Create your own Modern Fiction Servants

**bigblack** · June 30th, 2016, 08:12 AM

Class: Archer
True Name: The Welsh Demon
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Attribute: Man

Parameters
STR: C
AGI: C
END: B+
MAG: E
LCK: D

Class Skills
Independent Action: B+
It is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for two days without a Master. However, this is the ideal value achieved by maximally conserving mana and avoiding battle and Noble Phantasm usage.

Magic Resistance: D
Cancels single action spells. Equivalent to a magic amulet. Archer only has this due to his class container.

Personal Skills
Marksmanship: B+++
Increases accuracy and negates Protection From Arrows of equal rank and lower. Massively increased effect when fighting in medium range and closer.

Dignity of the Vanguard: B+
A skill that grants increased power the more disadvantageous ones condition is. Fighting alone increases this skills effect

Mental Disorder: C+
The mind has fallen ill. Differs from the Mad Enhancement that Berserkers usually possess. Archer's version has manifested as a kind of mental Weak Constitution, after fighting there is a risk of suffering a mental breakdown. Risk increases the longer Archer fights but prevents mental disturbances during battle, akin to a 'super-armor' for the mind.

Noble Phantasms
Cythraul Cymraeg: When They Have Been Laid Low, I Promise You I'll Put Aside My Bow(A, Anti-Army)
The slaughter of almost two thousand soldier at the Siege of Dungannon, each one killed with an arrow to the head, each one killed by the Welsh Demon. Some say it was a fight between two cornered animals, so struck by fear none of them will, or perhaps can, retreat. As a Noble Phantasm it manifest as fear effect that massively decreases their combat effectiveness but instead of making them flee it instead forces them to fight, negating their abilities to escape(or more accurately, negating their thought of escape). It requires skill such as Bravery or Soul of the Martyr of B rank and above to negate this effect, but even then it decreases their rank by two. Strangely, even Archer himself cannot stop fighting.

Furthermore, it also grants Archer's first ranged attack against an enemy a chance to instantly kill unless the target succeeds at a Luck check. As this effect is based on hitting a major weakpoint, those with none either from strange body structure, armor, skills such as Battle Continuation or incredible durability can make this effect useless.

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**Overlord Avalon** · June 30th, 2016, 08:59 AM

I'm not sure if anyone's tried Taylor Hebert from Worm? I think she might fit into both the Assassin, Ruler, and Saver classes due to not only her abilities but what she did during the course of the Worm story, plus I can see one of her Noble Phantasms having something to do with escalation. I think she would be at her peak of power when she fought Scion. Granted after that fucking whale, if she got summoned into the Fourth Holy Grail War Gilgamesh would be a piece of cake. It would be interesting to see how the Bamquet of Kings would have ended up if sh was there.

**Fittrye** · July 18th, 2016, 10:26 AM

Pls do comment & check on it if there's anything needed changes.

Alignment: Lawful Good
Servant - Assassin
True Name - Petra Ral
Anime - Attack on Titan

Stats:
Strength: D+
Endurance: D
Agility: B
Magic: E
Luck: C
NP: B

Class skill:

Presence Concealment: B
The capacity to hide one's presence as a servant. As being one of the member of the famous Levi Elite Squad specialize in covert & stealth operations, it is not a surprise for Assassin to possess such a rank.

Personal Skill:
Titan Killer: B+
Assassin past life was a life of pure hell; facing gigantic humanoid monsters that devours the human races. Assassin gains a rank up in her Strength & Agility when facing any humanoid servants that is taller than herself. The "+" indicator gives Assassin a rank up in her Luck if she acts as a support for another allied servants.

Bravery: C-
An ability to negate mental inference such as pressure, confusion & fascination. Assassin was a brave warrior when facing her foes in her past life. Seeing the destruction of the human race has made her prepared to brave any hardship, but the "-" indicator decreases Assassin's Endurance & Agility to its lowest rank possible when seeing her master or allies died in front of her as this effect had cost her life in her final battle.

ODM-Gear Rider: A
Assassin us able to weave & flash about the battlefield with grace & finesse with her gear used in her past life when facing gigantic humanoid monsters. As long as there is no flat land as her battlefield, Assassin can fully utilize this skill with little issue.

