Fate/Prototype Script

[food]

If you can read Moon Runes, get in touch with Kotonoha and help him edit, lol.

If you make a summary, there would be even less incentive for him to get it done.

[Alto]

That's what I was worried about.
I'm not sure if I can be of much help though, and I don't really want to bother Kotonoha about it unless it's too much for him to do alone...

[TypeWannabe]

Yes, he truly needs all the help he can get. That man, sometimes, I swear.

[Alto]

Okay then I shall try to get in touch with him and do my best to assist with the work load!

[I3uster]

You should all feel bad for this.

[Mcjon01]

Why? I don't think we're asking him for more than he can handle or anything.

[Alto]

You should all feel bad for this.

I'm sorry, I didn't know that there was that much to edit...I sincerely apologize for suggesting the idea.

[Mcjon01]

You know, this might be a bad time to mention that the unedited script has been in my inbox too, for months, and I haven't given it so much as a cursory reading.

[Kotonoha]

Didn't I already do the first part out of three? Lianru, if you edited all the "this king"s out of that one by now, post it so these guys stop bitching for a while.

P.S. I don't want any help. But I have an exam tomorrow so I could work on it after that maybe.

[Apple]

Koto? Him?

Am I missing something?

[Seika]

Koto? Him?

Am I missing something?

food refuses to accept that Koto's a woman until he gets timestamped pictures of her boobs. (Perv. ) Everyone else is just playing along.

[Lianru]

Didn't I already do the first part out of three? Lianru, if you edited all the "this king"s out of that one by now, post it so these guys stop bitching for a while.

P.S. I don't want any help. But I have an exam tomorrow so I could work on it after that maybe.

Fine, fine. Gimme a sec.

[Lianru]

Scene 0

The dead cannot return.
That which hath passed is forever lost.
No matter how great a miracle,
It may only affect those who still exist.

The dying world shall be saved once again.
Heavenly Jerusalem shall appear once more.
The Kingdom shall judge all.
And from the hither shore of the roaring waves, seven heads and ten crowns shall emerge.
O’ you which hath sunken deep into sin.
Thy name is the Enemy.
Thy pursuits are of gluttony.
Thy praises shall morph into blasphemy and sweep across the land.

The miracle that nourishes this land shall be the foundation.
Henceforth I invoke the law of reversed logic, and show all the lost love of our Lord.

◆

Scene 0/Heaven’s Fall (Part 1)
The scene took place downtown-inside the subway tunnel.
(* The OP used an edited scene. In the story, it was equivalent to the last stage.)

The downtown subway at midnight. A platform without a single person present. Saber and Archer were separated into the top and bottom platforms, both dressed in ordinary clothing. The subway tunnel that was devoid of signs of people seems just like a shrine.
In order to heal Ayaka, Saber had already searched for Berserker’s Master for an entire day. His expression was both exhausted and anxious.
And now, Saber perceived another Servant’s presence. He moved towards the underground platform, knowing the opponent was challenging him. And waiting for him with an arrogant, proud expression was the powerful enemy that he ha

Archer:
“Long time no see, holy knight. It’s already been seven days since we last met, hasn’t it?”
“What’s wrong, you seem quite downcast. Smile a bit. Since you’ve already met me, smile brilliantly for me. The goddess of victory will only smile upon those who enjoy even the worst situations, right?
That’s right - even if one’s own Master has only a day of life remaining, one should smile at being my opponent. If not, they deserve to be trampled on.”

Archer was calm. Saber had been silently facing him.

Archer:
“How dull. I even thought that you were a warm, genial person. Isn’t that such a waste of your handsome face, Saber?”

Saber:
Saber: “…If I’m a waste, then so are you.
You shouldn't blather on so. One can only be so undignified.”

In response to Saber’s sarcastic remark, Archer let out a joyful smile.
Archer:
“Don’t say that. I have always thought that blathering and squandering money on pointless things is a bad habit. But perhaps you should not make light of these bad habits?”

