Create-A-Servant 2

[Historia]

People have found out that a corpse lying in an abandoned island is hers.

Ah, I see. If it really is her remains, what a bad way to go.

If only she had a volleyball.

[Alexcoene]

If only she had a volleyball.

... What?

[Historia]

... What?

I don't even know you but you're already dead to me.

Leave my sight, mongrel.

[Bird of Hermes]

I probably made it obvious through my PMs to you, but your sheets were actually the inspiration for me to start attempting to make my own sheets of some of my personal favourite historical/mythological figures. Only reason I haven't actually made Roland yet despite him being my favorite mythological (well, semi-mythological) figure is because you did a pretty great sheet on him I couldn't really add much or anything to for me to warrant making my own version

The paladins are pretty fun to make, I may do my own take on Olivier or Ganleon at some point.

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It would be nice to see your take on them too. Slightly surprised Royd hasn't done a genderbent Atlantes yet.

[RoydGolden]

Slightly surprised Royd hasn't done a genderbent Atlantes yet.

I thought about it haha. It's just that I came across a rather good Atlantes sheet on the old thread and I'm not sure I can top it.

[Alexcoene]

So, what does you people think of my Jaufre sheet?

[RoydGolden]

So, what does you people think of my Jaufre sheet?

He's pretty good. Not much to say since I'm not at all familiar with his legend, but it seems well-done. His NP having different effects against differently aligned targets is certainly an interesting idea, though it'd make him incredibly vulnerable fighting fellow Good-aligned heroes.

Given you mentioned an animosity, how do you think he'd interact around my Kay?

[Alexcoene]

He's pretty good. Not much to say since I'm not at all familiar with his legend, but it seems well-done. His NP having different effects against differently aligned targets is certainly an interesting idea, though it'd make him incredibly vulnerable fighting fellow Good-aligned heroes.

Given you mentioned an animosity, how do you think he'd interact around my Kay?

Given the personality that you gave him, very badly. I imagine that they would spend most of their time bickering, with Kay hacing the upper-hand in term of witty comments. Tough in a story together, they would most likely be forced to set aside their difference cooperate with each other, most likely to help Artoria or something like that. It doesn't help that both of their NP are ineffective against each other (Kay being Chaotic Good and Jaufre being naturally resistant to mental interference).

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Ah, I see. If it really is her remains, what a bad way to go.

If only she had a volleyball.

I approve.

[Bird of Hermes]

Made this guy in a bit of a rush to get him out today as I won't be able to do so tomorrow.


(Source)

Class: Assassin
Name: Guy Fawkes
Alignment: Chaotic "Good"
Place of Origin: Britain
Attribute: Man
Traits: Human
Armament: Knives

STR: C
END: D
AGI: E
MGI: E
LCK: D
NP: B

Height/Weight: 167cm/53kg
Likes: Benevolent Governments
Dislikes: What he views as an oppressive government
Talent: Arson
Natural Enemy: King James I, Queen Elizabeth I

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment (Group): B
The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. However, efficiency will decrease once preparations to attack are taken. This level is high enough to the Servant very hard to detect, though not impossible. Additionally he can grant up to 12 others at one rank lower. However if a single member of the group prepares to attack or has their cover blown, the rest of the party will be equally affected.

Personal Skills:

Mental Pollution: B
Makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference thaumaturgy, due to possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes impossible to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution. Acts of cruelty against him will cause his damaged psyche to deteriorate further.

Nature of a Rebellious Spirit: B
The temperament to never remain at one location and never embrace a lord. A wandering star that does not have the capacity to be king nor is capable of finding his own king. Negates the effects of Charisma with the same rank.

Resistance to Pain: B
The servant feels less pain than others of their kind, and injuries do not affect battle effectiveness. At this rank, the Servant can resist large amounts of pain, and even major wounds do not reduce his battle effectiveness. Negates Torture Techniques of the same rank.

Subversive Activities: C
The talent to reduce the enemy forces in the preliminary stages, before going into battle. An expert of traps. However, the higher is the ranking of this Skill, the more one's spiritual status as a hero declines. The Servant can reduce enemy strength by up to 25% before combat is initiated.

