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    Fiction/Prototype

    "I don't want a thing to do with the Holy Grail!"

    But of course, it's not a matter whether you want anything to do with the Grail; it's whether the Grail wants anything to do with you.

    Already they would be coming after her, after all the Sajyou family as winners of the previous War would be a natural contender, and thus target, in this one. Well, or so the other Masters would assume, one self-admitted mediocre witch curled into a cloak in one end of the room was all that remained of the lineage, not exactly an intimidating foe to be eliminated as soon as possible.

    Yet sure enough, the sounds of yelping and howling could be heard as the Sajyou Residence came under seige from what the girl Ayaka saw were somebody's hound familiars, cautiously glancing out her window. While the magical defences surrouding her house had thankfully disintegrated most of them, Ayaka knew they'd be almost nothing when it came to keeping out...

    Then came another sound, that of her door creaking open and footsteps entering into her house, footsteps that weren't those of a hound's but of a human being's.
    Yet Ayaka froze, the sheer magical energy she could feel was nothing like any human's, meaning that this could only be...

    The very thing she'd been fearing all these years, that's what.

    Ayaka leapt up from her huddled position and sped off down the corridor, using the black feathers that formed part of her Witchcraft to fend off any hounds coming after her.
    Of course, what may keep mere familiars at bay is hardly going to be of any use against a Servant.

    "Oh, I'm reeling in pain! An eternal curse upon you and your kin, foul devil-woman" a voice in the shadows announced less in agony and more in deadpan, and as the stranger who'd spoken stepped into her field of vision Ayaka saw that the feathers she'd hurriedly thrown hadn't made a single dent in him.

    "I'm sorry, wasn't that the sort of thing you were expecting to hear?" the man said chuckling to himself, adjusting his glasses at the same time. Ayaka nervously turned her eyes towards him to see he was an older man with long light-brown hair who wore blue clothing that could've belonged to a scientist, sorcerer or soldier, maybe all three. But for the young witch the most worrying thing was the spear he carried in his hands.

    "L-l-lancer?" her voice trembled, she tried to reach for her feathers yet found none left.

    "My my, whatever gave you that impression?" came the Servant's reply. "Unfortunately, yes, apparently this Grail counts your exemplary skill and work with Fonic Artes as only secondary to the stick you carry around to channel them" he was forced to admit, before saying:
    "Ah shame, I forgot this world of yours doesn't even have Fonons, instead you get these, these feathery things. Well, I do suppose they're nice enough feathers".

    'This world of yours' those words in particular echoed through Ayaka's mind. She'd been told Servants were the myths and legends of this world alone... but then she silenced those thoughts, as what did she care wherever Servants were from? The fact that they and the Grail existed at all was cause for enough of her internal strife.

    "Well it's been, I wouldn't dare say a 'pleasure', can't have people thinking I'm growing soft in my old age, but it's certainly been decent enough meeting you. However, and you've probably seen this coming" Lancer said slowly as he held his spear at the ready, eyes set on Ayaka "Soldier's duty and everything, you understand".

    At these words Ayaka instantly zoomed off, not pausing for one second till she reached the garden at the very centre of the Sajyou manor. As she locked the door to it the Bounded Field covering the garden began to activate, her own father having told her that with it set up there'd be no magic great enough to break in.

    So in response to this great defence, Lancer just speared the door down.

    "Really, were this Holy Grail Hide-and-Seek instead of the Holy Grail War you'd be undeniably bottom-tier" Lancer sighed as he made his way in "Though it technically looks like you're bottom-tier anyway, oh but there I go again".

    Ayaka was truly done for, with nowhere left to hide and nothing left to save her. At the very sight of Lancer she began quivering, with thoughts of her dead father and sister, and everything else to have happened on this day eight years ago, flooding her mind as she knew now she was next.

    I'd give anything, she thought, anything, just to get me out of here, just to save me!

    Anything? a whole new voice questioned, one Ayaka definitely heard yet saw nowhere from which it could come. 'Anything' is hardly a word you should throw around so carelessly. Even in a life-or-death situation, were I to save you would you then be prepared for whatever came next?

