Create-A-Servant 3

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Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu

Wow, everybody's on a Kill la Kill high today, huh?

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THat reminds me on my ideas of an Ruler Satsuki ,an Berserker Ryuko wher she is in her brainwashed state and an Ragyo Caster servant. for the modern fiction thread.

one Question Which of you have also seen kill la kill actually`?

Since this thread has more then Five pages already have i thought that it would be the ideal first Point to feed the start index

in either case here is the first sheet/profile index of the thread \/

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Japan :

Archer - Oku Hime no Mikoto by The God of World-0

Berserker - Hi-no-Kagutsuchi & Mizuhame-no-Mikoto by Lambda-Nu

Caster - Orihime by The God of World-0

Saber - Yamato Takeru by The God of World -0

Lancer - Kaihime by RoydGolden

Christianity and Judeism:

Alter Ego - Mastema by King of Padoru

Archer - Saint Barbara by Zork Knight

Assassin - Luzifer by The God of World-0

Berserker - Samson by Shiki-pon

Saber - Mercurius by The God of World - 0

Korea:

- Caster - Queen Seondeok by BnEL15

North America :

Lancer - Smokey Bear by Kiwi

France:

Rider - Nicolas-Joseph Cugnot (Alter) by Kiwi

Germany and Germanic People:

Lancer - The Smith of Kochel by Kabalisto Koga

Greek Mythology and History :

Berserker - Nessus by King of Padoru

Caster - Orpheus by pinetree

Saber - Prometheus by ItsaRandomUsername

Balcan:

Rider - Constatin by Faux

Roman Mythology and History:

Shielder - Numa Pompilius by Lambda - Nu

Others:

Watcher - Sputnik I by 34

Thank you Koga, but I think it's better to make the compilations every 50 pages like in the past thread, and Lambda already asked to make them. I'll add the sheets anyway but keep this in mind.

In any case, thank you again.

Wouldn't Avenger perhaps be a better fit for that Nessus... since that form is the only one he could get revenge with?

I tend to think Avenger is a class more suited for those whose hatred and desire of revenge is against people in general rather than one specific individual

Nessus: The creepiest part of this stat sheet is the implication that

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Nessus has somehow dragged Megara into even more trouble.

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Nessus: The creepiest part of this stat sheet is the implication that

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Nessus has somehow dragged Megara into even more trouble.

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Nessus never encountered Megara in the myths though? You must be thinking of Deianira, Heracles' second wife whose heavily implied to be the identity of Nessus' "host" here.

Yeah, seems like it. Must have gotten the two mixed up.

Dying Land of the Setting Sun
300? BC – Yomi
Queen of the Underworld

“Avenger. Izanami-no-Mikoto. Are you the one who has summoned me here?”
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True Form

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Class: Avenger
True Name: Izanami-no-Mikoto
Gender: Female
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Shinto Mythology, Japanese Lostbelt

Strength: B
Endurance: A
Agility: D
Mana: A+
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A

Class Skills
Avenger A+
A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.

Negative emotions towards her immediately turn into her strength. The effects of this Skill are boosted while her first Noble Phantasm is active.

Oblivion Correction A
A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened.

After failing to prevent her husband from leaving the underworld and subsequently being divorced by him, Izanami made a vow to kill 1,000 of his people every day. She has never forgotten this vow, even to this day.

Self-Replenishment (Mana) A
A Class Skill of the Avenger class. One's magical energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.

Personal Skills
Protection of the Underworld EX
Izanami’s Authority, offered as a pillar of the underworld she came to rule. Until her rule comes to an end, she who controls the underworld is the underworld itself, as well as the queen protected by its bounds.

Provides the changing the effect of her Noble Phantasm and afflicts all enemies with a strong curse that applies a Rank-Down to all Parameters.

Self-Modification D
The aptitude to remold one's own body or merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this Skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero.

Although Izanami possess this Skill, it serves no practical combat applications. Instead, it allows her to shift between her “normal” form and her true form at will.

God Slayer EX
Unlike the Pan-Human History version of Izanami, this version of her was able to break out of Yomi and then proceeded the slaughter the entire Shinto pantheon.

This Skill is super effective against Divine Spirits. A 'plus' modifier is gained when attacking Divine Spirits, wraiths, and Servants with the Divinity Skill.

Goddess’ Divine Core D
A Skill that expresses one being a perfected god from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.

Izanami’s Rank in this Skill was originally extremely high, but her eating the food of the underworld corrupted her and lowered her divinity. Her slaughter of the gods after breaking out of Yomi lower her Divinity further.

Noble Phantasms

Yomotsuhirasaka

Vengeful Dead Flowing Out of the Opened Underworld

Rank: A
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 1~99
Maximum Number of Targets: 1000
A Noble Phantasm that is a crystallization of Izanami’s escape from the underworld.

This Noble Phantasm must be set up before it can be used. A large magic circle must be drawn on the ground. Then, Izanami must use her magical energy to activate the circle, opening up a rift into Yomi, the underworld. The rift latches onto the leylines in the surrounding area, draining their mana in order to be sustained. However, Izanami can close it whenever she wishes.

Spirits are capable of crawling out of the rift for as long as it is open and will begin to wander around the surrounding area. These spirits are under Izanami’s Authority and follow her every command. However, they have an instinctive tendency to attack any and all living creatures on sight, though Izanami’s contract with her Master excludes them from this. If Izanami does not wish for the spirits to attack something, she must command them to do so.

Additionally, the rift’s presence causes the effect of “changing the field to the underworld”, where Izanami’s power and Authority are at their fullest and all those who fight against her are afflicted with a curse that weakens them. The area affected this grows in correspondence to the size of the rift, which also affects the rate at which spirits can enter the World.

However, the rift’s size is static and cannot grow over time. If Izanami wishes to make it bigger, she will have to close the rift she previously opened and use this Noble Phantasm again to make a bigger rift.

