, I turn my thoughts towards my new opponent.

    Roose’s expression gradually fades into vague, indifferent annoyance, clicking his tongue as he shoots me the trace of a glare. “...if you’re serious, then you might as well give up now. Any plan you make will be dissected before you even reach her. That’s the nature of what we’re dealing with.”

    Yes, I know. The flagship ability of the former Ancestor: Indra’s Web. Contrary to when she was attempting to hide her identity, she is making full use of it now. I do not know the details of the magecraft, but I know of the legend it originates from and of the stories of its user. It is said to be a net made of myriad pearls, which reflect one another. By glimpsing into one pearl, you see every other pearl as well as their own reflections, seeing ‘everything in the world’.

    Moreover, if an observer ‘enters’ a pearl, then because each individual pearl contains every other, the observer has functionally entered every other pearl. A means of teleportation and an aptitude to escape danger- in their heyday, they were called ‘unkillable’.

    In other words, a transcendent form of Clairvoyance that borders on omniscience, and a talent for danger avoidance and immediate teleportation. Coupled with the other techniques she no doubt possesses, and the task ahead seems virtually impossible.

    ...after all, even if we devise some sort of plan, Indra’s Web has been activated now. Even without being here, she will learn of the plan once it is devised, and will know how to defeat it.

    “Roose is correct, without question.” Elana chimes in as I hit that wall, looking to me with something between disbelief and pity. “Your Heavenly Choir of Fools is useless here. Even you cannot make an omniscient god ignorant.”

    “And even if it wasn’t, Indra’s Web is perfect. We can’t get around it, regardless of what sort of plan you come up with.” Ah, come now, Roose, you did not have to agree. I could use some inspirational words right now.

    Alan, his unease washed over with all the calmness of a man facing certain death, rejoins the fray as we mull over our helplessness. “I would say that finding a way to bring all three of you to the true workshop would be ideal, but that is simply impossible. The true workshop is another layer of reality entirely; we can’t even touch it from here.” Ah, lovely, not only is he hammering in our situation, but he is indirectly commenting on the power of our enemy. Just fantast-

    Something that was just said triggers a thought. My head whips around to face Roose the moment after I finish processing that idea. “You said the crystals are Mercury. You are sure of that- there is no room for doubt?”

    It is only after his nod that I step away, a sigh working its way up and out of me. That is something, it is one-in-a-million, but so long as I keep it locked in my head, it could be...

    “...Elana, I will need you to temporarily transfer Lahabrea’s contract to me.” I turn towards her as I speak. As one would imagine, indignation flashes across her face, but- “If damages occur to it, I will compensate you with the corpse of our master as payment.”

    Her face lights up for a moment, then contorts into uncertainty. I can see her weighing the options in her mind. “You’ve worked something out, Rengard?”

    “I cannot confirm that.”

    Precious seconds pass as we stare at one another in silence, before finally she sighs. “I suppose that I can lend it to you. At least try to bring it back in one piece.” Ah, Elana, more concerned about it than your own life. How very like you.

    However, now is the time for preparation.


    ***


    “...you are certain?”

    Alan Giacosa and I stand in the basement, before the caged photonic crystal. I’ve done all that I can at this point in time- what little time we have left may not last long, and frittering about like this is not productive.

    ...is that true, or am I merely telling myself that, because I can scarcely wait a moment longer?

    Regardless, I can only nod in reply. And so, the human butler reaches out, placing a hand on my wrist.

    I must wonder, what had my master expected would happen for his successor if Alan had died during the game? Does the guarantor have a similar privilege to grant someone access? I will have to ask, if we survive what is to come.

    “What makes the golden stars to march so fast; What makes the Moon sometimes to mask her face, The Sun also, as if in some disgrace.”

    The words leave Alan, and with them, I feel something transfer. Like a crystallized curse, something shifts from himself to myself. A command phrase to allow for transfer- yes, if it’s something like that, it ensures that he cannot violate the contract my master had placed him under.

    “Run magical energy through the circles surrounding the stone. It will take you and any existences recognized as ‘you’ through, is how the former lord described it.”

    In other words, the borrowed beast at my side will be taken through as well.

    I steel my resolve, I still my excitement, and I step through.


    ***


    The world around me shifts and writhes, like being shunted through some sort of manifold tunnel. It is only when that movement stops that I am able to register my surroundings.

    “Ah…”

    Even on a casual glance, I can tell the gap that exists between this place and the rest of my master’s castle- it still feels wrong to call it my castle. While the Bounded Fields present in the castle proper could not be called sloppy by any stretch of the imagination, the ones that surround this grandiose room are layered and fitted like pieces of art. There is a beauty to the weaving of magecraft here that exceeds anything I have seen.

    That is to say nothing of its contents. The room, a sort of grand hall, is littered with glyphs and diagrams that I could spend years poring over in order to understand. What is the purpose of this place, the secrets buried here, the things I could learn given enough time.

    “Just on time, with Elana’s toy as well.”

    ...of course, I do not have that luxury. Did she stop whatever she was working on immediately before I arrived, so that I could not figure out what I ought to interfere with to muck up her plan? I suppose that is as expected, there isn’t any doubt in my head that she foresaw my arrival.

    Even now, looking at that face, I still think of Hela Belvarien, the only difference being the hair cut short by the manifestation of Indra’s Web. Ah Hela, you fool- just what did you do to end up being possessed by a freak of nature like this?

    “You cannot imagine that you will get away with this. My master’s guarantor, not to mention the rest of the world when they learn that you are still alive, will come here. I cannot fathom your goal, but you must be weakened by your ‘death’, or we would have all died by now. This will not end favorably for you regardless.”

    I have no intent to talk her down, or persuade her to not fight. I simply feel a need to express that, to express that everything she is doing is unfathomably idiotic, even by the standards of the fool who has stepped into this very lion’s den.

    To my surprise, though, Indra laughs. “This is not about my survival. Once I lost my main body, I was already virtually dead. I just want revenge before I die.”

    ...revenge? This cannot be about Cerridwen, unless there is some secret grudge between the two. In that case-

    “It took some time, but I figured it out. I know what it is. Try to control it? I was an ant trying to throw a leash around a human. I cannot kill it, even now. It is beyond that. But, with this castle, there is a chance that I can defeat it, that I can make it something that can die.”

    I am sure I could make sense of that, but I do not have the time to devote to it. If there was a chance for peaceful resolution, it would have shown itself by now.

