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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, interesting. I can still imagine Servants with an Archer class or proper range just deciding to snipe him amidst the rock-storm. Or Riders leaping on their mounts (who always seem to be able fly), crossing the river in a heart-beat and murdering him. Still, it's quite neat. I wonder about the limits of the 'Holy Spirit' skill, too. Seems kind of OP as it's phrased. Anyway, kudos to you for taking up the challenge and delivering. Thanks!
    No probs, by the way, the key to the whole way the servant works are those prayers. Protection from Arrows anyone?

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    So Tobi, you didn't count when Lucy went full-on berserk and gained a massive power boost to her "arms"?

    nah, I preferred to use the more natural/one we always see
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    Heh, I look forward to it. If nothing else will be an interesting thing to see, either way. Thank you in advance, I do appreciate you taking time, I hope it provides you with a good challenge.

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    MOMO Mizrahi



    Crossover- Xenosaga

    Appearance- MOMO has the appearance of a little, pink-haired girl

    Bio- MOMO (Multiple Observative Mimetic Organicus) is a prototype Realian- an artificial human made through bioengineering- built by the genius Joachim Mizrahi in the likeness of his deceased daughter. Unlike most Realians, she has very human emotions and has bonded with her friends and her mother. However, Joachim secretly used her to conceal critical data, information that would draw her into a series of quests that would change the destiny of the universe.

    Class- Archer

    Alignment- Chaotic Good- Archer has a very innocent and kind nature, and will never give up on her true friends.

    Alternate Classes- Caster, Rider


    Parameters:

    Strength (D+)- While fairly weak, Archer’s Ether enhances her strength to make her very formidable.

    Agility (A)

    Endurance (E)

    Prana (A)- Archer’s affinity for Ether gives her a large supply of Prana.

    Luck (B)

    Noble Phantasm (C)


    Class Skills:

    Independent Action (Class, A+)- Can exist indefinitely without a master, but requires an alternative source of Prana. Archer can use her Ether abilities to maintain her energy. Rank lowered if her Ether powers are disabled for a long duration.

    Magic Resistance (Class, B)- Despite a low physical defense, Archer is very resistant to magic.


    Personal Skills:

    Realian (A+)- Archer is a specially designed Realian, an artificial race of humans created through genetic and mechanical processes. Because of this, Archer has advanced systems built in such as various sensory devices and regeneration systems. It should also be noted that Realian nervous systems- and by extent Archer’s Prana reserves- are partially composed of a highly addictive narcotic, which leads to mental instability and death in high doses if someone directly absorbs her personal Prana.

    Magecraft (C+)- Archer is able to channel Prana into a scientific form called Ether using built-in nanomachines. This allows her to use magecraft in a unique fashion; while it mirrors normal magecraft, it follows a different pattern that is difficult to imitate without the technical equipment.

    Natural Body (D)- Possession of a perfect body since birth. An artificially created Realian, Archer is the same as when she was first built. However, eventual modifications made her partially human, lowering the rank.

    Prana Burst (C)- Archer can use her Ether powers to unleash Prana attacks at enemies.

    Pioneer of the Stars (A)- While not the principle figure in the Xenosaga series, Archer still was a main player in helping to end an endless time loop and bring about a new age in the universe. Difficult voyages and challenges considered impossible have the greater chance of being realized.


    Noble Phantasms:

    Star Wind/Magic Caster (Support, C)- Archer yells “Star Wind! Power up!” and transforms into a magical girl. Her actual attack in this form is Magic Caster, which uses a fishing pole to steal an item from an opponent. The rod is designed to home in on an item that has magical powers, is unique, or is highly valued by the victim. In addition to the special attack, Archer can utilize a number of spells in this form. The magical girl form can only be maintained for a short period of time, as it drains Prana quickly, but lasts longer the lower Archer’s health is. Also, it can only be used once during a battle.

    Starlight/MOMO Kiss (Support/Anti-Unit, C)- Archer yells “Starlight! Power up!” and transforms into a magical girl. Her actual attack in this form is MOMO Kiss, which sends an Ether-produced projection of herself at an opponent. No matter what, the attack never does less damage than a specified minimum, ensuring that the foe will always be hurt to some degree. In addition to the special attack, Archer can utilize a number of spells in this form. The magical girl form can only be maintained for a short period of time, as it drains Prana quickly, but lasts longer the lower Archer’s health is. Also, it can only be used once during a battle.