Riding: C
The ability to ride mounts. At this rank Assassin is capable of riding mounts she is familiar with. During her past life, Assassin was only familiar with a carriage & horsemanship as there is no advance technologies back in her lifetime.

Noble Phantsm: Gafallener Engel - Glory to Mankind
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit

Description:
Assassin's death was a tragic blow the her squad commander & to her fellow comrade as she was one of the people who brings greatness in everybody to move forward, even if the situation seems hopeless. Regardless of the situations she faced in her lifetime, she hoped to see the beautiful world mankind will reclaim back the land that was once rightfully theirs.

Assassin's Noble Phanstasm was the embodiment of hope & dreams that she could have be if she had made it through the chaos of her era. This Noble Phantasm grants her Agility to EX rank, so she would have better reaction (both physically & mentally) in battle as this is the one she lacks that caused her death.

Though this Noble Phantasm makes Assassin a deathly servant, it still applies all to her personal skills, including the negative effect of the Bravery skill.

**AvengerEmiya** · July 18th, 2016, 02:32 PM

First off, Petra? All the AoT characters to make a sheet of, and you chose Petra? I mean, it's a nice sheet and I don't hate Petra, but it seems so random. Like making a story about Arthurian myth and making Sir Bedivere the protagonist.

Her NP kinda seems out of place too. NPs are supposed to based off events that occurred during an Servant's life, not on afterthoughts or how they feel about those events. Also, casually throwing out EX-ranks isn't good. Achilles is the fastest Servant, and he doesn't have EX rank Agility. Atalanta has a Skill that lets her catch up to anyone regardless of their speed or how far ahead of her they are, and its only ranked "B." At EX-rank Petra's movements would be something close to instantaneous at that point.

Besides that, it's cool. Spiderman-esque Assassin-class Servant sounds neat. Though, a Faceclaim would've been nice.

**You** · July 18th, 2016, 02:41 PM

Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya

Like making a story about Arthurian myth and making Sir Bedivere the protagonist.

XD

**Arashi_Leonhart** · July 18th, 2016, 02:44 PM

Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya

Like making a story about Arthurian myth and making Sir Bedivere the protagonist.

Um, some early Arthurian stories did in fact have Bedivere as the protagonist.

**Imperial** · July 18th, 2016, 03:54 PM

Yeah, Bedivere is a big deal. One of the OG Knights of the Round

It was only later that he was overshadowed by people like Gawain and Lancelot.

**Overlord Avalon** · July 27th, 2016, 09:48 PM

Yeah, Bedivere is a big deal. One of the OG Knights of the Round

It was only later that he was overshadowed by people like Gawain and Lancelot.

Very true, he was also one of the few knights that wasn't a total asshole when it came to Arturia/Arthur, proven by the fact he was the only one to stay with her/him after the Battle of Camlann.

**Arashi_Leonhart** · July 27th, 2016, 10:14 PM

He was the only one to stay with her because everyone else allied with her got killed or weren't allowed to show up at Camlann. Kinda separate from not being an asshole.

**Kotonoha** · July 27th, 2016, 10:17 PM

Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya

Like making a story about Arthurian myth and making Sir Bedivere the protagonist.

I second You's "XD"

**AvengerEmiya** · July 27th, 2016, 10:34 PM

Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart

He was the only one to stay with her because everyone else allied with her got killed or weren't allowed to show up at Camlann. Kinda separate from not being an asshole.

Sir Dagonet is the most loyal KTR. He would have totally been by Saber's side had he not been killed by Mordred.

He would even thrown the fucking sword in the lake like he was supposed to.

**Fergard** · August 4th, 2016, 06:08 AM

Uh, hello.

Figured I might as well give this a go. Dragon's Dogma is still sitting in my head, so, uh... enjoy?

Of course, here there be spoilers.
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Identity of the spirit is that of The Arisen, a once ordinary human chosen to burden the shoulder of slaying a dragon troubling the duchy of Gransys - by the dragon himself, nonetheless. As there were multiple Arisen recorded in multiple possiblities, it is impossible to discern their true form, assuming there is such a thing as their true form. They may be a man or a woman, tall or short, grotesque or picturesque.

Servant Class: May be summoned as Saber, Archer, Caster or Assassin; representing the various vocations that the Arisen have taken throughout their journeys.

