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    Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days (FSN x Nanoha Crossover)

    So this is my story.

    It's a Fate Stay Night and Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha crossover.

    How would the world be changed if Emiya Shirou grew up in Uminari City rather than Fuyuki City. To make things worse he becomes friends with one of his classmates one Takamachi Nanoha.

    Fun times are definitively in store. I plan on going through the original series, A's, and maybe an original story before hitting the Holy Grail War. Which is going to be chaotic and hard to plan with all the changes, but that's half the fun.

    Table of Contents

    Chapter One
    Chapter Two
    Chapter Three (First Half) (Second Half)
    Chapter Four (First Half) (Second Half)
    Chapter Five (First Half) (Second Half)
    Chapter Six (First Half) (Second Half)
    Chapter Seven
    Chapter Eight (First Half) (Second Half)

    Linith Tutoring Sessions

    Session 1

    Side Stages

    1: Those Innocent Days
    2: Those First Days in Fuyuki
    3: Those Difficult Days Apart
    Special: Interviewing Emiya Shirou

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    For the full list of snippets, please refer to the Infinity Library of Swords thread. All snippets are to be posted there and in story discussions are to be posted in this thread.



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    This universe is a bit different from any of the others that we've seen. This world is not bound so tightly by the rules of Fate.


    A difference is made years ago, a tiny rock that derails the tracks of destiny. A boy is born in Fuyuki City and forged in fire. The boy is burned away and the image of a Hero is burned deep into his soul. Emiya Shirou was created on that day. That will not change.


    The change is made when Emiya Kiritsugu leaves Fuyuki city. The man is tired and his body weary. He has done what he could to stop the Holy Grail from ever appearing again, but he no longer wishes to remain in this city where he is constantly reminded of his failures, the death of his lover, and the betrayal of his own ideals. So he leaves the city and doesn't return. He takes the little boy that he pulled from the fires that he created far away from the scorched earth that he found him in.


    So Emiya Shirou does not grow up in Fuyuki City. He finds solace in the fact that the boy he was before is left in that city and that his new life as Emiya Shirou can be created in a new environment.


    And yet, despite the change in setting there is no change to the boy's dream. So even in this new city, the boy's origins stay the same. The boy yearns to be a Hero, and attempts and fails to learn Magecraft. The father leaves constantly in his quest to find the daughter that he promised to return to.


    The years pass until Shirou is nine years old.


    And so the Wheel of Fate turns. A distorted boy with the ambition to be a Hero a boy whose fate is normally filled with hardship and trials. His future is filled with swords and battles. On the other side is the cheerful girl that is searching for her niche in life. The role that she will find will eventually take her beyond the stars themselves. The day these two cross is the day where the Fate of several change.


    Where will this track of destiny take us?


    Let's take a peek, shall we?


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    Hero Slayer Presents:


    Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days


    Chapter One: A Mysterious Encounter. A Magus, a Magical Girl, and a Talking Ferret?




    A white room, one that gave off the image of being pristine and unblemished, that is the kind of room that I wake up to. The clean room fills me with an odd sense of comfort. I look around. The room is big and I see many beds filled with different people. Most of them are like me, children that are covered in bandages and hooked up to machines.

    But there is no sense of pain or death. No, everyone in this room had been hurt but now they are healing. These people were safe. I was safe.

    I relax and let my eyes wander outside of the room. My sight falls to the window against the wall, or rather what's outside the window. The sky looked so beautiful. My eyes were captivated with the bright blue sky that seemed to go on forever.

    It took me a few days to remember. I eventually recall what had happened to me.

    There had been a terrible fire, one that had consumed the town, or a small part of the town. I had been saved and was in the hospital wrapped in bandages. Just me. My parents, my family were gone. The situation didn't make sense to me at the time, but there was some part of me that understood. I was alone now. I like to think that I understood that fact quickly, that I absorbed the knowledge with the rest of the children that surrounded me.

    But after that. When I had accepted the fact that I was alone, when thoughts of what would happen to me filled me with panic and worry, that man came. He came the day my bandages came off. An unkempt man that was dressed in a wrinkled coat. This was the first time I spoke to Emiya Kiritsugu.

    "Hello. You must be Shirou."

    A smile that seemed to reflect the sunlight streaming through the window. His voice sounded a bit odd, but I thought it was a very kind voice.

    This was the man that offered to adopt me. He looked like a man with no future, but it was either him or the orphanage. So when he asked, I decided to go with him. He seemed happy with the choice and messily began to pack up my stuff.

    "Ah, I forgot to mention something important. I have to tell you one thing before you come with me. Is that okay?" He turned to me and lightheartedly and said, "Yeah, to start off with. I'm a sorcerer." He said it in a serious and exaggerated tone.

    Honestly, I was really a child back then. I automatically believed those words. Maybe it was the way he said it or the expression on his face, but I didn't doubt the man for a second. It was that single instant that it happened.

    "Wow, you're awesome." I looked up at the amazing man in front of me.

    This moment was the catalyst. It was probably as I said those words that my path was set. If I could use magic, I could be like this man who saved me.

    Ever since that day I had been that man's son. I even took up his name, Emiya.

    Emiya Shirou. Just hearing the sound of that used to bring a smile to my lips. Just the sheer fact that I shared his name brought me joy. This was the man I would chase for the rest of my life.





    "Emiya-kun, Wake up!"


    The loud shout along with the startling noise of a ruler crashing down on a desk sends Emiya Shirou out of his dream and back into the real world. It also had the side effect of scaring the boy so much that he threw his body backwards much too quickly for his chair to catch and keep on four legs. For a moment, the boy is suspended in the air with a look of horror and surprise on his face. The moment ends and the chair tips.


    "Wah!"


    Crash!


    The nine year old boy had toppled over and even managed to catch the desk behind him with the back of his head. The entire class winced in unison before laughing at the boy's misfortune.


    "Ow…" Shirou whined as he rubbed the back of his head. He looked up from the ground to see his teacher standing over him with an angry expression on her face. "A…ahahaha…" He laughed sheepishly before resigning himself to the lecture that the teacher was going to give him.


    As the nine year old stood in the corner holding the punishment sign that had the words 'Slept in Class' on it, he thought about the dream he just had. It had been a while since he had dreamed of his first meeting with his adoptive father, or anything else that had to do with Fuyuki City. His dreams were usually a lot more violent and nightmarish. His dreams were normally filled with fire.


    "Hmm." Shirou yawned and fiddled with the sign around his neck. "Maybe I need to get a better sleeping schedule." He had stayed up all night practicing the Reinforcement magic that Kiritsugu had showed him. He had gotten the basics of forging a Magic Circuit for the magic, but he still hadn't succeeded at properly Reinforcing an object.


    Shirou felt a sudden weight fall on his shoulders as he recalled his failure. He had been progressing so well lately too. His ability to analyze objects was top notch, if useless from what Kiritsugu had told him, and he had been able to successfully create a magic circuit with nearly a hundred percent success lately. Yet every time he tried to Reinforce an object he seemed to fail. Shirou felt like he was going nowhere lately and that was depressing.


    "Shirou!" The boy straightened up at the teacher's voice. "Just because you're in the corner doesn't mean you don't have to pay attention. Now, why don't you tell the class what you plan on being in the future."


    Shirou nodded and smiled brightly at his teacher. The nine year old red head knew exactly what he was going to be in the future. His path had been set the day he had been taken in by Kiritsugu, no, it was set the day he had been saved from that fire.


    "I'm going to be an Ally of Justice." Shirou told the teacher. It was a baseless claim, but the boy said it completely seriously.


    The class stayed silent for a moment at the boy's words before the dam broke. The entire class rang out with laughter and even the teacher giggled at the boy's enthusiasm for what they thought was a fictional profession.


    "An Ally of Justice? Is he joking?" One of his classmates asked the person next to him.


    "I don't think so. Emiya isn't the type to joke around." The girl giggled. "He honestly thinks he can be a super hero."


    Shirou paid the laughter no mind and ignored the teacher's words about choosing a serious profession. He was used to the laughter and disbelief from other people. They didn't understand the world that Shirou wanted to live in.





    "You should have taken that project seriously, Shirou-san."


    Shirou looked up from his lunch to see his normal lunch companions. The three girls, Nanoha Takamachi, Alisa Bannings, and Suzuka Tsukimura were probably the cutest girls in their grade. They had a tendency to hang around each other and all three were pretty popular. Shirou spent a fair amount of time with the trio. Mostly because he spent a lot of time training with Nanoha's older brother, Kouya, in their family dojo and quickly became friends with Nanoha. The other two girls liked Shirou enough and he quickly became part of their little group.


    "Ah, I am taking it seriously Suzuka-san." Shirou responded and clenched a fist tightly. The fires of his passions burned brightly behind him. "I'm going to be a Hero of Justice and save people."


    "Ah, what is with our group? First Nanoha doesn't give an answer at all to the assignment then you give this joke of a speech on being a comic book hero." Alisa sighed as she pressed a hand to her forehead.


    "I think that Alisa-chan and Suzuka-chan are more amazing for knowing what they want to do." Nanoha sighed and tried to think of what she would do in her future. So far the choices that were presented to her didn't seem right.


    "Ah that's right." Shirou nodded and recalled that while most of the class had vague answers for their future or simply put they were undecided both Alisa and Suzuka had concrete answers for their future. "Alisa-san is going to succeed her parents and Suzuka-san is planning to become an engineer, right?"


    Suzuka nodded and smiled at the boy. "Yes. I like machines and such so I thought it would be nice to go into engineering."


    Shirou looked over to Nanoha who looked to be deep in thought. "What about you, Nanoha-san. Are you going to take over the Midoriya?" He said referring to the café that the Takamachi owned.


    "Hai, that's one option." The girl sighed and stared into the distance. "But I feel like there's something else out there that's more suited for me. I just wish I knew what that thing was."


    Shirou took another bite of his lunch box before attempting to reassure the girl. "I'm sure you'll find it eventually." It was unrealistic to find the path you wanted to take at such a young age. Or so Kiritsugu told him whenever he said he wanted to follow in his footsteps.


    Suzuka nodded and smiled at the girl. "Yes, you shouldn't take this decision lightly. I'm sure you'll find the path that fits you best." Seeing Shirou agree with her, she turned to the boy and frowned at him in disappointment. "That goes for you too Shirou-san. You shouldn't joke around about your future."