Noble Phantasm

The Gunpowder Plot

Remember, Remember. The Fifth Of November

Type: Anti-Fortress
Rank: B+
Range: 1
Max Targets: 1 (1000)

A Noble Phantasm manifesting the infamous attempt to blow up the House of Parliament. When invoking the mantra;

"Remember, remember the fifth of November
The Gunpowder, treason and plot.
I see no reason the gunpowder, treason
Should ever be forgot..."

Assassin can charge any object as a bomb by touch. He can only charge a single object at a time and if he charges a new object the previous one can not be detonated. Assassin can detonate the target at will by using his right hand by pressing his thumb onto its hand, as if pressing a trigger on a handheld detonator. The charge will instantly travel through the targets 'body' and detonate from within instantly whether it be a person or a tower. Each explosion is of the 'Anti-Fortress' classification and as such is best used to destroy buildings. It can be used on the likes of animals, humans and servants but the range of the explosion and requirement to fulfil the mantra to attain the conditions make it a poor choice to do so in combat as Assassin would either be killed in the attempt or get caught in the explosion, however the only range requirement is to touch the target as afterwards the target can be detonated at will from theoretically any range.

Lore

Guy Fawkes was an English arsonist who planned the failed Gunpowder Plot of 1605. Converting to Catholicism when fighting on the side of Spain on the Eighty Years War, upon the rise to power of James I, Fawkes had hoped that he would be more tolerant of the faith than Queen Elizabeth. The new King maintained the same religious values of his predecessor so Fawkes joined a group of like minded men to assassinate the King and blow up the Houses of Parliament in a single stroke to place a catholic king and government in place. Bringing his knowledge of warfare, he purchased a room beneath the Houses of Parliament and over time, stashed gunpowder there with 20 barrels at first and then another 16 for good measure.

One of the conspirators had a brother in law who would be in the building and so sent him an anonymous letter to warn him not to be in on the day of the explosion. On November 5th, Lord Monteagle (whom had received the letter in question) received a warrant and ordered the rooms underneath to be searched. Guy Fawkes was caught and arrested.

Giving his name initial as John Johnson and feigning innocence, over the next few days he was brutally tortured in the feared Tower of London at first "gently" then rather horrifically until he confessed. Upon the arrest of the conspiracy group, they were to be hung until nearly dead. Their genitals would be cut off and burnt before their eyes, and their bowels and hearts removed. They would then be decapitated, and the dismembered parts of their bodies displayed so that they might become "prey for the fowls of the air". Fortunately for Fawkes, he fell from the scaffold where he was to be hanged and broke his neck, thus avoiding the agonising death.

Fawkes became synonymous with the Gunpowder Plot, the failure of which has been commemorated in Britain since 5 November 1605. His effigy is traditionally burned on a bonfire, commonly accompanied by a fireworks display. Nowerdays, it's just used as an excuse to use fireworks.

Personality

A rather charming and amicable man, it is easy to make his acquaintance and enjoy his company. One could mistake him for a true gentleman, but this would be a foolish mistake. He is in fact rather self centred and will perform crimes and actions that would usually be against his belief system but justifies it as being "for the greater good". The greater good that services himself.
He is proud to see that his visage is popular among anarchists as a symbol of rebellion against the corrupt and wicked, but Fawkes vision of a so-called benevolent government is one that caters to his needs specifically.

He also doesn't quite understand why November 5th is celebrated as he is not praised for his actions. He also doesn't realise that by today's standards he would be considered a terrorist.

Tactics

Like a typical Assassin, Fawkes is not suited for combat and would be slaughtered by any servant he came across. Therefore the most efficient form of combat is to kill the master - this is something that this Assassin class servant specialises in greatly. He can quickly sneak to the location of the targeted individual and by using his Noble Phantasm, destroy their base of operations and kill the master in the same stroke.

In combat situations, he is most poorly suited as he has little experience in self-defence as he is an arsonist, not a fighter. Therefore the master can use a command seal to force Assassin to use his Noble Phantasm on himself to take out the servant he is fighting.

