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    The Primordial Man









    Source: Elsword

    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: Beast
    True Name: Adam

    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: Christianity and Judaism


    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: EX
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: D
    NP: A++

    Likes: Humans, animals, nature
    Dislikes: Humans, snakes, the modern world
    Attribute: Earth
    Armament: None


    Class Skills:

    Territory Creation (-)
    As an existence predating the concept of human construction, Caster is incapable of creating his own territory.

    Item Construction (-)
    As an existence predating the concept of human construction, Caster is incapable of creating any items.

    Personal Skills:

    Consummated Shape (A)
    Prevents the body's collapse via hyper-rapid regeneration fueled by the magical energy of the earth. Half as powerful in urbanized areas, or places otherwise heavily tainted by the presence of mankind, which has degraded the earth from the Age of the Gods. As per its prerequisite of requiring contact with the earth, does not function if Caster is airborne.


    Natural Body (B)
    A perfect body possessed by the "template" of humankind, representing the peak physical condition which can be achieved by humans. As Caster was "made" rather than "born", his form is flawless by design. Rank-up to Strength. Side effect of preventing a change in physique regardless of the intake of calories.


    Nega Genesis (A)
    A conceptual bounded field formed around a Servant that is the antithesis of the accepted evolutionary course of humanity. Because Caster is an "origin of mankind" that opposes the correct continuity of human history, it is possible to resist attacks from Servants who have contributed to "proper history of man". Rejects Noble Phantasms used by Servants with the "Man" or "Star" attribute. Damage is heavily reduced. Examples of affected Servants include:

    • Heroes that accomplished great deeds as regular humans (Gaias Julius Ceaser, Sasaki Kojiro, Oda Nobunaga, etc.)
    • Inventors that contributed to changing humanity's destiny (Leonardo Da Vinci, Nikolas Tesla, etc.)
    • Founders and explorers (Francis Drake, Romulus, etc.)



    Noble Phantasm(s):

    EX Materia
    Primordial Coding


    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: B
    Range: -

    Max Targets: -


    Simply put, a Noble Phantasm that represents the quality of "the first golem in human history", classifying Caster as the root of an entire field of magecraft. Crystallizing the legend of the first man created from the dust of the earth, it amplifies Caster's body by conceptually rewriting the true course of human evolution.

    In reality, Caster was not the first golem to be created, nor was he the true origin of mankind; despite this fact, as a result of the overwhelming global belief in Caster's legend, and the misconception that he is the "first man", a transformative effect reminiscent of the Innocent Monster skill becomes possible. In essence, Caster is empowered by the beliefs of humanity, gaining strength beyond what was accessible to him in life.

    Because Caster is recognized as the oldest golem, the clay which formed his shape - already from the Age of the Gods to begin with - is enhance through added mystery and age, transforming him into an existence unreplicable through modern Golemancy. Thus, Caster is a golem borne from the strongest clay, crafted by "God himself". These qualities place him at the pinnacle of artificial life.

    A Noble Phantasm that amplifies Caster's Endurance to ranks unattainable by normal Servants, achieved through a surplus of age and mystery which amplifies his physical form to impossible levels. Caster's Endurance parameter is raised to EX rank and cannot be lowered. Additionally, as per his nature as an "inhuman existence", there no longer exist any vital organs required to survive. Does not grant protection from damage of any kind other than physical.




    Ain Soph Aur
    Regression
    to the Garden of Zero

    Type: Anti-Army, Anti-Human
    Rank: A++

    Range: ~

    Max Targets: 200

    A recreation of the genetic memory of paradise in the form of a pseudo-reality marble that projects itself atop the world.

    It is the purest expression of “Eden” in physical form, made possible by the collective dreams of mankind that subconsciously yearn for the same image. Because it is a “wish” that exists not only in Caster’s mind, but also within the deepest subconscious of mankind, it is possible to manifest “paradise” within the world without disrupting the texture of the Age of Man, as it is the image ascribed to the abstract longing for one’s own utopia.

    A bounded field constructed “within the world” yet isolated from it, taking the form of an enormous mass of plant life, bramble and roots in the sky. It is best described as a “satellite” constructed from the visualization of “Eden” - though the form it takes is hardly comparable to the once-real Gardens, it is nonetheless a memory that every human will recognize as paradise. Projection is near-immediate, with Caster being able to grow Eden at any point in the sky should he so will it.

    The primary effect of Ain Soph Aur is an attack which targets the “forward momentum of humanity’s evolution”. In this sense, it is the crystallization of Caster’s own wish to return to the past of nothingness and reset humanity. The satellite, once properly positioned, releases a beam of energy on the scale of an Anti-Army attack. Though the actual damage dealt is “zero”, the beam carries the quality of “regression”, such that everything it touches is reverted to its initial state of nothingness. An attack which rewinds life itself and erases the genesis of all targets caught in the blast. In other words, it is a Noble Phantasm that “continuously reduces the maximum HP of all targets to zero”. As a side effect, this quality negates all forms of healing or regeneration, as the maximum which could be healed to will still be zero.

