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    Bohemian Forest, Czechoslovakia
    South of Vimperk

    A large Tatra army truck bumped along a dusty and winding country road, loudly making its way southwards, deeper and deeper into the Bohemian Forest.
    A crescent moon adorned the starry sky above, shedding some weak light on the woody hills and dales of southern Bohemia. Tall pine trees loomed threateningly over the narrow road which meandered through the forest and along the ever steeper hillsides. The truck had left the last human settlement over seven miles ago, penetrating the sprawling woodlands further.

    The thunderous roar of the old diesel engine was eardrum-piercing, but after over four hours of driving, the passengers grew accustomed to it.

    There were five passengers apart from the driver; four Executors and Narbareck.
    Only the latter didn’t seem to show any signs of fatigue due to the journey whatsoever, though Kotomine Kirei held pretty well himself.
    The remaining three men weren’t doing so good, and were suffering from nausea and back pain after having spent the last four hours sitting on a hard wooden bench in the back of the truck. Kirei mostly just stared absentmindedly through the rear opening at the winding road behind them.

    Narbareck, who was in the deepest corner of the truck, just behind the driver, was sitting calmly with her eyes closed and humming some obscure melody to herself.
    Her black Peter Cross was resting on her chest again, rather eye catching when set against her white sleeveless shirt.
    With her hands stuffed nonchalantly into the pockets of her coat, and wearing a blissful smile on her face, she puzzled her colleagues; they were on a hunting mission which would pin them against one of the most powerful Ancestors, and already inside the vampire’s territory, yet she was completely laid back and calm, as if they were on a harmless field trip.

    Seeing the other three Executors eying the leader of the Burial Agency in disbelief, seeing them squirm and sweat in bewilderment, Kirei couldn’t help but feel slightly gleeful.
    He wondered whether Narbareck acted like this on purpose in order to unnerve her companions. His lips twitched a little, as if starting to curl into a smirk, but he quickly regained control of himself.
    He sneaked a peek at Narbareck, worried that she might have seen him, but thankfully for Kirei she still had her eyes firmly closed.
    He didn’t really want to hear any more of her poisonous remarks; the conversation he had with her during their ride from the Vatican to the Rome Airport drained him of much of his mental energy.

    In order to suppress the tide of dark thoughts that had assaulted him after her final question, he tried his best to focus on the mission at hand; running over the battle ‘plan’ ( which was really mostly vague guidelines, making Kirei think that the head of the Burial Agency placed little importance on detailed strategies, and mostly relied on her own flexibility, planning things on the go ), going through the map of the place with which Narbareck provided them, to make sure that he has all the route memorized, and fumbled with his cross necklace out of sheer boredom.


    Suddenly the truck stopped, and the passengers all bounced a little at this unexpected halt.

    “This is it,” came a muffled voice of the truck driver, and the four Executors immediately rose from the benches and stepped out of the truck. Narbareck followed them after a few seconds, seemingly in no rush.

    The Executors took out a large crate from the truck and started distributing its contents among themselves; MP5 submachine guns, bayonets, pistols, and, of course, Black Keys - their armaments were truly formidable.
    Kirei, however, did not take any firearms, opting for only arming himself with a load of Black Keys.

    Narbareck raised an eyebrow at him as she took one suitcase out of the truck:

    ”Aren’t you going to take any other weapons, priest?”

    ”These will do,” he assured her, stretching his neck a little to overcome the stiffness that took hold of his body during the journey there.

    “Suit yourself,” Narbareck said and opened the suitcase.


    Inside was a most dizzying collection of knives that Kirei had ever seen.

    Two M1905 long army bayonets, over a foot long; two shorter M1 bayonets; tactical knives; a large Swiss pocket knife; a fruit knife; and, the jewel in the crown – a pair of cutlasses. They were over fifty inches long, with a silver basket-guard, and the wide curved blade was decorated with elaborate patterns near the hilt.

    Narbareck had all this weaponry blessed and coated in holy water back at the Vatican, after the Mass at St. Anne’s church had ended. Even in the hands of a less skilled fighter those would be extremely lethal anti-vampiric tools, and with Narabreck being the one to wield them, it was guaranteed that they’ll wreck havoc among the heretics.

    There was something else Narbareck had gotten after the Mass ended and the four Executors left the church – she took out a small bundle out of her pocket and threw it to Kirei.

    “Here, take this, priest. We might have a need for it soon.”

    ”What’s that?”

    ”You’ll see. Put it in your pocket for now, and be ready to take it out at a moment’s notice.”

    “Alright,” Kirei said and obediently placed the package into the pocket of his coat.

    Narbareck took her knives out of the briefcase and arranged them in numerous pockets and compartments on the inside of her coat.
    She then took out a pair of leather sheathes from the case, hung them on her back with their belts crossing on her chest, and placed her cutlasses in the scabbards.
    The only things left in the truck were two silver briefcases belonging to Kirei and Narbareck. Kirei’s bore a coat of arms of the Assembly of the 8th Sacrament; Narbareck’s was blank. She pulled her fingerless leather gloves tighter over her hands, took the two cases out of the truck, and handed over Kirei’s to him. Now they were good to go.

    “Alright men, it’s time,” she commanded, “Kotomine, you stay behind me at all times. The rest of you watch the flanks. Move out.”

    Her silver case in hand, and her long black coat fluttering behind her in the gentle breeze, she headed boldly into the thick forest before her.
    The four Executors followed after her.

    The truck driver continued to gaze after them until they all disappeared into the darkness of the woods, and then drove back to the sleepy town of Vimperk. He would return here later in the morning to pick up those who survived the hunt.

    (...)


    As the team went deeper and deeper into the forest, they started to feel their hearts sinking, and the thicker the trees became the more did a feeling of dread creep into their minds.
    The starry sky was no longer visible as the sprawling branches of the black pines covered the skies completely. Even in the open space the pale moonlight wouldn’t be enough to properly illuminate their path, let alone in the belly of this monstrous forest.
    It was pitch black, but Narbareck had issued a strict order not to use any flashlights so as to avoid revealing their position. And while she had no problems finding her way around the forest in the dark, the four Executors who followed her were less skilled, and could just barely keep track of the silhouettes of the trees and their companions.

    The company slowly advanced southwards, navigating their way over creeks, crevices, logs, and ever steeper slopes of the hills of the Bohemian Forest.
    But neither the pitch black night nor the challenging ground bothered the men; they were used to operating in difficult terrain and testing their stamina to their maximum.
    What ate away at the minds of the Executors, and what strained their nerves almost to the breaking point, was a thick miasma that covered the entire forest. Like a suffocating, toxic mist, it covered the entire land. They could feel it from the moment they entered the woods, and with each passing step and with every minute they spent in the forest, the terror gripped their hearts tighter and tighter. They were anxious to get out, just a step away from running back and out of this cursed forest.
    However, they kept pressing on; both out of their discipline and sense of duty, and because they feared their team leader more than they dreaded the forest.

    In stark contrast to the nervous twitches and frightened glances of the Executors – save for Kirei who, albeit feeling very uncomfortable, wasn’t really overtaken by terror of the forest like the other three men – Narbareck showed no signs of being affected by the forest at all.
    There was no nervousness in her movements, no fear in her eyes; if anything, the deeper they penetrated into the forest, the more excited she seemed to get. The arduous journey through the woods did nothing to wear her down, and she energetically ran down the hill sides, climbed the rocks with ease.

    Kirei wondered if her twisted, evil mind somehow protected her from the effects of the forest’s miasma. However, a question quickly ( and involuntarily ) popped into his mind about why he, too, showed resistance, after which he quickly cleared his thoughts and tried his best to just focus on navigating through the pitch black forest.

    The Executors who followed her from behind couldn’t see it, but Narbareck’s eyes gleamed in the darkness with thrill and joy. While the others were numbing down with each passing step, her heart pounded faster and faster – after sitting idly for a year, she was finally back outside. Living for the hunt, she couldn’t wait to finally catch her prey. She could barely suppress her bloodlust at that point.

    However, no matter her enthusiasm and her itching to fight, Narbareck was not satisfied. Even as she speeded through the forest, she didn’t fail to keep notice of her surroundings; rather than mindlessly dashing forward, she kept a close eye on the terrain. And what she was noticing didn’t please her.

    Finally, after they had climbed yet another hill, and ended up in another valley, she had to come to terms with her suspicion.

    “Stop. This is of no use – we’re going in circles.”

    The Executors’ hearts skipped a beat as they stopped dead in their tracks. They said nothing, but their bewildered looks spoke louder than words.
    Kirei approached Narbareck, distressed but still firm:

    ”What’s going on?”

    ”The bounded field is literally throwing us off the trail. We’ve passed this exact place already.”

    ”How is that possible!? We’ve been constantly going south, I’m sure.”

    ”Yeah, well, the boundary is probably messing with our sense of direction. At this rate we’re never going to get past it and find the castle.”

    ”Then what the hell are we gonna do?” asked one of the other three Executors, a dark-haired man with a slight Spanish accent, who had overheard the conversation between Narbareck and Kirei.

    “Relax, kid,” she said with a condescending grin, “this is nothing unexpected.”

    ”Nothing unexpected!?”

    ”Yes. I thought something like this would happen. What? You guys didn’t honestly think we’d be able to storm an Ancestor’s castle just like that?”

    “But...”

    “Oh, quiet, I’m trying to think!”

    Narbareck put her briefcase down on the ground and walked a few steps away from her men, crouching down on a nearby boulder covered in moss as she fixed her gaze on the thick wall of trees at the far end of the valley.

    A few seconds passed in silence, with the Executors exchanging nervous glances. Kirei crouched next to Narbareck and followed her gaze.

    “What do you see?” he asked, straining his eyes to see past the faint silhouettes of the faraway trees.

    “Nothing,” came a cold reply. Narbareck clenched her fist, straining not only her eyes now, but all of her senses.
    “But I can feel it.”

    ”Feel what?”

    ”Don’t rely on your eyes. Try to hear it. And sense it.”

    Kirei listened to her advice and closed his eyes. Surprisingly, his mind got much more focused, and he strained his nerves to try to ‘feel’ what was in the woods. It didn’t take him long to get some results.

    The miasma was deathly suffocating now, swirling around the valley even though the air was completely stagnant. The darkness was tangible and he had an ominous feeling of something hostile approaching them. There were no footsteps to be heard, no vibrations of the ground to be felt, but he was sure – something was coming.

    ”We’ve been discovered,” Narbareck said and stood up.

    Kirei was a little impressed to see that she wasn’t wavering in the slightest; her eyes were stern and determined, her fists clenched and her muscles tense, ready for action.
    He looked back towards the three Executors – they had obviously felt that something was terribly wrong, too, as they got deathly pale and clutched their weapons more tightly.

    “What are we going to do?” Kirei asked in a hushed voice.

    “I had hoped that it wouldn’t come to this, but it looks like we have no choice,” the silver-haired woman said with a sigh, and turned to her men. She started issuing orders quietly but resolutely:
    “Alright, on your guard! Form a circle! Prepare your weapons and stick together. Don’t do anything without my order!”

    “As you command”.

    “And you,” she said, turning back to Kirei, “Put your case and your weapons aside for the moment. Time for you to play the role of a virtuous priest.”

    ”What do you mean?”

    ”Take out that thing I gave you earlier.”

    Kirei blinked once before the wheels in his head finally turned. He quickly reached into his pocket and took out the small bundle.

    “Unwrap it, quickly.”

    Her order was unnecessary, though, as Kirei did just that as soon as he had taken it out. He was expecting to find some weapon, but his expectations were off the mark – wrapped in some dirty cloth wasn’t any kind of weapon, but a candle.

    “A... candle?”

    ”Not just any candle. Take a closer look.”

    Kirei looked down at the object. Even in the pitch black, he could see the Greek letter ‘alpha’ carved just an inch or two beneath the fuse. It was only a fragment of a candle, though, as it was clear that what he was holding was merely the top part of it.

    “I took the liberty of borrowing the portion of the candle in St. Anne’s church after the mass. Thought it could prove useful.”

    ”This is a...”

    “... a Paschal candle, yes. I didn’t want to use it unless the push came to shove, but we’re out of options right now.”

    ”And what do you need me for?”