    "Hmm, and with hardly a second to spare. Fancy that" Lancer muttered for some unspecified reason, before moving in for the killing blow.

    'Yet it's not in my nature to leave a client out in the cold like this. Alright then child, let's see this 'anything' of yours'
    .

    ***

    As Lancer was about to strike a great light surged forth from Ayaka, veins of strange red light spreading out and her attacker being knocked away. When at last she was able to open her eyes again Ayaka saw a black-haired woman draped in butterfly-themed kimono standing in front of her, in her hand she carried a... baseball bat whose only distinguishing feature was a kanji symbol on it. Kind of an anticlimax really.

    "You're a, Servant too?" Ayaka found it hard to voice those words.

    "Only the best I assure you. The Saber class, at your... well I won't say 'at your service', more 'at your service, if I feel like it'. Which I probably won't" the voice Ayaka had heard now emerging from this woman.

    "Hmm, so this shall be our base-of-operations then. Not exactly up to the standards of my old shop, but it'll have to do in the meantime" Saber continued, before catching her eye on a recovering figure in the corner of the room.

    "Ooh my aching back, I'm really not what I used to be" Lancer moaned as he got back up on his feet.

    "Right, forgot you're still here" Saber said with considerably less enthusiasm. "While the frontline isn't my natural habitat" she uttered, bat now at the ready "I'm hardly one to back down from a competition".

    "So you don't claim to work on the frontlines, yet you're the strongest physical class" Lancer observed "And that's... not exactly a hallowed greatsword of legend you're wielding there. Well, my day keeps getting more and more dignified, doesn't it?" he said half-heartedly.

    "Hah, don't let looks fool you, my bat contains the spirit of as many swords as I will it to. Though I admit, the Saber class wasn't the first thing I had in mind" she replied, swinging the bat to counter Lancer's attack "Personally I'd say the Caster class'd suit my abilities the most".

    "I see. Sure don't know anyone like that" Lancer said with a smile you could tell was faked.

    From the breathless Ayaka's point of view Saber could easily match Lancer for speed, no small feat from what she knew about the class, and seemed pretty resistant to any blow he could muster too. Yet when she had Lancer cornered, her bat raised above his head, she suddenly stopped.

    "As a competitor in this War there must be wish some grand wish you're hoping the Grail will grant you, am I correct?" Saber began "I'll make you a deal, allow me to grant you and your Master's wishes instead, and in exchange I'll cease any further hostilities towards you. Mind you, I'm not without my terms, but it'll be far more efficient than this longwinded Grail War I promise you".

    Ayaka was agape. This woman she'd summoned could just bypass the Grail like that?

    "How gracious, I'm flattered. Truly I am" Lancer replied "Sadly I must decline, I'm not one simply to put so much faith in word of mouth alone, and knowing my 'Master' I doubt she'd give you a more favourable response. Until next time, it would seem".

    He then began to chant "Oh mighty explosion, Energy Blast" before unleashing a burst of magical power. It barely even scratched Saber (her class's Magic Resistance kicking in Ayaka guessed, before she condemned herself for remembering so much about Servants), but it served as enough of a distraction for Lancer to exit the scene. Not like Saber seemed to mind.

    "Hmm, his talent for magic is most impressive" she noted, yet immediately added "Though light-years behind my own naturally".

    "You..." Ayaka slowly began "Said you could grant wishes, just like the Grail".

    "Indeed I can" Saber said "I granted yours, did I not? Wasn't it you I heard calling out for a saviour?"

    She then lowered her gaze to be at eye level with Ayaka "But you must understand, true wishes can only be granted if an object of equal value is given in return, one can never expect something for nothing. Though as your very magic reserves are now being drained in order to supply my existence, I believe that is enough".

    "Oh" Ayaka muttered as she now remembered that part "Yeah".

    "And one more thing" Saber then turned around and said "In return for me assisting you in this War, I expect for you to assist me in running my newly re-opened shop. Good, I'm glad we can come to an understanding".

    "WAIT!" Ayaka suddenly shouted out "I don't want a thing to do with the Holy Grail!"

