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  1. January 9th, 2018, 06:54 PM #1721
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    Because of school stuff I worry I wouldn't be able to write anything for it, so I'd have to pass. Something a little later with a romance/lemon theme would be nice though, if you could find a good date to base it around.
    <NEW FIC!> Revolution #9: Somewhere out there, there's a universe in which your mistakes and failures never happened, and all you wished for is true. How hard would you fight to make that real?

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    I'm getting into writing again so I'd be down for it myself but if the burnout is affecting people, perhaps push it off for a couple of months?
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  3. January 10th, 2018, 06:54 AM #1723
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    I didn't enter the Secret Santa and I've already been pressing for another run of the Lemon Contest soooo yeah. Run it.
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  4. February 25th, 2018, 10:21 PM #1724
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    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
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  5. February 25th, 2018, 10:26 PM #1725
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    Resolute?
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  6. February 25th, 2018, 10:28 PM #1726
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    For inanimate objects? Sorry, but that doesn't seem right.

    Also, would "fidget and swallow nervously" be redundant? Should I just leave it as "fidget and swallow"?
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    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.

    I'd call that redundant. When else would you be fidgeting and swallowing unless you were nervous?
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    Who swallows cocaine?
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    Quote Originally Posted by SeiKeo View Post
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    ^smugglers, maybe
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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.
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    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
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  14. February 25th, 2018, 11:00 PM #1734
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
    Hmmm... A bit more poetic than I wanted for this passage, but I might use them in a different context. Thanks!
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  15. February 26th, 2018, 11:41 AM #1735
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    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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  16. February 26th, 2018, 12:50 PM #1736
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    I've felt both.
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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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  18. February 26th, 2018, 08:01 PM #1738
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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
    It'd be great if I could do that with what I worked on five minutes ago, but it never happens.
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  20. February 26th, 2018, 08:27 PM #1740
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    Happens with all sorts of creative work, I come back to it later and fall in love with myself all over again.
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