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    The grammar needs a lot of work, and some...

    The grammar needs a lot of work, and some sentences don't even make sense. There are also long passages that were pasted in twice. As for the story, I'm not against the self-insert isekai trope, but...
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    Liiiiit.

    Liiiiit.
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    I'm too lazy to do proper research. What's this...

    I'm too lazy to do proper research. What's this about Takeru being Amaterasu's master?
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    Yeah, Sigmund.

    Yeah, Sigmund.
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    The first drabble is funny but ends on a serious,...

    The first drabble is funny but ends on a serious, philosophical note. I like both sides of that. The second is fucking incredible. (I like the hints that Zouken manipulated Sakura into catching them,...
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    If the climactic fight with Saber is next update,...

    If the climactic fight with Saber is next update, is there any benefit to guessing Saber's identity at this point? The clues I remember, in case compiling them helps anyone see it, are:
    – Wields...
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    I can tell the difference in their "voices", so...

    I can tell the difference in their "voices", so you've navigated that successfully thus far. Also, I much enjoy the diction of your prose, if I didn't make that clear before.

    "He was walking" vs....
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    I first read this when there were two chapters...

    I first read this when there were two chapters out, and I'm extremely glad to see it updated, with chapters I missed in the meantime besides.

    I can't offer deep critical analysis of literary...
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