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    This story is absolutely adorable!

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    I also found this very interesting and wouldn't mind a continuation of this. I was hoping for a story like this to pop up, after seeing the one where Alter raised Shirou. So this makes me pretty happy.

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    I liked it, but...
    This...this honestly doesn't seem like Alter at all. More like "all butt-hurt, no action" Arturia. And too sentimental and caring.
    Last edited by Lycodrake; July 6th, 2012 at 09:16 AM.
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    I dunno, this seemed pretty Alteresque.

    "I'm letting you live so that I may watch you suffer."
    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

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    Still, too sentimental and caring.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Still, too sentimental and caring.
    Don't forget that even after blackening, she retained a bit of her old personality, so it's not that odd (especially with the lack of Sakura taking a dump in her head and making her mad).


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    Her hate was all focused towards Kiritsugu in this instance. Shirou was just a pleasant surprise that she discovered in her want to make Kiritsugu miserable.
    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

    [01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.


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    That was more than interesting, it was great. Really really great.

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    If Saber and Shirou got married... Would that make Shirou the Queen of Britain?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    I liked it, but...
    This...this honestly doesn't seem like Alter at all. More like "all butt-hurt, no action" Arturia. And too sentimental and caring.
    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Still, too sentimental and caring.
    Yeah, something like this.

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    Seems to me that Alter becoming more sentimental is somewhat of the point? Character development and all?

    Excellent job Pata, way to rise from the grave with a bang.
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    I liked it and would like to see the story continue.

    Dark Saber had plenty of feelings, and was still the old Saber. The only difference is that she gave in to her despair and basically embraced the fact that a hero is someone who is hated (their role is to do what's necessary even if it's terrible). She still had a soft spot for Shirou even when she was dark in HF.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    Oh, one last thing. Kiritsugu definitely didn't know, or care about the Root. He wouldn't have ordered Saber to commit suicide. All he cared about was getting his wish.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    I happen to be an expert on this topic Pata Hikari's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by mAc Chaos View Post
    Oh, one last thing. Kiritsugu definitely didn't know, or care about the Root. He wouldn't have ordered Saber to commit suicide. All he cared about was getting his wish.
    But the Einzbern's did care about getting the Third Magic, which needed the complete Grail. Which is what he was doing for them.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pata Hikari View Post
    But the Einzbern's did care about getting the Third Magic, which needed the complete Grail. Which is what he was doing for them.
    There was a note somewhere about them forgetting about the Third and how the Tohsakas were the only ones to remember the original purpose and just wanting the grail at any cost IIRC.
    Last edited by The Curious Fan; July 6th, 2012 at 01:02 PM.

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    >Einzbern
    >Forget about the Third
    >Their Magic....which they obsess over getting back.

    ...what.

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    It's not that they forgot about it, like, literally, it left their head, but by the time Kiritsugu is prepping for the 4th HF they've lost sight of that as their primary goal and more and more want to win for the sake of winning. To erase their failure with the Avenger debacle. They still want the Third, it just, you know, is kind of becoming like how Zouken: immortality >>>>>>>>>> for Justica!

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    The Einzberns became obsessed and pulled a Zouken, they just wanted to win for the sake of it. But even so, if Kiritsugu would have a chance to make a wish, that would mean Saber would as well. So she might have to gank herself, but not before getting a wish.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    I approve i'll continue waiting for more.
    Also can someone give me a link of the story where alter raises shirou?

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    This... this should be continued. It is heresy to leave this fic as it is.
    Yet, this is wonderful.

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    *claps*
    Wéll done. Would read more of this.



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