    "I'm not joking. I'm going to be a Hero." Shirou retorted. Both Alisa and Suzuka sighed at the boy's stubbornness while Nanoha giggled at all of them.


    "Being a hero isn't an occupation you idiot!" Alisa shouted at him. The boy was always so stubborn about things like this. Sure if you ask him to help you with something he'll agree right away, but if you debate the way things worked the boy would dig his heels into the ground.


    "Says you." Shirou pouted when he realized that none of the three were taking his future ambition seriously. He really couldn't blame them. They didn't know that people like Kiritsugu were out there saving people. He was chasing after an entirely different world. "There are plenty of Heroes out there."


    "Argh, I give up!" Alisa threw her arms in the air. There was no way to convince Shirou when he got like this.


    The conversation eventually turned to other subjects and Shirou spent the rest of the lunch period in idle conversation with the girls. Shirou didn't really contribute too much as he was more occupied with his own dreams. The boy somehow completely missed the scuffle Nanoha and Alisa got into until Suzuka asked him to help calm the two down. It eventually degenerated into a three way wrestling match with Shirou valiantly attempting to stop the struggle.


    Needless to say, Nanoha won.





    "Hurry up Shirou!" Shirou wasn't really sure which of the girls had shouted that, but he quickened his pace just the same.


    "I'm coming, I'm coming." Shirou rolled his eyes but smiled as the girls ran ahead of him. He adjusted the strap on a duffle bag to a more comfortable position and jogged after the girls.


    After school had ended, Shirou quickly gathered his stuff and ran out to meet the girls. Since he had started taking lessons from Kouya, he had been assigned the duty of escorting Nanoha and her friends to cram school. He would grab his extra bag and follow the girls along to make sure they made it safe before running to the Takamachi's dojo for his daily lessons.


    It was a daily habit and Shirou quickly learned to keep the idle chatter mostly about neutral subjects or to just keep quiet. He had no real desire to get sucked into girl talk on a daily basis, though he would gladly join any conversation that had to do with cooking. The boy's obsession with cooking had weirded out the girls at first, but they quickly accepted it as one of his quirks. It helped that the boy would share some of his better successes with the girls during lunch.


    Today it seemed like the girls wanted to take a short cut through the woods. Shirou had protested lightly stating that it could be dangerous, but it didn't take much for the three girls to convince him. The three girls had a lot of practice with convincing Shirou to do something against his will and had gotten very good at it.


    Shirou followed the trio of girls and started going over the forms and attacks that he would be practicing today with Kouya. He didn't really mind walking the girls to cram school but he would rather be training. His thoughts were halted when he bumped into someone.


    "Ack." Shirou looked up to see that Nanoha had stopped in the middle of the path. The girl looked distracted and she was staring at something in the distance. "Nanoha?"


    "Didn't you hear that?" Nanoha tilted her head and tried to find the source of the sound.


    "Hear what?" Shirou looked around for any noise. He hadn't been paying much attention to their surroundings. Before he could even try to locate the noise, Nanoha had taken off into the woods. "Oi, Nanoha!"


    Shirou chased after the girl. He normally would have no problem keeping up with the girl but weighted down by his kendo bag the boy had a hard time keeping up with her.


    "It came from over here!" Nanoha called back to them. She pointed out a small clearing in the woods.


    Shirou picked up his pace and silently wished he could just magic himself over there. When he reached the clearing he looked around for any sign of a person hurt or in danger, but the clearing was empty. "Nanoha, I don't see anyone."


    "Ah…" Nanoha stepped in front of Shirou and knelt down on the floor. In front of her was a ferret curled up on the ground. Judging from its beat up appearance the thing had been injured somehow. Shirou sighed and mentally yelled at himself for feeling disappointed that there was no one to save.


    "N-nanoha, Shirou, why did you start running like that?" Both Alisa and Suzuka had caught up to the two of them. At the sight of the wounded animal both of the girls joined Nanoha and started cooing over it. "It's injured. We need to take it a hospital, no a vet."


    Shirou sighed as the girls started panicking over what to do with the ferret and took charge. He reached into his kendo bag for some soft material. He found an extra shirt and used it to wrap the ferret in and keep it warm. As he picked up the ferret and wrapped it in the shirt his hand brushed over the red gem that hung on its collar. A small shock rushed through up Shirou's arm and he paused for a moment. He stared at the animal intently before brushing it off as nothing. "Come on, there should be a vet around here somewhere, right?"


    Alisa nodded and pulled out her cell phone. Shirou guessed that the girl had a map or something on the thing as she nodded and started running in a direction. "There's one over in this direction." She shouted back to them.


    Shirou adjusted his kendo bag before running after him. A stray thought went through his head. Magic was real after all, why couldn't magical animals be real too? He gave the ferret one curious look that quickly shifted over to Nahoha as he recalled her saying she heard something. Maybe there was something special about it after all.





    The key to success is both a strong mind and a strong body. Those words were spoken to him by Kiritsugu Emiya. When Shirou had finally gotten Kiritsugu to agree to teach him magic the first thing they did was exercise. It didn't make much sense to Shirou until later, but the key to magic was not only studying hard but having a sturdy body too. Shirou wasn't really sure how their exercises turned into Kendo sparring, but learning swordsmanship had become something of a hobby for the child.


    When Kiritsugu first left on one of his many trips, Shirou found himself without a sparring partner. He had tried to join the school's Kendo club, but he felt that the club was too rigid and that the sport based swords style was too gentle for his tastes. So he had looked for any dojo in the area to join. His search had been rather fruitless until he made his displeasure known in class. Nanoha had told him that both her brother and sister practiced a family style and Shirou had immediately latched onto the girl and begged her to ask them to teach him. Oddly enough, they had agreed.


    So Shirou spent several days in the week training with one of the Tachamichi family after school. It had started out as Miyuki teaching him, but most of the time it was Kouya teaching him.


    It was something that Shirou himself enjoyed on a great level. Both Kouya and Miyuki were extremely good at swordsmanship and in the years that Shirou had been studying under them, not once had he scored a point on either of them.


    Shirou gasped for breath as he blocked a flurry of attacks. His hands were covered with sweat and his practice sword grew heavier with every block and every swing. He attempted to twist away from his assailant for a breather. But it was not meant to be.


    "You're open!" His teacher called out before applying his own practice sword to Shirou's head.


    Whack! Thud!


    "Gah!" Shirou fell on the ground and dropped his practice sword in favor of holding his head with his hands. Beneath his hands was the start of a small bruise. If you looked closer you would see several similar bruises on his arms and there was no doubt there were similar bruises on the boy's body. "Owwy…"


    Kouya sighed but couldn't help the amused smile on his face. When Nanoha had first asked him to train a friend of hers from school, he had been skeptic at best. But Shirou had already learned the basics from Kiritsugu and he was an attentive student, so the training continued. The boy was almost unnaturally determined to become strong but there were moments like this in the middle of training that showed the boy's age. In the middle of battle the boy's focus was unbreakable, but the moment the battle was over the boy had no qualms about complaining, politely of course.


    "I think we've done today Shirou." Kouya tossed the boy a water bottle and chuckled as Shirou greedily drained the entire thing. "You seem a bit distracted, any reason why?"


    Shirou finished his water and shook his head. "It's nothing. I-" Shirou paused in the middle of his statement. What was bothering him? They had dropped the ferret off at a vet and the girls went off to cram school. Then Shirou had left for his lesson from Kouya, but he couldn't concentrate. There was nothing that should have bothered him and yet here he was, completely distracted from his training.


    Kouya dismissed Shirou for the day and told him to come back when his mind was clearer. Shirou sighed and slowly made his way back home. The boy dragged his feet. He didn't really have much to look forward to. Kiritsugu was out on another errand for a few days. He probably had another night spent practicing his Magecraft and failing as usual. The Emiya residence in Uminari city was a far cry from the traditional estate that Shirou vaguely remembered when Kiritsugu first adopted him. A two story western style house, the Emiya residence was no different than any other house on the block. The only difference between Shirou's home and the rest was the subtle Boundary Field that surrounded the house. It was something that Kiritsugu had built as soon as they moved in. The Boundary Field was a warning system that alerted any of the users if someone entered the area with violent intentions.


    "I'm home." Shirou's voice echoed throughout the empty house before he tossed his bag in the corner of the living room. There was no reply of 'Welcome Home' or 'How was your day?' but Shirou never expected an answer. He had grown used to the act of returning to an empty home and even the few times Kiritsugu was home he rarely answered the call back without some prompting. He gave a brief thought of how his father was doing before turning his attention to the kitchen. His last attempt at beef stew had been a failure, but he was sure that he could get the recipe to work this time.





    The room that Shirou sat in was Spartan at best. The only objects in the room were a single desk covered in papers, Shirou himself and a single pipe. Magecraft was a dangerous practice and at his current level, Shirou couldn't afford any distractions. A single mistake could cripple him for life at best or even kill him at worst.


    It was a lesson that Shirou quickly learned. To learn Magecraft is to walk with death.


    Shirou placed a hand over the pipe and began.


    Inhale


    Focus, clear your thoughts.


    Exhale


    Empty your mind.


    Inhale


    Slowly forge the magic circuit.


    Exhale


    It has to be perfect, or else the nerves that are the materials for the circuit with burn out too early.


    Inhale


    A rush of heat invades Shirou's body, almost as if someone shoved a blowtorch into his spine and replaced the blood in his veins with lava. His head grew heavy as he pushed past the pain.


    A forced exhale through clenched teeth


    The Magic Circuit was in place. Shirou had already scanned the pipe with Structural Analysis earlier so he knew exactly where he needed to push his Od into.


    Inhale. The oxygen is greedily sucked into the boy's body as he strained to push what little magic he could into the object that he held in his hands.


    Reinforcement Complete


    The boy let out the breath he had been holding and fell backwards onto his back. His breathing was labored and his face flushed with exhaustion. His entire body felt heavy like he had run a marathon but his elation at success overran any pain or exhaustion. The magus in training struggled back up into a sitting position and looked down at the Reinforced pipe. The feelings of pride and success were quickly dashed when his eyes fell on the pipe. He had been able to push Od into the pipe, but the pipe hadn't been able to take the amount of Prana that was pushed into it. The pipe had warped and twisted and there were parts of the pipe that were completely fractured.


    Shirou just stared at the broken pipe for a moment before falling back onto his back. "Damn…" He felt his eyes grow heavy and Emiya Shirou fell asleep contemplating another failure.





