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Thread: FSN x MGLN crossover : Fate/Night Sky

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    Quote Originally Posted by crystalwatcher View Post
    The spoiler yes, but how do I make a unique warning? Like: Spoiler (Lemon)?
    [ spoiler=lemon ] [ /spoiler ] with no spaces...the message after the equal sign can be as long as you want

    or just make a note that there is a Lemon in the spoiler.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    [ spoiler=lemon ] [ /spoiler ] with no spaces...the message after the equal sign can be as long as you want

    or just make a note that there is a Lemon in the spoiler.
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    Really good job on the rewrites Faggle, they feel a lot more smooth and meaty. Looking forward to the others.

    @crystalwatcher: A lemon, eh? I am ...curious.
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    I'm curious to know who is going to be involved in the lemon, but I have a guess, considering it would be about F/NS...
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    I'm curious to know who is going to be involved in the lemon, but I have a guess, considering it would be about F/NS...
    Zafira and Taiga of course


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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Zafira and Taiga of course
    Oh GODS I hope not! (O.o)

    *starts praying for a Signum & Shirou Lemon*

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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Zafira and Taiga of course
    Or Reinforce Einz and Avalon-tan ganging up on Shirou.
    Or Shirou and Ayako.
    Or Shirou and Signum.
    Or, better yet, Shirou and Signum and Ayako.
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    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Or, better yet, Shirou and Signum and Ayako.
    Or Shirou, Signum, Ayako, and somehow bending the laws of metaphysics to get there...Reinforce.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    Or Shirou, Signum, Ayako, and somehow bending the laws of metaphysics to get there...Reinforce.
    Reinforce Einz decides to Unison with Ayako or Signum. Makes everything better. =3
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Reinforce Einz decides to Unison with Ayako or Signum. Makes everything better. =3
    Hells yea!

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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Zafira and Taiga of course
    Dogs and cats!

    Also, papercuts. Can't forget the papercuts.

    And I am more than okay with any of these permutations. Though Ayako Unisoned with Rein opens up some untouched possibilities... Combine with Signum and Shirou is... Well, he'd better make sure steel is his body and fire is his blood.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Old_Iron View Post
    Though Ayako Unisoned with Rein opens up some untouched possibilities... Combine with Signum and Shirou is... Well, he'd better make sure steel is his body and fire is his blood.
    I suggested it before, but I'm glad it's getting attention.
    Shirou had better make sure that he's ready, especially with Rein and Ayako sharing the same body and mind...
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    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Wells said Iron...well Said (TTwTT)

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    Shirou is the bone of his sword.

    Of course they're going to cause fire run through his veins while his body becomes steel.
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    Now just think of Ayako. Then think of Reinforce Einz, with or without wings. Now think Ayako with Rein's hair and eye color, longer hair, and Rein's personality bleeding through her own.
    ...I might've done poorly at trying to form that image. ;w;
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    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
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    Just finished rewriting chapter I, doubling the size >_> also made some progress on chapter 7 as well.


    Currently waiting for Hyrule to check the grammar and tenses for any screwups.


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    Quote Originally Posted by The Sylentnight View Post
    Shirou is the bone of his sword.

    Of course they're going to cause fire run through his veins while his body becomes steel.
    Shirou will forge his peerless sword in Signum's mighty fires while Ayako/Rein keep feeding the flames?
    The Art of Shipping is as profound as it is dangerous; not for the faint of heart nor the weak of will, it makes gods and devils out of us all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Old_Iron View Post
    Shirou will forge his peerless sword in Signum's mighty fires while Ayako/Rein keep feeding the flames?
    ...I have the weirdest boner right now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    I'm curious to know who is going to be involved in the lemon, but I have a guess, considering it would be about F/NS...
    I vote for Archer x Kirei. Just for the "lol" factor.
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    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
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    A different version of Shirou breaking out the dream world (plus coronation)
    //////
    “This is a dream isn’t it?” Shirou asked as a silver haired woman faded into existence behind him and the world dimmed to a featureless void.
    “Yes, it is.” The woman said as Shirou turned to her.
    “I need to go back.” He looked her in the eye, his need to stop what was happening clear.
    “Please, I can’t be stopped, just stay here away from the pain.” Tears appeared at the corners of her now closed eyes, only for her eyes to open as Shirou embraced her.
    “It’s something I need to do. I’ll heal what has given you the title of the Book of Darkness, the Cursed Tome, I’ll give you a new name.”
    “But, the defense program…”
    “I will stop it, I sware it as your master. I promise you, She Who is The Blessed Wind That Supports Us All, Reinforce.” Tears flowed from the eyes to the newly named Reinforce as she returned Shirou’s embrace.
    “New name: Reinforce recognized, Administrator authority granted.” Shirou smiled and began to chant.
    I am the bone of my sword
    ///
    Unlimited Blade Works
    With those words echoing across the battlefield from nowhere yet everywhere; flames burst from the woman and consumed the world around them. Nanoha flinched back but was caught by them before she could do anything else. As the fire’s faded she looked around at the now changed landscape.
    A field of blades stretched from horizon to horizon, thrust into the Earth like headstones. Black feathers fell like snow from on a serene winter night. A sky made of gears and nighttime clouds floated overhead. Something glowed from the corner of her eye and she turned to it, eye’s widening at the sight of Shirou standing upon a Belken array surrounded by his Knights.
    We are the Guardian Knights Who Gather Before our Master, He of the Night Sky
    As Long As Our Master Exists Our Souls Shall Never Extinguish
    As Long As There is Life in Our bodies, We Shall Stand By One Another
    We Will Always Exist Before Our Master, The King of The Night Sky, Emiya Shirou!

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