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    Quote Originally Posted by Agailius View Post
    Oh, yes, there will be glorious, righteous retribution when Ken and Shirou (Oh, gosh, you can combine the two names together!) find out. Zouken will die a horrible death, and Sakura will be swept off her feet.
    Yeah, definitely.

    Although, it doesn't take much for Sakura to be "swept off her feet" by Shirou....

    I think, however, I'm gonna have to not follow one particular route. Can't do Fate for the blindingly obvious reason that the main love interest is replaced by--well--Kenshirou. UBW might've worked, but it'd require Illya's death in order to complete, which I'm against as it'd negate one of the future awesome scenes I'm thinking up. As for HF... naw. Dark Sakura would, well, to be frank, too broken.

    For this reason, I think I'm gonna make my own route. As heretical and insane as it sounds.
    Well, you've already moved away from all three routes simply by changing the servant summoned. Saber is important to Fate and UBW, and there's no way Ken would allow a HF-like story to proceed as HF did. He'd deal with Zouken and save Sakura way before it got to the point of her turning Dark.

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    ...Anyone wanna opt to be a beta?

    ......

    *cricket chirp*

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    Quote Originally Posted by Agailius View Post
    ...Anyone wanna opt to be a beta?

    ......

    *cricket chirp*

    Ask Sylent or anyone really. Anyone knows how to beta on here.

    Just seems to be very... Slow today...
    That and I'm busy writing myself.
    There's nothing fucking here bruh, look elsewhere.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Ask Sylent or anyone really. Anyone knows how to beta on here.

    Just seems to be very... Slow today...
    That and I'm busy writing myself.
    Why, thank you, Troll-san! I'll be sure to chuck a couple of goats beneath your bridge for that bit of info.
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    When Agailius thinks your idea is really really stupid, you know you've screwed up.

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    I laughed a bit out loud because of that reference.

    Good show!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    I laughed a bit out loud because of that reference.

    Good show!
    Thank you! ...Wanna be the beta for my next chapter?

    Can't blame a man fer trying.
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    Honestly? I'll only be good for grammar and spelling, but not much else, so give me one chance to try this and see if I can fix up my beta-ing act.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Honestly? I'll only be good for grammar and spelling, but not much else, so give me one chance to try this and see if I can fix up my beta-ing act.
    *evil chuckle*Very well... Hehehehehe-neheheheh-Mwahahaha!!
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    Dude, it didn't have the effect you wanted, sorry.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Dude, it didn't have the effect you wanted, sorry.
    *FAIL*Man, I suck at this.

    *clears throat*That aside, you want me to just send it to you via private message?
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    Uh-huh...

    Mainly I'm a literal person (meaning I take things literally), so it'll be hard for context to work for me, ever.

    Anyway, are you going to send me a copy of the next chapter, or how do you want me to get it fixed?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Uh-huh...

    Mainly I'm a literal person (meaning I take things literally), so it'll be hard for context to work for me, ever.

    Anyway, are you going to send me a copy of the next chapter, or how do you want me to get it fixed?
    I'll send you a copy once I'm done--be warned, I've been told to be quite capable of finishing these things quite fast.
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    Ah, okay, that makes sense.

    In the meantime, I'll see about the first chapter to get fixed up, hopefully.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Agailius View Post
    I'll send you a copy once I'm done--be warned, I've been told to be quite capable of finishing these things quite fast.
    I'm the one who said that!

    seriously, remember to make proper spacing this time. the first time, I almost ran away screaming when i saw the WORDSWORDSWORDS. I stayed for kenshiro, and it was awesome.
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    I also actually like taiga too

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Ah, okay, that makes sense.

    In the meantime, I'll see about the first chapter to get fixed up, hopefully.
    Eh? You're checking the first chapter...??? Does that mean you're going back to the Prologue and checking for errors, or are you just waiting to check the one I send you?

    If you haven't noticed by now, I can become hopelessly confused, sometimes.

    Quote Originally Posted by NamesAreHardToComeUpWith View Post
    Seriously, remember to make proper spacing this time. the first time, I almost ran away screaming when i saw the WORDSWORDSWORDS. I stayed for kenshiro, and it was awesome.
    And, because of that, you taught me a valuable lesson. I thank you for that, Nahtcuw.

    Say, do you mind if I call you Nachos? Sounds similar, and easier to remember. XD
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    Because I feel bored and need to prime my critiquing skills, I'll beta the first chapter and the upcoming one after that, okay?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Agailius View Post
    And, because of that, you taught me a valuable lesson. I thank you for that, Nahtcuw.

    Say, do you mind if I call you Nachos? Sounds similar, and easier to remember. XD
    And thus, my second nickname, Nachos, came into existance.

    I prefer it to my first nickname, NT, because the first nickname made me feel like a rapper.
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    I also actually like taiga too

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Because I feel bored and need to prime my critiquing skills, I'll beta the first chapter and the upcoming one after that, okay?
    Thank you for your cooperation!
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    You are most welcome.
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    Quote Originally Posted by NamesAreHardToComeUpWith View Post
    And thus, my second nickname, Nachos, came into existance.

    I prefer it to my first nickname, NT, because the first nickname made me feel like a rapper.
    Your second nickname should be NT Redux.

    NTR for short.


    *crickets chirp*


    ... ok, that was terrible, even for me.

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