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    Dishing out another Servant profile.

    Inspired by Cyber Angel's Bastion sheet, I decided to take another video game character and turn them into a Servant. This took me awhile and there are probably a lot of things wrong, but I like it. So here we go.

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    Class: Caster
    True Name: Tim
    Alignment: True Neutral

    Statistics
    Strength: D
    Endurance: E
    Agility: C
    Magic: B+
    Luck: C

    Class Skills
    Territory Creation
    Rank: E
    The ability to build an area advantageous to oneself as a magus. Lacking formal training, Caster cannot build or support his own territory. But, he claims to know of a “Castle” where he can use all his powers at will.

    Personal Skills
    Library of Stored Knowledge
    Rank: A+
    The ability to clearly recall past knowledge from memory, even if the information perceived was not consciously recognized at the time. After manipulating time for so long, Caster is able to retain and recall all events that occurred/recurred/didn’t occur/etc. from his time control and manipulations.

    Mental Pollution
    Rank: A+
    The possession of a distorted mentality, making it possible to shut out mental interference. His mind has been consumed by his “quest” to find a person only known as “the Princess”. In his demented mindset, he is “the Hero” and other Servants are “minions” of an “evil monster”. This thought process safeguards his mind from all but the most powerful mental interference.

    Puzzle Fragments
    Rank: --
    As Caster is summoned, pieces of his shattered psyche will appear within the area where the Holy Grail War is taking place. 45 pieces in total, gathering 9 pieces will complete a set and unlock new ways for him to manipulate and control time:

    • 9 Pieces: “Time and Mystery” set
    • 18 Pieces: “Time and Place” set
    • 27 Pieces: “Time and Decision” set
    • 36 Pieces: “Hesitance” set
    • 45 Pieces: “Braid” set

    Caster needs the required amount of pieces to use the power of the current set. But once he completes a puzzle, the previous ability associated with the last set is locked.

    Spell List
    Forgiveness
    Prerequisites: None
    Rank: C
    This spell allows Caster to rewind time. If Caster were to make a mistake, he would simply reverse the flow back to the point before the mistake happened and avoid it using advance knowledge. This is the only spell that will not be forgotten when a puzzle set is completed.

    Mystery
    Prerequisites: 9 Puzzle Pieces
    Rank: B
    A green glowing aura will surround Caster. This shining light anchors him in time, preventing Caster and anything he is holding from being affected by his own reversal magic. The downside is he loses the ability to reverse himself if he is injured or in critical condition.

    Place
    Prerequisites: 18 Puzzle Pieces
    Rank: A
    With this spell, Caster can freeze time and position himself in a more advantageous position. Frozen objects, however, will not be affected by any outside force. If an enemy Servant is frozen, Caster will not be able to harm them while this spell is active. And this spell is costly for Caster to utilize many times in one day.

    Decision
    Prerequisites: 27 Puzzle Pieces
    Rank: C
    Always active, this spell creates a shadow doppelganger that performs the actions Caster made prior to a time reversal. However, only one is made at a time and they are no stronger than Caster is. And once their set “programming” is finished, they will simply stop moving.

    Hesitance
    Prerequisites: 36 Puzzle Pieces
    Rank: A+
    Caster carries a gold ring in his pocket at all times. Once the Hesitance puzzle set is completed, this memento is granted a special effect. When it is revealed, time will slow down. The closer an object gets to the center, the slower it will go. It has a max range of five meters from the ring’s center. Caster does not like exposing the ring for too long because it drains him of both his prana and willpower.

    Noble Phantasm
    Braid The Undercurrent Truth
    Type: ???
    Rank: A++ ---> E ---> ???

    Once every single puzzle piece is collected and all the sets are completed, Caster can activate his final ability: a Reality Marble reflecting his inner world. When Caster is finished with the incantation, a wall of sand will spread out from Caster and cover the entire battlefield. As the sands settle, the battlefield becomes a beautiful grassland, stretching out for miles and miles. Rising rapidly from the ground from behind Caster, a grand Castle of unfathomable grandeur and size emerges from the landscape. In the highest window, behind a velvet curtain, the silhouette of a woman can be seen.