Archer drew out a mysterious glass bottle.

Archer:
“There are many such pointless things in my treasury. While I don't know what the poisons hurting Ayaka actually are, I also have this medicine that can cure any poison in the world.”

A dark light surged from Saber’s pupils.

Archer directed a crafty smile to Saber, who was staring at him.

Archer:
“My Master is really a boring man. He said to just let Saber perish on his own. To let the Master die from the poison, but…
“How hopeless. He’s the type of person who is careful to the end, a coward, and will helplessly miss a good show. Victory is so important. However, sometimes a disgustingly formidable opponent is more precious than gold. To want to kill the other person from the bottom of one’s heart, you can only experience that once in your life. Don’t you think so, Saber?”

The two sank into silence.

Saber:
“- so?”

Archer:
“Come and get it if you want it.”

Archer arrogantly provoked him. The atmosphere was tense.
A subway car passes. After it had passed, the two have armed themselves.
Archer tossed the glass bottle to Saber.
The glass bottle danced in the air in between the platforms, above the tracks.
Saber ran quickly to grab the bottle, and Archer wore a fierce smile, like he was waiting for an opportunity to jump and behead Saber.

The two figures crossed. The battle had begun.


Scene 01 / The night before Fate. Early Morning ~ Ayaka

Ayaka (Monologue, shortened to M henceforth)
“My countdown to death has finally reached zero.”

The protagonist, Ayaka, woke up to the morning light in her bedroom .
Lazily, Ayaka opened her eyes, put on her glasses, and got up with a resigned expression on her face. The camera shifted to the calendar hanging on the wall. Every single day was marked, and an ominous and lethal ‘cross’ was placed over today’s date.
Ayaka walked towards the dining table and had her breakfast alone. Three chairs were placed around the table, the two empty ones for her father and elder sister.

Ayaka (M):
“An ordinary day starts again.
Today, the city is still at peace, and my life is calm.
This is an ‘ordinary day’ that I had already taken for granted. This is an ordinary life that I could not have imagined while Father had lived. If someone were to ask whether I am happy or not, living this life, then I would definitely say that I am very happy.”

As she continued this monologue, she finished her breakfast, left her house, and headed for the garden.
The garden was full of catalysts for her Witch Craft. Herbs and magecraft plants were nourished here, together with a large number of pigeons used for sacrifices and crows to be used as familiars.
Emotionlessly, Ayaka proceeded with the magecraft ritual in front of an aged podium.
Ayaka did not have any goals or dreams herself. The ritual that Ayaka had continued when her father still lived - because she was unable to refuse him - had already become a habit.
Ayaka easily took out a pigeon that was bred in the garden. The pigeon looked at Ayaka with its round eyes while cooing at her.
Taking in a breath, Ayaka lifted the knife. The fluttering of birds’ wings could be heard.
The camera darkens. Fresh blood.


Scene 02 / Before the grave.

A school scene. Ayaka, who was going to school alone, looked depressed.


Ayaka (M):
“Though it is my own assessment, I still feel my personality to be the worst.
I’m pessimistic, a coward, narrow-minded, and likes to have empty boasts.
More importantly - “

A close up to Ayaka’s left ring finger revealed bandages.
The scene returned to the garden 20 minutes ago. The uplifted knife. The pigeon tilting its head. And how the swung knife just happened to land next to the pigeon.
Due to her past trauma, Ayaka cannot kill living things.
(She could thus only use basic ingredients when cooking).
Therefore, more and more pigeons accumulated in the Sajou house.

Ayaka (M):
“I’m ordinary, so mundane that it cannot be salvaged.
I failed to obey Father’s words even this morning, and couldn’t help but use my own blood instead for the ritual.
After all, I never liked magecraft anyways.”

