Add this to the rules on the op, it's a good one.Originally Posted by Kyte
Add this to the rules on the op, it's a good one.
Sorry, didnt realize it was all in bold for some reason.
What to do... I don't want to add a fic that goes straight to the Bad Fics dump....
Not to mention it's still missing a summary.
E: Nvm I just missed it in the mess that is the post.
Last edited by Kyte; November 19th, 2014 at 10:41 PM.
Sorry, Trying to organize that shit, even if its bad atleast it should be acknowledged that its bad so other can just skip it
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Okay, You got me, I laughed
+1 to Saber Eats Lancer
How is that fic can be considered to have good writing? There are so much grammatical mistake and misspelling that makes me wince while reading it and ended up just skimming through the rest of it. It's utter garbage wanking Shirou with no amount of effort to actually use the lore from either series except for the sake of misinterpreting it for the sake of wanking. Horrible characterization being justified with AU LOL, and frankly the whole exposition and justification throughout the fics made gabriel blessing appear concise.
As far as Aria of Fate goes, the author can draw, he should stick to that and have someone else write, that's all I'm gonna say about it. The narrative style goes all over the place, and it suffers the whole "show, don't tell" in the way it pretty much spoon-feed the reader with soliloquy of Shirou's thought before he went and do the action, making you pretty much always have to read something that is already implicitly written last sentence again and again.
Last edited by arsdraconis; November 20th, 2014 at 12:43 AM.
It's:
1) Not dry.
2) Diverges from canon.
On a scale of blessing to good, it's probably somewhere in the 50th percentile.
NOPE.
That fic is like the same stuff that GB writes. It's filled with the usual and same elements from his other stories. GB may have ruined fanfiction.... Damn.
The "Shirou" in this fic make me cringe so hard.
Last edited by Renko; November 20th, 2014 at 12:44 AM.
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The latest chapter had the most idiotic moment.
"Look I'm not King Arthur. If I was King Arthur, wouldn't I have Caliburn?"
"Do you have Caliburn?"
"Well of course I have Caliburn."
"!!!"
"D'oh!"
Author induced stupidity for . . . I think humor? It kinda looked like humor, if maybe you squint really really hard.
Rather than humor, that just deserves a facepalm.
Wh-wh-...what?
I feel stupider just reading this than the King Arthur did admitting to having Caliburn.
People actually READ this???
(Signature credit to TheSpy in his giveaway store thread. He does avatars too)
Fate/Reach Out (Persona 4 crossover)
Precursors of Purity (Ni no Kuni crossover; two-shot)
1200+ reviews and counting in FF.net. That counts as something right? #notreally
Over the Keel Mountains, Meets an ape with human speech. The ape asks, "What clings to you? Bear it—you cannot. Accept it—you cannot. But hidden—it is from you. Recite its name."
Wow, I don't even have that many reviews in total for all of my stuff put together. I need to make crappier stuff.
Localizationing stuff
You and me both, Arashi.
I've been thinking about a NarutoxHP crossover.
My tentative summary:
"Narto is reborn inot the HPverse, and helps Harry defats Voldimort with jutsus while finding true love. Dark!Powerful!Harry, Girl!Naruto."
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
+1 would read
Localizationing stuff
You hear that noise?
No, not those feeble squeals of abandoned artistic integrity. The cheers. The applause.
That's the sound of success. Savor it, love it. Make it the beat of your soul. Quality is democratic, son; if the people love it, then all is good.
Well, I wanted to be a quality writer who didn't pan to the masses and instead write what I love and cherish, so I best get used to the sound of echoed water droplets and crickets.
Ah well. Those fools don't know what they're missing. ^_^
(Signature credit to TheSpy in his giveaway store thread. He does avatars too)
Fate/Reach Out (Persona 4 crossover)
Precursors of Purity (Ni no Kuni crossover; two-shot)
You forgot the fact that they castrate the "drak sercoror Ron and haev a 3sum wit Drago Malfoi"
Honestly if I could have a big audience I'd take it, but it turns out the things I write call to a fairly limited fandom.
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No, that's just going too far. People might enjoy stories that I find terrible, but that doesn't make them outright stupid.
Ragnarok, come day of wrath
That fallen souls might bear our plea.
To hasten the Divine's return.
O piteous Wanderer.
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