Blades Under A Crimson Moon

[Renko]

After reading the whole thing I can finally say what I think about it.

It was BAD.

The main idea of the story is good and interesting but the execution was really bad.

I felt I was reading one of GBs fics again or one of those "fics" on FF.net while reading this. *shudders*

[Thedoctor]

By the root Gabriel blessing is good.

[Renko]

By the root Gabriel blessing is good.

Any fic inspired by GBs fate fanfics is automatically BAD.

[warellis]

I would argue that GB's prose is better or at least less clunky. Though his execution is terrible as well.

Heh I wonder how Shirou would've reacted to Arc wearing these:

Spoiler:

Would Arc have done a lot of bending over when around Shirou while wearing those?

[Renko]

Would Arc have done a lot of bending over when around Shirou while wearing those?

It's an obvious answer.

[warellis]

It's an obvious answer.

Heh. I could see her also lying down a lot like in the second image.

[CG-3m1y4]

Well, I believe Ranma was also the one who wrote Archer's Story on BL Fanfic Contest? The one with Shirou x Arcueid as well.

I'd honestly prefer that one to this, though this fic is also decent for beginners.

[Renko]

Well, I believe Ranma was also the one who wrote Archer's Story on BL Fanfic Contest? The one with Shirou x Arcueid as well.

I'd honestly prefer that one to this, though this fic is also decent for beginners.

Link plz.

[warellis]

Link plz.

Archer's Story