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    V. Quid Pro Quo  The rain falls from the...

    V. Quid Pro Quo

    
    The rain falls from the London sky in the way that it often does. It is falling in great drops that tend to ruin a person's hopes of getting anywhere without being soaked...
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    Sticky: Hi Zetsu.

    Hi Zetsu.
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    I just changed some of the prose, mostly, to try...

    I just changed some of the prose, mostly, to try and reflect glasses!Touko as being involved in the performance of humanity while internally she is much more calculating and cold, as opposed to...
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    Sorry for the teaser bump, but after considering...

    Sorry for the teaser bump, but after considering feedback from multiple sources, I made some concessions and some edits to my previous chapter. I do not feel that the circumstance nor the character I...
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    "Avenger moeblob Anne Frank" sounds truly...

    "Avenger moeblob Anne Frank" sounds truly terrifying. If it's an aesthetic issue, I find that interesting, because others have called it "ominous" or "foreboding." Of course this most recent...
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    Your opinion of how I'm writing her still seems...

    Your opinion of how I'm writing her still seems quite harsh and to suggest that A) you know better and B) the effort should be abandoned because you don't think she's "enough" something.
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    Thank you! I feel that this criticism is...

    Thank you!



    I feel that this criticism is to be duly noted, and I appreciate its honesty, but I also think it's a little bit premature. I'm not sure what "constraints" you mean, because this...
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    Oh, I'd been meaning to read more since......

    Oh, I'd been meaning to read more since... whenever I was reading it some in 2019. Grabbing the PDF!!! I think this is a good idea and helpful.
  9. "Impossible to prove" is what I like to hear.

    "Impossible to prove" is what I like to hear.
  10. Yes, I know. It is a very pretty scene. I'm just...

    Yes, I know. It is a very pretty scene. I'm just saying that it didn't until Shiki and co got involved.
  11. This sort of gives me the vibe that Araya somehow...

    This sort of gives me the vibe that Araya somehow was involved earlier and that he coaxed Touko into it for some reason. She says something like that his interest in understanding...
  12. Yeah, I remembered that part, but it just seems...

    Yeah, I remembered that part, but it just seems like a hell of a coincidence unless someone was interacting or doing some stalking.

    Then, I don't see any problem with the stalking not coming from...
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    My first exposure to FSN was through the UBW...

    My first exposure to FSN was through the UBW anime and there's the line in "Brave Shine" that goes, in English, "stay the night, (you?) save my life," and I feel like it's sort of a post hoc way of...
  14. Touko's initial involvement in KnK

    I ran this by You, esteemed lore curator, and they didn't know if it had ever been sufficiently explained in canon.

    So I decided to crowd-source opinions and any insight into canon, because it's...
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    IV. A Non-Traditional Student Touko...

    IV. A Non-Traditional Student





    Touko enters the lecture hall, the rows of seats rising far above her and descending lower to the lectern, an indoor amphitheater. She glances at the watch...
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    I thought you were taunting me for not being able...

    I thought you were taunting me for not being able to read, but then my heart grew three sizes. Thank you Dullahan-san.
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    Dullahan's impromptu translation was at least...

    Dullahan's impromptu translation was at least rather entertaining compared to the liberties taken by coke, but not just having the ability to read Japanese overnight is disheartening.

    I was...
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    I have a lot that come and go, but I'm just here...

    I have a lot that come and go, but I'm just here to say that Mikiya and Shirou | Archer are Type Moon Best Boys.
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    Reusing, I guess? OP posted in wrong forum but I...

    Reusing, I guess? OP posted in wrong forum but I redirected them, and it just seems like an opportunity for people to dunk on fanfic otherwise.

    Shit, totally forgot to link:...
  20. Kinda demoralizing reply there, dude. If any...

    Kinda demoralizing reply there, dude.

    If any mods are watching, might be better to lock or remove this thread since OP reposted in the appropriate forum.
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    Ah, I'm excited to know about this! Thanks for...

    Ah, I'm excited to know about this! Thanks for your work, Crown if I understood you to be the one translating it.
  22. There's a fanfic discussion forum down below if...

    There's a fanfic discussion forum down below if you want to talk about this. The mods can move your thread if they notice, but you could also go there.

    I'm glad to see people wanting to discuss...
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    Mood.

    Mood.
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    It only costs one drop of blood, but take care...

    It only costs one drop of blood, but take care with the ceremonial blade.

    /j

    Hello new blood. You did the 'right' thing for anyone who's picky by starting with the games, says person who still...
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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnFSsRWmsjk

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnFSsRWmsjk
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