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Damn. This really deserves more comments.

Wish I could be more creative but I'll stand by with what everyone else is saying: this is about as Nasu as you can get without Seiba or inappropriate...

When I first read this I thought you meant FGO and were talking about the cowboys.

You guys have already hashed out most of the points I would make, so I just wanted to say I really enjoy the clash between Shinji and Issei. You also do a good job of presenting Shinji's biases as an...

To be entirely fair to PotK, that didn't actually happen. Ciel kind of hates Shirou's guts and he barely interacted with any of the other characters. He took in Satsuki, but come on she deserved a...

That was really interesting!

I don't usually read OC-centric stories, but I'm gad I made an exception. I actually found myself liking your characters pretty quickly. You also handled the setting's...

We do know it's possible for a magus to turn into a Dead Apostle by their own power. Considering the resources the Harways have access too, it wouldn't be that out there for Julius to prepare such a...

That's actually a really good point. Still, it seems like it would be enough for 'real' delinquents to try to pick a fight with him, even if they were just trying to look tough.



The point is...

Because Mordred leading a gang of delinquents would be, well, probably what she would actually get up to on a day off sans Grail War. I'd read that too, but it would be a very different kind of...

Actually, that reminds of like a half-idea I've had floating around for awhile: Shirou accidentally becomes the leader of the local delinquents.

Shortly after Kiritsugu's death Shirou becomes the...

...Yeah

I mean that is all absolutely true, but fiction is the place for rare coincidence.

It wouldn't have to be as part of some huge information network. Off the top of my head, Shirou could join some a...

Sure, but most stories are about things going awry. The Nasuverse has plenty of monsters Shirou might need to bring out an NP out to beat, especially if he's trying to protect someone. And it...

Actually, I imagine all three of those reasons would be enough to put Shirou on Yggdmillennia's general recruitment radar. That is, Shirou would look like someone who is pliable and has theoretically...

Interesting, though that does raise a number of questions. For example, the Land of Steel as we know it is set something like a thousand years on the future? Are you keeping to that timeline, in...

Oh right, that's also a thing. They (probably) require his prana specifically. I suppose you could make an argument that Rin could jury-rig a way of getting around that, like using a special jewel to...

As far as I know there's no in-universe reason Sword-style Origin bullets couldn't happen. Natalia did not give me the impression of a master magus, nor that she was a specialist in Severing and...

You bring up Shinon and Leonardo but not Rolf? He is still probably the most powerful archer unit I've ever had in an FE game, not to mention his tendency to inexplicably max out his defense stat by...

Somebody brought this up earlier, and pointed out it would make EMIYA and Cu eskimo bros. I actually feel like EMIYA would be the most bothered by that.

Cool pic, but you should probably spoiler tag that.



Yeah, this probably. And I figure she would do pretty well. What's Mordred's Luck? Would it be enough to counter Gae Bolg? On the other...

Except I don't think Shirou would keep on it. Mordred might share Arturia's face but not all that much else. She wouldn't set off the same...protective instinct? True love? Sexual confusion? Whatever...

She gave Kairi a warning first, so I imagine Shirou would get one as well. And it's not like he goes around demanding every female character in the series act more girlish, it's really just Arturia....

Yeah, they'd have a great dynamic. I would love to see a story where Shirou summons Cu. Or even steals his contract from Kotomine, somehow.

Ha, cool.



Hm, telepathy was the vibe I got from her reaction to Shinji, but I suppose he's just easy to read. Though she did jump to a slightly wrong conclusion, and then I guess ended up...

Oh, fun! How often does a story actually leave the Idea Thread?

I am really looking forward to seeing more of this. This looks like a solid, believable take on a post-UBW Shinji trying to be less...

So Nasuverse versions of more classic horror stories? Yeah, I'd read that.

We already have Apocrypha's Frankenstein, but it could be interesting to see how Mary learned about it.