Valentines day collaboration work [R18]

[Tusia]

With Arashi_Leonhart help I've created something... bad

Enjoy~



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I'm too tired to write more about it right now ~ so excuse me<3

[Kratosirving]

Holy crap, that was fairly good. I loved the choice there at the end.

Writing from Arashi was great, and Tusia did a good job with the art. I do have one critique for you though, Tusia. I know that Alter is supposed to be pale and everything...but she seemed a bit too pale or something. Seemed at times that she was more porcelain-white than was necessary.

Maybe I'm the odd one here, but her skin tone seemed to just stick in my mind more than anything else from the art.

[Five_X]

I quite liked it! That was a nice little Valentine's Day project you and Arashi did here, and the art really was good, as was the writing.

[lantzblades]

is this just an alter thing? if so i'll pass

[Mike1984]

Yes, it is....

[Lycodrake]

Wonderful job, Tus.
Hope you at least enjoyed *some* of working on it.
Also, those Alter expressions.~ ^^

[Malgos]

I didn't really know what to say, so I spent the last... 30 minutes thinking about it and another 30 trying to word this.

Music

I liked the choice of music and found them to be quite nice, the one for the bad end made me smile.

Art

I really liked the one where they cuddled at the end and the title screen, too. Also I think you did a good job with the backgrounds as well tusia.

Story/Lemon

To be honest I was kind of expecting a sweet story like the Christmas one, because it's made for Valentine's Day. That doesn't mean I didn't expect the lemon, since tusia made it obvious that there was going to be one. I just kind of expected a date and chocolates, too. I'm not really all that interested in lemons, but I think you did a nice job Arashi and sorry that I can't say much about this.

Thanks for this nice little Valentine's Day present and I wish both of you, as well as everyone else, a happy Valentine's Day. I really appreciate the effort both of you put into this. I'm pretty amazed that you did that with just the two of you, so thanks again for taking your time and making this.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

Doing a whole bit like a date with CGs and/or sprites would've probably taken more time than Tusia allotted herself.

This was just something where she's like, "Write porn, I'll draw stuff!"

[Malgos]

Doing a whole bit like a date with CGs and/or sprites would've probably taken more time than Tusia allotted herself.

Yeah, I kind of figured that it was due to lack of time, I just thought I'd state my expectations when first hearing of this being a Valentine's Day project and going into it like that.

Again I really appreciate the effort you two put into this. I imagine it wasn't that easy going all that stuff, especially making the game/program itself.

[Neir]

I FINALLY CAN DOWNLOAD THIS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[lethum]

Downloaded like a boss.

Then played to the first choice, saved and went to sleep.

Because some things must be savored while wide awake.

[Five_X]

...

Lethum, there's really, really not much past the "first" choice. Just an ending. :P

[Arashi_Leonhart]

Indeed. The choices bit was kind of just tagging on an ending.

Tusia: End this with something.
Me: Okay.
*ten minutes later*
Tusia: Crap, still requires more art at the end.

[Five_X]

Poor Tusia, working so hard! ;_;

But the end result is most definitely worth it!

[Tusia]

Maybe I'm the odd one here, but her skin tone seemed to just stick in my mind more than anything else from the art.

Yeah I always find it odd coloring her skin almost gray
but I was using colors I have saved from cg's/oficial arts ^^'

[Alulim]

Interesting.

[Constanze]

This was great. Nice writing for the smut, great artwork, definitely a fun little game. And of the best character(variant), as well. (And makes me think all the more of my own Ren'py aspirations.. Hopefully I'll get to the point of being able to finish something like this sometime.)I actually knew of Tusia's artwork beforehand because people like it enough to link outside of BL, so I definitely should reiterate that you should keep up the good work, and maybe think of doing this kind of project more often.

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Finally got around to reading this one. Now, it's time for a review~!


The story's presentation is of consistently above-average quality and flows well enough and is easily digestible, especially in VN format. As is expected of Arashi's writing.

I didn't go into this expecting original BGMs. That's just as well, since the music choices were selected well.

Tusia's art had a few of wonky moments of slightly-awkward proportioning and positioning in terms of scale in a couple notable Game Graphics. That being said, it is still consistently easy on the eyes and is of notable quality that stands strong enough with with other doujin games.


8.3/10

[Tusia]

Finally got around to reading this one. Now, it's time for a review~!


The story's presentation is of consistently above-average quality and flows well enough and is easily digestible, especially in VN format. As is expected of Arashi's writing.

I didn't go into this expecting original BGMs. That's just as well, since the music choices were selected well.

Tusia's art had a few of wonky moments of slightly-awkward proportioning and positioning in terms of scale in a couple notable Game Graphics. That being said, it is still consistently easy on the eyes and is of notable quality that stands strong enough with with other doujin games.


8.3/10

Thanks a lot <3
I know that I need to improve with my drawings, and now I'm more motivated to do it more seriously xD

[DreamsRequiem]

Arashi and Tusia should make their own VN and start their own company. Nasu/Takeuchi did it, why couldn't they?























































lol just kidding the company would be bankrupt by the end of the week after it was formed.