    Hilbert Effect (Support, E)- Archer generates a relatively small Hilbert Effect, which was designed to combat the ghostly Gnosis. The energy field forces all incorporeal occupants into physical form, making them more vulnerable to attack. However, this does not lower their power normally. Once the Noble Phantasm ends, all warped individuals revert to their incorporeal forms. In addition, the Hilbert Effect jams all sensor technology unless specifically adapted for the effect (unfortunately, Archer’s Realian systems are hindered by it, but this is only a minor and temporary penalty for her due to her regenerating nanomachines). Also, it prevents the usage of Prana-powered weapons unless given similar modifications.

    Moon Bridge/Revenge/Counter (Anti-Unit/Anti-Army, C)- Archer brings out her Ether bow for a long range attack on a foe or foes. Enhanced with Ether, the arrows are very powerful. When holding Moon Bridge in battle, Archer has the chance for two special attacks when attacked herself: Revenge, for when hit by an attack, and Counter, for when she dodges an attack. Both Revenge and Counter occur instantly, preventing the foe from avoiding the surprise attack. In addition, the weapon can be enhanced with elemental attributes if prepared ahead of time.

    Dark Scepter (Anti-Unit, D)- Archer uses this evil weapon to attack a foe, relying on physical power rather than Ether or Prana. Its true potential is in using it as the final attack to kill an incorporeal spirit (such as a Servant); if it kills the victim, it transforms him into a powerful item that can be used as a separate Noble Phantasm. Rank lowered since the weapon is evil and therefore is counter to Archer’s innocent nature.

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    Okay! Tried my hand at one of these newfangled Servant stat sheets.
    Let's hope I didn't go overboard.

    Class: Saber
    Name: Purple Heart/Neptune
    Alignment: Neutral Good


    Neptune


    Purple Heart

    Parameters

    Strength: B+
    Agility: C+
    Endurance: C
    Magic: B
    Noble Phantasm: A
    Luck: B

    Background

    One of the four
    Console Patron Units
    Goddesses
    of Gamindustri, reigning over Planeptune. She lost her memory after a terrible fight against the other goddesses and was banished to Gamindustri. Despite this, her strong sense of justice led her in a quest to stop the former goddess Arfoire from becoming the True Goddess and destroying Gamindustri.

    Usually careless and possibly carefree, Neptune will jump head first into any situation dangerous or not, and does not bother to think about the possible consequences that await her. In her true form as Purple Heart, she becomes very serious and loses her goofy, friendly behavior in most cases, showing a more confident and prideful side. She loves a good fight and will not quit until she has won.

    She uses a samurai sword in combat.

    Noble Phantasms

    Noble Phantasms in Action


    True Form of the Goddess
    Hard Drive Divinity

    Rank: A+
    Type: Support
    Using this Noble Phantasm, Neptune is able to assume her true Goddess form. As Purple Heart, Strength and Endurance increase by one rank. Her agility and skills also get a small boost, and she gains access to most of her powers. While in this form, her Divinity rank is restored to its original value. While she can technically remain in this form indefinitely, the longer she remains in this form, the more prana it requires to sustain and later recharge. A strong enough attack can forcefully deactivate this Noble Phantasm.

    Overdrive Final Strike
    Neptune Break

    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Unit – Anti-Army
    One of Neptune’s/Purple Heart’s most powerful techniques. Using her sword, Neptune strikes her opponents 13 times at very high speeds from all directions, followed by a powerful burst of energy. The attack is followed by a powerful stab, ending in an explosion. This attack is able to strike several opponents at once.

    Orbital Attack Cannon
    CPU Neptune

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-World/Anti-Army
    This Noble Phantasm is only usable during HDD. Purple Heart transforms into an aircraft, which proceeds to fly to a high altitude. After taking aim, Purple Heart releases a powerful laser beam, which obliterates the battlefield. It is said that this Noble Phantasm has the potential of destroying entire landmasses or even entire planets; however, this is only an exaggeration.