    ”Well, using this requires a virtuous priest,” she replied with a grin, “I trust that you know the Exultet?”

    “Of course.”

    ”Then move, and quickly! Get in the centre of the circle and set the candle up. Here’s a lighter, but only use it once you’ve finished the incantation.”


    Without another word, Kirei took the lighter from Narbareck and moved into the circle, surrounded by her and the other three Executors. Feeling the threatening darkness coming closer by the second, he wasted no time.

    He fell on his knees, stuck the candle into the ground, and started reciting the Exultet, the holy prayer of the Paschal candle:

    ” Accept this Easter candle,
    a flame divided but undimmed,
    a pillar of fire that glows to the honor of God.”


    The miasma crept closer to them, and the stagnant air dried up completely.

    “Let it mingle with the lights of heaven
    and continue bravely burning
    to dispel the darkness of this night!”


    One of the Executors started shivering, and the other coughing.
    Narbareck narrowed her eyes even more. Her gloves creaked as she started twitching her fingers, ready for action.

    Kirei continued with his chant, unperturbed by the outside world. He completely focused his mind on the prayer, kneeling before the white candle:

    “May the Morning Star which never sets
    find this flame still burning...”


    The Executors released the safeties on their weapons, looking around nervously.

    “Christ, that Morning Star...” the chant went on.

    Kirei’s voice did not waver, and not a single drop of sweat appeared on his forehead. Narbareck bit her lip.

    “...who came back from the dead...”

    There were silent creaks in the forest just a dozen yards away from the group, but they echoed like thunder.
    Narbareck bent her knees a little, like a predator ready to jump on its prey.

    The Executors raised their weapons, fingers on the triggers.

    “...and shed his peaceful light on all humanity...”

    As Kirei started reciting the final sentence of the chant, the rustling became louder and closer.
    Narbareck reached back and drew out her cutlasses.

    “...your Son, who lives and reigns for ever and ever.”

    He lit the lighter and brought the flame to the fuse of the candle.

    ”Amen.”


    An explosion of light erupted in the middle of the forest.


    As strong as a lightning bolt, a pillar of blinding whiteness rose from the candle. All five of them were left dazzled by the sudden flare.

    A shockwave spread in all directions from the Paschal candle, obliterating the bounded field that covered the forest. Within a few seconds the formidable defences of Gransurg Blackmore’s castle lay in tatters, and it was left without any magical protection.
    However, it didn’t mean that it was left completely defenceless.

    While the candle continued to shine brightly, its powerful light illuminating the whole valley as if it were daytime, the initial explosion of light subsided within a second or two, and the five agents of the Church opened their eyes again.

    The sight that greeted them was that of hell.


    Only a few yards away, like a tsunami heading for the coast, a sea of the Dead was quickly advancing towards them. Dozens – no, hundreds of ghouls were coming at the intruders, thirsty for human blood. With the magical boundary of the forest obliterated, they lost their stealth and invisibility.

    However, even without their protection, they still had the upper hand – not only did they have numerical superiority over the hopelessly outnumbered agents of the Church, but they managed to creep up to a distance of only a few yards by the time Kirei destroyed the bounded field. Even though they could finally see their enemy, it seemed as if it was too late for the Church’s vampire hunters to change the course of Fate.

    But Narbareck had no intention of giving up.

    “FIGHT!”

    With that battlecry, she plunged into the advancing tide of the Dead, swinging her silver cutlass above her head.

    There was no need for her ‘encouragement’ though, for the Executors opened fire as soon as they could see their targets. Their nerves were already at the breaking point when Kirei had finished his incantation, and they pressed the triggers of their weapons the second they saw the enemy in front of them.

    But it was all rather disorganised on their part; they panicked, shooting wildly into the mass of bodies in a desperate attempt to fend them off. Their volleys did manage to hold back the advancing enemy a little, but too many bullets were being spent, and too many of them failed to hit the heart or the head, so the wounded ghouls merely continued marching towards their enemies.
    The Executors had really lost their heads, and just randomly sprayed intense salvos rather than calming down and shooting in precise, controlled bursts.

    It didn’t take long before their panic started costing them their heads; one of the Executors got overwhelmed by the advancing Dead while he was reloading his submachine gun. Another one followed him within a few seconds after emptying the clips of his pistols.


    All of this unfolded so quickly that Kirei had barely stood up and took out his Black Keys when the second Executor had succumbed.
    Kirei wasted no time, nor did he allow his mind to be overcome with fear and panic. He faced the faceless crowd of the Dead and plunged into them with no hesitation, tightly clutching the Black Keys between his fingers.

    With a swift swing of his right arm, the sacred blades tore one ghoul’s head and neck into three pieces, and its lifeless corpse collapsed into a pool of blood on the ground.

    The Dead did not back away after this; if anything, they only rushed faster towards the priest. He cut them down without mercy.

    One ghoul was cut in half, the other pierced through the heart; another two killed in one stroke through their stomachs, followed by a swift and powerful cut upwards that spilled their entrails, collapsed their lungs, and pulverised their hearts.

    Pulling his blades from the decomposing corpses of his latest two victims, Kirei noticed two ghouls running towards him from the flank; with an explosive move of his right arm, he launched three deadly steel missiles towards them. Each Black Key hit its mark. The ghouls’ heads were split open and their brains splattered over the roots of the trees.

    Just as he had drawn three more Black Keys from his jacket, ready to fight a new wave of the Dead, Kirei took a quick peek behind him to see how the remaining fighters were doing. The third Executor, the raven-haired Spaniard, had already been devoured by the living dead, who were now descending upon the only other survivor on the other side of the opening.

    Kirei followed the tide of the ghouls with his gaze until he managed to locate their target.

    There, alone in the middle of the army of the Dead, stood Narbareck.

    Even the cold and collected Kotomine Kirei felt his jaw dropping a little at the sight. He was left speechless and in awe.


    Her eyes were glowing with the thrill of the hunt, with ecstasy of killing, and her wide and gleeful grin revealed her two shining fangs. It was truly a face of a demon.

    She moved around as if dancing, cutting down her enemies without a single pause or break to catch her breath. She wielded her two silver cutlasses with such skill and such speed, that Kirei could only see a bright silvery blur from time to time.

    While Kirei cut his enemies down with cold precision and deadly efficiency, Narbareck played with her prey. As opposed to Kirei’s quick and short blows, she danced around, making elegant yet unnecessary moves as she chopped the ghouls’ heads down.
    Whereas Kirei always aimed for the lethal spots, Narbareck would often toy with her enemy, chopping one limb at the time, obviously drawing immense pleasure from the act. She jumped, and dodged, rolled over, but with each and every move she made sure to make a cut or a slash, always landing a blow without fail.
    Kirei only saw a glimpse of her fight, as he had to quickly turn back to face his own opponents, but had he continued to watch, he would have been in for a spectacle.

    Narbareck brought her cutlasses together, placing them horizontally to the right of her body. With one explosive swing, she decapitated the ghoul in front of her, and even cut the throat of another coming from her left.

    She then spread her blades, and with a turn to her right and an accompanying swing of her right cutlass, she slashed another ghoul over its face. This slash was followed by a joint cut of its stomach with both blades as she crossed her arms in opposite directions.
    Then she placed her cutlasses on the ghoul’s shoulders, crossing the blades right under its bleeding throat, and with one fell swoop, cut off its head.

    Two Dead who were charging at her back were each met with a blade through their forehead as Narbareck just pointed her cutlasses backwards over her shoulders and, with a short and strong jerk, pierced their skulls.

    Another ghoul charged at her from the front, but with a lightening fast high kick of her leg, she literally blew its head off.

    Rotating her sabres a couple of times in her hands, she stepped forward and cut off the arms of the ghoul coming at her, then decapitated him, too.
    Two Dead used the opportunity to grab her by the shoulders - she just bent her knees, taking her centre of balance lower, and with a powerful swing from her hips, she pushed them both face first onto the ground, using her elbows and upper arms to send them on their merry way.
    The two ghouls quickly got up to their knees and turned towards her, huge trails of saliva coming out of their gaping mouths.
    Narbareck just shoved her cutlasses into their gobs and pierced their brains.


    As the indomitable number 1 of the Burial Agency continued to effortlessly cut down one ghoul after the other, the battle drew to a close.
    And it was just as well – Kirei was down to his last six Black Keys, so he opted to use them for hacking rather than throwing them at the Dead, even though this manner of fight was rather strenuous since the weapons were difficult to wield that way.

    Still, over a dozen ghouls paid with their heads for testing Kirei’s skills with the Keys; as the number one in his class, he wouldn’t have even had much problem beating the Dead with his bare hands ( something he was still a little reluctant to do, considering the overwhelming number of enemies he was facing ), let alone using the Black Keys for close quarters combat.

    Once he had dispatched the last remaining ghoul by turning on his toes and cutting him diagonally from hip to armpit – spilling all of its guts out in a bloody stream – Kirei took a deep breath and turned around to inspect the battlefield.

    The Paschal candle was still standing in the middle of the opening, casting eerie white light over hundreds of corpses scattered throughout the forest.
    A good portion of those had been taken out by Kirei, with some negligible contribution from the three dead Executors, but by far the largest part of the defeated ghouls had been killed by Narbareck.

    She stood there, some two dozen yards away from Kirei, looking perfectly calm. Her breathing was only slightly faster than before the fight, and she didn’t seem to have even broken a sweat. Even her ponytail was still in perfect shape, despite all her acrobatics during the carnage.
    Her black coat was splattered with lots of blood, though, as were her boots and her face. Huge drops of sticky, crimson red liquid were slowly dripping down the tips of her curved blades. The ornaments on the cutlasses were now almost completely obfuscated by the blood of the ghouls.

    And yet, she appeared to be completely composed.
    No, she didn’t just seem calm – she looked happy.
    There was an expression of blissful satisfaction on her face; even the burning fire in her eyes seemed to have subsided a little following the carnage.

    “Are you alright?” said Kirei, more out of habit or politeness than actual concern.

    She didn’t immediately reply to him, waiting for a few long seconds and drawing a deep breath before she spoke:

    ”Of course. Do I look hurt?”

    “You are covered in blood.”

    “So are you, priest.”

    Kirei looked down on his clothes and saw that Narbareck was telling the truth; his black jacket and trousers had a few big blood stains. His shoes were completely soaked in blood, and there was even some on the edge of his golden cross. He quickly wiped it on his sleeve until the cross was speckles and shiny again.

    “I’m surprised you’re still alive,” she said, walking over to the part of the ground that wasn’t covered in corpses, and wiping her bloodied blades clean against the grass.

    “It seems Cardinal Naro really did give me one of his best men. Unlike Cardinal Rossi,” Narbareck said with a snigger, looking over the dismembered and disfigured corpses of the three fallen Executors.

    Her words and her attitude towards the dead men disturbed and angered Kirei. His righteous mind rebelled at such a pathological lack of any empathy.
    Her attitude was just wrong.

    “Show some respect for the dead.”

    “What good is my respect gonna do them? They’re already dead.”

    “Don’t you feel anything for your fallen comrades!?”

    Kirei's voice trembled with anger. However, he was perfectly aware that his anger at Narbareck and his brash attitude – for which this maniac might just take his life yet – were not really motivated by righteous feelings or respect for the dead. On the contrary; by questioning her for her lack of empathy, he wanted to avoid confronting his own lack of feelings for the dead men.

    His mind, molded by the righteous and virtuous teachings of his father and the Church, screamed that he should be feeling sorry for the fallen Executors, and be disgusted by Narbareck.

    But he just couldn’t.


    Narbareck once again looked deep into his eyes, and once again they told her the truth.

    ‘I wonder to whom your question is directed, Kotomine Kirei,’ she mused to herself, but refrained from saying it out loud. Instead she said:

    ”Of course not. They weren’t my comrades. Why should I feel anything for them?”

    ”Not your comrades?? Then why did you ask us for our help on this mission!?”

    ”Oh, I didn’t really need you. All I needed were the things that are in these briefcases of ours. That’s why I contacted your Cardinals. Well, I guess I did need someone to carry the other case – thought even that I can do myself - but as for the rest of you...” she said, waving nonchalantly towards the corpses of the Executors, “It was really just a whim. A meat-shield, if you will. You must have already realised that I could have taken care of this bunch all by myself.”