[Alexcoene]

@Guy de Fawkes: I have to say, I was not sure at first that a Heroic Spirit could have a NP based on their failure, but then I remembered that Shuten-Doujin's NP was based on the thing that killed her, so it's probably okay. I'm must say, he really respects really the concept of the Assasin class as one not made for fighting. I don't have much more to say, it's a pretty good sheet.

[Spartacus]

@Guy de Fawkes: I have to say, I was not sure at first that a Heroic Spirit could have a NP based on their failure, but then I remembered that Shuten-Doujin's NP was based on the thing that killed her, so it's probably okay. I'm must say, he really respects really the concept of the Assasin class as one not made for fighting. I don't have much more to say, it's a pretty good sheet.

To add, Jing Ke have an NP based on his failed attempt to assassinate the Chinese emperor too.

[Alexcoene]

Too add, Jing Ke have an NP based on his failed attempt to assassinate the Chinese emperor too.

So, in the end, my worry was even more foolish.

[Lily Emilio]

Ibaraki's NP is also based on the legend of her arm getting chopped off at Rashoumon.

[Ail Don]

Wankery, thy name is Saber.


Class: Saber
True Name: Conn Cétchathach
Alias: Conn of the Hundred Battles, High King of Ireland
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: Historical
Region: Ireland


Strength- B
Endurance- C
Agility- B
Mana- B
Luck- A
NP- A


Gender: Male
Likes: Tara, Ireland as a whole, good food and drink
Dislikes: Kidnappers, Cumhail
Talent: Being a lucky son of a bitch
Natural Enemy: Mug Nuadat
Armament: Armor, sword


Class skills:



Magic Resistance: B
Although in possession of a healing Noble Phantasm almost as potent as Avalon and the divine protection of the Tuatha De Danann, Saber is not known to be anymore magical in his own right than the average person of his Class.

Riding: C
​Not noted for any famous mount or spectacular acts of riding. Saber is capable of handling most mundane animals and vehicles with considerable skill. They can achieve difficult maneuvers with some effort.​


Personal skills:



Eye of the Mind (True): (A)
Though called Conn of the Hundred Battles, this only relates to the 100 battles Saber fought and won against the Ulsterians. In reality, Saber fought in more than 260 victorious battles, his only defeat came at the hands of the King of Munster, who also forced him to split Ireland down the middle.
Not receiving a wound on the battlefield, never even becoming sick once since birth -- Capable of calmly analyzing situations regardless of the situation. As long as the possibility of victory is not zero Saber can devise the best possible course of action to exploit that that chance and obtain victory even from the jaws of defeat.


Protection of the Faeries: (B)
A chosen figure by both the king of the Tuatha de Dannan Lugh, and the "spirit" of Ireland herself, Conn is very much so a blessed king.
The Servant can raise their Luck by one rank for up to three minutes twice per battle.


Charisma: (B)
The charisma of a king. Even after Mug Nuadat's splintering of Saber's land, he was able to rally his troops into reconquering the lost land and lived the rest of his days as a beloved king. Saber is compelling in conversation. He can make lifelong allies easily and inspire entire nations. His followers will be strongly loyal to them.

Noble Phantasm

Lia Fáil
Hark! Your King is Here


Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: B
Range: 0
Max. Target: 1 person


Brought to Ireland by the Tuatha De Danann from the isle of Falias, and one of Ireland's Four Legendary Treasures. Lia Fáil is the mythical stone of coronation from Tara. The stone was said to sing when the rightful High King stood on it, and did so for every candidate up to Cu Chulainn's protege Lugaid Riab nDerg, who split it in a rage. Conn tread across the stone on accident once, and the stone sang for the first time in decades.
Said to rejuvenate the king and give him a long reign, Lia Fáil keeps Saber in a near-perpetual state of youth and health by reversing time. Wounds will be wound backward to before contact was made, however if enough consecutive wounds are made in a short period of time, Lia Fáil's effect might be overloaded. Even Crazy Diamond can't fix that!