    '…elp…'


    "Huh?"


    'So…one…hel…me…'


    Shirou groaned and slowly roused himself. He opened his eyes and gazed around the room in confusion. The house was empty and Kiritsugu wouldn't be home for another few days. So where was that voice coming from?


    Before the voice could be dismissed as being from his dreams, it rang out again. 'Hurry, someone come and help!'


    Any trace of sleep was brushed aside when Shirou heard that cry. The boy froze and looked around for the source of the voice. He ran out of his house as the voice continued to cry out for help only pausing to grab his wooden practice sword. He ran out into the streets and followed his instinct as the voice echoed in his head. When the voice grew more frantic, Shirou picked up the pace until he reached the source.


    "This is…" He had been to this building earlier this afternoon. This is the vet where they had dropped off the ferret Nanoha found. His magical senses were still new but even he could feel the sheer amount of magical energy pulsing out of the building. It was a surprise that no one else had felt something and came to investigate.


    "Shirou?" A familiar voice called out from behind him. Shirou spun around and stared at the speaker in complete bewilderment.


    "Nanoha? What are you doing here?" It was pretty late at night and there wasn't any reason for the girl to be out here. She was in here pajamas too. But before he could get any answers from the girl the building behind him shuttered as if struck. Both of the children turned around to stare at the building in confusion.


    CRASH!


    The wall of the building exploded and sent pieces of shrapnel everywhere. Shirou threw himself in front of Nanoha to protect her. When the cloud of dust had settled both of them looked up and saw the creator of the explosion. In front of the nine year olds were two things. The first was the ferret he had just been thinking about. That was fine. He had thought that the animal was a bit different anyways.


    It was the other being that was confusing. A black ball of darkness that looked almost like a solid cloud of black cotton with a demonic face on it flew out of the building.


    Both of the children stared at the sight of a small rodent being attacked by a magic cloud of darkness for a moment before Shirou snapped out of his shock. "Did… did I just see a magic black fur ball attack a ferret?" Shirou's question was directed more to the air than anything, but Nanoha nodded none the less. The girl's shock was quickly replaced with worry and shock as she remembered what was going on.


    "Ah, we have to help Ferret-san!" Before he could stop her, Nanoha ran over and picked up the ferret. Shirou swore as he saw the monster dove down for another attack. Shirou darted in front of the two of them and swung his practice sword before the thing could get to them. The strike was a solid one and knocked the monster back. It quickly reoriented itself and roared at the boy that was in its way. The monster rushed at the boy this time much faster than before.


    Shirou raised his sword up to block the strike and felt the monster connect with the wooden blade, but the sheer force of the monster's attack sent him flying across the street. He hit the ground and rolled a few feet before stopping.


    "Gah…" Shirou struggled to his feet and look down at his practice blade. His hadn't done anything? No, his strike simply was too light. He just needed to hit it harder or find a weak point. The monster roared and decided to destroy the annoying one that struck it first.


    It spiraled into the sky and dove down to crush the small boy with its with body. Shirou saw the thing falling and dove away. The monster shot back into the sky again and attempted to crush the boy several times, only for the boy to dive away before it could strike. Finally it stopped on the ground and shot horizontally at the boy rather than from the sky.


    That was just what Shirou was hoping for. The boy rushed forward at the monster to meet the monster's charge. He would meet the monster head on with his strongest strike.


    "Ahhh!"


    Except it wasn't meant to be. A flash of pink light flared out to the side of them. The monster froze at the sight of the light and stopped in mid air. This left Shirou, who was completely committed to his attack, to miss and smash his sword into the ground. The boy tumbled from overextending but quickly rushed back to his feet to stare at the light in amazement.


    "What is that…?" He whispered. It felt completely different than the power that was coming out of the monster. The light faded quickly and left Nanoha standing there confused clutching a staff and in a new dress. "Nanoha?"


    The monster roared at the new threat that actually posed a danger to it and rose into the air for another charge. It shot down at the girl causing her to flinch. Shirou swore as he realized that he was too far to knock her out of the way or block the strike. "Nanoha!"


    A flare of power once again flooded over Shirou's senses as a pink barrier appeared in front of Nanoha. The monster struggled to smash through like it had with Shirou's guard but the barrier held. The rebound of the force threw the monster backwards and caused it to explode into several gooey pieces.


    "Eh…" Shirou couldn't believe his eyes. That was definitely magic. Nanoha Takamachi had just used magic. Ridiculously strong magic at that.


    Before Shirou could ask her what was going on, he saw something in the corner of his sight. The pieces of the monsters were moving together and reassembling themselves again.


    "What does it take to kill this thing?" Shirou pulled his sword up for another strike when something spoke to his side.


    "We're not going to kill it. We need to seal it." Shirou looked at the source of the voice and saw the ferret from earlier.


    "It… can talk…" Shirou grinned and pointed at it with a triumphant expression on his face. "I knew it, you are a magical animal!"


    "His name is Yuuno and this is his staff." Nanoha giggled at Shirou's excitement as she gestured to the staff in her hands.


    "Alright, so how do we seal it?" Shirou asked. He wanted to ask several questions but he knew his priorities. Beat the monster and then came the cool explanations for what's going on. He didn't posses anything near the magical ability to seal something like a monster.


    "Nanoha can do it. She just needs some time to figure it out." Yuuno's answer was calm despite the fact that they were fighting a monster at the moment.


    Shirou frowned for a moment but quickly came to a decision. "Alright then I'll distract it while she does that."


    "No you won't. It's too dangerous." Nanoha was quick to reject his offer but Shirou grinned at her.


    "Come on Nanoha. What kind of Hero would I be if I left you to face this thing alone?" After he said that the boy looked down at the wooden practice sword in his hands. It wouldn't be enough to fight a monster. He would need something better. A determined expression crossed Shirou's face. "And you're not the only one that can do magic either Nanoha."


    "Eh?" Both Nanoha and Yuuno looked at him in confusion.


    "Don't worry about it." Shirou waved them off and ran to confront the reforming monster.


    Shirou knew that Magecraft in this kind of situation would be suicide. He could barely form a Magic Circuit in an ideal environment let alone a battle situation, but he didn't really have much choice. Shirou braced himself before declaring his aria.


    "Trace… On!" Fire flooded into Shirou's veins once more as he hastily formed a Magic Circuit. He ignored the familiar pain and tried to estimate how much the wooden sword could take without using Structural Analysis for an extended period of time. The blueprint of the practice blade formed in an instant. The shape of the wood, the miniscule cracks that were unseen to the naked eye and even the polish were all mapped out in a single moment. Od flooded through Shirou's crudely constructed Magic Circuit and into the blade itself. The Od rushed into the blade and made it stronger, Reinforcing the structure of the practice sword done to its basic elements.


    Finally the intense moment was over and the fire faded from his veins. Shirou shakily looked up to see that the monster had finished reassembling itself. It dove down at him. On well trained instinct the boy rolled to the side just in time to dodge the strike. The monster's blow drove a crater into the ground but it quickly shot out of the dust cloud that the attack had create.


    The boy didn't think. He just acted. He tightened his grip on his sword and rushed forward at the monster. It would all come down to this. If he succeeded he would win, if he failed then the sword would break and the monster would kill him. It was simple as that. No other thoughts were necessary.


    Shirou jumped up and swung at the monster before it could recover and strike again. The wooden practice sword smashed into the monster and roughly carved through the black substance that it was made of.


    Shirou landed on his feet and looked down at his practice sword in amazement. "I can't believe it…" He whispered. A normal wooden sword would have never been able to do that. It would have broken under the pressure of that kind of blow but the wooden practice sword didn't have any new cracks on it. That meant that he had succeeded! He had used proper Magecraft for the first time!


    "Shirou, look out!"


    The mental celebration that Shirou was planning on having was cut short as the monster roared again and reformed itself. It rocketed down in another rush. Caught off guard, Shirou wasn't able to dodge in time and twisted around to block.


    The strike knocked the practice sword backward into Shirou's body and knocked him across the area once more. His aided flight was interrupted by the wall of the animal clinic. He slid down the wall and curled into a ball in pain. The initial strike hadn't been that bad, but he could have sworn that he felt a rib crack when he crashed into the wall.


    "Ugh…" The Magus in training pressed a hand to his and winced when the light pressure caused pain. "That didn't work as well as I hoped."


    "Jewel Seed Seal!" Nanoha's voice calling out was a relief to the boy as he had no idea how he was going to keep the thing busy for another second.


    Shirou watched in amazement from the wall as the staff that Nanoha held sent pink ribbons made of magic out and wrapped them around the monster. The beast roared one last desperate roar as it struggled against its bonds. Then it froze as the Roman numeral for twenty one lit up between its eyes and it dissolved.


    "That…was pretty cool." Shirou admitted to himself. When he heard that Nanoha had to seal it, he had to admit he was expecting worse. A lot of posing and girly backgrounds, not chains of magic and a cool light show.


    A small jewel dropped to the ground. Shirou picked himself up and slowly made his way to the jewel and watched as Nanoha poked it with the staff. The jewel glowed for a moment before disappearing into the staff.


    "Receipt number twenty one." The staff spoke in a rather mechanical voice as it lit up the Roman numeral to match the number it just spoke.


    "So the staff is sentient?" Shirou looked over at the device in curiosity. He knew that magic was out there, but so far all he knew about was Magecraft. He knew that powerful artifacts and Mystic Codes could be enchanted with intelligence but he had never seen one before. He would have asked more questions but a small noise at his feet caused him to look down at the collapsed ferret.


    "Yuuno!" Nanoha ran over to the small animal. "Are you ok?"


    "I'm fine." Yuuno reassured the girl. "We should get out of here before we're noticed though."


    "Ah…" Shirou flinched when he heard sirens approaching the area. Magic was to be kept a secret. That was another lessons that Kiritsugu beat into his head. "We should go, like right now."


    "Ah…" The staff that Nanoha was holding disappeared along with the new dress she was wearing. "Let's run!"


    Shirou grabbed Nanoha's wrist and took off. The both of them ran for a while until they entered a park. Since it was so late the entire park was empty. Shirou stopped to catch his breath. The adrenaline from the battle was starting to fade and he could feel his ribs strain when he breathed too deeply. The two of them along with Yuuno sat down on a bench to talk.


    "Alright." Shirou loomed over Yuuno and resisted the urge to poke him a few times. "So you're magical?"


