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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    first warmly welcomes here and Second your Lemminkäinen profile is very good !
    Thanks

    I've been occasionally lurking here to get some creative ideas for fanfics and stuff, and as Vainämöinen made his appearance I decided I might as well post something I'd been working on myself

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    Lemmin... Something
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    For a first post, the Lore is literally half of the sheet. The actual sheet itself is pretty... Erm... Bland? Decent? He seems to be a very template-ish sheet of how a Saber is usually is...
    The blandness is actually kind of as intended I'm a fan of the (relatively) subdued servants of the original Light Novels... but then again I'm pretty sure that the actual Excalibur didn't shoot lasers and Gae Bolg didn't rewrite cause-and-effect

    And yea, the lore is pretty intensive, but I actually find the personality and character of heroic spirits more engaging than their actual numerical capabilities. One of the reasons I love the Fate series is how the heroic spirits bring their pasts and personality to the new narrative of the series and how ancient legends bleed into contemporary narrative. To me, Fate/Zero is the absolute top-tier because of how well it uses and develops the mythical and historical characters in its conflicts.

    That being said, I hope the Lore quantity managed to have at least some quality in there

    Also, welcome to BL
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    Can anyone think of a cooler/more general name for the Masochistic Constitution Skill? The idea of drawing enemy aggro fits a sheet I'm working on, but the name is too silly and fetishistic for anyone but Passionlip...

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Can anyone think of a cooler/more general name for the Masochistic Constitution Skill? The idea of drawing enemy aggro fits a sheet I'm working on, but the name is too silly and fetishistic for anyone but Passionlip...
    Taunting Disposition?

    Execute C:\local\lib\toh.exe?
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    Dreams of swallow cuts.
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    summs up a lot of my ironic weeaboo circles
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    people who have waifus are necessarily mentally ill


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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    Taunting Disposition?
    Sounds a little cheesy, but maybe it could work... Thanks.

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    I'd say Provocative Disposition but doesn't feel completely right to me.

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    Rider Of The Midnight Raid:

    Appearance:

    (Girl on the right) (Source is here)

    True Name: "Nachthexen" (calls herself Marina Raskova)

    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Alternate Class: Assassin

    Armament:
    A Polikarpov U-2 biplane Rider can summon, serving as her personal mount in the Grail War. Despite being obsolete and slow, it boasts exceptional maneuverability, that combined with Rider's great skill allows her to fly circles around technically superior aircraft. Rider can technically summon a near-unlimited amount of these planes, allowing her to easily replace those destroyed in the Grail War, but unless she possesses allies who are also skilled pilots it's unlikely she'll be making use of more than one at a time.

    Strength- E
    Agility- B+
    Endurance- D+
    Mana- E
    Luck- B
    NP- C++

    Personality
    A spirited and aggressive woman; Rider can easily be called a tomboy. Yet she also possesses a clear girly side, decorating her plane with flowers and using her navigation pencils as lipgloss. She enjoys the thrill of aerial battles and finds the feeling of cheating death to be exhilarating beyond measure. Due to being granted an opportunity that few women of her time could afford, Rider fiercely opposes any form of sexism or discrimination.

    Relationship to her Master:

    Rider views her Master as her "commander" and follow their orders to the best of her ability, though she will try to argue against those she considers foolish or ill-advised. In life, Rider fought for Soviet Russia despite being secretly disturbed by many of the policies of Joseph Stalin, because she recognized that the Nazis were a far worse threat and believed a soldier's duty was to defend their country even if they disagreed with its rulers.

    In the same way, Rider will fight loyally to defend her Master even if she personally finds them contemptible. There are limits to this loyalty, however, and while Rider will reluctantly enact ill-advised plans she draws the line at orders she recognizes as outright despicable, such as harvesting Mana by slaughtering innocent civilians. In that case, while it pains her to do it, Rider will reluctantly oppose her Master and even fight against them if dissuasion proves utterly impossible.

    Relationships/Reactions:

    -Rider recognizes other Heroic Spirits of the aircraft as worthy opponents, and relishes the chance to test her skills against them in a dogfight. This goes particularly for a certain "Red Baron" who gained legendary status in the first World War. Despite being on opposite sides of the battlefield and him dying when she was still a child, Rider greatly looks up to the man as a fellow ace-pilot. If fate contrives that she encounter him as an opponent in a Grail War, Rider's reaction will be something akin to a teenaged girl meeting the idol of their favorite boy-band for the first time.