Fragarach
Answerer. Retaliator. I Have Heard Ye


Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: E~A
Range: 1
Max. Target: 1 person


The great sword of Manannan mac Lir, who gave it to his foster son Lugh, who gave it to his own son Cu Chulainn. After Cu turned out to be a man of the spear more than the sword, Lugh re-gifted the mighty sword to Conn during their infamous misty banquet. Functioning exactly the same as the Mystic Code wielded by Bazett, Fragarach is activated upon the target's use of their Noble Phantasm. After causing a time loop, it warps causality to always strike the opponent in the heart with a needle thin concentrated blast right before they unleash their ultimate attack.

Passively, Fragarach has the ability to force the truth out of anyone it's pointed at.

Lore

A High King of Ireland and ancestor to the Connachta, the Annals of the Four Masters says that five roads to Tara, which had never been seen before, were discovered on the night of Conn's birth. According to the Lebor Gabála Érenn, he took power after killing his predecessor Cathair Mór. The Lia Fáil, the coronation stone at Tara which was said to roar when the rightful king stood on it, roared under Conn for the first time since Cúchulainn split it with his sword when it failed to roar for Lugaid Riab nDerg. A druid explains the meaning of the stone, and says the number of cries the stone made is the number of kings who will follow Conn, but he is not the man to name them. A magical mist arises, and a horseman approaches who throws three spears towards Conn, then asks him and the druid to follow him to his house, which stands on a plain by a golden tree. They enter, and are welcomed by a woman in a gold crown. First they see a silver vat, bound with gold hoops, full of red ale, and a golden cup and serving spoon. Then they see a phantom, a tall beautiful man, on a throne, who introduces himself as Lugh. The woman is the sovereignty of Ireland, and she serves Conn a meal consisting of an ox's rib 24 feet long, and a boar's rib. When she serves drinks, she asks "To whom shall this cup be given?", and Lugh recites a poem which tells Conn how many years he will reign, and the names of the kings who will follow him. Then they enter Lugh's shadow, and the house disappears, but the cup and serving spoon remain.

Conn had a long reign – twenty, twenty-five, thirty-five or even fifty years according to different versions of the Lebor Gabála, spending much of it at war with Mug Nuadat, king of Munster. Mug Nuadat's father started the bitter rivalry before blessedly being killed early on in the fighting. Conn drove Mag Nuadat out of Ireland into Spain, where he married the princess and returned to fight Conn once more after nine years. Forced to divide Ireland between through Dublin and Galway, peace lasted for 15 years before Mag Nuadat broke the treaty. Gathering forces in Connacht, Conn marched forward and obliterated everything in his path, killing Mag Nuadat during a night attack to become king of all of Ireland.

A certain Lancer will most assuredly have mixed feelings on Saber. On the one hand, Conn was responsible for ordering Cumhaill murdered after the boy's father kidnapped and raped a druid's daughter--and thus responsible for Deimne's entire childhood. On the other hand, Fionn was proud to serve under Conn, enlisting into his services at age ten. After killing the monster Aillen, Conn made Fionn the captain of the Fianna.

Personality

Proud, stubborn, and relishing in combat, Saber earned his nickname of the Hundred Battles for just how thirsty for combat he truly was. Headlong and impetuous, a man blazing with ceaseless energy, who seldom or never was out of his battle harness. But in his fiery soul there were springs too of sweet affection. Once he sent his foster-brothers on an embassy; they were slain by the king to whom he sent them. It was night when the tidings of that slaughter were brought to Conn. He sat down, and, in his wrath and grief, without uttering one word, chewed down the ashen haft of his great blade. A true Irishman.

[DessertTaiga]

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Too much Gakupo for a Filipino Servant. But meh, who cares?

Spirit: José Rizal
Class: Caster
Master: FGO Protagonist (Gudako or Gudao)

PARAMETERS

Strength: E
Endurance: E
Agility: D
Mana: B
Luck: C
N. Phantasm: B
Cards: BAAAQ
Attribute: Man

CLASS SKILLS

SKILL NAME: Item Construction (C)
DESCRIPTION: The skill to manufacture magical items. Caster didn’t make much things in life, but he was a writer, and while one of his books, one of his two most famous ones, is his Noble Phantasm, the others, like his other books and poems have manifested as Mystic Codes.
EFFECT: Increases own debuff success rate by 6%.