    · In this area, Caster has access to all of his spells and can use them without penalties.
    · Caster has an infinite amount of prana while inside this the boundaries of the bounded field.

    If a certain amount of time has passed and the Reality Marble is still active, it will progress into a new and final form. A wall of fire will encroach upon the Castle from the boundaries of the bounded field. As it approaches, the idyllic landscape will rot and die and the Castle will start to lose its glamour and shining aura. Then, one by one, the towers and walls of the Caster’s Castle will tumble to ruin. As the Castle crumbles, a shining light will burst from the highest room into the sky, darkening the clear skies into a blood-red hue. This devastated wasteland is the true form of Caster’s inner world: a world, once warm and safe, reduced to ruin. In the night sky, a constellation can be seen but only the outlines of the stars highlight its points of connection.

    · In this area, Caster loses the ability to cast any of his spells and access to all his skills.
    · Caster’s statistics are all dropped to E rank.
    · Caster has two choices from this point: reject this reality or accept the truth of his existence. If he rejects, the Reality Marble is dispersed, all his puzzle pieces are scattered, and the battle is returned to beginning conditions. If he accepts, the battle will continue…..perhaps a miracle could happen if Caster collected the lights of the constellation before his world wasdevastated?

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    Braid was always 2deep4me, but the last time reversing thing was one of my favorite gaming moments of all time.
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    Does getting his miracle and reaching the Princess give him access to a one-time use, self-sacrificial Magical Nuke NP?

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    When he touches her he explodes. Because she was apparently a metaphor for the atomic bomb. Or cold fusion. Or fucked if I know 2deep4me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mcjon01 View Post
    Does getting his miracle and reaching the Princess give him access to a one-time use, self-sacrificial Magical Nuke NP?
    Yes.

    CASTER GETS PRINCESS. EVERYONE DIES.

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    An idea I've been working on for a while. I'd like to maybe add another Noble Phantasm or something to supplement the idea of "someone who appears stronger than he actually is" and "someone who's hard to fight directly."
    MOCTEZUMA II
    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Stats:
    Strength: C+
    Endurance: E
    Agility: A
    Magic: C
    Luck: E
    Class Abilities:
    Magic Resistance: D
    Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic resistance to the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy. Moctezuma's fascination with the arcane allowed this rank to be achieved, despite his ignorance of magecraft.
    Personal Abilities:
    Bravery: B-
    The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion, and fascination. Bravery in war was the capital virtue of the Aztecs, and Moctezuma was no exception. His rigid and disciplined personality allow him to block out mental interference below A rank, and still make saving throws (based on Luck) against that which exceeds it. However, he was plagued by superstition, and becoming caught up in his fear of ill omens will degrade Bravery's effectiveness.
    Charisma: E
    Leadership skills increase, but troops' morale decreases extremely. While Moctezuma led many successful conquests and was beloved as the embodiment of Huitzilopochtli, ultimately his exacting personality caught up with him. Myriad unsuccessful campaigns against the Tlaxcalans, the Aztecs' mortal enemies, led Moctezuma to strip his troops of their ceremonial finery and enact harsh punishments on those who failed to carry out their duties. Predictably, morale plummeted, and Tlaxcala was never to be conquered.
    Emperor of the Sun: A
    As the Emperor of the Sun and embodiment of the god associated with the sun, Moctezuma was said to be so radiant that no one could look upon his face, although in actuality he merely executed anyone who dared defy his mandate. This is actualized in a powerful Mystic Face that activates when Moctezuma engages in battle. It absorbs sunlight from the area and releases it in a halo, as bright as the sun, around Moctezuma's face, making it impossible for even Heroic Spirits to gaze upon him. The ability is deactivated when no direct source of sunlight is available or when Moctezuma is disengaged from combat. It is worth noting that even Moctezuma's allies will be blinded by looking in his direction.
    Noble Phantasms:
    Xuihcoatl: The Fire Serpent of Huitzilopochtli
    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Army
    Range: 1-99
    Maximum Targets: 400 people
    This weapon is a relic of the ancient Mexica migration, said to be the ancient spear of Huitzilopochtli, god of war and patron of the Aztecs, with which he routed 400 of his brothers on the slopes of Coatepetl. Made in the image of a serpent, it is a magnificent weapon fit for a king, with a shaft of gold and channels of jade, turquoise, emerald, and obsidian running down the sides, between images depicting Huitzilopochtli's creation of fire. The spearhead is fletched with quetzal feathers and encrusted with more gems. But its true power is revealed when the sun shines in the sky--it focuses sunlight down the channels on the shaft and fires a searing laser capable of cutting down ranks of armies or entire buildings. The beam is approximately 1 mm wide and can cut through most earthly materials with ease. Impaling an object will burn it away from the inside. It is purely offensive and cannot cancel or mitigate equivalent or even weaker attacks, although it could potentially cut down projectiles. Because the spear simply focuses sunlight with supernatural efficiency when triggered, the mana cost is nearly non-existent. In close-quarters combat, the sunlight can be focused around the tip to generate a white-hot cutting edge, or released as short bursts of searing heat. Swinging the spear leaves beautiful arced afterimages and glare in its wake. Xuihcoatl's sun-related effects cannot be used when the sun is not shining, i.e. at night, indoors away from direct sunlight, in cloudy weather, etc. This is a Noble Phantasm of the most basic type, representing "the king's wrath descending on his enemies," and hence it is perfectly suited to Moctezuma, the Angry One. It could have easily fended off the invading Spaniards who toppled Moctezuma's empire, but he was taken hostage early in the invasion and was not able to access the spear. It was of no use to the empire's other warriors, as it was fated to be used by him only.