    “So you asked for men knowing fully well that they’d die? And you didn’t even try to do anything to help them!?”

    ”And why should I help them? Those are their lives, not mine. Why should I be responsible for them?”

    ”Because... you’re our leader, are you not?”

    ”I think you got this all wrong, Kotomine,” Narbareck said,
    “I’m not your ‘leader’. You just happen to be following me. I prefer to hunt alone, to be honest. But considering the enemy I’m hunting now, I thought that having someone to serve as a distraction would be smart. If you don’t like this, you’re free to hand over that briefcase to me and go back home. I can go on from here on my own.”

    Kirei was at a loss for words. He knew that Narbareck was a monster, but her complete lack of emotion for anything besides killing disturbed him greatly. He was disturbed because, in a way, he felt like looking at himself in a mirror. His nature, which he constantly fought against and which he despised, was not that different from hers. Looking at the devil and seeing some of your own reflection was bound to disturb anyone.

    However...

    “No.”

    ” ’No’ what?”

    ”I won’t just back off and leave you with this case unguarded,“ he said, walking over to the candle, next to which he had left the silver briefcase, "I am a member of the Assembly of the 8th Sacrament, and as such it is my duty to safeguard this holy relic.”

    The familiar combination of confident voice and empty eyes once again made Narbareck grin in sick amusement.

    “How admirable. Truly you’re a virtuous man, Kotomine Kirei. Well, then, let’s go,” she said, and picked up her own briefcase, “the dawn is approaching and the castle is nearby. Let us bring this hunt to a close.”

    Her silvery hair and her blood-stained coat fluttered behind her in a sudden gust of cold wind as she made her way across the valley and towards the hill to the south.

    After standing still for a while, Kirei picked up his case, collected some Black Keys from around the field, took a pistol from one of the dead Executors, and followed after her.


    ***
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    Author's notes:

    - Just to clarify, since some people were wondering about it - the story is set in June 1992. Hence 'Czechoslovakia', which existed until 1993.
    Also, the 4th HGW occured in 1995/1996, and Kirei left the Church to study under Tokiomi ~3 years prior to the War, so there.
    My attempts at being a (fanfic) writer:

    Eclipse - a Saber Alter oneshot
    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
    Boundary of Loneliness - Ryougi Shiki/Alphard Al-Shua oneshot. Lemon-flavoured

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    Part VII



    The castle of the Lord of the Black Wing, Gransurg Blackmore, didn’t fail to impress Kirei; a black behemoth towering over a ravine at the bottom of which ran a wild stream, it instilled a sense of awe and terror into everyone who saw it.
    Well, almost everyone; Narbareck didn’t seem to pay much attention to the gargantuan castle. She barely even spared a glance at the countless towers and turrets that rose menacingly towards the dark skies above.
    Kirei couldn’t afford to gaze at the castle for long, either, for he had to watch his step as the two made their way along the ravine.

    A narrow goat path led up and down along the length of the canyon and towards the great castle. In the pitch black darkness of the night one could all too easily miss their step, which would momentarily send them tumbling down the rocky slopes and towards the river.
    Such a fall was something only a lucky few could hope to survive, and Kirei preferred not to test his fortune there.

    The two pressed on at a fast pace, and the massive black walls and towers of the fortress grew ever taller with each passing step.
    The goat path eventually brought them to one of the doors that opened right over the ravine and the river, and which led into the castle’s sprawling underground dungeons and cellars, dug throughout the hill and the cliff on which the castle stood.

    Much to Kirei’s surprise, the door at the end of the path was open.

    “What is this?”

    ”What is what?”

    “The door. From what I understood from your instructions, we were supposed to break in here.”

    ”You understood wrong.”

    ”So this is normal??”

    ”Yes. The fact that these doors are open means things are still going according to plan. I thought that the whole operation had been discovered when those ghouls intercepted us in the forest, but apparently not.”

    ”Or this could be a trap.”

    ”Yeah, that’s a possibility, too.”

    ”And you still think we should just enter and go on as planned?”

    ”Sure. We won’t know if it’s a trap if we don’t enter; and in case that it’s not a trap, there’s no problem, right?”

    “Right... but, how come this door is open?”

    ”We have an accomplice on the inside.”

    “You’re cooperating with someone from Blackmore’s coven?”

    ”Yeah. He’s been providing us with valuable info for over a year.”

    Kirei decided not to comment on the fact that the Church was cooperating with heretical monsters such as vampires. Besides – seeing as how the Burial Agency had already openly admitted a Dead Apostle Ancestor into its ranks, this sort of covert cooperation seemed rather insignificant. So he decided to say nothing.

    “Alright, let’s go,” said Narbareck, lighting a torch that hung on the wall, and stepped into the castle. Kirei followed her with a torch of his own.
    “Be prepared, priest.”

    ”Huh?”

    ”We may have dispelled Blackmore’s bounded field over the forest, but this castle is another matter. There’s no doubt that they’ve detected our presence when we entered just now. Keep your Black Keys close at hand.”

    ”Of course.”

    ”And try not to get separated. I still need that relic in your briefcase, you know?”

    ”I am touched by your concern for me.”

    Narbareck stopped in her tracks and turned around at Kirei’s last remark. He expected her to be angry, but to his surprise she didn’t seem to be at all insulted. On the contrary; a faint grin was on her face again, and that probably disturbed him way more than her anger would.

    “My... losing your inhibition already?”

    ”...What?”

    “That sarcastic little comment of yours. It’s the first time you said something like that.”

    ”I just... it suddenly came to my mind.”

    ”Of course it did. It’s only natural,”

    ”What’s that supposed to mean?”

    ”Oh, nothing, nothing,” she said, feigning a serious expression, “come – we’ve got to hurry, priest.”

    Narbareck had memorised the map of the building perfectly, and they navigated the underground maze of corridors without ever hitting a dead end. However, the closer they got to the upper levels, the higher was the likelihood of someone seeing them.

    Two floors up from their starting point they came across first of the guards.
    It was the first time either of them had come into contact with Blackmore’s minions, and their appearance left Kirei and Narbareck a little shocked and confused, even though they had heard of them.
    Members of Blackmore’s coven were very unlike normal vampires, just like their master was unlike the other Ancestors. They all strived to model their bodies after those of the birds, and each one of them was unique in their own way; their jaws were shaped like bird beaks, they had feathery wings on their backs, and their feet were shaped similarly to those of birds.

    ‘Freaks’, Narbareck thought to herself.

    Unable to go around them, and not knowing when the guards might move, they had no choice but to confront them.

    “How many Black Keys do you have?” Narbareck whispered, peeking around the corner of the hall in which the two guards stood, blocking their way.

    “Twelve.”

    “Alright, you do the honours.”

    She backed away and let Kirei come forward. He inspected the situation, measuring his distance, waiting for the guards to move into a favourable position.
    Once they were shoulder to shoulder, he took out two Black Keys from his jacket. There was a small glow as he materialised the holy blades, and it did not go unnoticed; one of the guards took a step towards them, observing the wall behind which the two hid with a suspicious eye.
    Kirei knew that there was no time for hesitation.

    He sprang out of his cover and threw the Black Keys in the direction of the vampires, praying for the weapons to hit their targets. They did.

    The first vampire got hit in the neck; as his throat started to bleed, his skin quickly became dry like sand, and his eyes turned from red to black. He fell onto the floor and turned to dust the moment his body hit the cold cobbles.
    The second vampire was killed even more quickly; a hit right in the middle of his chest turned his heart to ashes, and he died on the spot.

    Once the guards had been taken care of, Narbareck emerged from around the corner to join Kirei.
    Just then a third guard appeared at the far end of the corridor.

    He looked at the dead bodies of his two comrades, then at the two agents of the Church standing next to them.
    Kirei and Narbareck were, naturally, a little astonished when he appeared, but their shock paled in comparison to the terror that possessed the vampire once he saw Narbareck – the black Peter Cross on her chest became well known among the Dead Apostles after her first, and successful, Ancestor hunt over a year ago.

    As soon as she took a step forward the bird-vampire ran back as fast as he could, screaming and screeching in terror:

    ”Alarm, alarm! Intruders!!!”

    “Oh, dammit, he’s gonna alert the whole damn castle now,” Narbareck said with a sigh.

    “I think we should hurry.”

    ”Yeah. This is gonna get messy, priest. You sure you’re up to it?” she teased, drawing one of her cutlasses from her back.

    “Let us hope so, “ Kirei replied, and drew another three Black Keys.

    They exchanged a small nod of trust, clutching their weapons tightly, and then hurried down the corridor and up the stairs behind it, their nerves tense and ready to react at the slightest sign of danger.


    It didn’t take long for those signs of danger to appear.

    After climbing four flights of stairs and running down a corridor at the top of them, they found themselves in the entrance hall of the castle.
    It was an enormous room, shaped like the letter ‘U’, spanning the height of two floors, and was almost a hundred feet wide.
    Two staircases led from the ground floor to a pair of galleries, each supported by a series of ornate marble columns, which converged like a horseshoe at the far end of the hall. From these galleries numerous corridors led to other parts of the castle.
    But, most important of all, the gallery opened into the great hall, or the throne room, through a large, ancient wooden gate located at the point where the curves of the galleries converged.

    And Narbareck was willing to bet that that was where Lord Blackmore was. After a long and arduous hunt, her pray was finally within her reach.

    There was only one problem.


    The entire entrance hall was filled to the brim with Blackmore’s winged minions.

    The way to the gates of the great hall was guarded by well over a hundred vampires.
    Kirei was left in a slight shock after witnessing the sight – the winged vampires screeched and shouted like harpies, and there was an unmistakable killer look in their burning, red eyes. He looked at Narbareck to see her reaction; just as he had expected, she wasn’t at all perturbed by the situation, assessing it with an emotionless, steel gaze.

    However, her look did not remain blank for long – wheels turned quickly inside her head as she calculated the odds, weighing her strength against the awaiting battalion of enemies.
    Kirei could see fire of excitement starting to rise in her emerald eyes as thirst for blood started to take over her mind again. However, Kirei was worried.

    Yes, Narbareck had managed to kill some two hundred Dead on her own in the forest without even breaking a sweat, but each of these vampires was worth a dozen ghouls, at least. While the Dead had their numbers and their sheer stubbornness on their side, they were still little more than dumb, walking corpses.

    These vampires, on the other hand, possessed intelligence, cunning, monstrous strength, and weapons, even if it was only in the form of razor-sharp claws.
    Taking even up to a dozen of them wouldn’t be that hard of a task for an Executor as skilled and experienced as Kirei, and Narbareck was a monster far above his league, but he still had doubts. There were two of them against a hundred of those winged beasts.
    He looked a little indecisive, and Narbareck noticed that.

    “Are you scared?”

    “Not really. I just doubt that we can win.”

    ”You’re not scared?”

    “No.”

    “Then you are a fool.”

    ”Why is that foolish?”

    ”Because only a fool would not be afraid of these monsters.”

    ”And you? Are you afraid?”

    She snickered at his question, and then replied, her eyes burning with hellfire:

    ”No. I’m the bigger monster.”

    With those words, she dropped her suitcase from her left hand, drew out her other cutlass, and charged into the mass of vampires.
    Kirei dropped his own case, made a sign of cross on his chest, and followed after her, clutching six Black Keys between his fingers.


    The vampires were being mown down before Narbareck like wheat.

    One of them swung his right arm at her, intending to rip her head off with his long, steel-hard claws, but she blocked his arm with her left cutlass, and pierced his neck with her right. The winged monster didn’t even have the time to be stunned by how a mere human had managed to match him in strength and stop his blow. It turned to ashes after being smitten by a blade coated in holy water, and its remains fell to the ground.

    Narbareck wasted no time, and swung her right cutlass in a wide arch to the right, cutting the throat of another vampire. A third monster came at her from the front, trying to ram through her chest with his claws, but she dodged the blow, cut off his arm, and then stabbed him in the face.

    While the pile of ashes beneath Narbareck’s feet started to grow larger and larger, and she penetrated deeper into the mass of bird-vampires, Kirei wasn’t slacking off, either.


    Though the Black Keys really weren’t the best weapon to use in close quarters combat, he was too short on them to be able to afford to use them as missiles. So instead of just nailing him with a single Black Key, he cut off an attacking vampire’s arm and then decapitated him.