    Because the Noble Phantasm only affects life, it is possible to defend against it with any form of defensive Noble Phantasm - so long as said Noble Phantasm is of a large enough scale to completely cover one from the beam. Though it is not an attack that instantly causes death, the speed of regression is typically too high to avoid being instantly disintegrated once struck by the beam. That said, targets that have strayed further away from humanity, be that through the possession of monstrous or divine blood, are affected at a slower rate, to the point that Servants which are barely recognizable as “human” - such as those closer to Magical Beasts like Gorgon - may outlast the duration of the attack with some percentage of “HP” remaining.

    Lore:

    The point of separation between humanity and Gaia.

    Caster’s true name is Adam, the primordial man. The quality of “the first human” is something added after the fact - to begin with, there were existences likened to “humans” prior to his emergence, though from the perspective of self-absorbed apes, he remains the root of the sinful idea of “humanity.”

    A golem-like creature that was at some point more closely linked to Gaia. The connection was severed when selfish desire manifested, and some subconscious separate from the Earth was born.

    One of the major catalysts for the decline of the Age of Gods.

    Personality:

    “He will save you. Because this is hell, he will return you to serene nothingness.”

    Assumes the role of a father-figure to all humans; the kind of parent that looks down on his children as ignorant and unaware of what’s good for them. Because he naturally knows best for mankind, he is able to dictate when it begins and when it will end. He is a conceited and arrogant man in a reserved, passive and dismissive sense, that treats it as a common fact that he is correct in all circumstances.

    His wish is fundamentally the “salvation of humanity.” Despite his self-assuredness, Caster feels nothing but guilt over the current course of mankind’s progression. The world of sin and death and pain is his creation, and thus, as a Heroic Spirit, it remains his duty to guide mankind to the only salvation that exists for them - void. Worthless apes can only be saved from misery if they cease to know life. It is because he loves those apes as his own children that he understands what is necessary - a return to the era where “humans” did not exist separate from the world.

    ...Of course, the only thing Caster really wants is to be forgiven. Because he feels guilty, he likewise feels the need to become a “hero” for mankind, seeing no other way to gain their forgiveness. Because he fears being scorned, he pushes humans away as he continues to try to “save” them.

    Beneath the surface is a boiling mantle of rage towards the disobedient. “Why won’t you understand? Why won’t you conform?! Just let me save you, foolish ape…!”. He gets like this when things don’t go his way.

    Relationships:

    Master: Calmly educates them on all matters of which they are ignorant of. In the first place, how could he trust them to win the Grail War? All decisions should be left to the one who knows best. Discourages attachment to modern ideas. Does not often indulge idle conversation, but he is more than willing to explain things at you.

    Avicebron/Goetia: “This child has the right idea. Still, I would rather do it myself.”

    Enkidu: There’s some kind of pained look of self-reflection…

    Tiamat: There’s some kind of discomforted look of insecurity…

    Pioneers of the Stars: “Simply put, you need to slow down.”

    Frankenstein’s monster: There’s some kind of depressing look of recognition…




    Creator Notes:

    -Approach here was to make Adam a significant, powerful Servant without making him too powerful to be dealt with in a traditional Grail War. He gains a lot of his strength from a surplus of age and mystery, but he hasn’t got many feats to justify him being the second coming of Gilgamesh.

    -I also kind of wrote him as if he would be some sort of Singularity villain, which might come across in him feeling sort of “big bad”-ish.

    -Kitwise, the idea is for an unorthodox “Caster” who actually functions as his own Golem - he’s pretty much a hypertank that will take very little damage from most regular attacks, and heal rapidly from those that deal any significant injuries. His Nega-Genesis will greatly weaken certain Noble Phantasms to the point that he’ll be able to just take them head-on, and Ain Soph Aur is his big beamu trump card that he brings out to put the nail on the coffin. Beyond that, he pretty much fights as you’d expect a pre-civilization existence to - with his bare hands, all clay-fu like.

    -I'm super self conscious but also badly want to be punished for all my abhorrent creations


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    Adam: I feel like you could've gone the extra mile and outright made this guy a Beast, given he hits most of the relevant criteria already (uber-powerful NPs, wish to destroy humanity "for their own good", a "Nega-" Skill, etc). The evil he represents could be "Regret" (since his wish to "save" humanity is born out of a desire to be forgiven for his sins), which was already brought up as a possible Beast candidate by King Hassan.

    Aside from that, a very cool sheet overall. Turning the Garden of Eden into an organic orbital satellite laser is something I absolutely never would've dreamt up, but it's wonderfully creative and I love it. Also, as someone who tried to write up a "final boss Adam" way back in the old thread, I appreciate you pulled off the idea in a far more interesting way than mine (which was pretty much a Gil expy).

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    Haaaah, I entirely forgot that the Beast class was a thing (never mind me using one of their skills). It didn't cross my mind, since my thought process was mostly to make Adam able to fit in a regular war - but it totally fits...!