    How is it?

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    Interesting take on him. I decided to make Moctezuma in MPII a Rider, and definitely buffed him compared to your interpretation. :P

    I like the NP you gave him. It's an interesting sort of power, and one that I didn't know about. Good job!
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    Well, thank you! My first thought was Rider, but I had no idea what he'd ride. What kind of mount did you give him?

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    He rides something... interesting, I'll say that much. :3
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    I want to see an epic fight between Montezuma and Cortes complete with phantasms of the Spanish/Tlaxcala army and the Mexica army.
    Last edited by Varmisa; February 14th, 2012 at 01:42 PM.

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    Okay, back again with not one, not two, but three profiles!!! Yeah, I went a bit crazy.
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    Saber 1

    Class: Saber
    True Name: Cloud Strife
    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Statistics
    Strength: B
    Endurance: B
    Agility: B
    Magic: C
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: C+

    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance
    Rank: D
    The ability to cancel or diminish the effects of magic spells used against oneself. After being exposed to JENOVA cells, Saber grew resistance against magical phenomena. At this rank, Cloud can cancel the effects of Rank D spells and magical damage will be reduced by 10%.

    Personal Skills
    Eye of Mind (False)
    Rank: B
    An innate talent to sense danger. Traveling the world as a mercenary, Saber has had countless close calls with danger from both monsters and hostile humans. At this rank, visibility penalties are reduced greatly and Cloud can defend against surprise attacks and ambushes with high success.

    Mana Burst (Wind)
    Rank: B
    The temporary raising of stats by soaking one’s body and weapon with prana and immediately expelling it. Through countless hours of training and deadly encounters, Saber learned the ability to gather his energy into one decisive blow. His home reality referred to this powerful technique as a “Limit Break”. At this rank, weapons without high divine protection will be damaged by the energy from Cloud’s prana-fueled attack. Also, Cloud’s STR, END, and AGI can be momentarily increased by one rank if he pays 5% more prana for each attribute.

    Mental Pollution
    Rank: C
    Possession of a twisted mind, granting the Servant protection against mental interference. Taking the identity of his departed friend, Saber overwrote his true self with his ideal image of a SOLDIER. At this rank, Cloud is protected from generic forms of mental interference. However, without a matching rank of Mental Pollution communication with him is hard and misunderstandings are common.

    Sorcery
    Rank: D
    The skill an individual has with traditional spell casting. During his journeys, Saber acquired several objects of power called Materia. These colorful spheres draw on internal sources to create magical phenomena. At this rank, Cloud has access to three spells and his prana cost is reduced by 15%.