Yomotsu-Shikome

Foul Women of the Underworld

Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 1~9
Maximum Number of Targets: 8
The eight hags from the underworld that serve Izanami as her retainers.

Izanami is capable of summoning one or more of the Shikome whenever she so desires, provided that she has enough mana to do so. The Shikome are on about the same level as a low-tier Servant and them remaining in the world drains Izanami’s mana.

When summoned, the Shikome will follow Izanami around and follow her commands. If any enemies attack, the Shikome will immediately attack them in their mistress’ defense. Although the Shikome are extremely dutiful and loyal to Izanami, they do possess some degree of sentience and intelligence, such as the ability to recognize when Izanami needs assistance even if she doesn’t say so or to recognize they have made a mistake and apologize for doing so.

It should be noted that just because the Shikome serve Izanami, they do not necessarily serve Izanami’s Master.

Yakusa-Ikazuchi

Eight-Headed Dragon Queen of the Underworld

Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Izanami’s ultimate Noble Phantasm. In order to use this Noble Phantasm, Izanami must have summoned all eight Yomotsu-Shikome and then absorb them.

After absorbing all eight Shikome, Izanami will transform into a massive, horrific dragon with eight disgusting dragon heads, which sprout from her head, breasts, arms, vagina, anus, and stomach. In this form, Izanami gains a lighting element-based dragon breath and Authority over lightning.

Unfortunately, this Noble Phantasm is highly unlikely to see usage because of the truly massive amount of mana required to sustain Izanami’s dragon form.

However, there is one more trick left to this Noble Phantasm. Should Izanami be struck down while in her dragon form, eight lightning spirits will appear afterwards. Each of these lighting spirits are on the same level as a mid-tier Servant with D-Rank Independent Action. These lightning spirits will then proceed to attack those responsible for killing Izanami.

If Izanami reverts to her normal form through any other method, then the lightning spirits will not be summoned and she can summon the Yomotsu-Shikome again.

Ame-no-Nuhoko

Spear That Raises Islands

Rank: D
Type: Anti-Unit
The spear used by Izanagi and Izanami to fish the Japanese islands out of the primordial sea. In actuality, there were two copies of these spears, with each of them possessing one.

As a weapon, this Noble Phantasm is rather unremarkable and it doesn’t have much more combat applications than a normal spear. Although it is a Divine Construct, it lacks much in the way of special abilities. Ultimately, it is more of a tool used for fishing islands out of the sea than it is a weapon to be used in combat.

However, Izanami insists on using this as her main weapon, for some reason.

Lore:

Izanami-no-Mikoto Shinto goddess of creation and death. She was the wife of Izanagi and together they raised the islands that became Japan out of the primordial sea and gave birth to many gods. Unfortunately, Izanami one day died giving birth to the fire god Hi-no-Kagutsuchi. In her death throes, she used her tears to create the water goddess Mizuhame-no-Mikoto to restrain Kagutsuchi and keep him from becoming violent. Despite this, an enraged Izanagi killed Kagutsuchi in retaliation for Izanami’s death.

Soon afterwards, Izanagi went down to Yomi, the underworld, to bring Izanami back to the world of the living, but she spitefully revealed that ate the food from the furnace of the underworld and joined the ranks of the dead. However, she agreed to go with him to the then-current rulers of the underworld to request permission to leave, provided that he does not look at her. Despite of this request, Izanagi looked at Izanami and discovered that she had become a rotting corpse. Enraged at this betrayal, Izanami summoned the Yomotsu-Shikome and chased after the fleeing Izanagi, wanting to prevent him from leaving Yomi. However, Izanagi was able to successfully escape and barricaded the entrance of Yomi, Yomotsuhiraska, with an immovable boulder.

Behind this barricade, Izanami declared that if Izanagi does not remove the boulder, she will kill 1,000 of his people every day. To this, he replied that he will simply create 1,500 people every day in return.

In this Lostbelt, Izanami broke out of Yomi near the end of the Jomon period and laid waste to Japan, turning it into a land of undead. She then proceeded to slaughter the Shinto pantheon and conquer Japan. She used the mud from Yomi to fuel her conquest, submerging humans in the mud to create monsters known as the Magatsuhi, named after the entity that takes control of those who are submerged in the mud. Unfortunately, Izanami eventually lost control of the mud and it overflowed and began to pollute the entire world with the evil it represented.

Mankind is now restricted to living on mountains, attempting to survive against the rising tide of mud from the underworld and the monsters born from it. To make matters worse, Izanami every day sends Shinigami out into the land to seek out 1,000 people to bring to her to be executed and thrown into the sea of mud. The corpses are then corrupted by the Magatsuhi and sent out to terrorize the World’s struggling inhabitants.

But just as Izanagi said, 1,500 people are born each day, prolonging this vicious cycle of suffering.

From her palace in Takamagahara, Izanami watches with satisfaction as Izanagi’s people suffer endlessly, seeming unaware of how her actions have affected the rest of the world.

Because the entire world has been flooded with the mud from Yomi, progress has stagnated completely and this timeline was Pruned.

Personality:

Likes: Jigsaw puzzles, Izanagi
Dislikes: Izanagi and his people, promise breakers
Talents: Governing the underworld
Natural Enemy: Izanagi
Izanami is incredibly vengeful towards her husband, Izanagi, and wants nothing more than to make him suffer. Or so it appears. In truth, she actually still loves him to a degree, but her anger towards him because of the chain of events that started with him killing Hi-no-Kagutsuchi against her wishes is extremely intense. Part of her wants to reconcile with him while the rest of her wants to make him suffer in pain and agony until he truly understands what his actions made her feel.

Because of her grudge against Izanagi, she dislikes the Japanese peoples because of them being his creations. Her mentality towards trying to make the Japanese suffer is to make Izanagi feel the same thing she felt when she discovered that he killed Kagutsuchi against her wishes. Despite this, she seems to show some interest in the things they have built and created, though she puts up a dismissive front.

