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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
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    ...Like building a giant 50-foot high border wall?

    Sorry, couldn't resist.
    Exactly like building a 50-foot high border wall.

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    So, we gonna end up making versions of all the KoRT between us then?

    Or do you just have a preference for the older versions?
    No.

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    Source:
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    Class: Saber
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Origin: Historical
    Region: America

    Parameters
    Strength: B+
    Endurance: D
    Agility: C
    Mana: E
    Luck: B
    NP: B


    Height/Weight: 187cm/97kg
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Baseball, sex, the Yankees, alcohol, tobacco
    Dislikes: Too many rules, playing the sun, not hitting homers
    Talents: Power
    Natural enemy: Himself
    Attribute: Man, Star
    Traits: Man, Servant, Human
    Armament: Nothing but a bat

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: (D)
    Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    Born far after the time true magic had departed from this world, Saber escaped the lowest rank possible only by virtue of his class container. While rumors abounded that he sold his soul to the Devil for his ungodly baseball skill, Saber himself denies this vehemently. Not like it would have done much good in this skill’s regard anyway.

    Riding: (C+)
    Riding is a Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
    Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill, including airplanes, due to his multiple anecdotes surrounding barnstorming.
    It’d be higher if it included his womanizing rank...

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: (C)
    Charisma is a composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class.

    A figurehead for the entire Major League Baseball complex, Saber’s exponential rise in fame during his early years of playing ball made him the first true celebrity that crossed the boundary into the mainstream--especially during a time when major league sports weren’t the national past times back then that they’ve become today. Raises morale permanently when leading a small “team” sized force.
    However, by Saber’s own standards his charisma isn’t as high as he’d like it to be. Maybe if it was they would have finally let him manage the Yankees.

    Curse of the Bambino: (EX)
    The Curse of the Bambino was a superstition evolving from the failure of the Boston Red Sox baseball team to win the World Series in the 86-year period from 1918 to 2004. This misfortune began after the Red Sox sold star player Saber to the New York Yankees in the off-season of 1919–1920. Before that point, the Red Sox had been one of the most successful professional baseball franchises, winning the first World Series and amassing five World Series titles. After the sale, they went without a title for decades, even while the Red Sox won four American League championships from 1946 to 1986, as the previously lackluster Yankees became one of the most successful franchises in North American professional sports. The curse became a focal point of the Yankees–Red Sox rivalry over the years.

    Leaving a trail of misfortune whenever he was traded away, Saber’s curse had also gone on to affect his beloved Yankees after being traded to the Boston Braves as his baseball-playing days were winding down.
    Not a skill that assists in escape from battle so much as it is one that affects the condition of the other party should a normal escape be successfully made. If Saber is able to make an escape from combat under his own power, the enemy’s Luck as well as their highest base stat will be ranked down by one until they reconvene their battle with Saber. This skill’s effects carry over even if Saber were to die before a rematch were to take place. If the enemy’s highest stat is Luck, it will be ranked down by two. EX ranked skills aren’t affected.

    Anger Point: (C)
    Saber’s life was rich with his passions. From having sex with anything that moved, to being thrown out of a horrendous number of games for almost beating up umpires, to smoking and drinking as much as humanly possible back in the day. While he lived as largely as possible up until the day he died, sometimes his lifestyle would catch up to him at random points.

    A variation of the Berserk skill that combines the penalties of Weak Constitution. Anger Point provides the same mental pollution-eluding effects and melee bonuses that Berserk of the same rank does, but while the skill is active there’s an equal chance of a random drop in parameter rank.

    Noble Phantasm
    The Called Shot
    The King’s Final Slam

    (Anti-Unit/Army, B)
    The King’s Final Slam was the home run hit by Saber of the New York Yankees in the fifth inning of Game 3 of the 1932 World Series, held on October 1, 1932, at Wrigley Field in Chicago. During the at-bat, Saber made a pointing gesture, which existing film confirms, but the exact meaning of his gesture remains ambiguous. Although neither fully confirmed nor refuted, the story goes that Saber pointed to the center-field bleachers during the at-bat. It was allegedly a declaration that he would hit a home run to this part of the park. On the next pitch, Saber hit a home run to center field. The home run was his fifteenth, and last, in his 41 post-season games. It was said to be one of the greatest home runs in history.