The scene shifted to after school.
Ayaka’s few friends were conversing with Ayaka.
Ayaka:
“Sorry. I’ve got something to take care of today.”
Friend (Rider):
“Huh? Sajou-san, I don’t remember you being in any extracurriculum groups.”
Ayaka:
“I’m going to the graveyard. It’s the anniversary of my father and elder sister’s passing.”

Ayaka took the train to the next town and walked to the foreigner’s graveyard next to the church.
Ayaka stood before her father’s grave. Anger... was hidden behind her ice cold expression as she laid a wreath upon her father’s grave.
Turning around, she made to leave, only to discover an unfamiliar foreigner standing there.
He was Sancraid Phahn.

Sancraid: “Hello, Sajou-san.”
The foreigner called out Ayaka’s name straight away.
Ayaka: “May I ask who you are? I don’t know any foreigners.”
Sancraid: “I don’t know anyone Japanese either. However, I hope we can get on well from now on. I really really hope that. I wish we can get along as seamlessly as two pieces of cloth sewn together.
Because your family are the only magi who had touched ‘that’.”
Ayaka paled.
Sancraid: “What happened to your father was truly a pity. He was so close to the truth. In the last war, your family kept winning until the end - “
Ayaka: “Go away.”
Even though she was overwhelmed by the priest’s presence, she still glared at him.
Sancraid only smiled.
Sancraid: “Why aren't you making preparations? It was eight years ago to this day. It can finally start again. Everyone else is already summoning them.”
Ayaka: “Leave me alone. That has nothing to do with me.”
Sancraid: “That is sad. Because, as long as you are alive, everything has something to do with you. If you want to cut that connection, the only thing to do is die.”
Ayaka moved back. Sancraid only looked on with a smile.
Ayaka: “Don’t come near me. I don’t want anything to do with the Holy Grail.”
Ayaka had left.
The priest muttered his advice as he looked at her retreating figure.
Sancraid: “Tonight is the time. Please make your preparations before then.
Everyone would seek you out after midnight. None will leave you alone; no one will leave the daughter of the Sajou family, who had in truth won the last war, alone. That’s because – ”
Ayaka fled, almost running away.
The ends of the priest’s mouth curved slightly upward in the lifeless graveyard.
Sancraid: “ - Because the toughest opponent should be eliminated as soon as possible, right?”

[Kotonoha]

>"this king" still not removed

LIANRU ;________________;

[Lianru]

SHUSH, I MISSED TWO OF THEM

BLAME THE CHINESE PEOPLE THAT REPLACE 俺 WITH 本王 OR WHATEVER THEY DO

[Seika]

Interesting - I'd kind of got the impression from the trailer that Sancraid and Ayako had already known each other, a bit like Kotomine and Rin. But in fact he just randomly turns up to troll her? Priests, hm?

[Lianru]

All priests are trolls, apparently.

[TypeWannabe]

Ayaka sounds like a bitch. Saber Archer have that bromance/shoenen rivalry thing going on.

BTW, if Shirou was Saber's sheath even though he had a penis, does that mean Ayaka is Saber's sword even though she presumably has a vag00?

[food]

Ayaka sounds like a bitch. Saber Archer have that bromance/shoenen rivalry thing going on.

BTW, if Shirou was Saber's sheath even though he had a penis, does that mean Ayaka is Saber's sword even though she presumably has a vag00?

She is also supposed to be the sheath. She has the relic that summoned Sabre, which I am 85.375% sure is Avalon.

I guess Nasu just kept that for Altria, because it would be retarded if Sabre turned up with a sheath and no sword.

Interesting - I'd kind of got the impression from the trailer that Sancraid and Ayako had already known each other, a bit like Kotomine and Rin. But in fact he just randomly turns up to troll her? Priests, hm?

He was on a mission from the Church to fight in the War.

Kotomine was still somewhere in there, they just did not bother exploit explore him in this snap shot of Proto Fate.

[TypeWannabe]

Aha! But Saber's sword is already sheathed in a metaphorical way by the knights! So obviously Ayaka nmust be the exact opposite, a sword breaker!