She feels immense disgust for her true form and would rather not reveal it to anybody. If she ever reveals her true form, it is a sign that she has become absolutely furious and that somebody is in for a bad time.

Never under any circumstances ask her about Izanagi, because she will go on an intense, emotional rant about him, the intensity of which causes her to accidentally revert to her true form and start to cry tears of blood while ranting. She will not notice this until well after she has finished tirading.

If you ever make any kind of promise to her, going back on it is the worst possible thing you could ever do. If you try your best to uphold it but fail anyway, she will most likely tirade at you before forgiving you once she calms down. But if you deliberately break your promise to her, she will make certain that you regret it, most likely by horrifically torturing you.

Do not ask her to cook. Ever. It would appear that the taint of Yomi affects her cooking while also rendering her unable to see how normal people would be repulsed by it. She thinks that her cooking is quite good but to be fair, it probably is by Yomi’s standards. Interestingly, she views our cooking in the same manner that we view hers.

Relationships:

Ritsuka Fujimaru: “You are one of Izanagi’s people…”
Izanami seems to be mostly dismissive of Ritsuka due to them being Japanese and thus being one of Izanagi’s people. But over time, she begins to warm up to them a little.

Holy Grail: “Oh, that golden cup? Perhaps it could- No, it’s nothing…”

Kagutsuchi & Mizuhame: “…I have mixed feelings about this. Mizuhame, I honestly have nothing against, but Kagutsuchi…”
Izanami having died giving birth to Kagutsuchi causes her to feel some resentment towards him, but she doesn’t seem to completely hate him. She is unusually friendly with Mizuhame, but this seems to only be because Izanagi had practically no involvement with her creation.

Tamamo-no-Mae: “…”
Izanami seems to do everything she can to ignore Tamamo, sensing that she is an aspect of Amaterasu, who was born as a result of Izanagi cleaning himself of the filth of Yomi. To her, the existence of Amaterasu, Susano-o, and Tsukuyomi is a painful reminder of the falling out between her and Izanagi.

Japanese Servants (sans the non-human ones): “Oh, you’re one of Izanagi’s people... Leave my sight immediately.”

She is incredibly dismissive of them but can be seen observing them with some degree of curiosity and interest. She vehemently denies it.

Beni-Enma: Allowing these two to be in the same room is a very bad idea because the last time they met, it resulted in an intense argument about their opinions on each other’s food.

Ishtar, Ereshkigal: "How interesting. Your original version and I are quite similar; goddesses of life who came to rule the underworld instead."

Creator’s Notes:

I am a Blazblue fan. Because I am a Blazblue fan making an Izanami sheet, I had to make references to the Blazblue version of Izanami, such as using her as the FC. The bit about Izanami liking jigsaw puzzles is one of those references, by the way. Same thing with her skill (or lack thereof) with cooking. I know it seems very random, so I figured I should explain that.

That said, her viewing our cooking the same way that we view hers was something I randomly came up with on my own. I was thinking about how Izanami is a Lethal Chef and then I had the eureka moment; “Wait, isn’t Beni-Enma basically bird Gordon Ramsey?”.

I wanted to go for an angle beyond the generic “hates Izanagi with a passion” so I went for “hates Izanagi with a passion but still loves him”.

Once Orochi's sheet has been completed and uploaded, I'll upload the Yomi Lostbelt.

izanami: i assume that this you get to summon and not the actual lostbelt king, because she really doesn't feel like a world threat. strong? sure, but not nigh invencible like all lostbelt kings feel.

outside of that, everything is good. your version of yomutsu hirasaka is actualy preaty cool and she feels like surprisingly good waifu material for a goddess of death (but honestly, i should be used to it by now). it's kinda funny too, because my version of Izanami is someone who has come to understand and accept the nessecity of her role and your just said "fuck it" and got the hell out of there.

I'm more surprised that this went with the most...tame version of her myth considering the whole LB boss hype. For example the Yomotsu minions. In the most wtf version of the story written in the Kojiki, she did not send them after Izanagi, but transform into an eight-headed dragon. Disgusting dragon heads sprouts from her 2 breasts, head, butt, vagina, 2 arms, belly. These heads then became powerful thunder dragon gods on their own, represent the phases of thunder. Together they are called by the name Yakusa-Ikazuchi (later merged into one single deity - Raijin) and led the forces of Yomi to pursuit Izanagi, who is freaked out so hard from the nightmarish scene and ran away asap. This version from Kojiki is also the version that went with the 3 Noble childs being born from Izanagi's washing mud, while the Yomotsu-Shikome one is from Nihon Shoki. And in Nihon Shoki, after the couple gave birth to all gods, they birth Amaterasu as the one to rule them all, blessed her with their powers and retire from their positions. So you kinda...got the 2 versions mixed up.

Also no line for Ishtar or Ereshkigal. Babylonia (and Eresh mats) mentioned how their original - Inanna is very similar to Izanami in that both started as the mother goddess of life only to become goddess of death.

I think overall this is fine for a servant, but a bit underwhelming IMO.

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transform into an eight-headed dragon. Disgusting dragon heads sprouts from her 2 breasts, head, butt, vagina, 2 arms, belly. These heads then became powerful thunder dragon gods on their own, represent the phases of thunder. Together they are called by the name Yakusa-Ikazuchi (later merged into one single deity - Raijin) and led the forces of Yomi to pursuit Izanagi

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Originally Posted by Lily Emilio

I'm more surprised that this went with the most...tame version of her myth considering the whole LB boss hype. For example the Yomotsu minions. In the most wtf version of the story written in the Kojiki, she did not send them after Izanagi, but transform into an eight-headed dragon. Disgusting dragon heads sprouts from her 2 breasts, head, butt, vagina, 2 arms, belly.

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Wait, what? I had no idea that that was even a thing.

...Pardon me while I work on a Noble Phantasm based on that. As for mixing up the two versions of the myth, I haven't seen anything pointing to one being canon to Shinto myth over the other. Typically, when that happens, I tend to just take elements from the two and combine them into one thing. Gives a perfectly logical explanation to there being two versions of the same story.