    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance – B: Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected.

    Personal Skills

    Divinity – A+ (C): As a goddess, Saber’s Divinity is of a high rank. However, due to memory loss, most of her skills and powers are lost, and her rank is decreased. She can regain her original rank through use of her Noble Phantasm.

    Battle Continuation – A: Makes it possible to fight even with deadly injuries and can remain alive so long as she does not receive a decisive fatal wound.

    Bravery – C: The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination.
    This skill is only available during HDD.

    Eye of the Mind (True) – B: Capable of calm analysis of battle conditions even when in danger and deduce an appropriate course of action after considering all possibilities to escape from a predicament. So long there is even a 1% chance of a comeback, this ability greatly improves the chances of winning. This skill is only available during HDD.

    Charisma – B (C): As a goddess, she had the ability to guide the people of Planeptune and inspire faith into their hearts. Even after losing her memory, she is still able to lead her party through most adversities. However, her rank has decreased. This cannot be recovered through her Noble Phantasm.

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    Is every even-numbered Servant Daneel posts a loli? MORE LIKELY THAN YOU THINK.

    Have some Greek loliness. This time, the quintessential transgendered hero(ine)!

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    CAENEUS (Καινεύς)

    Servant: Lancer (Saber)
    Master: ?????

    Gender: Female (Male)
    Height: 146 cm (Female)/187 cm (Male)
    Weight: 36 kg/78 kg (Male)
    Three sizes: 75/50/72 (Female form only)

    Alignment: Chaotic Good

    Appearance: In her female form, Caenis appears as a lovely young woman of short stature clad in a semi-transparent white peplos which enticingly contrasts with her lightly tanned skin. She does not appear to take much care of her coal-colored hair save for tying it in a single braided tail at the back. The locks on the front messily poke out as both antennae and black curtains over her eyes blue like a clear morning sky. A small nose and thin lips are framed by a round face.

    As a man, Caeneus keeps the messy braided hair and the same clear blue eyes, but his skin loses color and his height increases substantially. He is now a stout young warrior with an impressively well-built frame. His equipment is in most ways identical to the standard hoplite set—linothorax, greaves, helmet—, except that he has replaced the usual short skirt with longer leg clothes with a side-cut, not unlike the bottom half of the peplos he wears as a female. Indeed, when he takes off the armor he can be seen to be wearing a chiton in the Ionic style, with a side-cut.

    Strength E/B*
    Endurance E/B*
    Agility C/B*
    Magic E/D*
    Luck D/D*
    Noble Phantasm D+/B*
    (* Female form/Male form)

    Class Skills (Apply equally to both forms):
    * Magic Resistance: D+ – Cancels single-action spells. Because Caenis was born with only a minimum of Magic Resistance, as a Heroic Spirit she only gains a minor bonus upon assignment to the Lancer class. Lancer gains enhanced protection against Fire-, Light- and Water-based spells thanks to the benefits of the Divinity skill.

    Personal Skills (Female form):
    * Divinity: D+ – Caenis is the granddaughter of a minor river god and a fourth-generation descendant of Apollo. At this rank she gains minor attack, damage and saving throw bonuses against chthonic spirits and Heroic Spirits with Divinity rank D or lower.

    Personal Skills (Male form):
    * Bravery: B+ – Bonus effect of increasing damage against opponents who attempt mental interference techniques against Lancer.
    * Divinity: E- – Caeneus betrayed the gods by choosing to worship only his spear. He still has his defensive Noble Phantasm, but suffers severe penalties against divine heroes and mysteries of Greek tradition.
    * Nature of a Rebellious Spirit: B – Negates the effects of Charisma up to the same rank.

    Noble Phantasms:
    * Caenis, Kexaritomene – Twice-Favored of the Sea (Καινοίς κεχαριτωμενη)
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: --
    Maximum number of targets: 1 person

    The blessing of might and protection from the sea god Poseidon after ravishing the maiden Caenis. It is the source, the reason and the very beginning of the dual-gendered hero’s legend. The blessing is two-fold: it grants the Heroic Spirit the ability to change at will between her original female form and the mighty masculine form granted by Poseidon. Each form has its own set of parameters and skills—although only the male form possesses skill in combat, the female form can be useful is Caeneus wishes to conserve prana. The transformation is virtually instantaneous, which makes it mostly irrelevant whether she meets an enemy in male or female form.