Servant Stats: Due to a nature of this spirit, their statistics change accordingly. Below are what they might be.

Strength: A - D

Endurance: A - D

Agility: A - C+

Mana: A+ - C

Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C - D -> Depending on what the current Arisen wore for protection, their Magic Resistance fluctuates on a small level.

Riding: - -> As Saber Arisen, or any other Arisen, they have never rode any sort of beast or vehicle in battle and are thus deprived of this skill.

Independent Action: A -> It is possible to take action even without a Master. However, to use Noble Phantasms of great magical energy consumption, backup from the Master is necessary. The Arisen retains that Skill in all Classes they could be summoned in.

Item Creation: C+ -> Arisen can make a multitude of items, seemingly with only the barest of materials and without any preparation needed. These items hold minor magical power and can heal wounds, ward off debilitations, restore one's sight if blinded temporarily and so on and so forth. They're also capable of making more mundane tools such as pickaxes, specialized arrows or farming tools. They retain that Skill in all Classes they could be summoned in.

Territory Creation: - -> As Caster Arisen they are skilled more in simpler forms of magic and thus this Skill is unknown to them.

Presence Concealment: C -> As Assassin Arisen, they are capable of briefly vanishing from sight. It is an effect akin to both invisiblity and intangibility, but can only be upheld for a few moments. Thus, it is mostly best used to escape difficult situations or to approach a dangerous foe.

Challenger Of Monsters: A -> Arisen fought their share of giant monsters. To this end they know - thanks to both their knowledge and the knowledge of their Pawn (see below) - how to scale and defeat any such creatures with little difficulty. This also grants them a Rank-Up in STR/AGL/Mana (depends on their Class) when fighting a Servant that is identified as a natural-born Monster.

Noble Phantasms:

The Heartless - If You Would Face Me, Take Up Arms - Self Noble Phantasm, Rank B -> The act of making an Arisen begins with The Dragon taking away their heart and holding it hostage until the beast is defeated. Despite its lack, Arisen remains unpeturbed. This bizzare lack in biology makes this Servant immune to any attacks that would target the heart exclusively, as there is nothing left to target. Furthermore, Arisen not only fully understands the language of dragons - although they are unable to communicate with them verbally - they also receive a Rank-Up in STR/AGL/Mana (depends on their Class) against Servants with dragon ancestry or directly related to those.

The Pawn - The Everloyal Myrmidon - Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm, Rank A+ -> Every Arisen has their own Pawn. Pawns look like men, but they are closely related to soulless homunculi without the drive and dedication to become themselves. Thus, the legion of Pawns has relegated itself to serving all Arisen that may come. Arisen may summon their Pawn into service to act as a quasi-Servant of their own. For the purposes of identification, Pawns may become Sabers, Archers or Casters. The Pawns come in a myriad of ways just like their Arisen, but they may only reach B in their stats. They all possess a varying degree of Magic Resistance and a B-Ranked Challenger of Monsters (which does not grant them the bonus to fighting monstrous Servants). A killed Pawn may be summoned again at a great cost of Prana, but should Arisen perish while the pawn is still alive, it will rejoin its master in short order due to a severed link.

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**TheFanciestEgg** · August 28th, 2016, 02:18 PM

Been lurking for a bit, and decided to try this. Here's Lucina from FE13.

Servant Saber

Basically, I think she should be a pretty high-spec Servant, with what she's capable of by story, though I did use gameplay elements at times (see her unimpressive Magic Resistance)

And here's Flamie Speeddraw from Rokka: Braves of the Six Flowers

Servant Archer

Basically average in terms of raw stats, except for great Agility and below average Endurance, but her skills are where she shines.

Lastly, my icon, Jade Curtiss from Tales of the Abyss

Servant Caster

Lore says he's one of the strongest Fonists (read: mages) in the world, so I tried to reflect that.

**shounen jump** · September 8th, 2016, 05:11 PM

I wrote a challenge that followed the standered "replace canon Servants with characters from another series" plot, then i noticed this thread and i figured "eh, why not put one of my Idea's for Servants here". Please know that this is supposed to be very general, to allow who ever takes the challenge something to start with, but have enough room to change things easily.