    Spell List
    Materia: Lightning
    Rank: C
    Cloud calls lightning from the heavens to strike his designated target. Can be focused for maximum damage output or spread out to achieve an AoE.

    Materia: Blizzard
    Rank: C
    Cloud freezes the water in the air to make an ice projectile that is launched at the designated target. Size and shape can change, depending on the caster’s decision.

    Materia: Cure
    Rank: D
    Cloud focuses his inner energies to heal his wounds. However, critical and life-threatening wounds cannot be healed.

    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Buster Sword Legacy of a Fallen Comrade
    Rank: C+
    Type: Anti-Unit
    An improbably large sword made of an unknown metal native from Saber’s home reality. This giant blade was originally the possession of a SOLDIER First Class named Zach who became Cloud’s friend and template for his new identity. When wielding this weapon, Cloud shifts himself into his ideal image: a SOLDIER First Class, the top fighters of Shinra’s military forces. His movements and battle style become more focused and fluid, his attacks fierce and lightning quick.

    After Cloud used this sword to kill the ex-SOLDIER turned traitor, Sephiroth, the blade was tainted with JENOVA cells. Against Servants bearing the “Monster” or “Extraterrestrial” trait, damage gained from Cloud’s attacks are increased by 15% and heal slower than usual.

    Details
    Born in the sleepy mountain town of Nibelheim, Cloud Strife dreamed of joining the ranks of SOLDIER. At the height of his adolescence, he left his friends and family for Midgar to enlist. Unfortunately, he failed the entrance exam and was relegated to the standard forces. Crushed, Cloud started to question his self-worth and his self-esteem plummeted.

    During one of his missions, Cloud met with SOLDIER First Class, Zach Faire. Sharing similarities, the two men bonded and became friends. Slowly, Zach’s happy-go-lucky attitude and words of encouragement brought Cloud out of his self-pity.

    During an inspection of Nibelheim’s Mako Reactor, Sephiroth, the strongest and most powerful SOLDIER, went insane and turned the small town into an inferno. Zach pursued his crazed commanding officer as Cloud tried to save his doomed hometown. After ensuring the safety of the civilians, Cloud made his way to the reactor. Upon entering, Cloud found Zach defeated and his childhood friend, Tifa Lockheart, in critical condition. With anger and rage fueling him, Cloud grabbed his friend’s sword and ran Sephiroth through, killing the madman and ending his insanity.

    After the Nibelheim Reactor incident, Cloud and Zach were captured by Shinra and were experimented upon. After several days, Zach managed to break free and save both of them from further tests. But the treatments had rendered Cloud in a vegetable-like state, effectively incapacitating him. Instead of leaving him behind, Zach took Cloud with him and together they evaded Shinra detection for several months. Through out their tenure as fugitives, Zach told Cloud about all about his past, hopes, and dreams.

    However, they couldn’t run for long. Before they reached Midgar to visit an old friend of Zach’s, the duo was ambushed by an army of Shinra foot soldiers. Zach fought like a demon, cutting down any man and machine in his path. But not even a SOLDIER First Class could fight against a large number of enemies by themselves.

    In the end, Zach was defeated and killed.

    Still in his disabled state, Cloud slowly made his way to his fallen friend. Seeing his beloved comrade in his miserable state, Cloud was shocked back to his regular state of mind. Taking the Buster Sword, Cloud left his past self behind and forged a new identity based on the legacy given to him by Zach Fair. He spent some years after traveling the world as a mercenary, selling his sword to any buyers.

    Soon enough, Cloud found himself back in Midgar on a mission to sabotage one of the city’s Mako Reactors……….


    Lancer

    Class: Lancer
    True Name: Bruce Lee
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Don’t think. Feel.

    Statistics
    Strength: B+
    Endurance: D
    Agility: A
    Magic: E
    Luck: D
    Noble Phantasm: B

    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance
    Rank: E
    The ability to cancel or diminish the effects of magic spells used against one’s self. Being born in the modern era, Lancer’s resistance to magic is almost non-existent. But being summoned into the Knight Class “Lancer” qualifies Bruce for the minimum rank. At this rank, the Servant cannot cancel spells but magical damage is reduced by 10%.