    While Caenis only requested a strong male form from Poseidon, the Earth-Shaker granted her a second blessing which made Caeneus a truly fearsome opponent in combat and a rightful member of the “Strongest Generation” of ancient Greek heroes. The warrior Caeneus is completely immune to physical damage from metal weapons, without exception. Blades, arrowheads, axes and spears will bounce off his marble-like skin like pebbles, and weapons not at the level of a divine mystery will shatter like brittle glass. While the cult of Poseidon has diminished in modern times, this Noble Phantasm is recorded in the Throne of Heroes in its mightiest form, when its source was one of the greatest Divine Spirits of its time, and thus Caeneus’ protection remains a defensive attribute of the highest quality. Not even the mightiest of holy swords enhanced by the Bounded Field of the Wind King can inflict harm on Caeneus’ body. Of course, immunity to weapon damage does not protect Caeneus from the supernatural effects of arcane weapons such as Noble Phantasms, unless inflicting damage is a condition to trigger the weapon’s effect (like, for example, the Yellow Rose of Mortality).

    * Theodoru Petthalias – No Other God but the Spear (θεόδόρυ Πεθθάλιας)
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: D+
    Range: 5-30
    Maximum number of targets: 1 person

    Caeneus’ eight-foot-long Thessalian spear, which he demanded to be worshipped by the people he saved. This brought the ire of the Ruler of the Gods, Zeus, who enacted retribution by having Caeneus die at the hands of the Centaurs. Regardless of the hero’s shameful end, the spear was enriched by its wielder’s devotion, the gratitude of the people who owed their lives to it and the blood of the many beasts it struck.

    The spear, no matter how it is used—whether in close-combat or as a thrown weapon—, will inflict extra damage to creatures of the Phantasmal Species. Furthermore, if the spear is thrown at a creature with the rank of Divine Beast, it will forcefully impose upon the target the fate of ‘will be struck’. This ‘imposition of unfavorable destiny’ works at the level of an ‘anti-divine curse with a divine origin’ and ensures that the intended target will be struck for maximum damage.

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    Hey gang, sometime back Caster sent me a PM with a Servant sheet challenge, the name of the game was to choose one and try to figure out how best to represent them.

    Those two challenges were: Ganymede and Galatea (the Statue brought to life or the sea nymph, no clue)

    I chose to do Ganymede:
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    Spirit: Ganymede


    Class: Rider


    Strength: D
    Endurance: C
    Agility: C
    Magical energy: C
    Luck: A


    Noble Phantasm:
    The Lord of the Skies’ Beloved (C)
    One of the few mortals to gain the full favour of the Lord of Skies, Rider’s status as the Beloved of Zeus is well known and offers a tiny amount of authority over the sky. This authority has two affects on the servant:
    - First, he will never take any damage from any fall from any height ever.
    - Second, the sky itself can carry him and take him to where he wants to go, basically, independent flight.

    Aetos Dios (A)
    The personal Eagle of Zeus, Aetos Dios was what truly started his legend by carrying him to Zeus himself. A mount on the level of the Divine Spirits, the only reason why Rider has it and can ride the eagle is because of his status as Zeus’ Beloved. Zeus ordered the Eagle to protect Rider as much as it could, and if that meant channelling his power through its body to do so, so be it.

    When Rider is first summoned, Aetos Dios is summoned alongside him and works as his bodyguard, fighting all those resistant enough to overcome his divine beauty. The eagle uses talons and lightning as it weapons, and can change its size to that of a swallow right up to the size of a Golden Eagle. Regardless of its size, its strength, endurance, and agility all rank A, likewise its Divinity.

    When its name is intoned by Rider, the eagle grows into the size of a roc, and its full power is unleashed. All stats get ‘+’ enhancement and the eagle is wreathed in lightning that harms only the Beloved’s opponents.