    Activated by pointing his bat at the target and marking them in his mind as the subject of The Called Shot, the object of the Noble Phantasm becomes something similar to one affected by Empyrean Eye. It becomes a foregone conclusion that whatever Saber strikes with his bat will hit the appointed target: i.e. his opponent. The victim becomes a center of fate, unable to escape from their predestination of being bombarded by Saber’s projectiles, of which he can strike off multiple. Even an energy beam from a Noble Phantasm can be hit back to the target if it’s of a low enough rank. Obviously, anything not inherently magical Saber decides to use as a makeshift baseball will be infused with sufficient mana upon contact with his bat to qualify as a Mystic Code.


    Lore

    Babe Ruth (born George Herman Ruth) was an American professional baseball player whose career in Major League Baseball spanned 22 seasons, from 1914 through 1935. Nicknamed The Bambino and The Sultan of Swat, he began his MLB career as a stellar left-handed pitcher for the Boston Red Sox, but achieved his greatest fame as a slugging outfielder for the New York Yankees. Ruth established many MLB batting (and some pitching) records, including career home runs (714), runs batted in (RBIs) (2,213), bases on balls (2,062), slugging percentage (.6897), and on-base plus slugging (OPS) (1.164); the latter two still stand today.[1] Ruth is regarded as one of the greatest sports heroes in American culture and is considered by many to be the greatest baseball player of all time. In 1936, Ruth was elected into the Baseball Hall of Fame as one of its "first five" inaugural members.

    At age seven, Ruth was sent to St. Mary's Industrial School for Boys, a reformatory where he learned life lessons and baseball skills from Brother Matthias Boutlier of the Christian Brothers, the school's disciplinarian and a capable baseball player. In 1914, Ruth was signed to play minor-league baseball for the Baltimore Orioles but was soon sold to the Red Sox. By 1916, he had built a reputation as an outstanding pitcher who sometimes hit long home runs, a feat unusual for any player in the pre-1920 dead-ball era. Although Ruth twice won 23 games in a season as a pitcher and was a member of three World Series championship teams with Boston, he wanted to play every day and was allowed to convert to an outfielder. With regular playing time, he broke the MLB single-season home run record in 1919.

    After that season, Red Sox owner Harry Frazee controversially sold Ruth to the Yankees, an act that, coupled with Boston's subsequent championship drought, popularized the "Curse of the Bambino" superstition. In his 15 years with New York, Ruth helped the Yankees win seven American League (AL) championships and four World Series championships. His big swing led to escalating home run totals that not only drew fans to the ballpark and boosted the sport's popularity but also helped usher in the live-ball era of baseball, in which it evolved from a low-scoring game of strategy to a sport where the home run was a major factor. As part of the Yankees' vaunted "Murderer's Row" lineup of 1927, Ruth hit 60 home runs, extending his MLB single-season record. He retired in 1935 after a short stint with the Boston Braves. During his career, Ruth led the AL in home runs during a season twelve times.

    Ruth's legendary power and charismatic personality made him a larger-than-life figure in the "Roaring Twenties". During his career, he was the target of intense press and public attention for his baseball exploits and off-field penchants for drinking and womanizing. His often reckless lifestyle was tempered by his willingness to do good by visiting children at hospitals and orphanages. He was denied a job in baseball for most of his retirement, most likely due to poor behavior during parts of his playing career. In his final years, Ruth made many public appearances, especially in support of American efforts in World War II. In 1946, he became ill with cancer, and died two years later.


    Personality
    “You just can't beat the person who never gives up.”
    “If it wasn't for baseball, I'd be in either the penitentiary or the cemetery.”

    The Sultan of Swat. The King of Crash. The Colossus of Clout. The Babe, Smalls.
    The Babe is a simple man. Put a woman in front of him, he’ll love her. Put a beer in front of him, he’ll drink it. Put a cigar in front of him, he’ll smoke it. Put a baseball in front of him, he’ll destroy it.
    He also loves his own rep. The Sandlot will quickly become his favorite movie if you show it to him, partially only because of the huge role he plays in it. Outside of being Fergus in a baseball jersey, he’d be genuinely heartbroken at the recent controversies that seem to always be popping out of sports. Nobody should take baseball for granted, it’s the greatest sport in the world.

