Create your own Modern Fiction Servants

[Five_X]

Quick, someone do Makoto from School Days, now. Best VN protag evar.

[Lycodrake]

Quick, someone do Makoto from School Days, now. Best VN protag evar.

As Servant Rider.
With his NP as NICE BOAT.
=P

[Five_X]

But the boat is Kotonoha's, silly.

[Daneel Rush]

@Bloble: Normally I'm not into game characters as Servants but, damn it, Takumi actually works. I don't get why his Agility's so high, though.

@Five_X, Lyco: Damn it, now I want to make a write-up for Kotonoha.

[Bloble]

@Bloble: Normally I'm not into game characters as Servants but, damn it, Takumi actually works. I don't get why his Agility's so high, though.

In the game once he gets the Di-Sword he does a bunch of crazy flips and acrobatic manoeuvres to slash apart the backpacks, plus his final battle against that one guy has him do some pretty rad stuff too. It's a bit of a stretch, sure, but I think it fits.

..actually, I'll just lower it to B. That sounds a bit better.

[Five_X]

Kotonoha has the skill "Breasts" at rank D++.

[Bloble]

Kotonoha has the skill "Breasts" at rank D++.

Oh u.

In that case, Rin has it at A, and Akiha's is... EX.

[Five_X]

Oh u.

In that case, Rin has it at A, and Akiha's is... EX.

Nah, Rin has it at B, and Akiha and Saber both have A. Ilya and Len both have A+. Though, this one is unique in that mammary powerlevels can work in an inverse relationship to the letter rank. :3

[Daneel Rush]

So rather that 'Breasts' it's more 'Japanese Breast Appeal'.

[Five_X]

All Japanese are lolicons!!

[Daneel Rush]

Ilya said it, so it's gotta be true!

[Ahasver]

This has probably been done before, but hey, I like to think I put a unique spin on it

Jack Ryan
Class: Archer / Caster
Alignment: Chaotic Good/Lawful evil
It is unknown what the ending of his legend was. The two endings believed led to the creation of two Heroic Spirits, Caster and Archer. With the exception of One Nobel Phantasm and Class skills, they are Identical.
Stats
Strength: B
Endurance: EX
Agility: D
Magic: B
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class skills:
Territory Creation B (Caster)
At this rank, Creation of a Workshop is possible. However this skill is only possible due to a Nobel Phantasm.
High speed Divine words: EX (Archer / Caster)
Due to the nature of Archer / Caster magic, they do not require any form of chant or Aria to use any of their own Magecraft.
High detail eyesight: C (Archer)
Body modification gives Archer high detail eyesight then most archers.

Personal skills:
Fallow Rule: C
Similar to the Golden rule, the fallow rule attracts a great deal of material wealth to one’s self. Due to how Archers / Casters life went, he values food a great deal over money or gold, leading to it coming to him much easier than anything else.
Body modification: A
Archer / Caster has been modified from the very moment of his conception, and when combined with the fact that there magecraft has more in common with implanted Psychic abilities then Prana manipulation, Archer / Caster has no problem further altering themselves, and will do so without question.
Battle Continuation: A+
The Heroic spirits preform at one hundred percent until death, and for just a moment before death, they become nigh invincible.
Absolute obedience: A
So long as the phrase “Would you kindly” is used, Archer / Caster will obey with the authority of a command seal. However, both hate this skill, and will conspire to kill their master as soon as possible if they use it.
Noble Phantasms:

The Guns of Rapture/ Power to the people C/B
Type: Support
The weapons of the underwater city from which Archer / Caster Hails these weapons are highly modified and soaked with the ADAM filled blood of the Beasts of Rapture. They count as C ranked Noble phantasms when uninvoked, and do not have the Alterations, but when there name is called, they become B ranked and gain the Modifications they had in life.

Mr. B / Big Brother
A suit of armored diving Clothes, This Noble Phantasm grants a rank up in all stats, and two in luck, if donned. However doing so is permanent and comes with a serious drawback. The Armor renders Archer / Caster speech inoperable, and gives them a terrible stench, as well as ranks in Monstrous presence. Any allies except those who are absolutely forced, such as there master, will abandon Archer / Caster.

ADAM/Something Under the sea
Despite Archer / Caster own abilities, he only exists to one city, one with a low and insane population at that, and therefore should have never ascended to the throne of heroes. This was made possible due to ADAM, the natural crystalation of the fear of all sailors, the fear of something under the sea. When manifested ADAM is a number of slugs, which can be summoned by this Noble Phantasm, and are nigh worthless on their own despite being made of liquefied prana and being classified as Phantasmal creatures. However, when implanted in a host, the host is given the same properties, as well as regeneration to an absurd degree. If implanted in anything but a child, these attributes scale back, with girls being the optimal choice. They can be harvested for vastly more ADAM the you could get from a slug. ADAM makes for an increably effective source of prana, and can be used to modify a body, though using liquid fear will drive all but the most stalwart insane.