    ...besides, I cannot deny that I do not desire a peaceful resolution now. If I chose such a path here and now, I would never take another step forwards.

    The two of us lock eyes, and everything else that needs to be said is.


    ***


    “Lahabrea.”

    The beast bursts forwards at my command, trampling across the floor at a speed that even Roose would have to strain himself to keep up with. The room itself shakes under the sheer weight of the thing. I watch with bated breath, a resonant hymn filling my mind. I cannot let my guard down for even a second.

    Its tusks move to gore Indra, and are dodged by a hair’s breadth. Its front leg raises off of the ground, but the claw’s swipe misses its mark, sending a wave of wind past which impacts the opposite wall with a dull thud. Its tail whips around like a prehensile limb to spear her firmly in the chest, but she simply turns to the side, letting the shockwave generated by that movement harmlessly brush past her.

    I see her crack a smile, and clench my jaw. I had expected this to some degree, but she is moving with a practiced ease that weighs down on my hopes. It isn’t simply that she is seeing the trajectory of the attack and then dodging it- her original body would certainly have been capable of that, but not this one. Even in that weakened state, though, Indra’s Web seems to be functioning perfectly. A ‘perfect information’ ability, in this case it is analogous to seeing the future. Every bit of information in the present is being used to calculate the future through the mental circuit.

    It would be awe-inspiring to watch, if she was not my enemy. If things proceed like this, my chance of success might as well cease to exist.

    I reach out a thread of my mind, and connect it to Lahabrea. Even if I am not a user of familiars, I know the basics such as this. My field of vision vibrates as I transfer my consciousness into it.

    My vision is dimmer, using its viewpoint that is forced to rely upon magical energy signatures, but that does not slow me down. Wielding its body directly, I lash out. Even if her mind is peerless, that does not matter if her body cannot keep up, and so I attempt to leverage that. A goring charge from the tusks, a lash out by the tail, a wide strike from the claws. I will cover every avenue of escape she has- she cannot simply dodge this as she has previously. The three attacks strike out- even for her, a direct hit will prove heavily damaging

    “It really is something.”

    She vanishes. Before any of the attacks reach her, she vanishes. Her voice is coming from a new direction. I turn to face it, however-

    “Ngh-”

    My consciousness is forced back into my body as I fall to my knees. It takes a moment before I process the feeling running through my body, like I had been struck by lightning. Turning, I see the smirking face of Hela Belvarien greet me, electricity wreathing her form.

    She can use that teleportation ability even in the heat of combat, then? No, I had been expecting that after her earlier demonstration, but still- what sort of calculations is she able to perform in real-time to accomplish that? This only gets more troublesome. I manage to force myself back to my feet, body starting to undo the damage dealt to it. It is with something between panic and glee that I note she could have made that a killing blow.

    “Given a few more centuries of investment, it could probably reach the level of a Demon Castle. Quite an accomplishment, a shame that it will not last.”

    At her taunting, I again command Lahabrea to charge. Indra faces it with a grin, and so the exchange begins anew. This time, though, she is using that teleportation ability of hers freely, as if to mock me for thinking that such a basic plan would work against her. Each attack doesn’t even have the chance to consider scratching her- despite playing defensively, she is undoubtedly in control of the battle’s tempo. I dare not transfer my consciousness again; I cannot afford to leave my body defenseless for a second time.

    She moves to the opposite end of the workshop, inviting Lahabrea to charge at her. I permit it to, and again it thunders forth. I grit my teeth to a point that is painful. I cannot afford to falter here.

    Thirty meters. Twenty meters. Ten meters. Five meters. And, when it reaches three meters-

    ילדאבהות
    ”The dim ruler bears three names.”

    The Heavenly Choir of Fools manifests in this world. The eyeless gaze of the ignorant god casts itself upon Indra, seeking to rob her of her wisdom, to seal it away, to declare itself the only god in this world.

    She will not be slowed by it for even a moment. One who wields perfect information cannot be quelled by a song of ignorance. However-

    "▂▂▃▃▄▄▅▅!"

    From its hollow eye sockets, light springs from the Lahabrea. A scream flows out of it, intermingling with the song of my Choir, overlapping with it. This time, I see it, I see her form sag down as if pulled by a weight.

    Elana’s Lahabrea, an artifact of the Earth from a bygone time, modeled after a mammoth. My Heavenly Choir of Fools, which uses the Demiurgic principle of Gnosticism. This is the sole space in which I can surpass Elana in the use of her creation.

    A beast of the Earth which is a manifestation of the Demiurgic principle. A ‘place where the ignorant return to’ in Gnosticism, a beast intimately tied to those who fail to escape ignorance with a roar that cows the world’s beasts. The perfect counterpart for my Choir.

    The male is called 'Behemoth,' who occupies with his breast a waste wilderness named 'Dendain'.

    The Choir and
    Behemoth’s
    Lahabrea’s
    scream together act as shackles to bind her in place, and with it-

    “...not enough.”

    In those last moments before Lahabrea’s tusk rends her apart, ‘something’ begins to appear in Indra’s hand. My song does not stop, but I feel my hair rise up. The same feeling I had before those crystals of Mercury, the same feeling I had when Indra first revealed herself.

    Something impossible is manifesting in the world. Light coalesces in the palm of her hand, collecting and dissipating myriad times in a fraction of a second. For the last time, it gathers together and becomes solid. The magical energy she is wielding in this moment does not merely challenge Lahabrea, it exceeds it. Ritual-class magecraft released as a single action? She truly is an Elder Title, even now.

    A handle, bearing two heads on either side- no, that cannot be possible, she is meant to be in a weakened state. How much of her original power has she truly recovered by now? Can she bring something of that nature out so casually?

    Myriad thoughts spin through my mind in that moment. Anyone in my position would do the same, because, after all, that thing is a recreation of something that mere magecraft should not be able to form. That is-

    Vajra.
    “वज्र.”

    The tusk of Lahabrea is met with the edge of that counterfeit god-forged arm, and my vision goes white as lightning fills the air.

    When my vision recovers, my breathing is ragged. I was not injured by the blow physically, but I stagger back nonetheless.

    Lahabrea has been destroyed. Much of it seems to have been vaporized on the spot, scattered bones of its remnants surround Indra, as the weapon in her hand fades away into nothingness. I had underestimated her. I did not think she held that sort of tool in her pocket.

