Okay, so a lot of people think my lemon was bad. And, yes, it was BAD. And somewhat stupid, considering that the Shirou/Sakura relationship I had in mind (emotional bond of romance between childhood friends) would be totally derailed by it.
However, after a bit of thinking... I realized there was another reason I had to get rid of it. What is that reason? Well...
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Shirou pushed Sakura down on the futon, his powerful arms easily overpowering the girl's supple figure. Her violet hair fanned out across the bedsheets, she gave no resistance as the boy she loved situated himself on top of her, his golden eyes staring into her amethyst ones as they shared a longing look between them, their breath hot on their already flustered faces.
"Senpai, please..." She whimpered, "I can't... bear it any longer..."
"Sakura..." Shirou uttered, gulping. "Are you sure...?"
"Yes, I am," She replied, biting her lower lip in anticipation as she wrapped her arms behind his neck. "You're the only one I want..."
Closing his eyes momentarily, he reached up to cup her cheek into his hand. "You've endured for so long. I suppose... I should reward you for your loyalty."
Without another word, he began to slowly close the gap between them, taking her face in either of her hands. The two lovers closed their eyes, preparing to tear down the barriers between their affection and embrace their bonds as lovers with a deep, passionate kiss--
When the sliding door violently ripped open, catching both of them by surprise and almost literally with their pants down as they both shot their gazes at the interloper.
That was the very moment when the Latin chanting began playing in the background.
Because, standing at the door, was a man draped in black and red, his gait ominous and menacing. His bone-white hair and gaunt figure made him look almost like a walking corpse, but his marred face simply made him nightmarish when beset with that look of absolute blood-lust and raw hatred he had...
"Who the heck--?!" Shirou uttered.
"Kariya-oji-san?!?" Sakura almost yelped in utter shock and confusion.
The man let out a seething growl as his fingers dug into the door, his shoulders shuddering in outrage. "I misjudged you... SHOURISHA SHIROU!!!!" His already scary face became outright terrifying as his red eyes bore into the hapless boy's very soul, and out of nowhere, a swarm of the most foul, ugly, and monstrous-looking black-and-red bugs one could possibly imagine swarmed out of Kariya's sleeves--all of which were homing in on Shirou.
"Wait, Uncle Kariya, stop!" Sakura shrieked as Shirou shot around the room to evade the bugs all trying to evidently devour him. "Senpai and I--"
"Say no more, Sakura-chan!" Kariya said in his totally angry tone. "That boy was just using you to satisfy his own urges, just like all the rest of them! But don't you worry--Uncle Kariya will protect you!!"
"CrapcrapcrapcrapCRAP!!!" Shirou yelped as he jumped to dodged a beetle from biting him in the rear. "Saber, where are you?!"
Unfortunately, Saber and Rider were both too busy doing... something. And, no, Lancelot was totally not peeping on them. And most definitely didn't wish he could get in on the action. The huffing and growling he muffled out was clearly his insatiable hatred for his king, nothing more.
Finally, Shirou was backed into a corner, looking up helplessly at the absolutely terrifying figure of Matou Kariya looking over him. "I'm really sorry, Mister Kariya!" Shirou apologized profusely in the Japanese fashion of bowing down. "I didn't mean to despoil Sakura! I swear!"
"Stop making excuses and face the consequences of your actions like a man!!" Kariya barked back, kicing Shirou up against the corner of the room, then pulling out a very evil-looking insect whose description I choose to not entertain you with out from the depths of his shroud.
Sakura gasped at the sight of the previously-mentioned bug. "Is that...?! No, please, Uncle Kariya, anything but that!! How are Senpai and I supposed to have--?!"
"NOT ANOTHER WOOOORD!!!" Kariya screamed as he brought the bug down on a screaming Shorisha Shirou.
Right up between his legs.
*CHOMP*
BAD END
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This is the real deal! Tiger Dojo!
"Hello!" Fujimura Taiga said cheerfully as she waved to the viewer. "I'm Fujimura Taiga, instructor of the Tiger Dojo! Here, we cast out a lifeline to protagonists who die easily and train them to not be totally moronic!"