    Personal Skills
    Eternal Arts Mastership
    Rank: A
    Mastership of combat arts unrivalled in one’s era. During his lifetime, Lancer was considered to be the most skilled martial artist alive. Even after his death, no one yet has even approached his level of skill. At this rank, it is possible to for the Servant to make full use of all their fighting skills even under the influence of any sort mental hindrance.

    Natural Body
    Rank: C
    Possession of a natural human body from birth. Being born into the Modern Era, modern humans have lost most of their bodies’ original potential. But, Lancer’s countless years of training and conditioning have granted him a body comparable to those of the older eras. At this rank, Lancer’s STR and END attribute will be counted as one rank higher against a stronger opponent’s respective attributes.

    Harmony
    Rank: D
    Attack accuracy does not decrease no matter how many times the same technique is used against the same opponent. Relying on his incredible speed, Lancer’s attacks seem to blur in the eyes of observers. At this rank, the opponent will find it hard to predict the attack until the moment of execution.

    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Jeet Kune Do The Art of Flowing Water
    Rank: C+
    Type: Support
    The style of martial art created and perfected by Lancer during his life. Unsatisfied with the rigidity and orthodox methods of conventional styles, Bruce created his own fighting style by taking the positives of several arts and combining them. What was created was a mixed martial art catered to adapting to any and all confrontations. By not adhering to one form of combat, Lancer can change his fighting style during battle to fit his situation and disrupt his opponents flow.

    One Inch Punch Crushing Force Blow
    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Lancer’s most famous and powerful attack. Focusing all the power he has into his fist, Bruce forces his entire weight and energy into one powerful punch. With just one inch of movement, his fist collides with the opponent and explodes with stored energy. This attack completely ignores the enemy’s END attribute, striking direct at the core for the killing blow. Its low prana cost and high speed activation make it a deadly attack to be reckoned with. The only downside is the extremely close range required for this technique to work.

    Details
    If you don’t know who he is, just go die in a ditch. Google him! Or you can be lazy and check out this wiki article I linked.

    WAATAA!!


    Saber 2

    Class: Saber
    True Name: Inigo Montoya
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    I know something you don’t know……I’m not left- handed.

    Statistics
    Strength: B+
    Endurance: C
    Agility: A
    Magic: E
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: B+

    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance
    Rank: E
    The ability to cancel or diminish the effects of magic spells used against one’s self. Inigo has no innate resistance against magecraft, but being summoned into Knight ClassSaber” qualifies him for the minimum rank. At this rank, spells are not canceled but damage is reduced by 10%.

    Personal Skills
    Battle Continuation
    Rank: B
    The ability to come out alive, and continue fighting while injured. During the most important battle of his life, Saber was nearly disemboweled and suffered from numerous stab wounds. Still, he fought on and won against the Six-Fingered Man. At this rank, the Servant may take blows that could result in death and continue fighting.

    Eternal Arms Mastership
    Rank: A++ (B+)
    Mastership of combat arts unrivalled in one’s era. Saber’s transcendent skill in swordplay elevated him beyond the rank of “Master” to the fabled rank of “Wizard”. At this rank, the Servant can make full use of all their fighting skills even under any form of mental and physical hindrance. However, Inigo’s habit of fighting with his off-hand reduces this skill by one rank. But the rank will return to normal once he switches back to his main hand.

    Eye of Mind (True)
    Rank: C
    Calm analysis of battle situation and conclusion of battle through “theory of battle”. During his years of training, Saber gained practical knowledge from many difference styles of sword fighting. By observing his opponent, Inigo can easily gauge their skill and condition in relation to his own. But, his ego and love for challenging himself limits his full ability. At this rank, the Servant is capable of calmly analyzing except during an emotionally challenging battle. Even if the chance of victory is small, they are able to devise a plan to exploit that possibility.

    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Six-Finger Sword Treasure of Domingo
    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Unit
    The masterpiece of Saber’s beloved father who was struck down by the Six-Fingered Man. Heralded as “the best sword since Excalibur”, this slick and deadly blade is truly a marvel. Against lesser opponents, Inigo’s attacks will always have the advantage. Despite not being tailored for him, Inigo mastered this unique weapon and used it to kill the man who killed his father.