    “Did you genuinely think that would be enough? I realized your plan well before you arrived here.”

    Yes, with Indra’s Web, that plan was doomed to fail. It is possible to overcome a stronger enemy by catching them unaware, but that is impossible when they possess perfect information. The moment I devised the plan, it became ‘something that existed in the web’. Contrary to my hopes, I haven’t even been able to scratch her.

    I had always known it would come to this, hadn’t I? For some reason, I’m happy. Once more, then. My last gamble.

    ...My lips part, and the first note tolls. Peaceful and serene, sweeping aside all in its construction.

    I drink of the workshop’s magical energy, and the second note tolls. Harsh and keening, crashing against all in its derision.

    Indra laughs, seeing me call upon my Choir once again. Without Behemoth, it does not weigh her down. It cannot weigh her down. Against an omniscient god, Rengard Schvieglot is powerless.

    And so, I take something from my pocket. Compared to her hidden trump card, it is nothing remarkable. It is no divine construct, it is no mythological weapon. It is simply a bean that I was tossed at dinner.

    You see, in my research, I’ve hit a roadblock in actually sealing the concepts from the Pleroma. Creating a dynamic vessel like that has proven harder than I anticipated. I still have not solved that roadblock.

    So thank you, Jack, for providing me with this.

    I crush the bean in my hand, and sunlight bursts forth.


    ***


    My own abilities may be inadequate for what is to come.

    Sing. Sing. Sing.

    Create a system. You must create a system.

    Expand the foundation the mental circuit operates upon. Beyond this ‘world’, beyond everything you have ever perceived.

    My own abilities may be inadequate for what is to come.

    Faster. You must be faster. Do not hesitate as you allow your mind to take in things you do not understand, for you are ignorant darkness.

    The principle has manifested with its scream. This is a place where ignorance can form. Seize that thread, and run along it.

    My own abilities will be inadequate for what is to come.

    The mind is not meant to accomplish something such as this. Your mind is not that of a god.

    That is irrelevant. You are not an omnipotent god. You are a god who denies omnipotence.

    You are a flawed god. You are an ignorant god.

    My own abilities must be inadequate for what is to come.

    So then-

    The order has fallen.
    Sing, O Fool, the End of Brilliance.



    ***


    The pain is like none I have ever felt. It burns at my very existence, a lethal poison that eats me from the inside out. However, as my song grows louder and that
    divine spark
    sunlight
    spreads like a liquid across my body, the pain only sharpens my focus.

    The containment is not perfect. The fact that I feel pain is proof of this- the weapon I wield is just as much anathema to me as it is to my opponent. However, so long as I maintain my song, the impact is blunted. I can continue moving. The sun will not reach me until the song ends.

    “Impossible…”

    A plan she had not foreseen, a preparation that did not exist in her ‘phenomena to be observed’. Something that should have been unthinkable.

    I feel my lips crack as they lift up into a smile, steadying myself even as I feel my outer layer of skin start to become ash. The song continues to spill from my lips, but over it, the skin of words coalesces. “Is something wrong? Can you not cope without the crutch of your web? Come now, I am not done yet,
    Sophia
    Indra
    .”

    She stands there in stock silence, before she bursts out into laughter. It is only a moment later that I realize that I am laughing as well, a false veneer over the ongoing melody. A glorious pain filled with life wracks my body, as that laughter dies down and she looks to me.

    I can see it. For the first time, she faces me as a genuine threat. She has realized the danger of what she faces.

    “Congratulations. This is the first and only time since the spider where I have a blank spot. This ‘you’ deserves to be my opponent. It is a pleasure to finally meet you,
    Demiurge
    Rengard Schvieglot
    .”


    ***


    There is no longer a pretense of entertainment. She is fighting to kill me without a scrap of hesitation.

    Space bends. Without warning, she appears at my side, lightning crackling from her hand as it moves to pierce my throat.

    I can see it. The melody drops an octave, and this time, I am the one to dodge. Lightning sparks out, grazing me in spite of that motion, but I am not done. My own hand darts out to grab her by the wrist, and the sunlight burns at it for all of a moment before she vanishes from sight once again, retreating to the opposite side of the workshop- it hasn’t fallen apart yet, then.

    Her movements are slow now...no, that is not it, her body is no weaker, but the gamble has paid off. She cannot predict my movements. I have stolen a pearl from Indra’s Web, and so long as that pearl stays stolen, her prized omniscience is useless.

    ...though, it is not enough, even having used the last card in my hand. My opponent’s combat experience outstrips mine by far, and my own weapon will kill me if the fight drags on. I am forced to take the initiative.

    In spite of my injuries, my body does not feel slowed. I dart in her direction, and modulate the key of the song. Sunlight coalesces, jutting out from my hand into a makeshift spear along the arc of my arm.

    ”वज्र-”

    The diamond pounder’s form resurfaces, and the weapon is used to fend off my attack. A greater mystery will defeat a weaker one, and so lightning discharges out to shatter me where I stand.

    However, my mystery is no longer merely that of the Heavenly Choir of Fools. If my opponent is Indra, then I am the Demiurge. There is no doubt that the power of Vajra exceeds my sunlight, but this is not at the level of magecraft where power is king. We have both surpassed that base stage.

    This is a battle of concepts.

    My song grows louder, and the arc of lightning flows into the sunlight, dissipating into it, becoming part of it. The lightning is certainly enough to kill me, but it does not. Sophia cannot defeat the Demiurge with power, as the Demiurge is that which robs her of her power.

    ...however, it is not perfect. This is fundamentally a slipshod spell that I lacked the time to polish. My vision goes white, my body grows weak. It was merely a fraction of that lightning which I was not able to seal, but even that is enough to bring me to the brink of death. At the same time, my sunlight flares out and burns at
    Indra
    Sophia
    . A mutual trading of blows- I can hear her flesh hiss as the sunlight eats at it. A lesser Dead Apostle would have been killed on the spot.

    As my vision clears, I see her form flicker, blinking out of sight for a moment before reappearing, still in the same place. Her recreated Vajra again meets my arm. Am I smiling? I cannot tell if my muscles even respond to my mind anymore. “Not only your pearl, the web itself is falling apart. Just what did you do-”

    I skid back along the floor as she strikes out, grinning even as I feel the sunlight’s corrosion reach deeper into my body. Yes, even that damned teleportation of hers has been sealed off, so long as I stand before her. “I must thank you for making the second floor Mercury. Without that, it would not have aligned with the Gnostic spheres.” I layer a second voice over my song, barely managing to choke out the words. Has my voice always been so hoarse?