Berserker: Akainu
Series: Onepiece
Stats(This is without any enhancements he would gain from skills): Strength: A Endurance: A Agility:C Mana:C
Class Skills: Mad Enhancement-EX: Physical Parameters increase by a Rank. He isn't deprived of his reason or intellect. Instead Berserker follows strictly his own way, becoming impossible to persuade and/or come to a mutual understanding with. See Absolute Justice for more info.
Personal Skills: Absolute Justice-A++: The way of life Berserker followed, his very being. He gets a + added to Mana, Luck, and Endurance when he is in combat that involves something he views as against Justice.
Haki-A+
Cursed Fruit: Magu Magu No Mi(This skill has no Rank): A Logia type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create, control and transform into magma at will.
Berserker has mastered his Devil Fruit powers.
Noble Phantasm: Army of the Marines: Mechanical solders don't ask questions, and good Marines follow orders without question: Berserker has access to all the grand battle technology afforded the rank he held in life. Meaning he can summon battle ships and Pasivistas, to both man the battleships or to fight as Berserker's foot solders.

**RoydGolden** · September 20th, 2016, 01:36 PM

A rather silly idea, but I was struck with inspiration after seeing someone ask what if Emmett were summoned as Heroic Spirit. And since I just watched the Lego Movie a couple days ago, it's still fresh on my mind and so this sheet was easy to write up. Say hello to Emmett, everybody!

Servant Caster:

True Name: Emmett Brickowski

Alignment: Neutral Good

Strength- D
Agility- C
Endurance- D++
Mana- B
Luck- A++
NP- EX

Appearance:

(Guy on the left)

Personality: Kind, friendly, humble, and appearing utterly average in every way. In life, Caster was the sort of person to go along with what other people said without questioning, but the events of life have taught him to value independence more. Even so, he is still an unassuming person who likes to go with the flow. He dislikes violence and is easily scared but when push comes to shove, Caster won't hesitate to fight to his last breath for defending his friends. He also greatly values creativity and self-expression. Being from a world of Lego, Caster is greatly fascinated by the world in which he's summoned. His wish on the Grail is for a world where everybody can exercise their creative vision freely and without restraint.

Likes: going with the flow, creativity, his fellow Master Builders
Dislikes: enforced conformity, stagnation
Talent: proving that everybody is special
Natural Enemy: Lord Business

Class Skills:

Territory Creation (A/EX)- Ability to formulate a territory advantageous to oneself as a Magus. At this rank, creation of architectural monuments on par with 'Temples' becomes possible. Through his Noble Phantasm- Master Builder, Caster's rank in this Skill is raised to god-like levels.

Item Construction (A/EX)- Ability to craft magical items. Given the sufficient raw materials, Caster can create nearly anything, from motorcycles to hoverboards, giant robot suits or even high-tech spaceships, limited only by his own imagination. Through his Noble Phantasm- Master Builder, Caster's rank in this Skill is raised to god-like levels.

Personal Skills:

Lego Physiology (-)- Caster was from a strange world where everything, nature, people and buildings included, was made entirely out of Lego bricks. Even though his appearance has been altered to match the world in which he is summoned, Caster still retains the benefits of his Lego physiology. Lost limbs can be easily reattached, or replaced with newly crafted parts at high speed. However, the loss of his head will still kill Caster.

Revelation (C)- A Skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles; however, "Revelation" accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no apparent basis for it, it cannot be explained to others clearly. Caster received mystical visions from touching the artifact known as the 'Piece Of Resistance' which guided him on his journey, and then another vision after falling off the World and coming into contact with the Man Upstairs.

Powerless Shell (B)- A skill that make the user difficult to perceive as a Servant, declining both his parameters and skills. Due to Caster's incredibly average nature, it is difficult for most foes to perceive him as a threat. Until he takes action, Caster appears merely as a completely average, unmemorable construction worker.

Charisma (C+)- Ability to inspire others, and lead armies. While he lacks much outward charisma, Caster's humble and heroic nature easily inspires others into performing great feats. Since he believes so idealistically in the greatness of his teammates, those around him are naturally inspired to meet his high expectations.