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    Shady's back with a brand new rap.
    I honestly don't know how many more of these I have in me. It probably says something when I had to force myself to finish this one.
    That said, here's Babe.

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    I thought Jackie Mitchell would be his natural enemy. Sheet's good and all but I always thought he'd qualify as an Archer.

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    Archer Babe would focus more on his equally great pitching and have Ernie Shore as his natural enemy.
    His Noble Phantasm is pretending he pitched a perfect game that one time.

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    "Who dares to summon me, to try and bind me to their service? The queen's judgement is swift, but merciful, 'Master'. Look into my eyes. Look upon your new mistress, Queen Omphale of Lydia!"

    Rider
    Queen Omphale


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    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    STR: B
    END: A+
    AGI: C
    MAG: C
    LUCK: A+
    NP: A+

    Class Skills

    Riding (A+):
    A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability. All vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. As a queen who dwelt in the Age of Gods, Omphale possesses a very high rank in this skill.

    Magic Resistance (A+):
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'. Omphale’s resistance, high for a Rider, is augmented by the Hide of Nemea.

    Personal Skills

    Charisma (B+):
    A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. Having B Rank in this Skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its Monarch (King/Queen). The morale of military forces he or she commands is extremely high.

    Golden Rule (Body) (A):
    A Skill that denotes the possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill, there is no effect on the owner's Strength parameter. Tall, slender, and flawless, Omphale delights in displaying her body as much as possible, often wearing nothing other than the Nemean Lion’s pelt.

    Battle Continuation (False) (D): A Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. It is also one of the powers of a vampire. Omphale’s version of this skill is entirely reliant on the Lion’s skin.

    Noble Phantasms

    Goddess of War
    War God’s Twin-Headed Axe


    Anti-Fortress, A+: A mighty labrys that serves as Omphale’s main weapon, it is the axe of Hippolyta and shares the same name as the great Queen’s girdle, and was gifted to Omphale by Heracles, and unlike his other confiscated possessions was kept by her after his departure. Originally a weapon belonging to a god, it is filled with power, being able to sunder the earth and is sharp enough to slice through the air. Additionally, it radiates divine energy like a beacon. Due to it being used as a symbol of royal office for no less than three countries also gives it the authority of kingship, which combined with Omphale’s own natural Charisma gives the queen an overpowering aura. The axe seethes with a divine aura and is suffused with an amount of magical energy that’s unthinkable for modern times. Releasing its energy releases a blast capable of levelling fortress walls. As an interesting sidenote, the axe was later used by Clytemnestra to murder King Agamemnon, though if the two were to clash, Omphale’s would win due to Clytemnestra’s being corrupted and blackened by his rage.

    Hide of Nemea
    Pelt of the Divine Beast


    Shield, A+:
    The skin of the fearsome Nemean Lion, a special demonic beast that rejects human civilization, granting it and its pelt immunity to human-made weapons. Any attack that counts as human made will fail to penetrate Omphale’s skin so long as she wears the skin, in addition to it granting the Battle Continuation and Magic Resistance skills. However, it is unable to block divine treasures and attacks, and the Divinity skill can partially nullify its protection. Omphale can use witchcraft to animate it, turning it into a revenant that can serve as her mount with the Lion’s power and abilities, however she dislikes doing this as it removes its protection from her. It is not truly Omphale’s treasure, it being one of the objects confiscated by her when Heracles entered her service.

    Queen's Domination
    Subjugation of the Great Hero


    Anti-Unit, A+: The Noble Phantasm that truly belongs to Omphale, the legend of Heracles being forced into her service for a year. It activates when a hero dares to meet Omphale’s gaze: if she is able to best them in a clash of wills, they are forced to their knees and bound to unquestionably obey her every word. In addition, all their weapons and Noble Phantasms (if they are physical objects) are moved to Omphale’s possession, along with knowledge of their use. This ability has some limitations, however. She is only able to use it on men, abilties that resist mental influence such as Bravery or Mental Pollution increase the chance of a successful resistance, and if even one fails to submit to her, she permanently loses this ability. The queen is not cruel, and if one of her servants pleases her or does her a great service, she may free them from their servitude. Maybe.