    "Well yes." Yunno paused to get comfortable. "It's a long explanation but first. I am sorry for getting you involved in this."


    Shirou waved off his apology. "Don't worry about it. This kind of thing is what I've been training for."


    "Oh." Nanoha thought of something and paused to introduce them. "My name is Takamachi Nanoha and this is Emiya Shirou."


    Yunno gave a small bow. This looked a little cute since it was a small ferret doing the bowing. "I am Yuuno Scrya. I am glad to make your acquaintance." He introduced himself. Shirou noticed that the ferret spoke rather formally.


    "As for me and that monster." Yuuno paused for a moment to gather his thoughts. "It's my fault. I was the one to find them so I am the one responsible for collecting them again. They are called Jewel Seeds."


    Shirou listened intently as the ferret began his explanation. He had learned quickly that not paying attention during important explanations was dangerous. He had fallen asleep during a lecture from Kiritsugu about forming Magic Circuits and when he tried to fill in the blanks by himself… well… let's just say that he learned his lesson.


    "My clan and I are archeologists." Yuuno continued, a little nervous at the attention that Shirou was paying him. "It was on a dig that I found them. They are part of an ancient civilization, and particular artifacts of this classification are called Lost Logia. The Jewel Seeds are believed to be capable of granting wishes, but as that creature showed, they can have far different effects."


    "So someone wished for that creature?" Nanoha asked as he tilted her head.


    "Not exactly. We don't really know what their original purpose was. But they run on desires. So if there is no one around when they activate, their effects are random and unpredictable. So we decided that it would be best to have them sealed and stored." Yuuno curled up in Nanoha's lap and continued. "Instead they were scattered across this world during transit. I was the one that found them, so I am going to be the one to seal them back up. I just need to rest first. I just need a few days.


    "We'll help." Nanoha smiled. "Right Shirou?"


    Shirou nodded. "Of course. A Hero would never leave something like the Jewel Seeds out in the open where they can hurt people. Anyways…" Shirou scratched the side of his cheek. "I kinda want to see more of your magic anyways."


    "You can't." Yuuno shot to his feet. "It's my responsibility!"


    "And you're in no shape for monster hunting." Shirou frowned. It was a little selfish, but he wanted to do this. He wanted to be a Hero. So he wasn't about to accept the ferret's reasons so easily. "We can't just leave them alone. People'll get hurt."


    "Right!" Nanoha nodded. Then she remembered something and turned to Shirou. "Ah that's right. Shirou-kun, what did you do earlier when you cut the monster?"


    Shirou blinked and then remembered that he had Reinforced his sword. He had done Magecraft!


    Yuuno paused in his attempts to persuade these two from doing this and looked at the boy. "That's right. I don't think a wooden sword would have done that much damage. Not to mention you said something before you struck the monster."


    "Race on. I think." Nanoha tilted her head at the odd English phrase.


    "Ah…ahaha…" Shirou laughed nervously before sighing. "It's 'Trace On.' It's my personal aria for Magecraft."


    "Magecraft?" Both Nanoha and Yuuno repeated in confusion.


    "Yes. I Reinforced the sword with my Magecraft." Shirou nodded. "I am one who uses Magecraft. I am a magus."


    "Magus… I didn't know that Earth had magic users." Yuuno stared at the boy curiously before making a decision. "Shirou, would you mind holding Raising Heart."


    "Huh?" Shirou blinked when Nanoha handed him the red gem that used to hang around Yuuno's neck. He rolled the gem with his fingers for a moment before he felt something odd. Shirou closed his eyes and felt something tug at him.


    "Access Denied, mana levels insufficient." The gem flashed as it chimed back.


    "Huh, it didn't work?" Shirou frowned. He didn't really expect the thing to work, but he couldn't say he didn't hope that he could use the staff too. Still, he wasn't too disappointed. He wasn't a proper magus so he didn't have Magic Circuits to channel magic.


    "Raising Heart requires a certain amount of magic energy to activate. If the user's magical stores don't match a certain level then it will deny the user access." Yuuno yawned and curled into a ball. "Even at its lowest levels you would probably be drained after a week or so of constantly feeding it mana. You do have magic just not a lot of it." That was interesting. He wondered if this planet had adapted to lower magic levels and created magic from that.


    "So Nanoha has a lot of mana then?" Shirou stared at the girl. She didn't seem like a magus like Kiristugu, but then again this was a different type of magic. Maybe it required a different type of mana.


    "Master Shirou's magical level rating is inconclusive, this unit places it at Rank D-. Master Nanoha's magical level rated at rank A." The device lit up as it ranked the both of them.


    "Rank?" Shirou wondered what that meant exactly.


    "E through S plus." Yuuno mumbled. "D is below average and A rank is something like one in one thousand on Mid-Childa. That's just magical level. Most people can't really use it right even if they have enough magical energy."


    Yuuno's words sunk into Shirou's mind and he realized a harsh truth. "Huh, so I'm a failure at this magic too." Shirou muttered to himself.


    "Incorrect. Master simply does not match the magical threshold needed to activate this device. Magical pathways are unused but properly formed." The device replied to Shirou's muttering. He looked down at the gem in confusion.


    "Magical pathways…?" Shirou repeated. The statement sunk into the boy's mind immediately and he had to suppress the urge to start shaking the device and demanding it explain what it meant.


    "I think we should go home." Nanoha lifted a now sleeping Yuuno carefully. "We can talk about this later."


    "Right..." Shirou didn't want to leave just yet, but his ribs still hurt and he was too tired to think straight. He got to his feet and winced at the pain he felt in his chest. He pressed a hand to it and found that the pressure didn't hurt it anymore. He would have to be careful on his way home, but he should be fine.


    "Are you okay?" Nanoha frowned at his pained expression. "That monster hit you pretty hard."


    Shirou tried to reassure her, but he moved too quickly and winced at the spike of pain that shot through his chest. "Don't worry about it. I'll be a little sore tomorrow but this isn't anything worse than when I spar with your brother." That was a blatant lie. Kouya never hurt Shirou this badly once during their spars.


    "If you say so." Nanoha didn't seem convinced but let it go. "Then I'll see you tomorrow Shirou."


    Shirou nodded and started his long painful walk back to his house. It was only after a few painful steps that Shirou realized a big problem.


    "Which way is my house?"
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    Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days


    Chapter Two: Jewel Seed Scramble




    He was dreaming again.

    The same dream repeated itself night after night. A single life changing day that would haunt him for the rest of his life. The details of the dream do not fade over time, nor does that day get any clearer. They continue unchanged.

    Fire.

    There is fire all around him. His lungs burn from exhaustion more than the smoke that clouded the area. He pushed himself for another step and another. He has to keep going.

    Just a little further. That's what he tells himself. He just has to go a little further. He had survived, so that meant he should live. The boy wandered the area aimlessly since he had no idea where it was safe. He only knew that it would be dangerous to stay still.

    He must have had the devils luck because he was the only thing left alive. Could he call it luck, when he lingered in this inferno while the others were able to die?

    Even a child could understand that this place was hell. There was no hope of being saved. It was a wonder that he had made it this far at all. So maybe calling it luck was wrong.

    Another step and another until, finally, his body finally gave out. The world tilts and the ground suddenly envelops his vision. He had fallen. His legs couldn't take another step. There was no energy, no life preserving instinct left. He had burned out. The fire had consumed him completely. There was nothing left but his body to burn.

    The boy stared up at the sky and saw dark clouds looming over the area. That was good. The rain would put out the fire.

    "It hurts." The boy whispers. The statement is less for himself and more for the people that can no longer speak the words. He closes his eyes and braces himself for what is to come.



    "Ugh." Shirou groaned as the light from the window moved over his face. He turned over to keep the light away. "It's too early." It had taken him an hour to get back home after the fight and even after that he hadn't gotten much sleep. The rough process of patching up his ribs took a long time and sleeping with them was even worse.


    "Ah." Shirou remembered his injury from last night and pressed a hand to his chest. He took a deep breath. "No pain. I guess it healed." Shirou smiled. That was great. He was worried about going to school with cracked ribs. He must have judged the wound a lot worse than it had been.


    Shirou looked over at the clock near his bed and gasped at the time. "Oh geez, I overslept." He would barely have enough time to make lunch if he ate toast rather than making a proper breakfast. There wasn't even enough time for him to go through his morning exercise routine.


    The boy dressed quickly and rushed to the kitchen to get a start on lunch. He hummed lightly as he sliced the slits on the sausages before frying them. He had mentally checked what else he had to put in the box and frowned when he realized that he would need to go shopping soon.


    He poured some oil on the pan and started slicing up some vegetables as the pan warmed up.


    'Shirou?'


    Shirou paused in his slicing when he heard that. "Nanoha?" He looked around but saw nothing. It sounded weird to. It didn't sound like his ears caught sound more like he heard her voice in his head. 'Great. Now I'm hearing things.'


    A girl giggling in his head causing him to freeze. 'You aren't hearing things.'


    Shirou froze. That was definitely Nanoha, and she responded to his thoughts. Feeling a little silly he focused on Nanoha. 'Is this more of your magic?'


    'Yuuno was explaining a few things to me and showed me this method to talk. I wanted to see if I could talk with you as well.' The girl explained.


    Shriou couldn't help but marvel at the ease of which the girl was learning magic. It had taken him years to even get a single success with the easiest of Magecraft and now…


    'Oh my god!' He had succeeded in Reinforcement.


    'Ah! Shirou. Are you alright?' Nanoha's worried voice reminded him that she could still hear his thoughts.


    Despite the fact that no one could see him, Shirou blushed and scratched the back of his head in embarrassment. 'Sorry, I just realized something.'


    'It's no problem.' Nanoha sounded relieved that he was okay. 'I'm glad you're alright. And thank you for helping last night Shirou.'


    'You don't need to thank me for that.' Shirou grinned and shook his head. He didn't need to be thanked for something like that. He wanted to do something like that desperately. His entire life was dedicated to being a Hero. 'I would have helped you no matter what. It's-'


    'What a Hero would do, right?' Nanoha giggled over the link.


    'Of course.' He shot back and scowled as his cheeks burned again. Maybe he should stop his constant reassurances that he'll be a Hero. Okay, maybe just in public.





    Shirou ignored the teacher's lesson and looked down at his notebook. Written in it were several notes about what he learned last night.


