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    Shiki genderswap fic! (title under construction)

    Ok, so due to the minor influx of Shirou genderswap fics, I want to do a Shiki lesbian harem genderswap fic. Not that I'll likely go full swing into this until after my finals are done though. Meaning, until then, sequences will be short and updates will be few and far between.

    I'm also a terrible writer so if anyone wants to help me, feel free to

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    It's been about a year since I fought Tatari with Sion. My mystic eyes have almost gone out of controls. I've gone beyond merely being able to kill objects, even concepts are no longer immune to these eyes. My glasses no longer work though i keep them as a memento of Sensei. Arcueid's bloodlust has been getting worse and worse. In a few months, I won't be able to hold her back anymore. So I started looking around for some way of quenching her bloodlust. Yumizuka had become a dead apostle ancestor. I couldn't save her back them but she's stopped blaming me. In fact, she even tipped me off to a Dead Apostle Ancestor that might be able to help Arcueid. She called it the Forest of Einnashe. A few days ago, I managed to track it down and I met with a kid. Well, he's not a kid, he said he was Ciel's friend and he told me where Einnashe's source was.When I got there, I fought a swordsmage, I think her name was Forte, I could barely understand her rapid English anyways. The fruit was within my reach so I plucked it and killed the forest immediately.

    "Tohno-chan?" a familiar voice called out my name. I turned around, still holding the glowing red fruit in my hand as I wrapped the burial cloth around my eyes to seal my mystic eyes.

    "Ciel... sempai?" I stared at her, "What are you doing here?" Dumb question, she was probably here for the same reason I was for.

    "That's what I should be asking you, though I must say, those clothes really suit you, have you grown a bit?" she asked. I was wearing a black leather jacket, black shirt, dark pants, and boots.

    "Well, they're a little tight but Arcueid insisted I wear them," I turned a bit, examining myself.

    "Oh, that woman," she hissed, then muttering something inaudible, "though they suit your curves quite nicely."

    "Hm?"

    "N-nothing."

    "Are you just ignoring me!?" the other woman shouted in what I guessed to be English. "Anyways, I need you to come with me," she motioned towards me.

    "Absurd, the girl is coming with us," a small child appeared from behind Ciel. I met him earlier and he had introduced himself as Merem Solomon. He had lead me to Einnashe's lair so I suppose I owed him something. "And you are as well, this was an area under Church Jurisdiction, what reasons does Clock Tower have interfering with our mission?"

    "I- ugh, I'm not going with you church dogs!" the swordsmage, Forte was her name, shouted, "Those eyes of hers are important for research."

    "I'm not letting Tohno-chan be given a sealing designation and spend the rest of her life on an operating table for your precious research!" Ciel snapped back. I didn't really understand what they were saying since English hadn't really been my forte in school but whatever it was, it made Ciel really angry.

    What should I do?

    A) Go with Ciel, she's my sempai after all, I doubt she'd try anything.
    B) Go with Forte, if I leave her here, Ciel and Merem are probably going to force her to go with them
    C) Leave, Arcueid needs the fruit after all. Her bloodlust is getting stronger every passing day.

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    In case you haven't realized it yet, this is just after Talk

    also, potential hero/heroine list, combo endings are possible and harem end is as well

    Arcueid Brunestud (duh)
    Ciel (duh)
    Caren Ortensia (because church)
    Nanako (because ponies)
    Forte (Tsundere moemoe)
    Bartolomei Lorelei (Yandere)
    Tohsaka Rin (because Clock Tower)
    Luvia Edefelt (see above)
    Len (because a cat is fine too)
    White Len/Nanaya-chan (because selfcest requires a white cat)
    Enhance (just because)
    Yumizuka Satsuki (because Sacchin needs some lovin)
    Seo Akira (because I can somehow work her in)
    Sion/Riesbyfe (because they come in a pair as well)
    Aoko Aozaki(because sensei~)
    Akiha, Kohaku, Hisui, and Miyako probably aren't going to appear outside of flashbacks

    Snippets
    Nanaya-chan has some fun with her familiar
    Akira's ninja training
    Last edited by In-N-Out Double-Double & Animal Fries; December 7th, 2011 at 09:43 PM.
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    Suggestions writing wise: You might want to spend some time establishing the setting and situation unless you want people to hit the ground running and slowly piece together what's going on (which I don't think is what happened here). You can't just assume that whoever is reading this would catch the references and know that you're drawing from the Talk sidestory.

    Given that it's CYoA format, I guess having a short opening is fine, but it could get a little annoying down the line if it's always this short.

    And as for the choice itself, I'll go with (C). It's not a matter of life-or-death for any of the other choices.

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    All these genderbenders.. I want them all.


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    C) arc route I'm sorry Ciel Senpai but lesbian vampire first.

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    Will do, editing it in now
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    Ciel bros, where you at? We need you!


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    Forte shut and Get Lost.

    Merem Thank you for your aid and I will be back to retrun your favor. you may follow me.

    Ciel-sempai we have to go save a friend so ( speeed grab, turn run,) Let's a go.


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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spinach View Post
    Ciel bros, where you at? We need you!
    'sup blood.

    /actually not in a streetgang
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spinach View Post
    Ciel bros, where you at? We need you!
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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    By the way is Loreli still as obsessed with Shiki in this universe as when he is a guy?

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    Everyone is obsessed with Shiki now.

    Everyone.

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    > Implying they weren't already.
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Is Shiki still a rapist in this?
    Then let it break, if it shatters to pieces then forge an even better blade to take in hand. Should that blade crack then forge once again, untill the battlefield is a graveyard of blades that have fallen and but a single sword claims the field that embodies the world. Let that sword bear the world untill its time comes and time blows its dust to the winds. Then forge again.---Eric Dagger



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    Shiki is rough in bed. Very rough

    Also, Forte is the Tsundere route, Lorelei is the Yandere route
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    It'd be funny if she's a switch-flipper now and everyone tries to rape her.

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    Also, I have no intention of driving Arcueid insane (yet) so no matter what choice you pick, the fruit can reach her.

    (Though maybe insane Arc can Marble Phantasm a penis and forcefully have sex with Shiki)
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyokushi View Post
    Also, I have no intention of driving Arcueid insane (yet) so no matter what choice you pick, the fruit can reach her.

    (Though maybe insane Arc can Marble Phantasm a penis and forcefully have sex with Shiki)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyokushi View Post
    Also, I have no intention of driving Arcueid insane (yet) so no matter what choice you pick, the fruit can reach her.

    (Though maybe insane Arc can Marble Phantasm a penis and forcefully have sex with Shiki)
    Oh in that Case

    A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A.A .A . A. A. A. A. A. A. A. A. Ciel needs loving. count votes separately towards Ciel.
    Then let it break, if it shatters to pieces then forge an even better blade to take in hand. Should that blade crack then forge once again, untill the battlefield is a graveyard of blades that have fallen and but a single sword claims the field that embodies the world. Let that sword bear the world untill its time comes and time blows its dust to the winds. Then forge again.---Eric Dagger



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