    I'm really glad Ain Soph Aur came out alright. I actually really enjoyed writing out the description, not to mention putting every other word in quotation marks like the true weirdo I am. But I was a bit concerned with it not being balanced enough. Weirdly, it's the kind of ability that could one-shot Heracles, God Hand and all, but gets blocked Rho Aias, for example.

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    You could always edit in 'Beast' as an alternative class maybe.
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    Interesting Berserker. He must be a bitch on the Master. No way my Saber could stand against that. Just had to be a saint.

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    Saint cristopher: i love how you take his legend into some gravitational noble phantasm, also how you make him as werewolves as symbolizing people in athena and Europe in general seeing african as beast and slave.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sir kay fans View Post
    also how you make him as werewolves as symbolizing people in athena and Europe in general seeing african as beast and slave.
    I didn't do that. It's part of his myth. If I had done that I would have mentioned it.

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    With this hand I will make thee whole.
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    I take up thy Mantle:

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    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: Caster
    True Name: Satsuki Yumizuka
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: Tsukihime
    Faceclaim
    Parameters:


    STR: B-
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: A
    LCK: A
    NP: EX

    Height: 161 cm
    Weight: 45 kg
    Likes: Shiki Tohno
    Dislikes: Arcueid Brunestud, Ciel
    Talent: Stalking
    Natural Enemy: Shiki Tohno
    Attribute: Earth
    Armament: Her fists
    Catalyst: NA

    Class Skills:
    Spoiler:
    Presence Concealment
    Rank: C
    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. The rank of Presence Concealment drops considerably when preparing to attack.

    Personal Skills:
    Spoiler:
    Mystic Eyes
    Rank: B
    Assassin has the Mystic Eyes of Enchantment, the common eyes belonging to vampires which allow for high level hypnosis. Under the Noble Color’s system these Mystic Eyes are ranked Gold.

    Blood Sucking
    Rank: EX
    Being a true Vampire and not simply the incorrect perception of a human as one gives Assassin the ultimate rank in blood sucking. The full amount of energy drained from the target is given to Assassin as mana and during the process her own black blood will infect the target burning them from the inside out. If the target is weak and has little Od or small magical circuits they will become a familiar known as ‘The Dead’ which will go on to absorb mana from the living and return half of it to Assassin. In rare cases the bitten will become a Ghoul able to ‘survive’ thanks to powerful Od or Magic Circuits only appearing to be completely dead, in this case they gestate inside their own body for years in a grave until they return as a savage beast feeding on the living to become whole once more. After years of this behavior they will become a full fledged vampire subservient to their sire. In even rarer cases, as was the case with Assassin herself, the victim can skip the process of becoming a Ghoul and immediately become a Dead Apostle.

    Monstrous Strength
    Rank: C
    Due to her lack of mystery this skill's rank is low, however as a vampire she can call upon strength beyond the limits of humanity.

    Noble Phantasm(s):
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    Depletion Garden
    Only I Can Shine Here

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: EX
    Range: 30-60
    Max Targets: 50
    A reality marble that has existed within Assassin since her days as a human Depletion Garden is the ultimate anti mana Noble Phantasm. When activated Assassin and those around her are drawn into a garden of dead trees and plants, the remnants of a world filled with hope and life, and in the Garden all mana is drained and dissipated away from the garden leaving Assassin as the only being able to use mana. This Noble Phantasm is particularly deadly against Servants as they are beings of pure mana who are fundamentally broken down in the Garden. A servant with Magic Resistance at Rank B can resist Depletion Garden but they will still feel the effects and be drained of mana slowly. In addition all Noble Phantasms that generate external energy in their use are unable to be activated.

    Lore:
    Spoiler:
    Once upon a time Satsuki Yumizuka was just a high schooler. She had friends and a family and a good life. The only thing that could be said to be special about her is her love from a distance for the man known as Shiki Tohno. However these carefree days were soon destroyed as she was attacked and turned by the vampire SHIKI. For most people being turned would be the end, either turning them into one of ‘The Dead’ or a Ghoul for many years, however Satsuki was the realest of the rare the one in a million case of immediately becoming a Dead Apostle after being turned. In an instant Satsuki went from being a normal high school student to a being that could become a Dead Apostle Ancestor given even the smallest chance. Thankfully for the world she was turned in a city where three of the few people capable and desiring to kill her were. And so in some worlds she was presumably killed by the Church Executioner Ciel or the True Ancestor Arcueid and in others she was killed by the one she loved Shiki Tohno. There are tales of a world where she lived and Shiki came to love her as well but if it exists it is nearly impossible to find.

    Personality:
    Spoiler:
    Satsuki was a friendly if quiet girl that was beloved by her peers. She would often put herself down thinking herself to be less than her peers. After becoming a vampire she became more out going, playful, and murderous having fun killing her victims slowly and gaslighting her beloved Shiki to corner him. Even though her murderous urges as a vampire though the kind girl she once was can occasionally shine through and hopes for death and release from her altered state of life.

