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@ Lantz
So you are completely ignoring Rin, who gives up her most powerful jewel to save the life of her estranged sister's notboyfriend (even though Shirou should have died, being a witness), who...

Here's a list of what I see wrong with it.
Your pacing feels wrong, and I find myself just skimming along, not paying attention. I'll say that it can be improved if you put in some line breaks in...

Let's face it, if GB does write another Nasuverse doorstopper, he'll use Mind of Steel Shirou. He's already used Fate route, IF is UBW, so next would be a Shirou from HF. Since MoS Shirou is set on...

Doesn't the Tohsaka Crest provide additional circuits to Rin, thus giving her a larger supply than Sakura?


Zouken (thinks he) has Saber under his thumb due to Shirou's fealty geas (but...

Didn't Kirei's narration use drowning a kitten as a simile? We thought you were joking Zalgo; just using a dark phrase for comedic effect.

We were wrong.

Ouch. This drabble was beautiful, bitter, and painful. The last paragraph of how it was the only time Matou Shirou knew peace and freedom was heartwrenching. You cruel, magnifcient writer.

I agree that Saber was shoehorned into lust, but Alexander is greed. In the light novel, he says "As king, you must have stronger desires than anyone else," and in the anime, the speech is cropped...

Well my dear friend, we seem to have encountered a troll or Sakura hater. If he had said "anyone getting good ends," then we could surmise that he feels that good ends are "cheap" and do not have the...

^ Canon, they had a one night stand in Fate route.

And here I thought Kotomine would be an expository NPC. And once again, everyone is making up the plot themselves, and the GM is reduced to moderating mechanics and punishing players by making the...

Let's not forget that Rin and Saber shared the first H-scene, or that the Rin erotic dream was sent by Sakura (or maybe Rider.) So Rin actually gets three scenes, one of which is in a classroom (but...

If you've got a local tabletop games shop, there's usually a group meeting at some point in the week, ask the clerk if there is one and when they meet. If you frequent conventions , there's often a...

This. The kids are just OCs that are mash-ups of the physical and mental traits of the author's favorite pairings, and you are lucky if you see the kids have to tie up their parents' loos ends,...

It probably involves how one uses the Force to enhance their physical abilities, or he doesn't keep himself as calm as other Jedi.

Or maybe it's a dark-style because he's played by Samuel Jackson.

But it shows that the possibility for Emiya Shirou, Ace Attorney to happen. Considering HA mishmash of all endings, "studying abroad" probably means going to Clock Tower with Rin. Therefore, it's...

This has the potential to really go places. It will be cool to see what direction the plot goes, because as you said, you have a lot of freedom with sprites. The planned premise wrecked as the...

I, for one, welcome our new cyborg lesbian feline overlords.

...So long as my internet isn't turned into cat hell. Wow, it's only been a month since that happened, but it feels like it was longer.

That's... just beautifully tragic. I love it, and we need it. Although I'm starting to imagine you as Urobuchi's sock puppet. Not that there's anything wrong with that, it's just you write moving...

Nah, wild derailments that don't have even a remote relevance to fanfiction, are fairly common here. Flirting in Quebecois French is something I haven't seen here before though. I think it departed...

I think Sakura's saying that because she had no choice but to take the training, where as Shirou willingly trained, nearly every night, even though there was nothing forcing him.

And Rodyle, I...

They'd be able to interact at school, so I can see Sakura's crush deepening into full-blown, unrequited love. And as for her not "knowing" Shirou's being worm raped: It might be a mental defense...

Avalon needs Saber's prana to heal the bearer, so Shirou is being wormed anyways. Kariya is proof that worms can work for males as well, Zouken likely increased his "training" for more power gain in...

How is what Tech wrote confusing or bizaare? It's just Psalm 23 + Saber's perspective of Shirou.

Shiki kills a pile of Zouken worms, but there are still plenty more, including the soul worm in Sakura's heart. Zouken exercises worm control over Sakura with the heart worm on day 3, and orders...

Gilgamesh. Your argument is invalid, for he possesses the original argument.

That, or Kotomine'd just harmonize with him.