Shared Resonance of Possession Experience

[lethum]

I enjoyed this aplenty, Arashi. Good job.

[Aiden]

Innnteresting.

Well, Luvia really screwed up there.

[Lycodrake]

Very nice update, Arashi; nice to see where some things went wrong.
Wasn't entirely expected Luvia to be involved in it...but either way. ^^

[Gabriulio]

Really interesting. The whole flashback and the Rin/Luvia fights made me laugh.

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Really interesting. The whole flashback and the Rin/Luvia fights made me laugh.

[Liquid Alter]

^

[warellis]

Good update. Considering the subject of what she was asking about, couldn't she have kept it secret and not ask around about it?

[Mattias]

This story always manages to put a smile on my face.

[Santo]

Man, Luvia screwed up big time.

Must be another trait she shares with Rin eh?

[Gabriulio]

True, but Rin tends to screw up things related to herself, not related to others.

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Aww shit Luvia you dun fucked up somethin' fierce.

But hey, without that the story wouldn't even be having its vampire-antics, so in that light good on her for furthering the plot in one of the worse ways possible for our male protagonist.

[Santo]

True, but Rin tends to screw up things related to herself, not related to others.

Oh but Luvia did.

Her plan to use that information to steal Shirou from Rin has completely backfired on her. :3

Either that or she is better at screwing up than Rin is xD

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Luvia's always gotta one up Rin, doesn't she?

[Lycodrake]

Luvia's always gotta one up Rin, doesn't she?

Pretty much.

[Neir]

I REALLY liked this, Arashi. Sion's thought process was evoking, luvia's panic seemed very genuine, and Shirou seemed appropriately avoidant of (non-combat) conflict.

There was a point where you used 'though' in two consecutive sentences of dialogue, but I'm on my phone so it's a huge pain to try to quote.

Fantastic work. Thanks for writing this.

[Sage of Eyes]

Surprising how so many fanfics end up here, at least I won't have to worry about it being gone forever.

[VelspertheCat]

I feel bad for Rin. Also, I wonder how much hate this generated for Luvia from Rin.

[Sage of Eyes]

Rin hating me = me taking the easy way out.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

There was a point where you used 'though' in two consecutive sentences of dialogue, but I'm on my phone so it's a huge pain to try to quote.

Ah, the problem with me being lazy and never double-checking stuff. Or using a beta.

I feel bad for Rin. Also, I wonder how much hate this generated for Luvia from Rin.

Actually, I kind of imagine it might make them get along a slight bit better, since they can share in both being worried for him. And make them reconsider how far they're willing to go to rip each other a new one if others'll get caught in the crossfire.

[mangafreak7793]

That will probably be the case at least after she beats or scolds the living hell out of her for doing something so stupid.

[themasterwarlord]

IMO, they would become closer because of the situation but Rin will carry a grudge for Luvia for a while. After all, accidental or not if Luvia didn't sniff around at least the secret could've been kept a little while longer.