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    Why the sword in a gourd? In which point of the Naruto storyline does this pop up? And being sucky is arguably Falsassin's schtick so I'm okay with that.

    Oh and +1 for Maito Gai. Fuck Naruto and all his Senninwank, give me Gai and I'll show them what MANLY MAN is. A works too, he FRIKKEN LARIAT'D Gaysuke's ass.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gunbazca View Post
    Why the sword in a gourd? In which point of the Naruto storyline does this pop up? And being sucky is arguably Falsassin's schtick so I'm okay with that.
    Second half of the series...
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    Sasuke and his "Hebi" confront Itachi and Kisame, with Sasuke and Itachi moving to a different location to battle. When Orochimaru rears his pale face from Sasuke's Curse Seal, Itachi pulls out Sakegari no Tachi from his revealed Susano'o to seal the snake and Sasuke's curse mark all at once.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gunbazca View Post
    A works too, he FRIKKEN LARIAT'D Gaysuke's ass.
    we have an A? what next, there will be a Z or an X in Naruto?

    Personally, I don't dislike Naruto. Yeh, the power ups are extreme, but I can't say that I hate his desire to improve himself.

    Also, falsassin is an irregularity of the servants, so yeh.... I don't think Itachi should be this weak. I mean, sure he's not real and all, but his stats should not be anywhere this low or simple right?

    Look, I'm not an Itachi fan or sasu-gay fan, but I'd rather that facts are presented correctly rather than over glorifying or under presenting a servant.


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    Fame and mystery is extremely important, and is a part of why Servants get high stats (besides the Servant Class molds) and, by the same line, how their Noble Phantasm is ranked.

    I wanted to write up a sheet that had Itachi doing what he does best, without the Sharingan "hax", and the Sakegari no Tachi was my best bet at a Noble Phantasm unique to him, without overpowering him. I thought of "Zabaniya: Delusional Heartbeat" when deciding the Rank, which is also Rank C. The rank of the NP doesn't always mean it is powerful, weak, or in between.

    I intentionally didn't over-strengthen him: 1. because of the Assassin Class mold, which I feel he is best suited to out of the 7, 2. so that I wouldn't seem like a die-hard fan without any base or ignorant of the mechanics behind Servants, and 3. because I like his character, even without his powers.
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    Quote Originally Posted by qwertyfatcat View Post
    sasu-gay
    This makes my eyes roll every time I see it. And it's not because of the character.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    This makes my eyes roll every time I see it. And it's not because of the character.
    i no, i no. It's lame.

    It's funny. I'm not a fan of Itachi, yet I'm saying that he should be buffed. You like his character, and decide to keep him weaker.

    Well, it's your idea, I'm just saying my bit about him. Nice idea Lyco.


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    >Just jumped back into Naruto to see how shitty it has gotten
    >SUDDENLY, ZOMBIES, ZOMBIES EVERYWHERE. KABUTOOOOOOOOOOO!
    >TOBI IS OBITO!
    >KILLER BEE CANNOT RAP KISHIMOTO. MAKE HIM STOP FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

    My mind is full of fffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuc ccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arch-Magos Winter View Post
    >Just jumped back into Naruto to see how shitty it has gotten
    >SUDDENLY, ZOMBIES, ZOMBIES EVERYWHERE. KABUTOOOOOOOOOOO!
    >TOBI IS OBITO!
    >KILLER BEE CANNOT RAP KISHIMOTO. MAKE HIM STOP FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

    My mind is full of fffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuc ccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
    You poor unfortunate soul.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Arch-Magos Winter View Post
    >Just jumped back into Naruto to see how shitty it has gotten
    >SUDDENLY, ZOMBIES, ZOMBIES EVERYWHERE. KABUTOOOOOOOOOOO!
    >TOBI IS OBITO!
    >KILLER BEE CANNOT RAP KISHIMOTO. MAKE HIM STOP FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

    My mind is full of fffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuc ccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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    Am rather bored, so i present you... HETEROCHROMIAC SPACE HAXTURIA :P
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    Olivie Segbrecht
    "Let my magic speak for itself... through my fists!"


