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    Quote Originally Posted by YamiheKazeto View Post
    It reminds me of this doujin when he summoned her as his Servant and they curb-stopmed through the war because she had EX-rank luck. Gae Bolg didn't even hit her.


    Which is why we have Shirou Emiya and Shiro Takamachi, even though their names are really the same.
    Excuse me?

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    Quote Originally Posted by YamiheKazeto View Post
    It reminds me of this doujin when he summoned her as his Servant and they curb-stopmed through the war because she had EX-rank luck. Gae Bolg didn't even hit her.
    I dunno why you quoted me because I'm pretty sure that was Taiga dj.

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    ಠ_ಠ No. No Shirou/Shiro nonsense. It just looks stupid.

    And yes, that dj where E. Shirou summons Taiga as Saber and stomps everyone with EX Luck. Last page has him propositioning.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nununu View Post
    I dunno why you quoted me because I'm pretty sure that was Taiga dj.
    Because the train of thoughts was "Taiga being Shirou's wife -> that doujin".
    Never mind that your post was about a different Shirou.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

    Spoiler:
    There is a need to preserve tension in battle scenes. Therefore, if the protagonist is strong, show battles from his foes' perspective.
    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
    Create things you want to create; shape the world to your whim.
    For you are the author of your tale.


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    We were talking about Momoko? O.o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyte View Post
    We were talking about Momoko? O.o
    Yeah, we were. But you know, it's one of these moments when you read the thread and see something to get a random thought inside of your head, only to find 2 posts later that the post which inspired you was about something else. But the thought still remains there.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

    Spoiler:
    There is a need to preserve tension in battle scenes. Therefore, if the protagonist is strong, show battles from his foes' perspective.
    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
    Create things you want to create; shape the world to your whim.
    For you are the author of your tale.


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    I do it Emiya Shirou and Takamachi Shiro just to make sure I don't mix them up when I write stuff. I tend to write something, get bored/busy and a week later look at my writing and wonder who's talking. Them having the same spelling would not help.

    That's just me though for ease of writing. It should be the same thing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyte View Post
    And yes, that dj where E. Shirou summons Taiga as Saber and stomps everyone with EX Luck.
    Please gimme name, I must read! If you have link it would be greatly appreciated!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyte View Post
    Much preciated mate.

    *after having read it* What is this? I don't even...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (n,n)

    Thanks a bunch, that stuff is golden.

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    Rank EX++...that's just insane.

    On another note, I have 4000 words of Nanoha's date written so far. I'm sorry, but everybody else BUT Shirou and Nanoha are stealing the show.

    In Yagami Hayate's mind, everybody has a harem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    Rank EX++...that's just insane.

    On another note, I have 4000 words of Nanoha's date written so far. I'm sorry, but everybody else BUT Shirou and Nanoha are stealing the show.

    In Yagami Hayate's mind, everybody has a harem.
    I know man, a mysterious space...she carries around a...Reality Marble Phantasm...or something.

    As for the incoming Nanoha Date snippet. Take your time mate, definitely looking forward to it =D

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    Inspired by Lyrical Days


    (Playing Hikari from FSN)


    What was left of Archer was not only the red ruby that he left behind, but also an art block paper that looks as if it was done by children.


    The art block paper depicts of what seems to be a grassy field done with a light green crayon, the blue sky with a light blue crayon and with trees at each side of the paper; all of the trees were drawn with chocolate and green crayons. Overall, the entire image portrays a bright sunny day.


    What was the most tearjerking of all is the two people drawn with crayons in the middle. One of them is drawn with orange crayon on the top of his head; a male most likely due to the short length of his hair.


    The person next to him is a girl; an absolute truth because she has orange-colored hair with pigtails done with orange crayon.


    This is no ordinary piece of artwork.


    This piece of artwork was done by children, filled with hopes and dreams.
    Last edited by shikyo21; February 7th, 2012 at 06:52 AM.

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    Dammit! That's one of the song I remember the name, and it makes everything automatically bittersweet.

    *wipes a single tear*

    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    I would find it great for shits and giggles if...in some instinctual level he was afraid of her. Or Archer meeting Momoko, and deducing she is not someone he can mess with.

    There is just something about Shirou getting bossed around by petite women that are half his size and a third his weight, that brings indescribable feelings of joy to mine chest. ;3
    *risking to repeat himself*

    Come at me, bro!

    *offers brofist*

    About instinctual fear... the feedback is mutual, Shirou download things from Archer and Archer from Shirou. Maybe he dowloads Shirou's fear of Momoko.

    Quote Originally Posted by The Sylentnight View Post
    I thought Shirou gets bossed around by women in general?
    Whe he puts his mind on it, he can control Taiga fairly well (True by threatening her to not cooking for her anymore). And he seems to be in the same ground as Mitsuzuri, instead of being whipped.

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    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
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    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
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    I got this image of racher with Raging heart as his ' jewel' instead of Tohsaka's.


    cue snark-RH and snark-Archer driving every servant mad as they completely ignore their opponent to keep on snarking to each other, which eventually results in RH summoning a pink construct in the shape of Nanoha to hit archer on his head.


    Illya is best servant

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    Rank EX++...that's just insane.

    On another note, I have 4000 words of Nanoha's date written so far. I'm sorry, but everybody else BUT Shirou and Nanoha are stealing the show.

    In Yagami Hayate's mind, everybody has a harem.
    What a scary scary place. I do not think we would survive a look into Yagami Hayate's mind without some sort of filter.

    Now the real question is. Is she a part of Shirou's harem or vice versa?

    EDIT: Fraggle, sounds too much like shadow crystal's crack verse.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    What a scary scary place. I do not think we would survive a look into Yagami Hayate's mind without some sort of filter.

    Now the real question is. Is she a part of Shirou's harem or vice versa?
    Obviously they are all in RH's harem.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ergast View Post

    *risking to repeat himself*

    Come at me, bro!

    *offers brofist*
    BROFIST!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    BROFIST!!!!!

    wtf?
    End of an Empire

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Obviously they are all in RH's harem.
    The Devil's gem is making sure that enough high quality human companions are produced for her eventual offspring between her and Bardiche to partner up with. Every newborn Raising Heart needs it's own White devil after all :P


    Illya is best servant

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