    Yuuno was a magical ferret. He was searching for several dangerous objects called Jewel Seeds. These objects can causes wishes or something but if left alone they would create monsters.


    The staff, Raising Heart, could only be used by high level magic users which included Yuuno and Nanoha. So far Nanoha had displayed sealing magic, barrier magic, and now some sort of communication magic. Yuuno had said that she had talent that was extremely rare, so did that mean those spells were innate to her or part of that odd Mystic Code.


    Raising Heart had displayed sentience and ranked him as below average in magical capacity and unfit for a user. Though it had mentioned that he had magical pathways.


    That final fact had been underlined several times. Shirou was desperate to know what that meant. He thought that he was a normal person incapable of using magic. Yet the device said he had the ability if not the talent.


    He tapped the notebook a few times before adding a small comment next to the underlined sentence.


    Magic Circuit?


    He would have to wait until Kiristugu came home from his trip to ask about that. If he did actually possess Magic Circuits that meant that he could be an actual Magus instead of an imitator like he was. He could be a Hero just like Kiristugu.


    Shirou sighed and closed the notebook and carefully placed it in his backpack. He pulled out his normal notebook for the rest of the lesson. There was nothing he could do about it right now.


    When the bell finally rang and signaled the end of class Shirou quickly gathered his stuff and ran out to meet Nanoha and Yuuno. As he was dashing through the halls, a hand reached out and grabbed his arm. Shirou paused at the tug and looked behind him to see a girl from his class on the ground. He had tugged her off her feet.


    "Ack, Hino-san, I'm so sorry!" The boy quickly helped her to her feet.


    "Geez, Emiya. I didn't think you would be this excited about shrine work." The girl rubbed her shoulder before giving the boy an odd look.


    "Shrine work?" Shirou's mind was so filled with theories and questions to ask Yuuno that he pushed everything else in his mind aside.


    "You forgot?" The girl glared at him. Shirou winced and started to stammer some sort of an apology but the glare that she shot him shut him up. He racked his brain for any requests at a shrine but all he could think of was the possibility of using Magecraft.


    "Look," The girl pressed a finger to Shirou's chest, "You promised my grandfather that you would help out at the shrine to give me the day off and you're going to make good on your promise."


    Shirou opened his mouth to object but remembered that he did promise that he would help at the Shrine. He hung his head, defeated. "Yes ma'am."





    Shirou found himself dressed in shrine robes at the Hino Shrine. He looked around the large shrine grounds and the leaves that littered the area. He then looked down at the broom in his hands and sighed. "I'm starting to see why people tell me that helping everyone is going to get me in trouble."


    He had escorted Nanoha and her friends to Cram School like usual and ran off to help at the shrine. It was something he had done in exchange for the lessons on meditation that the resident priest gave him. He hadn't really learned anything that would aid his Magecraft, but he had learned some interesting things and wanted to repay the Shrine Owner. Eventually they agreed that Shirou would help out at the shrine for one day.


    "Alright." Shirou finally finished sweeping the ground of the leaves into a pile and wiped the sweat off his brow. Then he looked down at the hundreds of stairs that lead up to the shrine. The sight made him groan. "I'm not even close to being done."


    There was no chance of him asking Yuuno anything today. Maybe he should try to keep the questions and his apprehension out of mind. It would be good practice for Magecraft.


    "Ah, is this the Hino Shrine?"


    Shirou looked up from his sweeping of the stairs to see a teenage girl smiling at him. Shirou smiled earnestly at the girl and nodded. "Yep, this is the Hino Shrine. Do you need any help?"


    The girl giggled and ruffled the boy's hair. He looked so cute. "I thought I would buy some charms for my exams coming up. Do you have those kinds of things here?"


    Shirou tilted his head and tried to recall if they made those here. "I'm not sure. If you would follow me I can lead you to the Shrine owner." He led the girl up the stairs and asked to her to wait in front of the main building.


    He ran around the entire shrine calling out for Hino-san but he didn't get an answer. After checking the innermost room of the shrine for the second time, Shirou was about ready to give up. "Man, did he go out and forget to tell m-" An odd feeling passed over Shirou causing him to pause in mid sentence. The boy looked around for the source of the feeling when he caught the scent of something that had no place in the shrine.


    "Kyaa!" By the time the scream cut through the quiet shrine, Shirou was already running towards the source.


    "Hey, get away from h- Big Doggy!"


    Standing in front of the teenage girl from earlier was the largest dog that Shirou had ever seen. He wasn't even sure if this thing qualified as a dog anymore. It was probably the size of a van or a small truck. The beast's skin was black and spikes protruded from it. The crimson horns and mouth full of sharp teeth added to its demonic image.


    The girl that had come to the shrine had fallen down and was just staring at the dog in horror.


    "Oi, run away!" Shirou shouted at her but the girl just fainted as the demonic dog slowly stalked closer to her. "Aw man!"


    Shirou shot forward and struck the back of the dog with his broom. The wooden handle bounced off the beast's hide but did no damage. It did however draw the attention of the dog away from the girl onto him. The beast snarled Shirou and the red head paled at the sight of the monster so close to him. "Ahaha, I did not think this through, did I?."


    A swat of the dog's paw struck Shirou hard and launched him across the shrine grounds. "Argh!"


    Shirou groaned. He really needed to start wearing some armor or something because this was starting to become a bad habit.


    'Shirou!' A familiar voice cut through Shirou's thoughts on the benefits of body armor.


    'Nanoha!' Shirou had forgotten that she could do this.


    'Shirou, there's another Jewel Shard activating. It's coming from the shrine on-'


    'I know. I'm already there.' Shirou frantically sent back as he got up and ran away from the charging dog. Whatever the dog was thinking, it seemed to want to play with the running boy more than it wanted to kill him. It thankfully let him get a small distance away before lunging for a bite. Like a dangerous game of cat and mouse.


    'You're already there?' Nanoha then remembered how a disappointed Shirou told her he had to help out at a shrine. 'Ah that's right. Do you see-'


    'Yes!' Shirou shouted at the girl as he jumped out of the way of another charge. This one taking out one of the trees that surrounded the area. Shirou watched the wreckage wearily and silently hoped that the tree fell on the dog. 'Please tell me you're close!'


    'We're almost there. Just hold on a little longer.' The girl's reply was thankfully quick.


    'Please hurry!' Shirou managed to duck away after the dog had missed a lunge. As he caught his breathe behind a tree he looked down at the broom in his hands. It wasn't the best object for this, but…


    "Trace On." He gritted out as he felt something like a red hot iron pole be shoved into his spine. His entire body burned as he went through the perilous process of forging his nerves into a Magic Circuit.


    "Magic Circuit set."


    "Analyzing base materials." Shirou examined the broom with Structural Analysis. He saw the interior cracks that were made because of rough handling during manufacturing. The outer layers that had been eroded from use and time. He let the magic fade after examining the handle. The bristles were unimportant so they were ignored.


    "Reinforcing base materials" Finally when that was complete, he poured Od through the hastily made Circuit into the broom handle. The temporary circuit strained even against the small amount of Od that he was pushing through it.


    "Reinforcement complete."


    Shirou let out the breathe he had been holding and gave the broom a quick glance over. It would hold for the time being. He looked around for the dog again when he felt something warm and moist pass over the side of his head. The Jewel Seed embedded dog had snuck up on the boy while he had been busy with his Magecraft.


    "Argh!" The boy rolled away as the monster smashed the tree he had been hiding behind. Shirou dodged past the trees and ran back into the clearing in front of the shrine with the dog close behind him. Shirou spun around and swung the broom as hard as he could at the dog. The hard as steel broom handle struck the dog on the nose and stunned it for a moment.


    Shirou hopped backwards and held up the broom in a defensive stance. The dog pawed at its nose before glaring at him. Shirou took a step backwards when the dog growled at him, but he stood his ground and met the dog's stare with his own. For a moment the beast and Shirou locked eyes and stood still.


    'Shirou, we're almost there!' Nanoha's voice in his head broke the silence and Shirou looked over towards the stairs before he remembered the dog.


    Too late. Shirou spun around just in time for the dog's tackle. Shirou was pinned down by its paws and the only thing keeping his body from getting mauled was the fact that he had lodged his broom in the dog's mouth.


    "Ah! Shirou!" Shirou vaguely heard Nanoha panicking but his attention was pretty much focused on big mouth full of sharp teeth trying to separate his head from his body. The boy struggled with the beast and hoped to god that the broom wouldn't break.


    Suddenly the beast paused in his attempts at eating Shirou and turned to the shrine entrance. The dog had noticed Nanoha and Yuuno and decided that they were a better treat then the struggling boy underneath him.


    The dog growled and shut its mouth. Snapping the Reinforced broom into pieces before charging at the girl and ferret. Shirou abandoned his shattered broom and watched in horror as the dog went towards his new target.


    "Ah, Nanoha!" The girl was just standing there while the monster charged at her. He could see Yuuno yelling at her to do something, but the girl was panicking about something.


    Shirou pulled himself to his feet just in time to see Nanoha activate Raising Heart. A dust cloud was formed when the beast crashed into the girl. He sighed in relief when the dust cleared. Nanoha was sitting on the floor unharmed with Raising Heart in its staff mode. She must have summoned her barrier in time to defend herself.


    "Thank god." Shirou sighed in relief at the sight of the girl unharmed.


    That barrier was ridiculously strong. It looked like the beast had hit and rebounded off a solid steel wall. Nanoha was completely unharmed even when the dog went for a second charge. The barrier repulsed it even harder this time and this gave Nanoha enough time to seal the Jewel Seed.


    Shirou watched carefully as Nanoha once again sealed the Jewel Seed in a flurry of pink energy ribbons. The ribbons covered the beast before the dog glowed. After a bit of glowing, a small dog and the Jewel Seed dropped to the ground.


    "Receipt No. XVI," Raising Heart confirmed the sealing.


    "That was too close." Now that he was sure that the action was over, Shirou fell to the ground in exhaustion. It was just after he hit the ground that he remembered something important. "Ah, I can't believe I forgot."


    "Eh?" Nanoha had deactivated Raising Heart and picked up Yuuno when she saw Shirou run off in a hurry. "Shirou?" She ran after him only to stop when she saw him fretting over a teenage girl that was unconscious on the shrine grounds.


    Yuuno shook his head at the sight of the small boy attempting to rouse the girl. The ferret saw the red streams running down the boy's right arm and wondered if Shirou even felt those injuries or if he was simply ignoring them. "He just had a fight with a monster and the first thing on his mind is to make sure that someone else is okay."