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Originally Posted by the god of world-0

izanami: i assume that this you get to summon and not the actual lostbelt king, because she really doesn't feel like a world threat. strong? sure, but not nigh invencible like all lostbelt kings feel.

outside of that, everything is good. your version of yomutsu hirasaka is actualy preaty cool and she feels like surprisingly good waifu material for a goddess of death (but honestly, i should be used to it by now). it's kinda funny too, because my version of Izanami is someone who has come to understand and accept the nessecity of her role and your just said "fuck it" and got the hell out of there.

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I couldn't think of a reason to justify her going after the rest of the world when really she and Izanagi just created Japan. If you can recommend something for that, I might add it in an edit. That said, in Proper Human History, Japan is a pretty big contributor to the field of technology, so thanking it out almost 3,000 years in advance would definitely screw the rest of the world over in the long-run.

...Eureka! I just got an idea for that "doesn't feel like a world threat" statement of yours!

As for the rest of your comment, thanks! Yeah, the difference between your Izanami and my Izanami is pretty funny. Admittedly, I didn't really intend on making that contrast. It sorta just happened.

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Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu

Wait, what? I had no idea that that was even a thing.

...Pardon me while I work on a Noble Phantasm based on that. As for mixing up the two versions of the myth, I haven't heard anything pointing to one being canon to Shinto myth over the other. Typically, when that happens, I tend to just take elements from the two and combine them into one thing. Gives a perfectly logical explanation to there being two versions of the same story.

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You can see a summary of this here: https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%81...A4%A7%E7%A5%9E, and even this one has slight variations such as the dragon head spawned from her vagina is sometimes from her belly button, close enough I guess. It's not as popular in favor of the more tame version, similar to Ame no Uzume dancing. One version is just her dancing, but one is her stripping all her clothes in some extra lewd performance. In SMT/Persona series they referenced this dragon version by giving Izanami all lightning-based attacks. I guess Eresh's lightning cannons in the underworld also makes sense considering their parallel.

As for the Kojiki and Nihon Shoki thing, yes there is no canon version and you can mix them up, but since you mentioned Tamamo it feels a bit strange due to the mixing, as Tamamo called Izanami "mother" in CCC, and in some versions of SusanoO's bizarre adventure he tried to seek for Izanami in Yomi while Amaterasu goes down their once in awhile to refresh her energy (Tamamo's NP has underworld Authority), so I expected more of that. But it's a LB setting so it doesn't matter I guess.

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Originally Posted by Lily Emilio

You can see a summary of this here: https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%81...A4%A7%E7%A5%9E, and even this one has slight variations such as the dragon head spawned from her vagina is sometimes from her belly button, close enough I guess. It's not as popular in favor of the more tame version, similar to Ame no Uzume dancing. One version is just her dancing, but one is her stripping all her clothes in some extra lewd performance. In SMT/Persona series they referenced this dragon version by giving Izanami all lightning-based attacks. I guess Eresh's lightning cannons in the underworld also makes sense considering their parallel.

As for the Kojiki and Nihon Shoki thing, yes there is no canon version and you can mix them up, but since you mentioned Tamamo it feels a bit strange due to the mixing, as Tamamo called Izanami "mother" in CCC, and in some versions of SusanoO's bizarre adventure he tried to seek for Izanami in Yomi while Amaterasu goes down their once in awhile to refresh her energy (Tamamo's NP has underworld Authority), so I expected more of that. But it's a LB setting so it doesn't matter I guess.

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...The amount of research that I put into this was terrible.

I'm going to add the suggested fixes to Izanami tomorrow. I don't really have the energy to do it right now and need to go to bed.

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I couldn't think of a reason to justify her going after the rest of the world when really she and Izanagi just created Japan.

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Since your version is not too much of a super evil type of villain and just mainly aim to destroy Japan, you can make it to be a case of accident. For example, when Izanagi washed the mud from underworld there are 2 deities who spawned from the mud (Amaterasu and co from his body but the mud also spawns things). These 2 deities are sometimes referred to as one: Magatsuhi - the one responsible for all of evils in the world, in other words he is like Angra, born from grail mud. Magatsu Izanagi in Persona 4 is based on if Izanagi is corrupted by this mud.

What I'm saying is, imagine if Izanami used this mud, which turns out to be a sort of Tiamat's Chaos Tide (they also both have dragon forms, convenient), to fuel her conquest and eventually this went out of control and covered the entire world, polluting it with all evils -> instant pruned. It takes Tiamat 7 days to spread her mud to cover the planet so I imagine it shouldn't be that much trouble for Izanami if she indeed managed to overthrow the entire Shinto pantheon.

I couldn't be more pleased to see a new Create-A-Servant thread and so so many new and marvolous ideas! Onwards to a great year and lots of cool creations.

As for me, I decided to start the year with this idea that started as a Berserker and then evolved to a... Well... This. (Because I thought that everyone and their mothers made a Berserker out of this person, so I wanted something new. Not sure if this is exactly something new or just a terrible attempt, but oh well.)

Anyway, I hope the reading entertains you, and thanks a lot you guys for having me!




“Good day, Master. It is I, Servant Berser―huh? Foreigner? Wait a... Huuuh… ...?”


Foreigner
― the Angel of Death ―


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Strength
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Endurance
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Agility
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20151016044615

Mana
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20151016044613

Luck
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20151016044613

Noble Phantasm
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Class Skills

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Entity of the Outer Realm: EX

A being who descended from the void of outer space and the receptacle of an evil god, both in harmony. Withing her body, god’s Authority manifests itself.

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Madness Enhancement: EX

Although under the influence of Mad Enhancement, her thinking is decent and her mental faculties are intact. So, what is out-of-norm in here? Perhaps it is that sudden shift of personality whenever she engages in treatment mode…?

It is said that this is the same as she behaved in life, making her such a natural candidate to the Berserker Class that this is an useless Skill in the end, but sadly, not many trustworthy records of her endeavors can back up those claims.

