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    OP stats that do not make sense.
    Too many Noble Phantasms.
    Negi would never be a Heroic Spirit. If he did become one, his NPs would revolve around summoning his badarse harem.

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    Mm, in light of the 'how do Ally Summon NPs work' discussion, I did want to repost this one shyly because I'm concerned about whether I overbalanced or underbalanced the NP. I posted her right before the 'What Would Servant Jesus Do' debate so it got lost in the shuffle a little. I'd gratefully appreciate criticism good or bad because it's harder to be a proper judge of your own characters when you actually play them in something IMO.

    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...l=1#post595561

    I would repost it anew but I just noticed what post number I got when I posted it the first time and that was too perfect. ^^;

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    Quote Originally Posted by Terminator98 View Post
    OP stats that do not make sense.
    Too many Noble Phantasms.
    Negi would never be a Heroic Spirit. If he did become one, his NPs would revolve around summoning his badarse harem.
    Strength: A (he's at least as strong as rakan since fate compared their punches and said they were equal, but hes bellow fate berserker definitely)
    Endurance: B (he fought Eva clone for 10 days in the Phantasmagoria realm, but is equivalent to 2 days in the real world, died 70 times in that realm and was still able to keep fighting over and over again. Able to keep up Magica Erebia for extended battles and pull out number of high level spells one after another.)
    Agility: A+ (A+++ when in lightning form) (while in lightning form, his speed is equal to a lighting bolt, which is somewhere between 150km/s = Mach 440+ to up even 2260km/s = Mach 6600+)
    Magic: A+ (A when berserk) (he's able to supply magic energy to 15+ partners all at the same time while pulling off high lvl magic spells)
    Luck: C (E when berserk) slightly above average luck since he he was able to pull off a lot of shit most ppl would have been able to do)

    about the np's, i just listed the ones negi is most well known for.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zer0light View Post
    Agility: A++ (A+++ when in lightning form) (while in lightning form, his speed is equal to a lighting bolt, which is somewhere between 150km/s = Mach 440+ to up even) 2260km/s = Mach 6600+
    Oh god, it's Spacebattles logic.

    EDIT: Actually, Dartz logic would be an equally good word.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zer0light View Post
    Strength: A (he's at least as strong as rakan since fate compared their punches and said they were equal, but hes bellow fate berserker definitely)
    Equal to Jack Rakan, below Berserker.

    I'm... honestly not sure if that works out, but Negi has more than enough shonen power as it is, so I won't say anything else.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear View Post
    Oh god, it's Spacebattles logic.

    EDIT: Actually, Dartz logic would be an equally good word.
    no

    it's not my calcs, its the authors calcs. it's listed in the back of his manga.

    and im more in line with OBD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Terminator98 View Post
    OP stats that do not make sense.
    Too many Noble Phantasms.

    Negi would never be a Heroic Spirit. If he did become one, his NPs would revolve around summoning his badarse harem.
    These two are pretty much standard when you take and adapt a character from an existing franchise, IMO.

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    SHOUNEN MANGA, HOW DO THEY WORK

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    The the Grail or Moon Cell whatever shall nerf him.
    Now, just because I was bored.
    Fear two servants from my fic.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...CI1sCuTv0/edit

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...-pWZbEXBg/edit

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    Name: Kamijou Touma

    Class: unknown

    Stats:


    Strength: E
    Endurance: B (massive damage soak and a determinator)
    Agility: C
    Magic: None
    Luck: E-------- (B while in battle, he did survive a dip in the antarctic and a beating from aqua)

    Noble Phantasm:

    Imagine Breaker: cancels all magic, even sorcery. it is confined to his right arm and protects him from mind control, mind reading and soul based magic.

    Rank: EX
    Type: Anti-Unit, Army, Fortress
    Maximum Number: varies

    Skills:

    Magic Resistance: EX (confined to his arm, the rest of his body is C rank)

    Eye of Mind (True): A+ (acquired and refined from the many uphill battles he has fought, touma developed it to an extent that he unconsciously processes the information from his 5 senses and moves his arm to intercept attacks, but it only works on supernatural attacks. he's so good at intercepting attacks, that it may have developed into a kind of precognition.)

    Guardian Knight:
    B (survived a beating from aqua of the back, kanzaki kaori, accelerator and getting zapped by lighting by misaka, even though she was holding back.)

    Battle Constitution: A (need i mention the beatings again?)

    Charisma: A (effective only on females. look at his harm.)

    Bravery: B (bordering on stupidity)

    again, criticism is welcome.
    Last edited by Zer0light; February 2nd, 2012 at 01:23 AM.

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    The Solomon profile was pretty interesting, but honestly, it needs to be a lot more powerful. Like, a lot.


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    I don't think Kamijou can be summoned, simply because his right hand would probably negate the summoning.

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    Quote Originally Posted by celsius View Post
    I don't think Kamijou can be summoned, simply because his right hand would probably negate the summoning.
    im just doing this for fun, you know, a "what if" kind of thing.

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    Or he gets summoned, only to SoGeBu himself because he's a magical construct.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DB-L View Post
    Or he gets summoned, only to SoGeBu himself because he's a magical construct.
    lolz that would be hilarious!

    accelerators next and than comes aqua of the back, nagato yuki, nanoha and whoever else i feel like doing a profile for.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Terminator98 View Post
    The the Grail or Moon Cell whatever shall nerf him.
    Now, just because I was bored.
    Fear two servants from my fic.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...CI1sCuTv0/edit

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...-pWZbEXBg/edit
    HHNNNNNNNNG

    Dat Rommel picture!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyber Angel View Post
    Mm, in light of the 'how do Ally Summon NPs work' discussion, I did want to repost this one shyly because I'm concerned about whether I overbalanced or underbalanced the NP. I posted her right before the 'What Would Servant Jesus Do' debate so it got lost in the shuffle a little. I'd gratefully appreciate criticism good or bad because it's harder to be a proper judge of your own characters when you actually play them in something IMO.

    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...l=1#post595561

    I would repost it anew but I just noticed what post number I got when I posted it the first time and that was too perfect. ^^;
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    Honda and Rommel look good. I'm sceptical about the A+++ AGI for Lancer though, even if it's under a stat-boost effect. It just seems kinda OTT.
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    Stats just go to two plusses anyway.
    And that's already "absurdly high", the only A++ stat in the whole game was Saber Alters Prana, which was infinite.
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    Roger. Gonna fix this little issues. But I expected the "Man that Surpassed Death itself" to be rather hax. heh.

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    Name: Miki Sayaka

    Class: BERSERKER

    Stats:


    (without mad enhancement)
    Strength: D
    Endurance: C
    Agility: B
    Magic: None
    Luck: E-- (being Sayaka is suffering)

    Noble Phantasm:

    Oktavia von Seckendorff

    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Unit, Army
    Maximum Number: varies

    Unlimited Sword Works

    Can summon a number of swords for her to use.

    Rank: C
    Anti-unit/Army
    Maximum number: Varies

    Skills:

    Regeneration: B (can recover from minor wounds and may dull the pain)

    Mad Enhancement: B

    Guardian Knight: B (this is lost with Mad Enhancement)

    Battle Constitution: A (she's crazy enough to continue)

    Bravery: B (bordering on stupidity)

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