Create your own Modern Fiction Servants

[Petrikow]

As for Fraga, it scales up the more powerful the attack up to A rank. That means that if you counter ECKUSUCALIBAAA, you get A. If you counter Gae Bolg, you get B. Etc, Etc. If she gets an A rank for the likes of throwing kanshou and bakuya, then that would be silly.

It isn't so much as Bazett hasn't mastered it, but more of it takes ridiculous amounts of time and effort to make one. If she uses one in the grail war, she won't be able to get that one back for a while.

I see, so you have no idea what you are talking about then.

[The Curious Fan]

As for the blackstaff, I can't comment on that. If there is no history, it might be a mystic code, rather than an NP. It should at least be backed up by some form of history.

It has a history, we don't know it since it hasn't been revealed in the books yet, and it kinda lets you ignore one of the fundamental rules of human magic users in the DF, you use black magic, you go nuts. Not exactly low tier.

[Vagrant]

As for Fraga, it scales up the more powerful the attack up to A rank. That means that if you counter ECKUSUCALIBAAA, you get A. If you counter Gae Bolg, you get B. Etc, Etc. If she gets an A rank for the likes of throwing kanshou and bakuya, then that would be silly.

It isn't so much as Bazett hasn't mastered it, but more of it takes ridiculous amounts of time and effort to make one. If she uses one in the grail war, she won't be able to get that one back for a while.

I am amazed by how wrong you are. Answerer strikes anyone using their trump card before they can use it as an A Rank NP, otherwise it's a normal Rank D Phantasm against any non-trump attack. It's pretty much shown to autowin in most situations once Answerer is unleashed.

[Seika]

I see, so you have no idea what you are talking about then.

This has been evident for some time.

[qwertyfatcat]

Okay I'll admit, I'm wrong about both things. I just found out that the conditions for Fragarach is harder to achieve than I thought. It's still great, just harder to achieve.

[Paladin Lord]

I more or less made this as a joke/persistent muse, don't yell at me.

Class: Caster
Alignment: Lawful good
Master: ????
True name: Linkara

Base Stats:
STR: D (C when using his punch, C when morphed)
END: D (C when morphed)
AGI: E (C when morphed)
MAN: A (His phantasm reduces the cost of his magic to 0, making him a very efficant servant, if not very well trained)
LUK: C-A (He talked a Eldritch abomination into killing itself, you decide)


Class Skills:

Item Construction- A+ (bordering EX, depending on your interpretation)
A: Linkara can use the only spell he ever mastered, and bring something the power it had in its legend, making him a faker on par with Shirou. Since he lacked training, thus incapable of using orthodox magic, he took something and ran with it, even creating a morphing grid to power his morphers. Needless to say, a quick trip to a toy store can make him VERY dangerous. (IE: He buys a life-size replica of Captain America's shield, he casts the spell on it, and it can resist blows from Mjolnir-class weapons)

Territory creation: B+
B+: Caster can create his own house, which doubles as a workshop. The + modifier is that Caster can be aided (for a short time) by a assortment of allies that he had in life. (Poyo (a robot), Nimue (AI), Iron liz, Etc.) But he prefers not to bother them and can only sustain them for so long.

Personal skills
Bravery: A+
A+: He fought, a multiversal conqueror, a high-end assassin, and a Eldritch abomination that devoured other universes. And verbally smacked silent hill in the face. Did I mention that he carries Pyramid head around with him in a small ball?

Charisma: B+
B+: See above antecedents, if there was a skill to wax words, this man would have it in spades. Also, he talked a manifestation of pain and anger into resting.

Discernment of the poor: B
B: Caster has lived a life dedicate to analyzing and picking apart people and plots, needless to say, he is very hard to fool.

Headache sufferer- Linkara has reviewed a unending stream of comics that SUCK. Needless to say, sometimes he remembers the really, really, bad ones.

Savior of exsistence- ?- (not sure what to do with this one)

Lesser phantasms- (just a term I decided for if something could get true phantasm status, but the servant chose another. Like if Gilgamesh was Saber, he would have many swords as lesser phantasms, and Ea as his true phantasm, make sense?)

Hat- In Caster's home universe, the magic was cast from ones life force, Linkara's hat lets him bypass that little problem, he still gets a little fatigue, but his eyes won't fall out anytime soon.