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20180403105808
Divinity: B

Having become the herald of a higher being from space, she has obtained a strong rank of divinity.

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Bond 1

Robert Liston is remembered for her medical skills in a time before anesthesia. Not a good writer or speaker, she contributed little to the science of surgery, but was unsurpassed as a lightning and dexterous operator, whose methods of amputation were the envy and despair of other surgeons.

At that time, when speed was essential but cleanliness of little importance, she would always remove her coat, put on a clean apron, and wash her hands before operating. Her techniques soon earned her the name, “the fastest knife in the West End.” Her speed was such that she was able to remove a leg in under three minutes, while onlookers gasped in amazement and terrified medical students would hold the leg and restrain the patient.

While her fame is gruesome, it is also the truth that between 1835 and 1840 she performed amputations on about 66 patients, of whom only 10 died―which is a respectable result at a time when postoperative infection and gangrene was common. She is also credited to have performed the first operation in Europe under ether anesthesia.

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Bond 2

Height/Weight: 160cm・47kg
Source: Historical fact
Region: Scotland
Alignment: Lawful Mad
Gender: Female



Some said that his hands were slender and clean like the ones of a woman, and that made people whisper he could only possibly be one then. Some said that she was a sheltered lady that stole the name of her oppressive father―also Robert Liston―in order to perform feats not possible for the women of her time. Some said that the Grail just made a mistake.

What Foreigner has to say about the mismatched gender? “I like the present day’s nurse outfits.”


―Well, then...

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Bond 3

There are plenty of stories, some perhaps apocryphal, about her dangerous adventures in a surgery room, with varied results.

One of the stories was about the argument she had with the house-surgeon about the nature of a tumor in a small boy’s neck: was it an abscess of the skin or an aneurism of the carotid artery? Liston did not believe an aneurysm would afflict one so young and so took matters into her own hands by flashing a knife from her waistcoat pocket and slashing the tumor. The arterial blood flowed, and the boy died...

She is also credited to amputate the leg of a patient in less than 3 minutes―a marvelous feat―but in her enthusiasm, the patient’s testicles as well…


But surely her most famous anecdote was her legendary surgery with a 300% death rate.

It is said that, on this day, she had just amputated one patient’s leg under 3 minutes again, but in an euphoric state of concentration and glee over a job well done, she accidentally amputated in addition the fingers of one of the young assistants (who died afterwards in the ward from hospital gangrene).

Not only that, but the absolute madwoman also slashed through the coat tails of a fellow doctor, who got so terrified that the knife had pierced his vitals he dropped dead from fright right there.

――Oh yes, also, the said patient died from gangrene in the hospital ward three days later.


“Those really were the days, huh!”, she’ll laugh about it.

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Bond 4

A doctor works in a focused silence in a dim lighted room.

She wishes to save a life―but that is a life that has already ended. The patient has gone into shock minutes before, but she refused to accept that result. “Refusal” was her Origin, it was everything she had to defend herself against the harsh reality.

As her blade slashes through the cold flesh, she feels warmth in her own body.

―Ahh, it looks like she had cut her own finger in her hastiness, but that is of little importance. She can’t even feel the pain of it.

She must save that life. She must remove what is holding down the limitless potential of that person, for that is the work of a medic.

She must…


――A misunderstanding brough these two together.

From beyond the veil,

Daoloth

that god

listened to the sacrifice of blood and darkness a mortal offered to him.

From a place that hasn’t been touched by time or space in eons,

Daoloth

that god

touched, in turn, the soul of a single foolish woman who dared to call forth for him.

What

Daoloth

that god

did not accounted for was…


It seems that for her, who already saw things differently from the others, nothing really changed.

Some said that she suddenly became even more unhinged―some even said that this brought to the world that legendary surgery procedure with a 300% death rate―but that couldn’t be farther from the truth. It was just… How come they did not noticed all of what could be improved in that patient?

She just saw things differently.

That was all.

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Bond 5

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Human Comprehension: D

One can target enemy vitals with extreme precision, and all damage inflicted is increased. In addition, all damage received by the user is reduced.

It is less that she has a deep knowledge of the anatomy of a human being, as any doctor should―and, in turn, it is more that she has a very specific knowledge about amputation and its ramifications. She truly is a one-trick pony.

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Bloody Magdalene: A

A curse of failure. A fatal spell by the hands of an angel. It seems that she cannot, for the life on her, keep her patients alive. The ones in need of her care must perform a Luck Check anytime she decides to treat them. Should they fail…

Deadly against the foes she decides to heal; and it should be noted that what she means by healing, is just that she will slash away what is hurting them―quite literally.

――But should she decides that there is an ally in need of her treatment, that person’s life is also…

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Mystic Eyes (Veil): A+

The creature that peers out at the space from beyond the veil imparts its vision in her body. “Past” and “Future” become mere abstractions. But because her human body is far too removed from the mysteries of ancient magic to withstand the full implications of this power, her skills are limited to one type of future sight (predicting the future).

But that is not important, for she she has other priorities for this Skill: at this rank, by extremely concentrating during the moment before she is about to perform a surgery, it is said that she can manipulate her own sense of time; thanks to that, she is able to surpass her already noteworthy feats as a human. The estimated time of surgery drops to less than 20 seconds.

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Bond 6

Tiferet Aemia
That What can Only be Seen in Darkness, Cut Down by Light

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Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 1~5
Max. number of people: 5~6

The sublimation of a will so strong that overpowers reason―a weapon to cut through all maladies, everything that is poisonous or malicious. An attack that can cut down even the hardest substance known to man.

By seeing “beyond the veil,” her Noble Phantasm destroys and negates conceptual defenses such as time and dimension to successfully hit the target; because of that, intangibility cannot evade the attack as it cuts past the defense and strikes the physical being beneath it. They say that this power can even slash through metaphysical concepts such as “reality,” allowing her to destroy illusions of any level.


