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    ...Beautiful. Tragic and teary, but wonderful.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anduriel View Post
    This... this should be continued. It is heresy to leave this fic as it is.
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    I want so much more, but its beautiful as it is. I am so very conflicted.

    Still, that was a wonderful piece. Well done. Well done...
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    Very nice. The last line moved me right here... pretty sure this is my heart but it could be a lung or heartburn. Beautiful piece, can't deny that.
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    A very beautiful story, Pata. Loved it. Very moving, especially near the end.
    Too bad it's a one-shot. Still, it's an amazing one-shot.

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    This needs to be continued.

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    Oh, I liked this. The only real flaw where some quotation marks were lost.



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    I actually did originally have a scene in which Alter met Gil but Gil didn't realize she was Saber. Then I cut it because it was silly.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tiresias View Post
    I just don't get why Dark Saber would...care. About Shirou, and other things in general. Shouldn't the corruption affect her mind in some way?

    And where's Gilgamesh in all this? I doubt he's going to just ignore Saber, dark or not.
    Because it did affect her mind. It made her into a tsundere. An hilarious tsundere, even if I don't think Pata Hikari was going for comedy, which just made it all the funnier.

    I'm wondering how the Fifth would go down, in this timeline; obviously, having Saber walking around the Emiya household would dramatically affect the fight with Lancer, and possibly prevent Shirou from getting desperate enough to perform the unintentional summoning. Then again, she'd probably recognize the Command Seals, and might inform him of them and the Grail War so he can summon deliberately. Which would raise the question of what Servant he'd get, since he obviously can't get this timeline's Saber.

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    Well, he still has Avalon, right? He could get new seals and then just contract with Saber.
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    Shioru summons Joan in this timeline because I find that hilarious. Things Go down normally until Shinji decides to try and melt the school at which point Saber gets tired of his BS and hits him with the flat end of Excalibur until he cries and gives up.

    Kotomine is amused by Saber being blackened, Gilgamesh is horrified.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pata Hikari View Post
    Shioru summons Joan in this timeline because I find that hilarious. Things Go down normally until Shinji decides to try and melt the school at which point Saber gets tired of his BS and hits him with the flat end of Excalibur until he cries and gives up.

    Kotomine is amused by Saber being blackened, Gilgamesh is horrified.
    Well, if we go by the Fate Unlimited Codes dialogue, here is Gilgamesh's

    Before fight:

    Gilgamesh: This is ridiculous, you have fallen into despair Saber!

    If Gil beats Alter.

    Gilgamesh: I have no use for someone that has lost her ideals. Go drown in your inner darkness.

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    Once she goes dark, she's just a broken toy to Gilgamesh.

    However, Fate/Zero made me realize one thing. It's possible for Saber to blacken by herself since it's just the form she takes when she embraces her despair.

    If that's the case, maybe it's possible for her to stop being blackened, and become her normal self, if she sorts out her issues?
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by blitz1/2 View Post
    Well, if we go by the Fate Unlimited Codes dialogue, here is Gilgamesh's

    Before fight:

    Gilgamesh: This is ridiculous, you have fallen into despair Saber!

    If Gil beats Alter.

    Gilgamesh: I have no use for someone that has lost her ideals. Go drown in your inner darkness.
    Ironically, it looks like she's responded to this by investing her hopes in supporting Shirou's ideals instead, which is something Gilgamesh should be quite familiar with given the ending of his legend.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nick012000 View Post
    Ironically, it looks like she's responded to this by investing her hopes in supporting Shirou's ideals instead, which is something Gilgamesh should be quite familiar with given the ending of his legend.

    I guess. But I will laugh if Saber Alter says the same thing in their fight encounter.

    SA: I will destroy your perverted/bad hobbies (to Gil). xD

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    When did she say that? About investing herself in Shirou's ideals.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mAc Chaos View Post
    When did she say that? About investing herself in Shirou's ideals.
    nono.

    In Unlimited Codes, Saber Alter says that when facing against Gil. But, if Shirou ends up going mind of steel, then yes, SA may have to do the same. Except destroy the ideals instead. xD

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    Huh. I thought I saw Alter and Gilgamesh's story routes, and I never remembered that part.
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mAc Chaos View Post
    Huh. I thought I saw Alter and Gilgamesh's story routes, and I never remembered that part.
    no, just regular encounter. Just type in Saber Alter vs. Gilgamesh or vice versa. And that's their opening quotes.

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    Great.

    think there's less of a chance of Gilgamesh being beaten this way though, since Alter would have less plot shield. Maybe.
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