    Simple Promise of Revenge He is Inigo Montoya
    Rank: B+
    Type: Support
    A type of curse crystallizing Saber’s innermost motive and drive: his thirst for revenge. When he reaches critical condition, Inigo’s curse can be activated by saying an activation phrase. “Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.” This hypnotizes Inigo into imagining his opponent as the man who killed his father, The Six-Fingered Man. Seeing his hated nemesis, Inigo will continue fighting while shouting his greeting. In this state, Inigo’s life will be stuck in critical condition and any normal attack will not kill him. To completely defeat Saber, one must completely and utterly destroy him.

    Details
    Born in the mountains of Central Spain, Inigo Montoya loved his father, Domingo. His father was a master smithy, crafting masterpieces and works of art. But he did not work for money; Domingo worked when the commission challenged his skills. So the father and son leaved in perpetual poverty.

    One day, a nobleman visited their cottage in the mountains. At first, Domingo refused the man’s request, but then the stranger showed him his hand.

    The man only had six fingers.

    This excited the poor sword smith: the stranger had to have a specially customized blade to compensate for his extra digit. Domingo took up the six-fingered nobleman’s request. For one year, little Inigo watched as his father crafted the Six-Fingered Blade, a sword so magnificent and beautiful as it is sleek and deadly.

    The nobleman returned, but saw only the monetary value of the sword. Insulted, Domingo refused saying that the nobleman was an enemy of art, seeing only the contents of his fat purse. Those were the last words Domingo Montoya uttered as the Six-Fingered Man killed him. With a flash of steel, the master craftsman lay dead on the floor of his hut.

    Grief-stricken and burning with rage, the young son of Domingo challenged the Six-Fingered Man. It was no contest: a young boy with no training against a master swordsman. Defeated, Inigo looked at death with defiant pride. Impressed, the nobleman flashed his sword two more times, scarring Inigo’s face forever. Then, the nobleman left the Spanish village without his sword.

    Taken in by Yeste, a fellow sword maker and close family friend, Inigo recovered from his wounds. But the death of his father changed him. One day, Yeste opened Inigo’s bedroom to find an empty bed with a note bearing a simple statement:

    I must learn

    For ten years, Inigo traveled all over Europe seeking out all the masters of the sword. For ten years, he squeezed rocks to strengthen his wrists. For ten years, he did morning routines to quicken his footwork and improve his balance. For ten years, his need for revenge festered and grew. The years after that, however, did not go well for Inigo. He searched everywhere for the Six-Fingered Man but did not find him. And worse, his skills were so magnificent that he could not find a decent challenge.

    The Spanish Wizard had grown bored with life.

    During this period of his life, Inigo’s skills were dulled with lethargy and wine. He became a hollow shell of his former self. Lucky for him, a Sicilian dwarf named Vizzini. The short man came to him with a proposition: join him and together, with a Turkish giant named Fezzik, they would rule the criminal underworld. Seeking anything to pull him out of his current life, the Spaniard agreed.

    The three men became known as The Sicilian Crowd.

    Soon after, they were hired by the Prince of Florin to instigate a war between his country and the neighboring country of Guilder. Little did Inigo know that this job would see him meet a worthy adversary, make new allies, and find the Six-Fingered Man, the man who killed his father.


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    And now I'm gonna take a small break from Servant profiles.

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    Inigo Montoya fuck yes!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Ah, someone who's read the Princess Bride book too?
    I pity the people who haven't seen the movie or read the book.

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    More importantly, holy shit Bruce Lee! I have been waiting for someone to make one for him.


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    I think Bruce Lee would have done better as Berserker with some skill to keep his abilities. Both his NPs use his unarmed marital arts.

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    I was working with Lancer because in EXTRA, it was mentioned that Li Shuwen could have been summoned as Lancer.

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    Li Shuwen would actually be using a lance/spear, which is part of why he had the nickname "God of Spear Li." Not some weird stuff like his limbs are his spear. Granted, I kind of like the idea of Bruce as Lancer, but Berserker does sound pretty cool.


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    What about Fake/Assassin Class then?

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    Seems like the best fit for martial artists.
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