Noble Phantasms:

Master Builder- World, Shape To My Will (EX, Anti-World): A Noble Phantasm representing Caster's nature and destiny as a 'Master Builder'. Once invoked, both his Territory Creation and Item Construction Skills are elevated enormously.

Caster gains the ability to psychically levitate and put together parts in his sight without even needing to touch them, destroying and reconstructing surrounding structures at will. An entire skyscraper could be broken down into raw materials just by proximity to Caster and then rebuilt into a giant robot suit, spaceship or whatever he imagines. He also can 'see' glowing blue numbers floating above parts, showing exactly how they'd combine into those around them, accentuating his building prowess even further.

This Noble Phantasm makes Caster tremendously powerful, almost like a god or messianic being. However, it drains incredible amounts of Mana while active, insuring Caster can only keep it up for five minutes at most. As such, he only activates it as a last resort.

Piece Of Resistance- The Cap That Seals Destruction (A, Anti-Noble Phantasm): An artifact that Caster carries, said to be the only thing which could seal the legendary weapon of destruction known as the 'Kragle'. In fact, the so-called Kragle was actually a container of Krazy Glue with several letters worn off, and the Piece Of Resistance is the cap which seals its contents. Regardless of its mundane origins, its use in Caster's legend has turned it into a Conceptual Weapon designed to 'seal weapons of destruction'. It appears as a brick-sized rectangular red block, with a smaller bump on top. Essentially, a Krazy Glue container reformated based on its appearance in Caster's own world.

By placing the top fully over an enemy's Noble Phantasm, their weapon is sealed utterly. No destructive power, no matter how great, can escape from the weapon once this Noble Phantasm has been placed. Even the Sword Of Promised Victory or The Star Of Creation That Split Heaven And Earth can be rendered impotent before this lowly piece of plastic. Once placed, the Piece cannot be destroyed or removed by anyone save Caster himself.

**AvengerEmiya** · September 22nd, 2016, 09:22 AM

In case you haven't noticed by my avatar, I've been a bit obsessed with League lately. It finally gotten to the point where I though "Ah, what the hell. Let's make a sheet or two."

---SABER---
- Garen Crownguard -
Alignment: Lawful Good
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Strength: A
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: D
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: B
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Character details

Class Skills\
~Magic Resistance: [C]
A Servant's ability to resist thaumaturgical effects. Though he is a warrior through and through, the strength of magic from the former generations of his house still flow through Saber's veins, giving him a sufficient [Magic Resistance] rank of C. This allows spells of three-verses to be negated when used against him.

~Riding: [C]
A Servant's ability to remain ride various mounts and vehicles. At C Rank, Saber is capable of riding most modes of transport skillfully, however nothing he rides with ever be pushed to its limit, and highly advanced or complex vehicles are inoperable by him.

Personal Skills\
~Charisma: [C+]
A Servant's capacity at leading and appealing to others. Being the captain of the Dauntless Vanguard, Saber has lead his men in several battlefields and skirmishes that would have killed a lesser man and most certainly have taken his troops along with him. As a result, Saber's Charisma; which is high enough to lead an army, gains a positive advantage when he and those he lead encounter dire straits.

~Bravery: [C]
A Skill only the most steely of warriors possess. Those who have encountered the worse, faced it head on, and walked away with their heart as strong as ever; and most importantly - still sitting in their chest. It's effects negates Mental Interference and prevents Saber from becoming distracted in combat.

~Eye of the Mind (True): [B]
Denotes a Servant's acute observation. It is somewhat akin to a sixth sense, but unlike any killer [Instinct], this skill must be acquired through great amounts of experience. It allows Saber to keenly eventuate the situation as he proceeds. He considers every possibility, regardless of chance of failure, and measures them accordingly. Most importantly, through this Skill, extreme odds as lows 1% in success can be seen through to completetion. It greatly increases Saber's chances of acquiring victory.

It is through both this Skill and [Bravery] that Saber has managed to continuously survive his encounters with the Sinister Blade, making him the only known Demacian to do so.

Noble Phantasm

**AvengerEmiya** · September 23rd, 2016, 05:23 PM

The obsession continues.

---LANCER---
- Azir -
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
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Strength: C
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Mana: A
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: EX
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Character details

Class Skills\
~ Magic Resistance: [B]
A Servant's ability to resist thaumaturgical effects. At B Rank, spells of four verses or less are nullified and modern day rituals are resisted.