SKILL NAME: Territory Creation (E)
DESCRIPTION: The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. Caster didn’t make any territories in life, so his rank in this Skill is low. In his case, his “workshop” is a simple area instead, something like under the tree’s shade.
EFFECT: Increases own Arts card performance by 2%.

PERSONAL SKILLS

SKILL NAME: High-Speed Incantation (E)
DESCRIPTION: The capacity to recite spells at high speeds. In Caster’s case, it is not expedience in spell recitation, rather, his speed at reading written works.
EFFECT: Charges own NP gauge.

SKILL NAME: Magecraft (C-)
DESCRIPTION: Knowledge about modern Thaumaturgy. Servants like him, upon materialization, receive knowledge about the modern world; that includes modern magecraft. He can learn many types of these things, however, at such a rank, it might take time for him to master them.
EFFECT: Increases own Arts card performance for 1 turn.

SKILL NAME: Charisma (C)
DESCRIPTION: The natural talent to command an army. Yet rather than command an army, when around enemy Masters or Servants, he is viewed as someone who you can trust, that is, unless the person he’s around can see through him. This is because he was the Philippine’s national hero, he advocated liberty through peaceful means rather than by violent battles.
EFFECT: Increases party's attack for 3 turns.

NOBLE PHANTASM

NOBLE PHANTASM NAME: Noli Me Tángere: Touch Me Not (B)
CLASSIFICATION: Support
TYPE: Arts
DESCRIPTION: This Noble Phantasm represents his famous novel, Noli Me Tángere, which title is Latin for “Touch Me Not”, and is taken from a bible verse (John 20:17). Because of the title, this Noble Phantasm manifested as a Support NP: it increases his and his allies’ attack and critical star generation. Not only that, when he and his allies are damaged, the Noble Phantasm will restore them in full health.
EFFECTS:
> Increases own and allies’ attack and critical star generation for 3 turns.
> Restores own and allies’ HP to maximum health.

CHARACTER INFORMATION

Height/Weight: 170cm · 65kg
Source: Historical fact
Country of Origin: Philippines
Alignment: Neutral · Good
Gender: Male
Likes: His own country, Peace, Writing
Dislikes: Violence, Cruelty

LORE (Source: X)

Lore

Caster’s true identity is that of José Rizal, who is considered nowadays as the Philippine’s national hero.

He was a Filipino nationalist and polymath during the tail end of the Spanish colonial period of the Philippines. An ophthalmologist by profession, Rizal became a writer and a key member of the Filipino Propaganda Movement which advocated political reforms for the colony under Spain.

He was executed by the Spanish colonial government for the crime of rebellion after an anti-colonial revolution, inspired in part by his writings, broke out. Though he was not actively involved in its planning or conduct, he ultimately approved of its goals which eventually led to Philippine independence.

He is widely considered one of the greatest heroes of the Philippines, and is implied by Philippine law to be one of the national heroes. He was the author of the novels Noli Me Tángere and El Filibusterismo, and a number of poems and essays.

NOTES

Oh great, another GO-style sheet …*sarcastic*… yaaaay. But seriously, I tried my hands on an historical Servant. I also tried not to fail this time … I hope I didn’t. Anyways, thank you for reading and don’t forget to tell me whenever there’s something wrong. And I was going to add El Filibusterismo as another NP but GO Servants have only one NP. Plus with it being some "farewell book" makes me think it's a suicidal NP like Jeanne's La Pucelle...