    Two more vampires came from the front, one attacking him from above and one from his right. He crouched and then threw himself to the left to avoid both blows. He rolled on the floor a few times to get to a safe distance, then rose back to his feet and took a defensive posture; his arms crossed in front of his chest and the Black Keys pointing over his shoulders.

    His enemies weren’t going to give him any respite, and charged at him with full force.
    Kirei didn’t remain idle, but stepped forth towards the vampires. One of them aimed straight at his head, and the other swung from the left and below, up towards his spleen.
    Kirei followed the trajectories of their claws closely, waiting for the right moment to spring into a counterattack.
    When the vampires were just one step away from him, he finally retaliated; he spread his arms apart in one tremendous swoop, moving his right horizontally to the right in order to intercept the claws which were aiming for his head, and his left diagonally down to protect his side.
    It all happened in a blink of an eye.

    The vampire who was aiming for his head had his right arm sliced into four pieces, and the other one lost his hand and whole forearm.
    Kirei breezed between them, his arms stretched behind his back, then turned on his heel, and, bringing his arms together again, chopped both their heads off.


    He had no time for celebration, though, as five more vampires headed his way to replace the fallen ones.
    He was being driven towards the stairs, where even more vampires awaited. Kirei realized that he would be overwhelmed and killed off in less then a minute if he tried to fight them all at once at close quarters, and so immediately made a decision.

    Before the two decapitated vampires even fell to the ground, the deadly Executor launched a volley of Black Keys towards the incoming wave of enemies. All blades managed to hit their targets.
    Blessed steel pierced their chests, stomachs, and heads, and they all stumbled and then fell to the ground at Kirei’s feet, turning to ashes.

    He turned towards the stairs, creasing his brows and weighing his chances. All he had left were four Black Keys and a pistol with a single clip, and considering the number of enemies he was facing, those supplies were sure to dry up within seconds, a minute at most if he opts for more hand-to-hand combat.
    Still pondering what to do next, he looked down from the stairs to see how Narbareck was doing.


    He immediately noticed that the ranks of Blackmore’s minions had grown much thinner since the time they entered the hall.

    It was difficult to judge how many had fallen since they all turned into ashes, but he was certain that she had already taken some twenty or thirty vampires out, and was showing no signs of stopping or even slowing down. Even though her current enemies were much tougher than the Dead that she annihilated back in the woods, she dispatched them with about the same amount of effort, but much more vigour.

    Five vampires encircled her, but she just stepped over one of them to break out of of the circle and then proceeded to cut each one of them into pieces, tearing their limbs from their bodies, chopping their heads off, cutting their hearts out.

    Another vampire managed to grab her from behind, and threw her a dozen yards across the hall. She didn’t rise back to her feet at first, and just crouched on all fours, fixing her eyes on the winged monster.
    Her eyes were burning with an uncontrollable passion, and she looked like a beast ready to leap forward after its prey. Even the vampire who threw her, a tall beast with giant gray wings, wavered a little after she looked at him like that.
    He hesitated for a moment, and it cost him his life.

    Narbareck immediately jumped at the opportunity, rising back on her feet and charging forward like a runaway train.
    She crossed the distance in a split second, her superhuman speed taking the vampire completely by surprise. She shoved her left cutlass into his abdomen, and her right into his neck. She then violently pulled both and simultaneously spilled his guts and chopped his head off.

    In one moment the vampire was standing, ready to take Narbareck on, and in the next his lifeless body fell to the floor like a puppet with its strings cut, and crumbled into dust.


    But Narbareck didn’t stop to gloat over her vanquished enemy; more attackers came into her sight, more prey she was dying to kill.

    She lunged forward to dodge a blow, rolling two times before standing up and turning around to face her enemies who were now just mindlessly screaming and swinging at her, without order but also without fear.
    However, their bravery did them no good.

    Narbareck parried their blows to the side, then turned on her heel as the two assailants stumbled forward, having been thrown out of trajectory and out of balance. She quickly lowered her cutlasses into their backs, right between their shoulder blades.
    She held her blades inside them for a few seconds, took them out, and kicked the vampires with her right leg. More dust fell onto the ground, and more blood stained Narbareck’s swords and her clothes. Her black leather coat was now almost completely drenched in the sticky vermillion.


    Most of these feats went unnoticed by Kirei, as he had his own foes do face.

    He was halfway up the stairs, and on top of them stood three winged monsters, screeching and shouting at him. They had the advantage of the higher ground, and trying to just push through them might turn out to be a mistake.

    Of course, he could probably easily eliminate them with a volley of Black Keys, but then he’d be down to only one. While he was pondering what to do, the fact decided for him; the three vampires started to advance towards him, and spreading out in order to encircle him.

    He was in a very unfavourable situation, and so decided to resolve it in the quickest and simplest manner possible; he took out three Black Keys and threw them in the direction of his attackers. Two of them hit the bulls-eye, piercing the vampires’ hearts. However, the third blade failed to deal a lethal blow, and only hit the vampire in his leg. It was still effective, for the wounded monster fell down the stairs and broke its neck, removing the need for Kirei to finish it off himself.


    His triumph was short-lived, however, as a whole new group of vampires blocked the top of the stairs.

    There were even more of them now, and Kirei was quickly running out of weapons. He drew out his pistol and sprayed the beasts with lead. His efforts were useless, though, as even those bullets that managed to find their targets failed to deal any significant damage; the vampires quickly regenerated such superficial wounds.

    Left with only a single Black Key and his own fists, Kirei took a step back, ready to launch his last missile. The vampires wasted no time, having realized that he was almost completely out of ammo, and charged down the stairs.

    Just as Kirei was about to throw the last Black Key between the leading vampire’s eyes, their charge stopped and the five monsters collapsed into ashes before Kirei. It all played out in a split second, and it took him a moment to realise what had happened.

    “Don’t use that, priest, not yet.” Narbareck shouted.

    Kirei nervously glanced over the railing of the staircase at the hall below.

    Narbareck was standing in the middle of it, surrounded by piles of dust and ashes.

    She had stopped the charge of the vampires with a volley of her knives and bayonets, and Kirei was amazed that she had managed to hit all of her marks considering the circumstances. Still, there was no time for idle chat.

    “Thanks.”

    ”You’re welcome. Now move on, I’ll meet you at the gates.”

    With that, she returned to slashing and hacking, while Kirei dashed his way to the top of the stairs.

    There were only three more vampires left in his way; the others deemed Narbareck to be the bigger threat, and focused their attention on stopping her. It suited Kirei just fine.

    He took a stance some seven or eight yards away from the vampires, facing them sideways, one arm in front of him, the other behind his head. He stared at his opponents with steel eyes, inviting them to come to him.

    Kirei completely cleared his mind, now no longer a human being, but merely a machine whose only purpose was to kill. The vampires shuddered a little when they saw the abyss in the eyes of the priest. Nevertheless, they couldn’t wait forever – they gathered their courage and charged at him.


    Taking the first vampire out was easy enough – it came straight at Kirei, trying to strike before he could even react, putting its faith in its superior speed and power. Kirei was quick to punish this overconfidence.

    He dodged the blow by moving his torso out of the line of attack, and then, as the vampire came just inches away from him, struck him in the stomach with his knee.
    The blow was monstrous – organs were crushed inside of the soft belly, blood vessels ruptured, and blood started gushing out of the winged creature’s mouth. Its fate had already been decided, but Kirei still managed to find space to deal a finishing blow, and broke the vampire’s neck.

    Then came the second vampire’s turn. He was coming right behind the first one, but he lost his vigour when he saw the young Executor defeating his comrade with a single blow.

    Kirei took advantage of his moment of hesitation, and delivered a skull-smashing blow to the vampire’s head with his right leg. It failed to kill the monster, so he grabbed it by the neck and threw it over the edge of the gallery and down to the hall below. A sound of its neck breaking was drowned in the noise of the other vampires below as they kept attacking Narbareck.

    Kirei took guard again, locking his eyes with those of the last remaining vampire; this one seemed braver than the second, for he didn’t waver even after seeing the Executor dispatch the first two with his own bare hands. Kirei expected some trouble from his third opponent, but was still confident enough in his own skills that he opted not to use his last Black Key yet.

    The two were locked in a stand-off for a while, and then they both broke out of it at once, leaping forward towards their opponent.
    The vampire swung from Kirei’s left, aiming for his neck. He couldn’t dodge to his right because the enemy already started taking a swing with his left leg, so Kirei had to dodge that, too. He managed to slow down with his last step, and changed his course a little to the left at the last moment.

    He parried the arm to stop its deadly claws from tearing his head off, and got behind the vampire’s back.
    He grabbed him by the neck with his left hand, pulled him back and out of balance, and as the vampire started falling back and towards the ground, Kirei swung his hips and delivered a tremendous elbow-punch to his chest.
    The vampire died on the spot as its ribcage got completely crushed.

    Kirei threw the dead body aside where it promptly turned to ashes, and leaned on the railing of the gallery to see the battle below as it rapidly approached its end.


    Narbareck was fighting bare-fisted now, too, her cutlasses tucked into the leather sheathes on her back. Kirei couldn’t help but feel hopelessly outclassed as he watched her wreck havoc among the remaining vampires.
    She, too, utilised some sort of martial art, but considering her strength, no special techniques were needed, at least in Kirei’s opinion.

    She knocked one vampire’s head off with a single punch. She ripped the other’s arm off with a tremendous jerk, and broke the third one’s back just with the force of her arms, not needing to use her knee and hips to help her snap the monster’s spine.
    Another vampire got its jaw ripped out. The fifth one she hit in the stomach with such a force that her arm ripped all the way through his abdominal wall, intestines, blood vessels, and finally tore through his back to the other side.

    The vampires’ numbers were dwindling fast as the goddess of death continued to slaughter them one at a time, in the most savage and gruesome manner imaginable, to the point of strangling one vampire with his own intestines.


    Finally, some two minutes after Kirei had beaten his final enemy, Narbareck extinguished the life of the last remaining vampire in the hall.

    Breathing heavily, she looked up towards Kirei. She looked positively ecstatic.

    Her leather coat was now soaked in blood and entrails, her boots, gloves and trousers were in a similar condition, and her sleeveless white shirt had turned crimson. Even her silvery hair got spattered with some red. The only clean and white things on her now were her fangs, which she was showing with small, distorted smirk.

    “You done?” Kirei asked in a flat voice.

    “Yes,” she said shortly, her breathing now almost back to normal.

    She went to collect the two briefcases which they had left by the side entrance to the hall, and then climbed up the stairs to the gallery and joined Kirei.

    “Say, what was that martial art you used?” she aked him, looking genuinely curious.

    “Baijiquan, “ he replied, “I learned it from my father.”

    “Heh, is that so? Well, in any case, it’s a rather impressive fighting style. I’m thinking of taking some classes once I’m back to Rome. It seems rather... efficient.”

    “Thanks.”

    ”Oh, and before I forget: please give me that last Black Key of yours.”

    ”What?”

    “I’ll be needing it. I’m thinking of performing a special trick for the lord of this castle, and I’m afraid I can’t do it with my cutlasses.”

    ”Alright... Here you go,” Kirei said and gave his last remaining blade to Narbareck.

    “Thanks. Well. Ready for the grand finale?” she said to him as she handed him his briefcase.

    He replied with a small nod.

    “Alright then, let’s go.”

    ***
    My attempts at being a (fanfic) writer:

    Eclipse - a Saber Alter oneshot
    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
    Boundary of Loneliness - Ryougi Shiki/Alphard Al-Shua oneshot. Lemon-flavoured

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    This is what I get for not keeping up with threads properly.

    Read up through V; it's very good so far, and I'm going to very happily slot much of what you've presented here into my version of canon (and probably end up very confused in a few months, wondering where this information came from, heh). One complaint I do have is that Kotomine's voice seems a little informal. I.e., "Don't talk bad about my father." should probably be something closer to "Do not speak ill of my father.", or something. Maybe that's just me, though. Really loving this. Your Narbareck is so delightfully murderous.

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    Part VIII



    The gates of the castle’s great hall flung open, and two agents of the Church bravely ventured into the belly of the monstrous castle.