    Relationships:
    Spoiler:
    Shiki Ryougi
    “Something about her feels familiar. I feel both attracted to and scared of her.”
    “This creature feels wrong, keep her away from me.”

    Vlad III(Berserker)
    “So this guy is my ‘ancestor’? Please treat me well Vampire Senpai!”
    “So you wish to learn the under the tutelage of Dracula? Very well watch and learn young one!”

    Creator Notes:
    So I know little to nothing about Tsukihime but Statsuki seemed like a cool character. A person who skipped decades of working up the vampire ranks to immediately become on the level of a Dead Apostle. So here’s the sheet.
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    Not dead yet boys

    “I didn't betray a saint. Nor a messias. Nor a god. I betrayed humans, I betrayed my whole people"

    Character Image/Faceclaim:
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    Source: Historical fact


    Class: Berserker
    True Name: António Soares
    Alignment: Neutral Good / Chaotic Mad
    Place of Origin: Brazil


    Parameters:


    STR: C~A-
    END: D~B
    AGI: C~B-
    MGI: E~D
    LCK: E~D
    NP: C++


    Likes: (When sane) Food, especially fruits
    Dislikes: (When sane) Starving
    Talent: Survival skills
    Natural Enemy: Leaders, especially Zumbi
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Human, male
    Armament: Bare hands
    Catalyst: The knife that killed his leader


    Skills
    Class Skills:

    Madness enhancement E~A
    This berserker wasn't mad at the beginning, he became so by the
    hate
    desires
    . The more
    concentrated hate
    fanatical desires
    the summoning master and the land have, the higher this skill.
    This can greatly increase his parameters, at the cost of his sanity.
    "That was the best decision. That was the best decision. That was the best decision. That was the best decision. That was the best decision..."


    Personal Skills:

    Capoeira C
    An unorthodox fighting style created by Brazilian slaves, in the colonial ages. It originated from African culture but was adapted by slaves to deceive their masters, what created a very unique style, one that will confuse even heroes. It includes Eye of the Mind (True) at E rank and an effect similar to Sense of Subtle Elegance , both sealed if the Madness Enhancement is higter than D- rank.
    "He taught this to us as a simbol of our fight. Because as the capoeira, we were free and pure, until we had to taint ourselves to survive"

    Affections Towards the Beyond - ~ C-
    The feelings towards those meaningful days, when he had brothers and a purpose in life, support his struggle to survive.
    Berserker will reject this skill when sane, effectively sealing it. However, the more insane he becomes, the more these feelings arise.
    "I think you misundertood me, master, I have no regrets, nor feelings left for the one that I betrayed. I made the right choice. Definitelly the right choice. Certainly."

    Calm and collected (False) B- ~ E-
    The ability to supress his own emotions and follow the most optimal path. With this skill some mental effects - such as impatience and uncertainty - can be almost completelly blocked, but 'external' influences - such as confusion - will still have effect. Is almost sealead with the loss of sanity.
    "Yes, I loved him, as a brother and leader. Yes, it was hard to make that decision. And yes, I would do it again."


    Lore
    "Since I am aware, I wanted a purpose in life.
    I was just another slave. Another nobody that lived without thinking.
    Then I heard stories, about a great leader that freed many slaves and protected then from the white people's cruelty.
    At first I thought that he would soon be killed. I knew that no one can win against the white men.
    But the stories continued. Day after day, I heard everyone talking about this leader. A man above men, the leader of liberty, the immortal spectre, king of Palmares.
    Before I knew, thoughts about him filled my mind.
    Is he really immortal? He must be a giant, with the strength of ten men!
    He must be an old, wise man! He must be a beautiful, kind king...
    How is the fight going, I wonder... Maybe he is ploting to free all slaves?!
    For the first time in my life, I was thinking about something other than my own survival.
    Then I heard
    Palmares was destroyed
    A switch fliped inside me.
    That same night, I escaped.
    Wandering around the night, a voice echoed through the mountains.
    'Are you another fugitive?' said the voice coming from the darkness.
    'Y-yes, I... I want to meet Zumbi'
    When the man revealled himself, I knew.
    He wasn't a giant, nor a old nor beautiful man, but his aura was different...
    As if the title of 'champion' surrounded his body.
    I joined his group. Palmares really was destroyed, but Zumbi escaped with a few warriors and was planning to restart the fight.
    For the first time, I had a purpose.
    For the first time, I had brothers.
    Even after that terrible defeat, everyone was confident that Zumbi would lead us to victory.
    My life finally had color. My mind finally had hope. I devoted everything I had to my brothers and my leader.
    My leader... he was dazzling as a big water fountain in the desert. I would follow him to the depths of hell, or the heights of heaven.
    Then I saw the first defeat
    Many brothers died, but I know that nothing is as easy as we want
    Then the second defeat came
    I saw one of my closest brothers die in agony. But it's ok, we still have our champion
    Then the third defeat came