But why would she use it for such bloody purposes! Such a barbarian way of thinking won’t do! Her skills are made only for saving lives.

Now, rest assured as she will slash away all of what is hurting you…

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Bond 7

A dutiful Servant whose wish is only to help as many people as she can. She holds a deep admiration for the many nurses and doctors summoned under Chaldea and is always trying to learn a new thing or two from them. Whenever she gets praised, she becomes a bashful maiden.

But, as much as she wishes for nothing but the good health of those around her, unfortunately, it would be for the best if she could just… Do anything else that it isn’t touching a living being…


“Do not worry, I will be so fast that it’ll be over soon! You won’t have time to feel a thing.”

―In other situation, those could even be comforting last words to hear. But, coupled with that frenzied smile and that violent stance… Ahh, suddenly one remembers that she truly is a mad Servant.

But, worry not! She does not let those countless failures damp her spirit and is always in search of the next patient that needs her utmost care. A doctor should never dwell in negative thoughts, since it is a waste of time, and time is of utmost importance for a medic.

The trail of bodies she leaves behind tells a different tale.


They say that some people are simply born unlucky. But, in her case, it would be more accurate to say that she was born to make everyone she interacts with unlucky, in turn. What a shocking development!

Caster

"Hohoho! Mighty Imhotep has been brought forth under the class of Caster! How may Imhotep serve you, my Master?"

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True Name: Imhotep
Epithets: King of Administrators, Merit-Ptah, Father of Medicine, Ender of Famine, Son of Ptah, Chancellor of the King of Egypt, First in line after the King of Upper Egypt, Administrator of the Great Palace, Hereditary Nobleman, High Priest of Heliopolis, Chief of the Seers, Chief Carpenter, Sculptor and Maker of Vases in Chief
Class: Caster
Alternate Classes: Rider, Ruler
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Likes: Reading, Studying, Architecting, Pottery, Learning new skills
Dislikes: Distractions from her work, Hoarding knowledge, Idiots, “The Mummy” films
Talent: Many different things.
Natural Enemy: Lü Bu Fèngxiān
Attribute: Sky
Origin: Historical Fact — Egypt (27th century BC)
Armament: The Staff of Imhotep
Traits: Brynhildr's Beloved, Divine, Female, Humanoid, Servant, Undead, Weak to Enuma Elish
​Catalyst: Medical notes written on ancient papyrus

Parameters:

STR: E
END: D+
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LUK: B
NP: EX

Personality

Imhotep is a woman of many great deeds and talents, who rose from being a mere commoner to being worshipped as an outright goddess. Over the years her success has caused her to become rather narcissistic and full of herself, believing none but a select few (such as the pharaohs of Egypt) to be her equals. She will often address herself in the third person, and will often list out the various titles she acquired in life when introducing herself to others. She’s not one to consider the notion that she may be wrong, and when she is she never knows how to react.

That said, she is intensely loyal to those who she has sworn her services to despite her ego, such as her Master. Once her loyalty has been given she will lavish her superior with her care and attention, and will not stop until whatever command that was given to her has been fulfilled. While she might not consider her Master as equal to her, she will submit to their authority without question as she feels her role is to play second to them and act as an adviser when needed.

Lore

Imhotep was a commoner by birth, born in Ankhtowe, a suburb of Egypt’s capital city of Memphis, to a craftsman and his wife. Despite her humble origins, Imhotep was blessed with a great mind that was unparalleled. No skill was too difficult or esoteric for Imhotep to grasp, and in time she mastered every skill she sat out to learn. Imhotep became a temple priestess dedicated to the worship of the god Ptah, and with his favor she quickly rose through the ranks of Egyptian society, eventually reaching her peak when she became the High Priest of Heliopolis, the religious center of all of Egypt. With her multitude of skills and her understanding of the will of the gods, Imhotep soon attract the attention of the pharaoh Djoser, who named Imhotep his Vizier. Recognized for her multifaceted skills by the pharaoh, Imhotep was allowed to learn and advanced them as she pleased, and in her time under Djoser she accomplished three of her greatest feats.

First, she contributed to the understanding of medicine. Rather than relying on magecraft or superstitious “healing” that was prevalent back in those days, Imhotep dedicated herself to the understanding of the human body and its workings. Through careful study, she was able to treat wounds and illnesses through herbs and science rather than charms and magic. Over two-hundred diseases and 48 injuries were diagnosed rationally with a treatment, prognosis, and explanatory notes. Imhotep even created a school of medicine in Memphis, which perfected the art of healing for over two-thousand years.

Second was the Step Pyramid of Djoser. With her understanding of the gods, Djoser appointed Imhotep as the chief architect for his final resting place as she was in the best position to oversee the construction of the structure that would assist her king on his journey through the afterlife. For her king, Imhotep decided to forgo the traditional design for burial tombs and opted to create the first structure ever made entirely from cut stone. At the necropolis that she oversaw the construction, she created Step Pyramid of Djoser; the first ever structure of its kind in the entire world. For its time, it was a piece of architectural genius that would go on to influence the creation of the other great temples and pyramids that would define the Egyptian landscapes for centuries to come.

Her third great accomplishment was her role in ending a great famine that struck Egypt during Djoser’s reign. By the 18th year of the pharaoh’s reign, Egypt had been going through a famine that had last seven years. The king had asked his priest staff and Imhotep for help in ending the famine. Imhotep investigated the matter by consulting archives of the temple hwt-Ibety, learning the Nile’s flooding was controlled by the god Khnum on the island of Elephantine. Imhotep traveled to the island, entered the god’s temple, and prayed to them. While there, Imhotep encountered the god in a dream. Once Imhotep awoke, she wrote that all that occurred in the dream and reported back to Djoser. The king pleased with Imhotep’s findings ordered that Khnum’s temples be restored and that regular offerings be made to him, thus ending the famine.