    There, lined up against the walls and gathered around the towering marble pillars, were the elite of Blackmore’s court.
    They were obviously the vampire aristocracy, for their attire was elegant and they wore expensive jewelry. They, too, had bodies altered in the image of birds, but unlike the grotesque soldiers that had guarded the entrance hall, these vampires were much more dignified and graceful in their appearance. One could not in good faith compare them to angels, but neither were they monstrous harpies.

    Some of the vampires, though, wore steel rather than silk, and carried spears and swords; those were Gransurg Blackmore’s personal bodyguards, an elite group of vampires that was, within the coven, second only to Blackmore himself in power and prestige.

    The black lord of the castle was sitting in a tall, black throne at the opposite end of the hall. His appearance was at the same time both grotesque and regal, and his presence eclipsed those of the other vampires in the coven.

    Kirei’s eyes were drawn away from the monumental pillars and the vaulted ceiling, away from the burning eyes of the vampire nobles that glittered in the shadows of the flickering fires like pieces of charcoal. Sitting calmly in his throne, glancing absent-mindedly over the hall towards the two intruders, the great Ancestor Blackmore demanded Kirei’s undivided attention.


    A strange hybrid between a crow and a human, he had wings spanning almost six yards across. His feet were like those of a bird, and he had long black claws in the place of his fingernails. Locks of his long, black hair, almost completely obscured his face. His stone-cold lips were closed tightly, but tips of his two long fangs were still visible in the corners of his mouth.
    Kirei could feel the gaze of the vampire’s hidden eyes piercing him like a dagger.

    “Greetings, Lord of the Black Wing,” said Narbareck as she descended the stairs to the floor of the throne room.

    Kirei followed, but remained a step or two behind her. The gates of the hall closed shut as soon as they had entered. Kirei couldn’t help but feel like they had just walked into a mousetrap.

    “Quite a lovely castle you’ve got here,” Narbareck continued, after getting no reply from Blackmore or anyone in his retinue, “But I’m afraid your entrance hall will need a good cleaning.”

    “So you’ve defeated them all. You do live up to your reputation, Director.”

    ”Yeah. You might wanna think of finding yourself some better minions. This lot barely managed to put up a fight.”

    “Cocky and a braggart. Well, I hope you enjoyed it. For it was your last one,” said the vampire lord.

    His words were threatening, but he uttered them with what was bordering with pure boredom.
    The two warriors of the Church that had just obliterated his castle’s defences and guards seemed like merely two annoying mosquitoes that only managed to stay alive for so long because he hadn’t bothered to deal with them seriously.
    He said it not as a threat, but as if it were fait accompli.

    But Narbareck had different ideas.

    “My last fight? But there are still some of you left alive.”

    “Yes. However, I do believe that a ‘fight’ has to be two-sided. Whereas you will just get killed right away. I can promise you that.”

    “So confident in your powers?”

    My powers? I’m afraid you got it wrong; I’m not going to waste my strength on vermin such as yourself. Guards.”

    Blackmore nonchalantly waved his hand, and six of the winged vampires wearing steel armour and helmets stepped forward. These were each as strong as half a dozen of those vampires that Narbareck had slaughtered in the entrance hall, but Kirei had by then stopped worrying about any of these vampires posing a real threat to Narbareck.

    Save for the Lord Blackmore himself, he doubted that any creature in this castle was a match for her.

    Narbareck herself didn’t even bat an eye as the six vampires formed a line between her and Blackmore, pointing their spears at her.

    “You think these are going to stop me, Black Wing?”

    “I think that you won’t be leaving this castle alive,” Blackmore said, his voice suddenly colder than the steel in the hands of his bodyguards.
    Narbareck just shot him a grin of definace.

    The vampire lord sniffed in contempt and said, in a flat voice:
    ”Kill them.”

    His guards obeyed, and took a step forward.

    Narbareck was waiting for just that.

    She took out the Black Key that Kirei had given her out of her coat. The guards took another step forward.
    Then, in one swift motion, Narbareck twisted her body, stretching the arm in which she held the Black Key, and with another twist in the opposite direction, threw the blade at the group of advancing vampires.

    In the split second during which she executed her throwing technique, everyone, including Kirei, snickered at her – a single Black Key wouldn’t do much against six heavily armed guards, so her action was rather pointless. It seemed more like an act of desperation.

    However, they were all proven wrong.


    The holy blade cut through the air with a loud swish, traversing the distance in only a fraction of the time that it would take with a normal throw.

    Then, as it collided with the ground under the guardsmen’s feet, all hell broke loose.

    There was a massive explosion, accompanied by a flash of blinding yellow and white light, and the entire throne room shook from the impact. Thunderous noise of the blast continued to echo throughout the castle for some time.
    Soon the banging in everyone’s ears stopped and the smoke over the impact site cleared, allowing everyone to see the effects of Narbareck’s attack - a large crater in the cobbled floor, and smoldering remains of the six vampires.

    No one in the room could believe their eyes. A single attack had obliterated six heavily armed vampires at once.

    It was the Burial Agency’s secret technique – “Iron Plate Effect” – which allowed them to utilise even regular Black Keys in the most deadly manner possible, and to wreck havoc among the heretics.

    Narbareck allowed herself a small and gleeful cackle, obviously proud of her handiwork and entertained by the disbelief of everyone present. Except Blackmore, who barely batted an eye over this sudden annihilation of some of his strongest soldiers.
    Even if Narbareck’s deadly technique surprised him, the ancient vampire lord retained his poker face.

    “What did you do?” he asked calmly.

    “I killed them. Isn’t it rather obvious?”

    ”That brash attitude... funny - you remind me of someone I know.”

    ”You mean Merem? Yeah, his mouth is sometimes too big even for my taste.”

    “Right,” Blackmore said tiredly, “You know, you are quite talkative for someone just seconds away from death.”

    ”Well, carpe diem and all that; better have as much fun as I can before I die. But, you seem awfully confident for someone who just lost a quarter of his guards.”

    ”And you seem awfully confident for someone who’s out of their holy weapons. You have no more Black Keys, you won’t be able to carry out that attack again.”

    ”Who says I don’t have any more of ‘em?”

    I do,” Blackmore said, his lips curling a few millimeters into a faint ghost of a smile.

    Narbareck and Kirei could feel a dark and menacing aura starting to spread from Blackmore; he was still perfectly still and composed, but his murderous instincts had started to boil beneath the cold and seemingly disinterested surface.

    The dragon was finally starting to awaken.

    “Tell, me, Director,” the Ancestor said, rising to his feet, “do you believe in Hell?”

    ”I’m not particularly religious, I’m afraid.”

    ”And yet you carry a cross around your neck.”

    “A trinket I got from my mother.”

    “My. I never would have thought that you’re a sentimental type.”

    ”Well, I’m full of surprises.”

    “Indeed. And, coincidentally, so am I.”


    With that, Blackmore took a step forward, his crimson eyes fixed on Narbareck.

    His each step echoed eerily against the cold stonework of the ceiling. The killer aura was nigh tangible now.

    Narbareck was still wearing a cocky smile on her face as she faced off the approaching vampire lord, but beneath her confident facade, her heart started pumping faster and faster.

    “That’s good. I love surprises. The routine wears me down.”

    “Insolent until the end, huh?” Blackmore said as he kept walking towards her.
    He sniggered condescendingly at Narbareck, who was now only a few yards away.

    “Well, that’s just how I am.”

    “I’m looking forward to ending your life,” he said. And he meant it.

    Narbareck had damaged his prestige by invading his own castle, his safe haven for almost one thousand years. She was humiliating him in front of his court by talking back to him like that. And she was now challenging him to a duel with her; not only forcing him to waste his strength on her, but insulting him by trying to present herself as being an equal to him.

    It bothered him, bothered him more than he’d be comfortable to admit. She had to die, and quickly. The look in Blackmore’s eyes could freeze one’s blood in their veins.

    And yet she remained defiant.

    “I’m looking forward to seeing you try, Gransurg Blackmore.”


    That did it.

    Narbareck uttered his name on purpose, and her provocation worked.

    “You will die here and now.”

    Blackmore’s voice sounded distorted, and as if coming from a large distance.

    In an instant, the whole scenery changed.


    Instead of in the middle of the throne room, Narbareck and Blackmore were standing atop one of the castle towers.
    Glancing around to get a grip of the situation, Narbareck noticed that the crescent Moon was no longer shining in the sky. That alone wouldn’t have meant much had she not also noticed that all the stars had disappeared, as well. And the sun was nowhere to be found, either, even though by her calculation the dawn was about to break at any second. In fact, there was nothing to be seen in the pitch black skies, not even the tiniest cloud or a speck of light.

    It was the vampire lord’ turn to grin cruelly now, as Narbareck looked around with a puzzled look in her eyes.

    “So... this is your power, eh, Blackmore?” she said, clutching her briefcase tighter, and looking at the charcoal black sky above.

    A familiar miasma had started to fill the air around her, only this time it was much more suffocating. The invisible toxic fog was so dense that she could practically feel it on her skin. A slight pain in her chest alerted her to her heart’s ever stronger and faster beating.

    The Lord of the Black Wing shot her a sadistic and gleeful grin, enjoying the sight of Narbareck’s helplessness.

    “Yes. Welcome, my lady, to Nevermore,” Blackmore said, and waved his hand at the sky.

    Suddenly the heavens moved.


    Narbareck looked up and saw that there was a massive flock of black birds swirling above the castle. They seemed to have appeared out of nowhere, and their numbers were increasing by the hundreds with each passing second. The perfectly synchronised movements of the flock left Narbareck with an impression that it was all one single and huge organism.

    “Impressive,” she said, taking a step back away from Blackmore.

    Her movement did not escape the vampire’s attention.

    “Are you thinking of running away?”

    ”Of course not,” she replied, taking another step back to secure the distance between herself and Black Wing.

    “There is no escape, you know? You will die here.”

    ”I’d very much prefer to live, actually.”

    “Even now, you insist on being insolent... I assure you that you’ll pay for it.”

    ”Well, I’m not seeing you doing anything yet. Are you all talk, Blackmore?”

    She took yet another step back. Now, she had a good distance, she assessed.

    “Be careful, Narbareck. Do you really crave death so much? Because...” he said, pointing towards the swirling flock above them, “the birds dancing in my sky are vicious only to the dead.”

    As he uttered those words, the toxic miasma started to suffocate Narbareck. Her sight got blurry, and her limbs felt numb.
    She fell onto her knees, pressing her silver briefcase against her chest. Through the creeping darkness came Blackmore’s voice, freezing the blood in her veins:

    ”Time to die.”

    Looking up, she could hear the gigantic flock of birds quickly descending towards her, the deafening flapping of their wings making it unable for her to hear her own thoughts.

    Death was coming for her. It was only seconds away.

    But she would not just give in. Not without a fight.

    “No.”

    She laid her briefcase in front of her and opened it.
    Before her was her last weapon, and her last hope. A black book.

    She hurriedly pushed the case aside and put the book in front of her. Blackmore saw it, and started chuckling:

    ”A Bible? I think it’s a little too late for prayers, don’t you think?”

    She paid no heed to the demonic vampire, and flipped through the pages of the bible in frenzy. It was a race with time, as the menacing black cloud crept closer and closer, inch by inch. The noise of the wings grew louder, but she removed her mind from the outside world as much as she could, focused only on finding the right page.

    Finally, near the very end of the book, she found the passage she was looking for.

    ”I thought you didn’t believe in God. And in any case, God will not help you now,” Blackmore said with a sneer.

    It suddenly brought a grin to Narbareck’s face; she looked up at the vampire, her eyes glowing in the darkness, and her lips curled into a twisted smile.

    “It is not God’s help that I’m seeking.”

    Blackmore stepped back, shocked by the expression of her face, which in turn filled her heart with sadistic glee. She turned her eyes back to the pages of the book.

    Indeed, as death crept nearer, Narbareck didn’t turn to God for help. It was not His grace that she could save her now. Her salvation lay in this, most powerful, and the most unholy weapon that the Church possessed.


    Alien Stomach World.
    A Holy Scripture made out of a defeated vampire’s innards.
    The ultimate weapon against the Dead Apostles.


    Narbareck traced down the page to find her passage.