    Medea- Rider empathizes with her for being demonized as a witch, but cannot forgive the way she endangers innocent civilians. Reluctant enemies.

    -Rider is (pleasantly) surprised at many legendary heroes turned out to be secretly female.

    Likes: the feeling of wind in her hair, cheating death
    Dislikes: Nazis, discrimination, being grounded
    Talent: hit-and-run tactics
    Natural Enemy: Josef Kosiok


    Class Skills:

    Riding- N/A
    The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. Due to being overwritten by her Navigator Of The Skies Personal Skill, this Skill has been lost.

    Magic Resistance- D
    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank, only Single-Action spells are negated. Magic Resistance equivalent in degree to an amulet that rejects magical energy. As a heroine from the modern day who never encountered Magecraft in life, Rider would normally be furnished only a minimum level of resistance through her Class Container. However, due to being called a "Night-Witch" and associated with occultism, this Skill has been ranked up.


    Personal Skills
    :

    Navigator Of The Skies- B
    The ability to pilot aircraft and other flying vehicles. Like its naval counterpart, this includes Charisma and Military Tactics of the same rank. At this rank, one can handle most airborne vehicles from the modern era at a high degree of skill and perform all kinds of dazzling aerodynamic manueverings. Rider's unit flew on many dangerous missions in the skies over Germany, with little more than flimsy planes more suited for training and crop dusted than actual combat. While somewhat of a footnote in history, stories of their daring exploits are still told to this day as an example of the heroic feats women can accomplish when given the chance.

    Taunting Disposition- C+
    A Skill that increases the chances of being targeted by enemies in group battles. It appears to be a wholly detrimental ability, but for a Servant with strong defensive capabilities, possessing this Skill allows them to function as an excellent escort. A slight bonus to defense is also included. Rider's unit was hated and feared by the German army, to the point where any soldier who managed to down one of her planes was automatically awarded an Iron Cross. In group battles, all enemies without mental resistance at rank C or higher will automatically focus their attacks on Rider. A + modifier is applied to this Skill while flying in her aircraft.

    Protection From Arrows- B

    Confers increased defense against ranged attacks by predicting the projectiles' trajectories through exceptional means, like hearing the sound of the air being cut or sensing the killing intent of the enemy. After having her plane riddled by gunfire so many times, Rider developed a "sixth sense" for anticipating an enemy's projectiles and reacting accordingly. Even if confronted by a veritable wall of projectiles, Rider would be able to intuitively discern the single path to maneuver between all of them and navigate it like threading a needle.

    Innocent Monster (Nachthexen)- D
    Due to being demonized as a
    Nachthexen
    Night-Witch
    by the German army and conflated with the otherwise unrelated Germanic legend of the
    Queen of Night
    Konigin Der Nacht
    , Rider has gained several abilities she never possessed in life. First is that, while none of the pilots comprising Rider's saint graph knew anything of Magecraft in life, they have obtained basic magical prowess upon manifesting as a Servant. Rider mainly uses this to enhance her aircraft with Reinforcement Magecraft or subtly manipulate wind-currents to correct her course in mid-flight and knock enemy planes astray.

    Second is that Rider has been partially imbued with the aspect of a phantasmal beast of the night that preys on humans. Grants a rank-up to her Strength and Endurance parameters while fighting at night, as well as making her attacks deal additional damage against Servants of the Man attribute.



    Noble Phantasms
    Heulen Nachthexen
    Howling Of The Night Witch


    Rank: D

    Type: Anti-Unit

    A crystallization of the assault tactic Rider's unit used against the German army. They would idle their engines near the target and slowly glide to the bomb release point, with only the whooshing of the wind to reveal their location. The Germans likened the sound to a witch's broomstick and named the pilots "Night Witches".

    When she invokes this Noble Phantasm, Rider vanishes completely from all five senses of the target, as if possessing an extremely advanced form of the Presence Concealment Skill. She then slowly advances towards the enemy, while emitting a low-pitched ghostly howling that seems to resonate from everywhere around them. The noise also imposes a curse-like psychological effect, assaulting the enemy's mind with the sense of being stalked by an invisible, inhuman huntress. Upon reaching the enemy, Rider will then drop her disguise and attack them, either by dropping a bomb if in her aircraft or with a melee attack if on foot.