    "That's Shirou alright." Nanoha giggled as Shirou tried and failed to pick up the girl who had fainted. "Always thinking of others."





    By the time the girl had woken up, reassured Shirou that she was fine several times, and left with the small dog that had been affected by the Jewel Seed the sun had begun to set. The sky was painted in brilliant colors as the girl left the shrine completely unaware of what had just happened there.


    "Well, I'd say this was a job well done, right?" Nanoha watched the girl leave with a smile on her face.


    "Yeah. I'd say so." Yunno was sitting next to her. The two had agreed to wait for Shirou to change out of the shrine robes and back into his normal clothes.


    "Hey, sorry to make you wait." Shirou ran up to the two once again in his school uniform. "Did the girl leave?"


    "Mhm, she even took the little dog with her." Nanoha smiled and placed Yuuno back on her shoulders.


    "That's great." Shirou smiled brightly. His first rescue and it had been pulled off fine. Sure he needed help from Nanoha, but he wasn't a Magus yet so that was to be expected.


    Nanoha giggled at Shirou's happy expression. "Come on. All that excitement made me hungry. Let's go grab some snacks." Nanoha paused as she noticed the setting sun and frowned. "Oh wait, you have to get home for dinner, don't you?"


    "Huh, oh don't worry about it. Kiristugu is on anoth-Urk!" Shirou froze as he realized what he had just let slip.


    His little mistake didn't go unnoticed.


    "Shirou," Nanoha stopped walking and turned to glare at Shirou. The boy squirmed under her gaze. "Is your father on a trip again?"


    "What? Why would you think that?" Shirou's frantic attempt at deflecting the question failed miserably. It didn't help that he was panicking wildly or that he had no poker face at all.


    Yuuno looked between the two in confusion. He hadn't seen Nanoha angry about something before and it was surprising to see the girl look so frustrated by something. "Kiristugu? Trip? What are the two of you talking about?"


    "Shirou's father goes on a lot of trips." Nanoha explained as she glared at the sheepish looking boy. "However this leaves Shirou home alone. My family found out that Shirou has been fending for himself during these times and offered to take care of him when Emiya-san is out of town."


    "It was a short trip this time. He'll be back soon." Shirou tried to defend himself. "I've taken care of myself for longer."


    "It doesn't matter!" Nanoha applied a vice grip on Shirou's arm and started to drag him along. "You're going home with us and then you're going to tell my parents that you've been staying home alone again."


    "What? No way!" Shirou tried to dig his feet into the ground. "Your parents are just going to scold me. And your mom might do that again."


    "Is staying with them really that bad? Nanoha's family seemed really nice." Yuuno looked over at the boy and wondered what was causing him to try to escape. It seemed unlikely that he would get anything more than a mild lecture for his actions.


    Nanoha rolled her eyes. "It's nothing bad, but my mom found the perfect punishment for when Shirou stays with us and doesn't behave."


    Yuuno wondered what would scare a boy that would fearlessly face a Jewel Seed created monster without a second thought. He tried to imagine a fitting punishment with the image of Nanoha's kind mother and something that would freak Shirou out this much but couldn't come up with anything. Unwilling to let his morbid curiosity be unfulfilled he asked Nanoha. "What is the punishment?"


    Shirou wailed out an explanation.


    Yuuno almost fell off of Nanoha's shoulder when he heard what had scared the boy so badly. He stared at the struggling boy and just shook his head. "I don't get you people at all."


    "It's just Shirou." Nanoha shook her head as she dragged along the crying red headed boy.





    In all of his life, Shirou has faced more horrors that any nine years old should have to face. His unspoken memory of the day that Kiristugu found him, the constant threat of death that followed his Magecraft practicing, the pain that Magecraft induced, and just recently, monsters created from the latent desires of people all around. Yet nothing scared him more than the threat in front of him.


    Momoko Takamachi stood in front of the boy with a disappointed expression on her face. Beside her was her husband, Shirou Takamachi, looking sternly down at him.


    "Shirou-chan, you know that you're supposed to tell us when your father is out of town. We have no problem taking you in for a little while." The mother scolded him.


    Shirou squirmed under the disappointed looks and tried to think of a good defense. He didn't really want to lie to the two of them so he just looked down and mumbled his answer. "I didn't want to be a bother."


    The older Shirou sighed at defeated expression on the boy's face. "You're not a bother. I'm sure we've told that to you several times, and even Kiristugu has agreed that it would be best if you stayed with us when he's not there for you."


    Momoko nodded and gathered herself. With a stern expression on her face she pointed at the smaller Shirou. The boy flinched at the motion and braced himself for the verdict to fall. There was no escape and he would be trapped here with no way out. Nanoha would make sure that he followed the decree even outside of the house.


    "I'm afraid that I'm going to have to ban you from the kitchen, Shirou-chan." Momoko solemnly announced.


    The wail of despair that came out of Shirou's lips echoed throughout the house. It was a familiar wail. So familiar that when Miyuki peeked her head to see what was going on, she did so with a good idea of what was going on.


    "Did Shirou-chan get banned from the kitchen again?"


    "Yep." Nanoha passed her by with some tea on a tray. She set it down for her parent and Shirou and glowered at Shirou, who at this point was on all fours on the ground with a cloud of depression over him. "He didn't tell us that his father was on a trip. He was living by himself for days."


    Miyuki winced. "Ouch. So I'm guessing the ban is for his entire stay then."


    Nanoha's father laughed weakly. "I'm afraid so."





    "I can't believe that you got so worked up about not being able to cook." Yuuno wondered how cooking could be so important to a person.


    After Shirou had recovered from his depression, the boy was sent up for a bath. He sat in another lively dinner with the Takamachi family and gave the kitchen a look of longing before going up with Nanoha to her room to talk with her and Yuuno.


    "But I'm so close to getting a recipe down. If I don't practice I'll lose all that progress." His beef stew had almost been perfect the other day. He was sure that he was about to make a breakthrough with the recipe but now it would be days before he could make another attempt. It was tormenting.


    "Don't try to understand him Yuuno-kun." Nanoha sighed at the boy's antics. He was usually so normal, but give him a sword or a ladle and he'll turn into something else completely.


    "Anyways, this is good. I had some questions I wanted to ask Shirou about his magic." Yuuno threw off the weirdness that had followed Takamachi-san's decree and got down to business. Shirou heard the mention of magic and turned to the ferret with a serious expression. Yuuno wasn't the only one that wanted to learn more about magic.


    "There is no knowledge of Earth being able to house a magical community. It was thought that any magical people would simply have too little magical energy to do anything." Yuuno pondered whether or not this was accurate. The two kids in front of him were two completely opposite sides of the spectrum. Nanoha had a talent that was one in a million while Shirou was in terms of magical energy a complete failure. Yet Shirou had shown the capacity for magic without any device or external signature for magic. "I'm not really sure how accurate that statement is, but what I do know is that whatever kind of magic Shirou used is completely different from anything I've seen."


    Nanoha nodded. "It didn't really look like magic. I mean, you made the wooden sword shiny for a moment, but other than that, it looked like nothing happened."


    Shirou winced. "Well, Reinforcement is the most basic of basics for Magecraft." It was also something he had only just succeeded at doing. "I guess I could show you something else."


    Shirou closed his eyes and emptied his mind. He once again went through the difficult process of turning his body into a Magic Circuit for his magic to flow.


    Both Nanoha and Yuuno watched Shirou closely. Nanoha was excited to see what kind of magic that Shirou would perform, while Yuuno was trying to figure out what Shirou was doing. The amount of magic that the boy was using was miniscule so it couldn't be anything big.


    Sudden the air in front of Shirou's hands glowed and the light condensed itself into a tight sphere. When the light faded, a small circular red gem was sitting in Shirou's hands.


    "Raising Heart!" Nanoha cried out before reaching for the small gem.


    "Teleporation?" Yuuno couldn't believe it. Did earth have the capacity for teleportation with such low amounts of energy?


    "Eh? It's still here." Nanoha found the small gem and looked at it and the double that was sitting in Shirou's hands. Yuuno blinked as he saw that the Device was still in Nanoha's possession.


    "I didn't teleport it. I just copied it." Shirou wiped off the sweat on his head and rolled the gem with his fingers. "This is called Gradation Air, but I like to call it Projection. It basically makes a copy of an object that I picture in my head."


    "So it's another Raising Heart?" Nanoha looked closely at the second red gem and poked it to test its solidity.


    "Not exactly." Shirou frowned at the small gem in his hands. "It just has the shape of the object. I can't copy Raising Hearts abilities or anything like that. Projection just makes a physical copy of the object."


    Shirou put the Projected gem on the bed for Yuuno to examine. The ferret picked up the gem and marveled at the object. This was a solid object created from nothing but magic. An impossibly small amount of magic at that. The weight was similar to the original and its look would pass anything but a scrutinizing check.


    "This is amazing." The ferret whispered.


    Shirou shrugged. "It's also useless. Projections don't last long and they're pretty fragile. So other than for rituals, most Magus don't do anything with it." It was just his luck that his two talents, Structural Analysis and Gradation Air were both useless for a Magus.


    Yuuno looked up at the boy as Nanoha held both Raising Hearts and was comparing them. "They don't last long?"


    Shirou shook his head. "Things created from Gradation Air are unnatural so the world actively tries to get rid of that unnatural addition. So constant attention and magical energy is needed to maintain the object for long periods of time." He couldn't remember the exact explanation that Kiritsugu gave to him, but that sounded about right. "I can make them last pretty long, but they go away after half a day or so at most."


    "Ne, ne Shirou. What else can you make?" Nanoha had abandoned the extra Raising Heart and smiled at Shirou in anticipation.


    Shirou blinked at the girl's attention and shrugged. "Well simple stuff really. The more complicated it is, the harder it is to Project. See Gradation Air is all about how well I can project my personal image onto the-"


    Yuuno idly listened to the explanation that Shirou was giving to a confused Nanoha but his focus was on the second Raising Heart and the magic that Shirou just displayed. The possibilities of such a magic were endless even with the limitations that were imposed on it. It was something to think about and with Shirou staying at the Takamachi's for the time being, he would have plenty of time to explore it.