    As the roar of Blackmore’s army came within a few yards of her, she began reciting her chant:

    The seventh angel sounded his trumpet, and there were loud voices in heaven, which said: ‘The kingdom of the world has become the kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ, and he will reign for ever and ever.’

    As the holy words of the Apocalypse rolled over her tongue, there was a bright flash of light radiating from the black Bible. It spread through the floor, down the walls of the tower, and further out, eventually engulfing the entirety of the castle like a spider’s web.
    The blue glow was dispelling the darkness of death.

    Blackmore’s eyes widened in terror; he knew he had to stop Narbareck, to prevent her from reading the rest of passage. He didn’t know what exactly would happen if she finished reading it, but he had a strong feeling that the result would be disastrous for him.
    And yet, he felt completely paralyzed, and could do nothing.

    Narbareck continued to read, her left hand spread across the Bible, and her right clutching the black cross on her chest:

    ”Then God's temple in heaven was opened, and within his temple was seen the ark of his covenant”

    Earth started to shake, and the black heavens began crumbling.
    Blackmore was petrified with horror as his world, his mighty Reality Marble, began to collapse.

    He turned to Narbareck, who read out the last sentence:

    “And there came flashes of lightning, rumblings, peals of thunder, an earthquake and a great hailstorm.”

    She raised her head, and locked her gaze with Blackmore’s. Her eyes were shining with fire of the pits of hell. She grinned one last time, and screamed from the top of her lungs:

    ”AMEN!”


    And with that, the world around them disintegrated.
    The cloud of black birds was swallowed by a pillar of blinding light that rose from the black book. A hailstorm of fire brought the dark heavens tumbling down onto the castle.
    An earthquake split the hill beneath it into two, and within seconds the bottomless abyss swallowed the great fortress, along with Blackmore and Narbareck.


    Seconds later, the two were back in the castle’s throne room.

    While Narbareck expected to land into a hostile environment, with Kotomine already killed by the remaining vampires, everyone was in the exact same place as before they left, making her realize that all the events that transpired in Nevermore had in the real world occurred within a fraction of a second.
    As far as the outsiders were concerned, the two probably never even left.

    While she remained on alert and ready to react to the slightest sign of danger, it turned out that there was no need for it.
    The entire court remained silent and motionless when the two reappeared in the normal world, and Narbareck managed to put the Alien Stomach World back into the briefcase without anyone noticing it. She rose to her feet, calmed her breathing a bit, and finally looked up to see what had happened to Blackmore.
    As soon as she saw him, she realised why the rest of the people present were so quiet and seemingly paralyzed.

    The Holy Scripture hadn’t just obliterated Blackmore’s Reality Marble; it also directly injured the vampire. While Narbareck, the wielder of the Scripture, returned without a scratch, Blackmore was not in very good condition.
    He looked like he had just been run over by a truck; collapsed on the floor, full of bruises, with a small trail of blood coming out of his mouth. He was barely conscious, and in no condition to even stand up on his own, let alone fight. It was a total victory for Narbareck.

    However, there were vampires there who did not plan on letting her get away with it.

    “Men, to arms!” one of the armed vampires said, drawing his sword.

    Several other vampires joined him, pointing their spears at Narbareck.
    But not all of them.

    “Now,” she said, looking at a vampire who was standing behind the eager captain calling for action.


    The vampire nodded and sprang into motion - he drew his sword and stabbed the leader of the guards in the back. Other guards, who had not yet answered their captain’s call to arms, took this as their queue and suddenly sneaked behind the backs of their comrades who were loyal to Blackmore and slaughtered them, cutting their throats or stabbing them through their chests.

    Kirei and the rest of the vampire court could not believe their eyes; the traitorous guardsmen, whose leader had been cooperating with Narbareck, executed a coup in a split second. They threw the bleeding bodies of their comrades onto the ground and the corpses quickly turned into ashes, leaving only empty armour and weapons behind them.

    The whole thing played out so fast that most of the people present were left with their eyes and mouths opened wide while their brains processed the things that had just happened.

    While shock still reigned, Narbareck took the opportunity and approached the leader of the traitors:

    ”It is done. You’re the head of the coven now, and Blackmore is ours. With that, our deal is fulfilled.”

    ”Yes.”

    ”We’ll be taking Blackmore with us now. I trust we won’t be having any trouble on our way back.”

    ”Of course not. I give you my word.”

    ”Hm...”

    Narbareck turned away from her conspirator, one who had been supplying the Burial Agency with information about Blackmore for the past year, with a look full of mixed feelings; she would like nothing better than to slaughter them all now – and she could do it, albeit surprise would be crucial – but she recognised the strategic benefits of having someone loyal and dependent on you in charge of what was still one of the greatest covens in Europe.

    She walked over to Kirei, who was still in a state of shock after seeing a Dead Apostle Ancestor utterly defeated and then betrayed, all within a few seconds. She snapped her fingers before him to bring him back to Earth.

    “Listen, time for you to put that thing in your case to good use; go over there and secure Blackmore. We’ll be taking him with us to the Vatican.”

    Kirei obeyed her without a word.

    He approached the battered and barely awake Ancestor, and the remaining vampires cleared his path. He kneeled by Blackmore’s side, opened the briefcase, and took out the relic hidden inside.


    The Relic that Narbareck had requested from the Vatican was a holy shroud – the crimson red Shroud of Martin.

    Its special ability was to seal magical powers of the user, and generally act as a ‘lid’ for all things pertaining to magic, and it was for this reason that Narbareck had Kirei bring it along. While the Shroud alone wouldn’t be nearly enough to contain the power of an Ancestor ( especially one as strong as Black Wing ), in his current weakened condition Blackmore had no strength to resist the effects of the Shroud.
    This would suppress his Curse of Restoration for a while, and allow the Church to transport him back to the Vatican; once there they could easily seal him in appropriate premises.

    Kirei wrapped the vampire from head to toe, except for his wings, and with that the two were good to go.


    However, just then, the gates of the throne room swung open.

    A third party had appeared in the castle – a group of men clad in black, lead by a young girl.

    ***
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    Part IX


    The sudden arrival of the third party left everyone astonished. Narbareck quickly got back to her senses, though, and stepped forward to confront the newcomers.
    The group consisted of four men in black, led by a young woman in her early teens – she couldn’t have been older than thirteen, Narbareck figured.

    The girl had an aristocratic air about her, entering the hall and walking down the steps as if she were a princess invited to a ball. Her attire screamed of richness, too, for she looked like she had just come from a game of polo: tall riding boots, a long white coat, and a pair of white gloves. She contrasted completely with the men who followed her, who wore plain black suits and longcoats.

    Narbareck approached the girl, who looked at her with a mixture of mistrust and repugnance. Narbareck noticed this and chuckled a little.

    “Sorry for my disgraceful appearance,” she said in fluent English, pointing at her blood-soaked clothes,
    “Didn’t have time to change. I guess I'd have put more effort into it if I had known that we had such esteemed guests coming. Though, I’m afraid that you’re a bit late to the party.”

    Narbareck’s laid-back attitude and cheerful banter did not manage to erase a grimace of disgust from the other girl’s face. It entertained Narbareck a little.

    “May I ask with whom do I have the pleasure of speaking?” she said.

    After a brief hesitation the other girl replied, in a very posh British accent:

    ”Lorelei Barthomeloi. Vice-Director of the Mage’s Association. And I assure you, the pleasure is not mutual.”

    “What a rude thing to say! Especially to a stranger.”

    ”But you’re not a stranger. I know very well who you are.”

    “Oh? And how come you’ve heard of me?”

    ”The word of your infamy has spread even to the faraway Clock Tower, Director.”

    “Looks like I’m pretty famous.”

    ”If you wish that sort of fame for yourself,” Lorelei said, not hiding her disgust with the woman in front of her, “Murderer. A monster.”

    ”You flatter me too much.”

    ”Who, among other things, skewered a bishop in the middle of Milan.”

    “I must admit, that was one of the best experiences of my life,” Narbareck teased, shooting a twisted and insincere smile at Lorelei, “Maybe I’ll tell you all about it one day.”

    ”I hope not. I’d rather if I don’t have to meet you lot ever again.”

    “Such harsh words, Miss Barthomeloi. I’m sure that we’d get along.”

    ”I doubt it.”

    “Heh. Hatred for your own kind?”

    ”I beg your pardon?” said Lorelei, genuinely shocked by Narbareck’s remark.

    “Your own kind. Killers. Murderers. Psychopaths. Vampire hunters. You see, Miss Barthomeloi, “ Narbareck said, switching to her business-like tone, “we know about you, too. The Church is just as informed about you lot as you are about us, if not better. Not to mention that the Barthomelois are generally renowned for their attitude towards vampires.
    “So it amuses me greatly when I see someone such as yourself despising me for being who I am. Or is that perhaps because, unlike your ladyship, I am of common birth?”

    “I’d have the same opinion of you if you were from a noble house. Or, just as likely, despise you even more.”

    ”Heh. Well, I think I have a better guess. Mind if I try?”

    Narbareck took Lorelei’s silence as permission to continue.

    “We both know that you’re really bothered with who I am. What the hell do you care about some heretical bishop that got skewered in Italy? Nah – I think that you’re just pissed that I snatched your prey from you.”

    To Narbareck’s teasing smile, Lorelei shot back a cold stare of contempt.

    Narbareck was right, of course – what bothered Lorelei was that the Church’s dogs had gotten here before her, and took her prey from her before her very eyes. To young lady Barthomeloi, there was no greater insult than ruining her hunt.
    She gritted her teeth in anger, but her eyes remained as cold as ice.

    “Seems like I’m right,” Narbareck said, “After all, we are birds of a feather.”

    “I don’t have time for this nonsense”, said Lorelei, cutting Narbareck short, “We’re here for Gransurg Blackmore.”

    ”Well, like I said, I’m afraid you’re a little too late for the party. We’ve already got him, and we’re taking him to the Vatican.”

    ”I don’t think so. Blackmore is ours, and I’m taking him to London for some questioning.”

    ”Think whatever you want, Missy, but we’re not giving Blackmore to you no matter what.”

    ”No matter what?”

    ”No matter what.”

    There was a long and unnerving silence as the two girls locked their eyes in a stand-off.

    Even if she was managing to control it, Lorelei was burning with anger at Narbareck for stealing her prey and injuring her pride. She would have liked nothing better than to cut the woman in front of her into pieces.

    “You know,” said Lorelei, “We could kill you all right now.”

    “I’d like to see you try,” Narbareck replied sweetly.

    “You are outnumbered, and weary. We would crush you.”

    ”I’m sure you would. And do say, what happens then? Do you think this little incident would just stay a secret?”

    ”The Church would not go to war with us over someone like you.”

    ”Maybe. But this isn’t really only about me. We’re supposed to bring a Dead Apostle Ancestor back, and I can promise you that the Church would react about that; we already have something of a collection in Rome.
    “So if you really want that war with the Vatican so much, then be my guest.”

    Again the two girls tried to stare each other down.

    The green eyes of the Church’s finest killer locked with the brown eyes of the de-facto leader of the Clock Tower. It was an incredibly tense situation, just a spark away from carnage and a possible war between their great organisations.
    Clock tower magi, vampires of Blackmore’s coven, and the Executioner Kotomine Kirei, all intently followed the stand-off between the two women, anxiously anticipating their next move. Lorelei creased her brows and clenched her fists; Narbareck’s heart started beating faster again as she prepared herself in case Lady Barthomeloi decides to call her bluff.


    In the end, Lorelei decided that she just can’t stand Narbareck no matter what.


    With just a twitch of her right arm and a whisper of the incantation, she attacked.

    A bright blue bolt of lightning appeared in the open palm of her right hand for a fraction of a second, and then she launched it at Narbareck. However, she was too slow.

    Narbareck had anticipated that Lorelei would do something like this, and threw herself out of the bolt’s trajectory with speed that surpassed the capacity of the human eye to follow and observe. Just as the lightning hit the ground where she stood moment ago, Narbareck appeared right in front of Lorelei.

    Lady Barthomeloi’s surprise was cut short as Narbareck immediately punched her into the abdomen, right beneath the diaphragm.
    The impact was monstrous; most of Lorelei’s abdominal organs were pulverised into a shapeless mash, and she was sent flying upwards at a tremendous speed. She hit the wall behind her, right above the gates, and the collision dented a crater in the stonework.