    “...Treating the workshop as the Kenoma? That cannot have been enough! You should not be able to bypass my observation simply by existing in a dim world!” As if I will give away my secrets. Regardless, just uttering those words while maintaining the song was enough. I could not answer her at this point, even if I desired it. In response to my lack of answer, all Indra can do is snarl.

    “Fine, I will work out the exacts of your method, after you are dead-”

    My mind, my Circuits, my body, everything is dulled, slowed, enfeebled, but in spite of that they burn with a clarity that I cannot once recall experiencing. As another jolt of lightning braces my form, I redesign the song’s melody on the fly- now that I have experienced it, I know the song to signal its sealing.

    The things I could do if I had more time, if this state could last forever. The demons I could create, the songs I could draft. But I cannot dream of what-ifs. This focus exists for one reason alone.

    The ‘story’ is at my side, but Indra’s abilities are overwhelmingly superior. She is not specialized for combat any more than I am, she is a shell of her former self, but nonetheless, the abilities she has honed for combat are beyond first-rate compared to me. I will die before she does, at this rate. Even with the abilities of Indra’s Web staved off, every clash we have is one of mutual damage, and I am the one who will burn out first.

    So then, I must strengthen the story.

    I run forwards. Once again, Vajra comes to meet me. Another clash, another repeat of the same kind, will be enough to kill me. Indra does not need the omniscience of her web to know this. My perfection is inferior to hers.

    I refuse to be defeated.

    The sunlight recedes from my right arm as its hand grabs Vajra by the head. My mind becomes blank as the lightning courses through me, the flaw in my defense undoubtedly fatal. However, my left arm does not stop. Even as my right is reduced to vapor, even as my body burns up, the light around my left arm grows brighter.

    Roose Pyrisius. Cerridwen Valdyrius. Indra.

    I am not a perfected god. I will never become one. I cannot walk that path alongside you.

    -But, I am, in the first place, a flawed god.

    My hand reaches her. I do not see her face. I cannot see anything anymore, for I am blind ignorance. All I can feel is that left hand of mine, and so, I will it to burn brighter. Brighter, brighter, brighter. Do not stop moving, do not stop singing. Something that I cannot see pierces my throat. My song grows quiet, my world grows dim.

    And through eyes that cannot see, I witness a light fill the Pleroma.
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    “Ah, dammit.”

    “Please, allow me, lord Schvieglot.”

    The pen that I had dropped is held back out towards me before I’ve even started moving to retrieve it. Truly, my master had an eye for talent in matters such as this. I do not know how I would function without this man to act as my right hand.

    ...I suppose that is somewhat literal now, as well. I chuckle to myself slightly at the thought, as I resume writing. My penmanship is sloppy, but I will become ambidextrous eventually, I suppose.

    “Valery Fernand Vandelstam,

    Thank you for working as the guarantor for my succession, and for your kind words. I will, sadly, be unable to attend the pre-celebration, as I am still in the midst of repairing damages to my castle caused in the process of my succession. The most pressing repairs ought to be completed by the end of the month, however, so please tentatively note me as attending the later event. If complications crop up, I will notify you accordingly.

    Regarding the matter of a ‘plus one’, as you put it, I-”


    My pen stops as the sound of an alarm fills the air. I sigh, setting my pen down and looking to Alan expectantly. Sure enough, he seems to have already evaluated the cause of the alarm.

    “A group evaluated by the castle system as a task force from the Holy Church has entered a two-hundred kilometer radius. They appear to have ascertained our coordinates, and are moving in our direction. Appearances are being concealed, but magical energy signatures indicate that up to two sealed Scripture-class weapons are held. Potential for Burial Agency involvement is high.”

    I push the letter off to the side- he’ll surely understand if my response is a bit delayed. “The news of my succession must have reached them. An injured Dead Apostle Ancestor in a damaged castle that he has yet to fully master? Frankly, it is surprising it took them as much as a week.”

    Troublesome, how troublesome. In my current state, I’m in no position to fend off even a single Burial Agent, much less two. I cannot help but laugh, a now-familiar grin curling at my lips.

    “A note from the late lord’s records.” Ah, Alan, you really are indispensable for times like this. “If the task force possesses the Holy Scripture: Alien Stomach World, they will be capable of bypassing our outermost protections entirely. The recommendation from the late lord for such a circumstance is to transfer the location of the castle to another continent, to evade detection.”

    Yes, that is very much like him. It would damage the workshop quite a bit further to force it to move while in this state, but it is certainly preferable to trying to fend off Burial Agents as-is.

    And yet, I cannot bring myself to do such a thing.

    “We will not be fleeing. Let them come.”

    My own abilities may be inadequate for what’s to come.

    The thought can only make me smile.



    ***


    Creator’s Notes, Magecraft Explanations, and Other Bits

    Themes

    This whole thing has the veneer of a mystery story, at least initially, but I don’t really consider it as one. A mystery setup like this was just the most convenient way to frame the story I wanted to tell, so I think of it as more of a character piece wearing the pathwork skin of a mystery story. I do have to apologize to anyone who got into this expecting a more properly-designed mystery. As much as I like reading mysteries, I don’t think I’m competent enough to pull the genuine article off all that well.

    In terms of the sort of basis behind the story itself, the core concept I wanted to tackle was ‘the problem of a deathless life’. That’s obviously a big thing in this setting, we hear about the downsides of immortality all the time, but something we’ve never really seen on-screen are the premiere examples of that, the Dead Apostle Ancestors. We know they do their territory games and all of that to stave off boredom, but by and large, the DAAs and all the stuff surrounding them are a footnote of a footnote, so I thought an OC-centric story around them and how they tackle immortality would be a fun thing to mess around with.

    With that sort of premise in mind, ideas shifted to what sort of story lent itself there, and I wound up coming with the pseudo-mystery thing as a spin on the whole side of how Dead Apostles play ‘games’ to keep themselves from stagnating and self-destructing. Credit for the premise itself goes to a chat with a friend earlier this year.

    On the selfish side, I also just used this as an opportunity to use a few magus ideas that I’ve had in my documents, but never really properly used for one reason or another. In other words, an excuse to take a small bite out of my backlog.