Morphers- Arguably Caster's most valuable tools, when morphed he gains a boost to his stats, and access to two powerful weapons, the dragon dagger which shoots green lightning, and the sword of the original white ranger, Saba. Also, he gets Protection of arrows. At rank C. Not to mention that any morpher gives him special abilities

Pokeballs- I kid you not, Linkara can capture spirits, familiars, and elementals in them. (Imagine the potential hilarity of him throwing a Master Ball at Gilgamesh)

Blade blaster/ Phaser- Usually used to stun and chase opponents away.

Comicron-1 - Linkara's spaceship. Take that Gilgamesh.

True Noble Phantasm- The magic gun
Designation: Anti-unit
Rank: B

A indestructible weapon of incredible destructive power, harnessing the essence of a girl tortured by her monstrous parents and their cult, which worshipped The Entity. The gun was crafted to be the ultimate weapon against all who opposed their god. However, the girl's anguish and rage caused their weapon to backfire, destroying them with their own creation. Despite its dark history, it has remained a steadfast ally of Linkara, and will defend him, firing powerful bolts of plasma. And if pushed far enough, it will launch a ball of plasma the size of a house.

Subset: The Dolorem
Designation: Summoning
Rank: ??? (I really don't know how powerful it is)

The girl also has a demonic entity at her disposal, the Dolorem . The Dolorem (Latin for grief, pain, misery, suffering) is the personification of the rage of the girl who was sacrificed by her parents to create the Magic Gun. After the Dolorem was brought on and killed the girl's parents, the Dolorem faded away, having no more use. Besides being able to kill cultist armed with mystic codes, the demon also has a reality marble witch imitates Silent Hill, in addition to being a powerful illusionist/memory changer. Almost making Linkara commit suicide by making him think that he was the girl's father, only the intervention of the girl saved him.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XUMoLaW4yk Linkara vs the Entity

[Arch-Magos Winter]

Class:Assassin
True Name: Hassan Sabbah
Strength: C
Agility: C+
Endurance: B+
Magical Energy: C
Luck: E

Class Ability:

Presence Concealment (A+): Hides ones presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. Once he has erased his presence, it is almost impossible to find him. However, the rank of concealment drops substantially when he switches to attack mode

Skills:

Throwing (Daggers) (B): Ability to throw a dagger like a bullet.

Divine Protection from the Wind (A): A curse handed down in the Middle East, used to ward off storms.

Self Remodeling (A): How well one can attach and fuse a totally different body to one’s own. The higher the rank, the further one is from a legitimate hero. At this rank, it is possible to question whether the user is even human anymore.

Monstrous Strength (A): Increases strength temporarily. An ability only possessed by beastmen and demons. Strength is increased by two ranks. The duration depends on the rank of ‘Monstrous Strength.’

Battle Continuation (A): The ability to keep living beyond what should be death. It allows for battle even on the verge of death, and allows the user to stay alive unless they receive a truly fatal blow.

Noble Phantasm: Zabaniya – Delusional Transformation - (C)
The heart of change. This is the heart of a daeva, and it allows the changing of form at the cost of being forever bound to an eternal evil, and slowly becoming more and more like it. It uses the shapeshifting powers of the user’s new heart to transform the body, and as long as the heart stays intact, the user stays alive. The myriad forms the user can take are only limited by the amount of flesh the user has available, whether his own or another’s, and his imagination. The amount of assassination techniques granted by this new heart is as endless as the user’s possible forms. No matter the target, there is a way to reach and kill it.

[YeOfLittleFaith]

This is probably the best servant stat sheet I've seen in a while. No kidding.

Also, he's Ninja Alex Mercer powered by Magic, Worms, and an Ancient Evil.

[Seika]

I like it, but the best? There's very little ... meat to it. After the example of CM3, where skills and Noble Phantasms got much more detailed and interesting explanations, seeing a sheet like this doesn't do it for me. And this actually drops behind lots of the 'original-style' ones because it's got no legend with it. Thematically appropriate for an Assassin, but not doing anything to increase my interest.

[YeOfLittleFaith]

I think less is more applies~

And Assassins are kinda like that in the lore tangent. They're not really supposed to have it.
I just think the concept is magnificent for a combat-focused Assassin.

[qsurf]

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Been away for too long...