    We don't laugh at the fire anymore. But our fight spirit will never fail.
    Then the fourth defeat came

    Our group is now small. The screams of my sworn brothers terrorize me in my dreams.
    Then the XX defeat came
    I don't know how many died. Many other fugitives joined, but very few survived. We are now just a small bunch. But Zumbi is still here.
    Yes, while he is here, we can...
    While he is here...
    While he is here...
    We will die
    We will die while he is here
    I have to stop it
    I have to avenge my brothers
    Yes, avenge then. All that is his fault
    His fault
    Yes. Yes. Yes.
    It's all his fault
    That suffering
    That death
    That war
    If he represents the slaves'
    anger against slavery
    desire for freedom
    ,
    I will represent everyone's
    hate against slaves
    desire for peace

    I will take this knife and finish the job.



    Personality
    Friendly, naive and somewhat fatherly. He holds his allies more dearly than his own life.
    He is not opposed to violence, but will never hurt a sworn ally. He's also very shy, and won't reject any order.
    "Don't do that, master! It's dangerous! Let me handle the dangerous things!"
    He doesn't show any remorse for what he did,
    But deep down, there certainly is regret.
    What is more evident when he's insane.
    Berserker also don't care about his sanity, then if the madness enchancement reaches rank D- he lose his mind, and like a common berserker he won't be able to speak or think.
    However, even so, his shy and fatherly nature won't change. Berserker will only look like his class if the master order so, otherwise he will only follow silently and care for his allies from the corner.
    He normally wouldn't be able to join the throne of heroes, but as he absorbed the
    hate
    desire
    of many, his spirit origin was strong enough to become a servant, even if he depends on the madness enhancement to be actually useful in battle.
    His desire for the grail is "to talk with his revered leader one last time".



    NPs
    Fake warrior
    Fake Spectre
    "I made the right choice. I made the right choice. I..."
    Type: self, always active
    Rank: D-

    The proof that he is the traitor of his people.
    His skin is covered in numerous scars.
    Scars everywhere, over all his body. He doesn't particularly care about his appearance, though.
    Every scar holds a 'life drain' spell, and he can 'drain the life' of someone to cure himself by 'consuming' one scar. He's actually draining the mana, like any other servant could do to sustain thenselves, but with this he can drain other servants and even the mana in the air with a single touch.
    But it's not all that efficient, as he would need to activate this many times to the enemy servant actually feel it, and the uses are limitated.


    Hate
    Fall of the Palmares
    "He had to die"
    Type: Anti-army
    Rank: C++

    hate
    Desire
    is what created his reason
    What made his will
    What destroyed Palmares
    A massive cluster of
    hate
    desire
    .
    All that
    hate
    desire
    is chained inside his body, if unleashed, it can be very powerfull.
    When activated, the mana in front of him will burn instantly, what would look like a directional explosion that desintegrates everything in its path. If any living being is hit, its Od will be completely converted to a curse that rapidly corrodes the brain. The target will gradually lose sanity until death. It is possible to completely resist the effect with a medium-high level of magic or curse resistance, it's also possible to simply evade the explosion.
    The magical energy cost is tremendous, so much that he can completely disappear if not imediatelly fueled with more.
    This should be used only as final trump card.



    Creator Notes: Eh, not my best sheet, but I think it's ok. There is almost no information about this guy, so I took the liberty to create some things. I adivise reading my Zumbi sheet too.
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    Mused on this as a possible RP character for awhile, but in the end, I don't think she's quite where I am right now so might as well commit her to posterity.

    Servant:
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    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    True Name: Abraham Van Helsing

    Gender: Female
    Height: 160 cm/5’3”
    Weight: 58 kg/130 lbs
    Blood Type: B
    Birthday: 12/31/1869

    Likes: Research, children, travel
    Dislikes: Swimming, animals, hot days
    Talents: Studying, public speaking
    Natural Enemy: Vlad III
    Image Colour: Black

    Parameters:
    Strength: C+
    Endurance: C+
    Agility: B
    Mana: C
    Luck: D
    Noble Phantasm: A




    “This strange world is a web of misery, woe, and trouble.
    But I assure you, gentlemen, ladies, children of all ages!
    All may be unraveled with but the lightest touch of truth!
    And then, cocoa and schnapps for all!”

    Background:
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    A Dutch professor born in the 1800s, Abraham Van Helsing was an individual of many talents, truly larger than life. Athletic and an acclaimed polymath, expressing a vitality in both mind and body, Van Helsing’s experience was such that the professor was called on to cover the most vexing, difficult medical mysteries of their time.

    That was how Van Helsing came to be wrapped up in the mysterious illnesses of one Lucy Westenra and Mina Murray, two young Englishwomen who had fallen ill with a wasting disease not long after Mina’s suitor, a kind-hearted young solicitor named Jonathan Harker, began to do business with a certain Transylvanian count now feared across the world. The case was a mystery, as Mina was little more than a homebody and a gentle, intelligent but withdrawn schoolteacher, unlikely to have contracted such a rare ailment.