Djoser would pass away some time after this, buried within the necropolis that Imhotep built for him. Imhotep would live for years after Djoser, serving under the next three pharaoh’s but much of the information of her time under these kings has largely been lost. She would serve under them in much the same way as she did with Djoser, even constructing their burial sites. She would work on the Buried Pyramid of Sekhemket and the Layered Pyramid of Khaba, both of which were to be far more grand than the original Step Pyramid of Djoser. However, both pyramids were abandoned midway through construction as both pharaohs passed away before they were completed. Imhotep would finally pass away under the reign of pharaoh Huni, having lived a life as one of the most influential people in the history of Egypt. After her death, Imhotep was deified as a goddess of medicine and healing.

Skills

Class Skills:

Divinity: C
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. Imhotep was was known as the "son of Ptah" and her mother was said to be Nut or Sekhmet. She was deified as the goddess of medicine and healing after death, even being equated to Asclepius by the Greeks. Her rank in this Skill should be B+ Rank, but it has dropped in rank due to possession of the Innocent Monster skill distorting her legend.

Item Construction: A+
The skill to manufacture magical items. Imhotep is limited to producing devices related to Egyptian magecraft, but as the daughter and follower of the god of creation and craftsmen, Ptah, Imhotep can create these devices of a top quality.

Territory Creation: EX
The skill to build a special terrain that increases one's capacities as a magus. Imhotep is an exceptional architect and engineer, and can create territories that are far superior to a “Temple.” Imhotep uses her Noble Phantasm “Ṣaqqārah” as her territory.

Personal Skills:

Egyptian Magecraft: A++
Denotes one’s ownership of the Magic Crest of ancient Egypt. The owner of this Skill is given a plus modifier towards checks related to necromancy magecraft.

High-Speed Divine Words: A
The power to activate thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is power long lost by modern magi. High-Thaumaturgy-level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells.

Innocent Monster: E
An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.

In the present era, for some humans the name “Imhotep” is associated with the undead antagonist of “The Mummy” films who was based on her. As a result she gains the “aspect of the undead”, granting her a plus modifier to her END stat, immunity to poisons, and suppression of her ability to feel pain, but also lowers her rank in Divinity.

Pioneer of the Stars: EX
The unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered “impossible” turn into “events that can be realized.”

She was an innovator in fields as diverse as medicine, architecture, poetry, astrology, and many more. Of particular note, Imhotep is credited as the first physician, who brought about the understanding that illness is natural rather than a punishment placed on humanity by the gods, inflicted by spirits, or the result of a curse, and there were methods to healing that weren’t magical in nature.

She also created the first known pyramid, a feat never attempted before, perhaps never even conceived of, and made it a reality; in doing so, she changed the world. The great temples and administrative buildings, palaces and tombs, the majestic monuments of the pyramids and towering statuary which came to define the Egyptian landscape, all began with Imhotep's vision of the Step Pyramid at Ṣaqqārah.

Talented in Every Field: A+
From her stories of displaying talent in multiple fields, like magecraft, medicine, and architecture. She can do anything she practiced when she was alive at A Rank or higher, and learns faster than normal no matter if she only just got started.

Noble Phantasm(s)

Ṣaqqārah
Step Pyramid of Djoser

Type: Anti-Fortress
Rank: EX
Range: 10 - 100
Maximum Number of Targets: 1000

The first pyramid that Imhotep had built and designed that can be used as her territory. This first pyramid — which was a part of a larger structure — was the first structure ever built of cut stone. It is the crowning jewel of Imhotep’s feats as an architect and engineer, and as she had already built it in life she can simply manifest the pyramid without the need to construct it. In addition, Imhotep shares this Noble Phantasm with the pharaoh Djoser, who had commissioned her to construct it. As such, neither can truly claim to be the rightful owner of the Noble Phantasm, but if they were to come into conflict with their respective versions of the complex, as its creator, Imhotep would win the battle without question.

The Ṣaqqārah also takes on the appearance of a futuristic, flying fortress, based on the notion put forth by some present era humans that pyramids and other large structure from past civilizations were the products of extraterrestrials rather than humans. It is not from distortion of legend that brings about these changes but rather insistence from Imhotep who claims, “It is a foolish notion created from the minds of idiots, but it does provide some inspiration.” As a result every version of Ṣaqqārah recorded as a Noble Phantasm has adopted these changes, including Djoser’s version, who if summoned would remark, “Ah... This is Imhotep’s doing, isn’t it?”

Within the fortress Imhotep is able to design traps and alter the layout as she deems fit, as well as summon armies of undead soldiers to defend the pyramid. She controls the entirety of the structure from a throne room situated deep within the complex, which allows her to see all that happens within its wall and control the pyramid’s defenses to corral and harass the enemy. On the exterior there exist several defensive placements that harness solar energy and fires the collected energy as sorching beams of light as a long-range bombardment.

The ultimate weapon of the fortress is its ability to channel sunlight and magical energy into the pyramid’s tip, allowing it to fire a super long distance beam of destructive power that can destroy even the most durable structures. While one may think this weapon is trying to invoke the power of the Dendera Electric Bulb, in truth it is yet more alterations by Imhotep from her inspiration by the “inane theory of the pyramids’ extraterrestrial origins.” From modern stories that extraterrestrial crafts possessing “death rays” that are capable of destroying even the mightiest monuments of man, Imhotep incorporates her own “death ray” into the temple complex.


Staff of Imhotep

A beautifully crafted, thin, darkwood staff that is a construct of Imhotep’s own design. It is light and fragile, making it a poor fit as a melee weapon but ideal for her magecraft. It makes use of the Was, the Djed, and the Ankh to gain different effects, but Imhotep cannot use these effects at the same time and must swap between them by replacing the head of the staff with the corresponding symbol.

Staff of Imhotep
With the Was, Power

Type: Support
Rank: C

Topping the staff with head of a set-animal and ending it with a fork, it stores additional magical energy that when utilized makes the staff functions similarly to an Amplifier Mystic Code to strengthen whatever spell Imhotep is casting. When using the staff as a conduit to channel her magic, all spells casted from it will receive a Rank Up — E Rank spells become D Rank, D Rank spells becomes C Rank, etc. — which can make already powerful spells even more powerful as a result with little taxation on Imhotep’s part. This makes the Was to be the most frequently used by Imhotep.

