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    I wasn't taking a shot at Koori, only noting that he was expecting something that is extremely unlikely.
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    This is awesome, keep up the great work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    I wasn't taking a shot at Koori, only noting that he was expecting something that is extremely unlikely.
    And that's the joke.

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    Tohsaka Rin the Angry Magus

    “Oi, Kotomine,” he called out.

    Strange. No one responded. He called louder, “Kotomine! I’m home!”

    Still no reply?

    “Kotomine, greet your king as is fit!” He commanded.

    It was dark inside the church, and even with his superhuman senses he did not feel anyone there. This was really strange because Kotomine had told him he would be here after the burial of his Master, Tohsaka Tokiomi.

    There! He heard something.

    It sounded like broken wood being smashed into smaller pieces. He turned to the Alter and saw a little girl walk towards him slowly and methodically.

    For some reason, he felt a shiver run down his spine, but that would be crazy. Why would the King of Heroes be surprised or frightened by a little girl?

    …Maybe it was because her fists were drenched in blood. The thick, somewhat dried liquid on her fingers dripped down on the church floor slowly and methodically. Her eyes stared up at him with a strange light.

    It reminded him of what he thought Berserker Class Servants should be like.

    She was like a rabid dog.

    But she was a rabid dog in the building he claimed to be worthy of being his temporary abode. And she was making a mess of the floors.

    “Kotomine isn’t here anymore,” the girl growled. She really is a dog!

    He smirked to himself. Like a King who tended to his own estate at the times necessary, he glared down at the mongrel who dared draw even closer to his person. And she dared address him like a commoner? In his regal and majestic, yet awesomely smooth tone, he declared, “What is this dirty bug trying to approach my presence?”

    She smiled up at him blankly. There were bags under her eyes as if she had not slept for days, and the corners of her lips seemed to twitch uncontrollably, “Kotomine won’t be coming anymore. Who were you again…?”

    “Hmph!” Gilgamesh smoothed his hair back like a king and replied as one worthy of such a title, “Why should I bother with a maggot? The insect before me is so beneath me that it cannot possibly comprehend my full majesty, or your mind would surely break! But what is this you say about Kotomine?”

    “Oh?” Her lips thinned but her smile widened. Her head tilted to one side as her slow walk came to a stop, less than a meter away from the King of Heroes. She looked up at him in a detestable manner: as if she was greater than him! “Kotomine can’t come home. Kotomine can’t call home. Kotomine…” She repeated again with the same eerie ghastly smile, “…is all broken up.”

    “What?!” He roared, realizing that this girl may not be a girl at all, despite her appearances and his own instincts telling him thus.

    “Oh,” She tilted her head back and flicked a stray lock of black hair out of the path of her vision, “I’m not sorry to tell you that I broke him. He told me some things that he shouldn’t have, even if he had no choice. Oh, poor poppa…”

    Gilgamesh paused. He noted the girl’s appearance now that she had stepped into the light. He stroked his chin and nodded, “You are the spawn of Tohsaka Tokiomi.”

    “And you are my father’s Servant,” She replied. It was not a question. “And yet, here you are, alive while poppa is dead.”

    “Hmph! A King is—”

    He was cut off by her. “You failed your duty,” she continued on as if he had not said anything.

    “Hmph!! How dare you question a King’s—”

    He was cut off again by the girl as her eyes turned up towards his defiantly. At this distance, he could see the specks of blood all over her face. He realized it was not just anyone’s blood, but most likely Kotomine Kirei’s blood. How had she done this? Why did Tokiomi hide this little tart—any thoughts he might have had about her being ‘just’ another mongrel or commoner was quickly removed from his mind when he looked into her eyes.

    So much rage. So much suffering. So much insanity. So much hatred… So this is Tokiomi’s spawn! How delight—

    His train of thought was cut off as he fell down to the floor, head first. His noble blood splattered all over the girl’s feet as he coughed it out uncontrollably.

    “Get up, King of Heroes,” she roared. Or at least, that is what she wanted to roar, but instead what came out was something not unlike what Berserker might have said. She might have looked cute, standing there with her feet apart and her tiny fists clenched glaring down at him angrily… if he had been downed by a single, anger-filled punch. Again she roared, “GRAAAAHH!!”

