Too bad it'll prolly end up as dead all every other fallatan fic. :V
Too bad it'll prolly end up as dead all every other fallatan fic. :V
Hey, Sword Vector finished, right?
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
I'll second the +1, even knowing that I will never see the end of the story.
I am of the personal belief that the Tsukihime Remake is two years from release. It will remain as such until a release date is announced, at which time its actual release date is 6 months after that date.Originally Posted by Nasu
Same +1 to Fallatan fic.
It's another Neverending Story : ^)
My head cannon of what CG Archer did: Caladbog a convoy of ebola/anthrax/smallpox ridden victims on their way to some international airport to get treatment. Saved several billion people from an epidemic at the cost of a few people.
Edit: And diseased free red-cross doctor goes out with the patients simply because he/she just happens to be right next to them.
Last edited by Sleepy100; June 3rd, 2015 at 11:26 PM.
"But do not misunderstand. The superhero you are being is no more than a cleaner. Know that the only people you can save like that are the ones that survive." - Archer
Anyway, +1 to Straight Edge, by fallacies
Ah right. Half asleep and spell check marked it in red.
"But do not misunderstand. The superhero you are being is no more than a cleaner. Know that the only people you can save like that are the ones that survive." - Archer
Fate: Covenant Apotheosis just updated.
It was mostly a chapter about CC and flashbacks, it had some interesting tidbits of information in it.
I'm going to hold off on reccing it for a few more chapters, at least until the actual war starts.
Might be awhile given how long it went between this update and the last. I legitimately thought it had died. Well, glad to see it back, at any rate.
+1 to A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09
This first looks like a typical Highschool DxD and Nasuverse crossover, where Shirou is thrown into DxDverse and turned into a Devil.
However it is a lot better than the others just by the first difference, Shirou is not a Pawn of Gremory's. He is the Queen piece of Serafall Leviathan and the good stuff just snowballs from there. The author HAS taken a few liberties with DxDverse canon, and that's about the only bad thing I can see about it.
I haven't bothered to count his update speed(though he has been picking up the pace with the last two chapters), but he normally posts his chapter progress on his profile.
With each day, one draws closer to death,
With each day, one expends more of one's life,
With each day, one obtains more memories,
With each day, one gets closer to losing them all.
First post here... And I've been avoiding it for some reason.
Anyway, -1 for https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10710606/...on-Lord-s-Hero.
While the writing is good, my main gripe with it is how the writer tries to reason their bashing of characters and how they ignore canon facts when it just suits them.
First. Sirzechs and the devils. They overthrew the old devil faction for one very good reason. To not become them. And the writer just ignores this fact and chooses to make him the bad guy with the good guy farce with the ultra bad guy plot. Contrived? Yes. But nonetheless true.
And while I agree that Asia is an unrealistic character, is that enough reason to just outright change her to fit your point of view better? And while Kokabiel is a well done character. The fact that he is practically an OC in itself just makes me want to scream "Write your own character and leave the others be."
And the way he chooses to extol characters while outright making others pathetic... Is well, pathetic. Honestly. Sona and Rias both had similar circumstances. Just because one is focused on doesn't make the other useless.
All in all, the writing is good. But that's all it has going for it. Even though the premise is different than the other DxD crossovers out there, that does not make up the numerous other bad parts about it.
This piece of work literally taught be that good writing =/= a good written work.
And while I am an honest to goodness Shirou Emiya fan. There is no way a single devil - even a queen - can take on more than 200 fallen angels alone.
-1 to Demon lords hero
I'm sorry, but I read this before, dropped it and tried to read again, then just stopped trying altogether. I does have it's really good points, the technical side of the writing is solid sans a few grammar mistakes and questionable sentence structures. But overall, it's not the type of story I would recommend.
One point in this is because of the liberties taken with Shirou's character, and the overall butchering of him in general. It's Shirou, but in name only. It's not Shirou you see in that fic, but the author inserting himself and running around as the character and over-blowing him and making him overshadow the rest of the cast.
Secondly is how he handles the rest of the characters. Well let's see, the first chapters are about the characters sitting around talking about Shirou's epicness and how he went toe to toe with this godly character. Then they ask him to train him because they know about how awesome he is and how he should teach them his ways. Then the author goes to the long and really tedious explanation of why he should that ends with Shirou owning them with a lecture about how they aren't all that great.
I'm not going to go into too much detail, but this is one of those stories that's all about a character named Shirou(but not the Shirou that we know from FSN) being wanked to hell and back.
So TL;DR: This is a technically sound story, but fails in characterization and overall focus.
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man, i was gonna write my own review until i realized i already did
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
wat
where.
Eh, it's short. Was negative too, though it was more because of "technical" stuff (read: "anime" in written form)
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
ahh, I should read the index more.
Eh, more reviews is never really a bad thing
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/27/Chaos-Theory updated with a mood whiplash compared to last chapter.
Even Mozco knows that it's time to wrap it up. Good on him, he knows that the story has gone on too long.
Having Archer tap into his yamato origins was cool but wasn't the thing about Zateki that it was a way of being and that Archer didn't need to use the japanese type of archery just have the mindset? Or maybe yamato styles just get a bonus in fuyuki.
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