As for my previous Hansel and Gretel sheet, I really can't think even of an original skill for a personal skill of theirs. Sorry, but at least I tried to... (·^·)

[Alexcoene]

@Conn Cétchathach: It's a nice sheet, tough I think his Magic Resistance should be higher since it sound like he met a fair bit of magic. Also you've got Protection of The Faeries very wrong: it rank-up only by one Luck

@ José Rizal: I think you've got a couple of thing wrong. A servant never would have any magic that he didn't know in life unless he was rumored to be a mage. If it worked like that, then every servant would use magic spells. Shakespeare know magic because in the Nasuverse, he was secretly a mage, so maybe you should says that Rizal was one too. I also think you should replace Charisma with a new skill instead of giving it a different effect from normal. I also think he should have Nature of a Rebellious Spirit or something like that since he inspired a rebellion.

[asterism42]

Conn Cétchathach

Mebbe also give Fragarach some of the other powers attributed to it. Like whoever it's pointed at is forced to tell only the truth.

[Alexcoene]

To correct my previous misguiding, I decided to add a new member to the club of assassins with NPs based on their death and/or failure. His Avenger skills are based on Bigblack and Funderfulness's versions. Tough I first made him a Assassin, he ended up being more powerful as a Avenger.

Class: Assassin
Alternates Classes: Saber, Avenger
True Name: Ishikawa Goemon
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Likes: Stealing from the rich and giving to the poor, His familly
Dislikes: People of Authority
Natural Enemy: Toyotomi Hideyoshi
Weapon: Sword
Personality:
Assassin is at first glance, a exemplar thief. He lies almost all the time, is very cunning and show much interest into valuables objects. Yet, despite that, he show a very affable and friendly personnality toward the less unfortunates, often giving them the things he steal and greatly enjoying spending time with others. He tends to act like a character in the kabuki play that spread his popularity, making exagerred gestures and putting great emphasis in his words. It is no doubt this amicable nature that allowed him so much popularity. However, he hates the rich and politicians, seeing them as exploiting the poor. As such, he doesn't consider it a bad action to steal from them. He greatly hate the demon king Nobunage, seeing her and her subordinates as the source of his misery in life.

This last trait is especialy accentuated when summoned as a Avenger. While he retain his sense of justice, it is overshadowed by his desire for revenge and his hatred for the powerful. While his personality is still bombastic , it is more like that of a "over-the-top villain" to that of a "showy gentlemen thief". He will not bat a eye at using more reprehensible means to get what he wants and to achieve his goal.



Stats-
Strength- C
Endurance- D
Agility- A
Mana- D
Luck- E
NP- C

Class Skills-

Precense Concealment- C
The capacity to hide's one own precense as a servant. However, it is dispeled when attacking. Tough Assassin was a skilled ninja, his last assasination attempt was botched and he was found out, reducing the rank of this skill.

As a Saber

Magic Resistance- C
Cancel spell below two verses. Protection at the same level as a amulet that reject magical energy. As he didn't meet much magic in life, he has rank unbefitting of the Saber class.

As a Avenger

Avenger- B
The servant's physical paremeter rank-up after being wounded or betrayed in a period of time determined by the rank in this skill. Avenger swore revenge on Hideyoshi after his familly was killed unter the warlord's order.

Oblivion Correction- C
A skill whose rank depend on how much the servant is an Anti-Hero. A failsafe of sort, it decrease Avenger's mana upkeep when contracted and increase it when uncontracted. May also rank-down luck at higher rank. Despite the fact that Avenger was a bandit chief, his fame as a folk hero and his generous, Robin Hood-like personality keep this skill at a low rank.

Self-Replenishment (Mana)- D
Increases the rate at wich a servant absord mana from the environment. Due to not meeting or using much magic, his rank in this skill is low.

Personals Skills-

Ninjutsu- B
The servant is trained in the arts of the shinobi of Japan, primariily used for covert action and information gathering. Assasin was a competent ninja, but never reached the rank of a master.

Nature of a Rebellious Spirit- A
The temperament to never remain at one location and never accept a lord. A wandering star that can never be a king nor find hisown king. Negate the effect of Charisma at the same rank. Assassin was a renegade ninja who opposed authority and became a symbol of rebellion after his death.

Golden Rule- C
The ability to gain wealth. As a bandit chied, Assassin amassed a fair amount of riches.