Archer, who abandoned this source of power for love and happiness, can use this phantasm to reverse Mr. B, cure any who have been implanted with ADAM slugs destroy ADAM to the touch. Using this ability will slowly kill him, as he is more ADAM then blood himself. While this ability is activated, his luck becomes EX, as he is completely unbound by fate, and will pass any check that require luck automatically be passed. In addition, he gains a hypodermic needle capable of extracting prana, enchantments, and enhancements from whomever it stabs, this is a conceptual weapon empowered by the love and adoration of children.

Caster, who embraced the power of ADAM, can summon the chamber of FONTAINE and the ADAM processioning machines contained within, which acts as a workshop. Also contained within is the ADAM Inducer Device, which, if it has sufficient amounts of ADAM, can boost even an ordinary human to the strength of a heroic spirit, granting all stats except luck to A, as well as granting an uncontrollable A ranked mad enhancement. Whatever is created has no defense against conceptual attacks, nor of internal attacks.


The idea behind this would be someone, Zouken or the Einzberns, would summon Caster!Jack a few months before the war, and expoit the hell out of ADAM to make an army of splicers to blitz the war for them, while enhancing their own mages. When the war comes to Fuyuki, some splicers blood or a little sister summons Archer!Jack.

[Amraphenson]

Grammar issues. There/Their, nobel in place of noble, etc.

EX being used again... :| Jack's a tenacious bastard, but I highly doubt his endurance isn't quantifiable.

High detail eyesight doesn't make sense; there's no indication that Jack ever had any better eyes than any thing else, and by definition it doesn't fit the Class Skill category. Key items glowing out to him are explained as his 'modifications' doing so, iirc. Class Skills are skills every member of a class has, and you describe High Detail Eyesight as something beyond most Archers.

Not exactly sure what you mean for the Archer portion of ADAM. MR. B and ADAM also lack ranks.

High Speed Divine Words is a Personal Skill, and he lacks any of the actual Personal Skills of his given classes beyond Territory Creation. Not seeing Independent Action or Item Construction (which actually really fits Jack).

Screaming out 'The Guns of Rapture!' also sounds really cheesy in the middle of a fight; maybe make the subtitle the name?

Not quite sure Battle Continuation really fits in at all, especially at that rank. Fallow Rule also doesn't need the rename, nor does is it really required; you can just attribute it to Jack being able to find useful things anywhere, it doesn't need to be a skill.

I like the concept behind him, though.

[Seika]

Your use of HSDW is ... mad?

1) He's in no position to know Divine Words, having had no contact with the Age of the Gods. (Or if he has, you've made no mention of this change to him).
2) How does he get EX in it?
3) He uses high speed words to compress his casting ... to speaking no words. What the hell?

[Santo]

I thought I'd try my hand at this 8D

A discussion on the “What if ______ was Shirou’s Servant?” birthed the idea for this.


Simo Häyhä The White Death.


Class: Archer

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.

Stats:

Strength: E(D) (boosted to D when summoned in Archer class container)
Endurance: D(C) (Boosted to C when summoned in the Archer class container)
Agility: D+(C) (Boosted to C when summoned in the Archer class container)
Mana: C
Luck: B-


Class Skills:
Independent Action: C (B) (boosted to B due to it also being a personal skill)
Magic Resistance: E

Personal Skills:

Presence Concealment: B
Simo’s legend is based around his great ability to hide, this is reflected upon his personal abilities when he ascended to the throne. At this level Simo can hide himself in such a way that he will be nigh impossible to find. If given some time to modify his hiding place, he may make one to two attacks without breaking stealth.

Protection from Bombardment: B
Simo was such a pain to the Russians assaulting Finland that they used several artillery strikes in hopes of killing him. Not a single one was ever successful, and if some of the more outlandish rumors are to be believed, even within a few kilometers of his position. As a skill, whenever he is targeted by a bombardment type attack, he makes a luck check, if successful he will miraculously avoid damage from the barrage.

Clairvoyance: D
Simo has outstanding visual perception. At this rank one is able to keep track of objects up to 1 km away, and able to accurately hit a person’s center mass at one half that distance.

Most of Simo’s confirmed sniper kills were done over a range of over 400 yards using his rifle’s iron sights. The man was known for having the eyes of a hawk.

Battle Continuation: D
The ability to continue fighting. At this rank one is able to fight while grievously wounded, and due to Simo’s legend, he will survive damage that would normally be lethal and return to the field of battle after a period of time, however this second effect can only happen once.

Near the end of his service, Simo was hit in the head by a stray bullet. He was taken by friendly soldiers to a hospital, witnesses claim he was missing half of his head, seven days later he was back on his feet and reaching for a rifle.