    Lore
    Likes: Submissive men
    Dislikes: Monkeys
    Talents: Beast-taming
    Natural Enemy: The bitch

    A queen of Lydia during the era of myths and heroes, Omphale ascended to the throne on the death of her husband and ruled the land in her own right. The glory of her legend comes from the time when, after his murder of Iphitos, Heracles was forced into her service for a year as punishment. Laying claim to all his weapons and treasures, Omphale forced him to wear women’s clothes and spin thread for her, as well as taking him as a lover. After the year of service was up, Heracles was so enchanted with her and she with him that she took him as a consort, becoming each other's second spouse.

    Unquestionably a queen, she is a woman who will refuse to bend her head to another. She will not willingly kneel before another, especially a man, and will likely force her Master to be her slave if he is male. Though arrogant and regal, she is not cruel, and will treat her servants with good grace (“The queen must be merciful in judgement”), and, as stated above, may free them from service if they please her. She delights in praise and is especially proud of her beauty.

    Bond CE – Le Rouet d’Omphale

    “Sit here at this wheel, servant. Know that it is the command of Queen Omphale that you spin this wool into thread for me. With hard work and drudgery comes great reward, my servant. If you do this work uncomplainingly, I give my word to reward you appropriately. Please the queen and she will please you in return, but anger her and she will grind you into the dirt. Such is the wheel of fortune, the wheel of Omphale.”

    Character Relations

    Hercules – Due to the nature of their shared legend, if he is present in a war with her he will automatically be subject to the Queen’s Domination. Even in his berserk state, he is unable to resist his mistress’s commands.

    Alcides – On the other hand, seeing her noble hero twisted into this monster disgusts her utterly. Even so, he is still bound to her commands.

    Emiya “Handsome, skilled, a powerful fighter, a talented domestic… Yes… you’re perfect. Now… Look at me.”

    Gilgamesh – Two massive egos in the same room, friction is bound to occur. However, she is too cunning to try and bind him to her, as one of his arrogance is able to resist her without much difficulty.

    Queen Medb – Natural rivals, their preferences for men are almost identical. Should they be together, a great and terrible clash is bound to occur.


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    Concept: "heel, boy" type

    I actually had a lot of fun writing this, so I hope you like it.
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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
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    Her NPs see a bit too high ranked and powerful. There should be quantification on what it takes to overcome her gaze, for example. Sufficient bravery or divinity or something is probably gonna throw it off, or magic resistance.

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    The axe is A+ because that's the rank of Hippolyta's cloth in SF.
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    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
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    Omphale is some stuff. Always pictured her wearing a suit myself.

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    What is the source of Omphale and Clytemnestra sharing a weapon? There is a clear myth about this? A very underground source? Creation of yours?

    Got curious.

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    In another version, [Clytemnestra's] first husband was King of Lydia. The kings of Lydia, according to Plutarch's The Greek Questions, 45,[3] having succeeded Omphale who had received from Herakles Hippolyte's (the queen of the Amazons') axe, carried this axe (called labrys by Lydians) as one of their sacred insignia of office. In the tradition following the Sicilian lyric poet Stesichorus's Oresteia[4] Clytemnestra used such double-edged ax to assist her lover Aegisthos in the killing of Agamemnon (and later, to kill her son Orestes, as he arrived to avenge his father's death), as depicted on the mixing bowl (calyx krater) with the killing of Agamemnon (Early Classical Period – about 460 B.C.) by the Dokimasia Painter
    here
    Quote Originally Posted by Sandstorm77 View Post
    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    Queen Omphale

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    That ain't the source, you noob.

    It's this: https://www.artstation.com/artist/user-109

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    Also I forgot artstation is another good source for images. Found some better Joan ones. And some creepy illustrations of her voices as nightmare fuel.

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    I was about to ask what would happen if Omphale met Diarmuid but her MR is too high for such shenanigans.
    "We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet

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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
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    Oh that's very interesting. That gives Clytemnestra a good weapon NP. I've already made one Servant with Labrys as NP and I could make her to inherit it...

    Thanks for the info

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    Following feedback from everybody, I've fixed the sheet up to standards (hopefully). Shoutout to Daneel Rush for giving me the last bit I needed here.

    Also I may have taken a few liberties with the Lore here for this one.

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    "Servant Ur-Nungal, King of Uruk at your service. My apologies but you must have had the worst luck in summoning me of all people. I apologise in advance for our imminent failure."