    Class Skills:
    Ride (B) – Only applicable to Aetos Dios, but even then, the eagle would never let Rider fall.

    Personal Skills:
    Divinity (A) – Though he was born a mortal, he grew into a full fledged divine spirit.
    Mystic Beauty (A) – The beauty that captivated Zeus himself, Rider’s Beauty, even though he is man, captivated all who see him. Against other Servants, it serves to constantly suggest that the attacking Servant does not need to do anything to harm the perfect visage of the Servant…at the very least, those attacking hold back their strikes to reduce the marring Rider would otherwise suffer.


    Well Caster? Did I pass?

    Edit:
    Oh, apologies to Seika, I seriously beefed up Aetos Dios here, and made some pretty wild conjectures, but they were all based on their relationship with Zeus.
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    Very interesting indeed. I find the idea of Ganymede flying around and... well, guess he's flying, is interesting. :P Do think there is an issue in that he lacks much in the way of weapons/spells of some sort, since without that he has to run up and slap his opponents to death I guess. :P Could give him prayers that are like spells, calling down divine will or some such. But yeah, nice rendition of him. He'd be a tricky Servant I imagine, if he has a little extra to battle enemies without going full-blown NP on them. Could tie in lightning/wind manipulation with the C-rank NP.

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    Not really, he is his A-ranked Eagle with him at all times after all ^^

    That's his weapon and shield since his legend doesn't say much about his fighting capabilities.
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    Can someone stat Bruce Lee?

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    I think someone did Bruce Lee in the General Discussion Servant thread.


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    Ah. Interesting still. I imagine he'd wind up being decently deadly in combat. And why the apology to Seika? Doesn't seem too overblown, considering in some myths it's literally Zeus as an eagle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caster View Post
    And why the apology to Seika?
    One can never be too cautious...


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    I do want to say I did actually like your Ganymede. Was a unique take on a difficult to work with kind of figure. Most of my concerns are more along the lines of combat concerns, the depiction is really nice. Thanks for doing him, just wanted to make sure I got that out there.

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    Thanks Caster ^^
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    Rough Draft
    Albert Einstein
    Class: caster
    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Strength: D
    Endurance: C
    Agility: D
    Mana: A
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: A

    Class Skills
    Item Creation: B-
    Territory Creation: B+

    Personal Skills
    Numerology: A+
    Kabbalah Thaumaturgy: B
    Dyslexia: C-

    Numerology: The use of numbers and equations to predict and manipulate the both world and caster. Branch of Kabbalah Thaumaturgy
    Kabbalah Thaumaturgy: Creating mysteries by understanding the nature of the universe and/or Divine.
    Dyslexia: Difficulty understanding and countering written based Thaumaturgy that use words, Example Runecraft. Number based Thaumaturgy, Example Numerology, is not affected by this skill.

    Noble Phantasms

    E=MC2
    Rank: B+
    Type: Support
    This Noble Phantasm is based off of Einstein's most famous equation and acts as an ability that Einstein can activate at any time. Once activated the Einstein can transport himself and anything he wishes to carry with himself by transforming into energy and travelling at the speed of light to a designated location. The location of arrival can be anything that is within the range of Einsteins Prana reserves so long as the location is not guarded by A+ ranked Thaumaturgy. He and anything he transport will always arrive at a location as whole and unharmed as the moment of activation.

    Manhatten Project
    Rank: A+++(A)
    Type: Anti-Army/ Anti-Fortress
    While not directly working on atomic weapons, Einstein's theories were the basis for the creation of the first atomic bomb. Einstein often fealt responsible for the creation of atomic weapons. Due to the fact that Einstein did not directly create the atomic bomb and Einstein's regret, this Noble Phantasm is reduced to Rank A when used by Einstein. Manhattan Project is a small bomb that can be heald in one hand that allows the user to create a controlled nuclear blast with no nuclear fallout based on the prana and skill of the user. The user must stand still and concentrate on the Noble Phantasm for a time to be determined by the size of the explosion. A skilled user that was able to use the Phantasm at it's fullest would be able to create a blast five miles in diameter but would require at least 30 minutes to achieve and would fully drain Mana reserves equal to A+++.