Noble Phantasms:

M28/30 Mozin Nagant:C
Simo preferred the M28 Mozin over the Swedish Mouser equipped with a scope he was issued. It is confirmed that this weapon claimed the lives of 505 Russians, and it is rumored that it claimed well over 800. Simo actually lost the rifle near the end of the war, but he will always be summoned with his preferred weapon. (If this rifle is used to attack a Russian, or a person of Russian descent, it gains a boost of one rank)

Suomi KP/31 Submachine gun: D
Simo was more than just a Marksman, the man was credited with 200 kills using a submachinegun, bringing his confirmed kill ration to 705, and his rumored kills to be just over a thousand.

The Snows of Finland: B+
“The miracle of Kollaa” where 32 Finns battled 4000 Soviets. These were Simo Häyhä’s hunting grounds, where in a period of less than 100 days, it is confirmed he claimed 705 lives, and rumors place his kill count at a little over 1000.

With this Noble Phantasm, Simo brings his enemy into the Kollaa river in the middle of a cruel winter, with temperatures of up to -40 degrees Celsius.

While within this Bounded Field, his battle continuation is boosted to C. His endurance and agility are boosted to B. His presence concealment, protection from bombardment, and luck are boosted to A. And his M28/30 Mozin-Nagant is boosted by one rank.

Any person within the Reality Marble that is Russian or of Russian descent, suffer a penalty to all stats, reducing them by one full rank.

Brief overview of legend.

In spoiler for size

Was a Finnish soldier who, using an iron sighted bolt action rifle, amassed the highest recorded confirmed kills as a sniper in any war…ever!!
Häyhä was born in the municipality of Rautjärvi near the present-day border of Finland and Russia, and started his military service in 1925. His duties as a sniper began during the ‘winter war’ (1939-1940) between Russia and Finland. During the conflict Häyhä endured freezing temperatures up to -40 degrees Celsius. In less than 100 days he was credited with 505 confirmed kills, 542 if including unconfirmed kills, however the unofficial frontline figures from the battlefield places the number of sniper kills at over 800. Besides his sniper kills he was also credited with 200 from a Suomi KP/31 Submachine gun, topping off his total confirmed kills at 705.

How Häyhä did all this was amazing. He was basically on his own all day, in the snow, shooting Russians, for 3 months straight. Of course when the Russians caught wind that a shit load of soldiers were being killed, they thought ‘well this is war, there’s bound to be casualties’. But when the generals were told that it was one man with a rifle they decided to take a bit of action. first they sent in a counter-sniper. When his body was returned they decided to send in a team of counter-snipers. When they didn’t come back at all they sent in a whole goddamn battalion. They took casualties and couldn’t find him. Eventually they ordered an artillery strike, but to no avail. You see Häyhä was clever, and this was his neck of the woods. He dressed completely in white camouflage. He used a smaller rifle to suit his smaller frame (being 5ft3) increasing his accuracy. he used an iron sight to present the smallest possible target (a scoped sight would require the sniper to raise his head for sighting). He compacted the snow in front of the barrel, so as not to disturb it when he shot thus revealing his position. He also kept snow in his mouth so his breath did not condense and reveal where his was. Eventually however his was shot in the jaw by a stray bullet during combat on March 6 1940. He was picked up by his own soldiers who said half his head was missing. He didn’t die however and regained consciousness on the 13th, the day peace was declared.

Once again total kills…. 505 sniper + 200 submachine = 705 total Confirmed Kills…all in less than 100 days.

[SeiKeo]

>EX

[Santo]

>EX

Do tell, how do you quantify taking someone to your homeland for a small period of time? =/

The two RM's I'm aware of are Ioni Hetaori (probably spelled that wrong) and UBW, both of which are EX. If there is a better ranking for a RM I'll edit it.

[SeiKeo]

IMO, it seems better fitted as an advanced Bounded Field rather than a Reality Marble, that's some serious stuff that's higher level.

[Five_X]

How does he have a Reality Marble? He's not a magus.

Also, UBW isn't EX-rank. It's E-A++, based on the weapons within. Ionioi Hetairoi is only EX because it summons a boatload of Heroic Spirits.

[Santo]

How does he have a Reality Marble? He's not a magus.

Also, UBW isn't EX-rank. It's E-A++, based on the weapons within. Ionioi Hetairoi is only EX because it summons a boatload of Heroic Spirits.

Ahh...then what would be a good ranking for it if what it does is boost his abilities and undercut others?

Also Iskander has one and he isn't a magus either. I'm using the excuse that his mind never left the Kollaa river, and so will summon his enemies to his preferred hunting ground. Much like Iskander will summon his enemies to the most advantageous place for his army to trample them.