    Source: (X)

    Servant: Berserker
    Other Classes: Caster
    True Name: Ur-Nungal "Queen of Ekur", "The King of Nothing"
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin:
    Babylon, Uruk

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: D
    NP: A

    Height: 150cm
    Weight: 40kg
    Likes: Sad Rock Music, Father
    Dislikes: Herself, Father (It's complicated)
    Talent: None
    Natural Enemy: Father (It's REALLY complicated)
    Attribute: Sky
    Traits: Human, Divine
    Armament: Sword, Axe

    Class Skills:

    Mad Enhancement: E
    The Class Skill that characterises a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it can also affect or seal away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms. She possesses a hair trigger temper. When she is insulted, a luck check is performed. Failure results in her going wild and parameters except MGI and LCK are raised. Though she had never lost her sanity in life, she was continually depressed at her lot in life and summoned into the modern world where she has been all but forgotten infuriates her. Naturally Berserker is the most fitting class despite the low rank.

    Personal Skills:

    Curse of the Unrecorded: A++
    A curse born to one who's achievements in history were never recorded. Reserved only for obscure figures, instead of where knowledge was lost - here it was never possessed to begin with. To her opponents: all parameters appear one rank lower than what they actually are. It combines the effects of Uncrowned Arms Mastership as well as high ranking Information Erasure and Presence Concealment.

    Goddess Divine Core: B
    A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.
    As the child of Gilgamesh, she is one third divine in nature and is descended from Gods. However she possesses a more advance version of her father's Divinity skill. She does not know why she possesses this skill instead, perhaps something to do with the goddess of a similar name. She refers her naked form as the 'AUO Cast Off' and claims it is the most splendid sight in all the world.

    Golden Rule: B
    A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. Due to possessing the wealth of the Golden Capital, she possesses great financial power. However due to the degradation of Uruk, she possesses less wealth than her father as the splendour of the Golden Capital had started to vanish.

    Necromancy: A
    The practise of communicating and controlling the dead. Commonly associated with witchcraft, sorcery and black magic in general. This skill allows Berserker to command dead souls as familiars, however the cost of removing them from the underworld is immense it is far more efficient to kill a target and dominate the soul before it enters reincarnation. Due to already being dead, the spirits cannot be killed by an outside force as you can't kill what's already dead. However should the pressure become too great, she can release the souls from her command and allow them to pass on. In addition she can summon corpses to act as familiars too to consume the living, however she cannot command high level Dead, just those a step under the level of Dead Apostles.

    Although she does not remember, it is highly unlikely she obtained this skill in life. Although she makes up plenty of false stories as to the deeds of how she obtained the skill - the true reason is outside the realm of her comprehension.

    Noble Phantasms

    Dust of Uruk
    Golden Capital Falling Asunder


    Type: Barrier
    Rank: ???
    Range: 0
    Max Targets: 1

    The manifestation of Berserker's rule of Uruk. Her reign marked the end of the golden age and the city quickly degraded. The downward spiral has been conceptualised as Berserkers unique ability in the form of a passive defense Noble Phantasm. Manifesting the 'Fall from Glory', any Noble Phantasms that are used to oppose Berserker receive a 'Rank-Down' against her, lose any beneficial modifiers and reducing their effective range/effect.

    For example, Excalibur would be considered a 'B' rank Anti-Army Noble Phantasm when used against Berserker while God Hand would only defend against 'C' rank attacks and grant its user half its usual stock lives. If Berserker were to enter the Hanging Gardens of Babylon or a reality marble, it would quickly weaken and the structure would disintegrate under her touch.
    Using this Noble Phantasm, she can resist many different attacks and should she survive an attack from an enemy Noble Phantasm, by listening to its True Name, she can deduce the identity of her attacker. Although it is an incredibly powerful Noble Phantasm, it is the representation of all Berserker's shortcomings and failure so despises she has to rely on it.

    Irkalla Kur
    Tablet of Life


    Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Army, Anti-Fortress
    Rank: A++
    Range: 1000
    Max Targets: 1

    Named after the mesopotamian underworld, it is a Noble Phantasm of the Goddess of a similar name. It appears to be a stone tablet she uses to carry out judgement upon the wicked. More accurately, the tablet is comparable to that of a quantum computer that analyses and records data. She can either input key words into the 'Computer' to come up with various results to find out the identity of a subject. Naturally inputting the name of the Noble Phantasm will come up with the 'Data Profile' on the subject. Once the true name of the target has been discovered and input, the "True" Noble Phantasm will be unleashed.