    Van Helsing was a leading force in the identification and extermination of the infamous and powerful bloodsucker, working together with Jonathan and his friends Quincy Morris, John Steward, and Arthur Holmwood. It was the professor who realized what had befallen the two girls, who elaborated to Jonathan and his friends what lie beneath the thin veil of civilization, and who exposed the genial count for the monster he was. Dracula has drained the two women of blood, beginning a process that would kill, and then convert the two women, changing them into vampiric familiars under his thrall.

    Van Helsing did not merely lead the men to battle, but took an active role in every step of the hunt, identifying real estate purchased by the count and exposing a scheme to create makeshift lairs by shipping Transylvanian soil and corrupting multiple people into dead whom Harker and his band slayed first with Van Helsing’s help.

    Regrettably, the professor was unable to save Lucy, who was already too far gone and attempted to kill her friends and fiancč. Perhaps it was guilt for that failure that led Van Helsing to redouble their efforts for Mina. When blood transfusions from Van Helsing and the young man failed to keep the advancement of Dracula’s impure blood at bay, Van Helsing protected Mina’s crumbling sanity and grip on her humanity through repeated hypnosis, forgoing sleep to care for and protect the fragile schoolteacher from sunset to sunrise.

    In the end, the troupe was successful in eliminating the fonts of Dracula’s power, chasing him across Europe and hunting the vampire and his minion s to extinction. Morris would lose his life in the final battle, but Van Helsing saved the young Mina from losing her very soul, and remained a family friend of Jonathan and Mina as they married and left behind a happy, god-fearing family, raising their son Quincy (named after their fallen friend) in warmth and security.


    Personality:
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    In reality, it is not as though Abraham Van Helsing somehow masqueraded as a man, nor that history merely forgot her true name or any other convenient excuse to explain the cheerful, loud woman who calls herself Archer. Rather, the truth is that the servant who answered the call for Abraham Van Helsing is not the man himself, but the woman who carried on his name after he lost his life fighting Dracula and protecting her - Archer is Mina Murray, the quiet teacher whose ego and identity wasted away under Dracula’s curse.

    The truth was not so convenient as to have her curse vanish with Dracula’s passing, for all the damage to her psyche and the degradation of her mental well-being to simply fade to dust like her sire’s remains. Mina Murray as an individual had been all but wiped away, a blank slate whose morals and personality had nearly been completely eliminated over the months of her companions’ adventures protecting her. There was not enough of her to return to teaching, much less to make a normal life with Jonathan.

    The only way she could continue to function with neither “Mina” nor “Dracul’s wife” as a template for her personality was to adopt the only other one left to her - that of the paternal, caring professor who had sat up with her each painful night as more of her was cast into the flames. She became Van Helsing, taking up his name and hunting monsters under his mantle, creating the legend for which the professor would later be known.

    The Abraham Van Helsing who left his mark on her mind was a brilliant man, exceptional in both thought and purpose, and Mina endeavors to live up to that shining character at all times. She will not compromise with an evil Master or servant, becoming their implacable enemy even at the expense of her own life, and would - with extreme reluctance - resort to minimal bloodsucking if needed to protect others and resolve the incident caused by a transgressor’s presence and survival. For a master unfamiliar with the ways of war or investigation, Archer is a kindly mentor, and for a variety of reasons she has a particular soft spot for the weak or vulnerable, whether they be her master, a servant, or individuals unaffiliated with either camp.

    As an individual, Archer is brave and forthright, outgoing and enthusiastic, and assured others at all times that everything can be understood and resolved. She is cunning and wise, creative and imaginative, and every bit the mystery-solving investigator and scholar that Van Helsing’s later believers expect of the man famed as the world’s most famous “vampire hunter.”

    ...Because if she was not those things, if she was not her mentor and spiritual father, what would she even have left? Underneath the artifice, devoid of dressing and custom and pretense…

    Who am I, really?

    That question frightens what remains of Mina Murray to her very core, and she prays with what remains of her heart that she never needs to confront what still lies within her.


    Armaments:

    Archer generally carries a wide assortment of tools on her person to aid in both investigation and combat, including vials of potions and salves, wooden stakes, various holy symbols, a silver knife, poisons, magnifying and identifying tools, and other odds and ends. However, as Archer, her primary tools are two heavy Dutch flintlock pistols, enchanted with various blessings.

    Class Abilities:
    Independent Action
    Rank: C+
    The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the magical energy supply from one's Master; in essence, an ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master. At this rank, it is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for one day without a Master. However, by turning to the blood of others for prana, Archer can reluctantly extend this duration considerably...

    Magic Resistance
    Rank: C-
    Cancels spells with a chant below two verses. However, she cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. However, due to her association with the legend of Dracula, it is completely unable to cope with sacraments of the Church.