    While a theoretically powerful ability, this Noble Phantasm has several key downsides that keep it from being overpowered. First, due to recreating the legend of Rider's nocturnal bombing runs, it can only be invoked under the conditions of nightfall. However, since the battles in most Grail Wars take place at night this is unlikely to be a concern most of the time. Second, Rider is only invisible during her advance and not actually intangible, so a lucky shot or large scale area-of-effect attacks (like, ironically, a bombing run) are still capable of affecting her. Third, this Noble Phantasm is weak against enemies with a sixth sense or other extrasensory form of perception (such as Instinct and Revelation), who will be able to dodge Rider's attack despite being unable to perceive her.


    Konigin Der Nacht
    Cast Aside The Light Of Day And Answer My Call, Sisters Of Night


    Rank: C++

    Type: Reality Marble

    Rider's bombing runs were carried out only under cover of night. Alone, that fact could not possibly crystallize into a Noble Phantasm. However, through being demonized as a "Night-Witch" by the German army and conflation with a completely unrelated mythical figure, the Queen of Night in Mozart's famous opera The Magic Flute, Rider gains the ability to become a phantasmal existence incarnating night itself.

    Upon invoking this Noble Phantasm, a magical shroud of darkness engulfs Rider's surroundings, smothering all light within the vicinity. Rather than mundane darkness it is actually a conceptual denial of light itself; a declaration that within the Queen of Night's domain no light shall be allowed to exist. Enemies will be forced to rely solely on their other senses to perceive the battlefield, or else extrasensory forms of perception like Instinct and Eye Of The Mind (False). Rider herself is unaffected by this loss of sight, and in fact can see, hear and feel every inch of space within the darkness as if it were an extension of her own body. As a final effect, Skills and Noble Phantasms that function by manipulating light, such as Excalibur or Mana Burst (Light), will be sealed if C-rank or lower and otherwise weakened by one ranking.

    However, that is only a secondary effect of this Noble Phantasm. Within her Reality Marble, Rider can manipulate the darkness at will, commanding it to take shape into a massive fleet of Polikarpov U-2 byplanes piloted not by mundane humans, but grotesque female figures reminiscent of witches or demons. These planes and their pilots are powerful Phantasmal Beasts, and even if destroyed will continually reform themselves from the shadows as long as the Reality Marble is intact.

    As invoking this Noble Phantasm is tantamount to fully acknowledging her persona as the "
    Nachthexen
    Night-Witch
    ", Rider gains all the attributes of a true queen of the night within her Reality Marble. Her Innocent Monster (Nachthexen)Personal Skill is ranked up to EX, raising all her parameters by one ranking and allowing her to cast powerful witchcraft. Her personality also becomes far more sadistic, haughty and cruel, often drawing out fights she could easily win simply to torment the enemy. As a drawback, Rider also gains all the weaknesses of a stereotypical witch, such as a vulnerability to flames and Christian sacraments.

    Despite the overwhelming power offered by this Noble Phantasm, Rider utterly refuses to use it, clinging to her pride as a human who committed extraordinary feats without needing to rely on the power of witches or demons. She will only invoke it if forced by a Command Seal, and with her newfound loss of morals will likely kill her Master immediately afterwards.

    As her first Noble Phantasm- Heulen Nachthexen represents her feats as a human rather than a phantasmal existence, it will be sealed once Konigin Der Nacht is invoked.

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    So, the sheet is really good and all, but why is her Agility at the same level as Regend-kun and Achilles?

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    First I have to note that "Piloteer" doesn't actually mean anything, and is about as correct as "Executionist" for someone who executes people. "Pilot", "Ace Pilot" or "Squadron Leader" might fit better. As far as I know, there's no equivalent Russian rank to the last one.
    On the whole, A+
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    seems a tad high, unless of course it has some clever justification (probably something to do with the plane).

    Other than those gripes, cool sheet.
    Also, does Königin Der Nacht's effect count as night for the purposes of using Heulen Nachthexen?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    First I have to note that "Piloteer" doesn't actually mean anything, and is about as correct as "Executionist" for someone who executes people. "Pilot", "Ace Pilot" or "Squadron Leader" might fit better. As far as I know, there's no equivalent Russian rank to the last one.
    On the whole, A+
    Edit
    Agility
    seems a tad high, unless of course it has some clever justification (probably something to do with the plane).

    Other than those gripes, cool sheet.
    Also, does Königin Der Nacht's effect count as night for the purposes of using Heulen Nachthexen?
    Fair point about Piloteer. I used it back in my Arthur Harris sheet, but I'll swap the name out with something more meaningful. A+ Agility is because the planes the Nachthexen used were noted to be incredibly agile despite otherwise clunky and obsolete, but you're right that it's bit too high. I'll lower it to A or B+. Lastly, Konigin Der Nacht's effect would probably count as night, but I imagine that since Heulen Nachthexen embodies her feats as a human rather than as a phantasmal existence, it'd be sealed once her second NP is invoked (since being able to activate them both at once would make her a bit too OP). Might add a note of that in the sheet itself to clarify things.