    Cerridwen Valdyrius

    The twelfth Dead Apostle Ancestor at the beginning of the story. Known as ‘Heaven’s Tuner’ in the world of magi, though his status as Dead Apostle Ancestor largely subsumes that. His designation according to the Church is ‘Hermit’.

    Cerridwen is rumored to have been among the magi who founded what is now known as the Wandering Sea, though this is mere hearsay. While ranked relatively highly among the Dead Apostle Ancestors by the Church, this is more due to the 'danger he represents' than his personal combat power. As a magus, he is an expert of spaces, a world-class Bounded Field specialist. Among the Ancestors, his castle is seen as 'the most troublesome' for this reason, and is one of the most impregnable fortresses of magecraft writ large from the perspective of an outside assault. However, his personal combat power is low.

    Incidentally, he had something of a rivalry with a mister Caubec Alcatraz, due to their similar specialties, before the latter wound up making a certain error of judgment.

    The reason the Church fears him to the point of considering him rank twelve is due to his more specific specialty of comporting heavenly bodies into spaces; his tutelage of a sixteenth century magus by the name of Agrippa, who went on to devise the Planetary Magic Circle, is one such example of this.

    The relevance this has for a Dead Apostle goes without saying, and he is viewed by the Church as a time bomb who will cause a calamity when his research becomes complete. However, beneath the undercurrent, he does not carry much belief for the Aylesbury Valesti- it’s for this reason that he seeks to create a world where ‘an eternal red moon lies overhead’. Essentially, he’s trying to make his own ritual to lead the Ancestors into a new age, since he thinks the current one is lacking.

    In the story, his role is essentially as an image of the ‘perfection’ that Rengard initially seeks out, a minor side character who’s here to highlight some basic things about our point-of-view character.

    Rengard idolizes him to no small extent, and due to being his sire, sees him as a role model and a fixed standard for Rengard himself to aspire to. You get a glimpse at the unhealthiness of that mindset initially, and with Cerridwen’s death, you see the first real chink in that mindset of Rengard’s, the realization that Cerridwen’s ‘perfection’ didn’t absolve him from being killed in his sleep like anyone else.

    This is also the reason for the name ‘Red Glass Moon’. Beyond the obvious riff on Tsukihime’s name, the concept of a red moon made of glass is the central locus of the story. The eternal red moon that Cerridwen sought and the fragility of the perfection he’d attained serve as the impetus of the story, and that image of ‘a perfect image that can shatter at a touch’ serves as that sort of driving force.


    Elana vor Enkicen

    One of Cerridwen’s apprentices. A refined, ladylike visage covers up genuine lunacy. Beneath the mask, she is innovative, narcissistic, and obsessive. As with any artist of a sufficiently advanced nature, she is an eccentric who will take any chance to prove herself. Moreover, her understanding of what is ‘good’ is irreconcilably bundled up in the other countless sources of mental baggage that come with her existence.

    In her youth, she was loudmouthed, overbearing, and took every effort to make herself the center of attention even when she was supposed to be incognito and running for her life. She’s since grown out of that, and is excellent at putting on that composed front. A mad scientist with a social side.

    Regarding the magical side of things, her thesis begins with the concept that graves such as Egyptian and Norse tombs operate as an "artificial world after death", a microscopic world in itself that the soul remains in before departing, and so that it stands to reason that such areas as tar pits can function as “natural tombs”. In other words, that the bones contained in those tar pits would carry the spirits of their animals of origin. Some time before the events of the story, she managed to obtain the rights as Second Owner for the spiritual land that covers a certain group of tar pits in the Americas.

    Her magecraft bases itself on the use of bones as a natural crystalline structure, a prison that stops flow. As a result of synthesizing this concept with the aforementioned nature of tar pits as “natural tombs”, it follows that some bones from said tar pits carry animal spirits of their original animal. Such bones are used to create a familiar, and moreover, similar bones that lack said spirits are used to contain the information blueprint of the holistic familiar.

    In other words, the bones that contain animal spirits act as a power source and the exhibition of the “mind” for the familiar, while the bones without animal spirits house the blueprint for the familiar itself, acting as the terminal connection for the “soul” of the familiar.

    Through the combination of these two techniques, one can create a cohesive unit across multiple bones, using
    dragon corpus
    oil
    as a connecting force between individual bones to create an artificial skeleton. Generally, the act of “creating something new” with a component (broken) material would cause said material to lose its accumulated years, like reforging a sword, but in this case each component part is remaining independent in form, merely connected by the medium of the
    joints
    oil
    . Her greatest creation to date is, of course, the Lahabrea.

    From Cerridwen, she learned of creating spaces, creation of graveyards, preservation of mystery, and so on. In other words, she’s a tar pit magus who specializes in dinosaur skeleton familiar creation.


    Roose Pyrisius

    One of Cerridwen’s apprentices, and Rengard’s closest friend among the group. A methodical genius who could be called ‘Cerridwen’s child’ more than anyone else.

    His magecraft is based on converting the body into a microcosm of the universe. In my original drafts, this worked more off of things like celestial spheres, but the second episode of the Case Files anime wound up coming out while I was still writing out those main story beats and it felt too similar to the events of that episode, so I changed the premise a bit.

    Instead, for the final version, his magecraft was based off of Jain cosmology, which posits that the shape of the universe is that of a human body. Roose's magecraft, then, is the matter of conducting long-term body modification to convert the different portions of his body into the different ajiva under Jainism, the demarcation of the lokas, and so on. In terms of 'his body's power', he is the strongest out of the cast for that reason, as his body is in the state of becoming that sort of microcosm. His most recent modification has been focused on imbuing the contraction and relaxation of his muscles with the dharma-dravya and adharma-dravya respectively. Incidentally, this is what allowed for the feat of movement shown when cooperating with Rengard.

    In the story, he is something of a yardstick and a continuation of Cerridwen’s legacy. He and Rengard face similar situations, but the difference in how they choose to tackle it, how they adapt to the situation, and how they find something worth enjoying is where they differ. In essence, he’s someone who is too bogged down in the ‘perfection’ that Rengard gave up.


    Alan Giacosa

    Cerridwen’s butler, and the only human present in the story. An absolutely mediocre magus with no special talent to speak of, but an excellent butler, he was scouted by Cerridwen not long before the events of the story and was brought into his employ for a ten-year contract. Surprisingly, no coercion was necessary- Cerridwen’s terms were just that good.