    The days spent at the Takamachi house went by quickly. Shirou was busy the entire time. School, helping out at the Midoriya, sparring with Kouya and Miyuki and finally when helping out Nanoha with the Jewel Seeds. Three more Jewel Seeds had activated. The first of which he had been busy helping at the Midoriya and couldn't go help Nanoha without raising suspicion.


    Shirou leaned heavily on his wooden sword. He had used Reinforcement on it earlier, but even with the prana boosting its durability the sword had several cracks running down the blade. He had been running around trying to keep the latest Jewel Seed monster still long enough for Nanoha to seal it. The third Jewel Seed activation during his stay at the Takamachi residence had created another formless being that was a lot more aggressive than the last.


    The black cloud shot downward at the boy and attempted to smash him one more time. Shirou jumped backwards and let it collide with the ground. The collision sent up a cloud of dust, but Shirou didn't let that stop him. He charged forward and unleashed a barrage of slices at the monster.


    He felt his sword sink in several times and pieces of the monster all shot out of the dust cloud to reform.


    "Gotcha." Shirou grinned viciously as the pieces all swirled around one spot to mold back together.


    "Lyrical Magical! Jewel Seed Serial XX, Seal!" Nanoha fired out several ribbons that enveloped the formless monster and reduced it to a single jewel which was promptly absorbed by Raising Heart.


    "Receipt No. XX" Raising Heart toned out.


    Yuuno ran up to a panting Nanoha. "Good job Nanoha. This makes the fifth Jewel Seed in our possession."


    After they were done, the trio slowly made their way back to the Takamachi residence. Nanoha was using Raising Heart's staff mode as a crutch and Shirou was favoring one leg pretty heavily.


    "Are the two of you okay?" Yuuno looked over at the two kids and couldn't help but feel responsible for their haggard appearance.


    "I'll be good by morning." Shirou grinned weakly before wincing as he put too much pressure on his bad leg. Yuuno was quickly learning that Shirou could recover from pretty bad injuries rather quickly. It probably had to do with the odd magic that the boy was using but Yuuno was worried about the inconsistency of the boy's magical healing. He had healed up from the injuries he got at the Shrine before they had even gotten home but the cuts and bruises he got from the last Jewel Seed had yet to finish healing.


    "I'm fine, but…I'm just a little tired…" Nanoha trailed off and collapsed on the floor.


    "Nanoha!" Both Yuuno and Shirou quickly rushed to the girl's side.


    "Oi, Nanoha, are you alright?" Shirou lifted the girl's head up and shook her lightly.


    "Zzz…"


    Both Yuuno and Shirou were silent for a moment when they realized that the girl had just fallen asleep. The two shared a look of exasperation.


    "She's out cold." Shirou groaned as he picked up the girl. After a bit of awkward shifting, Shirou was carrying Nanoha piggyback style. Yuuno had returned Raising Heart to its standby mode and followed after the limping boy.





    "Good mo-mo-morning." Shirou yawned as he slowly padded his way to the kitchen table for breakfast. It was a testament to how tired the red haired boy was that he didn't even give the kitchen a second glance as he sat down.


    "Good morning Shirou-chan." Momoko greeted the boy. She was glad that she didn't have to catch the boy trying to cook breakfast again. It was endearing normally, but after a few days it could get tiring. "Is Nanoha up?"


    "Ung." The boy shook his head and mumbled his thanks as he was served his breakfast. He had carried Nanoha to her room and woke her up to get dressed in her pajama so her parents didn't catch wind of what they were doing.


    After that was done he and Yuuno had discussed magic for an hour and he had finished off the night with some Magecraft practice.


    Shirou had been running himself ragged like this for the last few days and it was really hitting him hard. He stifled a yawn and attempted to figure out his schedule for the day.


    Today was Sunday which meant no school. Nanoha's father was coaching a soccer team and they had a game this morning. So he had volunteered to help at the café while Nanoha and her friends went to watch the game.


    The boy quickly ate his breakfast and shouted his thanks to Takamachi-san and ran off to get dressed.





    "Here you go." Shirou served up the last of the room for the soccer team's victory party. Nanoha's dad had treated them for their victory. He flitted throughout the store making sure the party had enough food and taking orders from some customers that had entered.


    Momoko took the latest batch of plates from the boy with a smile. "Shirou. Nanoha and her friends are outside playing with Yuuno. You should join them."


    "Right, I'll see if they need anything." Shirou ran outside before she could tell him he was wrong.


    Miyuki giggled at her mother's expression. "That boy seriously needs to get his priorities right."


    The girls were at one of the outside tables of the café. They already had their food and when Shirou walked out, Alisa was playing with a struggling Yuuno. Shirou wondered for a moment how uncomfortable Yuuno felt playing the normal Ferret.


    "Geez, Bannings-san. Let Yuuno breathe." Shirou came to the little ferrets rescue. He plucked the rodent out of the blonde girl's grasps and placed him back on the table.


    'Oh thank god.' Yuuno opened up the mental connection to Shirou and slumped in relief. 'Thanks for the save Shirou.'


    "No problem little guy." Shirou placed the animal on his shoulder and gathered the used plates up.


    "Well then, I guess we're all done for today." Alisa picked up her bag and got up.


    Suzuka picked up her purse and nodded to Shirou as he picked up her plate. "I guess so."


    "Oh, that's right. You both have plans for this afternoon, don't you?" Nanoha smiled at her friends.


    Shirou picked up the last of the plates and paused for a moment to let Yuuno hop to Nanoha's shoulder before heading inside. He passed by Nanoha's dad and headed inside to help clean up the plates from the party.





    The streets were packed in the afternoon and Shirou wiped his brow as he continued his run. His lack of stamina was starting to catch up to him and he needed to train harder if he was going to keep up with Nanoha he needed to get even stronger.


    His mind wondered to the Jewel Seed encounters that he had been a part of. In all of them he had been able to do nothing more than distract the monster so that Nanoha could seal it. Even then, his distractions were only because the monsters had the grace to treat him as an annoyance. He doubted that he was even a threat to any of them.


    Shirou had been thinking of how he could more helpful but the only thing he could think of was to be stronger. He could Reinforce objects, but he was too weak to use them in any useful way.


    The barrier that Nanoha possessed was a lot more useful than him so far. He needed to be even stronger. His Magecraft wasn't going to get any better than it was at the moment without Kiristugu to teach him more. So his only option was to train his body.


    Shirou shook his head and ran faster. His breath was starting to get ragged and his muscles burned with every movement. He was starting to reach his limit. The boy speed through the streets and dodged past the crowds and objects that littered the streets.


    When he could finally run no more, Shirou collapsed onto a bench and fought to regain his breathe. He panted and cursed himself for only being able to run this far. He had planned to go so much farther.


    Shirou pushed himself onto his shaky legs and stumbled towards the nearest restaurant for a drink. As he walked further he stopped as he felt the ground shake. He wondered if an earthquake was going on when the rumbling got worse.


    The earth shook worse and worse and plants erupted out of the ground. Shirou yelled as the buildings around him had pieces of them knocked off by the rapidly growing trees.


    "What is…?" Shirou threw his arms up as another branch of the tree shot up in front of him. He shuddered as a familiar wave of magic passed over him. "Is this a Jewel Seed?"


    Shirou waited until the crowds cleared from the area and looked around. There were giant trees growing out of the ground and a few of the building in the area had holes knocked out of them by the branches.


    A small noise broke Shirou out of his amazement. Shirou shook his head. He couldn't afford to stand still in this kind of situation. There was work to do.


    Shirou ran towards the nearest cry for help.





    "So did you hear about what happened in town today?" Kouya questioned the table.


    If he had been paying attention, Shirou would have noticed Nanoha stiffen. However he was occupied with his own thoughts and nodded weakly. "There was some sort of an attack and a lot of buildings were damaged."


    Miyuki shook her head. "Some people were saying some crazy things like they saw a giant tree growing out of the city."


    Nanoha's father turned to Shirou. "Weren't you in the city around that time? Did you see what happened?"


    Momoko turned to younger Shirou with worried eyes. "Is that true? Were you hurt Shirou-chan?"


    Nanoha turned to Shirou in surprise. "You were in the city?"


    Shirou started when he heard his name and it took him a moment to answer the question. "Oh, yeah. I went running." Shirou gave a weak shrug. "A lot of people were panicking so I got caught up in the crowd."


    "Geez, who could do a thing?" Miyuki shook her head at the audacity of such a crime.


    Nanoha stared at Shirou who was glaring at his own hand like it had done something wrong. 'Shirou, are you okay?'


    Shirou twitched but gave no other outer expression. 'I'm fine, I'll… I'm just a little tired.'


    The dinner went by and Shirou shook himself out of his funk when the conversation turned to what everyone did during the day.


    Even as Shirou joined the conversation again, Nanoha made sure to keep an eye on the boy. The look in his eyes when he was staring at his own hand scared her.





    It was late at night when Shirou got up and left the room he shared with Kouya when he stayed over at the Takamachi residence. The boy wandered out of the house and into the Takamachi's dojo. He picked one of the practice swords off the wall and walked to the center of the dojo.


    Shirou moved into a practice stance and started to practice. Shirou paused in the middle of a slash and dropped the practice sword in disgust.


    "What am I doing?" The boy fell his knees and slammed a fist into the ground. "Am I still this weak?"


    Tears gathered in the corners of Shirou's eyes as he recalled this afternoon.

    ...


    Shirou ran into the nearest building and looked around frantically.

    "Somebody! Help!" A voice called out from the upper floor.

    "Just wait, I'll be right there!" Shirou ran up the stairs as fast as he could. When he got up there and looked around. There was a girl a bit older than him trying to pull a piece of the building. Shirou swore when he saw that a boy was trapped under the debris.

    Shirou ran over and started to help the girl. The both of them pulled as hard as they could but they could barely get the piece of the wall to move. The two of them paused when pieces of the ceiling started to crumble. Shirou looked up to see cracks forming in the ceiling. Shirou slapped a hand to the wall and with a cry of "Trace on!" scanned it.

    The wall was starting to fail from the weight. They weren't going to be able to save the boy before it fell. Shirou made an instant decision and started the process for Reinforcement. If he could strengthen the wall then they would have time to get the boy out.

    As Shirou focused on magically strengthening the wall the girl looked at him like he was crazy. The boy had stopped helping her with the pillar on her brother and was now focusing on the wall. She shook her head and was going to pull harder on the pillar when she noticed something.

    "Look out!"