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    Der Sankt-Kaiser, the last ruler of the ancient Belkan nation.
    Born to the illustrious Segbrecht dynasty, Olivie's life has been a tumultuous one. A prodigious mage and a peerles master of martial arts, Olivie is nonetheless plunged headfirst into the conflict known as the Third Unification War. All that she stood for, all that she fought for, all that she championed, will be vanquished by the very flames the nations was forged with...


    Possible Class: Caster, Archer, Rider (stats only given for Caster)
    Master: ???

    Parameters:
    * Alignment: Lawful Good
    * Noble Phantasm: EX
    * Strength: C
    * Endurance: C
    * Agility: B
    * Mana: A
    * Luck: C


    Class Skills:

    * Territory Creation B
    (Caster-specific class skill)
    This skill represents the expertise to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. At this level, creating of a "Workshop" becomes possible.

    * Item Creation D+
    (Caster-specific class skill)
    This is the skill to manufacture magical items. Because her magic mostly focuses on the self and the channeling of energy, Olivie's skill in this is not great.


    Personal skills:

    * Martial Arts [Kaiser Arts] A+++
    This skill measures the value of one's mastery of the martial arts that made 'harmonious union of magic and self' as its objective. Its difficulty to learn is of the highest level and, unlike other Skills, it is at A Rank that one is at a level where he is said to have finally "learned it". An alien notion for this date and time. At this point, Olivie is considered a peerless 'master among masters'.

    * Magecraft A
    This skill represents knowledge about modern Thaumaturgy. At this level, Olivie is as close to Akasha as a modern Magus can get.


    Noble Phantasms:

    * Heiligen Wiege [Chariot of The Saint King]
    Support, but possesses Anti-Fortress capabilities
    Target: Fortification
    Rank: EX
    The ultimate weapon of the Saint-Emperor of Belka, a peerless ship that can decimate nations with ease. While mainly an instrument of siege and bombardment, this NP can act as a mobile fortress and base of operations, with ample room for shock troopers and other support personnel. As it is Olivie's phantasm, the control of this vessel is mainly governed by her AGI stat (and Riding skill, if called in Rider class). It can still deliver troopers and heavy bombardment, so it is perhaps better used as a tactical weapon.
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    If her stats are exclusively for the Caster class, why does she have Riding as a Class Skill? Why is her NP the Cradle? Why no mention of her prosthetic limbs? You'd think that's worth mentioning.

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    I admit that I Wiki'd that one out mostly, and there's no mention of prosthetics there. I'll get rid of Riding later, I'm in the bus now.
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    Yeah, the latest ViVid chapter (which was hilariously awesome by the way) is not translated. A flashback showed that, at least, Olivie's left arm is a prosthesis, although the fact her right arm looks identical suggests both arms are artificial. So yeah, Self-Modification.

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    Are the translations almost caught up then? Last I looked they were lagging quite a bit behind, which is unfortunate.

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    So, I was going to stat up Assassin Will, but then I got sidetracked...

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    Class:
    Trickster
    Alternate Class: Caster
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil/Chaotic Good
    True Identity: Lyra Belacqua
    Crossover: His Dark Materials

    STR: E- (C)
    END: E (C)
    AGI: E- (C)
    MGI: E- (C)
    LCK: EX
    NP: EX

    CLASS SKILLS

    Bluff: A+
    The ability to lie, and to be believed. Trickster's ability to bluff is so central to her legend that it has crystallized into a Noble Phantasm.