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    (For the sake of simplicity, the Servant is referred to as 'Servant' or 'he/him/his')
    (In dedication to From Software, and the Souls series)

    Name: The Dark Lord/The Chosen Undead
    Class: Any

    Strength:
    ?
    Agility: ?
    Magic: ?
    Endurance: ?
    Luck: D

    Special: The Dark Lord begins with 30 points in Humanity. When summoned, the Master may choose any class for the Servant to belong to. The Master determines the ranks in all stats as well, at the cost of two Humanity per rank. Berserker and Saber reduce the cost of Strength to one humanity per rank. Lancer, Rider, and Assassin reduce the cost of Agility to one humanity per rank. Caster reduces the cost of Magic to one Humanity per rank. Berserker and Avenger reduce the cost of Endurance to one Humanity per rank. Archer reduces the cost of every second rank (C and A) in a stat to one humanity. By virtue of being the hope of Undead everywhere, and the manifestation of evil for Humans, Gods, and Giants everywhere, the Servant qualifies for Avenger class. Luck may not be altered. If the Master is not aware of this facet of the Servant, he is randomly summoned into any available class and randomly spends 15 points of Humanity, along with unique attributes to his Noble Phantasms. The Servant can not spend more than 20 Humanity at creation. The Servant begins with E rank in all stats.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Bonfire Resurrection, That From Which All Embers Return To and Arise From (N/A) (Self-Targeted, Support): By sacrificing a five points of Humanity, the Servant does not die when killed. His corpse fades over the course of five seconds, then he immediately arises at the closest bonfire. In and of itself, an extraordinary but otherwise useless skill; anything that could kill him can most certainly kill him again. However...

    Calamity Resistance, The Anguish of Endless Death (N/A) (Self-targeted, Support)
    : To survive was the Dark Lord's nature. To forge on ahead was the only path left to him. If he did not do so, he would die. As he did, many times. To die was to descend, to spiral into the madness of the Hollow, and so he learned. Grew stronger when no other undead had before him. The Servant's body catalogues all attacks made against it during each 'life'; upon the inevitable revival, the gains a rank of resistance to every single attack made against him during the last life. This can stack over the course of many lives, to the point where the Servant is absolutely untouchable by a given attack, and manifests in many ways: sheer resistance, instinctual dodging, parrying, pattern memorization, and anything else one could use to 'resist' an attack. The nature of 'attack' also extends to any sort of 'calamity' that may befall the Servant, hence the name of the skill; any action made in an attempt to harm the Servant in any way or form is catalogued for the purpose of this skill. The one true weakness of this is that actions made with no intention to harm the Servant are not catalogued.

    Soul Manifestation, With Each Death Comes New Life (D - A) (Varies, Anti-Unit): With each creature slain, the Dark Lord grew stronger. Chaos Witch Quelaag. Crossbreed Priscilla. Dark Sun Gwyndolin. Four Kings. Great Grey Wolf Sif. Gwyn, Lord of Cinder. Iron Golem. Moonlight Butterfly. Nito. Dragonslayer Ornstein. Executioner Smough. Seath the Scaleless. The Bed of Chaos. Upon summoning, the Master can choose any of the above Souls and either select them for active usage as a weapon, or consume them for points in Humanity. If the Master is unaware of the nature of the Servant, three Souls are randomly chosen and retained while the rest are consumed. The Servant may summon and dismiss retained weapons at will.

    -Quelaag's Furysword, Soul of the Sister (C): A curved sword born from the soul of Quelaag, daughter of the Witch of Izalith, who was transformed into a chaos demon. Like Quelaag's body, the sword features shells, spikes, humanity and a coating of chaos fire. Power affected by wielder's humanity. Tracing the blade against the floor creates lines of lava, and wounds fester like boiling water. Truly a weapon of chaos. Also grants access to Pyromancies.

    -Priscilla's Dagger, Soul of the Pariah (B)
    : A blade possessing the power of lifehunt, dancing about when wielded. At the expedidenture of one Humanity, the Dagger may evolve to the Lifehunt Scythe. Attacks with the weapon drain the very 'life' from anything they touch...no, more accurately, it invokes 'death'. Priscilla was locked away in Ariamis for her Lifehunt, for she could kill anything that lived. Even if that thing was a God.