    However, Lorelei hadn’t lost her composure when Narbareck counterattacked – she had reinforced her back in a fraction of a second after getting punched, so her spine was left intact after the impact with the wall.
    She poured as much prana into her Circuits as she could and quickly regenerated her crushed entrails. Blood vessels were patched back together, and destroyed organs reconfigured. All of this happened within just a few seconds.


    Before Narbareck could reach for her weapons, or even just step back a little, Lorelei struck back.

    Still pressed against the wall, she opened the palms of her hands, and aimed at her enemy.

    “Ardor indomitus!”

    A swirling torrent of pale blue flames shot out of her gloves and hit Narbareck.

    The raging firebolt punched the air out of her lungs and sent her flying back across the hall. She landed a dozen yards away, moaning in pain as she checked if there were any ribs broken. Her coat caught a bit of fire in few places, which she promptly extinguished.
    Meanwhile, Lorelei jumped ( or rather, fell ) down to the floor, massaging her stomach a little and spitting a some blood out.
    Her eyes, fixed on Narbareck, were shining with burning hatred.

    The silver-haired girl quickly rose back to her feet, drew her cutlasses out, and assumed a defensive posture. Narrowing her eyes, she started forming a plan of attack.

    However, Lady Barthomeloi was adamant not to give Narbareck even a slightest chance to land a second blow; she extended her arms towards her opponent, aiming at Narbareck’s head with the tips of her fingers.

    “Say your prayers, scum,” she hissed.

    A blue glow appeared around her fingers, accompanied by a muffled crackling noise.
    Narbareck tensed her muscles even more, anxiously awaiting Lorelei’s next move. She didn’t have to wait for long.

    “Percute, tonitrus de caeli! Inimicus meus ferve!!!”

    She recited the incantation quickly but clearly. The aria echoed throughout the throne room as she focused her mind on weaving the spell, her gaze piercing the foe in front of her. Prana surged through her body, her Magic Crest turned ablaze, and with a loud crack and a blinding flash, her magecraft materialised.

    Pale blue thunderbolts shot out of her fingers and towards Narbareck. The deadly lightning traversed the distance between them in a split second.

    However, Narabreck wasn’t intending to take a hit like the previous time.

    She jumped out of the line of attack, away from the raging torrent of light.
    Just as she evaded the first attack, Lorelei fired a second one.

    A murmur was all it took; one after another, Lady Barthomeloi started shooting a volley after volley of deadly thunderbolts at Narbareck, barely breaking a sweat as she poured out one high-level spell one after another. The blinding flashes made it difficult for her to see her target but she kept firing regardless, now relying purely on her instincts to aim.
    Her instincts served her well, and each salvo was right on target. Not only was her aiming accurate, but Lorelei fired at such a relentless pace that Narbareck wasn’t able to simply dodge the incoming attacks. She had to stand up and fight.
    Gripping her cutlasses tightly, she started her dance.

    The bystanders were left in awe at the sight of their duel; vampires, Enforcers, and a lonely Executor of the Church, all of them completely forgot about each others’ existence for a while, their eyes fixed on the tremendous clash of the titans that was playing out in the centre of the chamber.

    Each volley that Lorelei fired at her, Narbareck quickly deflected or cut off with her swords. Just like back in the forest, she moved in a series of elegant and precise movements. Her feet barely touched the ground as she danced around on the tips of her toes, sliding left and right, spinning around, dodging and lunging forward. It was even more impressive than her performances in the forest and the entrance hall.

    However, as awe-inspiring and effective her defence was, Narbareck was losing the fight.


    While others probably hadn’t noticed anything, Kirei managed to catch a glimpse of Narbarck’s face, and what he saw worried him.

    Her confident expression, her teasing grin, even the fire in her eyes – all of that was gone now. Her features were a mix of fear, nervousness, annoyance, and fatigue. Lady Barthomeloi was an exceptionally powerful opponent, and in her current state – tired after the previous fighting, and left without any trump cards – Narbareck was no match for her. All she could do in the face of Lorelei’s attacks was to defend, but even that could not go on indefinitely.

    Narbareck’s cutlasses were formidable weapons, but they were ill-suited for this type of fight. The holy steel could only fend off the blue lightning for so long, and with each salvo Narbareck could feel her weapons vibrating strongly as the blades were slowly getting chipped away by Lorelei’s tremendous attacks. And the grips were getting hot, too.


    Driven to the brink of defeat, Narabreck took desperate measures.

    As more blue sparkles appeared on Lorelei’s fingertips, announcing another attack, the silver-haired girl finally counterattacked.
    She threw her two cutlasses with all her strength, aiming at Lorelei’s head.
    The young magus smirked at her opponent’s act of desperation, and executed her attack - Narbareck’s blades were blown away to the opposite end of the chamber by the roaring thunderbolts.

    Lorelei’s gleeful smirk was erased in less then a second, though.

    Narbareck had barely let go of her treasured swords when she started the second phase of her counterstrike, lunging forward as fast as she could.

    She crossed the distance between the two of them in a few gargantuan leaps, moving so fast that only a handful of vampires present could keep track of her. Just as she was making the final step before reaching Lorelei, she reached down for her right boot, and drew a hidden dagger out of it.

    Her cutlasses hadn’t even hit the wall behind her when Narbareck suddenly materialised in front of lady Barthomeloi, clutching her dagger and pressing it against the young girl’s chin.


    The tide of blue lightning stopped.
    The throne room fell into eerie silence.
    The only sound was the heavy breathing of the two girls locked in a deathly grip in the middle of the chamber.

    Narbareck was pressing the razor-sharp tip of her knife against the underside of Lorelei's jaw. She in turn was pressing her hand against Narbareck’s stomach, ready to fire a lethal shot should Narbareck make any sudden moves.

    “Ha... ha... ha....”

    Narbareck panted in Lorelei’s face, catching her breath after an exhausting battle. She was about a head taller than her opponent, and stared at the younger girl from above, her eyes filled with hatred and frustration.

    Lorelei, too, was breathing heavily, stunned and disheartened at how Narabreck had managed to evade her attacks and check her like this. She creased her brows and gritted her teeth as she defiantly returned a hateful look to Narbareck.

    Two of Lorelei’s men surrounded Kirei, and the other two stepped towards their leader.
    Their movements made Narbareck press her dagger even harder against Lorelei’s skin. A painful sting prompted the magus to order her men to back down.
    After a bit of hesitation, they obeyed, and Lorelei turned back to Narbareck who, albeit still tired and nervous, seemed to have relaxed a bit.
    Still, she eyed Lorelei suspiciously and with open contempt.

    “Blackmore is ours,” she whispered.

    “Are you gonna die just to bring that thing back to Rome?”

    “It’s my prey. I’ll do with it as I like.”

    “Like hell it’s your pray. Blackmore belongs to us. Hand him over.”

    “We got here first. I beat him fair and square. So back off, bitch.”

    Gritting her teeth some more, Lorelei spread her hand more open, and Narbareck sensed sudden warmth against her side. She pressed her whole knife against Lorelei’s neck, the sharp blade now grazing the young girl’s throat, too.

    “Don’t be stupid.”

    “Blackmore belongs to the Association.”

    “Bullshit. He belongs to those who beat him. Quit being a brat and admit defeat if you have any dignity.”

    Lorelei bit her lip. A small stain of crimson appeared on the pale pink.

    She wanted nothing else but to kill Narbareck. She was just a step away from losing control.

    “I will kill you, scum.”

    “Then do it. Come on, kill me.”

    Teeth sank into the bruised lip even more. The time seemed to have stopped in the room as the two remained locked into a tense stand-off once again. This time, though, any attempt to fight their way out of it guaranteed their mutual deaths.
    Drops of sweat appeared on the foreheads of four magi in black. Kirei, too, eyed the situation and its observers with a nervous eye. Some of the vampires had left the throne room, but plenty had remained to watch the spectacle and to see how it ends.


    Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, the situation got diffused.

    Lorelei lowered her hand from Narbareck’s side, and sighed in frustration.

    “Fine! You can keep Blackmore,” she said, turning her eyes away from Narbareck’s, and biting her lip again to swallow her defeat.

    Seeing this only made Narbareck smirk triumphantly.

    However, she was honestly relieved that her opponent yielded. She felt like she would have simply fallen down on the floor from exhaustion had it continued for much longer.

    “Thank you for being so understanding.”

    ”Spare me. Right – men, let’s go.”

    Not in the mood to stick around Narbareck for even a second more, having to cope with her bitter defeat, young lady Barthomeloi just wanted to disappear from that wretched place as quickly as possible.
    The four men in black immediately obeyed their young mistress’ order and left the throne room.

    Lorelei followed them, and when she had climbed up to the top stair she turned around to Narbareck again:

    ”Don’t make me have to suffer your presence again. I’d appreciate it if you were to remain in whatever hole that you’ve crawled out of. If I see you again I will murder you.”

    ”That’s such a shame; I was hoping that we could talk again sometime,” Narbareck replied with an innocent look, now much more at ease and feeling coy again,
    “I think I might even come to like you, lady Barthomeloi. We are birds of a feather, after all.”

    ”Ridiculous!” Lorelei said and hurriedly left the throne room.


    There was another short silence after the departure of the five magi, which was just as abrupt as their entrance.

    “Right. Well, now that that’s taken care of – Kirei!”

    “Yes?”

    ”We’re done here. Grab that pile of shit over there and let’s go. I’m getting hungry.”

    ”As you wish.”

    Kirei pulled the unconscious body of Gransurg Blackmore from the throne and towards the exit, where Narbareck waited for him. Once he was out of the throne room, Narbareck addressed the remaining vampires, who had been left completely puzzled and bewildered by the recent events.

    “Well, ladies and gentlemen, it’s been fun. We’re off now. Pray that you never see me again.”

    She left the throne room, closing the gates behind her, and joined Kirei who had been waiting for her.

    “Ah... I’m really starving. Aren’t you?”

    ”Yes, I am a bit hungry,” Kirei admitted.

    “No problem. Let’s just go find that smelly old truck, and then I’ll treat you to lunch when we get to Vimperk. I think I saw a nice pub there last night; we should grab a pint or two to celebrate this. Deal?”

    ”Deal.”

    And with that, the two vampire hunters left the cursed castle.

    In the east, the summer sun had just risen over the horizon, painting the bleak skies with warm gold and blue.



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    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
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    Only one more to go...


    Unless you've already got a sequel planned out. There's more than enough monsters to hunt and serve as backdrops.
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    Yeah, there'll be a sequel. Sort of.
    My attempts at being a (fanfic) writer:

    Eclipse - a Saber Alter oneshot
    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
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    Epilogue


    It was still early morning. The usual frenzy and chaos hadn't gripped the heart of Rome yet as both the tourists and citizens alike had decided to indulge in an extra hour or so of sleep.

    The streets and piazzas were desolate, save for an odd taxi or a smelly old bus trotting down the still-cool asphalt, and some pigeons which were already starting to descend upon the city's myriad of fountains for a drink and a bath.
    However, albeit the city was still only starting to wake up, the same could not be said for the nature. The warm June sun was already up, poking over the roofs of even the tallest buildings, and casting its warm light over the Eternal City.

    The Verano cemetery was steeped in idyllic tranquility throughout the day, but at this hour it was even more peaceful than usual. The air was warm but not stagnant thanks to a gentle zephyr breezing through the pathways and colonnades. The sweet smell of ancient pines permeated the air and soothed one's nerves. Only one or two lonely visitors strolled beneath the thick black branches, walking along the tree-lined avenues softly and slowly, careful not to disturb the serenity of the cemetery.
    The only sound to be heard was the relentless staccato of the cicadas.

    In a secluded part of the graveyard, far from the areas frequented by tourists, a lone priest stood over a grave in silent contemplation. He was neither praying nor reciting a Psalm, but merely stood in front of the inconspicuous tombstone with a blank look, his empty and dark eyes fixed on a tiny picture near the upper left corner of the stone.

    The woman who looked back at him from the picture could not be called a beauty. She was sickly pale, her protruding cheekbones a sign of a disease, and her hair was whiter than snow. Her eyes, seemingly locked with the priest's, seemed weary but not sad.
    One could tell from only the small photo that the woman possessed great strength in spite of being obviously very sick.