    "What a coincidence, neither do I" Saber said, before pausing "No, scratch that. Take note Ayaka, that there is no such thing as coincidence. 'Coincidence' is simply a word people use to derive a moment of any meaning, everything that has lead to this one moment has been predestined, not just by your actions, but by your very relationship with the world".

    "And that is what has made the two of us, who have no desire for the Grail and cannot abide its very existence, partners in this Grail War" she proclaimed down to Ayaka "For starters, I can't dare have anything compete with my own wish-granting business, now can I?".

    Remembering all that had happened that day, Ayaka thought 'Father, is this... what you left for me?'.

    "Now, where do you keep the sake around here?"

    "What?!".
    FICTION/PROTOTYPE


    A/N: So essentially this is a crossover in the vein of Fate/Inertia Dawn or Fate/Zero Sense, where canon servants are switched out with fictional characters instead. I decided to set it in the Proto-verse though because it's less covered ground and therefore more interesting to me as a writer (plus the allure of Jade-Misaya scenes too).

    I have to say writing a battle scene with Yuuko (c'mon, it's obvious) in it is quite hard as it contrasts heavily with how she operates, yet I wouldn't have had her summoned as Caster as she could probably win the War in her sleep that way. Nor would I have Jade (again, blatantly obvious) summoned as Caster either, simply to make things more annoying for him.
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    Yep, I'm starting to like this already.

    off topic: it's kinda funny because both Jade and Sancraid have the same seiyuu together.


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    Servant Jade Curtis?

    I love you dude.

    Seriously, I love you, on a completely brotastic way, of course.
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    Shirou looks at a butter knife and his brain thinks "yupp, that's a weapon, off to my RM you go."

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    "You what?"

    From across the inner room of the Reiroukan household, the Lancer of this War was now inevitably meeting with the piercing glare and unsympathetic words of the young, raven-haired girl who was now his 'Master'.

    "Well I did warn you that I wasn't really cut out for the whole 'barge in there, Artes-a-blazin' business" Lancer replied "I'm more of the tactician sort you could say, the type who sits behind the desk, mutters indecipherable things about years-in-the-making plans, and then sends everyone else to do the stuff that requires actual physical effort for me".

    "Oh, I get it" his Master said, her expression for once seemingly lifting into a smile "So what you're saying is 'I'm a complete weakling who can't be bothered to perform even basic tasks'. I'm starting to wonder if you have any desire for the Grail at all".

    After those words, it was some achievement that her Servant was still able to retain his ever-present smile of his.

    "*chuckle* Yes and no frankly" he came back with "I admit, there's no real wish I could come up with to ask of such a grand-and-almighty-and-incredibly-unspecific power as the Holy Grail, yet as a scientist-"

    "I thought you said you were a tactician" his Master cut him off.

    "Oh, you're saying I can't be both now? You're as fun as always Tear- 'Misaya'. *ahem* As a scientist, my interests lie more in studying the Grail and its powers instead of going all willy-nilly with them like your typical hotheaded hero youngster would be prone to do" Lancer chirpily went on, till his face became suddenly more somber.

    "Not to mention, making sure that it doesn't fall into the hands of anyone who'd use it... how I would've, all those years ago" his voice lowered to a whisper.

    "Hah" Misaya shot back with "In that case you should've auditioned for that Ruler class I'd heard of. Especially if it would have left me with someone more, oh I don't know, competent".

    "Ooh that stings" Lancer droned, indicating it really didn't, but at least he was back to his usual tone of voice. "Besides, me in a 'fair and impartial mediator' role? I think not, my brains would be leaking out of my skull from sheer boredom by the end of Day One".

    "It's not like you're any better in this class" Misaya said, holding up her hand and ticking off her fingers "Let's see, your own lance NP won't even work till you've actually killed an enemy, plus you went ahead and let the last War's winning family summon the trump card that is Saber, who you say has, of all things, the power to bypass the Grail itself".

    "Pardon me if you've heard this before, but I do believe I could've made a decent Caster surrogate, you know, had you not reactivated that seal on my Fonic Artes" Lancer responded, really straining to keep that smile on his face now "Honestly, and you go on about me not wanting to win this little scuffle of yours".