    -Darkmoon Catalyst, Soul of the Hidden Ruler (C): A catalyst, used for sorcery, that was forged using the soul of Gwyndolin. The god of the moon who sought to use the Dark Lord for his own schemes, he was slain and his soul was used. The ownership of this weapon allows usage of all Vinheim Sorceries (Anything not considered Oolacile, Big Hat Logan's, or Crystal), as well as Miracles, for Gwyndolin was worshiped as a god even after his death at the hands of the Dark Lord.

    -Blade of the First Sun, Souls of the Lord (A): The Souls of the Four Kings, Nito, Lord of Cinder Gwyn, the Bed of Chaos, and Seath the Scaleless have a unique effect when used together. Save for the last, none have any effect alone. When combined? A massive greatsword of flame and destruction, which sows the fire of the First Kiln wherever it is swung. The rapid conusmption of air to fuel the flame causes vacuums when swung, making dodging any sort of attack near impossible. When fed five points of humanity, the Blade grants a rank in all physical skills. When fed ten humanity, the Reality Marble 'Kiln of the First Flame' is activated, bringing resurrection time to zero and forcing the Servant and his opponent into a small arena, with a Bonfire in the middle. When fed twenty humanity, the Servant expires and consumes everything within a city's radius in an absolute cleansing of fire and flames. Knowledge of this combination is extremely rare, not to mention how obscure the Servant is in the first place. There is no indication that any of these Souls interact the way they do; only one who knows would know. The Servant certainly isn't telling.

    -Greatsword of Artorias, Soul of the Sentinel (C): The blade of a man forged with the soul of a wolf. How strange. The greatsword carries a powerful enchantment, rendering it supernaturally sharp and durable. As well as that, it severely harms any incorporeal beings it comes into contact with, turning the spirit form escape for enemy servants into a calculated gamble.

    -Butterfly Horn, Soul of the Moonlight (D): Spear that deals damage as if it were a persistant magical force, rather than a weapon. Being struck by it would be like being struck by twenty Gandr. Physical resistance is thus useless, but magical resistance stymies the weapon greatly.

    -Golem Hammer, Soul of the Guardian (D): A massive hammer that rends the earth when it hits. It can release a large shockwave upon impact with the ground, but otherwise it is merely an immense, absurdly heavy hammer.

    -Dragonhunt Regalia, Soul of the First Protector (B): A lightning wreathed spear and a massive bow that shoots arrows that are more like spears than anything else, the Regalia is a powerful set of weapons that is even more powerful when wielded against Dragon Kind, gaining an effective Rank for this purpose.

    -Executioner's Hammer, Soul of the Second Protector (C): Simply a powerful hammer, weighted so that each strike delivers max damage. Any target hit by this must make an Endurance check or die immediately; most Servants can make this check easily, rendering this weapon situational if anything.

    -Crystallization Catalyst, Soul of the Scaleless (A): A crystal staff which grants access to the most powerful of Sorceries: those of crystal. These sorceries may only be used if Caster has rank A Magic. Also grants access to Big Hat Logan's sorceries, which are less powerful but still far greater than those of Vinheim. Seath was outcasted amongst his kind for his lack of scales, and thus rebelled, helping Gwyn slay his own kind. In exchange, he was granted dukehood and permission to carry his studies as he wished, but the study of the Crystal and its connection to the 'soul' drove him to madness.

    A Legacy Not My Own, In Memory of My Friend (C) (Support, Anti-Unit): Regardless of what the Master summons the Servant as, he will always have this equipment. A simple set of armor, a simple helmet, a simple shield, a simple sword, and a simple talisman of cloth, all marked with the signia of the Sun. They offer no special abilities beyond being well made. The talisman allows casting of Lightning Spear type miracles, but has no power of its own beyond that. A Praise for the Sun, and for the man who sought it.

    Class Skills: The Servant is summoned with C-rank in any specific Class Skills unless mentioned below; obviously, he has whatever class skills are given to his class.

