RWBY

[Blue]

Good stuff. Enjoyed it. Best part is hearing Yang's voice in my head as I read something.

[Grant]

We all know we want it. Even me, and I hate fighting games. I prefer action/RPG.

[Blue]

As long as we don't end up with something horrible like Fate/Unlimited Codes, I'm all for it.

[DezoPenguin]

Today is a good fic day!

Loved Yang and the Yang/Blake dynamic and interaction. (I also snicker in the aftermath in the idea that Blake thought something was wrong because, when you boil it down to its base components, Yang was taking something seriously. ) A couple of the worldbuilding points were a little much (a reference to the Arc clan struck me especially as peripheral infodumping...this one: "Of that particular part, the Arc family was the largest and most well known name, and while Beacon had certainly arrested or killed enough of their hunters to become hated by the family, the clan was simply too large and too old to be completely removed without the hunting community throwing a fit.")...something I'm terminally guilty of myself in my own writing, so I know the lure!

Y'know, I'd have never have guessed dragon for Yang. I think it's her boisterous personality, which is something I don't associate with the imagery of Asian dragons. Ren being a dragon half-breed plays right into the stereotype. Yang, not so much, so that was actually a nice surprise there. Playing against type!

And, since we can pretty well assume Jaune is human (since his obnoxious family--note that his father probably fits that type, since you said Jaune had a fight with him--wouldn't touch a monster with a ten-foot pole unless that pole had a spear point on the end, let alone sleep with one), that just leaves Pyrrha!

[YeOfLittleFaith]

Wonderful RWBY fanfiction by Beam is wonderful. ^c^

[RadiantBeam]

And the FF.net version is up. Thank you to everyone who read and commented, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Lycodrake]

Wonderful RWBY fanfiction by Beam is wonderful. ^c^

Entirely agreed with YOLF. It's really, really good, Beam.

[DezoPenguin]

And the FF.net version is up. Thank you to everyone who read and commented, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Copypasta'd my review over to there and added a fave.

[RadiantBeam]

Wonderful RWBY fanfiction by Beam is wonderful. ^c^

Entirely agreed with YOLF. It's really, really good, Beam.

You should partially thank Moczo for it. It's thanks to his original short stories that I got the idea of making it an urban fantasy instead of a normal cop AU like I originally intended.

Copypasta'd my review over to there and added a fave.

Thank you!

[Elf]

So I've started watching this on Crunchyroll.

It has potential, but man, that animation is painful. I shouldn't talk though, the same program they use for the animation is the same one that my JukePop serial cover was created with for the most part.

I like Yang.

Blake is interesting.

Weiss? I wanna punch a bitch.

Ruby is an adorable spaz.

Then again, I've only seen the first and second episodes.

[Riven]

It has potential, but man, that animation is painful. I shouldn't talk though, the same program they use for the animation is the same one that my JukePop serial cover was created with for the most part.

What do you find painful about it?

[Break]

Jaune is pretty adorkable.

Didnt they make the engine for the program themselves? Since they're having a short advert for some engine they made at the end of the videos...

[Strange_One]

Poser is a 3D modelling thing for anthroforms. That's all I know. Dunno if it can do other things or animate.

[DezoPenguin]

I find the animation to be worse when it's out of action scenes (duh, I suppose...) and you notice things like Weiss's hands not moving when she's gesturing even though the hand pose isn't one that fits the gesture.

[Laith]

What do you find painful about it?

Probably that it doesn't follow the 12 rules of animation when not in battle mode. Just a guess tho.

[Break]

"The 12 rules of animation"?

[SeiKeo]

What do you find painful about it?

[RadiantBeam]

"The 12 rules of animation"?

The 12 basic principles of animation.

Not sure it's the same thing, but it was what popped up first when I Googled "12 rules of animation".

[Lycodrake]

You should partially thank Moczo for it. It's thanks to his original short stories that I got the idea of making it an urban fantasy instead of a normal cop AU like I originally intended.

But "praise be to Moczo" is commonplace around these parts. :3c

[Laith]

The 12 basic principles of animation.

Not sure it's the same thing, but it was what popped up first when I Googled "12 rules of animation".

Yes those. Translation woes and faulty memory are to blame for my blunder.