I read those already but there are other snippets that's not cataloged.
I read those already but there are other snippets that's not cataloged.
I also think the BAR should be Shirou's alone - just use the love triangle with Erio, please. (maybe you can write this one next time?)
And good job on the sax snippet; though I felt it was something of a grade down compared to your other snippets (this one's a B when others are A or even EX).
I get mainly the long and epic ones. I do miss about half of them, but they're either not up to par, or I just don't like them. Oh and there might be one that I just forgot about and I'm too lazy to go after it.
This is a forum and sifting through hundreds of pages is normal. Though this thread has an abnormal amount of posts, but that's what the table of contents and the search function is for.
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Most of them are posted on the first page, and the ones that arent are only for those who dare dig trough the many pages of this thread.
Mostly because a few are mindbreakingly grimdark( TYPE-MERCURY paying Mid-CHild a visit) or just plain silly.
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@Heroslayer: That was grim dark for you??? Are you serious?
Who else thought that particular snippet was dark?
Let the victor...be justice.
*roll eyes* I was joking. I was referring to my post after the snippet.
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I'm sitting here. I'm catching up..............
Then my brain broke. This is the resault.
__________________________________Shirou? What...___________________________________
The entire body of Section 6 blinked in union. Everyone had come to work today, expecting it to be slow… but the scene out front of the main building had drawn all but the most remote members of the Section to it. Not long after the last few had arrived had the entire section attained some odd synchronization with the blinking as their minds tried to reboot from what they were seeing.
Freelancer Shirou Emiya was well known by the entire staff of the Section, as was his relationship with the Commander and the two Captains of the forward team. So the odd appearance by the Freelancer tended to go without note. But this? This was just too damn weird NOT to get noticed. Hence the large crowd that had unintentionally gathered to see what happened. That is if anyone could get their brains to work in order to ask the question. Males and Females respectively had different reasons for the mind blank.
The silence was broken as Signum pushed her way through the crowd. “Alright, what are you all doing? Get back to work… Shirou?” The Knight blinked and shook her head, long since immune to the weirdness that her Master’s “boyfriend” got up to. “Why are you stuck to the side of the building upside down, and without a shirt on?”
Said Magus, in said position, in said state of dress gave a embarrassed smile (making most the women in the crowd instantly faint much to Signum’s dismay), “Tried playing a practical joke on Nanoha and Fate and it backfired… Hayate found me earlier but decided to leave me here as punishment for doing something so stupid… and I also think to show me off though I’m not sure about that part.”
The Second of Lightning Team sighed in exasperation. This was going to be a long day.
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^ me too.
I shall serve thy cause, upon my honour, till thy death.-Avenger/Jester. Trinity Series.Destined Legacies, shamelessly rewriting it since 2010
When I go random.
yes, yes it was.
Spoiler:
Of course.
Spoiler:
For those of you who missed it.
ORT snippet
Spoiler:
What Fate/Stay Night character are you?
Kotomine Kirei
You are Kirei. You've always been a little different from the rest. You probably have low social skills. Whatever, it's not like what they think matters anyway. Ever searching for something missing within you, you probably don't experience the same happiness as everyone else. Good and evil are just labels, you are who you are.
You know, I was looking at the original outline for Lyrical Days and I was surprised at how much this thing has changed since my original creation of the story.
Anyone else see this kind of thing when they write?
EDIT: I finally got past my bit of writer's block with a scene in chapter 5. So progress has started again. It's slow, but it's being written.
Last edited by Heroslayer; October 9th, 2011 at 06:33 PM.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
I see it all the time.
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Last edited by rajvir; October 9th, 2011 at 08:00 PM. Reason: read the other posts
Now that I think about it, what happened to tha Omake of when Shirou substituted for Nanoha's training class?
The one where he got offered a job?
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