~I hate writing English paragraphs longer that one line. Or any language, really.~
In the middle of re-re-redoubling the effort of erasing the habit of lurking for the 9001st time
Stop being thread police. Fraggle can do that just fine.
Also: You don't like stuff. Others like stuff. You have no right to veto them, Mr. nofunallowed.jpg
Except you're wrong because you're assuming eternal torture has to happen in the afterlife.
Last edited by Kyte; July 18th, 2012 at 03:43 PM.
Right, beenlazybuzy.
Nanoha and Fate are much like their canon counterparts, although Fate's a bit obsessive with hunting down people abusing the results of project Fate. She still seeks to atone for her Mother, who she never really managed to distance herself from due to never having experienced the Tome's dreamworld. Nanoha is a bit more rash then her canon persona, lacking the experience of threading death due to the lack of the cartridge system. She did learn her lesson form her burn-out, but she's still to willing to push her limits.
Yagami Hayate has mediocre power, but is intelligent, determined and has a lot of ambition. Growing up in a foster family with far more siblings then normal has given her the desire to stand out.
grailmud + Nanoha/Fate/Hayate = braindead/ mindraped magical girl with severe bodily harm. Be happy if they survive.
Dead = soul destroyed and we all know that there are fates worse then death in the Nasuverse ( Kotomine basement party! Midnight shadows of Fuyuki! Fun-Fun Illya playtime!).
Last edited by fraggle; July 18th, 2012 at 04:27 PM.
Illya is best servant
I think how bad the fun fun Illya playtime fate is depends on what her fun this time is.
Consider this a preview of what I've been working on for this.
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In the eighty-first year of the TSAB, thirty worlds rose up in revolt. They declared themselves to have removed themselves from the aegis of the TSAB, and formed a new governing body, the Congress of Worlds. They were joined in their rebellion by three separate fleets and nearly forty percent of the TSAB's standing army.
The TSAB objected most vociferously.
The resulting war was henceforth referred to as the "Third Dimensional Civil War", although it was hardly 'civil'. It was short and vicious - even though it only lasted five years, casualties on both sides were appalling. It was a war which, in many cases, pitted brother against brother, sister against sister, friend against friend.
By all accounts, the war should have been over in days. The rebel army was outnumbered almost two to one on the ground, and the TSAB had kept nearly all of its naval assets. But the TSAB was unprepared for war. No one in the upper echelons had seriously believed that a rebellion of this scale would ever occur. Much of its forces were tied up on garrison duty, and, by the time it mobilized its reserves, the CoW had already achieved parity.
Even then, the TSAB might have won - it still controlled the core, industrialized worlds, and its population base was an order of magnitude larger. To this day, the CoW's victory is attributed to one thing and one thing only - the defection of the majority of Special Operations Force Six. When the SOF left, it took with it hundreds of the most skilled powerful mages in the TSAB's employ.
Under the guidance of Hayate Yagami, and freed from their police duty, they quickly became notorious for their unorthodox fighting style and their ability to show up at the most inconvenient times and places. Soon enough, they gained a reputation fearsome enough that some TSAB units would flee upon contact.
Among the ranks of SOF Six, there was perhaps one person whose name inspired terror in friend and foe enough, one person who carved a bloody trail through the history books. His name was Shirou Emiya.
He has the dubious honor of having the highest kill count of any soldier in contemporary times, even rivalling that of the Sankt Kaiser Olivie Segbrecht herself. Always accompanied by the Wolkenritter, he was consistently the first in to every combat situation and the last out.
The CoW said he was a hero of the people, and the presses told stories of his brave deeds, day and night.
The TSAB said he was a war criminal, and placed a bounty on his head.
They called him a murderer and a martyr, and, in the end, he was both, and neither.
~ Excerpt from Blue Sky, White Sun: The Story of Special Operations Force Six
天下大势,合久必分,分久必合。
That is a pretty interesting and well done take on the idea!
Who would defect to CoW though? Nanoha and Fate seems unlikely to me, since they're still naive and think that they can change TSAB.
Underneath the Stars
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Everyone else.
Words to live by: Fate is a B****, Destiny is a whore, while Karma is just doing her job.
Violence solves all problems. If its not working then you are not using enough.
Even though I am male after taking a 'Which Fate/stay night Character are you?' quiz I am...
Tohsaka Rin You are Rin. Cool and collected, you think logically about most situations. You strive for self-perfection, and rely on others only for your benefit. You may be cold toward most people, but you can be friendly when you try. Indeed, it could be said you enjoy helping others that you care for. Whatever the case, you tend to think logically and don't let emotions cloud your judgement.
You have my attention, I want to see more of this. Do you plan to start from a specific point or continue off of Fraggle's story as a more serious spin-off?
雲の騎士
Wolkenritter
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Sorry for the useless post, just felt like something I had to do. Pics from the Nanoha Doujin BetrayerS
Nice edit there fraggle. I expect Nanoha or Fate to have a breakdown soon.
Underneath the Stars
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This is grimdark FNS verse! Nanoha and Shirou have never been comrades..... and Fate's already dead! ( nommed by dark Sakura during 5'th war). Poor Vivio got blown up along with the cradle when Shirou arrived to save the day by superior firepower.... Nanoha never forgave him for that.
Illya is best servant
Wait what? Okay, that is too dark for me. Then again, Nasu without casualties isn't Nasu.
And Nanoha seems to be a pretentions sanctimonious girl in this verse if you ask me. THough it might just b eme.
Underneath the Stars
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In my opinion, Shirou said 'Come' a little too much.
With each day, one draws closer to death,
With each day, one expends more of one's life,
With each day, one obtains more memories,
With each day, one gets closer to losing them all.