    "Eurgh, there you go with those 'Fonons' again" Misaya snarled "Isn't it a pleasure to know you've summoned the hero who specialises in the Magecraft system you can't find any information on whatsoever?".

    "Really? Must be rather poor-quality sources you're relying on" Lancer quipped, before sighing "I'm starting to miss even the noble brat by now".

    ***

    "Now then, the cupboard should be moved to that corner there, and as for this table, that has to be-" Saber kept issuing out instructions while her own master, the self-proclaimed Witch of Mediocrity Ayaka Sajyou, grunted and groaned as she lugged one heavy item of furniture around after another.

    "W-what's the point of all this?" Ayaka tried to say as her arms quaked with the weight of whatever item Saber had her lifting now "And why can't you do all this, aren't you the one with the default B-Rank Strength?".

    "Oh moan moan moan, is it not obvious that we have to get this place in top-quality shape? My shop's grand re-opening deserves nothing less after all" Saber came back with "Plus it's more fun watching you do all the hard work".

    Almost immediately there came a crashing sound as Ayaka fell to the floor, with something weighing akin to a grand piano smashing down on top of her. Least it felt like it.

    Saber let out as a sigh as she slided the furntiure piece off of Ayaka with almost no effort at all, much to her Master's further bewilderment. "I see, perhaps the rearranging business is less up your alley. Then tell me dear, how do your culinary skills measure up?".

    "They're alright, er, I'm guessing" Ayaka feebly replied as she picked herself up.

    Very much immediately Saber let out an enormous groan "Oh this is going to be a long, long War. I don't think I can make it...".

    It was then Ayaka's eyes made their way up to her living room clock "Gyah, I'm going to be late for school!" you could say she squeaked.

    "What's that, how could you be so heartless as to simply brush off your very own Servant's trauma in her time of need?!" Saber exclaimed, but then conceeded with an "Oh fine then, off you go, I suppose I can take care off everything myself".

    "Yeah, 'Servant', right... Wait, you mean you're not going to come with me?" Ayaka asked as she turned to look at Saber "But isn't it your role to be there protecting me from the other Masters?".

    "Isn't it your role to protect me from food and sake deprivation?!" Saber continued to whine, before looking into Ayaka's eyes and saying "Oh alright, but there'd better be a secret alcohol stash hidden under your principal or vice-principal's desk when we get there".

    Thus with Saber entering spirit form, the two witches made a mostly uninterrupted walk to school. Of course, upon reaching said school...

    ***

    "Oof!" Ayaka let out as she was crashed into headfirst by another girl. For a moment there she feared she'd ran into the resident ice queen Misaya Reiroukan, but picking herself back up again she could see it was a much less intimidating face.

    ...Or so she knew.

    "Ah, hey there Ayaka" chirped a fellow student with long pink hair and slightly-reddish eyes, even though she didn't otherwise look tired "Oh I'm so sorry, I had no idea you were there, I can be so clumsy sometimes... sometimes..." she began muttering oddly, but quickly shook herself back to normal.

    "What the- Who the-" Ayaka shouted out, yet as she put her glasses back on she smiled and said "Oh it's okay Euphie, I'm just fine. In fact I'm sorta used to it by now" brushing herself off like nothing had happened.

    "Really? You mean it? Th-that's great to hear" Euphie blushed with her hand behind her head, yet one could see her smile and gaze twitching a bit. "Actually, Miss Ayaka, er... would you mind meeting me on the rooftop today at lunch, it's just there was a little something I'd like to discuss with you, only I can't do it now because, because...".

    "Sure, course I'll be there" Ayaka said, trying to lift whatever was so obviously on Euphie's mind. As the two students parted ways at the school gates Ayaka turned around...

    ...and saw her Servant giving her the coldest of stares.

    "Eheh, oh that's Euphie. She's just an exchange student from, well I can't remenmbver exactly where. I think she's American, but she mentioned Britain too, it's a bit confusing" Ayaka sheepishly admitted.

