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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Meh. I was thinking more of the lines of Shirou and Nanoha showing Zelretch Raising Heart and he takes the idea and makes Ruby and Sapphire. It would also explain their obsession with Magical Girls since they're origin is Raising Heart.
    Wow...that...makes a scary amount of sense. (*-*)

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    Hmm... I have to agree there.

    Personally, I think that would really be a good answer, anyway.
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    Where's someone from the cult of fraggle when you need them? This idea needs a snippet.
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    Not me, I'm not in it, and I know next to nothing on Nanoha-verse.
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    Quote Originally Posted by nitewind View Post
    Where's someone from the cult of fraggle when you need them? This idea needs a snippet.
    I think there was one like that somewhere... but I don't have it among my bookmarks of all of fraggle's and Hero's and various other's snippits.
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    So just write another one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by nitewind View Post
    Where's someone from the cult of fraggle when you need them? This idea needs a snippet.
    Don't know, haven't seen them here.
    Have you checked the F/NS thread?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Meh. I was thinking more of the lines of Shirou and Nanoha showing Zelretch Raising Heart and he takes the idea and makes Ruby and Sapphire. It would also explain their obsession with Magical Girls since they're origin is Raising Heart.
    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    Wow...that...makes a scary amount of sense. (*-*)
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    Hmm... I have to agree there.

    Personally, I think that would really be a good answer, anyway.

    Great now I have this image of prism-Illya series where Illya and Miyu see nanoha in het Barrier jacket for the first time as she makes her big damm hero entrance in the series. Shout outs to earlier Prism-Illya snippets might be included.

    -----------------

    "[Perfect landing, my master]"

    "
    Thank you Raising heart"

    " [This--- This beautiful display of utter destruction, that dress, those frills, those barriers that hint at the forbidden treasures hidden for all but Shirou-kun's hands----"

    " Forb----, HEY! what does Shirou-nii have to do with Nanoha's----"

    " [Ah, the fruits of youth------]" Ruby replied, before he found himself under Illya's heels once again.

    " Who is this person?" Miyu asked as she pointed Sapphire cautiously at the white maiden that had causally floated down to the ground. She had no doubts about the newcomers abilities after the girl penetrating the barrier both Miyu and Illya had set up and taking out the servant card in one big blast."

    "Mou, has Illya already forgotten me after three years? I really should have taken you home back then--"

    "[ Abduction of minors is still a Felony, my master!]"

    " Who do you think you are, interfering with our business like this?" Rin and Luvia exploded in synchronized movements, as the stomped towards the magical girl. " And where did you get that third magical wand!?"

    " Ehehe" the girl laughed nervously at the sight of the two enraged mages. ' I'm Takamachi Nanoha, 17 year old magical girl, and Illya's Big sister!"

    " HEY!, don't claim the position of elder sister like that!"

    " Bleeeeh, doesn't Illya want to have an awesome big sister like me?"

    " Not If It means giving up Shirou to you!"

    "WHAT!"

    By now the situation had grown dire, as the female magi recategorized Nanoha from ' potential thread' to 'RIVAL'. an uncomfortable silence filled the space as nobody moved, until Miyu noticed that Sapphire had been in direct contact with the new girls staff the entire time

    " Sapphire, whats wrong" the girl softly asked not wanting to be the one to break the stare down between the different parties.


    [---------------------------- Are you my Mother?]

    [ O_O ]

    [No way, she's mommy! thats even more awesome than I imagined!]

    " Raising heart! when did you, who's the father? "

    " YOU HAVE GOT TO BE ******* ME!"


    -------------------


    Illya is best servant

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    Bardiche's the father.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyte View Post
    Bardiche's the father.
    That -------- does fit with Sapphire's personality.


    Illya is best servant

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyte View Post
    Bardiche's the father.
    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    That -------- does fit with Sapphire's personality.
    Indeed.
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    Wat is this?

    This is amazing?
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    [---------------------------- Are you my Mother?]
    ZELRETCH! You've gone too far! How dare you kidnap young impressionable devices at their birth and change them into devices of your own making!

    Don't worry Sapphire, I'm sure Shirou will make sure you get a happy ending with your mother and father as well to make up for all the trauma Zelretch put you through! As well as a couple Starlight Breakers and Riot Zanbers from your parents just to make sure he got the point.

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    Wow fraggle...just wow. Too good man lulz.

    Also...who said the last line? Or did everyone say it? I be confused mon.

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    Now that's what I'm talking about fraggle! Let the good times and lolz roll on.
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    Quote Originally Posted by nitewind View Post
    Let the good times and lolz roll on.
    Seconded I've been reading way to much depressing stuff lately.
    Last edited by rajvir; February 4th, 2012 at 04:07 PM. Reason: shortened quote to relevant parts

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    New guy here.

    I heard Shirou's afraid of Momoko correct? What is that fear continues till his days at Mid-Childa?

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    He doesn't fear her. He fears her control over the kitchen. He stays at the Takamachi's almost as much as he does at home and in the Takamachi household the kitchen is Momoko's domain.

    And welcome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by shikyo21 View Post
    New guy here.
    Welcome! Enjoy your decent into madness here!
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    *Kotomine Kirei Voice* Rejoice Shikoyo, for your descent into madness is now assured! >=3

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