    His role in the story is to serve as the mouthpiece for a life that includes death. From the perspective of the Dead Apostles, they all live ‘deathless lives’, so a perspective like that is necessary to cover all sides. For Rengard’s development, the talks he has with Alan are few and far between, but they form an important foundation for how he eventually comes up with his own solution to immortality.


    Jack

    One of Cerridwen’s apprentices. A quirky, overly-touchy buffoon who’s astoundingly good at reading people, an idiot savant who bumbles into breakthrough after breakthrough.

    His magecraft is a combination of the Conversion attribute and of druidic study. He personally describes it as “Legumancy”. Essentially, much like how some Conversion magi place magical energy, as well as other things, into jewels as ‘storage’, he does the same but with beans.

    A jewel is optimal as a storage medium because it’s a prison that stops flow. It’s excellent as a storage compartment in that way. However, rather than storage, Jack’s magecraft is based around using the vessel not as a container, but as an incubator. A bean is a seed that will germinate and grow, strengthening and expanding its contents and making them evolve past what they were. Instead of a prison that stops flow, it’s a hatchery that permits flow. Additional conflation with such things as folklore accounts of ‘magic beans’ further strengthens that premise.

    The difficulty of this magecraft, as pointed out in the story, is keeping things aligned. The vessel and the contents must be synchronized to the finest level during the incubation process, otherwise failure is guaranteed. For an intuitive genius like Jack, it’s an ideal area of study. From Cerridwen, he learned of workshop design (his own workshop is a greenhouse which utilizes magus body parts as fertilizer), and how to comport concepts into things, learning from how Cerridwen placed the concept of heavenly bodies into spaces.

    Unknown to Jack, he is actually a low-grade Holy Child, which is at the root of his talent. He is not at the level of being able to enact nature interference solely on that basis, but his innate connection with nature especially predisposes him to this sort of magecraft. This aptitude was actually harmed a bit when he became a Dead Apostle, and his rank as a Holy Child marginally fell, but looking at his results, you wouldn’t be able to tell it.

    The inspiration for this magecraft stems back to when Fragments was first being published, and someone put bits from it in google translate, which somehow read “mystic eyes” as “legumes” and started a joke talk about how Tatsumi was a “legumancer”.

    In the story, his suspicion for an attempt on Cerridwen’s life led him to exit his room during the day, undoing the Mystic Locks of the others’ in the process, in an attempt to ‘guard’ the second floor, though this ultimately failed since the culprit was not the sort who needed to open their door to escape in the first place. As a result, he stood guard instead of sleeping, saw nobody leave their rooms, and then realized that Cerridwen had died anyway. Poor Jack.

    During the events of ‘Archon’, he confronted Hela Belvarien, having reached his own suspicions. Of course, he was unprepared for what was to come, and the outcome of that is apparent.


    Hela Belvarien

    An apprentice of Cerridwen who never actually shows up in the story. Prior to the events of the story, Indra’s observations determined that she was the apprentice who she could most easily defeat and take the identity of, and so that precisely occurred.

    Her magecraft was a form of spiritual evocation based on placing countless spirits into her hair, one spirit for each strand of hair, and then using the body as a collective terminal for each of them. In other words, making herself a gestalt consciousness and self-possessing her own body. Not an overly creative class of magecraft, but a ‘simple’ form polished to a very high level. However, against Rengard’s Heavenly Choir of Fools, her compatibility is unquestionably the worst due to the nature of her magecraft and mind.

    Regarding her defeat, the one who supplanted her utilized their own abilities to transmit their spirit into one of Hela’s hairs and overwhelming the individual spirit who possessed that hair. They then utilized that as a foothold to overwhelm the gestalt consciousness through purging and supplanting each other spirit from it individually, taking it one at a time like a cancer cell steadily supplanting healthy cells. By the time the rest of the gestalt consciousness realized there was a problem, it was past the point of being able to expel the invasive element.

    This avoided the difficulty of attempting to overpower a thousand-year mind wholly from the ‘outside’, which would have been far more difficult. Through this process and their own magecraft, the impostor acquired much of Hela’s memories in the process, though ‘retaining’ a millennium of memories to the letter was ultimately impossible given the brain’s capacity.

    There’s not much else to say here, since most things committed in her name were actually done by-

    Indra

    The former rank five Dead Apostle Ancestor, a monster among monsters who was defeated by the crystal spider sleeping in South America. While she miraculously ‘survived’ through use of a spare body, she was irreparably crippled by the event and fell into hiding, unable to defend her title as Ancestor from peers or to fight off forces from the Mage’s Association or Church who might come after her.

    Before the events of the story, she devised her revenge, which was reliant on gaining ownership of Cerridwen Valdyrius’s castle, or otherwise spending millennia on millennia to make something of the same level herself. Through the magecraft of Indra’s Web focusing on him, she then learned of Cerridwen Valdyrius’s plan for succession through her magecraft and developed a plan to take control of his workshop without revealing herself as alive. To that end, she took the place of Hela Belvarien through possessing her body, murdered Cerridwen, and planned on ‘winning the game’ to become the castle’s new owner with nobody being any the wiser as to her identity.

    However, she was later revealed as the killer and was forced to act overtly, attempting to take control of the castle by force, as other avenues had been closed off to her. Her actions are not unlike an adult posing as a child to win a spelling bee trophy, only to attempt to steal the trophy with their adult strength after they misspeak and spell a word wrong.

    Originally, she was a magus from the Age of Gods who acquired a portion of the god Indra’s Authority. However, she has dipped into the processes of modern magecraft as well, and has developed a form of magecraft based off of recreating Indra’s own authorities, though only a fraction of that is ultimately shown in the story. Compared to her heyday where she was a peer to the god whose name she took up, her strength is a fraction of what it was. Abilities that were used casually in the past are relegated to the position of trump cards, and opponents that could have been defeated in an instant are now genuine threats. It’s to the degree where her former peers would not even recognize her as ‘Indra’, but merely a ghost to be dispatched.

    Her magnum opus, the area where she can be said to even surpass the god Indra himself, is called “Indra’s Web”. It makes use of the thought experiment and divine construct from Hindu legend by the same name. Indra’s Web presupposes a net made of myriad pearls. In each pearl is reflected all of the other pearls, and so by observing one you observe the others. The characteristics of what forms the web are as follows: the individual pearls are ‘perfect’, the pearls share the same nature of existence, and each existence in the cosmos can be represented by a pearl.