Staff of Imhotep
With the Djed, Stability

Type: Barrier
Rank: B
Maximum Number of Target(s): 1 (self)

Topping the staff with a pillar-like symbol, it can allow Imhotep to conjure five balls of protective energy that float around her when activated. These balls of energy will intercept any attack on Imhotep’s person, expanding and taking on the appearance of golden pillars when blocking an attack. The size and defensive power that the pillars take on is dependant on the power of the attack they are blocking, with the pillars capable of blocking any attack — be it physical or magical — that falls short of a C Rank Anti-Fortress attack. However with every attack intercepted, one of the balls of energy will be expended and can’t be replenished until the Noble Phantasm is activated again.

Staff of Imhotep
With the Ankh, Life

Type: Anti-Team
Rank: A++
Range: 30
Maximum Number of Targets: 100

Topping the staff with a symbol that looks like a cross with a loop in place of an upper bar, it becomes a representative of her status as a goddess of healing. Upon activation, Imhotep creates a “field of healing” that cures all of afflictions, both mundane and magical. Once the field has been established those within it will experience their bodies rapidly repairing themselves — wounds will stitch shut, illnesses will be cured, poisons will be flushed out of the body, curses will be negated within seconds, and even the loss of body parts and organs will be cured as the field will rapidly regenerate them. The field can bring back those from the critical moment before death, but it is incapable of bringing back those who have already died. However, the field cannot differentiate from friend or foe and will heal all those within it without bias.

Voice Lines

Ascensions:

1st Ascension: "You have done commendable work, my Master. But strive further to ensure Imhotep reaches her full power!"

2nd Ascension: "The power of mighty Imhotep grows once more. Well done, Master! Your dedication shines through!"

3rd Ascension: "At long last, Imhotep has done away with the last of wrappings that sullied her body for an attire more befitting her glory!"

4th Ascension: "Hohoho! Mighty Imhotep has reached the peak of her power! Rejoice, my Master! Do not shy away from Imhotep's glory!"

4th Ascension (Max Bond): "Ah... Finally, I have reached the peak of my power. Thank you, my Master. You have my gratitude."

Bonds:

Bond Lv. 1: "You have a great burden. But worry not! Imhotep is ready to serve."

Bond Lv. 2: "Imhotep doesn't mind being subservient to her lord, regardless of their quality or character. The job of a vizier is to assist those we are sworn to serve. You are yet another Imhotep will serve dutifully!"

Bond Lv. 3: "You are wondering why Imhotep was referred to as a man when she is a woman? Let's say that maintaining secrets is a good policy when you are the right hand to the king."

Bond Lv. 4: "You have done well in your journey, Master. I am impressed. ...Eh? What do you mean Imhotep spoke in the first-person?! I-I did no such thing! Erk-!"

Bond Lv. 5: "Master, you are truly remarkable. My heart swells with pride to have been summoned by a Master such as you. I hope that you feel the same about me."

Other:

Dialogue 1: "How is your work load, Master? Feel free to assign any of it to Imhotep!"

Dialogue 2: "How may Imhotep be of assistance today, Master? Imhotep is quite capable of handling any assignment you give her."

Dialogue 3: "Architecture certainly has advanced since my time. Perhaps you might be so lucky as to summon some fellow architects so that Imhotep may converse with them?"

On the Holy Grail: "Imhotep has no wish, for she has accomplished everything in life she wanted. No, no, no... Imhotep is simply happy to serve her summoner."

Something You Like: "Imhotep enjoys learning new skills! The more knowledge she acquires means that she is more capable of fulfilling her duties!"

Something You Hate: "The modern fiction known as "The Mummy" has sullied Imhotep's name by being associated with a monster! That is unforgivable!"

Birthday: "It is your birthday?! Forgive me, Master! Had I known in advanced I would have organized a celebration! It isn't too late is it?!"

Relationships

Pharaohs: "O great Pharaohs of Egypt. My humble personage bows before your grandeur."

Asclepius: "My Greek counterpart, at last we meet. Come, there is much work to be done!"

Florence Nightingale: "Your dedication to healing is quite impressive. Imhotep is also quite curious about this disinfection. Do you have a moment to talk?"

Thomas Edison: "Imhotep knows you aren't responsible for them, but if it weren't for the advent of film those movies wouldn't have existed!"

Vlad III: "Another whose existence has been corrupted by modern fiction. I share your pain, truly."

Semiramis: "The Hanging Gardens are truly a remarkable piece of architecture. It is a shame they are credited to someone who didn't have a hand in their construction..."

Hassan of the Hundred Personas: "Interesting. Specializing in a multitude of skills by distributing them through a weaponized mental illness. Such a fascinating technique."

Creator Notes

So, hi, new member here. I've been lurking on Beast's Lair for sometime now, mainly looking at the Create-A-Servant threads and finally bit the bullet and joined.

So here is the first servant sheet I'm posting here. Imhotep is one of the ones I feel is my best work. Originally I started working on her during Halloween and wanted to create a mummy Servant, which was either gonna be Imhotep or King Tut. I went with Imhotep after I remembered, "Oh yeah, the villain of the mummy movies was named Imhotep" and gave her the Innocent Monster skill to represent that because I'm not sure if there are many people who know that Imhotep is an actual historical figure. I also made her with the mindset of creating a top-tier, could possibly be a Grand Servant, kind of character, hence her rather high ranking skills.

The decision to turn her Pyramid into what is basically a UFO was a fun idea. Given how there are a depressing number of people who think aliens created them, I thought "What if a Servant embraced that idea?" Give how Servants can alter their own NPs to some extent, I did just that with the stepped pyramid. It felt like a very Nasuverse sort of thing to do given we have a Lucha loving Aztec god.