    Of course, she meant to say ‘get up, King of Heroes, and show me how you protected my father’. However, by this point, the rage had so completely consumed the girl, that she had no words left to say.

    “You dare touch me? Mongrel! Know your place!” Gilgamesh back up, as chains shot out from all angles, holding the girl still. How fiery she is! She is even more emotional than his prized Saber, and how very like the actions of his very best friend. He almost felt pity that he would have to wipe her out, but no commoner, shall be allowed to casually attack the King without repercussions!

    “GRAAAAAAH!!” Rin roared. With each passing second, her rage grew. And with each passing moment, the chains shook, as if on the verge of being shattered.

    Gilgamesh looked down at her, “I may have kept you, Tokiomi’s spawn, as a pet. But not before I punish you for your transgressions.”

    Weapons appeared.

    Swords, knives, spears, lances…

    The first one he shot at her was a prized blade of his treasury. It was one of which he had impaled his Saber with. He smirked confidently, knowing that this little poppet won’t be disappearing like his Saber did at the end of the War. No, he will have fun breaking her.

    Then one of her arms ripped the chains off and caught the blade. He saw that it was no easy feat. The skin and clothing of that arm had been almost completely torn off by this stunt. Yet the girl did not flinch. Instead, she punched herself.

    No, that was not right. She punched the chains.

    …and his chains, which could hold any divine being, broke like Pocky sticks.

    He was so shocked by this that he did not react until she used his chains against him. With a single swing, she used one of the broken chains to grab his ankles and pulled him to the ground.

    Then she mounted him as a wrestler would and started punching him.

    Punch, punch, punch…

    “Don’t talk back to me again, you stupid Servant!” Was his mind delirious by this point, or did he hear that through her growls?

    …punch, punch, punch…

    “You’re just like Archer, stupid, cocky, and stupid!” No, he was pretty sure he was hearing this. But his ears did not deceive him! He clearly only heard growls!

    …punch.

    “You’re mine, now! Obey me, you stupid pissant!” At some point, the pain had turned to a strange tingling sensation that Gilgamesh last associated with his Saber. “And don’t you dare die! I’m not going to let you die for a long time for what you have done!”

    Gilgamesh felt his cheeks grow warm and for some reason, he wanted to twiddle his fingers together like a schoolgirl. But all he could do, by this point, was nod. Anything else was just too much pain.
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    Yes, yes... first Kotomine and now Gil, misery truly loves company.

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    "From the words of a wise man: thou shall have lesyay, lemons, and laughter!"
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    Oh mygod, this fic. This fic. This Rin.
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    Dat rage , dat anger, the soon to be epic hate sex that we all know is coming.

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    Oh god, what is she going to do to ZOUKEN?

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    Heh.



    Hehehehehehehehe.

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    Damn it Koori. Cannot unsee.



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    Quote Originally Posted by KooriRenchuu View Post
    Oh god, what is she going to do to ZOUKEN?
    Slowly burn him to ashes, one worm at a time for maximum pain and torture.

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    I am fully in favour of that plan. And also exceedingly pleased by Gil's suffering. Thank you.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Actually next scene was planned to be a bit different. Like a cooldown scene, kind of. Where Rin breathes heavily and loudly behind Shirou and tries to act like a 'normal person'. And stuff.

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    Quote Originally Posted by deviatesfish View Post
    Actually next scene was planned to be a bit different. Like a cooldown scene, kind of. Where Rin breathes heavily and loudly behind Shirou and tries to act like a 'normal person'. And stuff.
    That's fine, as long as Zouken burns later.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kieran View Post
    That's fine, as long as Zouken burns later.
    Now that I think of it with all Zouken did to Sakara Rin's not going to let him off with just a prolonged fiery death. Maybe something that regenerates his soul worm as fast as it's being incinerated or something similar.

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    Rin needs to get an Angry Marine power armor later on.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RacingeR View Post
    Rin needs to get an Angry Marine power armor later on.
    AM armor, oh god... the destructiveness.

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    "From the words of a wise man: thou shall have lesyay, lemons, and laughter!"
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    Oh god, this is amazing. Just simply amazing.



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