    By releasing the true name of Irkalla Kur, powerful chains will be unleashed from the earth and bind to a target, immobilising them. Acting out the Gods judgement upon the wicked, rings of light appear in the sky above the target and the earth opens up and fires a light pillar from the underworld and through the rings to slay the target and claim them. The bonus modifiers are added depending upon how "Wicked" the target is.


    Lore

    Ur-Nungal. Child of Gilgamesh. She ruled as a king of Uruk for a mere thirty years before passing the throne to her son.

    With her father being the King of Heroes; historians and poets never bothered writing down her exploits. As it is, Ur-Nungal does not know whether her reign achieved anything at all as she does not remember. As "Nothing" was recorded, she remembers "Nothing". Especially not the truth of her existence.

    Gilgamesh did sire a child called Ur-Nungal and the Goddess Ereshkigal birthed a daughter called Manungal, otherwise known as Nungal. These individuals are one and the same. The seed of the King of Heroes was extracted from his physical body and inseminated in a divine body. Ishtar volunteered to bear the child of Gilgamesh. However that burden to bear was given to her sister Ereshkigal. A child was born, the girl was called Nungal and became a Goddess of the Underworld like her mother. After the King of Heroes passed away, the Goddess Nungal was split in two 'halves', one would remain as a fully divine goddess and reign as judge of the dead while the other was spirited away to Uruk as a mortal goddess to rule the people as a king. However one half was significantly more competent than the other. One was worshipped as the goddess she was while the other begat only ruin.

    Ironically, the beginning of the degradation of Uruk and act of being overlooked to such a degree was able to place the "mortal king" aspect of her as a heroic spirit.


    Personality

    Berserker is a paradox, entering the Throne of Heroes for achieving nothing.

    As a result she is a walking inferiority complex.

    Having been dismissed as worthless by history, she is fuelled by the need to prove herself. She attempts to emulate her father in terms of speech, feigning his confidence and arrogance due to viewing him as the perfect king. However she is also quite unstable and will fly into a raging fit at the slightest provocations. She also makes up great claims (i.e. lies) in an attempt to make her seem more grandiose. This is to cover up that she achieved nothing and this is her attempt to compensate on it.

    When she's alone (or thinks herself so) she's quite likely break down in tears and sob in self pity. Chances are Bullet for My Valentine, My Chemical Romance, Linkin Park or some other band like that will be playing in the background.

    Ultimately she both loves and despises Gilgamesh. To him, he is the greatest that ever was and ever will be and is proud to call him her father. However, the fact that she could never live up to his legacy infuriates her. He is a reminder of what she never was, what she never will be. She is too scared to confront him as well and would refuse to speak with him out of pure shame. As a result if she were forced to meet him, she would try to fight and kill him just to prove that she can do something. She just wants to be acknowledged as a great king and warrior and will do anything to achieve it.

    When the poor girl needs is either a slap around the head or a hug.

    Bond Lines:

    Lvl. 1: You probably haven't heard of me. I'm a King of Uruk and the daughter on Gilgamesh… Wait, son? The one thing they have on me and they couldn't even get that right!
    Lvl. 2: I'm nothing compared to father, but would you believe I actually travelled to the underworld and slew a God of Death?! Yeah… didn't think you'd buy it.
    Lvl. 3: Hard to tell I'm a Berserker isn't it? Who cares. The name of Ur-Nungal is far more important.
    Lvl. 4: No one thought I was worth noticing, but we've done a lot so you'll remember me right?
    Lvl. 5: I might be an insignificant speck, but I have you Master. You'll always have me and my heart.

    Other Relationships:

    Gilgamesh: Is that father over there? I have no right to speak to him let alone be in his presence, I'll take my leave.

    Mordred: So, how did you deal with your dad being so great? ... Huh, good advice.

    Ereshkigal/Ishtar: The Goddess! S-She's beautiful… I cannot find the words to describe her… A part of me feels familiar with her, I feel the need to hug her and give me a nice pat on the head. Could you please not tell them that?