    But swiftly Saber pulled here Master to her side and pulled her to the side.
    "Indeed? I myself would've guessed she'd be from the illustrious city of Servantica, capital of the proud nation of One-Of-Your-Potential-Enemies-Land" Saber coldly spoke.

    "What? Euphie one of the other Servants?" Ayaka said, but tried to rein her voice in "I suppose she's always come across as odd and uncomfortable, but I just can't imagine her as a..." she began to trail off.

    "And which one of us has the inbuilt Spirit Detector? Trust me, 'Master', I have no intentions of fooling around on matters such as these" Saber told her.

    "Well, er-" Ayaka said as her Servant started loosening her grip "Then, what class do you think she is? I mean, if someone using her to spy for other Masters in the school, would that make her Assassin?".

    "For some reason I doubt that" Saber replied "No, let's just say I have my own little theory formulating".

    "But if she really is, then- I'm still not fighting her! I don't want anything more to do with the Grail, I'm not sacrificing her for that- for that-" Ayaka was practically seething now.

    "Yet when the time comes, will she feel the same?" Saber said simply.

    And so the morning went on. As Ayaka attended her classes she almost wished Saber'd make some wisecrack or carry on about food just to lightned the mood. But nope, all that time her Servant's eyes were fixed entirely on the pink-haired Servant sitting right next to Ayaka.

    Finally the lunchbell rang out, and with an utter lump in her stomach Ayaka made her way up to he roof to meet with Euphie, the potential second opponent she'd face in this War.

    Things started off pleasantly enough, with Euphie's smiling face beckoning the young witch ever closer to the bench she sat on, yet as the two looked at each other the pink-haired one said the strangest of conversation-starters.

    "Ayaka... you're Japanese, aren't you?"

    "Erm..." Ayaka hesitated, slowly saying "Yes. Not to be rude or anyting, eheh, but I thought that'd be obvious".

    Yet before she, or any other flesh-and-blood human for that matter, had time to react, Euphemia had already seized both her arms and pinned her to the wall with strength of undeniably superhuman calibre.
    "Oh you are then? That's wonderful to hear!" Euphie said with manic delight "It was a true pleasure meeting you Ayaka, it's so sad you have to go now" she then leaned up and whispered in her ear.

    But before her Master was to be subjected to whatever process of dismemberment the enemy Servant had in mind, Saber rushed in and managed to free Ayaka from Euphie's deathgrip against the wall.

    "What did I tell you?" Saber said somewhat smugly to Ayaka as the latter tried to feel her arms again.
    "As for you," she then said as she drew out her bat to match Euphie's blood-red gaze "If your wish happens to be the murder of my very summoner, then I must ask a very high price off you in return".

    "Namely, getting through me".


    A/N: That's Chapter Two. Sorry about it being a long time coming, it's just that Jade is a fairly difficult character to perfectly capture, and Yuuko's even more difficult. But it's kinda because they are such challenging characters that I wanted to write about them in the first place.

    I decided to go with a Servant other than Rider to infiltrate Ayaka's school, partly because I haven't fully chosen Rider yet, but also because the ideas I do have for Rider aren't the sort of people who could really disguise themselves as students (Well maybe they could, but it'd be really awkward).

    Maybe not my best effort, but hey, least this chapter has Misaya in it.

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    Nice. Write more? Please?l

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    I'm amazed... Really, words are not enough to describe the sheer awesomeness of this topic
    Yuuko...
    Yuuko freaking Ichihara!!!
    In a Fate fanfic!!!

    This is so gold that can make even Gilgamesh blind...
    How no one have thought on it?

    -------

    Really looking forward for this fic
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    Euphemia as Berserker is even better, especially with her trigger being Japanese people. The murder princess rides again!

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    Quote Originally Posted by KooriRenchuu View Post
    Euphemia as Berserker is even better, especially with her trigger being Japanese people. The murder princess rides again!
    Actually, I never watched code geass(if the google is not lying to me, this Euphemia is CG character)...
    Even always saying that I going to see it and everything else...
    Last edited by Zephyr; September 9th, 2012 at 09:56 PM.

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