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Spirit Name: Samurai “Jack”
Servant Class: Archer, Assassin, Saber

Strength: C
Agility: A
Endurance: A
Magical Energy: E
Luck: D

Class Skills:
Independent Action – A
Presence Concealment – A

Personal Skills:
Jump Good – A (Allows Jack to leap up to absurd heights, as if his Strength and Agility are both A+)
Guardian Knight – A (The reason why he was trained)
Soul of the Martyr – B (When he sets on a course, no matterwhat, he will stay on it)

Noble Phantasms:
His Father's Legacy (A)
As a way to prepare for the return of Aku, Evil given form,his father sent his son out to the world, to train under all masters andteachers who were allied with his nation. The result was an unparalleledwarrior and scholar; one who could pick up an unfamiliar tool and figure outits use within a minute, someone who could easily read and comprehend long lostlanguages as easily as his mother tongue, and more importantly, a warrior whowas never unarmed, who never ran out of options in a battle, and who couldwield weapons as if they were his. This Noble Phantasm represents that absurdskill by granting the Samurai the ability to use every single Personal Skillavailable to Servants at the rank of the Noble Phantasm. This is limited toSkills that can be taught, or otherwise developed through hard work. Skillsthat involve Magic, Divinity, Lineage, or Modifications to the body are allexempt.

His Father's Soul (B++)
Crafted from the unbreakable Will within the Soul of hisfather, his unnamed sword is perhaps one of the best examples of anti-evilweaponry in existence. This facet is enhanced by the fact that the weapon hastruly divine origins, forged from an iron soul, empowered by three deities, andgiven form by ancestor spirits; for the sake of slaying pure evil. The swordhas a number of qualities that helps its wielder achieve its destiny, theprimary quality being that it actually burns evil as the blade cuts into it, alsopreventing the target from regenerating or healing itself, the more evil thetarget, the stronger the blade’s effect. The other quality is that the bladecan never cut an innocent; also, it cannot be turned against its true wielder,as it refuses to cut into them.

When the wielder faces an opponent that they alone cannothope to survive against, they can give a small prayer, asking for assistancefrom the ancestor spirits who forged it, unveiling its true divine power. Withone attack, it slices through everything that has even the tiniest hints ofevil and burns it away, with no mercy or remorse. This attack is not called onlightly however, the ancestor spirits can refuse a request if they judge it tobe frivolous.

[Ars Poetica]

This is probably the best servant stat sheet I've seen in a while. No kidding.

Also, he's Ninja Alex Mercer powered by Magic, Worms, and an Ancient Evil.

You got all that from Ten Years. Most of what you said? My comment. Be original, man. You're better than this.

[chaostrigger]

Gonna try my hand at this, kinda doing this for fun as I had a weird idea for the Fourth War with this guy instead of Gilles de Rais. Probably not great but oh well.

Class: Caster
True Name: Simon Petrikov

Strength: E
Agility: E (C+)
Endurance: C
Mana: A
Luck: A-

Class Skills:
Territory Creation: E-A - Simon Petrikov has the ability to twist an area into a domain that suits and empowers him, but the rank of this ability waxes and wanes depending on state of mental pollution.

Item Construction: C+ - Almost anything can be made out of Ice by Petrikov, but it is impossible for him to create anything out of any other material.

Personal Skills:
Mystic Eyes (Wizard Eyes)- (B) - Petrikov is capable of seeing things outside of the normal range of vision for humans, such as spirits or when someone is possessed.

Mental Pollution - Transformation of the Ice King (E-A) - Petrikov's mental pollution raises when using his noble phantasm, allowing him greater power at the cost of his mind and sanity.

Animal Dialogue (E) - Petrikov is capable of understanding his penguin familiars.

Ninja of the Ice: Art of Fridjitzu (D) - Petrikov has studied and mastered the art of the Ice Ninja, Fridjitzu, which allows him to fight using ice based weaponry. Unfortunately, his lack of strength and agility weakens his skill's effectiveness.

Independent Action (A+) - As his crown keeps him alive in life and fuels his powers, the grail represents this by allowing him to remain indefinitely in the world without a master so long as he possesses his crown. If the crown is removed from his possession or destroyed, this skill becomes inactive.

Librarian of Stored Knowledge- (D-A) - Petrikov, from his years of experience and profession as an antiquarian of ancient artifacts allows him recall facts and make connections easily, as such any item or clue that could signify a servant's identity will reveal their identity to him. As mental pollution increases, what information he learns changes from conscious knowledge to subconscious influence as his mind is too polluted to think coherently anymore.