    For Indra, the primal impulse called an ‘Origin’ fulfills these necessary requirements for the pearls, and emerge from and are bound to Akasha. In other words, by peering into the Origin of one existence, it is possible to use it as a ‘mirror’ to glimpse the Origins of all things that are reflected in it. As a result, it is possible to grasp “everything” merely through the observation of “one thing”. Of course, the limit of the terminal known as the brain shouldn’t be understated. Even if the principle is infinite, the degree to which a ‘mind’ can perceive that infinity is finite. It is an excellent information-gathering ability that reaches the same level as a once-in-an-era Clairvoyance.

    Indra’s Web additionally has a deeper use, which is where it exceeds the abilities of the original. In the hypothesis of Indra’s Web, if you look into a pearl deep enough, it is said that you enter the reflected pearl instead of the reflecting pearl. At the same time, by entering one pearl, you have simultaneously entered all pearls. So, by turning one’s observation on oneself in line with this foundation, achieving that state of affairs is possible. That is to say, by observing oneself, it becomes possible to glimpse and become within what is reflected.

    This has two core functions:
    -The first, entering another pearl which is discrete and present, in order to allow for a form of teleportation. This also allows oneself to enter another pearl and attempting to supplant its contents- this is the means through which her spirit took the place of one of Hela’s hairs, and subsequently took command of her body.
    -The second, utilizing the original nature of Indra’s Web, in which each pearl represents a world, as a way to glimpse another world-line and shift oneself to that world-line. It is among those branches of magecraft that have each achieved fragments of the Second Magic in their own rights, and even compared to the Second Magician himself, it can be said to surpass him in terms of ‘avoiding harm’. However, without a ‘proof of existence’ on the other side, sustaining this for anything longer than an instant is incredibly difficult, and order will be restored through shunting back to the worldline of origin.

    Consumption of mental energy is expectedly immense for either of these functions, as well, though for a being of Indra’s rank as an existence, it is far more feasible than for a human magus.

    It’s worth noting that, as Indra’s Web is premised on the ‘unbiased view of oneself in the context of the universe’, it is ideologically incompatible with the development of one’s Reality Marble.

    It was this aptitude that made them the rank five Ancestor, an ‘unkillable’ being, as at the time of ‘death’, they were freely able to escape to another ‘pearl’ in any of the above fashions. However, due to the nature of the Crystal Valley, they were unable to escape in their usual fashion when they were faced with the spider, and were consequently struck down- thanks to a momentary fluke born as their soul exited their body, they managed to escape to the ‘pearl’ of a spare body, but were spiritually crippled and forced into hiding as a result, no longer able to defend the seat of Ancestor. Even Roa would laugh at such a travesty.

    Their goal in the events of the story is, put simply, revenge on their killer. By creating a world of “Mercury” within Cerridwen’s workshop from something connected to their killer, she sought to use the ritual of the castle to ‘eclipse’ Mercury while also causing a ritual that tethered Mercury to Earth. In other words, trying to artificially tether that spider to the planet by making its ‘domain’ subservient to the Earth, and using human consciousness as a whetstone to sharpen that spear.

    Thus, downgrading the spider from a “planet” to a “god”, akin to what happened to the prototypes of the current Divine Spirits, so that it becomes ‘something that can be killed’. This is the reason she infiltrated Cerridwen’s castle, for the goal of taking command of it. She had hoped to acquire it without anyone being aware of her true intentions, but when her identity was unmasked, she threw caution to the wind and began action in full.

    In the story, she is a manifestation of perfection and its faults. She is a former ‘perfect Dead Apostle’ who fell, and has nothing left as a result of that. As seen in the story, her solution to a deathless life is simply having an obsession that will never break, though at the same time, it is unsustainable.

    While Cerridwen’s death was the demonstration that ‘perfection’ was not omnipotent for Rengard, overcoming Indra was the moment where Rengard properly moved past his own fixation on perfection.



    Rengard Schvieglot

    The point-of-view character. A Dead Apostle who’s stagnated due to the boredom of immortality. In essence, the story is about him learning how to break out of that monotony through finding his own answer to ‘the problem of a deathless life’.

    His magecraft is based in Gnosticism. Its thesis is that, by applying clown logic to ‘God’, he designs the concept of the
    Clown-God
    Demiurge
    and acts as its mouthpiece. The system isn’t too dissimilar from modern magecraft’s use of angels.

    The Heavenly Choir of Fools is a magecraft that borrows the concept of the Demiurge to bestow ‘ignorance’, turning those who hear its song into idiots, and preserving the mystery of that system through the cyclical ignorance it creates. The goal of it is for the user to become as close to the Demiurge as possible, in other words creating a perfect ‘ignorance’. One who escapes that ignorance would thus naturally become Enlightened. However, since observing beauty makes the observer beautiful, by making someone an idiot and then watching them become freed of that, the user would be dragged along for the ride. A counterfeit path to Enlightenment based off of piggybacking from another, suitable for the Demiurge.

    Incidentally, the basis for this magecraft comes back to a ‘juggalo magus’ I wrote down some notes for as a joke, but never properly made. How easily juggalo/ICP stuff ties into the above stuff is pretty self-explanatory. The title of the juggalo magus was
    Cursed Clown Choir
    Angra Mainyu/CCC
    , because I’m awful, but that’s beside the point.

    At any rate, in order to beat Indra, Rengard innovates on this premise.

    The sphere of the seven stars in Gnosticism, from highest to lowest, goes Saturn, Jupiter, Mars, the Sun, Venus, Mercury, and the Moon, below which is the Earth. In the story, due to Indra’s actions, the house’s layout from the basement to the second floor (originally Earth-Moon-Sun) is Earth-Moon-Mercury, so it aligns with the Gnostic Spheres. In other words, the workshop itself has become a place disposed to Gnostic celestial aspects.

    In Gnosticism, Sophia dwells in the “eighth heaven”, a sea that exists outside of the seven heavens. She is a female existence in opposition to the male Demiurge. At the same time, Sophia is a manifestation of wisdom and is closely connected with weaver goddesses, and is rooted in the Pleroma which contains all things. Indra herself is a female who wields the woven construct of Indra’s Web, possesses an ability rooted in knowledge, and has moved to the true workshop ‘outside’ of the celestial spheres the others are in, which is the true place of control/power for those spheres. So, Rengard’s plan is based on shoving Indra into the role of Sophia, and taking the role of the Demiurge himself.