    PERSONAL SKILLS

    Charisma: C (A+) A wondrous storyteller who leads with force of personality. In life, allies gravitated to Trickster despite her young age, and due to her Noble Phantasm looked to her for advice. In death, and with the invocation of her Noble Phantasm, even the harpies waited to hear her stories. At this rank, her Charisma is suitable for a General or a Governor of a state; when her Noble Phantasm is invoked she can lead any number of beings, her Charisma having become a curse in itself. Discernment of the Poor can negate this skill under certain conditions.

    Independent Action: C Essentially guided herself across thousands of miles and multiple worlds to complete her destiny. While she was accompanied on the way, she was only rarely "lead." Capable of remaining in this world for one day without an established contract.

    Discernment of the Poor: A+ Her ability to lie also grants her an ability to detect lies. On top of this, Trickster is capable of perceiving others' "daemons" - embodied incarnations of a soul - granting her additional insight into the target's character and motives. At this rank, it is essentially impossible for anyone but another Trickster to lie to her.

    Innocent Monster: C As "the girl who recreated Original Sin," Caster reads as Evil to any magic that detects alignment, including Grail readouts; her true alignment is Chaotic Good.

    Savior of the Dead: EX A special skill granted to those who have saved those beyond saving. As the girl who freed the dead from their eternal imprisonment and returned them to the multiverse as Dust, every mortal being owes her a debt. Dead beings obey her requests willingly and without question, even at risk of destruction; dead who are destroyed while in service to this skill are immune to any effect which could remove them from existence, as this skill ensures that they pass peacefully back to Akasha. Living beings find her requests abnormally convincing; while the effects are simple to throw off, unless the existence of this skill is suspected none have reason to. Servants, as both alive and dead, possess some resistance to this skill; their Heroic nature and their desire for their wish make them immune to offensive uses of this skill, but neutral effects - requests for temporary alliances, for example - are likely to be accepted unless they might indirectly harm the Servant.

    Nature of a Rebellious Spirit: EX Having defied both sides of the War in Heaven before re-enacting Original Sin, Trickster spurns lesser Authorities. All Charisma-based and command-based skills fail against her, and her role as Eve and the creator of Free Will makes her nearly immune to even Command Seals - all three at once are required to compel her obedience, and no lesser power can even come close.

    Pioneer of the Stars: EX She who created free will and freed the dead. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized".

    NOBLE PHANTASM

    Pantalaimon ~ Daemon
    Rank: E
    Type: Personal (Support)

    The embodiment of Trickster's soul, a red-gold pine marten. While he possesses some minor abilities of his own, she is primarily a vulnerability, as killing Pantalaimon kills Caster as well.

    Silvertongue
    Rank: A+
    Type: Support

    Trickster's transcendent ability to lie, crystallized into a Noble Phantasm. This Noble Phantasm is the only one whose use reveals Trickster's identity. In addition to allowing Trickster to lie to anyone, bypassing Discernment of the Poor below EX (perfect truth-telling) and truth-detecting Noble Phantasms below rank B, enhances her ability to tell stories - essentially, her ability to craft longer and more elaborate lies. By telling a relevant story, her rank in Charisma can be raised toA+, allowing her to sway even the dead and demons. When combined with her Aleithiometer, her half-truths are nearly impossible to detect.

    Due to her role as Temptress, she may use this Noble Phantasm to temporarily extend her rank in Nature of a Rebellious Spirit to another, allowing them to defy even the greatest of Authorities.

    Eve ~ Embodiment of Free Will
    Rank: A++
    Type: Anti-Unit (Support)

    The girl who created free will. She who ignored all authorities to do what she thought right, saving both the soulless and the dead, and as Eve, the first to bite from the Fruit of Knowledge and the (re)creator of Free Will. Negates the effects of Divinity and Divine Mysteries completely, whether used against her or used to defend. In addition, due to the prevalence of the original legend, grants Librarian of Stored Knowledge at A-rank, as the Fruit of Knowledge opens the Akashic Records to her. Finally, as the reincarnation of the First Woman, Trickster draws on her Mystery, raising all her stats by two ranks. Should she die, her soul counts twice to fill the Grail.