    'Claudia Hortensia'.

    The letters on the tombstone were new and shiny, glittering under the rays of the bright summer sun. Stark contrast to the worn out picture next to it.

    The priest, Kotomine Kirei, had laid a single white rose on the woman's grave. He did so more out of politeness and duty rather than affection or mourning. As the matter of fact, he was unsure why he had even come to this place at all. The grave of his wife could only bring back painful memories and open wider the still fresh wound in his heart.
    However, the wound wasn't the one of a grieving man, mourning a terrible loss of his love. No – Kotomine Kirei did not once feel love for the woman that lay under the cold tombstone. And it was this that made his heart hurt and his mind to go into a turmoil.
    A failed experiment, that was all that she was to Kirei. An act of desparation in his frenzied fight against his nature. In his quest to become a normal human.

    Barely a week had passed since her death, and the memory of that day was already becoming hazy. Still, one thing he clearly remembered, the thing he was certain to remember for the rest of his life, was the feeling of disappointment and lamentation that gripped his heart when the frail woman took her own life.
    Lamentation over not killing her himself. Regret that he couldn't savour her despair after lowring a knife in her weak chest and proving to her, in her dying moments, that she was wrong about him all along. Despair as that saint realises that her efforts to save him were in vain since the very beginning.

    But he couldn't dwell on that memory for long.

    Remembering his feelings from back then only strained his already crippled mind. He felt like his escape had to come to an end soon. He couldn't keep running away from his nature for much longer. The death of his wife was definitely a turning point.

    His meeting with the devil called Narbareck was the second.
    He had to admit - she had frightened him. She could see deep into his rotten soul with a single look, and it terrified him. He was aware of his own nature all too well, but having it brought up and pointed out to him by someone else left Kirei shaken.
    What troubled him the most, though, was her attitude towards her own nature; accepting herself and acting on her wishes and impulses, with no regard to the moral code or fettered with the concepts of good and evil, she was the direct opposite to him, who had spent his entire existence denying his true self.
    The monstrous Director of the Burial Agency had shaken Kirei to his core.


    First there was his wife’s death.
    Then there was a meeting with the demon girl Narbareck.
    He wondered what God had in store for him next; whether there’d be a third pivotal point on his path, a third person to confront him about his nature, one who might finally push him over the edge.


    Such thoughts had preoccupied Kirei’s mind for the previous two days, ever since he got back to Rome from the hunt with Narbareck.

    Then, on the second night, a most extraordinary thing happened.

    Red markings had appeared at the back of his left hand, forming a strange pattern all the way from his wrist to his fingers. It surprised Kirei, to say the least, and left him thoroughly perplexed.
    Bewildered at this strange event, he had contacted his father Risei, who immediately flew in from Japan. The old man was bound to come here at any minute and take Kirei along to Turin. It was an unusual meeting place, far from Kirei’s quarters near the Vatican, but his father hadn’t asked any questions about it when they arranged it.

    The old priest was full of understanding for his son, no doubt thinking that Kirei wanted a bit of time to say farewell to his beloved wife before leaving the city. And, in a way, he was right; even Kirei had to admit as much.
    It was just his feelings towards the dead woman that father Risei got wrong.


    Kirei had completely lost track of time, so absorbed in his thoughts as he stood in the shadow of a large black pine before his wife’s grave that he wasn’t even registering the aria of the cicadas anymore.

    Finally, a soft pat on his shoulder woke him from his trance.

    “Kirei.”

    The young priest turned around without a slightest flinch, coming face to face with his father. The old man was squinting as usual, but he seemed fresh and energetic, and his black robes were perfectly neat as usual.
    Kirei greeted his father with just a quick nod.

    “Are you ready to go, son?”

    Kirei said nothing, his empty eyes fixed on a distant tree behind his father.
    His mind was still in turmoil, and he had barely registered his father’s presence.

    “Alright. Come – the Church has provided us with a car. The driver is waiting for us outside the cemetery gates. The train leaves in half an hour.”

    “You go on, father, I’ll be right with you in a moment.”

    The old priest hummed a little, looking at the simple grave behind Kirei. With a nod of understanding, he turned around towards the nearby alley.

    “I understand. Don’t take long, though.”

    Father Risei promptly left his son alone again, and Kirei turned back to his wife’s grave.
    The pale woman continued to look back at him from the worn-out photograph. The young priest found her gaze hard to bear.

    After a short while, he finally took a step back.
    Sparing one last glance at the grave, Kirei turned on his heel and left without any parting words. He felt the wild beating of his heart as he left his wife behind him once and for all, heading for the exit from the vast, sprawling cemetery. Regardless of where it might take him, he was certain; he was on the threshold of a life-changing journey.


    Just as Kirei left the secluded grove, a cold gust rose and blew through the cemetery.

    The white rose on the grave of Claudia Hortensia shivered under the sudden, strong rush of wind.

    A single petal got torn off and blown up towards the blue skies above.

    (...)


    “Congratulations on the successful hunt, Narbareck”.

    “Thanks Merem. It really was a good one. Shame that it’s over now.”

    “Well, you know how the saying goes: ‘All good things must come to an end’.”

    ”Thanks. That really cheers me up.”

    Merem chuckled a little at his Captain’s last sentence – he liked that he had the ability to provoke that kind of reactions from her. With everyone else – though it sometimes included him, too - she was either manipulative or sadistic, so it was nice to know that she, too, could be teased.

    Following the great hunt in Bohemia, things went back to normal for the Director of the Burial Agency.
    The Cardinals thanked her for eliminating a dangerous and powerful vampire, commended her skill and courage, expressed satisfaction about the cooperation between the different branches of the Holy Church, and were overall full of words of praise and thank.
    But then they put her back under ‘home-arrest’ as before, and put even stricter surveillance over the building to make sure that she doesn’t leave again. It seemed that her life was exactly the way it had been before this.

    ‘Well, not exactly the same way,’ she thought to herself.

    There was a silver plate with a beautiful white-and-blue tea set on the table, as well as a bowl of vanilla-flavoured biscuits. It was a gift from Merem, who took pity on his Captain for always having to drink cheap fruit teas from stained coffee mugs, and thus bought her an antique tea set and a year-worth supply of finest teas.

    At the moment, they were drinking Earl Grey. For this special occasion he even came to the Burial Agency HQ in person, rather than sending the old priest that was his right hand.
    And his efforts did not fail to yield results; probably for the fist time in his life, he saw Narbareck genuinely smile. It wasn’t a feigned smile nor a twisted, sadistic smirk, but an honest smile brought about by something as simple as good tea, a bowl of biscuits, and the opportunity to speak face to face with the only person whom she considered a friend.

    It was a somewhat surreal scene; a psychopathic vampire hunter and a Dead Apostle Ancestor with the appearance of a fourteen-year-old boy were having a tea party, and were chatting about the most trivial things. The windows were open, bathing the entire office in warm June sunshine, and the muffled sounds of Rome’s bustling streets filled the air.

    “The weather is lovely.”

    ”Yeah... too bad I can’t leave the building. I figure they’ve even put snipers around this place.”

    ”Well, maybe we could smuggle you out somehow?”

    “I guess. What would we do, though? Go shopping? Sightseeing?”

    “Well, I know this really great little restaurant in Borgo Pio, just a few blocks away. I definitely recommend it.”

    ”What do they cook?”

    “Italian, mostly.”

    “I don’t feel like eating Italian. Any good places that make Chinese or Indian?”

    “I’m sure I could find a place or two.”

    “Great. Now I only have to find a way to leave this dump unseen.”

    “Have you tried dressing yourself as a cleaning lady?” Merem said nonchalantly.

    Narbareck stopped in the mid of a sip after hearing his comment, to suppress a small giggle.

    “Nah, this damn hair is way too conspicuous.”

    “Perhaps you should dye it?”

    “Never.”

    “Oh, well.”

    A few minutes passed in silence. The two continued to sip their tea, gazing through the wide-open window over the sun-bathed streets and buildings below. The atmosphere in the room was simply... cozy, and neither felt like interrupting the pleasant tranquility.

    Finally, Narbareck broke the silence as her thoughts eventually drifted to a man she had met on her hunt:

    “Say, Merem, remember that priest I told you about?” Narbareck suddenly said.

    ”That Kotomine guy? Yes, what about him?”

    “He was a really interesting man. I wonder where he’s now.”

    ”I actually checked him out. I knew you’d be interested in him, so I tracked him a little.”

    ”And?”

    ”And only a few days after you got back, he suddenly went to Turin, along with his father.”

    ”What’s he doing in Turin?”

    ”Funnily enough, he’s no longer in Turin. He’s not in Italy, nor Europe, for that matter. He’s returned to his home country, Japan.”

    ”Ah, such a shame... I was hoping that we’d get to talk again. He’s a very... peculiar person.”

    ”How do you know; you only knew the man for two days.”

    ”Women’s intuition, dear Merem,” she said, chuckling.

    “Well, maybe one day you’ll meet him again. And there’s also mail, you know? Letters, postcards... you know.”

    ”I guess. I just think it’s such a shame that he left so suddenly. Ah well... more tea?”


    The idyllic atmosphere was short lived, though, as Merem was forced to interrupt their light-hearted conversation with more serious matter:

    ”Narbareck, I’m sorry I have to interrupt, but I’m afraid there is a piece of news that I should really tell you about as soon as possible.”

    ”Ah, ‘business’ again! Why must you always ruin our conversations with such things?”

    ”Sorry, but this is really important. It’s actually one of the main reasons why I’ve come.”

    ”And here I was thinking it was because you wanted to have a chat with me.”

    ”That was the main reason, yes. I’ve only received these news this morning, and thought you should know.

    “Oh, fine, spit it out – what’s going on?”

    ”Well, it seems that an entire town in central France has completely disappeared. The Church suspects that it’s a work of a vampire.”

    “Wouldn’t surprise me, really. But... it’s strange; France is Ortenrosse’s territory. I thought he had a firm control over his lands. Such things don’t really happen in places under his control.”

    ”Yeah, that’s the problem really.”

    ”Yes?”

    ”The Church doesn’t think it’s some of Ortenrosse’s vampires.”

    ”Then who?”

    “Well... nothing’s been confirmed yet... but they believe it might be Valdamjong.”

    Narbareck was struck speechless for a few seconds after hearing that.

    And then her lips curled into a twisted smile.




    The End
    Last edited by Polly; April 23rd, 2014 at 04:27 PM.
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    Eclipse - a Saber Alter oneshot
    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
    Boundary of Loneliness - Ryougi Shiki/Alphard Al-Shua oneshot. Lemon-flavoured

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    I had forgotten this happened before Tsukihime.

    On the whole, I really enjoyed this story. It managed to be succinct and focused, two things missing in MoaK. It had nice blend of action and humour, which kept the story engaging while the exposition happened.
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    A little bit of artwork on Narbareck:



    My attempts at being a (fanfic) writer:

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    Requiem for a Race - Altrouge and Ortenrosse hunt the TAs ( 1/3 chapters, discontinued )
    Memories of a King - a 'Saber Origins' story ( 8/? chapters, discontiuned )
    A Small Warmth - a post UBW-Good oneshot, Saber/Rin
    Devil's Thrill - Narbareck hunts down a DAA Blackmore ( 10/10 chapters, finished )
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    I like the second one, feels Alphard.
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    My first thought was Riesbyfe. Particularly, her appearance in Carnival Phantasm.
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    Riesbyfe was an attempt to clone Narbareck but with less murderousness. Trufax.
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    Well that was amazing. I can't wait to read some of your other fic's. Oh and am I the only one who would think it would be hilarious if Narbareck received a picture of Kirei in front of the Fuyuki fire? Saying something like "Took your advice, thanks- Kirei"

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    Well that was amazing. I can't wait to read some of your other fic's. Oh and am I the only one who would think it would be hilarious if Narbareck received a picture of Kirei in front of the Fuyuki fire? Saying something like "Took your advice, thanks- Kirei"

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    If a fanfic has had its most recent comment in April of '14--or anything like a month old--you are advised to not post a comment and necroing the thread as it leads to many people getting testy over a potential update or the like. It is better advised to PM or post a visitor message on the author's profile page.

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