    Key Words/Craft Essences


    Babylon's Treasury

    "There was once a storehouse. It contained all the treasure of the world.
    Not just gold or weapons, there was wine their too, stories, anything and everything worth of note.
    It could only be handled by the king. I was never the king.
    When the king passed on and I received the inheritance, it was lost.
    Not immediately, no one's that incompetent.
    Over time under my rule, it lost its splendour, it's unique value.
    I was given everything treasure under the sun and it was lost.
    I couldn't even maintain its wealth.
    I was lacking while he was true.

    I have plenty of stuff there though.
    Lots of good food and drink. Weapons for every occasion. Great works of art. But it will never be as splendid as his.
    It just goes to show I mess everything up…"

    King of Heroes

    "That's my father.
    The title doesn't mean a King who is a Hero. He is one who rules all heroes.
    He was the first and greatest, none could compare.
    It's a heck of a legacy to live up too as well.
    I mean, who could I? Otherwise I'D be the King of Heroes.

    But I suppose it makes sense.
    I mean after him… who would pay attention to me?

    I'm not my father. I'm only known for not being as good as him.
    I'm a bargain discount king given out for charity at best and certainly not a hero.

    You must have the worst luck drawing me instead of him"

    Another name for Gilgamesh. It does not mean a king who is a hero but is used with the implication that he is the king over heroes.
    The story of Gilgamesh, is who mankind's oldest hero, is copied within the mythologies of all the countries of the world. The origin of all myths, the model on which heroes are based...calling him such would not be an exaggeration.
    More or less, the heroes of various myths are derived from Gilgamesh's legend. As such, Gilgamesh possesses the prototypes of the Noble Phantasms that heroes carry... As one who possesses an near infinite number of Noble Phantasms, it should be impossible for an average hero to cross swords with him.

    Especially the unremarkable runt that is Ur-Nungal.

    Manungal
    The daughter of Ereshkigal, Goddess of the Underworld and judge of the dead. These two share a name and destiny. But Ur-Nungal does not know this.


    Scrapped Noble Phantasms

    Armament of Babylon
    Treasure of the Capital


    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Army
    Rank: C~A
    Range: -
    Max Targets: -

    Simply put, the combined military power of the king and soldiers of Uruk under the reign of Berserker. Berserker inherited the legacy that was the treasury of Babylon. Due to her treasury not being as grand as that of her fathers, the maximum rank has decreased somewhat. As a results of the diminished wealth, the weaponry that Berserker can use is reduced and so combines it with the might of the forces of her city as if they are fighting for her. Spear will appear behind her and fling themselves towards the enemy, swords materialise on the ground and around a target at close range to thrust forward and shields are conjured forth to protect Berserker.

    Due to her temperament, she will likely fly off the handle and fire her weapons like arrows at her full force to rein down on her foes. However when using tactical assault of the gate she can fight more skilfully than expected. Her more tactical usage and lack of restraint with her reduced resources can actually make her more dangerous than the King of Heroes in certain circumstances.

    She still has direct access to the vault and is capable of summoning a single specific Noble Phantasm from the 'Gate' at a single time whether it be like the Gae Bolg or the Belt of Thor. Notably she does not possess Ea or the Chains of Heaven in her vault either.

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    I like it. I thought about doing one for Ur-Nungal before but never thought of enough to put down.
    The Curse of the Unrecorded is like one of the skills I made up for those obscure, non-existent people from history so that's cool. I feel like Dust of Uruk should have a penalty associated with it, but that's just me.
    My Esarhaddon would bully the shit out of her.

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    This Ur-Nungal sheet feels extremely similar to one Constructman (I think?) wrote up a while back. The inferiority complex with Gilgamesh, inferior version of the Gate Of Babylon and an NP based around degradation of civilization all remind me very much of that sheet. The main difference is that yours is a genderbend.

    It's not a bad sheet per-se, but I can't help but regard it as a little unoriginal.

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    Found the original post. It's about as similar as I remembered...

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    The smell of the lukewarm ocean and the chorus of cicadas RoydGolden's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Originality? Pffft.
    You're making a pun on how Gil is technically the only 'Original' hero, right? Because otherwise this post is completely inane.

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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    The axe is A+ because that's the rank of Hippolyta's cloth in SF.
    That doesn't mean her other NPs can't be downranked.

    She feels just a tad bit too powerful, IMO.

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