Manifests
Ahem
I don't have much to say here, given that I admittedly don't have a lot of energy because of Thanksgiving yesterday. I am tired.
1 Point: Pasiphae
2 Points: Hylas Alter
3 Points: Jerker by Vidiidi
Imma go try to get more sleep now
Manifests
Ahem
I don't have much to say here, given that I admittedly don't have a lot of energy because of Thanksgiving yesterday. I am tired.
1 Point: Pasiphae
2 Points: Hylas Alter
3 Points: Jerker by Vidiidi
Imma go try to get more sleep now
Discord: FactorySmoke#1076
Natural Enemy: Tsuruya Nanboku IV
What if I told you that clicking this would take you to my Servant Comp?
Comp:
Lancer - Lu Bu by OddEyedDuelist
Lover - Pasiphae by Alexcone
Berserker - Jeanne D'Arc by Vididii
Assasssin - Odysseus by Dark Squirrel
Berserker - Hylas Alter by Vance
Winners:
Third Place goes to Alexcone with Pasiphae with 7 points
Second Place goes to Vididii with Jerker with 11 points
And Winner is Dark Squirrel with Odysseus and 11 points but one more 3-Pointer
Congratulations everyone! Thanks for participating. Next contest will be held in March, since January is reserved for Secret Santa Servant Edition!
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
Didn't expect to get that much points, eheh. And congrats to Dark Squirrel!
Eyyyyy, congrats Squirrel!
Hey thanks! Now i'll have to think of a prompt... But not before three months!
Petri's arbitrary limit
I forgot we also had this one this month... Oh gosh.
w h i t e f r e n z y ' s
s e r v a n t s . | . m a s t e r s. | . p r e v i e w s
Yeah I'll just need to catch my breath before shouting the prompt, life has been hectic the past month.
Petri's arbitrary limit
Greetings my friends,
DelHangover here. Apologies for the late start, of course the deadline will be extended accordingly.
But the wait is totally worth it, because I think this might be the coolest prompt yet. Enjoy!
Hobbies.
Summer Saint Graphs, Halloween shenanigans, Christmas malarkey of all kind, Heroic Spirits have been known to change their Spirit Origin to fit a more laid-back, even festive moods.
Some are also known to act as waiters, maids, booksellers or lifeguards.
Finally, some have taken on new trades, new skills as they got a second lease on existence: taking up gardening by trading their spear for a hoe, taking cooking classes, making garage kits wholesale.
What does a Servant look like when they dedicate themselves entirely to their hobby once they are summoned? How would their Spirit Origin change if at all? Do they approach their hobbies as casually as possible or do they go hard, as seriously as they approached their tasks and trials in life? And what hobbies are even those?
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
Okay I might actually do this one
It is a rather good prompt.
I may not have the time to participate this round as it takes me forever to get an idea rolling, but it's a nice combination of flexible but with a definite direction to lean towards.
Good Job!
The young warrior takes his position. Atop an unspeakably tall mountain, he stands ready to take on his foe. However, the young warrior was not armed with a bow or a sword or a mace, nor was he mounted on a horse nor a chariot.
He was unarmed, with a skateboard serving as his mount.
The unspeakably tall mountain was a ramp. A ramp that resembled a mountain - with fake decorations designed to simulate a journey from the mountains to the depths to even the heights of the heavens. Ramps described as rocks and trees and animals dotted the path down.
It may even be more accurate to describe the teenager and his opponent not as warriors, but as racers.
Yes, this was not a battle to a test but a test of skill. Of tricking off ramps to woo the crowd and get a better look at surrounding obstacles, of the courage to recklessly lean into a turn for an extra burst of speed, of the thrill of racing down a slope at top speed while pitting your bravery against another's.
This was skateboarding at its most…
“HYPE!”
Rider of the X-treme
Other Classes: Archer
True Name: Abhimanyu
Alignment: Awesome Good
Place of Origin: India
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 66kg
Likes: “Awesome Things”, His Dad, Skateboarding, Going Fast (it makes him feel alive)
Dislikes: “Lame Things”, Duryodhana
Natural Enemy: Akshayakurama
Parameters
STR: C
AGL: A
END: B
MAG: C
NP: B+
LCK: A
Class Skills
Riding A+ (Skateboarding)
The ability to command a skateboard with unmatched swagger and skill. Whether building momentum through repeated ups and downs on a halfpipe, converting that momentum into daring tricks, or building speed during a downhill race, Abhimanyu can command his board as if conditions were perfect.
Of particular importance during downhill racing (and skateboarding in general) is balance. As such, Abhimanyu is spectacularly well-balanced so long as he is on top of his skateboard, unable to be shaken by even the fiercest of winds.
Magic Resistance D
Abhimanyu’s Magic Resistance has been lowered in comparison to the rank he had in this skill as an Archer class servant. This is due not only to his new class as Rider, but also because Abhimanyu is now committed to a purely physical sport where mysticism typically isn’t expected. As such, Abhimanyu can now only defend against single-verse magecraft.