Beside her Ilya chirped, "And I'm Ilya, keeping Taiga and Waver here company, even if I don't have to."
Like a strike of lightening, Taiga's shinai smashed into Ilya's head. "Senior student! How many times must I tell you your name is senior student in this dojo!"
"Ouch... that Tora-Shinai is truly fearsome..." Ilya winced. "No wonder junior disciple always gets blown away whenever you hit him with that thing, Taiga!"
"Uuuugh..." Came a groaning voice from the corner.
"Speaking of which," Ilya blinked at Waver Velvet, who was clutching at his nether regions in apparent agony. "What happened? Did Taiga finally go for massive damage?!"
"Incorrect, senior disciple," Taiga said gravely. "That last Bad End forced Waver to reevaluate that which he himself possesses. When you're reminded of how easily you can lose something you take for granted, it can be a mortifying experience."
Waver shuddered, "As a man, I'm morally obligated to sympathize with Shirou here. When one sees his fellow male being robber of his junk, the pain of simply watching is almost as excruciating as the act itself being preformed on you."
"But, hold on a second..." Ilya wondered as she looked up to the ceiling. "Is it really a Bad End? I mean, Shirou could survive something like that, so even if it's excruciatingly painful, can't they just continue on the plot? I mean, Onii-chan lost an arm protecting me, and look how that turned out!"
"OF COURSE IT'S A BAD END, LITTLE GIRL!!" Came a booming voice, as the doors to the dojo slammed open, the enormous form of Shourisha Raida (Iskandar) entered the room, tears of outrage and despair on his face. "My son has been reduced to a eunech! My dynasty has been literally ripped away before it could make fruit! And right when it was so damn close!!" Iskandar immediately fell to the floor, beating the floor with his huge fists. "How shall I ever have the privilege of seeing my grandchildren rule the world if my son does not possess the ability to have them?!"
"Only too late does Shirou realize the dangers of premarital consummation of a romantic relationship," Waver mused, seeming to have recomposed himself enough to stand upright. "You see, kids? If you don't wait until after you're hitched, you're girlfriend's psychotically protective uncle will come up to you with a nasty bug... thing... and chop them right off."
"Truer words could not be said, junior disciple," Taiga nodded in approval. "Now kindly remove your bawling friend from my dojo."
"Right, right," Waver grumbled, helping Raida up. "C'mon, your Highness, it's just a bad end. We both already know Shirou's more responsible than that."
The burly man sniffled as they went for the door. "R-really, Waver...? Shirou isn't some hormone-enraged boy who would incur the wrath of an insane, borderline-omnicidal ghost?"
"Of course not. You traumatized him so much by taking him to the red light district as a child that it's only possible for him to have a meaningful romantic relationship by ignoring anything even remotely naughty and focus almost entirely on an emotional connection."
"But how are they going to make babies without--?!"
"Patience, your Grace, patience." It was at this point Waver and Raida left the dojo.
"Right, now that that's out of the way, let's review!" Taiga continued. "Senior disciple, why is this a Bad End?"
"Osu!" Ilya answered enthusiastically, "Because that scary Kariya-san would never allow anyone who touches his pure, innocent Sakura in an unworthy manner to escape with his life and/or dignity now that he's up and about! Also, onii-chan in this universe is a chaste, understanding boy who doesn't care about doing the nasty to begin with! This Bad End is the result of poor foresight and trying to act out of character! Oh, and bad writing, too, but that's out of context!"
"Magnificently done, senior disciple!" Taiga said proudly, "You learn very quickly! Now, as for how to avoid this Bad End and others like it, the solution is quite simple. First, always be considerate of Sakura-chan's well-being and happiness, and you will appease the mighty Dark Kariya and be spared his wrath! Secondly, when being considerate of her, think with your brain before your hormones! Now, go out there and show the world the power of sexual maturity!"
"Fight on, onii-chan!" Ilya said as she jumped in the air with gusto. "It's not going to get any easier from here, so keep soldiering on until the next Bad End!"