If anyone cares I just fleshed out my Georgina Washington's personality section a bit more. Feel free to give it another read if you'd like.
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If anyone cares I just fleshed out my Georgina Washington's personality section a bit more. Feel free to give it another read if you'd like.
So, I know I'm not around much at all anymore, but 5 months ago I commissioned a design for Yuenu, the Yue Maiden. Well, here it finally is:
https://i.imgur.com/70YiiZN.png?2
Behold the Seibaface of Ancient China.
Looks nice. What's written on her sword?
At some point I considered having her White Tiger form where's holding the sword in her mouth a la Sif from Dark Souls but eh... I think this is enough.
Not sure what happened to the rest, so I should get on that sometime.
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tl;dr "This sword is made and used by the King of Yue Gou Jian himself"
Here it is. :)
I did not know that. Point to the king.
https://imgur.com/a/W4KcQNP
https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl...s_yOs54MyddrlM
Class: Assassin
Other Class: Rider, Saber
True Name: Mithridates VI Eupator Dionysius
Titles: The Great King of Pontus, King of Poison
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Region of Origin:Asia Minor
Master: Constantine Blackmore
Parameters:
Strength: C
Endurance: D+
Agility:A
Mana:D
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: EX
Height: 6’6”
Weight: 100kg
Gender: Male
Likes: His research
Dislikes: The Romans, Conspirators against him
Talents: Toxicology, Propaganda
Armaments: Sword
Appearance:
Mithridates is a tan skinned man of an impressive stature, although his form is more streamlined than his supposed ancestors, with much smaller amounts of muscle. His hair is a pure blond, and eyes the colour of molten gold. Despite being of the assassin class, he wears a suit of golden and red armour that covers his entire body, with a fanned display of peacock feathers on his back, with much longer feathers at the bottom acting as a mantle.
Skills:
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Noble Phantasm:
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Details:
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So, finally finished up Assassin Mithridates, took a little longer than I thought! I really hope you guys like it! Criticism is heavily encouraged. So, just a question I want to put forward, other than the cannon classes, what are the other Servant classes used by the thread, as I only know about Launcher.
Also, how the ---- do you get the pictures to work?
So, next sheet: George Lucas Jr.(STAR WARS!!!!!!!)
For pictures, submit something to imgur, and then copy the image address and put it in the [insert image] at the top of your post options.
As for the sheet itself, my first and instant thought is why isn't Mithradates a Caster? Persian nobles relying on generals and the like to lead their armies while the kings chilled out in the back is nothing new, therefore using that as an excuse that he isn't confrontational and Assassin-y seems very odd, and doesn't display the best understanding of his life. His Noble Phantasm, also, is literally to create his own territory, a Class Skill for Casters. The rank as well seems a bit high, but I never like to comment too harshly on that.
My only other issue is Ancestral Benefits, which seems to be a highly limited Imperial Privilege. Which is fine, in theory, but Mithradates is far, far, far from anyone you could call unique when it comes to claiming famous heritage. Whether or not I agree with the skill is ultimately moot, but I do think giving an example or two of the skills he can use might help with cohesion.
Sorry if this sounds overly mean or something, but I've done my own sheet on the man and felt compelled.
Nah, you're fine pointing such things out. Really, I'm mainly here to improve my sheets. I fully agree with what you said, but much like my Kronos sheet, I will admit I have a problem with getting an idea and being unable to let it go. If I may ask, I couldn't find another sheet of Mithridates, so could you send a link? I would like to read through a version of this guy that wasn't contorted to forcefully fit a class.
http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...69#post3000369
Here you go.
To answer your other question, I've seen things like Brawler and Leader and even a Fucker?
Also, these aren't shots back, but what I meant by him being non confrontational due to his tactical mind acknowledging his ill suiting for direct combat in this form. If I were to actually post those alternate classes, he would be more confrontational, attempting to strike enemies preemptively instead of leading them to him. Also, I agree on the NP, but only because I have no way of describing what I want to without making another sheet just as long on it alone. So what I described doesn't fit the rank, but the rank fits what I wanted to describe basically.Quote:
As for the sheet itself, my first and instant thought is why isn't Mithradates a Caster? Persian nobles relying on generals and the like to lead their armies while the kings chilled out in the back is nothing new, therefore using that as an excuse that he isn't confrontational and Assassin-y seems very odd, and doesn't display the best understanding of his life. His Noble Phantasm, also, is literally to create his own territory, a Class Skill for Casters. The rank as well seems a bit high, but I never like to comment too harshly on that.
Also, I see what you meant with Ancestral Benefits, Changing it now!
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To answer your other question, I've seen things like Brawler and Leader and even a Fucker?
Just finished reading, you did a far better job with your Rider Mithridates than my Assassin, especially since you actually used the guy in a class that works for him. Well done, his third NP is especially interesting.
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20100731001040
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Alternate Classes: Rider
True Name: Joseph Montferrand
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: America (19th century)
Armament: Axe, hook, fists, boots
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: C
MANA: E
LUCK: B
NP: D+
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Yet another milquetoast sheet, trying to get back into the spirit of making these again. Comments would be welcome.
As strong as the guy might have been IRL, isn't B+ in Strength too much, considering he's such a recent figure? I'd personally lower it to C or C+
As I see it, the Lancer class container's basic rank for Strength is B and he's known for being exceptionally strong (in the constraints of his own era), so even with the reduction coming from his era, it should come to around B or B+. The plus might've been overdoing it, I admit.
I just remembered that Li Shuwen also has a B in Strength while being from the 19th century, so nevermind my previous post
i feel like there's more times when fate has broken its own rules than followed them so like just play fast and loose tbh
i say this, having never seen fate or played fgo, but still
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20100730224927
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Alternate Classes: N/A
True Name: Siyâvash
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: The Shahnameh
Armament: Mace, lance, shield
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: D
LUCK: E
NP: C
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore