That's the problem with most good authors, they ain't consistent. Like Rodyle here. :V
That's the problem with most good authors, they ain't consistent. Like Rodyle here. :V
-1 Fate/ Black reflection. Pros: From A technical standpoint, the writing is good. Cons: The whole story is about sucking Ichigo's mary-sue cock.
Speaking of -1s:
-1 The Loli Grail War
To explain why, lemme just grab a couple words from that summary and put them next to each other: "All... little girl[s]" + "lemon, gore".
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My Work:
Heroes of Justice
Semi-Random Pieces and Drabbles
Diaries of a Youthful Maiden
??? - new project, coming soon (by Valve time)
In less brash terms perhaps-
-1 Fate/Black Reflection:
Good character interactions and development on the Bleach side, but rather canon bound and uninteresting on the Fate side when the two are isolated. Unfortunately, it doesn't get better once they clash. The mechanics run off of Bleach more than they do the Nasuverse and the fights discriminate against the Fate cast. Furthermore, Ichigo and his friends seem to be in the business of fixing every single problem that the author seems to find with the story of Fate without much story purpose. The writing and grammar are well above par, but the actual content of the story is not worth the read.
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My Work:
Heroes of Justice
Semi-Random Pieces and Drabbles
Diaries of a Youthful Maiden
??? - new project, coming soon (by Valve time)
+1 Fate/Black Reflection. While by no means perfect, it's a decently written fic with believable characters, no undue OPness (as much as you guys bitch about it, no, Ichigo isn't being overpowered) and an interesting storyline developing. Give it a whirl.
I felt sort of awkward recommending subsections of a drabble thread. Otherwise I would have rec'd Aiden's Saegusa and Altrouge stuff.
Hooray! Now I can be less popular!
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My Work:
Heroes of Justice
Semi-Random Pieces and Drabbles
Diaries of a Youthful Maiden
??? - new project, coming soon (by Valve time)
You know I'd agree with you and rec it too but good god Rider pisses me the fuck off. Not even sure why, it's been too long since I last read a chapter to remember.
Oh, and the complete and utter failure to communicate between both camps.
"Hi I'm in charge of cleaning up souls after they die and I came here 'cause the bosses heard the event that causes that Really Bad Fire ten years ago is happening again and want to investigate".
"Hi I'm fighting so I can prevent collateral deaths and hopefully get the superpowerful wish-granting device into good hands."
Is that so fucking hard?
Last edited by Kyte; December 4th, 2012 at 11:01 PM.
Yeah, the entire amnosity between the teams being because of a bunch of misunderstandings is kinda annoying, but unfortunately I can believe it because both crews are like that. Ichigo's 'diplomacy' consists of blowing up the door and telling you to surrender, while most magi would sooner kill an enemy than listen to them.
I'll withhold comment on Black Reflection until ORT-tan curbstromps the Bleach crew.
I'll withhold comment on Black Reflection until ORT-tan curbstomps the Bleach crew.
Roan you managed to doublepost with Riven in the middle. Impressive.
Ichigo's pretty forthright actually. He states his purpose and then proceeds with the asskicking. He has failed to do the former here.
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That's what makes it so frustrating. The plot's inherently build on top of such a retarded issue.
Last edited by Kyte; December 4th, 2012 at 11:06 PM.