    Shirou opened his eyes and stopped his Reinforcement when something collided into him. He felt his body fly a few feet away and heard a large crash. Dust clouded the room and Shirou coughed and choked on it. "Hey… are you okay?"

    The magus-in-training looked up and froze. The girl that he had just been helping was on the floor with a piece of the ceiling on top of her.

    "No…" Shirou ran over and struggled with the debris until he shifted it off of the girl. He started shaking the girl. "Hey, wake up!"

    The boy sat there and tried to wake the girl. He stayed there until the trees faded and rescue workers came. He stayed there even when the rescue workers took the girl from him and moved the pillar and took the boy too. Shirou watched with haunted eyes as the girl who knocked him over was pulled into an ambulance.

    ...


    Shirou opened his eyes and hit the ground again. "Damnit. What kind of Hero am I?"


    "You're a little young to be a hero aren't you?" A voice cut through the darkness of the dojo causing Shirou to freeze. He turned and found Yuuno on the ground looking at him with a curious expression.


    "Yuuno." Shirou shook his head. "Everyone keeps telling me that, but I can't accept that. Nanoha is-"


    "Making mistakes just like you do." Yuuno interjected. At Shirou's surprised expression the ferret continued. "Nanoha noticed a Jewel Seed right after you left but dismissed it as her imagination. It later activated and caused the accident with the trees."


    Shirou stared at the ferret and slowly processed what he just said.


    Yuuno recalled Nanoha's expression when she saw the damage from the Jewel Seed and compared it to the expression on Shirou's face a moment ago. "Nanoha was beating herself up about it but she's been running herself ragged as it is."


    "Yeah… but what can I do?" Shirou sighed and looked down as his hand again. "She doesn't even need me there. All she has to do is cast that barrier to protect herself."


    Yuuno shook his head. "You're a big help. I'm sure you know, but using magic like that is not easy for a beginner to use. Any strain that you can keep off of Nanoha is going to make a difference."


    Shirou swallowed as he heard that and remembered how Nanoha had collapsed last night. He had to carry her home because the girl was too exhausted to even stay conscious.


    "Yeah, you're right. I just have to help her as much as I possibly can." The boy grabbed the wooden sword he dropped and stood up. "That just means I have to work harder to help even more."


    Yuuno watched as the boy started to go through another sword kata before silently heading back up to Nanoha's room. He was glad that Shirou was back to normal. Hopefully having him support Nanoha would keep her from going beyond her own limits. The little changeling felt ashamed that he had to place this burden on Shirou, but Nanoha was the one that could seal the Jewel Seeds until he regained his strength.


    The two boys fought to gather strength. Yuuno to regain his former powers, and Shirou fighting to gain new ones. Yet tonight, they both vowed to fight for the same reason. To support Nanoha.





    In the night sky a figure watched Uminari city. This was the place that the Jewel Seeds seemed to have gathered. Several had activated in the city in a short amount of time and more will surely activate within the city once more.


    Golden blonde hair danced in the wind and the girl's black clothes melted into the night. A black staff was held in her hands and a red wolf like creature rested on the building below her.


    "The Lost Logia is around here." The girl's cool voice cut through the air. "It manifests as a small blue gem that is generally called a 'Jewel Seed.'"


    The red familiar stared at her partner and silently listened to the review of their mission.


    "Ah, that's right." The girl's voice is filled with emotion. The goal is within sight. "It will be mine soon."


    Moments later the girl and the familiar are both gone.


    It seems the scramble for the Jewel Seeds will only get harder for our Heroes.

    ...

    AN: And I haven't finished chapter 3 yet. I got grounded and hit a halt on it but I finally started again. The first half of Chapter three will probably be posted tomorrow.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
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    Looking forward to that.
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    Anything is better than nothing. Been waiting to see this continued.

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    'bout time a new chapter showed up. Still, I wonder if Kiritsugu will make an appearance. He's sick and slowly dying due to the previous Grail's mud stuff at this point in time, right?

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    Subscribing a maximum speed! Can't wait for the next update!


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    This is really, really good. It's got the fluffy, lighthearted feel of early Nanoha, with the darker undertones starting to appear that made A's so good. Soon we'll get into epic battles like A's and F/SN too!

    You've really managed to capture the feel of both series. The dialogue and the details and the characterisation seem right to me, too - and those are the hardest things to get right.

    There's one recurring mistake, though - you keep calling Takamachi Kyouya by the name Kouya.

    It's really making me think, too - Shirou's potential is pretty low until he sees Noble Phantasms and has his magic circuits opened. Now, clearly you're working your way up to something with the magic circuits already. And, Shirou's current lack of weapons is easily fixed as soon as he sees some of the Takamachi family's Kodachi.

    Interestingly, Miyuki's two-sword style is probably going to be more attractive to him than Kyouya's one-sword. "Two swords at once? Yay!" It's a bit Archer, I guess, but hey, Shirou is Shirou.

    Iunno, that's just the way I see things happening. Unless you're going to give him a Device of some sort - which would be awesome, by the way - he'll just have to make do with what he can glean from Mikami and Fuwa, learn from his fellow magic kiddies and discover about UBW.

    He, Yuuno and Nanoha are going to be awesome in a fight. And when Fate is added to the mix, damn, they're going to give the Wolkenritter a hard time!

    Then Fuyuki.

    Damn, this is awesome. Keep it up, dood.

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    Who thinks that the meeting between Archer and Nanoha is going to be soul crushing depressing for the girl?


    He is the living embodiment of the ideals of her childhood friend, betrayed by everyone and dieing alone in the end. The dream of becoming an hero, which she has nurtured in Shirou ,thanks too their battles in the past, might as well have put him on the same path. And the worst part is that no matter what she does, no matter how much power she acquires....


    She will never be able to save Him.......

    To make it even worse, He'll probably call her out on her own twisted ideals, citing himself as the result that such a path will result to. He wont yell at her, he'll just tell her the cruel truth in that deadpan snarking voice of his. Archer will actually pity her for being such a fool.

    And the only chance of salvation he has left is by killing her best ( male) friend.


    Remember fate's BSOD in part 1? Nanoha is getting an even worse version here, as Archer cruelly tears her hopes and dreams apart.


    Ofcourse, well get the GAR battle between Shirou and Archer to make up for all this angst, but the character development that Nanoha will get would be awesome.


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    ...Man, I just want to see Archer vs. Athra. In a semi-acceptable, awesome, not one-shot-end for either party manner.

    I mean, Arc-en-Ciel isn't standard equipment, so it would be perfectly reasonable to not have it mounted, and Strikers shows that Athra can function in atmosphere, so blast-from-orbit doesn't have to be automatic...

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    Thanks for the support. I'm finishing up the first half of chapter 3 so it'll definitely be up later tonight. It'll be introducing... wait for it...

    Fate-chan!

    Yay!

    Anyways, yeah, I screwed up on the names in the first two chapters. I don't really remember why, but I kept misspelling Kyouya and Kiritsugu. I've hopefully fixed that habit.

    It's really making me think, too - Shirou's potential is pretty low until he sees Noble Phantasms and has his magic circuits opened. Now, clearly you're working your way up to something with the magic circuits already. And, Shirou's current lack of weapons is easily fixed as soon as he sees some of the Takamachi family's Kodachi.

    Interestingly, Miyuki's two-sword style is probably going to be more attractive to him than Kyouya's one-sword. "Two swords at once? Yay!" It's a bit Archer, I guess, but hey, Shirou is Shirou.

    Iunno, that's just the way I see things happening. Unless you're going to give him a Device of some sort - which would be awesome, by the way - he'll just have to make do with what he can glean from Mikami and Fuwa, learn from his fellow magic kiddies and discover about UBW.
    Yeah, one of the biggest problems with writing this is the sheer difference between the level of fighting. I mean, Shirou can do basic Reinforcement, and later a bit more advanced Reinforcement. That's not going to help against any mage since they have barriers. So Shirou will be getting a Device, but it won't be a normal device. I have a plot point to give him a power up and give him some sort of BSOD and possibly RROD at the same time.

    As for swordsmanship. Well the thing is, Shirou never has a affinity for two sword style until he starts mimicking Archer's style. So he does know a little of Miyuki's two sword style just from watching and a little practice, but he prefers one sword style.

    Who thinks that the meeting between Archer and Nanoha is going to be soul crushing depressing for the girl?
    This'll come up a lot earlier than you think, but not in the way you're probably thinking of.

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    I have a plot point to give him a power up and give him some sort of BSOD and possibly RROD at the same time.
    Two words: Jewel Seed.

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    Emiya shirou + jewel seed.


    O god, he'd be sprouting blades from all over his body in seconds O_O

    Thats one way to rub it in thats his magic is a 'little' diferent.


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    It's interesting, I like it.


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    Two words: Jewel Seed.
    Well yes, but the question is how am I going to use the Jewel Seed.

    Emiya shirou + jewel seed.

    O god, he'd be sprouting blades from all over his body in seconds O_O

    Thats one way to rub it in thats his magic is a 'little' diferent.
    Yeah, that's going to be a fun scene to write. I don't know why but putting Shirou through lots of pain for the sake of character development is easy for me. I wonder if that's a bad thing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Well yes, but the question is how am I going to use the Jewel Seed.



    Yeah, that's going to be a fun scene to write. I don't know why but putting Shirou through lots of pain for the sake of character development is easy for me. I wonder if that's a bad thing.
    Nah, pain and suffering will only make him more GAR, just look at archer:


    "my whole life was one painful mess, and everyone betrayed me. Thus I am the most Awesome male character this fic will ever know." Archer replied, with a smug grin on his face.

    " Helloo handsome." Lindy fanned herself as her eyes violated the counter guardians body

    Fate/Crono : "Mom, WTF O_O "

    Nanoha: "Such sad eyes "

    "Don't you even dare beamspamming me girl!" Archer replied, as he spotted the white devil looking at him.
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    Illya is best servant

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    Yuuno's barriers + Reinforcement = awesome
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    Personally, I'm hoping that Sakura's going to get Befriended by the time the Fifth Holy Grail War rolls around, given how she'll still be in that pit of despair she was in before she got her crush on Shirou.

    Also, I wonder if a Jewel Seed would just make Shirou made out of blades, or if it'd create a more dramatic effect. Shirou's true power is a Reality Marble, after all, and a Jewel Seed easily has enough power to make one manifest; the TSAB first got involved when they detected the space-time ripples from Nanoha and Fate damaging one, after all.

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