Noble Phantasm:
Crown of the Ice King (EX) - An ancient Scandinavian crown found by Petrikov, which began his slow transformation into the Ice King. It grants him the ability to conjure ice and control the weather to create snow and cold, on a level comparable to sorcery, whenever he wears it. Unfortunately, the longer and more often he wears it the more his mental facilities degrade as his Mental Pollution rank increases. Eventually, it will lead to great increase in his powers, increasing his Territory Creation rank but degrading his Librarian of Stored Knowledge rank. At higher ranks of Mental Pollution, his hair grows longer and turns white, his skin turns blue, his body temperature drops and his nose and teeth grow long and goblin-like and he gains the ability to fly, greatly increasing his agility. When his Mental Pollution rank reaches A, he no longer recognizes his own identity and has lost most, if not all, coherency and memory of himself or his past though he is no less of a threat. Furthermore, so long as he possesses the crown he needs not fear vanishing from a lack of a Master as the crown sustains his existence, representing the longevity and power the crown grants him as its owner.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

You got all that from Ten Years. Most of what you said? My comment. Be original, man. You're better than this.

The problem is it's kinda hard to find a better description of him than Ninja Alex Mercer powered by Worms, Magic, and Pure Evil. It really is.

[YeOfLittleFaith]

You got all that from Ten Years. Most of what you said? My comment. Be original, man. You're better than this.

Imitation is the most honest form of flattery~

[Rin-chan Kaihou]

Plausible Servant Classes: Saber, Archer, Rider, Caster

True Name: Kusanagi Godou

Strength: B
Agility: B
Endurance: A
Mana: B
Luck: A

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance - Ex: Any form of magic that is net injected directly inside his body (orally or some other manner) will not have any effect.

Independent Action - B

Riding - A: he can ride almost anything but the only Phantasmal and Divine Beasts he can ride are those that are part of his ten avatars.

Territory Creation - B: The Golden Sword

Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation Ex: The Ram avatar allows Godou to revive himself once a day, even after receiving a decidedly fatal wound (he actually goes to the border of life and death)

Charisma B: As one of the seven Campione, Godou has the authority of that of a king.

Divinity Ex: The Campione have the ability to appropriate the Authority of any gods he or she has defeated.

Noble Phantasms:

Authorities of Verethragna [EX]: The ten incarnations of Verethragna. Each of these abilities can only be used once a day.
Gale Incarnation: If someone who knows Godou personally is in danger and calls out his name, he can go the caller's location instantly, even if it is in another plane of existence (No command seal needed to go to his Master's side, basically)
Bull Incarnation: Godou gains and immense bonus to his Strength parameter but only to a maximum of how much strength is needed to counter his current opponent.
White Stallion Incarnation: Godou summons a blazing horse with the power of the Sun to incinerate his enemy. It can only be used on those who have committed great sins agaijnst people.
Camel Incarnation: Greatly enhances Godou's leg strength, self-recovery and defense. Can only be used after suffering a certain level of injury.
Boar Incarnation: Summons a Divine Beast in the form of a massive Boar that tramples everyhting in its path. To use it, Godou must be targetting a large structure or enemy. Godou can use the Boar as a mount.
Adolescent Incarnation: Allows Godou to bestow divine protection upon a being who has pledged eternal loyalty to Godou. This is done by kissing the target.
Bird of Prey Incarnation: Grants Godou god-like speed and lightness. Anything he can carry with his hands become light as well. Extended use causes him pain.
Ram Incarnation: Ressurects Godou from the dead and restores any of his injuries as well. The Ram must be activated before he dies and it will take at least two hours to fully recover.
Goat Incarnation: Grants authority over lightning. To use it, there must be people in the location willing to stand by him and be his strength. If used with the Ame no Murakumo no Tsurugi, it grants Godou the power of magnetism.
Warrior Incarnation: Allows Godou to an area filled with countless Golden Swords that have the power to cut through divine Authorities. It can only be used if he has sufficient knowledge on the target.

Ame no Murakumo no Tsurugi [A]: A sword that originally belonged to Susanoo that wields Authority over wind and storm, It has the power to absorb divine powers directed at itself and its master and turns it against the enemy.

[ItsaRandomUsername]

I really, really need to index all of this like we've done with the Create-a-Servant thread in GD.

Or at least until I3 stopped caring.

[Seika]

Petrikow did the indexing. And this thread's generally lower quality because it attracts more Servants from fiction instead of myth, and the resultant mess tends to fit neither universe's power-level or creation paradigm.

[ItsaRandomUsername]

There was an index? There a link to that anywhere? I do not seem to see it anywhere on the front page, or even a link to the post where the indexing is, which kind of half-asses the purpose of chronicling posts in the first place.

[Seika]

As in Petrikow did the indexing for the GD thread. Not this one.