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    And then Hymn was a Lovecraft protagonist.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    And then Hymn was a Lovecraft protagonist.
    And Seika was the tentacle-monster?
    (She's admitted to having tentacles, and hasn't denied being a cecaelia.)
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    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    This makes far too much sense. I'mma start screaming now.

    AIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
    I refuse to believe that any eroge scene with Taiga would not make allusions to her Christmas Cake status, and this being Nasu, include references to making a cake. Stirring the batter, whisking the eggs, swirl the mixture around....
    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
    ....

    IS THIS REVENGE, HYMN? REVENGE FOR ALL THE ABUSE I PUT YOU THROUGH?
    That's all, folks!

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    Damn you Hymn.
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    Bless you Hymn.

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    *victory; collects what shreds of Hymn's sanity remain*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    *victory; collects what shreds of Hymn's sanity remain*
    Those are for Seika, don't you know?
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    She got the rest of it. I'm picking up the crumbs.

    Also she still has his body.

    Edit: Through which to concieve her THOUSAND YOUNG.

    This is Seika. She is a very lovely lady:
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
    .....Damn yo-

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hmyn of Ragnarok
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    She got the rest of it. I'm picking up the crumbs.

    Also she still has his body.
    Hm, true, very, very true.
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Edit: Through which to concieve her THOUSAND YOUNG.

    This is Seika. She is a very lovely lady:
    *blush*

    C-cu-cute...

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    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
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    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
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    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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    *wiggles tentacles* Thumbs up to Aiden for the 'fic!
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    And another random one:

    ==================

    Her blade did not simply miss that miniscule target.

    Kuzuki Souichirou had caught the invisible sword.

    Bare handed. Without a mech.

    It made no sense.

    How how how-

    An unseen motion, and he was in her metallic face, which was the new target of an unrelenting barrage of violence that should mean nothing to fighters of their comparative size and scale-!

    ------------------------

    Caster could only fixate her sensors on her pilot in awe, amazement... and a little bit of arousal, such as that was when you were trapped in a giant skyscraper-sized robotic frame.

    Yes, her magic was empowering him substantially, allowing him to fight at a level no mere human could withstand.

    That did not explain this unspeakable ... what was the word... curbstomp he was unleashing against a Servant many times his size.

    Yes.

    Yes.

    This was the brilliant, amazing, loyal man she was fighting for.

    The one she would become human again for.

    This is what the Grail Driver would give her-

    =============================

    And I don't have much time at the moment to focus on expanding this into another oneshot. This is probably even rougher than the first.

    Still, I couldn't get the image of Kuzuki curbstomping mecha on foot out of my brain until I did this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
    .....Damn yo-

    NO. NO I WILL NOT SAY IT.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hmyn of Ragnarok
    Damn you


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    Interesting.
    Everything I say is a lie.
    LIKE A KING


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    "It's not gay, it's magecraft!"

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    My flow of genius is weaker now that I am back on the meds. Clearly.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
    .....Damn yo-

    NO. NO I WILL NOT SAY IT.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hmyn of Ragnarok
    Damn you


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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    My flow of genius is weaker now that I am back on the meds. Clearly.
    Then you need to go cold turkey and watch Megas XLR and GaoGaiGar to produce more awesome.

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    I always approve.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    And another random one:

    ==================

    Her blade did not simply miss that miniscule target.

    Kuzuki Souichirou had caught the invisible sword.

    Bare handed. Without a mech.

    It made no sense.

    How how how-

    An unseen motion, and he was in her metallic face, which was the new target of an unrelenting barrage of violence that should mean nothing to fighters of their comparative size and scale-!

    ------------------------

    Caster could only fixate her sensors on her pilot in awe, amazement... and a little bit of arousal, such as that was when you were trapped in a giant skyscraper-sized robotic frame.

    Yes, her magic was empowering him substantially, allowing him to fight at a level no mere human could withstand.

    That did not explain this unspeakable ... what was the word... curbstomp he was unleashing against a Servant many times his size.

    Yes.

    Yes.

    This was the brilliant, amazing, loyal man she was fighting for.

    The one she would become human again for.

    This is what the Grail Driver would give her-

    =============================

    And I don't have much time at the moment to focus on expanding this into another oneshot. This is probably even rougher than the first.

    Still, I couldn't get the image of Kuzuki curbstomping mecha on foot out of my brain until I did this.
    This reminds me of the fight between the Baron Ashura and Mazinger Z in Shin Mazinger Z. Good work!

    Quote Originally Posted by Chojomeka View Post
    Then you need to go cold turkey and watch Megas XLR and GaoGaiGar to produce more awesome.
    Add some Shin Mazinger. You can't go wrong when adding some Go Nagai.

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    Quote Originally Posted by shiningphoenix View Post
    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
    Quote Originally Posted by Vigilantia View Post
    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
    Quote Originally Posted by Sage of Eyes View Post
    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
    Quote Originally Posted by Christemo View Post
    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I always approve.
    Lies!

    ...but I still like you, so don't worry. ^.^

    *hug*

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    Oooooh, nice! Mecha isn't my preferred genre, but this is a very solid piece. The characterization is strong and the prose is high-quality throughout. You have my stamp of approval, for what that's worth. ^_^

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    I am now getting flashbacks to Master Asia. You deserve props for that.

    @Hymn/Seika:

    So.......it's Saya no Uta all over again? Since that technically is Lovecraft fanfiction.
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    @Moczo: Whoo! Vindication!

    @IRUn: I created this scenario with my mind. So yes, it's Saya no Uta.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
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    NO. NO I WILL NOT SAY IT.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hmyn of Ragnarok
    Damn you


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    Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Seika R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
    I refuse to believe that any eroge scene with Taiga would not make allusions to her Christmas Cake status, and this being Nasu, include references to making a cake. Stirring the batter, whisking the eggs, swirl the mixture around....
    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
    ....

    IS THIS REVENGE, HYMN? REVENGE FOR ALL THE ABUSE I PUT YOU THROUGH?
    That's all, folks!

    Quote Originally Posted by Guy, Vlad_the_II (3 times), Radiantbeam (5 times), YeOfLittleFaith, Ars Poetica, The Curious Fan, Raven2785, zhead
    Damn you Hymn.
    Quote Originally Posted by Spinach, KAIZA (2 times), Old_Iron, YeOfLittleFaith (2 times), Trevelyan, ianmuff, ZidanReign, Sage of Eyes, legoguydude, KooriRenchuu, Break, Keyne
    Bless you Hymn.

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