    Personal Skills:
    Mystery Slayer
    Rank: C++
    Recognition of being one of the premier mystery slayers of her time, won by virtue of playing a key role in slaying the most famous vampire in the world, and reinforced by the belief of others that she had played other such unrecorded roles in history. As the world’s most famous self-proclaimed “Vampire Killer,” Archer’s attacks and traps are engraved with a powerful “anti-mystery” effect that increases the damage the closer her opponent is to a monster or Phantasmal Kind. In particular, against vampires, this authority effect is nearly absolute.

    Medical Techniques
    Rank: B
    Modern medicine that surpasses the medical technology of those times (in which transmission proliferated) by a few degrees. Though most famous as a vampire slayer, Archer was first and foremost a scholar famed for her medical knowledge, and was well-known in academic circles at her height. At this rank, Archer is capable of diagnosing and treating even obscure, esoteric injuries, afflictions, or wounds with high proficiency and can create potent potions and salves for that purpose. Combined with Subversive Activities, this may even be used to lace traps or attacks with sedative agents.

    Natural Insight
    Rank: A
    The ability to grasp the essence of things. Perceptive eyes for observation that will not overlook any information. Even if her adversary is a Servant or a vampire capable of concealing the truth by ma gic or other underhanded means, there is a high chance Archer can see through it or at least divine some clue as to the underlying secret, no matter how absurd or against the common sense of everyday life. Should a Noble Phantasm be involved, however, a luck check is required.

    Subversive Activities
    Rank: B
    The talent to reduce the enemy forces in the preliminary stages before going into battle. An expert of traps. However, the higher the ranking of this Skill, the more one's spiritual status as a hero declines. Rather than rush to one’s death, Archer advocated patient, methodical elimination of the vampire’s lairs, familiars, and resources prior to engagement with a superior foe, even as her allies’ time ran perilously short. At this rank, whether through trickery, tools, or planning, up to 30% of an opponent’s forces may be disabled before the enemy engages. Combined with Medical Techniques, this may even be used to lace traps or attacks with sedative agents.

    Noble Phantasm:
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    Legend of Dracula - The Succession of Blood
    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    An ability that reproduces the legend of Dracula, imposed on Mina Murray after her blood was sucked by the vampire whose tale would later be distorted, fictionalized, and conflated with that of Vlad III by a certain author. Its usage allows Archer to alter her aspect to become the blood-sucking monster she was converted into, rather than the woman who survived with her humanity intact - or rather, in this case, it reveals her true nature as one who was converted into a bloodsucker yet managed to cling to her humanity until her death.

    The only thing that allowed her to remain ‘Mina Murray’ after the count sucked the last drops of her blood as a human was the hypnosis of Van Helsing, who at sunrise and sundown worked to bolster and reinforce her ego with hypnotism, religious rites, and other protections. It is only through this hypnosis that Archer is able to remain Abraham Van Helsing - and by extension, to remain Mina Murray - and the release of those fetters immediately herald her transformation into a powerful monster only somewhat behind her sire. She will resist invocation of this Noble Phantasm with everything she has and will not activate it except under extreme duress or coercion, even if it means her death.

    Rather than a hidden ‘Dead Apostle,’ it is the ‘vampire Dracula’ whose fiction colours and overwrites the nature of this curse. Upon transforming, her normal Skills are sealed. She gains fangs and claws and her attire becomes little more than shadows with mass, rich in magical energy. In this form, Archer receives a rank up to all parameters other than Luck, greatly increasing her strength and speed, and her body is imbued with a curse of restoration not unlike a true Dead Apostle, slowly regenerating from harm. Her personality is also greatly altered against her will, growing capricious, lascivious and cruel, and delighting in the power and freedom from morality and constraint that her new form represents.

    In place of her normal Personal Skills, Archer gains the following personal skills for as long as she is transformed:

    Monstrous Strength
    Rank: A
    A Skill that temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. The longer this skill is active, the further Archer’s form departs from the human body she was blessed with.

    Shapeshift
    Rank: B
    A Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change and one of the powers of a vampire. It is possible to change her form into mist, or even countless bats, and transformation of her body to obtain claws or wings may be easily initiated. Extremely useful in close-range combat, but little effectiveness against wide-ranging attacks.

    Blood Sucking
    Rank: B
    The act of absorbing another's blood to replenish their own health and physical and/or magical strength and one of the powers of a vampire. As the Rank raises, the power of absorption increase. At this rank, Archer benefits from absorption and recovery of physical strength and may be able to apply the detrimental status effect of Seduction (Confusion). This effect has a moderate chance of being applied and affects both men and women.

    Unlike Vlad III, Archer is able to situationally deactivate this Noble Phantasm once it has been invoked - but only at sunrise, and sunset, the times the curse is in a transitory state and the times she associates with her mentor’s diligent treatment and tender care. In such moments, if supported by another, she can push back against the curse, but it is difficult if not impossible for her to resist alone. After all, to the end, Mina Murray was never…….. She could never…….
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    Helsing/Mina: What an amazing sheet. The concept of a Mina who clung to sanity by taking on the identity and role of her savior is fascinating and heartwrenching at the same time.