    Thanks for the feedback, Padoru and Shiki-pon!

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    So, I changed Piloteer's name to Navigator Of The Skies, lowered Agility to B+ and added a note in her 2nd NP explaining how it interacts with her first one. Better now?

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    I get your point with the Agility, but do the feats of the mount actually apply to the Servant's parameters? It'd be weird that Iskandar's Agility is only D considering his mounts

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    I get your point with the Agility, but do the feats of the mount actually apply to the Servant's parameters? It'd be weird that Iskandar's Agility is only D considering his mounts
    Given literally her only feats are from her mount, I think it's fair enough to conflate the two to some degree. Otherwise she'd pretty much have straight Es in every stat except Luck and Mana.

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    Marina Raskova: While Shiki-pon had addressed most of my concerns with the sheet, I found both Innocent Monster and Demon of the Night (False) can be conflated into single Skill. Rather than those two, it can be the combination of being demonized as the Night-Witch along with the myth involved ended up giving Marina the boons of the titular entity. The end product could be called Innocent Monster (Nachthexen) at rank D.
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    Fair enough. I was a bit confused becaused it's the first time I've seen someone doing that.

    On another note, next Monday I'm finally free of my burdens and can start posting sheets with the usual frequency. I've been considering doing a "canon timeline" Ivan the Terrible, but my idea for Chulnei Oprichnik isn't remotely close to the official "Medb's Unlimited Soldier Works but it's Russian". Since it's not like we have a behemoth of lightning with a mountain-sized mammoth in our timeline, would it be acceptable to stray from canon?

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Fair enough. I was a bit confused becaused it's the first time I've seen someone doing that.

    On another note, next Monday I'm finally free of my burdens and can start posting sheets with the usual frequency. I've been considering doing a "canon timeline" Ivan the Terrible, but my idea for Chulnei Oprichnik isn't remotely close to the official "Medb's Unlimited Soldier Works but it's Russian". Since it's not like we have a behemoth of lightning with a mountain-sized mammoth in our timeline, would it be acceptable to stray from canon?
    Well, in canon there's always his
    lost
    hidden
    library mentioned in Apocrypha and in his Bond CE, if I recall correctly. I guess he could have access to Magecraft of some sort, possibly even through court mages? Then there's his legendary rages if you want to make him a Berserker, and the Massacre of Novgorod as a possible NP for that class (and/or a replacement for the Oprichniki, given that they had a hand in that).

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    Thanks for the ideas, but my main concern is whether it's fine or not to make Chulnei Oprichnik different to the official in the case I add it, limiting the number of soldiers in exchange of giving them some abilities and a more distorted aspect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    Marina Raskova: While Shiki-pon had addressed most of my concerns with the sheet, I found both Innocent Monster and Demon of the Night (False) can be conflated into single Skill. Rather than those two, it can be the combination of being demonized as the Night-Witch along with the myth involved ended up giving Marina the boons of the titular entity. The end product could be called Innocent Monster (Nachthexen) at rank D.
    So I followed your advice regarding merging Innocent Monster and Daemon Of The Night into a composite Skill. Thanks SleepMode.

    Also, I don't know how obvious it is in the sheet itself, but this Rider is not actually Marina Raskova. That's the name she takes upon summoning, but her true identity is a wraith amalgamating the spirits of all the pilots of 588th Night Bomber Regiment, hence the mention of multiple pilots making up her saint graph in Innocent Monster's description. I might add another part of the sheet to clarify that if it wasn't so obvious.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Thanks for the ideas, but my main concern is whether it's fine or not to make Chulnei Oprichnik different to the official in the case I add it, limiting the number of soldiers in exchange of giving them some abilities and a more distorted aspect.
    I'd say go ahead. As you said, it's not like our Ivan is a giant lightning mammoth monster anyways.

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    After i made the mistake to follow a spontan idea, i hope that with this profile i make it atleast some better. A Little note in Advance: i gave him the Herakless Treatment as Bereserker and i am searching also for a Bow/arrow Noble Phantasm as Archer and a Sword technique,(thanks to King of Padoru i have already a Rider mount for him *cough*thanks) which Fitting him and his Wind"Storm thematic.and that nobody says again i dont make Researchs i found out that he was a equally talented archer like he was in his Gada usage.also it it could be a bit incomplete at the Moment.

