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deadline for submissions is christmas eveQuote:
After this turbulent year we've been through, I'd like to end 2020 on a more hopeful note, so my proposed prompt is this: Dreamers.
People like Iskandar or Napoleon who dreamed big, held larger-than-life ideals, and spent their entire life chasing their dreams. Of course, this prompt isn't strictly limited to "heroes". After all, in some cases, idealism and unbridled ambition can be two sides of the same coin, and history had its fair share of not-necessarily-good visionaries with big plans for the world. At the end of the day, how you interpret this prompt is up to you.
this is a really open prompt, so I look forward to seeing what your imaginations vomit forth
Quite the wholesome prompt, I'm also very eager to see what ya'll are going to come up with!
oh man, I wish I knew that prior, my last sheet from 2 weeks ago would have fit in here. Oh well, good luck everyone, looking forward to the results!
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After this turbulent year we've been through, I'd like to end 2020 on a more hopeful note, so my proposed prompt is this: Dreamers.
People like Iskandar or Napoleon who dreamed big, held larger-than-life ideals, and spent their entire life chasing their dreams. Of course, this prompt isn't strictly limited to "heroes". After all, in some cases, idealism and unbridled ambition can be two sides of the same coin, and history had its fair share of not-necessarily-good visionaries with big plans for the world. At the end of the day, how you interpret this prompt is up to you.
Hmm seems that the servant i curently work does fitt the Topic , Jibun o yorokobaseru neat !
I mean, someone's definitely gonna submit Joseph for this, right?
My money was down on Don Quixote being among the submissions. :roman:
Da Vinci: "Okay Summoning Process initiated, looks good Master, the new Servant should be here any second! Ah there they are...heh?"
Goredolf: "Who is that? He looks kinda creepy. Not really Heroic Spirit like."
Sion: "Is that sand all over him? Hey you, newcomer! Stop making a mess here, we have sensitive equipment here!"
Master: "Good Day Sir, I am your Master. What is your True Name and Class? My name is…"
Holmes: "Master-san! Not one more word! Mash, be ready to protect! That person is of the Foreigner Class and I think I know who that is. We should NOT let him speak."
Foreigner to Humanity
Class Skills
Mash: "Holmes-san, you know who that is? He hasnt even said a word?"
Holmes: "That is a blessing for us, I doubt anyone would like to hear any of his words, they are likely attacks on their own.
Am I right,
Adolf Hitler?"
Mash: "He…he smiles?!"
Appearance and Parameter
Personal Skills
Mash: "Master, I suddenly feel a terrible pressure eminating from him, it feels dreadful. I rarely say that, but is it wise to have a contract with him?"
Holmes: "I highly recommend to not enter a contract. A Servant of his recognition could mentally attack you upon entering. He is too infamous and Evil, his reputation after his death should even increase this aspect of him."
Goredolf: "I agree, I dont want this beast among us! Use your Command Spells to let him selfdestruct or something!"
Da Vinci: "Something is happening, I dont know what, but be prepared!"
*Foreigner's smile is replaced with a silent scream of pain. From his throat springs forth a gust of ash, covering the ground before him. He holds his throat and falls to his knees*
Sion: "What a mess, what is that?"
Mash: "Look!"
*The layer of ash starts trembling and suddenly stops. Then, as if someone writes with their finger in it, words appear.*
Sion: " "He...may…not…speak…" Who wrote this? This is pretty terrifying to look at."
*Foreigner holds his throat again, contorts his body in pain with just some pained noises coming out, before unleashing another wave of ash into the room, covering the ground, walls and ceiling.
"Us." is written in front of them. *
Da Vinci: " "Us"? Who is U…oh my god…"
*The whole room begins to fill with handprints in the layer of ash. Big ones…and small ones...*
"Us."
Noble Phantasms
"Relationships"
Notes about his Class
Creator's Notes
Welp, we're starting this contest off with a bang, it seems. Oof! It's terrifying. I love it!
Thanks. I hate that I love it.
"Alright guys it's the holliday season! Here's an open, fun prompt for you all :)."
first entry is literally Hitler
I've seen a bunch of Hitler sheets on this forum to the point where it ended up being a little cliche for a while, but you definitely took the idea in a different direction compared to most. The ashes of his victims clogging his body and literally keeping him from speaking is a wonderfully evocative bit of imagery. Reminds me of that Twilight Zone episode where the Nazi prison guard had to relive all the same pain he inflicted on his inmates.
On the other hand, him having Speer as a literal spear is kind of hilariously on-the-nose and doesn't add that much to the sheet IMO. I get you wanted to give him some kind of weapon so he could fight despite his weak body, but since it doesn't have any special effects as an NP I feel like it'd be more suited as just a mention in his Equipment/Armament section or something. Oh and, is there a reason none of his NPs have ranks and there's no listed parameter section? It's also worth noting the FC you gave isn't showing up properly. Might want to fix that.
I can say i am somewhat shocked and i doent understand why the Counterforce does nt get active ? Also have i given myself a Limit as i doesnt make any servant of the two worldwars .
thanks for the mention of the FC, it is so weird that it works for me but on other browser it has problems. Does it work now?
Regarding Speer, my line of thought is what lies at the end of hitlers dream is Germania, the capital of his world. The one tasked with creating Germania was Speer. He was the first Architect of the Reich and minister of Armaments. Therefore he is hitlers Armament and the tool to activate his Germania NP, because he is his creator in a sense. Speer is also one of the reasons he has Territory Creation. Does that make sense now?
The reason why his NP have no ranks is simple: idk how to give them ranks and i personally dont think they are that necessary. I avoided giving ranks on other sheets as well.
And i avoided the Parameter section for him as well, because i just know he has rank A in LCK, because he just had a bunch of it in life. I kinda didnt want to do that, idk how to describe it and partly dont know where it would fit in the way i wrote the sheet, as it is a more flowing sheet with the story and stuff. I think i will add the parameter under the FC. In terms of what he likes, dislikes, body measures and stuff, alignment...It is Hitler, we know most of the stuff and i dont wanna make him more human in a sense? Mixed feelings towards my own sheet, its weird i know, sorry.
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relatable, can be a weird topic, I wasnt that happy researching him, let me tell you.
Why wont the counterforce activate? Well were they active during the war? Thats my line of thinking. Maybe they think some horrible things are necessary for humanity to prosper. Maybe they let it happen to let humanity remember that the notion that "it wont happen ever again" is wrong. It can happen again. I let some things vague on purpose.
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you think 2020 ends on a happy note? xD
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”I made it link by link, and yard by yard; I girded it on of my own free will, and of my own free will I wore it. “
The Stingiest Man in Town
Ebenizar servant conffirmed hm interetsing i must i say aswell the use of the Temporal Mashine God Images .
now i hope that we get a a Heroic servant which does represent a more hopefully side .
Guys, please consider that maybe Servant Hitler wasn't the most tactful choice to turn into a *Heroic Spirit* for a contest whose prompt is *dreamers*.
I mean, I suppose it fulfils the brief in the technical sense
but also, yeah. i'm not sure whether to allow this one or not.
Well, the prompt does note that being a dreamer isn't necessarily always a good thing. And there's been a bunch of Servant Hitler sheets in the other thread, plus horrible people as Heroic Spirits is nothing new to the franchise (hello, rapist child-murdering Satanist Gilles de Rais). In general I don't have a problem with that sort of thing, since it's not like the sheet's really glorifying Hitler or depicting him as an awesome guy.