Personal Skills
Air Time A
Tricks. The act skateboarding is known for. The ollie, the kickflip, the 360 are all amongst the tricks skateboarders are expected to master. Typically, like most things done for flare, tricks are not frequently used in downhill racing - especially given the catastrophic consequences of missing a landing at high speed.
As a servant, however, these rules do not apply.
Thanks to this skill, every moment Abhimanyu spends off of the ground is converted into a burst of speed once all four wheels touch down. Tricks performed in the air provide extra increases to that speed when he touches down - harder tricks providing greater speed rewards as well.
Streetwise Navigation C
Skateboarding is largely regarded as a sport of the cities. Indeed, many skateboarding tricks have their uses most obviously shown in navigating the urban maze that are modern cities; the ollie and kickflip to leap over stairs the skateboard would surely fail to go down and, of course, the famous rail grind.
As such, this is a skill that allows one to navigate urban environments easily, being able to seek out the most stylish way around obstacles.
As Abhimanyu focuses on downhill racing, Abhimanyu’s rank in this skill is used not to find the most stylish route through an urban obstacle course, but rather to find the quickest access downhill in order to build up speed.
Revolving Revolution EX
“The embodiment of my skill and my ability to look totally awesome while demonstrating it.”
That’s how Abhimanyu explains this skill. And he isn’t too far off. This skill works on a similar principle to the Father of Europe’s [Traversing the Path of the King]. If Abhimanyu acts “stylishly”, the effectiveness of his other skills will be exponentially increased. The cooler the tricks, the higher the jump, the faster he goes, badass one liners to the crowd or slicing taunts to the opponent; all of it contributes to the increasing effectiveness of Abhimanyu’s skills.
“So yeah, I guess on a technical level, it ‘ramps up’ my skills. Eh? Eh? Ramps up?”
A pun like that is an example of something “unstylish” that would invert the effectiveness of this skill.
Noble Phantasm
Fragment of the Avian God
Garuda Prakashaya
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Lameness
One of the two central features of this mysterious singularity.
The divine spirit Garuda split into several fragments, which, bizarrely, took the form of skateboard parts. This Noble Phantasm, approximately 50% of the Divine Spirit’s power, is held by Abhimanyu, with the other 50% being held by Ravana’s son, Akshayakurama.
Garuda, in Hindu Mythology, was a powerful god who battled Naga and the heaven’s before agreeing to become the god Vishnu’s mount. As such, at his full power, Garuda would be nigh unparalleled in the realm of Mount Noble Phantasms.
At only 50% of his power, however, Garuda’s powers are much tamer.
By invoking this Noble Phantasm’s true name and kicking the ground to push the board forward, Abhimanyu can enable Garuda to temporarily manifest in his full form - creating a fantastic burst of speed. The key power of this Noble Phantasm, however, is not within the speed itself, but rather what that speed can be used for. A sudden burst near the finish line, boosting off a ramp for extra air time, even speeding up one’s descent in a daring maneuver are all options this Noble Phantasm makes available for Abhimanyu. As such, this Noble Phantasm is not simply a trump card, but also an ability that can be used to supercharge skills such as [Air Time] or [Revolving Revolution] by making their activation conditions easier to achieve.
Lore
The most famous son of Arjuna, and a tragic figure in the Mahabharata. In spite of his spectacular talent and courage, he was brought down by the dishonorable actions from the Kauravas, being attacked by all of their greatest warriors at once.
When Chaldea detected the X-Treme Garuda singularity, Abhimanyu was one of the first servants dragged into it. However, he was completely unaware of the true circumstances behind the singularity, instead becoming completely enraptured by skateboarding for its own sake. It was only after being defeated by Akshayakurama in a race that Abhimanyu became aware of the greater stakes of the singularity and gained Garuda Prakashaya. Since then, he’s faced multiple challengers, racing to his heart’s, all in preparation for his fated rematch.
Personality
Abhimanyu has fundamentally not changed from his Archer class counterpart. He is still the hot-blooded, self-possessed, quick learner that he has always been. However, he has “lightened up” considerably. While less immediately stubborn and arrogant than normal, he is also less immediately helpful than normal, preferring to focus on skateboarding rather than any “chores”. Indeed, Chaldea was only able to recruit him by promising that he would have the chance to improve and show off.
In short, he has acquired the attitude of a teenager whose latest passion has become the only thing in the world that’s important to him.
The Rival
--Meet the Competition--
The Final Race
--Are you ready!?--
Youngster’s Winging Through the Sky
--Take in the Sights--
And to the Winner Go the Spoils
--Enjoy the Victory--
Creator's Notes
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“So how's it going up there? The wind is feeling nice, yes?”
“Our destination is growing closer. The journey was a long one.”
“Ugh, a simple “ it's good” or “it's bad” would've been good enough, Terry.”
“Haa~. The wind feels…nice, I suppose.”
“Want me to go faster?”
“...Yes.”
“Alrighty! Full speed ahead!”
True Name: Therese Charlotte Luise
Class: Rider
Alignment: Neutral Summer
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Bavaria
Armaments: Exosuit
Talents: Charity, Info-gathering
Parameters:
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: C
Luck: A
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Bio
Was the deadline extended by a day or is it voting time?