Noble Phantasm-

Goemonburo ~ Cruel Execution of the Great Bandit

(Anti-Personal, C) This Noble Phantasm manifest automically when Assasin is summoned. It takes the form of the great pot of boiling oil in wich he was executed for his attempted assassination of the warlord Hideyoshi. If any servant enter this pot, they will recieve great damage and insufferable pain. Due to it's nature as a instrument of death, survival is almost impossible. However, the true difficult part is getting them in. Due to it's stationary nature, Assassin either has to throw his ennemies in it or somehow luring them to fall into it. Furthermore, due to it being a representation of his death, Assassin is as much as vuknerable to it as anyone, and will surely die if he fall of it. Due to these complications, it is more a dangerous hazard that he can sometime uses at his advantage than a weapon. It is available in the Assassin and the Saber class.

As a Saber

Momochi no Ken ~ Sword of the Betrayed Master

(Anti-Unit, B) This Noble Phantasm is the sword that Saber stole from his Master, Momochi Tanba, when the latter chased the former for sleeping with his mistress. Now, it is a symbol of Saber's thievery of his master and usage of the skills was taught for his personal uses. When wielding this sword, Saber's Ninjutsu skill rise to A, as if stealing the skill of his master. Furthermore, Saber can by invoking it's true name use several abilities attributed to ninja of legends, much like how he was described in later tales. It allow him to either substitute his body with a object of the same size, summoning much weaker clones as decoy or use Mana Burst at rank C imbibed with a element of his choosing. Despite it's low offensive capacity, the versatility of this Noble Phantasm make it very useful.

As a Avenger

Goemonburo Fukusho ~ Righteous Revenge of the Great Bandit

(Anti-Unit, A) As an Avenger, this Noble Phantasm is very different from his incarnation as an Assasin. Instead of representing his death, his desire of vengeance has changed into a manifestation of his desire for his murderers to share the same fate as him. Instead of being a physical object, Avenger can activate this Noble Phantasm by throwing a Kunai on the ground while saying it's true name. The kunai will then sink into the earth and a small area around it's landing spot will gain a slight yellowish taint. If anyone make contact with it, a traphole big enough to fit them filled with boiling oil will appear under them. If they die in the hole, it will feed upon their mana, wich will allow the are to remain longer. If not "fed", the area will remain a few minutes before disappearing. Despite it's damage being lower than it's assassin version, it is far more usable and will likely give Avenger time to attack while his ennemies tries to pull themselves out of the trap. Furthermore, it's relatively low mana cost and Avenger's class skills allow him to use it as he wishes to transform the battlefield into a terrain very advantageous to him. Indeed, it would not be a exageration to call Avenger his best class.

[RoydGolden]

Jose Rizal: Frankly, I think you limited yourself quite a bit by using Grand Order's formatting. I wouldn't mention Critical Stars and the like in his NP's description, which should instead summarize what it is and does in lore terms, or how it'd act in a Grail War. Plus you already have an 'EFFECTS' section directly below, so it'd be easy to keep separate. I think you should give him another NP if you good ideas for it. Don't worry about how GO does things. After all, even GO Servants definitely can have more then one NP, that they just can't use in-game. Regarding him having Magecraft... What Alexecone said isn't quite true since I'm pretty sure Andersen's High-Speed Incantation (which you also included) was solely due to how fast he wrote and published books rather then any magical aptitude in life. Since you included that one already, either nix Magecraft or give him genuine Thaumaturgic backing to justify it.

Goemon: He sounds by far the most interesting as an Avenger, honestly. Well, his NP as an Assassin is a little boring (basically a literal pot with no special effects other then 'is a big pot filled with oil') while the one he has as Avenger is quite a creative crystallization of his legend. Plus, being a gentleman chief who acts like a campy supervillain it sounds like he'd be quite the entertaining character to see 'on-screen'. A quibble, but I also also noticed that you have a near-continuous habit of including extra 'N's in a lot of words ('Personnality' and 'ennemy' being the most frequent offenders). In the future, if you're pondering how many 'N's a word has, I'd say go with one just to be safe, since as is you're erring in the opposite direction.