Create-A-Servant 2

[the god of world-0]

Rider: gerda
Str:E, End:C, Agi:C
Mna:A, Lck:EX, Np:EX
Aligment: neutral/good
Gender: female
Height: 140cm
Weight: 33kg
Place of origin: denmark
Armament: none
Likes:kai, flowers, spring
Deslike: mean people
Talents: singing, gardening, story-telling

Skills: magic resistance(A): in her legend she confronts many magical obstacles, surpasing every single one
riding(A-): capable of rinding almost any beast exept dragons, Also has problems with modern machinary
animal dialogue(A):any animal will follow her like she is their leader, this includ some phantasmal beasts
divide protection(EX): she has most absolute protection from god, at this level it even act like a charisma of sorts to other divine spirits
warming tears(EX): a skill who bords the level of a noble phantasm, capable of purify any curse or illness. it Also grants her and a people of her Choice, great resistente to cold

Bae: my dear friend, the reindeer ( 私の最愛の友人トナカイ バエ * Watashi no saiai no yūjin tonakai bae) (anti-army: A)
The gentle reindeer that helps her in her jorney. He is a phantasmal Beast of high level and his power can wistand divine level noble phantasms. it has a pacific nature however, and its attacks dont do many damage

Fadervor: pray for a lost love (失われた愛のために祈ります ファデルヴォル * Ushinawareta ai no tame ni inorimasu Faderuvoru) (anti-evil: EX)
One time, while in danger, she prayed the lord's prayer and her breath turn into a angel who protect her. This noble phantasm burn away all things who have hurtful intents against her. Also it should be noticed that it only works against hurtful intents, hings like natural disaster or the like are not counted

Lore: the main character in andersen's the snow queen. A simple girl living with her childhod friend kai, when he disaper she goes on a journy to find him. Some may say "but she is just little kid, how can she survive a trip like that" but is the fact that she is a child who is her greatest weapon, something so pure and innocent even lowest of evil beings fell guilty in attack her.
In her legend she is refered as "the favorite of god" and "a queen among man", saying that if someone does not have a heart like her, it would not be allowd in the heavens

Personality: as a being loved by creation, she do not understand the power she has, being rather shy and humble, she will however (if treated right) quickly open up to her master, reviling a cheerful and smart girl.
She loves spring and do not like cold that much, but she do not hate it, nor hate the ice queen truly

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I dont think they are chunni, just young.
Myself however...

[RoydGolden]

Gerda: Interesting, but rather sparse. I feel like the sheet could use a personality section and maybe lore as well, since I had no idea who she even was before looking her up (the only Gerda I knew was one from Norse Mythology). The + modifiers to Riding and Magic Resistance also don't really feel necessary IMO, and I don't see the reason behind her Divine Protection Skill, much less at such an incredibly high rank.

The NPs are actually pretty creative concept-wise, though it feels like they could be fleshed out a little more (especially the first one).

[Historia]

Kriemhild: My impression of the legend is that she actually used the former in her revenge

have you never actually read it?

[RoydGolden]

have you never actually read it?

No, why? Do you expect me to have read the lore on literally every Servant that shows up in this thread?

[the god of world-0]

No, why? Do you expect me to have read the lore on literally every Servant that shows up in this thread?

Ymir could have gone sleep without that one

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Okay, so the noob her cannot use bb code

[Spartacus]

Change the last [/quote=roydgolden] into just [/quote]

Or you can use the "Reply With Quote" feature instead.

[the god of world-0]

Thanks

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Hooray, i did!
Im a hero of justice now, right kiritsugu?

[sherlock1110]

Thanks

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Hooray, i did!
Im a hero of justice now, right kiritsugu?

Yes, good job

[sherlock1110]

No, why? Do you expect me to have read the lore on literally every Servant that shows up in this thread?

Yes please read about my boring British reformers

[Historia]

Do you expect me to have read the lore on literally every Servant that shows up in this thread?

nah, but it's a pretty well known story

i also personally don't like commenting or making sheets on historical/fictional figures i haven't read about. and by that i mean something more than a wiki article

[the god of world-0]

nah, but it's a pretty well known story

i also personally don't like commenting or making sheets on historical/fictional figures i haven't read about. and by that i mean something more than a wiki article

yeah, but if you think about it, all the fame stays with yandere-chan and sumanai-san, kriemhild is like, second place antagonist, thats why i wanted to do her.

[sherlock1110]

nah, but it's a pretty well known story

i also personally don't like commenting or making sheets on historical/fictional figures i haven't read about. and by that i mean something more than a wiki article

Character balancing can be commented on, regardless of your exact knowledge of a story you can still avoid that point and mention whether or not you think they would work in the Grail War setting when weighed up against other Servants.

[Nuclear]

yeah, but if you think about it, all the fame stays with yandere-chan

Brynhildr=/=Brunhild

Get your facts straight.

Character balancing can be commented on, regardless of your exact knowledge of a story you can still avoid that point and mention whether or not you think they would work in the Grail War setting when weighed up against other Servants.

This is, quite frankly, a stupid idea. Misrepresenting a character solely for the purpose of powerlevels is the hallmark of a bad Servant sheet.

Besides, everyone knows people misrepresent mythological/historical figures for the waifu points.

[sherlock1110]

This is, quite frankly, a stupid idea. Misrepresenting a character solely for the purpose of powerlevels is the hallmark of a bad Servant sheet.

Besides, everyone knows people misrepresent mythological/historical figures for the waifu points.

Sorry I didn't mean to be a bother sorry for my insolence

[Snow]

Sorry I didn't mean to be a bother sorry for my insolence

No one is out to get you man relax.

[Historia]

kriemhild is like, second place antagonist, thats why i wanted to do her.

half of the nibelungenlied is about kriemhild

shes important smh

No one is out to get you man relax.

i am

[the god of world-0]

Now that i think about, who is the most Important character in a story is totaly subjective to point-of-view
i mean, think about karna and arjuna

[EonADS]

A good point. Really, given that the Bhagavad Gita is more about the religious importance of following one's dharma in Hinduism, it could be argued that neither is the main character, or it's not even important which one is the main character and both of them are simply object lessons.

...strange to think that this is what spurred me to make my first post on here.

EDIT: And yet somehow I forgot that the Mahabarata is bigger than just the Gita. Wow, Eon. Good job.

[4score7years]

A good point. Really, given that the Bhagavad Gita is more about the religious importance of following one's dharma in Hinduism, it could be argued that neither is the main character, or it's not even important which one is the main character and both of them are simply object lessons.

...strange to think that this is what spurred me to make my first post on here.

EDIT: And yet somehow I forgot that the Mahabarata is bigger than just the Gita. Wow, Eon. Good job.

Welcome to the forum!

[sherlock1110]

A good point. Really, given that the Bhagavad Gita is more about the religious importance of following one's dharma in Hinduism, it could be argued that neither is the main character, or it's not even important which one is the main character and both of them are simply object lessons.

...strange to think that this is what spurred me to make my first post on here.

EDIT: And yet somehow I forgot that the Mahabarata is bigger than just the Gita. Wow, Eon. Good job.

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