Personal Skills\
~ Divinity: [B]
Denotes a Servant's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. There is a ritual in Shurima - a process that grants godhood onto those worthy, and who have done great deeds for Shurima throughout their lives. It is called the Ascension. While Lancer's original Ascension went awry, the power meant for him stolen away by his dearest friend, Lancer was later revived by his ancestor and completed the ritual, gaining his current divine form.

Though it was a ritual made by man, the Ascension has made Lancer into an authentic demigod with a high ranked B in [Divinity].

~ Charisma: [B+]
A Servant's capacity at leading and appealing to others. Lancer is one of the most glorious emperors in Shurima's history. Had he not been betrayed by his closest friend, he would have gone on to abolish slavery in Shurima and solidified himself as the most celebrated ruler in his empire's history. Still, the title "King of Sands" will do for now.

Possessing a B Rank in this Skill, Lancer wields enough [Charisma] to lead to a country. He gains a modifier on those who know his legacy.

~ Imperial Privilege: [A]
An ability that, due the insistence of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time. In cases when the Rank is А or above, even the "burden to the body" is acquired. The Skills available include [Riding], [Spearmanship], [Artistry], [Military Tactics], [Golden Rule], etc.

Lancer possesses an A rank in this Skill. As both the emperor and a god, learning various Skills is a trivial thing for him.

~ Beloved of Mother Desert: [A]
A Skill reserved for those who not only dwell in the Shuriman Desert, but who are favored by it. Being the highly heralded Emperor of the Sands, there is perhaps no man who the sands show greater favor to. With this Skill, Lancer is granted powerful resistance to wind-based and fire-based effects. Also, when battling in a desert-like environment, Lancer gains a plus modifier to each of his Stats.

Noble Phantasm

---ARCHER---
- Ashe -
Alignment: Neutral Good
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Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: D
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: B
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Character details

Class Skills\
~ Magic Resistance: [D]
A Servant's ability to resist thaumaturgical effects. At D Rank, spells of two-verses of lower nullified.

~ Independent Action: [B]
A Servant's ability to act independently or reject their Master's mana At higher ranks, a Servant can act on their devices and prove hard control. Fortunately for Archer's Master, she is a loyal Servant who will cooperate with them so long as her Master's orders don't become too outlandish or distasteful.

At B Rank, it is possible to operate for two days without a proper mana supply.

Personal Skills\
~Charisma: [B]
A Servant's capacity at leading and appealing to others. Archer is the first figure in ages to unite a considerable sum of Freljord into a sovereign nation, and despite it still be divided between three factions, she is officially recognized as the Queen of the Kingdom of Freljord - the region's governing body. Even members the Avarosan tribe's opposition, the Winter's Claw tribe, came to witness her coronation.

Possessing a B Rank in this Skill, Archer wields enough [Charisma] to lead to a country.

~ Natural Born Hunter: [A]
A Skill reserved for Servants born with the innate spirit of a huntsman. Archer could draw a bow since she was six, was able to hunt for game in Freljord's wilderness alone by the time she was ten, and has mastered every trick known to Avarosa's elite scouts and hunters at her current age of nineteen. She can spot a poro a mile away during in a blizzard, can distinguish members of the same animal species by their tracks and markings alone, and does not falter when cornered by or engaged with dangerous game.

Essentally, this Skill grants Archer equivalent ranks in [Clairvoyance], [Beast Slayer], and [Eye of the Mind (False)].

~ Protection From Frost: [B]
A Skill Archer naturally acquired from being raised and hunting within Freljord - the harshest and coldest region in Runeterra. It protects Archer from extremely low temperatures and negates powerful ice-based effects and spells of four-verses or lower.

Noble Phantasm

**mochachiiino** · October 7th, 2016, 02:31 AM

LANCER: Terry Fox

Alignment: Lawful Good
Strength: B
Endurance: EX
Agility: A
Luck: E
Magic: E
Terry was not a conventional warrior. Instead of fighting fantastic beasts and damned tyrants, Terry fought against the despair of his fate. Instead of succumbing to what life had given him, he attempted to raise money for cancer research so that those in the future would not suffer. And while he failed in doing so, his deeds have given him a spot in the throne of heroes. He lived a life where he continuously moved forward. Traversing long distances to reach a certain point, Terry Fox’s legacy embodies the motion of a thrusted spear. It goes without saying that in any Holy Grail war where he would not be summoned as berserker, he would without a doubt be called upon as a lancer.