    Aleithiometer ~ Oracle of Angels
    Rank: EX
    Type: Support

    A machine that tells the truth. A golden compass that can answer any question, querying Akasha itself through the medium of the Sixth True Theoretical Element. Impossible to use in this world for anyone in this world, due to lacking the proper books describing its use. Trickster possesses both an instinctual knowledge and a hard-learned knowledge of its use, and can ask it any question she pleases - whether they be the identities of other Servants, or even their plans. Can only be opposed by an effect that not only hides something from Akasha, but also from every sapient being in existence, including the owner.

    -------------------------------------------------

    So yeah. Lyra Belacqua. Like Will, she'd do much better as another class - in this case, Caster - but if I did that, she'd have EX's everywhere, because her legend as "the first to bite from the Fruit of Knowledge" and her Alethiometer mean she can basically pull magecraft and Magic from the Root at will, so this way's more fun. (Also, Pan would be willing to use the ability to pass between worlds that he learned from the Angels, which essentially means prana-free Second Magic, as well as being able to have half of her self seeking out allies in other worlds. Leading, again, to Caster Lyra and Assassin Will in the same War as allies. Which would be bad.
    Last edited by linkhyrule5; November 14th, 2016 at 07:18 PM. Reason: While Will and Lyra love each other very much, I don't think that either would *literally* die if the other did.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    Yeah, the latest ViVid chapter (which was hilariously awesome by the way) is not translated. A flashback showed that, at least, Olivie's left arm is a prosthesis, although the fact her right arm looks identical suggests both arms are artificial. So yeah, Self-Modification.
    Corrected error. So she's an armless caster a la Gin Tachibana, huh...

    For Lyra-Caster... well, I agree that her undiluted form will arguably be more hax than my own Caster!Nymph. Aren't you putting too many skills in though? I think Discernment of The Poor, Pioneer of The Stars, and Independent Action is plenty enough.

    Also waiting for the Subtle Knifer :3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gunbazca View Post
    Corrected error. So she's an armless caster a la Gin Tachibana, huh...

    For Lyra-Caster... well, I agree that her undiluted form will arguably be more hax than my own Caster!Nymph. Aren't you putting too many skills in though? I think Discernment of The Poor, Pioneer of The Stars, and Independent Action is plenty enough.

    Also waiting for the Subtle Knifer :3
    Caster!Will was a few pages back.

    And I'm not sure what to do about the skills. The ones I left in are pretty central to her legend - her ability to lie and then to lead, the end of death, the fact that she's the embodiment of free will... I couldn't really find anything to remove.

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    Quote Originally Posted by linkhyrule5 View Post
    Caster!Will was a few pages back.

    And I'm not sure what to do about the skills. The ones I left in are pretty central to her legend - her ability to lie and then to lead, the end of death, the fact that she's the embodiment of free will... I couldn't really find anything to remove.
    Hmm... You can focus more on the trickster aspect. A trickster, after all, can present herself as literally anything including a leader.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gunbazca View Post
    Hmm... You can focus more on the trickster aspect. A trickster, after all, can present herself as literally anything including a leader.
    Again, how? What can I actually remove? Not her Rebellious Spirit, certainly, and Savior of the Dead is almost a Noble Phantasm on its own. Charisma is too important to her legend as a trickster, she who charmed angels and demons, armored bears and her own mother. Maybe I could make Bluff emulate Charisma...?

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    Independent Action (Game balance), Savior of the Dead (Not necessary, can do that with Bluff or Charisma), Discernment of the Poor (She got suckered by a lot of lies that girl...one does not need to be good at catching lies to tell them), Pioneer of the Stars (This one is iffy, but to me it doesn't quite fit as her journey was never planned and she was essentially led about until the end)

    ...in fact, her status as the embodiment of free will can be question as it was, in the end, Mary who pushed her curiosity to do...that with Will.
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