    A key piece of the plan was Elana’s Lahabrea, which is an artifact of the Earth closely related to Behemoth. Behemoth is a manifestation of the demiurgic male principle in Gnosticism and a place where the ignorant return to; in other words, he's intimately tied to 'those who fail to escape ignorance', and was something Rengard used to further conflate himself with Demiurge as a sort of ‘primer’ for the real thing. The stories of Behemoth’s scream which cows wild beasts and makes them docile carries additional synergy with Rengard’s Choir, making that all the more doable. By giving form to the Demiurgic principle inside of the true workshop, then, he was able to use Lahabrea’s destruction as a premise for the principle to become embodied in himself instead, not unlike how ‘the death of a phenomenon will only cause the birth of a new one’, and then furthered the premise through his own preparations.

    (This is actually a happy coincidence with Penguin Melt’s profile validating that Type-Moon is using the account of Behemoth as the male principle. Wrote this bit out just a couple days before her profile was released, so there was a bit of relief when I learned that I wouldn’t have to rewrite anything because of her profile.)

    Ignorance in Gnosticism is the result of one's divine spark being trapped inside the material world by the Demiurge. In Gnosticism, the Demiurge is concealed outside the Pleroma, stealing elements of it (divine sparks) from Sophia and trapping them inside of vessels known as human bodies. Since Rengard’s taken Demiurge role, then, and they were within the
    kenoma
    seven heavens
    during his preparations, he was able to take an element of the Pleroma from Sophia and lock it into his realm of ignorance.

    In other words, he can create a blind spot in Indra’s Web. This is “sunlight” (a divine spark) from Cerridwen’s remnants, placed into the vessel of Jack’s bean which he obtained during dinner in the first chapter. That ‘pearl’ is then plucked from the web, and for a magecraft that functions as a finely tuned instrument to that extent, that bit of imperfection is enough to destabilize it as a whole so long as that flaw is ‘a phenomenon to be observed’. What follows from that is the result of this preparation, and Rengard’s own use of his Choir.

    The magecraft he uses to defeat Indra is also meant to be a testament to his own growth. As someone who chased perfection, fighting someone who achieved perfection, he doesn’t win by becoming perfect in his own right. Instead, the way he wins is by introducing chaos, by bringing imperfection into a perfect being. That’s the demonstration that he’s moved past chasing after the image of Cerridwen, and has become his own person.

    At the same time, the conclusion he reaches is meant to be something that the average human would disagree with. While it’s an answer to the problem of a deathless life, it’s taken to a degree of ‘obsession’ suitable for a magus of a thousand years. The story is partially about Rengard regaining some of the humanity one lacks as an immortal, but that is still distorted and amplified through his own lens. The result is an ending that he is entirely happy with, but one that the average person would look at and go ‘hold on, isn’t that an unhealthy attitude?’.

    Either way, that’s the last of the explanations. Hope you enjoyed!


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    I enjoyed this a lot. If there's something I really like about TM and its fics, it's the lengthy yet rational chains of thought that combine all sorts of things to make really cool magecraft; I'm reminded of the finale from You's Cursed Cold Colle. Also Rengard's giddiness is contagious. Unfortunately I lack much to say given how much you've already said, but thanks for this. It was really fun to read.
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    Correct to identify the murder-mystery as a veneer. In any setting that isn't basically realist [i.e. conforming to conventional concepts of time, space, identity] it can be nothing else. But even as a veneer it still imposes a kind of formal matrix over proceedings which has adverse effects in regard of what you wanted to do. Became apparent to me when reading the notes at the end that I was rather more interested in those than in the progress of what happened in the story. Need to divest yourself of backlog of magus concepts is a familiar feeling. Murder-mystery is an inelegant way to do it. Sacrifices characters in death, multiplies them unnecessarily, reduces interest in them to their superficial details or their functional role in the plot. A detective investigating a death in the family does not, at the end, come to know the family as well as the members know each other. He grasps a certain amount of their drama, relations, psychologies - but in an abbreviated form, outline sketches. This is why the game Clue exists: because murder mysteries, particularly the house-murder Agatha Christie codified in the interwar, are ultimately not about characters per se but about character types.

    The point is that character concepts like these are not well made use of by the structure of the story. Particularly Indra. Culmination of a plan centuries/millennia in length and she's gone in a flash. Lamentable, when she is really the most interesting of the bunch, and her personal story - to which all the above events manifest as something akin to a marathon runner getting randomly shot and killed within inches of the finish line - was not only fascinating, what little of it we had conveyed to us, but probably also could have ideally served as an entry point into the themes attendant to DAAs. Mortality, boredom, infinite life, humanity, etc. Do you plan to revisit any of these characters in a different form?

    I have other concerns re: style as impediment to conveying the themes etc. but I'll leave those aside. This is more important.
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    Expresses the exceeding size of one's library.
    Books are extremely many, loaded on an oxcart the ox will sweat.
    At home piled to the ridgepole of the house, from this meaning.
    Read out as 「Ushi ni ase shi, munagi ni mitsu.」
    Source: 柳宗元「其為書,處則充棟宇,出則汗牛馬。」— Tang Dynasty


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    I enjoyed this a lot. If there's something I really like about TM and its fics, it's the lengthy yet rational chains of thought that combine all sorts of things to make really cool magecraft; I'm reminded of the finale from You's Cursed Cold Colle. Also Rengard's giddiness is contagious. Unfortunately I lack much to say given how much you've already said, but thanks for this. It was really fun to read.
    Thanks, happy to hear it.

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    The point is that character concepts like these are not well made use of by the structure of the story. Particularly Indra. Culmination of a plan centuries/millennia in length and she's gone in a flash. Lamentable, when she is really the most interesting of the bunch, and her personal story - to which all the above events manifest as something akin to a marathon runner getting randomly shot and killed within inches of the finish line - was not only fascinating, what little of it we had conveyed to us, but probably also could have ideally served as an entry point into the themes attendant to DAAs. Mortality, boredom, infinite life, humanity, etc. Do you plan to revisit any of these characters in a different form?

    I have other concerns re: style as impediment to conveying the themes etc. but I'll leave those aside. This is more important.
    This is the fundamental issue I have with how it turned out as well, admittedly.

    On the topic of Indra in particular, I was considering a more proper long-term affair tracing her life and eventual fall, since I do agree that she's the biggest example of wasted potential out of the cast, but I'm still in the process of mulling that over given personal circumstances and all of that.

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