    Territory Creation (B): The nature of the Bonfire and the Dark Lord's ability to now create them allows him to create multiple 'checkpoints', which other Servants would call 'workshops'. He can warp from any Bonfire to another with no cost. He may not use any feature of the Bonfire if he is being attacked.

    Mad Enhancement (EX): Die. Die. Die. Die again and again, never living. You will never live. You will never find peace. You will never rest. You will never find hope. Die. Die. Struggle. Suffer. You are nothing. You are inconsequential. You. Are. Undead. If summoned into the Berserker class, upon usage of Mad Enhancement the Servant Hollows. All vestiges of sanity are lost. All points of humanity are consumed. All bonfires cease working. All physical stats rise to A+ rank, while Magic and Luck deteriorate to E-. With all the weapons of his Noble Phantasms behind him, and with his Master certainly dead after activation, Berserker becomes a terror to be feared by anything. For this is the madness of a man who has been killed and yet has not died, a man who has glimpsed the Abyss and walked amongst it, a man who killed gods with naught but determination. This is the madness of the Undead. This is nothing anyone should suffer.

    Battle Continuation (N/A): The Servant never has any rank in this, regardless of class. When he is killed, he dies. When he dies, he is resurrected. That's all there is to it. No surviving things that would be fatal. No grasping onto life. How would the dead hold onto life anyway?

    Magic Resistance, Protection from Arrows, Protection from Wind, Protection from X, etc. (N/A): Overrided by Calamity Resistance.

    Personal Skills:

    Bravery (EX): It is not Bravery. It is drive. He does not fear because there is nothing left to fear. To be brave is to continue regardless of fear, but there is no fear to conquer. He merely continued, regardless of the path, regardless of the obstacles. He would die, and he would die again, but he would always triumph in the end. For when you can't die, what is there left to fear? Improves physical damage.

    Eye of the Mind (True) (Up to B): Against any opponent the Servant dies against, he gains a rank of Eye of the Mind against that opponent and that opponent only. Defaults with E rank no matter how much experience he has. If he fights multiple opponents, he gains a rank against each. If he gains three ranks against seperate opponents, his default rises. The max rank available is rank B. The pattern in death is there, one must merely grasp it with your own hands. (example: Servant fights three other servants and dies. He now has D rank versus all of them and defaults to D rank Eye of the Mind from now on. Again, he fights, and dies. Default rank and rank versus those opponents is now C. Servant then fights only two of the former servants, gaining Rank B Eye of the Mind but not altering his default rank in any way)

    Bonfire (N/A): Sacrifices a humanity to create a waypoint for the Servant that serves as a revival spot. Invisible to anyone but the Servant. When summoned as a Caster, it combines with Territory Creation. The location of summoning immediately becomes a Bonfire at no cost.

    When summoned as Emiya Shirou's servant, he becomes Saber with Rank C STR, Rank D AGI, Rank A MAG, and Rank C END. He has access to Crystallization Catalyst, Quelaag's Furysword, and Greatsword of Artorias. After gaining ten points from soul consumption and using one point of humanity to pay for the Rank C in END, Saber begins with 25 points in Humanity. The Dark Lord is also summoned as a girl.
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    Has anyone tried doing Zhuge Liang?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spinach View Post
    One can never be too cautious...
    Yeesh, I apparently need to hold back more. I'm being scary.

    Nah, I've already said that I'm almost never going to be bothered by stuff put in Servant profiles, because nothing Nasu did matches up with legends exactly either. It's only when people claim something that they think applies to our world/myths, that I will ... correct them.

    Ganymede was interesting, though I though that his first NP might have been better as a Skill, rather than a Phantasm. It just feels that way, I'm not entirely sure why. I did like the Mystic Face, though.

    On the other hand, I really loved Daneel's Kaineus (though I believe it should be Πετθαλίας rather than Πεθθάλιας, not to mention that the name 'Πετθαλία' seems to be anachronistic for that region). Nit-picking aside, you had several very neat concepts, and you put a lot of detail into the Servant. Reminds me that I was going to do a Tiresias at some point, too.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yeesh, I apparently need to hold back more. I'm being scary.
    But I enjoy your lectures. :V


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