    Bhima


    Berserker
    Height: 260 cm
    Weight: 280
    kg
    Alignment:
    Lawful Good
    Attribute:
    Earth
    Origin: India
    Weapon: Gada,Sword
    Alternative classes: Saber, Rider, Archer
    Likes:
    rich meals,his Family,Elephants.
    Dislikes: Snakes

    Talents: Wrestling

    Natural Rival: Thor(?)

    Parameters
    Strength: A+
    Endurance: A+

    Agility: C

    Luck: C+

    Mana:
    A
    NP:
    A+


    Background
    He was the second Pandava ,the litle brother and the elder brother of Arjuna,Sahadeva and Nakula.


    Personality
    He is a quite Rough and to violence tending Man especially against Enemies of his Family .He likes to make jokes and pranks but can be in the same second as before Serious and stoic if the Moment call for it.He is actually a Deep caring Man towards his Family ,Friends and in the Case he likes him also his Master like when he should have a similar case like Illya or Waver then he would be unregaded the Class a example of a Big brother but should he dislike his Master he wouldnt has real Problems to crush him.but a certain redhaired Young shonen would he like somehow in more then one reason.


    Skills
    Class skills:
    Mad Enhancement:C
    It raises the stats and physical strenght by sa crifice of sanity and logic/skill capability based techniques/Nobelphantasm.
    He has due to being already in live a bit mad a middle Rank in it ,means he can hold a meaningfull conversation and react reasonable but is strongly influenced by his Emotions.

    Personal skills:
    Divinity:B He is the Son of Vayu the Deity of Life and Wind(sorry i dont find a other description for Divinity)
    Robust Health:EX Due to the Poison and venoms he endured in life and his Blessing of Vatsuki he gained his strenght and toxical Resilienz.
    gives him a plus modifier when poisoned or drowned in strenght and Endurance aswell a Poison resistence at Rank A but it makes him also resistence against nourishment so he Need (great) amounts of Food and drinkings to satiate his hunger
    Bravery: D (B+) He faced dozens of Monters and wars but displayed never cowardice ,his Braveness is through his stubborness(?) even present as Berserker.
    Mana Burst (Wind) B~:He has as Son of the Wind deity vayu a strong Wind based Mana Burst normaly he would have rank Ex but it is degraded and distorted/destabilized due to his Mad Enhancement so hehe is degraded in his Rank but especially in when he falls into raging can be unleashed a higher Rankmlike Mana Blast.


    Noble Phantasm
    Gada-Astra

    Vrigodharam

    Type: Anti-Unit ~Anti-Fortress
    Rank: A+ (EX)
    Range: 1~99
    Maximum number of targets:
    1000
    Description:
    It is the Weapon in which usage Bhima has reached perfection.

    Bhima is able to use his Wind-burts in connection with the trusts of the Mace ,upon calling its true Name are the ciphres glowing and they become permeable ,they release golden Tempests who are strong enough to repell even the strongest flame, after wave the Gada in the direction of his Opponent the form of the Tempest becomes the of a Giant wolf and they starting from the tail are flows the divine Energy into the fangs and foreclaws (visibly through the colorchanges into Grey) so that the claws are the only Gold colored remains and the fang ignite into Lightning .The wolf is fast enough that he could overrun a Rider-chariot.Upon the Moment the Target reach the area of the fangs are they piercing him and then are coiling the gales and lightnings around the target and literally "devours" the target by shreeding him to dust


    Rider and Archer Nobelphantasm (in working)
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    Bhima: Given your predilection for making OP Servants, going for an Indian Servant this time was a pretty good choice (Indian myth = the DBZ of mythology). You even resisted the natural tendency when making Hindu Servants to give him every Astra he ever had as NPs, which is always nice. Jokes aside though, I have to admit the giant storm-wolf imagery for his NP is seriously awesome. I'm not sure if his Strength should be A++ rank though, since that's noted to be the level that's absolutely impossible for a human body to possess. Unless he was a monster from birth like Asterios, he really shouldn't have anything higher than A+ (which is still Herc-tier mind you, nothing to scoff at).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
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    Wow, so much for having his poisoned ass saved by the king of nagas. Bhima is undoubtedly your best sheet yet, probably because there's no way you can wank an Indian Servant.

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    Geez, I'm gone for a bit and suddenly talented new sheet writer's leap out from the woodwork. Feels like it's a bit too late to comment on them too much soecifically, but all the sheets made here in the last couple of days have been great, good job, you guys.

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