    I have to question the logic behind her Lawful Evil Alignment though. From her personality section it sounds like she's a basically good person as long as her vampiric transformation isn't active, so wouldn't Lawful Good make more sense? Even Apocrypha Vlad is only Lawful Neutral, so it feels seriously weird for Helsing/Mina to have a worse Alignment than her archenemy. Other than that minor critique, this is a top-notch sheet.

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    Wonderful idea, and I wish there was more regarding relationships, especially with Apo Vlad and any other known vampire killer. Also Dantes, because he killed Roa in Fate worlds.
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    @Royd:
    Mm, fair point. It was intended to be somewhat how she views herself - not as someone good but as something that has to be covered up by the professorial persona. Neutral might fit more than evil since that’s a good point re: Vlad. But she has fundamentally a terrible self image of herself.

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    Complicated. She knows Vlad isn’t the same vampire whose story got conflated with him, and internally sympathizes with his curse but externally he’d be one person that strains the Helsing persona and draws more of her own self out, so she’d be quite awkward around him compared to usual artificial gregariousness.

    Other vampire killers are kouhais and to be mentored/unintentionally talked down to. She’s probably a bit of a know it all in such situations and slips too easy into lecturing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sunny View Post
    @Royd:
    Mm, fair point. It was intended to be somewhat how she views herself - not as someone good but as something that has to be covered up by the professorial persona. Neutral might fit more than evil since that’s a good point re: Vlad. But she has fundamentally a terrible self image of herself.
    Ah, that makes sense. Her Alignment reflecting how she perceives herself isn't something I considered. Alignments in TM are usually hella' arbitrary anyway so it's not a big deal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sunny View Post
    @Royd:
    Mm, fair point. It was intended to be somewhat how she views herself - not as someone good but as something that has to be covered up by the professorial persona. Neutral might fit more than evil since that’s a good point re: Vlad. But she has fundamentally a terrible self image of herself.

    @Gau:

    Complicated. She knows Vlad isn’t the same vampire whose story got conflated with him, and internally sympathizes with his curse but externally he’d be one person that strains the Helsing persona and draws more of her own self out, so she’d be quite awkward around him compared to usual artificial gregariousness.

    Other vampire killers are kouhais and to be mentored/unintentionally talked down to. She’s probably a bit of a know it all in such situations and slips too easy into lecturing.
    You know what would really be a logic bomb for this Hellsing Servant? If somehow in a crossover event with JJBA, she met Jonathan Joestar and/or Will Zeppeli. Just an idle thought, especially since I did create a sheet for the two of them in the Modern Fiction Servant thread.
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    So... Anything about my berserker? I want to know If I'm rusty
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    Quote Originally Posted by Criarino View Post
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    He's decent. Personality and especially lore are very well fleshed out. But he's a little boring mechanically with how closely he hews to Zumbi. It's obviously on purpose and makes sense thematically given the contrast between them is basically the whole point of his character, but for someone whose already seen your old Zumbi profile (which you even recommend it to be read as a companion-piece to), this one comes off as a bit stale and uninspired by comparison.

    Also, for his second Skill I think Caligula's Glory Of The Past would fit better to represent his memories of fighting alongside Zumbi than Affection Towards The Beyond, particularly when it's much less clear what the latter even does.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    He's decent. Personality and especially lore are very well fleshed out. But he's a little boring mechanically with how closely he hews to Zumbi. It's obviously on purpose and makes sense thematically given the contrast between them is basically the whole point of his character, but for someone whose already seen your old Zumbi profile (which you even recommend it to be read as a companion-piece to), this one comes off as a bit stale and uninspired by comparison.

    Also, for his second Skill I think Caligula's Glory Of The Past would fit better to represent his memories of fighting alongside Zumbi than Affection Towards The Beyond, particularly when it's much less clear what the latter even does.
    Then I really am rusty... With Zumbi I had a lot of reference material, lots of stories and legends, but all I could find about this guy is "a man called António betrayed Zumbi stabbing him with a knife and vanished from the face of earth" then I had to create everything from zero. I though It would be cool, but in the end, as you said, It came out uninspired.
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    Helsing: I mean, 0/10 because her name isn't "Abra-hime van Helsing"

    But, seriously; I very much enjoy how she isn't at all "herself" in any strictly defined way - she's taken both the identitiy of Helsing and, through her Noble Phantasm, that of "Dracula" as well. Seems like a really cool character conflict.



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    I'm thinking of trying my hand at creating another Beast. Does anyone have any idea which Evil of Humanity I should base it off of? I'm kinda thinking of going for Stagnation.
    Oooh, maybe something like "Ecstacy" - the desire to wipe away human society and revert humanity to mindless apes with absolute freedom to do anything they please. Basically, max anarchy.

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