Noble phantasms
＜＜　ワン＝レッグ　＞＞ A
As a heroic spirit without an actual weapon, the throne of heroes has bestowed Terry with his legacy as his primary weapon. It is not an overly advantageous weapon, but one that lets him remain relevant in a holy grail war. Terry’s perseverance in life has been solidified into reality as the leg he lost to cancer. It is an embodiment, a representation, and merely a suitable imitation of something intangible. As such, it is not possible to describe the material it is made out of, one can only observe that while it operates like a leg made of flesh and bone, it has the durability of noble phantasms. It will not break, even if it is struck by multiple holy swords, or thrown into the sun. It is also not possible to severe the leg from its host by any means. The “one leg” is pitch black as it is made by the blessing of the holy grail. Enemy servants must simply kill the wielder.

　

マラソオン＝オブ＝ホペ
＜＜　　一つの夢、希望の世界　　＞＞　　Ａ＋
As a lancer without a true noble phantasm, it goes without saying that he will be outmatched by projectiles and long-reaching weapons. So instead of combatting his enemies, this heroic spirit must constantly advance towards his enemies to deliver the winning blow. Be it a bow and arrow, a sword, or a seemingly endless barrage of ancient treasures, Terry’s conditions for victory is to close the distance head on. However in the direst of moments, Terry can “realize” the feat he was unable to accomplish during his life. By lifting off with his obsidian leg first, Terry can “run” towards a target location instantaneously. During this travel time, Terry cannot be hindered or obstructed by matter, debuffs, sickness, wounds and even death. It is a dash that rivals teleportation, in which Terry essentially wipes himself from existence, and rebuilds himself on the other side. And while Terry will use this technique to close small gaps with his opponents, the absolute range of this dash is the coast to coast distance of Canada at any given time (around 9,306 km (5,780 miles). If Terry is able to defeat his opponent after using this technique, he will be able to use it once more. On the other hand if the target is still alive, Terry’s overall stats will average into C. Due to its double edged nature, the marathon of hope is at best a gimmicky secret weapon.

Personal Abilities:
Endurance EX: Terry cannot get tired due to his noble phantasm. “one leg” has granted him an eternal perseverance. And though he is still vulnerable to the plain effects of debuffs and damage, he cannot subjectively suffer from them. A fatally wounded Terry does not gradually progress to his death, he simply becomes “dead” once his body no longer functions.
Unparalleled Footwork EX: Terry is not a fighter, but the grail has granted him combative abilities with his feet. His running form is also perfect, and he is well versed in parkour. He will always land on his feet. And he deals bonus damage if he can kick his enemies with “one leg”

**qwertyfatcat** · October 7th, 2016, 02:08 PM

Damn that was a good one. To think even Terry Fox can be made into a heroic spirit.

**RoydGolden** · October 7th, 2016, 02:41 PM

Terry's pretty cool. I'd certainly never have expected to see a sheet for him around here (or anywhere). Since he's obviously not 'fiction' he could probably have gone in the main Create-A-Servant thread honestly, since more then a few modern historical figures have been put up there.

Obviously very wanked in parts (such as Endurance higher then mythic warriors), but that's really the only way you could've done him as a Heroic Spirit at all so I'm not complaining. The notion of a modern-day hero standing at the level of legends through sheer determination is certainly romantic enough. In fact, since he struggled against 'fate' and you're going with as dramatic a depiction of that as possible, I'm actually a bit surprised you didn't give him higher Luck, which represents 'fighting against fate'.

Not quite sure why his NP names are in Japanese though, much less in Kanji with no translation. It's not like Terry's even a Japanese hero so it just comes off as unnecessary IMO. Also, his Endurance Skill should really be renamed. Endurance is the stat, if you want a Skill that lets one keep fighting despite injuries then that's Battle Continuation. Having the same name be for both is just confusing. Also, why no Class Skills? As a Lancer, he should have Magic Resistance even a low rank (likely E).

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